Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

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The explanation doesn't even make sense.
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"I got him in a chokehold and told him to let go of my arm"
How you gonna put a grown man in a chokehold when he's got a vice grip on one of your arms? You need both fucking arms free to do it and you have to be behind the other guy using your weight to restrict his breathing.

It's shit like that's always telling, Lily has no earthly fucking idea how a real fight happens, she thinks everything is like the Star Wars Prequels. We're meant to believe a guy that looks like this
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raised on a trailer diet of lintels and pizza bagels somehow has the strength to put a grown man into submission. No. She has grown fat and dumpy and is still holding on to the fantasy of being a twinky renegade. Pathetic.
I assume that this is what Severus Snape would have looked like if he grew up as a muggle in Canada.
 
ETA: A house layout, why?
I'm reminded that lily also made a post about the layout of the house in Pokemadhouse. which is funny (and I think I Said it back then too) Nothnig in the house feels fixed because all we got was monochromatic backgrounds with only the most minimal indication of what room it was taking place in. If any.
 
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She’s been given every out in the world and keeps digging herself deeper. With her cancer arc, and letting her wife live in that ashtray of her father Kenneth’s depression, I know for sure Lily isn’t mentally an adult. She’s about the age of 15-16 at most. Everything is anger, petty lies, and temporary gratification.

Evidence of her saying something? AI.

Sure Lily. Whatever you say.


These lies wouldn’t be so bad if she constantly wasn’t trying to repackage her fetish writing every few months.

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Iris and Kiera - Missed​

Kiera and Larisa stepped into the apartment with a sigh of relief. Though the honeymoon had been wonderful, twenty hours on planes and airports was decidedly not. After an exhausting set of connecting flights, Kiera just wanted to find her sister and squeeze her until she popped.
"Iris?" Kiera said, passing through the living room and toward the bedroom. Inside she found a freshly made bed almost as wide as the room itself, but no Iris. "Iris?"
"Right here, babe," Larisa said from the kitchen. "Note on the fridge. She went out for coffee."
Kiera frowned and retreated to the kitchen, seeing the note for herself. "She said she was gonna be here when we got here."
"Well maybe she's getting you tea," Larisa smiled, pulling Kiera into a hug.
Kiera grumbled, slipping into her wife's arms.
"Why so grumbly, Sunspot?"
"I'm tired, I'm jet lagged, and I miss Iris," Kiera said.
"Simp," Larisa laughed.
Kiera gently smacked her arm. "M'not a simp."
"You are. You're so indignant that Iris isn't here for you to smother." Larisa wrapped both arms around her.
"She's very smotherable," Kiera said, nuzzling into Larisa's shoulder. "And I am very tired."
Larisa smiled and squeezed her. For as long as she'd known Kiera, Iris had always been her first priority. Hell she'd almost gotten cold feet at the wedding over potentially leaving Iris until Larisa said if she wanted Iris to live with them then that was fine. Kiera seemed to be sincerely afraid that getting married meant giving up Iris, but Larisa had no intention putting her in that position. It was a long, emotional conversation, and Kiera never managed to get the tear stains off her dress before the ceremony.
"Go lie down in your new bed," she said, kissing her wife's hair. "I'll come wake you when she gets home."
Kiera hummed and squeezed Larisa as tight as she could. "You're the best, Lari."

Iris returned home a half hour later, carrying a tray with three tall cups on it. The first thing she saw when she got inside was the two suitcases by the door. She lit up immediately, hurrying to get her boots off. Heading into the living room, she found Larisa sitting on the sofa, watching TV.
"Hey!" Larisa said, smiling up at her. "Kiera's in bed getting a nap."
Iris beamed and set the tray down, plucking one of the cups out and handing it to her.
"Oh you doll," Larisa sighed, accepting the cup. "Four cream, two sugar, a shot of hazelnut?"
Iris nodded.
"Oooh, K's not the only one who missed you," Larisa grinned, patting the seat beside her.
Iris sat down beside her, taking her own coffee.
"Was it lonely here all alone?" Larisa asked.
Iris nodded.
Larisa chuckled. "Sorry about that, whisking your sister away to Saint Croix."
Iris smiled and waved her hand, before signing something short.
"Oh we had a wonderful time," Larisa said. "Lovely beaches, warm sun, it was paradise."
Iris's smile widened. Knowing that they'd had a wonderful time made the loneliness sting significantly less.
"What about you? What did you do?" Larisa asked.
Iris signed with one hand.
"Bed shopping took two weeks?"
She signed again.
"Oh they made you haul that in and put it together yourself?!" Larisa balked. "Rude!"
Iris silently giggled.
"What kind is it?"
Iris signed again.
"Memory gel, you angel!" Larisa sighed, leaning in and giving Iris a hug. "I'm going to sleep like a baby."
Iris returned the hug, patting Larisa's back. It was nice to see Larisa again. Kiera had a few girlfriends and boyfriends in the past, most of them bailing when they saw how close she and Iris were. Larisa had been friends with the both of them for a while before asking Kiera out, and so understood them better than most.
"C'mon," Larisa said, pulling away. "Let's go join Kiera."
Iris stood up and followed Larisa into the bedroom, where Kiera was fast asleep in the large bed. Larisa circled around and slipped into bed on Kiera's right, while Iris slipped in on her left. The jostling made her stir and she lifted her head.
"Lari?" she mumbled.
"Hey Sunspot," Larisa whispered, pressing a kiss to her forehead. "Roll over."
Kiera turned to the other side, and smiled when she saw Iris. "There you are!" she exclaimed, sleepily closing in and latching onto Iris' torso.
Iris smiled and wrapped Kiera in a hug.
"I missed you," Kiera mumbled as Larisa settled in behind her. The gentle squeeze Iris gave her told her she'd been missed just as much.
The three of them settled and said nothing else. Eventually, Kiera drifted back to sleep. Nestled between her two favourite people, she was more comfortable than she'd ever been in her short life.
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Self-ask to introduce the idea that clips of him saying he wrote stockholm are faked. I was waiting for this and I wasn't disappointed. He's so transparent.

This isn't the first time she's alleged 'it was AI', which makes it even funnier that she's pretending she doesn't know what Anon is talking about.


More shitty writing, oh boy.

Inside she found a freshly made bed almost as wide as the room itself,

This makes it sound like the bed is comically large, which sadly isn't the case. A King California is 72 inches wide, so this 'huge bedroom' is only a little more than six feet across. Unless the room is bizarrely long to compensate they are crammed.

"I'm tired, I'm jet lagged, and I miss Iris," Kiera said.
"Simp," Larisa laughed.
Kiera gently smacked her arm. "M'not a simp."
"You are. You're so indignant that Iris isn't here for you to smother." Larisa wrapped both arms around her.

"When Iris isn't in the room, every other character should be asking, 'Where's Iris?'"

This isn't sweet. This isn't cute. This is creepy and deeply unhealthy.

The three of them settled [into bed] and said nothing else.

DEEPLY. UNHEALTHY.


Now these, I find interesting. It's just a couple of fans sucking up to Lily, but what jumps out at me is the shared use of the phrase 'unconditional love'.

There is literally nothing about this vignette that displays unconditional love.

Unconditional love is when somebody does something wrong -- usually accidentally, but not always -- but are still accepted and forgiven by another person because love is stronger than anger. It's the love a mother has for a baby that's just made an awful mess on the countertop. It's the love a dog has for its owner even after the owner has hurt him. It's a love that persists in spite of adversity.

There's no adversity here. There's nothing straining the bonds of their love. Iris' silence isn't frustrating for Kiera to deal with, it hasn't actually caused any issues in their lives except people looking at them funny. There is no evidence of unconditional love because there are no conditions that are testing it. Yet somehow two people independently refer to this story as showing 'unconditional love'.

Now, they're fans of Lily so it's not inconceivable that they don't know what the phrase means, but it's still not one that occurs to people on the regular to begin with. So where did this come from?

I'm guessing Lily herself, telling her chat to read her story and pat her ass about it. "It's about unconditional love!", she says, and like a chatbot trying to mimic human speech they head over and pound out a response that says 'yes lily this is about unconditional love you are so talented I love <LARISA>, <KIERA>, and <IRIS>'.

If I may editorialize, it's fucking pathetic.
 
ETA: A house layout, why?
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Call it autism, the position of that TV is fucking abysmal. With windows from 3 directions, the glare is gonna be hell. Also one bathroom. Most houses usually have 2. Yes there is the 2 bedroom one bath layout, but you could have a half bathroom with just a toilet in it. I say this simply because it feels things could get congested quickly with a bunch of people over. This "house" is little better than Yoda's hut by modern building standards. Might as well be a apartment.
 
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Sometimes I do buy into Lily's stories of her childhood being full of trauma and abuse, because you read stuff like this and realize all her ideal relationships are very deeply unhealthy and that has to come from somewhere. Something very one-sided, something very co-dependent, her ideal partner is always just a big sister/mommy who will never get mad at them for doing anything and excuse any and all questionable behavior because that's what you see in all her works. G, Aliana, Rainbow Dash to some extent, they're all terrible people, but the narrative is always on their side and surrounds them with people who love them so much they will make any excuse they can for them. Aliana is just a kid who is pushing thirty, G was just trying to stay alive, Rainbow Dash can't help being a futa pedo, etc.
 
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Iris and Kiera - Doctor​

"Her progress has deteriorated rapidly," Dr Klein said to Nathan and Oliver as they sat in his office. "Iris has gradually become less and less responsive to therapy and treatment. Now she simply sits in the chair and stares at the wall."
Nathan sighed and rubbed his eyes, glancing through the two way mirror toward Iris, who was quietly playing chess with her sister. "We've been hearing that a lot lately," he said.
"Iris has been shutting down at home as well," Oliver said. "She barely acknowledges me or Nathan, and her teachers say she communicates only as much as she needs to."
Dr Klein glanced through the mirror at Iris, who had moved her knight into position to check Kiera's king, beamed, and knocked on the table once.
"What?! Oh you bitch!" Kiera exclaimed as she realized that her only way out was to sacrifice her Queen. "How do you do that?!"
Iris silently giggled.
"...I wonder if her communication is psychosomatic," Dr Klein said, pulling out a notepad. "What is her relationship with her sister like?"
"They're the best of friends," Nathan said. "I think they're a little too close honestly."
"They spend all day together," Oliver said. "They play together. Iris' friends are Kiera's friends."
"And Iris communicates with her?"
"Apparently. Kiera insists that she does," Oliver said.
Klein hummed as he wrote on his pad, and then tore the sheet off. "Excuse me," he said.
He left his office and stepped into the observation room where Iris and Kiera were waiting. "Ms Morgan?"
Kiera looked up. "Me?"
"Yes," Klein said, holding the sheet out to her. "I want you to ask your sister these questions, and then tell me what she says."
Kiera took the sheet and looked at it. "...Hey Iris?"
Iris, who hadn't reacted when Klein entered the room, looked up.
"Do you like the doctors here?"
Iris frowned and shook her head.
"Why not?"
Iris rolled her eyes and shrugged, wiggling her hand.
"She said you keep trying to make her talk when she can't," Kiera said.
Klein nodded and gestured to the sheet again.
"Why don't you sign or write?" Kiera asked.
Iris' frown deepened and she hunched forward, looking down at the chess board.
"She said you keep talking to her like she's an animal that can't think for herself," Kiera said. She reached forward and touched Iris' hand. "You can't find a reason she's mute so you act like she's faking it."
Klein hummed. That supported his newest theory. Iris was shutting down because she didn't feel respected or safe. Felt like she was being experimented on.
"...Iris," he said.
Iris didn't move.
"Iris, look at me please."
Iris twitched and looked up at Dr Klein.
"I understand that you feel... dehumanized," Klein said. "But shutting down isn't the answer. At least not here. If you don't advocate for yourself, we won't know what you need."
Iris scowled.
"She says she tried at first, and you didn't listen," Kiera said. "You took Dad's word over hers."
Klein hummed. "Alright. What do you want, Iris?"
Iris glanced at Kiera and twitched her finger.
"She said she doesn't want to do any more scans, and she doesn't want you to separate us again," Kiera said.
"Alright. No more scans, no more separation," Klein said.
Iris drummed her fingers against the table.
"And she wants to be involved in decisions made about her," Kiera said. "Not in here while you and our dads talk about her."
"...That can certainly be done," Klein said. "And you'll use the whiteboard?"
Iris shook her head, then pointed to Kiera.
"She wants me to interpret."
Klein frowned slightly. It wasn't ideal progress, but it was progress. "Alright," he said as he stood up. "Finish your game, then come and join us."
Iris nodded and Klein retreated from the room as the two turned their attention back to the board.
"...Where did my Rook go?" Kiera said.
Iris shrugged, moving her Pawn forward as she jostled the missing Rook around her mouth.
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"When Iris isn't in the room, every other character should be asking, 'Where's Iris?'"
This isn't sweet. This isn't cute. This is creepy and deeply unhealthy.
The three of them settled [into bed] and said nothing else.

DEEPLY. UNHEALTHY.
She heard you.
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She heard you.
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I'm asexual and an only child, Lily. I assure you I'm not looking for incest where there is none. You're enjoying skirting the line, though.

"...I wonder if her communication is psychosomatic," Dr Klein said, pulling out a notepad. "What is her relationship with her sister like?"
"They're the best of friends," Nathan said. "I think they're a little too close honestly."

You know exactly what you're doing and I don't afford you 'plausible deniability' for a second. A grown-ass married woman who only feels safe and comfortable when she's spooning her own sister while in bed with her wife is not 'sisters being close'. The neurodivergent one being literally unable to function without her sister as an intermediary is not 'sisters being close'.

Sometimes I do buy into Lily's stories of her childhood being full of trauma and abuse, because you read stuff like this and realize all her ideal relationships are very deeply unhealthy and that has to come from somewhere. Something very one-sided, something very co-dependent, her ideal partner is always just a big sister/mommy who will never get mad at them for doing anything and excuse any and all questionable behavior because that's what you see in all her works. G, Aliana, Rainbow Dash to some extent, they're all terrible people, but the narrative is always on their side and surrounds them with people who love them so much they will make any excuse they can for them. Aliana is just a kid who is pushing thirty, G was just trying to stay alive, Rainbow Dash can't help being a futa pedo, etc.

What's the quote... "A good writer will reveal truths about the world. A bad writer will reveal truths about themselves." Or something to that effect.

Sure enough, this is the same kind of relationship that Lily always writes. One party is a sad, emotionally fragile trauma victim while the other is always the white knight defender who is terminally incapable of thinking of anybody except their poor, suffering beloved. comic!Lily and G, Aliana and Rey, Anevay and Sylvanas, Mags and... I forgot her name, the two from Scars (you know, the vignettes about how a seven year old wanted to fuck her own mother, which Lily deleted and will probably deny having ever written?) While some of the dynamics change a little, it's almost always about one partner who has been through so much and another partner who recognizes how damaged they are and how desperately they need support and protection from the outside world (which is mean and just doesn't understand them) and so dedicates themselves mind, body, and soul to the other partner to keep them safe and assure them they're perfect and never have to change.

Ths is relevant to what Lily just posted about Iris somehow winding up with a PhD in behavioral psychology because she 'opens up' after being removed from all the mean and stupid people who held her back. It sounds like a grounded power fantasy version of how she talks about her time in 'the hospital', where she finally flourished when she was out of the influence of her mean and stupid family and if only she had stayed away from them she'd probably be super successful and smart and everybody would recognize what a wonderful and talented person she always was and she'd SHOW THEM ALL.

If I may editorialize, it's fucking pathetic.

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It's amazing how obvious her abuse was to all these case workers at the hospital and yet somehow they still released her to her family instead of relocating her to somewhere safe. I said this before, but either the hospital deeply failed her or she's full of shit and one of these is significantly more likely than the other.
 
Her followers are starting to side eye these new "high intimacy" sister characters. Her words not mine.
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They are second only to the implied sister relationship from Baldur's gate she has up there.
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They're already anticipating this turning into a creepy shitpost.
 
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Does she remember that these claims are older than ai voice stuff that started roughly 2 years ago?
Also audio of her admitting to writing it is fake, but also the general synopsis is fake because according to her people sabotaged it/took it out of context. So did she write it or not?

ETA: New vignette. This one is a marked improvement because there's no implied incest in it.

Iris and Kiera - Patients​

Iris sat in the lounge with Mrs Grace, waiting for her to fully absorb what she'd been told. The young mother was at her wit's end with her son, a particularly twitchy and irritable boy of twelve who was rapidly approaching expulsion for his behaviour. They'd been in and out of doctors for months with no progress until they decided to try Iris out of desperation.
When Iris met the boy, she found someone who was on guard and ready to jump at the slightest twitch. He was unwilling to talk to her at first, so Iris had let them sit in silence until he was ready. She never forced her patients to talk to her. Lord knows doctors tried that with her for years to no success.
Once he had accepted that he had control of the situation, he started opening up. It hadn't taken long to find the reason for his behaviour. His teachers regularly antagonized him and struck him, and so he hated any situation where he was at the mercy of adults.
Connecting with the boy was the easy part. Convincing his mother without her going into denial or going into a doom-spiral about her capabilities as a parent was the hard part. She always gave the parents a written report and let them read it themselves. Now they were simply sat in her lounge with coffee while she processed everything.
"I... I didn't realize..." she finally said. "I thought he was just... being difficult."
Iris scribbled something on a handheld whiteboard and handed it to her.
Children are never just difficult. There's always a reason for it. It's just a matter of their guardians believing it's worth taking seriously.
Mrs Grace sighed in defeat as she looked at the board. "He always said his teachers were out to get him. I thought... that's what kids always say, right?"
Iris took the whiteboard and wrote again before handing it back.
If it's what they sincerely believe, it's worth looking into. Better to investigate and turn up nothing than ignore it.
Mrs Grace felt her heart shatter at reading those words. All this time her son was being hurt, and she just wouldn't listen. "...Thank you, Dr Morgan."
Iris patted her hand reassuringly.
"...Do you have children?"
Iris hastily scribbled and flipped the board around.
I have a niece. My sisters and I would be appalled if this was how she was being treated in school.
That message made something shift in Mrs Grace's eyes. She frowned, and stood up. "So am I," she said, more confidently this time. "So am I! I'm going to get to the bottom of this! Thank you Dr Morgan. You have a lovely day."
Iris smiled and waved as Mrs Grace left her office. Once the door closed she silently sighed and set the board down, picking her coffee back up and taking an indulgent sip.
Her phone buzzed in her pocket and she smiled immediately when she saw a text from Kiera.
"Look at what Melissa did!"
Attached was a photo of her niece with a big, tooth-missing grin on her face, sitting beside a hexapod. From the looks of it, she'd put it together herself.
Iris smiled and tapped away at her phone, sending a brief response to Kiera.
"🥹 👏👏👏"
I think this is how Lily pictures herself when she gives terrible counter productive advice to vulnerable teens.
 
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Does she remember that these claims are older than ai voice stuff that started roughly 2 years ago?
Probably.

Unfortunately, she seems to be aware that her fans are hopelessly retarded and are going to buy it hook, line, and sinker. The people who still follow her apparently believe all the other bullshit she's spouted, why is this one going to bother them?

Her followers are starting to side eye these new "high intimacy" sister characters. Her words not mine.
Multiple characters with familial/quasi-familial relationships and none of them are in the platonic and low intimacy category. Christ have mercy.
 
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Well, patient, singular. And actually the patient doesn't even show up. Hell, she didn't even give him a name.

Lily really has sa remarkable ability to look at a potential scene and choose the least interesting part of it. Why aren't we shown the actual therapy session? Why don't we actually see how the kid responds to her instead of just being told about it post hoc? (The answer, of course, is that it would be way harder to show her getting the kid to open up than just saying 'he opened up and she figured it out and it took one session she's just that good'.)

For somebody who commonly tells her fans to just 'get therapy' if they need mental health help she sure seems to have a dim view of therapists-- Iris is being taken to doctors who clearly have no idea how to handle children, let alone special needs children, and she's a last-ditch therapist after multiple fools have dismissed the kid out of hand. Somehow she's the only one who managed to figure out his core issue (within, I reiterate, a single hour long session), and that core issue is of course that adults are terrible and kids should be left alone to do whatever they want. Like Lily has implied SHE should have been able to do when she was young. Remember, Lily wasn't 'challenging', she was just lashing out for the horrific abuse she experienced at home (eg: dad made her do her homework).

Also it seems like all he said was 'the teachers antagonize me', which apparently is what he told the other therapists, but Only Iris could truly understand and somehow instantly convince his mother that not only is this actually happening (as opposed to the kid not taking his education seriously and deciding that the teachers yelling at him for being on his phone all through class is their fault) but that she's also a terrible mother for not believing him until now and she's going to go have it out with the school right now. Just instantly.

I guess it's easy to be perfect at your job when the author (1) decides you are and (2) has no idea how human beings function.

Speaking of I absolutely refuse to believe that a defiant twelve-year-old boy would easily trust Iris and not immediately make fun of her for her mutism. Iris is probably taking a lot of abuse from shitty little kids.
 
Hell she'd almost gotten cold feet at the wedding over potentially leaving Iris until Larisa said if she wanted Iris to live with them then that was fine. Kiera seemed to be sincerely afraid that getting married meant giving up Iris, but Larisa had no intention putting her in that position. It was a long, emotional conversation, and Kiera never managed to get the tear stains off her dress before the ceremony.

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so not only they did not live together before they got married, but left all discussions for the wedding day

lily, release a writing snippet of the argument, I'm dying to read this. not a joke, it's some actual interesting conflict with a happy ending. this woman was willing to give up on her sister to be with her future wife. she thought she was abandoning her family. and her future wife was completely oblivious to this

did iris know about this? that her sister would abandon her? that her sister was crushed by the thought of abandoning her? i want to know more about this, sounds more interesting than all the bullshit lily is shitting out



BULLSHIT

academic settings are NOTORIOUS for strict rules and hierarchy. no way a rebellious kid like iris will succeed in this environment

also she has a phd on what? why? what kind of research did she do? why would she want to invest in research? you don't need a phd to be a therapist and it sounds like her true goal and passion is helping other people

why is a person with a full phd so obsessed and dependent on her sister? for you to get that far on the academic ladder (getting into college, getting a degree, masters and then phd) you would need to get your own life. she probably didn't talk to her sister for entire days because she was too busy studying

i know that i'm going on way too deep on this one specific thing but i think it's hilarious that lily is an youtuber that doesn't leave her house and thinks she knows how the world works. why the fuck is this character with a full phd in psychology and her own practice living in such a shitty apartment with one bathroom? where are the other workers in her clinic?

i shouldn't say this, but lily wrote iris so fucking retarded that i genuinely have trouble believing she has a job at all, let alone having a phd

My sisters and I would be appalled if this was how she was being treated in school.

if you said this to any parent they would throw a shit fit and never talk to you again

yeah, this retard that can't even talk to other people and live without her sister and be polite and gentle while delivering bad news is capable of sustaining her own clinic. riiiiiight
 
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Mikaila, I ask this just out of the kindest of my heart and nothing else.
But did that "I love your hair" happened in your room outside of the used needles livingroom your dad left for you? Was Liliana telling you about her "genius story idea" while you were trying to sleep on your used needle infested house? Just curious, I want to know.
Also, Liliana, for the love of god, let your wife sleep, you selfish cunt. You might be used to staying up all night to sneak into Courtney's room and steal her underwear, but she is not.
Lastly, the karaoke picture looks like Mikaila has a giant beard that dettached from her face. If you want to convey that's your hair, the line movement should be following the hair, not just your face.
 
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