- Joined
- Aug 11, 2022
I played Snoot game last week or so and I've thoroughly enjoyed it. Got ending 2 for my first playthrough (fucking cables), it was realistically depressing and poignant- enough for me to get invested in the characters.
The quality of writing is.. sometimes not the best. Weak flow, maybe compounded by the white on blue-transparent text. Some sentences are clunky on par with high school essays. Definitely needed a proofread once or twice more.
The quality of writing is.. sometimes not the best. Weak flow, maybe compounded by the white on blue-transparent text. Some sentences are clunky on par with high school essays. Definitely needed a proofread once or twice more.
I push open the usual side entrance I take and enter the hallway that's starting to become familiar now. (Fixed: I enter the building though its side entrance, traveling into the hallway that's starting to become familiar to me.)
Overall, still a very impressive piece of fiction from a bunch of randos.When I can finally see again Fang has her wings drawn together behind her and her hands clasped on something also behind her. (Fixed: When I finally open my eyes I'm greeted to Fang holding her hands and wings behind herself.)