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Actually a decent story. Hunter is Hunter at certain points, but not as much as last week.

I liked this one a good bit. It has some room for a little bit better dialogue and speeds past or drops some potentially interesting plot points...

No, as I was just responding to you when you said Otherwise, I actually largely agree with the rest of what you said about wendi's rather...

Really strong premise, but Marc is a naive retard at moments that pulled me out of the narrative. A stupid/foolhardy protagonist is understandable...