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He doesn't go outside, that's what it is. If he went outside or even saw the sun he would know the sun sets in the West.
Snakes Reads A Terrible Book: Manhunt, by Gretchen Felker-Martin - An utter waste of everyone’s time inspired by the Tranny Sideshows thread and its new favorite author
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This is worse than I imagined. My first drafts are better written and make more sense.
EDIT: So I found the "editor" for this book. Kelly O’Connor Lonesom. She's not doing her job, that's for sure. Replace her with ProWritingAid or Grammarly.
EDIT: So I found the "editor" for this book. Kelly O’Connor Lonesom. She's not doing her job, that's for sure. Replace her with ProWritingAid or Grammarly.
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Montalbane
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I'm going to be honest.
Having re-read the chapters we're currently on (I am not venturing forth alone in this voyage to bullshitland) I have realized that the author utilizes a lot of the tropes common in twaans "literature".
Now before I get my halal ratings let me justify myself by saying that I have had some trans friends some time ago and they overshared a lot.
Now what are the common trans writing tropes?
1) the self insert is never wrong,no matter how depraved and selfish the world is out to get them so they can rape,pillage and destroy everyone and everything.
2) cissies and normal people in general are fucking SHUNNED.
Horrible fates have to befall all normal people not included in the fetish.
Children and the elderly do not get spared (A guy proudly boasted his BBC sissy hypno fanfic where people got indoctrinated and hit with hormones and axe woundery at infancy,of course to him this was totally normal and not creepy at all).
3)All within the fetish, nothing outside the fetish, nothing against the fetish.
Even if it makes no sense the fetish of the author triumphs against anything.
From the law of man to the law of god even the laws of physics are disregarded if they block the shecock erection.
4)No criticism allowed,its akin to genocide.
Basically even at his most depraved the author still manages to be a cliché.
Impressive actually.
Also I can already predict that the trannies have some sort of deep sisterly bond.
Its pure cope because from my experience trannies cant stand each others and are just catty beta males.
0/10 bring me the good beretta so I can end my misery.
Having re-read the chapters we're currently on (I am not venturing forth alone in this voyage to bullshitland) I have realized that the author utilizes a lot of the tropes common in twaans "literature".
Now before I get my halal ratings let me justify myself by saying that I have had some trans friends some time ago and they overshared a lot.
Now what are the common trans writing tropes?
1) the self insert is never wrong,no matter how depraved and selfish the world is out to get them so they can rape,pillage and destroy everyone and everything.
2) cissies and normal people in general are fucking SHUNNED.
Horrible fates have to befall all normal people not included in the fetish.
Children and the elderly do not get spared (A guy proudly boasted his BBC sissy hypno fanfic where people got indoctrinated and hit with hormones and axe woundery at infancy,of course to him this was totally normal and not creepy at all).
3)All within the fetish, nothing outside the fetish, nothing against the fetish.
Even if it makes no sense the fetish of the author triumphs against anything.
From the law of man to the law of god even the laws of physics are disregarded if they block the shecock erection.
4)No criticism allowed,its akin to genocide.
Basically even at his most depraved the author still manages to be a cliché.
Impressive actually.
Also I can already predict that the trannies have some sort of deep sisterly bond.
Its pure cope because from my experience trannies cant stand each others and are just catty beta males.
0/10 bring me the good beretta so I can end my misery.
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The average draw length of a bow is somewhere around 27-29 inches. Medieval archery sometimes described a "Clothyard Arrow" which is generally agreed to be the length of a clothyard, i.e. about 37 inches, but due to the fact that you'd need to be a literal giant to fully draw a bow of that size using the normal method this is disputed.
Proper recurve draw:
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Kiwisee
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I mentioned in another thread that usually victims of severe assault resulting in blood loss will go into shock, thus wouldn’t stay awake if they’re being cut open to the extent that the Cis women are in this story.
But I forgot to mention that there’s a reason why serial killers have to drug their victims before proceeding with the gore aspect; because a victim can and WILL fight you tooth and nail no matter how restrained they are. In fact, the victim waking up is the worst case scenario for a killer because that gives them a chance to fuck you up in return. The victim will be running on adrenaline and can potentially turn the tables.
There’s a reason why, with killers who don’t use sedation, that they’ll often have claw marks in various places on their bodies. And why cops often look for small pieces of skin underneath victim’s fingernails when they’re dealing with homicides; because especially if they’re getting strangled/stabbed, they’re more likely to start clawing the fuck out of the perpetrator’s face or any other exposed area.
And if they can’t claw, they’ll bite; which can lead to a horrific infection that in a world without healthcare will kill you in no time.
Then there’s the other issue of Prion Disease (or Kuru disease), which usually results from engaging in cannibalism of sorts; among other horrific diseases that you can get from eating human flesh that will also kill you in a short period of time without modern healthcare.
Long story short, the trannies are dumb in this story and it’s a miracle that they haven’t been killed by a victim running on adrenaline or by prion disease yet.
Sorry for the rambling, I get annoyed by the unrealistic depictions of violence in fiction because I’m that autistic.
But I forgot to mention that there’s a reason why serial killers have to drug their victims before proceeding with the gore aspect; because a victim can and WILL fight you tooth and nail no matter how restrained they are. In fact, the victim waking up is the worst case scenario for a killer because that gives them a chance to fuck you up in return. The victim will be running on adrenaline and can potentially turn the tables.
There’s a reason why, with killers who don’t use sedation, that they’ll often have claw marks in various places on their bodies. And why cops often look for small pieces of skin underneath victim’s fingernails when they’re dealing with homicides; because especially if they’re getting strangled/stabbed, they’re more likely to start clawing the fuck out of the perpetrator’s face or any other exposed area.
And if they can’t claw, they’ll bite; which can lead to a horrific infection that in a world without healthcare will kill you in no time.
Then there’s the other issue of Prion Disease (or Kuru disease), which usually results from engaging in cannibalism of sorts; among other horrific diseases that you can get from eating human flesh that will also kill you in a short period of time without modern healthcare.
Long story short, the trannies are dumb in this story and it’s a miracle that they haven’t been killed by a victim running on adrenaline or by prion disease yet.
Sorry for the rambling, I get annoyed by the unrealistic depictions of violence in fiction because I’m that autistic.
Nijigasaki
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Wait, chapter four mentions a doe? I thought that in a previous chapter it'd been stated that all of the big game had died out?
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What an absolute trainwreck of a story... I've been browsing through it and I'm honestly pretty stunned. Not by the fetishistic violence, genuine misogyny and misandry, or anything like that. I can deal with that. What stuns me is how amateur it all is. Maybe I've been spoiled reading too many good books by good authors, but fuck me this whole thing feels like it was written by a teenager. This is Wattpad-tier writing.
I've got nothing against self-indulgent writing or even writing one-handed, but have the decency to keep that shit hidden deep in your hard drive.
Good work, Snakes. I think I'm going to enjoy this thread.
I've got nothing against self-indulgent writing or even writing one-handed, but have the decency to keep that shit hidden deep in your hard drive.
Good work, Snakes. I think I'm going to enjoy this thread.
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Chapter 4 mini sperging
theres just too much filler, and it culiminate to a rape scene between beth and a zombie.
its not notable.
theres just too much filler, and it culiminate to a rape scene between beth and a zombie.
its not notable.
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Who gets raped? Beth or the zombie? Or do they take turns with who's on top or bottom?
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zombie attempts to rape beth, but fran throws brick at zombie cock blocking beth
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These zombies are dreadfully weak. And stupid. Also, you'd think that Beth'd be right into it given how heckin' validating it is for a sex zombie to want to rape a tranny the same way it'd want to rape a woman. Fran was just being a jealous prick.
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What is wrong with Niggertroon McNullsballs? It's such a memorable name.
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I've never had a work actually make me ill. I mean physically ill. Not even actual war memoirs about the war in the Pacific. I'm half way through the audiobook and it makes me want to retch. Its disgusting tranny sex scene followed by meals of testicles and than more sex scenes.
I thought this book was a horror novel. Or is being sold as one. The only horror in it is the damn sex scenes. Not the tranny massacre by the waffen-ss with tits. Which is just stupid and over blown. (Side note: Does this fat fuck-up actually believe women would have to tattoo XX on themselves to tell who is and isn't a tranny? So goddamn stupid.) Not the man-zombie cannibals. Which could be replaced with over vicious bears and have the same affect. Nor the idea of impending human extinction. Just one just piece of filler to get the next sex scene/testicle feast after the other.
I thought this book was a horror novel. Or is being sold as one. The only horror in it is the damn sex scenes. Not the tranny massacre by the waffen-ss with tits. Which is just stupid and over blown. (Side note: Does this fat fuck-up actually believe women would have to tattoo XX on themselves to tell who is and isn't a tranny? So goddamn stupid.) Not the man-zombie cannibals. Which could be replaced with over vicious bears and have the same affect. Nor the idea of impending human extinction. Just one just piece of filler to get the next sex scene/testicle feast after the other.
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You didn’t get that wrong.
That’s from Chapter 1.
No, my apologies. I went back to check just now and it seems that may have been a mistake on my part. That’s what I get for being a drunken Best Coaster. The idea of the sun setting over water as a sign of day’s end is baked into my brain so deeply that I added it in subconsciously. Thank you for checking my work.
@umami's milk Thanks for taking Chapter 4. I simply couldn’t take any more yesterday. Chapter 5 is inbound, everyone.
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Damnit stop doxing me!
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any you doxx my cabin in the woods for incase of zombie apoclaypse yall gon be fertilizers for muh POTATOS
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(From the tweet in @AMHOLIO's post, quote/reply not working)
Also, Gretchen (or whatever his real name is) confirmed a feeder lmao
Maybe it's just me being a prude, but I always felt like sex scenes in literature don't add anything to the story other than to satisfy the author's own fantasies. This guy really isn't making a good case against that.
Also, Gretchen (or whatever his real name is) confirmed a feeder lmao
Kiwisee
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I guess another issue I have with this “book” is the careless killing of biological women, and the trannies facing zero consequences from it.
In a post apocalyptic society, real women are a valuable asset to have around. For the simple reason that they can give birth, whereas trans women cannot. By killing women and fucking up the gender ratio in the population, you’ve effectively put a huge target on your kind. Cletus, Tyrone, Carlo and Ahmed are very quickly going to team up and massacre trannies the minute they realize it’s the trannies who are responsible for the depleting population of women.
They would literally create a scenario where Christians and Muslims would put aside religious differences to wipe out trannies in order to save their women. Neither party would take kindly to being robbed of any women to fuck/rape either for children or pleasure.
Even if there are zombies in this world, those evil cis-men are far more likely to want to rebuild society somewhat and having children is part of the recipe. You can’t accomplish child bearing with trannies, but you can with biological women.
In a post apocalyptic society, real women are a valuable asset to have around. For the simple reason that they can give birth, whereas trans women cannot. By killing women and fucking up the gender ratio in the population, you’ve effectively put a huge target on your kind. Cletus, Tyrone, Carlo and Ahmed are very quickly going to team up and massacre trannies the minute they realize it’s the trannies who are responsible for the depleting population of women.
They would literally create a scenario where Christians and Muslims would put aside religious differences to wipe out trannies in order to save their women. Neither party would take kindly to being robbed of any women to fuck/rape either for children or pleasure.
Even if there are zombies in this world, those evil cis-men are far more likely to want to rebuild society somewhat and having children is part of the recipe. You can’t accomplish child bearing with trannies, but you can with biological women.
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Well done sex scenes in a romance novel are fine. By well done, I mean brief and not full of purple prose. No throbbing member, delicate flowers, heaving bosums... Just a seamless transition into and through a couple having sex, often for the first time. It's not really meant to titilate, at least it doesn't me, it's just a natural part of life. Personally I find it less jarring, when done with tact, than cutting from "they started kissing" directly to "whew lad that was great".
To see a good example of this read any of T Kingfisher's Paladin's books. Especially Paladin's Hope (I think, its the third one). It's m/m and she managed to stay with the couple throughout the sex act without actually describing any of the actual act! It's masterfully done to avoid squicking out the homophobes as much as possible. I was seriously impressed.
My point is sex scenes can add to the book without being gross. It takes real skill though. A lot of authors can't pull it off.
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Maybe its my guilty pleasure but I do occasionally like a flower filled prosy bodice ripper, I'd much rather read a body ripper than man hunt, atleast the man and wahmain love eachother and are not troons or rape zombies.
I need to cleanse my palette I am going to read sun god, if the jannies can give back my thread posting privileges then I might do a niggaplease rendition of story time hour.