All right, Kiwis, since we have a bit before everything's being loaded, prepped, citation'd, readied, and so on for the upcoming article reveals (if you've seen the prototypes, please be so kind as to
not post them until we're finished getting
everything set up because we're trying to cause a salt-pocalypse here), I thought I'd spoil you guys with some more Wu content.
This one's a rough one, and took quite a while to do. In fact, it's less than half-done, but there's enough in it to discuss for fucking
days, so let's begin.
See, whilst we were digging in the Election Eve archives, we found some of the early Manuscripts.
They're now up on Lolcow Wiki:
First Known Draft - Prologue and such
Second Known Draft - First part of "Main" story
If you're wondering why they're arranged this way, it's because the original files were heavily corrupted, necessitating we sift through fucking
pages of junk code for the rest and piecing it together thereafter. That said, the first two parts of it are together, and.... By god, it's fucking
glorious. Every single thing we later would see in
Revolution 60 finds its start here - the characterization being all over the place, the protagonists being assholes, all of it. And yet, this is so much more:
1. Wu's chapters are all named after terms, levels, music, and scenes from games she liked. Obvious ones include
Liberi Fatali, and
Omission of the World. And that's just in the first two segments.
2. Wu cites shit she likes more than OPL. I'm fucking serious.
3. The entire thing is filled with more contrivances than a
Sonichu comic.
4.
John thought this was in any way marketable. Let this sink in.
5. It's just as fixated on the female characters as Wu, and openly sexualizes them.
6. Brea is a shameless self-insert, but it's not just that one - There's
another shameless self-insert called "John."
7. The entire prologue segment is insane. I'm talking
Sonichu #10 levels of batshit.
Read it, and enjoy your lulz. More will be coming later, likely either before or after the reveal hits.
