+Scotaloo wakes up. It’s her first day at school, which will be entirely irrelevant for anything going forward so you can forget about it now. She goes downstairs where the Pedophile and her Enabler are having breakfast.
+They ask Scootaloo how she slept, prompting Pedophile to make a comment about how once you get a girlfriend you don’t want to sleep alone and how lucky Scootaloo is that she has two girlfriends. In front of her girlfriend who we already established doesn’t want any polyamory. But it’s okay because Fluttershy found the comment funny.
+This exchange happen:
“Awesome!” Scootaloo began to happily eat her breakfast, “Aw man, you can even make eggs taste the best ever!”
Rainbow chuckled, “Yeah, Fluttershy’s the whole package. Sexy, smart, and a good cook. If I was a guy in the 50’s, I’d be king of the world.”
“I’d be one lucky kid!” Scootaloo drank down some orange juice, “Man, this is awesome! This is the life! I could die happy! ...Actually, I take that back. I still got life to live!”
“Yeah. I’d hate to have gone to all that trouble just for you to get hit by a semi-trailer on your way to school,” Rainbow laughed.
“I know, right?” Scootaloo ate some more eggs, “Aw man, the irony of that!”
Rainbow chuckled, while Fluttershy looked uncomfortable.
“Rainbow… not that I don’t think you guys are funny… but could we not talk about the possibility of Scootaloo dying? It’s a little… unsettling,” she said softly.
“...Oh,” Rainbow then recalled the context of that and recoiled, “Yeah, sorry about that.”
“Me too,” Scootaloo murmured, “I guess it’s not that funny, is it? I mean, I could laugh at myself about that, but if I were to make that joke about my friends, I’d… feel pretty awful.”
+Fluttershy thanks them for apoligizing after making their unfunny distateful jokes and they all have a big family hug. Scootaloo comments she’d like to have a brother or sister which makes Pedophile to ask Enabler how long have been long together. Enabler takes this to talk since the day they “became lovers” in front of her daughter and this causes Pedophile to run from the kitchen.
+When Pedophile is back she has a ring and proposes marriage. Enabler accepts. Everyone’s happy about this and they hug.
+Scootaloo goes to school.
+Pedophile and Enabler talk a bit about how “they’re not like other couples” because they had a kid before marriage, which really isn’t that big of a deal nowadays or even when this was written. Then Pedophile asks Enabler if she has tested for pregnancy, and Enabler tells her that she’ll go to the doctor that day to see because pregnancy home test don’t exist on Equestria apparently.
+They talk about even if Enabler wasn’t pregnant they could try again, but Pedophile says “but not right now”. At first I thought that Pedophile didn’t want children right now but it was just a pick up line to fuck and, for the first time since reading this, Pedophile doesn’t take the chance despite how she doesn’t have to go to work and Enabler either because instead they have to talk about Twilight and Ascentia.
+Enabler talked with Twilight at some point after Twilight talked with Josh Scorcher and she told Enabler that she didn’t want to be abusive anymore. Pedophile mentions that she saw Ascentia and for “the first time” saw her without any visible injuries. That’s doing so much better according to these two.
+But then they contradict themselves on the next parragraph because they don’t really know how Ascentia’s reaction to her wife not wanting to rape her anymore. Pedophile asks “I know Twilight wants to turn herself around, but the question is will Ascentia let her?”, which is stupid because domestic abuse doesn’t depend on the victim wanting it to continue or not. That’s why is abuse.
+Enabler says that Ascentia is “fiercely loyal” to Twilight and “takes her marriage seriously”, implying that victim of abuse who abandon their abusers take their marriage less seriously. Pedophile comments that she could never be with someone who raped her repeatedly and ponder what makes Ascentia so especial to endure it all. “That takes… is it resilience, compassion, or a death wish that takes?”
+Only now Pedophile wonders if Ascentia was maybe lying about liking the abuse and the sadomasochism, because she’s that stupid. Enabler admits that also only now she started thinking it too, making it obvious they’re both stupid and deserve each other.
+Pedophile wants to know how Ascentia was on the hospital. She was asking if Twilight was okay. Pedophile is “bewildered” about this. Enabler keeps insisting that Ascentia is too loyal to Twilight and her rings means too much for her to even thought about leaving her wife, implying again that’s survivors who escape abuser are less loyal.
+Pedophile points out that sounds like a battered wife and Enabler goes on a little rant about marriage, forgiveness and ends it on how she finds their whole situation “interesting”. She finds the constant raping and physical abuse of one of her friends at the hands of another of her friends, who the victim refuses to leave, interesting. Enabler’s a psychopath.
+They keep talking about this, repeating points and going nowhere until finally Ascentia appears at their door.
+They asks Ascentia how she’s doing now that Twilight’s going to therapy. Ascentia doesn’t know if it’s really helping Twilight because she always comes back home crying. In fact, she thinks the shrinks’s only torturing her making her remember things Twilight doesn’t want, like how she made Ascentia’s scars, something she apparently never cared about before. This makes her an angry kitten, title dropped.
+Enabler tells her to be supportive of her rapist getting therapy at last. Ascentia talks about how now everyone knows (even though they already did before) and keep pestering her about it. She almost throw down a grandma on the supermarket for daring to suggest her a divorce lawyer. If Rarity wasn’t there to stop there then she’d have fought or worse to that grandma on the supermarket. I don’t know what to do or think about that. It’s not funny. It’s not making me sympathize with Ascentia. It’s not relevant. I don’t know why we treat Ascentia being a violent monster as a not a big deal. Although, now that I think about it, that’s exactly how we treat Twilight being a rapist or Pedophile being a pedophile so it’s just more unadressed shit that Liliana somehow makes sound mundane and boring.
+Enabler tries to reason with Ascentia, but she only complains about how Twilight going to therapy and trying to get her on some “scar concealer” is too much change for her to handle and doesn’t like it. Then she complains again about some guard who told her it was awful that Princess Twilight raped and abuser her wife, which made Ascentia want to inflict violence on him too but didn’t, I guess because she wasn’t an old lady or something.
+Enabler still tries to be nice by saying that Ascentia has a right to her privacy, which she didn’t had before anyway because Twilight had already been arrested multiple times anyway, but now Ascentia notices they want to ask her something. At first Enabler and Pedophile don’t want tos ay anything because Ascentia obviously doesn’t want to hear it, but Ascentia wants to hear it.
“Oh, fine,” Rainbow grumbled, leaning back a bit, “I gotta ask. How do you do that? How do you stay with a woman who, despite loving you and not being the slightest bit evil, beats you and rapes you on multiple occasions? No, I’m not saying that with any kinda mean streak, I really do want to know. We both do.”
+Ascentia then tells them the story of how Twilight came to the nickname kitten for her. One day Ascentia was on the library and Twilight wanted to fuck, but Ascentia said so and Twilight raped her for the first time. She called her an “uncoperative kitten” during it. After that Ascentia heard Twilight crying so went to sleep with her on bed and the next day Twilight kept calling her kitten, apparently without remembering the rape. Ascentia explains that everytime Twilight calls her like that, she takes it as an apology for all the other raping that happened after and thus forgives her.
+This is a nice start to the trend of Liliana writing abuse victim forgiving their abusers just because they felt bad enough. Not even an actual apology needed. Just feel bad and that’s all everyone needs.
+The narration’s also stupid: “As endearing as it sounded, there was the clear discomfort from what she was saying.” There’s nothing endearing about this.
+Pedophile calls Ascentia “the smartest girl I know” and tells her how “you always talk about things I never heard about”, which literally never happened because Liliana wrote Ascentia as just a brute, so Pedophile wants to be direct with her. When Ascentia says “go on”, Pedophiles tells her to drop the masochist act and Ascentia admits she doesn’t like rough sex but not the raping or broken bones.
+Then Pedophile explodes:
“And that’s what I’m talking about!” Rainbow slapped her fist onto the table and stood up, “Look at you! You’re a battered housewife! You’re no different than other men or women who cling to their partners despite the abuse! You hold on to the good things you both do as some kind of sign that it’s not all bad! And what you’re telling me here is ‘I hate this, I wish it would stop!’ Oh yeah, that’s encouraging! That’s great to hear! Happy happy joy joy! Golly gosh, this is so awesome, I can’t contain it! Wow! Are you listening to yourself?! Now I’m starting to see why Twi wants help! This is just crazy! And you’re just… gonna stop her from it? You want her to stop? Well, did you not hear yourself just now? You want to snuggle, right? Well, why don’t you help Twilight get AWAY from the abuse?! Nope! You just sit back and enable her! Oh, it’s fine, she needs to relieve stress!
“Relieve stress, my dick! That’s the biggest load of crap I think I ever heard! She rapes you! Beats you! And now she’s trying to get help, I say good for her! Frankly, I wouldn’t be surprised if she decided to leave you to protect you and herself! Oh, fuck no, don’t you give me that look! ‘She’s my wife, I’m not leaving her and nor is she!’, right? Well, lovely! That’s a nice thought! Quit the damn battered housewife whining and just look at yourself for a minute! You’re looking at her with rose-coloured glasses! Something you pretty much say is stupid for ANYONE to have!”
I could tell you all the ways in which this speech’s disgusting and wrong from a narrative stand point, but I’m assuming I don’t need to.
+Ascentia comments that nobody ever told her something like that, because nobody ever thought of blaming the victim, and this makes the Pedophile ashamed of herself. But then Ascentia rebuts that she’s wrong because she doesn’t view things through a rose coloured glass. She knows there’s a problema with her wife raping her and breaking her bones, but will stick with her because marriage. She also throws a little threats to Pedophile if she ever calls Twilight crazy. When Pedophile clarifies that she thinks Twilight’s doing the right thing, Ascentia comments that she’s the last person to talk about someone being fucked in the head and Pedophile goes on another rant:
“Hey! What’s that supposed to mean?! Oh, so because I’m a pedofork and am soooo messed up, I got no place to say anything?! Well, thanks a lot! Thanks for shutting down something I have to say just because I’m not exactly ‘normal’! May as well tell me it’s because I’m hormonal or on PMS! FYI, I never said Twilight was crazy just now! I said the situation was crazy! Well, fine! Go ahead! Boomerang this! Shut down what I have to say because you don’t like hearing it! Turn it riiiight back to me so that I can be ashamed! Gee, thanks! You know what, forget it! You do what you want! I don’t even care anymore! I’m going to work!”
There’s again, that tendency of minimizing what pedophilia actually is. First it was treated as normal because Pedophile’s full of too many masculine hormones, implying all men secretly want to rape little girls, but now it’s compared with the menstrual cycle of women.
+To be fair, if I started being yelled at by a Pedophile about anything at all I’d be pissed off too. But as soon Pedophile runs off, Ascentia wants to apologize because she made the pedophile feel bad about being a pedophile that wants to rape little girls.
+Enabler apoligizes for the situation. Ascentia tells her that it’s fine since at least Enabler understands, since she’s on her same position. Enabler becomes offended at this because she’d leave Pedophile if she ever raped her or abused her so it can’t be the same. But Ascentia notices that they both have shitty wives and yet, despite knowing Pedophile is a pedophile, Enabler stayed.
+Enabler responds that Pedophile’s NOT a pedophile because she “lust for teenagers, nothing else” and doesn’t love them. Plus, she knows that Pedophile’d never hurt anyone and is not a bad person. She’s getting help! Enabler doesn’t think either that Twilight, the rapist, the abuser, has any bad intentions or would hurt anyone, and that’s why she’s Enabler.
+Ascentia then says she doesn’t understand why everyone tries to take her rapist away from her. She sniffles and keeps rubbing her eyes, but there’s no mentions of any tears so this feels so very fake to me. I doubt that was the intention. It would be one interesting twist if Ascentia had manipulated everyone this entire time and she was actually the one abusing Twilight somehow, but then again, that would be interesting and we can’t have that on this story. Liliana just sucks trying to convey any emotion at all.
+Enablers tells her everything will be fine. They hug. Then Ascentia cries and Enabler thinks Ascentia scares her but that doesn’t mean she shouldn’t help her. This still feels fake. Ascentia asks Enabler to tell Pedophile that’s sorry and adds “nobody has seen me cry before”. Then she mentions that Apple Bloom told her that she was scary, something that Enabler lies by saying that she was scary at first, when they met on highschool, but doesn’t anymore because now she sees that she’s nice.
+Because apparently now Ascentia needs the ego stroking, she wants to know if Enabler thinks she’ll be a good mother and Enabler lies again assuring that she knows Ascentia’ll try her best. Trying your best it’s for when you want to paint for the first time, not when raising a baby with a rapist and a brute.
+Ascentia then talks about how she and her rapist talked about selling their story to make money, but Enabler has finished indulging her because she has to go to the doctor. When Ascentia goes away, Enabler says outloud that the crazy one’s Ascentia.
+Time passes. I assume. I don’t know what Pedophile was doing while she wasn’t working (Liliana probably forgot about it), but now she’s bringing her daughter back home and Scootaloo’s so happy retelling about how Apple Bloom verbally smacked down some homophobic boy. Is Liliana aware that there are other ways to being evil than being homophobic? I’m not sure. All her characters are disgusting evil pieces of shit but at least they aren’t homophobic so I guess that makes them okay on her own standards.
+Scootaloo then goes off to shower and Pedophile finds Enabler on the living room with the weirdest description of anyone’s face I have seen in a while: “her face flitting back and forth between elated and worried like some bunghole was flicking a light switch back and forth in her brain.” This reads to me like she’s having a stroke.
+Enabler asks Pedophile to sit down. She’s pregnant. They get excited and excitedly they kiss because they’re so excited and yes, the narration’s repetitive like that. Scootaloo comes in to find out about the good news. Then she moonwalks in place because she’s so happy, exactly as all teens do when finding out they’re going to have a sibling.
+This exchange gave me a headache:
“Oh Scootaloo,” Fluttershy kissed her hair, “This is a good thing, you’ll be able to help us out with the baby, then.”
“You know it! I’ll teach her to walk, talk, all the awesome cool stuff… where’s my iPod? They say that having babies listen to music makes them smart!” Scootaloo wiggled with excitement, “...Oh, wait. You’re gonna make me change diapers, aren’t you?”
“Oh the evil and cruel things I’m going to do to you,” Rainbow grinned, to unnerved looks from both Scootaloo and Fluttershy, “Oh shut up, you know what I mean!”
“Yeah, sorry…” Scootaloo patted her arm, “Seriously though, yuck! I am not changing diapers!”
Having a mom who’s a pedophile that has confessed to have a preference for girls your exact age is so fun! But if you stop to make it weird that’s your fault and need to apologize to the Pedophile.
+Scootaloo goes upstairs. Enabler and Pedophile talk about when Enabler was a kid and she didn’t want to change diapers of her younger relatives either. There’s more dialogue nobody cares about. Then they talk about the doctor and how she calculated that Enabler has been pregnant since the first time they were together.
+Pedophile then pivots the issue about how hard it will be to keep fucking with a baby around, which ends up on the both of them fetishizing pregnancy, to the point that the Horny Voice of Pedophile furiously agrees that pregnant Pedophile would be hot and Pedophile has no reaction to it. It’s just a sentence with no context whatsoever. Her intervention was so jarring and out of nowhere that for a second I didn’t know what happened.
+They talk a bit about them becoming mothers and in other story, with other characters, from another writer, this could have been a actually sweet little moment. But Pedophile ruins it as always asking Enabler to help her with “this” (her erection) and then Enabler does a titjob on her. They add some dirty talk but it’s the same boring thing since the first chapter, so I don’t think anyone’s going to miss anything if we skipped.
+As soon as Pedophile finishes, Twilight’s banging on their door. She’s there with Ascentia to force her to apoligize for threatening Pedophile and calling Enabler fucked up in the head. Twilight’s being physically forceful and abusive again, but Pedophile and Enabler close the door on them not because Twilight’s failing but because Ascentia “doesn’t mean it.” She did said to Enabler that she was sorry already. Why does she need to apoligize again?
+On any case, since this didn’t worked, Twilight’s so frustrated and mad that she kicked a trash. I’m assuming that Pedophile’s trash can, which means that now either she or Enabler’ll have to clean a bunch of garbage and/or buy a new one if it ended up ruined. I guess this’s meant to be taken as some kind progress that Twilight decides to kick something that isn’t Ascentia and yells at her to be on her room like she was her teen daughter, just so Twilight has time to calm herself. But she’s still yelling and being aggresive around her so I don’t read it like that.
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