+The three little girls are helping Scootaloo to accomodate her stuff on her own room. Creepdash then comes in to tell her the rules of the house. The first one is no sex in the house and Scootaloo seems to understand it on the sense that is for the sake of her pedophile mommy, so she’s okay with it because the poor girl has accepted her fate, but both Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle react with shock and causes Creepdash to say it was all a joke, laughing so hard because can you imagine Creepdash not wanting to have little girls fucking at her house.
+The actual new rules is that Scootaloo can’t go to her and Fluttershy’s room. No explanation as to why, even though it’s the more normal thing for kids to go to their parent’s room. The second rule is to shower every day. No mention of what the punishment will be if not. The third rule is to not do any drug or else she’ll rape her. Yes, this is implied on the narration with Creepdash actively trying to be creepy and Fluttershy yelling from downstairs to not do that.
“I’m not serious, Shy!” Rainbow called back, “I’m just messin’ with ‘em!”
At that, Rainbow’s meaning became very apparent to the three girls.
“That’s not funny, Rainbow,” Apple Bloom said flatly.
“Come on, Ma… That was cold,” Scootaloo muttered.
Sweetie Belle just looked away, shaking her head.
“They didn’t even get it until you started shouting!” Rainbow called down the hall.
+Mother of the year already. Fluttershy doesn’t tell her that was inappropiate and gross since raping your own daughter or making her afraid of it is just not funny, but instead brings out how the social worker could have gotten the wrong idea because she’s that caring. The girls don’t care about it though so I guess it’s fine. What is a little threat of rape among family?
+Creepbow separates Sweetie Belle from the others and asked her about what happened yesterday, when she flashed her bare ass to her. Sweetie Belle says she just wanted to see how she’d react since she never had anyone being sexually attracted to her, besides her two friends. But since Creepshow “helped them so much and were always there”, she feels sorry about it and won’t do it again. She borrowed them her house one time so they could have sex and plays games with them while stills staring at them like candies to eat. I don’t really get the sense that they should be so grateful for that.
+Pedodash tells her that she liked it and has a nice butt. But she shouldn’t do that or else they could use it as an open invitation to hurt her. She won’t do it, though, since she is “supervised by Fluttershy”, which is just a delightful way to blame it on your girlfriend if you do end up hurting someone. Besides, if something did happened to Sweetie Belle she’d be the prime suspect and could get into trouble, and isn’t that the most important thing at the end of the day? But at least this time she adds that it could be dangerous and encourages her not to do it again, which she already said she won’t do so good for reinforce it I suppose.
+Sweetie Belle hugs her and promises she won’t do it again, and how long are we going to drag this scene. Rapebow forget all about the danger and how Sweetie Belle could be taken advantage of, and tells her that it’s best to tone it down for a while because the social worker’ll be around. Spoiler: there’ll never be a social worker.
+Sweetie Belle translates this to the creep telling her that she doesn’t actually mind what she did, and the pedophile contradict herself by saying “I’m not about to tell a cute girl to stop flashing me” and chuckles at how that makes her “weird”, so this whole conversation has been rendered completely useless. Sweetie Belle nuzzles her and goes off to help her friends while the creep thinks of how “adorable” she is.
+Downstair Fluttershy and Pedocreep start talking about the possibility of she being pregnant, and they agreed to get a test later. Scootaloo hear them out and acts genuelly surprised about the news, despite how in the last chapter it was her and her friends the ones to suggest the pregnancy option to the adult women who should know already. But they don’t know for sure just yet so Fluttershy asks that they don’t spread it around.
+Scootaloo wants to know what should she be calling Fluttershy and she says that anything she wants, so Scootaloo calls her ma. Thank god, that suspense that if she wanted to be a mom or not was killing me. They take a family picture from a camera that Sweetie Belle conveniently had.
+Twilight and Ascentia are suddenly there. Ascentia looks awful but it’s just “grownup stuff”, don’t worry about it. Twilight has the camera and takes more pictures. A “normandy” reference is dropped that I do not care enough to know more about.
+Twilight tells them that she knew about the adoption already because of the paperwork she had to see. All princesses know the creep so they decided to leave the issue to the one who lived on the region, making the scene on the office where it was explained it would be a conflict of interest irrelevant.
+They talk about Twilight’s “barely-showing stomach” and how they know already that the baby’s going to be a girl, even though you can’t really tell until the pregnancy is much more advanced but is anyone suprised? No. Anyway, now they’re talking about different options for names and Ascentia suggested Sunrise. This somehow warrant she mentioning Twilight’s mom and how Twilight shouldn’t listen to her, prompting everyone else to ask what happened.
“When I told my mother I was pregnant… she flipped out at me. Said I was taking everything too far. Called my marriage a farce and said I was unfit to be a mother,” Twilight said bitterly, “Ascentia tried to talk to her, but she wouldn’t listen. Said I’d… brainwashed her.”
+On this story it has been stablished that Twilight has been so violently abusive towards Ascentia that she has been arrested for battery on multiple ocassions, to the point that police are tired of going just to have Ascentia drop all charges. Any rational person would think someone like that should not be a parent. Rainbow and Fluttershy also thought as much when they find out about it. Here the parents of Twilight are on the side of Ascentia, the victim, and think Twilight should face justice for what she has done. But we’re meant to sympathize with Twilight, the abuser, on this situation.
“Shit… that sucks,” Rainbow frowned, shaking her head.
“I’m sorry,” Fluttershy said sympathetically.
“How could she say something like that to me?” Twilight asked, sniffling a bit, “She’s my Mom and she told me I needed to be locked up.”
“That’s just messed up, Twi. I just became a parent, kinda, an I can tell you one thing. Loving your child isn’t conditional,” Rainbow said seriously, “And that’s just dumb of your Mom to say that. Concern’s one thing, but come on.”
+I love how Rainbow thinks she can talk about her idea of being a good mother when her idea of parenthood includes joking about raping her daughter and friends.
Ascentia reached over and hugged her while Twilight continued, “It’s all the time with them. They’re never happy. First they didn’t approve of Ascentia, then they tried to interfere with our wedding, then after all that shit happened with the courts they started doting on her and treating me like some monster. Now they want to stop me from having a baby. What did I ever do to them?!”
+In any other story the parents of Twilight would be the strong couple who’s not afraid to call out the horrible action of their own daughter, because they understand that not supporting a rapist or abuser’s more important than blood. But not on Liliana’s story. Remember, everyone: if someone you knew and cared about gets caught battering their spouse on the street, you’re the bad guy for not being on their side and ignore the pain of the victim.
+This keeps going for a while. It’s a whole pity party the one Twilight is throwing here and we’re all invited.
“We won’t let your parents stop you,” Fluttershy assured, “You still have us, Twilight. We’ll help you any way we can.”
“You guys don’t get it, your parents love you,” Twilight sniffled, pushing away from her wife, “You’ve never had them treat you like a stranger in your own home. Nothing I did was ever good enough for them. And the one good thing in my life they constantly tried to take from me,” she half shouted, pointing over at Ascentia, “Whether by trying to break us up, or trying to have me put in jail! I know I don’t talk about it all that much, but they’ve been hounding me ever since she got the charges dropped. Now they’re threatening to call social services when the baby is born!”
+Maybe if you stopped beating the shit out of the “one good thing”, they wouldn’t care that much? Nobody says this, of course. They’re all there to support Twilight and tell her how good parents shouldn’t treat their children like that because’t is such a “betrayal of trust”. It’s so unfair, guys. When you’re an abusive person and your parents treat you as such. It almost makes you want to cry too, doesn’t it.
+One can’t help to wonder what was the real world inspiration for this.
+By the way, this happens:
“Their two children are royalty and have saved the world a couple dozen times,” Ascentia chuckled, “Yeah Velvet, I’ll go file for divorce right away. And while I’m at it I’ll explain how Pinkie Pie’s precognition works and make magical doves fly out of my ass!”
“Oh will you stop making jokes?!” Twilight screamed as she swung her arm back and slammed her fist into Ascentia’s face.
+Twilight now is just beating Ascentia. At first they think it’s fine (because they’re idiots), but when they see that Ascentia’s trying to cover herself and hide from Twilight, that’s when they decide to intervene. They get them separated and Ascentia tells Fluttershy she thinks her nose’s broken. Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle take her to the hospital as Twilight suddenly seems to realice what happenes and tells her that she’s sorry, but Ascentia can’t say much before she’s gone.
+The pedophile here now is yelling to Twilight about what the hell was she thinking, only to suddenly turn into a therapist:
“Twilight looked like she was about to cry again, “I don’t know… I just… and then I…” she bit down on her knuckles and breathed in heaving gasps, “Rainbow Dash, what’s wrong with me? Why do I keep hurting my Kitten?”
“You have anger management issues and some kinda tendency to violence,” Rainbow said flatly, “And that was no ‘love slap’. That was pure, unjustified violence and assault on someone else! I know I make ‘She asks for it!’ jokes but I’d never want her to actually have that happen! That wasn’t funny or justified, Twilight! That was abusive! You need some serious fucking help. And I’ll have you know I won’t tolerate that kind of behaviour in my house, either! You could’ve hit one of the girls!”
+I wonder if this is the moment where Liliana thinks she’s surprising the reader by telling us that all other times that Twilight casually beated Ascentia were not supposed to be funny, aha, but rather abusive the entire time! On the TVTrope page I know she’d love to believe this comes as a surprise or some kind of clever revealing after tricking us into thinking it was sexy or something like that, but I think it’s pretty clear this’s just stupid and nobody was fooled at any moment.
+Nonetheless, nice to finally see the pedophile worrying at all about the wellbeing of the little girls, even if it’s only because the threat comes from someone else and doesn’t mind if it comes from her. I guess too she only cared when it looked like Ascentia wasn’t into the beating because at first she literally rolled her eyes a the situation.
+Twilight finally agrees that she’s going to see a doctor because she doesn’t want to hurt her “Kitten” and here’s hoping it won’t be Firebrand, the pedo enabler.
+Suddenly Ascentia is back because apparently there’s a hospital just around the block and they atended her right away. She tries to go comfort Twilight, who’s crying again, and the creep is in between, but Ascentia doesn’t care and shoves her to a side easily to go craddle Twilight to convince her everything’s okay.
+Ascentia’s scare of Twilight going to a doctor because he might suggest a divorce. She’s so terrified of the possibility that she can’t even bring herself to say the word. Fluttershy tells them that probably won’t happen since the doctor’ll try to help them out. Only then Ascentia is okay with the idea and they say I love you to each other.
+Sweetie Belle then asks why does Twilight calls Ascentia Kitten. Twilight says she doesn’t know but it got stuck. Spoilers: she said that to Ascentia the first time she raped her and she genuelly doesn’t remember it, but Ascentia does. Later on she’ll get full blown panic attacks at anyone but Twilight calling her Kitten, pressumably because it reminds her of her trauma, because still being married to her abuser doesn’t do that, for some reason.
+We had comments before about how Twilight’s portrayal on this fic feels like bashing, but I feel we should talk too about how awful of a portrayal of victim Ascentia is. She’s a battered wife who keeps coming back to her abuser and will forgive her even after Twilight ends up abusing her daugher while is a baby. Despite her feeling about Twilight, considering that she had Lizzy drawing porn of this particular couple I can believe Liliana actually likes them together. The more I think about it, the more similarities I see between them and Lilivoir. The biggest difference is that here the abuse and codependancy are adressed explicitely on the text but that still means anything for any of the parts involved so I don’t know if that makes it worse or better.
+Ascentia is cuddling to Twilight and acting like a cat, trying to assure Twilight that it’s all alright because she likes being her punchbag. Twilight tells her not to push it right now and for once Ascentia shuts up. This whole scene ends with Twillight just saying “let’s go” and that’s all.
+”It was late. Very late.” These descriptions are so immersive.
+Scootaloo went to bed and the pedophile is cuddling on the couch with her enabler. They talk about what happened today. Pedopony thinks that the Doc a case of domestic violence like that one they saw was going to be a walk on the park, compared with the shit she goes through and… as a reader, I can safely say that’s not the safe. I know that Ascentia and Twilight’s “conflict” will never be resolved on a proper manner because I know who wrote this, but at least it’s a lot more interesting that anything that has happened with Creep here this entire time and she’s the protagonist of it. At least things are happening between Ascentia and Twilight, people who oppose their union and how that actually has an effect on Twilight as a result. Of course, all the backlash that their relationship gets is entirely their own fault but at least it’s some kind of backlash with some weight.
+I said on other post and it’s worth repeating: the only semblance of a plot we have here is wether Rainbow Dash’ll rape little girls or not, and the only stakes Rainbow cares about is if Fluttershy’ll leave her or not. Morally there’s not a problem because we had multiple scenes of her just admitting she doesn’t care about hurting other, only about being personally affected. Legally there’s not a problem either because Liliana decided to make it legal that an adult could fuck a 14 year old if they wanted to. Ethically there is barely any conflict either because nobody cares about the raping of little girls. Not Fluttershy, who’s only concerned about Rainbow fucking anyone else but her. Not Ascentia, who’s a creep of her own. Not Rainbow, not Twilight, not even the little girls themselves. I can’t understand the levels of utter mediocrity that one must posses in order to make the possibility of a main character raping someone or not feel just as much important as if they decide to take a cake or pudding as dessert. If no one cares on this entire story then why should the reader?
+I’d much prefer to hear about Ascentia trying to justify staying with her abuser and Twilight desperately trying to convince herself that she’s a good person despite everything, that whatever I have been reading right now. At least it would feel like the stagnation had a point on itself. Of course, written by someone else because Liliana’d make that boring too if given the chance.
+Anyway, Pedopony tells Fluttershy about her experience fucking herself and Fluttershy find it sexy because that’s the whole extend of her character right now. Pervy appears on Pedocreep’s head and it’s obnoxious as always. Fluttershy luckily doesn’t hear her or see her. Pedodash’s acting as a médium between the two and, again, Pervy tries to be flirty but it only comes across as how a 13 year old think flirting’s like. Fluttershy wishes she was real so she could be fucked by two Creeps at the same time and no one knows if that is even possible. They resolve that Fluttershy’ll close he reyes and imagine she’s with the two pedos, which is all that it’s necesary for them to participate on the same fantasy and have a threesome.
+On the middle of this another Pedocreep comes out. This one’s meant to represent the shy side of Rainbow. We know this because she’s dressed modestly and doesn’t understand at first that she’s being invited to join the orgy. She does, of course, because why else anyone thought this story was made for and she also thinks Rainbow’s so amazing with her cock because of course she does. I don’t even have especially funny phrases to make this any easier.
+The shy sides finishes and then goes out, but Pervy still stick around and they fuck some more. Pervy’s annoying and 13 years old.
“Oooh! Dash is in trouble! Dash is in trouble! Dash is in trouble!” Pervy chanted in a sing-song tone, laughing.”
+This sex scene finally ends and Fluttershy’s so amazed because it felt so real. Then they talk about Rainbow’s fantasies, which feels practically the only issue they ever touch consistently, while Fluttershy assures her that she won’t ever judge her for those. If you thought all those fantasies were about the little girls, you don’t get any prize because everyone already knows that.
+When Rainbow mentions about how Sweetie Belle flirts with her, Fluttershy’s rightfully concerned but calms down immediately when Rainbow insists “I’ve got you watching me. If anything did happen to those girls, I’d be the first person you or Twilight would suspect”, which again it’s such a manipulative way to make your girlfriend feel responsible for where you decide to stick your cock.
+Then they hug. Rainbow’s so comforted by the thought that she can share her disgusting fantasies with Fluttershy too. She gets hard. Fluttershy laughs and suggest they go to the bed so she can do something about it. The end.
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