Not sure to what extent we're allowed to discuss the Gumroad-exclusive video, so I'll vaguepost: The parts where you speak are much louder than the video you're commenting on, to the extent where I was adjusting the volume between the two until I settled on a point where you were slightly too loud and the video was slightly too quiet. If you do eventually repost it elsewhere I suggest tweaking the audio levels a bit.
Other than that, I enjoyed it. It's puzzling why anyone would want to watch stuff like that source video, but I guess the person who made it has sort of typecast himself and rather than try to break out of it, he's decided to just dig the hole deeper and take the easy paychecks.