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- Sep 9, 2021
Initially, Fujofrankenstein's work was supposed to be 12 chapters. She's since upped it to 20. Here is Chapter 9, featuring yet another misgendering instance - this time from a lawyer - and daddy dearest getting shot. It's an accident, swear.
Huh. Didn't know Silco was a Jon. Now, notice that Viktor's 'real' name is Jane Doe, which isn't a real name, and that causes a lot of problems for him. You can fingerfuck him in that underage pussy, but don't call him Jane.
> 14 years
For a meth charge? For having huge gangs do his work? Boy he got a sweetheart deal. And sentencing in under a year? Amazing. You'd think that trial would have a lot of media attention given who he was, and yet, there's no social media surrounding him at all.
I also noticed that Mel also used Viktor's deadname, and was not held accountable for it. I guess she's spared the wrath of the trans flag for once.
Since we're almost halfway through this fic, recall that in the prior chapter Jayce kissed his 'stepson' after all that back-and-forth. This was after an almost-rape scene where Viktor was turned the fuck on when Jayce went Punished Joel on everyone. This dialogue will take on more sexually charged tones, just watch.
Yanking the door open when the doors would have been automatically locked? She's got some strength in her.
Let me guess. This old foster father who started the abuse was Singed.
Oh look, more 'woe is me' trans bullshit about how they're so broken and wrong while getting fake IDs and throwing themselves at older men so they can find a new father figure while getting finger fucked in the back seat. . So broken that if it wasn't for IDs, he'd probably have an OnlyFans.
> Too feminine
Oh? We can tell the sexes apart by gait now? That's new.
Still betting on the old foster father being Singed. We need the 'gross creep being a pedo' and he fits the bill. Only hot teenage chasers need apply.
Imagine if he shot him in the head. No more guns up your cooter, just the imagery of your dream daddy's brains on the ceiling.
Hey, now. I bet if Jayce asked to put you in hand cuffs you'd agree. Awaken that kink inside you. It's only when a dirty cop is involved is it bad. I really wanted them to pull out the taser and tackle our little waif pooner.
Yeah. You probably should have thought about the trajectory of your life before you decided to get finger banged in the back of a 30-year-old's care. Just sayin'.
Viktor is again misgendered in the paperwork, yet I don't see any reprimands here. Where's Jayce with his epic shouting match with another woman?
Uh oh. Now he has to give up his guns, and that means no more guns up the snatch
Terrible.
At this point, he really does need a 'I Can't Breathe' T-shirt, courtesy of St. Floyd.
> You're not the first messed up foster kid to wind up here
I just gotta ask: is he on the ward with other boys, or is he in the one with girls? Are there mixed-sex facilities? Because I doubt he wants to spend time with other boys over what happened in Chapter 8.
More drama. Will our dear pooner be reunited with their Dream Daddy? Will there be more kisses and more sexual tension as they finally let go and fuck in the back of the truck? Time will tell. We're halfway there.
This fic represents the author's personal beliefs on acceptable conduct...by having the babysitter correctively rape their charge. But don't worry, it's still a gender-affirming assault, because so long as your attacker calls you a boy, all is good.
> Write a fic about child sexual against a trans kid
> Immediately talk about how hot the college kid who does it is
Yeah, that fits. We go right to talking about his muscles like he's a Greek god.
> Barely a teenager
I assume that Viktor here has not begun puberty, and is around 12-13 years old.
> Exquisite expanse of his chest
We are still glazing the college boy, eh? Misgendering is fine so long as the person doing it makes you wet.
> Handsome Jayce, the Misgendering Babysitter
That should be a callsign.
> Shelves of stuffed animals
> The room is lit by fairy lights
That is the most feminine room I've ever seen. If you want to be seen as a boy, you can start by throwing out the stuffies and putting up your inventions.
> You've been ignoring me for hours and I think that's pretty rude of you, young lady
And here we go. Jayce the Misgendering Babysitter knows how to deal with errant girls: by bringing out his inner Latino and just straight up raping them.
> Such a cute girl
But don't worry, the gender affirming stuff comes later when he starts sodomizing him.
> How small he is
I doubt he's barely 5'0.
> Viktor is delicate
Of course! He's delicate, pale, frail and (fe)male, a perfect contrast to the big, hulking, raping Latino.
> His sparse pubic hair
Yeah, this has got to be a 12-year-old.
> Two illnesses in tandem - disgust and the knowledge that his hips are stuttering
> Viktor is dirty now, his childhood ending
But if you call him a boy, all is forgiven.
> Slick, squelching sounds Jayce has wrought from his depths
I was wondering when 'obscene squelch' would be brought up.
> I think you're wet enough to take me
Spoiler: he is not wet enough
> His untouched hole
Jayce may treat Viktor as female, but the author would like to make it clear that she doesn't!
> Such a tight little girl
Yeah, because that is a fucking child you're molesting, you wetback.
> Why an abuser when the man is poised over him
Because you're desperate for the abuse to stop and are willing to do anything to placate the violent male. This is built into women because violent males are literally our death.
Look at that. Jayce is so kind he's treating him like the boy he is...by deciding to call him 'good boy' during the assault instead of 'good girl'.
> The festering chasm between assault and the surety it's over
It ain't over till that dick deflates, boy.
> Not aloud, not away from the Internet
Let me guess. He came to terms with said trans identity after reading a few Reddit threats. That's how it starts. The parents don't know, the friends don't know - but the stranger with all the answers seems to know.
> I want to fuck a cute boy
Right. Even if you hit it from the back, anogenital distance is just going to remind you that you're raping a female.
> Has never been looked at before, doesn't glance at themselves, and avoids mirrors
I wonder if showering is common for him.
> Drinking in his milky skin
They all love that white skin.
> Is afraid of female puberty, of growing breasts and widening hips, and is not on puberty blockers
> The male still treats him like a woman anyways
I wonder what the author aimed to do with this, aside from making the Latino a rapist. Was she writing about the marginalized trans experience? If so, that's devastatingly accurate. We know they suffer CSA, but Jesus.
> Ruins him from the inside
Oh yeah, Jayce makes Viktor bled with those huge-ass fingers of his.
See?
> To call him a good boy
Being raped digitally is OK provided your rapist calls you a boy.
> Passionate fingering
He just made you bleed.
> You're so handsome
He's barely entered puberty.
> It's a comfort in a dark place, to be known as a boy
> He knows what's being done to him
> Almost enough to undo the trauma of losing his innocence like this
> He's never been anyone's boy before, but right now he is Jayce's
This is just trauma coping. His mind cannot handle what is happening, so it reaches for the closest comfort it has: wanting to be 'seen' as a boy via anal rape.
> Fucking into Viktor with three fingers
There is no lube used for the sodomy, btw. It's all raw, no rubber. Yes, there's blood, and a lot of it.
> There's a fog rolling through him, clumsy and thick
If you think that's disassociation, you're wrong. He actually comes to LIKE what is happening.
> I don't need to be gentle with you
> Boys can can all of this. They can take even more
And there it is. Telling a girl that if she wants to be a boy so bad, she can 'shut up and take it'. Of course, no one mention sodomy can happen to either sex, and that female anuses are thinner and shorter.
> Pleasure
That is used 15 times, btw. You'll get bored of it real quick.
> Part of Viktor is sickened that he's being violated by someone who was trusted to look after him
And the other half? Pure gender euphoria. Yes, getting anally raped is gender euphoric to these cunts.
> You look so fucking handsome when you're flustered like this
Ah, the classic 'too beautiful to resist' thing.
> His insides all throbbing in pain but his clit pulsing purely in pleasure
I don't think any amount of clitoral stimulation is going to fix the fact you are literally having your insides torn out.
> The thought of coming for Jayce is a strange spot inside him, shame and excitement intermingling, disgusting and delectable both
Redundant.
> A man who wants to treat him like a boy
He isn't, though. He knows what sex you are. Sodomy can happen to either sex.
> Purpling tip of his veiny cock
True to form, the Latino rapist has a big dick. Just to hammer it home the sheer brutality of what's going to happen.
> Smeared with pinkish streaks of his blood
It ain't gonna remain pink for long, trust me.
>> Why Jayce seems to ravenous and pleased by it
You're really asking that? It's because you're a virgin, for one, and a helpless victim second. Rapists LOVE that.
> If he has to lose his virginity this way, then at least he gets to do it as the boy he is
...sodomy isn't gender specific. You are not being 'treated as a boy', you're just a collection of holes for the rapist.
Told you. He just uses his spit, which is not sufficient lube, to sodomize this kid. 'Spearing him open' is very literal.
> There's something tender and wounded in the pit of his stomach...flood of affirmations
"I may be getting anally raped but he's calling me a BOY so that's okay!" Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with pooners?
> He is small and new at this
No shit. You're just a young kid. You're not supposed to engage in any kind of sex yet.
> He never craved it or devoted much thought to it before this
> Be trans
> You get raped by a man
> It's terrible but you consider it a gender affirming experience
> It isn't an isolated event among that group
Wew, lad.
> So long and thick
How long and thick are we talking about?
> A feeling like paper torn down the center
Those are your anal walls, bud.
> You're fucking perfect, best guy I've ever fucked
> Tell me you like being fucked like a boy
How compelling. Please face the wall now.
Now, you really have to ask: if this is about addressing accountability, or whatever it was the author was trying to get at in her author's note, it sure doesn't come off as such. It comes off as a weird rape fetish where a Latino rapist (fitting, as 30% of Latinas experience CSA and half of the time it's a male family member) abuses a white person, who happens to be trans, and the harmful and dangerous experience is deemed 'uplifting' and 'gender affirming' because the rapist is calling you a boy. It's weird as hell.
> Moreish pleasure
That's in relation to food, not sexual pleasure.
> Keeping Viktor speared so impossibly open on his cock
That's with no lube, btw. That's going to lead to a prolapse.
> Impossible fullness of him
Watch your insides become your outsides in the next instant.
> Sinking into the hilt
Cliché.
> Viktor's body sucks him in
Right.
> This is normal, it's normal to get off from someone touching your cock
It isn't normal to make them bleed so badly they soil their underwear and the sheets.
> Hole snags against the ridge of Jayce's head
At that age, rough anal sex can actually tear you down the middle. There will be no brushing that off as menstruation when the blood is way too thick to be menstrual blood and a pad can't hold it.
> He's aware of it and he's not, of being touched, being opened
It's so terrible and bad, but hey, he called you a boy and that makes it OK, right?
> The sound is so wild and unguarded
I bet he sounds like a bull announcing his presence.
> It's like taking Viktor's virginity has given Jayce a new spiritual awakening
That's the whole point. The point is in ruining an innocent body. I have no idea what kind of moral lesson the author is trying to sell here.
> Stomach lurching at the sight of crimson on his softening cock
Yeah, he's bleeding. There will be major anal tearing, enough to require surgery, but that is never mentioned. Instead, we get some 'aftercare' that includes gender affirming boyfriend talk.
> It felt good, which means it's okay that it happened
Homie your ass is bleeding like Mr. Hands' did, and that buddy took on a horse. You were 12. There's no arguing that that is normal.
No. There's a major difference between the kind of bleeding he has, and menstrual bleeding. At that age, you're spotting; maybe you might soil your sheets but it should never resemble the scene of a crime that young. That kind of sodomy would lead to anal sphincter issues such as not being able to keep feces in, so you'd see shit and blood on those sheets. Not that that matters - physical damage doesn't exist in the world of FTMs. It isn't rape and can't be rape so long as you are called a boy.
I am still wondering what the purpose of this was. What kind of moral theme was the author trying to achieve? That sodomy is gender affirming? That CSA is normal in their community? If all of the above is true, that's not something you want escaping to the 'cissies', because you're just confirming what we have suspected all along: you have a hypersexualization problem because you were attacked as children, so you try to 'reclaim' it by writing shit like this. I don't consider it therapeutic, I consider it very revealing.
Alright, how about something lighter for the palette: ABO baby mama dramas!
Uh oh. Sky knows what's up; omegas gotta stick together, see.
I'll be honest: I don't give a damn about these characters, but that coffee shop set up is pretty nice.
> The days seem shorter
No shit, because THEY ARE. The earth is tilted away from the Sun during that time. You're a scientist; you should know this.
So we're going with the Commune look. That's a popular one for fics like these because he looks more 'feminine' and the feminine one is the designated 'pregnant person'.
> Blonde
Lmao, that's the female variant of the term.
> Your eyes are sadder
Oh, I wonder why.
So what do omegas smell like here? Citrus fruit? Vanilla sugar? Blood oranges? Absinthe? Ylang Ylang? Something you can shove in a perfume bottle? Do tell.
Again, what's his smell? Is it a 'feminine' smell because omegas are women-lite, or is it something else? Does Jayce smell masculine and pine-y?
Glad he kept the pseudo-wedding ring. Makes the divorce hit so much harder.
This line reminds me of Seth Rogen's line in Knocked Up, when he asks Katherine Heigl what she means when she says she's pregnant. It's pretty damn obvious what 'being pregnant' means.
In this universe, in this particular iteration, omegas can't live as single parents. They have to have an alpha taking care of them to ensure spousal support, and in the eye of the courts, a single, unwed omega is as good as useless. Basically, how most societies treat single mothers IRL, but manages to be worse. I bet omegas can't even have their own bank accounts, but they can get full-sleeve tattoos while sporting a septum ring.
> Their world is catered to a specific type of person
No fucking shit. This is one of the only ABO fics I've read that actually addresses that. Alphas get all the goodies in society thanks to the nature of their birth, while omegas get nothing. What is interesting to note is that you can identify as a man while being a woman, but you cannot identify as an alpha. These authors maintain that only one is biological, while the other is a nebulous concept.
Going off his eyes, you'd think he'd be able to see in the dark. I wonder if that's a thing in this universe.
> You're keeping it
> He could have gotten rid of it
Now I'm wondering what this universe's attitudes are around abortion. An unwed, unmated, single omega is a bad, bad thing. Are there omegas in foster care? Does the state take care of them? For a modern AU, it reads like something from the 1950s based on how archaic it is.
> Lived most of his life in hospital settings
> Decided to transition first before fixing his legs or spine
Just Pooner Things. Glad transition related care for their 'primary sex' is allowed, but not their 'secondary sex'. That's something I'll never understand.
> He has to stop his glower from etching on his face
Say, omegas aren't told to 'smile more', are they?
> Expecting individuals
> Maternity wing
Pick one. Maternity is a term directly related to female bodies. I don't see a gender neutral alternative for it, and apparently, the author doesn't either.
> Tall, suit-clad, pristine alpha
What is this, Mad Men?
See my point above. You want gender neutral terms for pregnancy, yet use 'maternity'.
Now, we also learn that insurance companies in this American AU - because in other AUs in other countries, these procedures are covered - deny coverage if the omega is unwed and unmated. Sounds like they could use a civil rights movement, but does ABO even allow that?
> his scent hasn't changed
What do omega scents smell like when pregnant? Now I'm curious.
Interesting. There are no civil rights protections for omegas, because asking these questions IRL are considered discriminatory thanks to feminism. You only inquire about the health of the woman. Denying coverage would lead to a court case, but that doesn't happen here. Alpha males really do reign supreme.
I don't know how long this one will go for, but I know that other dramatic 'Mpreg' fic that had a full birth scene is due to updated soon. God, that was a bore. This one is interesting for how ABO treats unwed omegas; it's definitely a reference to 1950s dynamics. Let's see how this one turns out.
Huh. Didn't know Silco was a Jon. Now, notice that Viktor's 'real' name is Jane Doe, which isn't a real name, and that causes a lot of problems for him. You can fingerfuck him in that underage pussy, but don't call him Jane.
> 14 years
For a meth charge? For having huge gangs do his work? Boy he got a sweetheart deal. And sentencing in under a year? Amazing. You'd think that trial would have a lot of media attention given who he was, and yet, there's no social media surrounding him at all.
I also noticed that Mel also used Viktor's deadname, and was not held accountable for it. I guess she's spared the wrath of the trans flag for once.
Since we're almost halfway through this fic, recall that in the prior chapter Jayce kissed his 'stepson' after all that back-and-forth. This was after an almost-rape scene where Viktor was turned the fuck on when Jayce went Punished Joel on everyone. This dialogue will take on more sexually charged tones, just watch.
Yanking the door open when the doors would have been automatically locked? She's got some strength in her.
Let me guess. This old foster father who started the abuse was Singed.
Oh look, more 'woe is me' trans bullshit about how they're so broken and wrong while getting fake IDs and throwing themselves at older men so they can find a new father figure while getting finger fucked in the back seat. . So broken that if it wasn't for IDs, he'd probably have an OnlyFans.
> Too feminine
Oh? We can tell the sexes apart by gait now? That's new.
Still betting on the old foster father being Singed. We need the 'gross creep being a pedo' and he fits the bill. Only hot teenage chasers need apply.
Imagine if he shot him in the head. No more guns up your cooter, just the imagery of your dream daddy's brains on the ceiling.
Hey, now. I bet if Jayce asked to put you in hand cuffs you'd agree. Awaken that kink inside you. It's only when a dirty cop is involved is it bad. I really wanted them to pull out the taser and tackle our little waif pooner.
Yeah. You probably should have thought about the trajectory of your life before you decided to get finger banged in the back of a 30-year-old's care. Just sayin'.
Viktor is again misgendered in the paperwork, yet I don't see any reprimands here. Where's Jayce with his epic shouting match with another woman?
Uh oh. Now he has to give up his guns, and that means no more guns up the snatch
Terrible.
At this point, he really does need a 'I Can't Breathe' T-shirt, courtesy of St. Floyd.
> You're not the first messed up foster kid to wind up here
I just gotta ask: is he on the ward with other boys, or is he in the one with girls? Are there mixed-sex facilities? Because I doubt he wants to spend time with other boys over what happened in Chapter 8.
More drama. Will our dear pooner be reunited with their Dream Daddy? Will there be more kisses and more sexual tension as they finally let go and fuck in the back of the truck? Time will tell. We're halfway there.
This fic represents the author's personal beliefs on acceptable conduct...by having the babysitter correctively rape their charge. But don't worry, it's still a gender-affirming assault, because so long as your attacker calls you a boy, all is good.
> Write a fic about child sexual against a trans kid
> Immediately talk about how hot the college kid who does it is
Yeah, that fits. We go right to talking about his muscles like he's a Greek god.
> Barely a teenager
I assume that Viktor here has not begun puberty, and is around 12-13 years old.
> Exquisite expanse of his chest
We are still glazing the college boy, eh? Misgendering is fine so long as the person doing it makes you wet.
> Handsome Jayce, the Misgendering Babysitter
That should be a callsign.
> Shelves of stuffed animals
> The room is lit by fairy lights
That is the most feminine room I've ever seen. If you want to be seen as a boy, you can start by throwing out the stuffies and putting up your inventions.
> You've been ignoring me for hours and I think that's pretty rude of you, young lady
And here we go. Jayce the Misgendering Babysitter knows how to deal with errant girls: by bringing out his inner Latino and just straight up raping them.
> Such a cute girl
But don't worry, the gender affirming stuff comes later when he starts sodomizing him.
> How small he is
I doubt he's barely 5'0.
> Viktor is delicate
Of course! He's delicate, pale, frail and (fe)male, a perfect contrast to the big, hulking, raping Latino.
> His sparse pubic hair
Yeah, this has got to be a 12-year-old.
> Two illnesses in tandem - disgust and the knowledge that his hips are stuttering
> Viktor is dirty now, his childhood ending
But if you call him a boy, all is forgiven.
> Slick, squelching sounds Jayce has wrought from his depths
I was wondering when 'obscene squelch' would be brought up.
> I think you're wet enough to take me
Spoiler: he is not wet enough
> His untouched hole
Jayce may treat Viktor as female, but the author would like to make it clear that she doesn't!
> Such a tight little girl
Yeah, because that is a fucking child you're molesting, you wetback.
> Why an abuser when the man is poised over him
Because you're desperate for the abuse to stop and are willing to do anything to placate the violent male. This is built into women because violent males are literally our death.
Look at that. Jayce is so kind he's treating him like the boy he is...by deciding to call him 'good boy' during the assault instead of 'good girl'.
> The festering chasm between assault and the surety it's over
It ain't over till that dick deflates, boy.
> Not aloud, not away from the Internet
Let me guess. He came to terms with said trans identity after reading a few Reddit threats. That's how it starts. The parents don't know, the friends don't know - but the stranger with all the answers seems to know.
> I want to fuck a cute boy
Right. Even if you hit it from the back, anogenital distance is just going to remind you that you're raping a female.
> Has never been looked at before, doesn't glance at themselves, and avoids mirrors
I wonder if showering is common for him.
> Drinking in his milky skin
They all love that white skin.
> Is afraid of female puberty, of growing breasts and widening hips, and is not on puberty blockers
> The male still treats him like a woman anyways
I wonder what the author aimed to do with this, aside from making the Latino a rapist. Was she writing about the marginalized trans experience? If so, that's devastatingly accurate. We know they suffer CSA, but Jesus.
> Ruins him from the inside
Oh yeah, Jayce makes Viktor bled with those huge-ass fingers of his.
See?
> To call him a good boy
Being raped digitally is OK provided your rapist calls you a boy.
> Passionate fingering
He just made you bleed.
> You're so handsome
He's barely entered puberty.
> It's a comfort in a dark place, to be known as a boy
> He knows what's being done to him
> Almost enough to undo the trauma of losing his innocence like this
> He's never been anyone's boy before, but right now he is Jayce's
This is just trauma coping. His mind cannot handle what is happening, so it reaches for the closest comfort it has: wanting to be 'seen' as a boy via anal rape.
> Fucking into Viktor with three fingers
There is no lube used for the sodomy, btw. It's all raw, no rubber. Yes, there's blood, and a lot of it.
> There's a fog rolling through him, clumsy and thick
If you think that's disassociation, you're wrong. He actually comes to LIKE what is happening.
> I don't need to be gentle with you
> Boys can can all of this. They can take even more
And there it is. Telling a girl that if she wants to be a boy so bad, she can 'shut up and take it'. Of course, no one mention sodomy can happen to either sex, and that female anuses are thinner and shorter.
> Pleasure
That is used 15 times, btw. You'll get bored of it real quick.
> Part of Viktor is sickened that he's being violated by someone who was trusted to look after him
And the other half? Pure gender euphoria. Yes, getting anally raped is gender euphoric to these cunts.
> You look so fucking handsome when you're flustered like this
Ah, the classic 'too beautiful to resist' thing.
> His insides all throbbing in pain but his clit pulsing purely in pleasure
I don't think any amount of clitoral stimulation is going to fix the fact you are literally having your insides torn out.
> The thought of coming for Jayce is a strange spot inside him, shame and excitement intermingling, disgusting and delectable both
Redundant.
> A man who wants to treat him like a boy
He isn't, though. He knows what sex you are. Sodomy can happen to either sex.
> Purpling tip of his veiny cock
True to form, the Latino rapist has a big dick. Just to hammer it home the sheer brutality of what's going to happen.
> Smeared with pinkish streaks of his blood
It ain't gonna remain pink for long, trust me.
>> Why Jayce seems to ravenous and pleased by it
You're really asking that? It's because you're a virgin, for one, and a helpless victim second. Rapists LOVE that.
> If he has to lose his virginity this way, then at least he gets to do it as the boy he is
...sodomy isn't gender specific. You are not being 'treated as a boy', you're just a collection of holes for the rapist.
Told you. He just uses his spit, which is not sufficient lube, to sodomize this kid. 'Spearing him open' is very literal.
> There's something tender and wounded in the pit of his stomach...flood of affirmations
"I may be getting anally raped but he's calling me a BOY so that's okay!" Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with pooners?
> He is small and new at this
No shit. You're just a young kid. You're not supposed to engage in any kind of sex yet.
> He never craved it or devoted much thought to it before this
> Be trans
> You get raped by a man
> It's terrible but you consider it a gender affirming experience
> It isn't an isolated event among that group
Wew, lad.
> So long and thick
How long and thick are we talking about?
> A feeling like paper torn down the center
Those are your anal walls, bud.
> You're fucking perfect, best guy I've ever fucked
> Tell me you like being fucked like a boy
How compelling. Please face the wall now.
Now, you really have to ask: if this is about addressing accountability, or whatever it was the author was trying to get at in her author's note, it sure doesn't come off as such. It comes off as a weird rape fetish where a Latino rapist (fitting, as 30% of Latinas experience CSA and half of the time it's a male family member) abuses a white person, who happens to be trans, and the harmful and dangerous experience is deemed 'uplifting' and 'gender affirming' because the rapist is calling you a boy. It's weird as hell.
> Moreish pleasure
That's in relation to food, not sexual pleasure.
> Keeping Viktor speared so impossibly open on his cock
That's with no lube, btw. That's going to lead to a prolapse.
> Impossible fullness of him
Watch your insides become your outsides in the next instant.
> Sinking into the hilt
Cliché.
> Viktor's body sucks him in
Right.
> This is normal, it's normal to get off from someone touching your cock
It isn't normal to make them bleed so badly they soil their underwear and the sheets.
> Hole snags against the ridge of Jayce's head
At that age, rough anal sex can actually tear you down the middle. There will be no brushing that off as menstruation when the blood is way too thick to be menstrual blood and a pad can't hold it.
> He's aware of it and he's not, of being touched, being opened
It's so terrible and bad, but hey, he called you a boy and that makes it OK, right?
> The sound is so wild and unguarded
I bet he sounds like a bull announcing his presence.
> It's like taking Viktor's virginity has given Jayce a new spiritual awakening
That's the whole point. The point is in ruining an innocent body. I have no idea what kind of moral lesson the author is trying to sell here.
> Stomach lurching at the sight of crimson on his softening cock
Yeah, he's bleeding. There will be major anal tearing, enough to require surgery, but that is never mentioned. Instead, we get some 'aftercare' that includes gender affirming boyfriend talk.
> It felt good, which means it's okay that it happened
Homie your ass is bleeding like Mr. Hands' did, and that buddy took on a horse. You were 12. There's no arguing that that is normal.
No. There's a major difference between the kind of bleeding he has, and menstrual bleeding. At that age, you're spotting; maybe you might soil your sheets but it should never resemble the scene of a crime that young. That kind of sodomy would lead to anal sphincter issues such as not being able to keep feces in, so you'd see shit and blood on those sheets. Not that that matters - physical damage doesn't exist in the world of FTMs. It isn't rape and can't be rape so long as you are called a boy.
I am still wondering what the purpose of this was. What kind of moral theme was the author trying to achieve? That sodomy is gender affirming? That CSA is normal in their community? If all of the above is true, that's not something you want escaping to the 'cissies', because you're just confirming what we have suspected all along: you have a hypersexualization problem because you were attacked as children, so you try to 'reclaim' it by writing shit like this. I don't consider it therapeutic, I consider it very revealing.
Alright, how about something lighter for the palette: ABO baby mama dramas!
Uh oh. Sky knows what's up; omegas gotta stick together, see.
I'll be honest: I don't give a damn about these characters, but that coffee shop set up is pretty nice.
> The days seem shorter
No shit, because THEY ARE. The earth is tilted away from the Sun during that time. You're a scientist; you should know this.
So we're going with the Commune look. That's a popular one for fics like these because he looks more 'feminine' and the feminine one is the designated 'pregnant person'.
> Blonde
Lmao, that's the female variant of the term.
> Your eyes are sadder
Oh, I wonder why.
So what do omegas smell like here? Citrus fruit? Vanilla sugar? Blood oranges? Absinthe? Ylang Ylang? Something you can shove in a perfume bottle? Do tell.
Again, what's his smell? Is it a 'feminine' smell because omegas are women-lite, or is it something else? Does Jayce smell masculine and pine-y?
Glad he kept the pseudo-wedding ring. Makes the divorce hit so much harder.
This line reminds me of Seth Rogen's line in Knocked Up, when he asks Katherine Heigl what she means when she says she's pregnant. It's pretty damn obvious what 'being pregnant' means.
In this universe, in this particular iteration, omegas can't live as single parents. They have to have an alpha taking care of them to ensure spousal support, and in the eye of the courts, a single, unwed omega is as good as useless. Basically, how most societies treat single mothers IRL, but manages to be worse. I bet omegas can't even have their own bank accounts, but they can get full-sleeve tattoos while sporting a septum ring.
> Their world is catered to a specific type of person
No fucking shit. This is one of the only ABO fics I've read that actually addresses that. Alphas get all the goodies in society thanks to the nature of their birth, while omegas get nothing. What is interesting to note is that you can identify as a man while being a woman, but you cannot identify as an alpha. These authors maintain that only one is biological, while the other is a nebulous concept.
Going off his eyes, you'd think he'd be able to see in the dark. I wonder if that's a thing in this universe.
> You're keeping it
> He could have gotten rid of it
Now I'm wondering what this universe's attitudes are around abortion. An unwed, unmated, single omega is a bad, bad thing. Are there omegas in foster care? Does the state take care of them? For a modern AU, it reads like something from the 1950s based on how archaic it is.
> Lived most of his life in hospital settings
> Decided to transition first before fixing his legs or spine
Just Pooner Things. Glad transition related care for their 'primary sex' is allowed, but not their 'secondary sex'. That's something I'll never understand.
> He has to stop his glower from etching on his face
Say, omegas aren't told to 'smile more', are they?
> Expecting individuals
> Maternity wing
Pick one. Maternity is a term directly related to female bodies. I don't see a gender neutral alternative for it, and apparently, the author doesn't either.
> Tall, suit-clad, pristine alpha
What is this, Mad Men?
See my point above. You want gender neutral terms for pregnancy, yet use 'maternity'.
Now, we also learn that insurance companies in this American AU - because in other AUs in other countries, these procedures are covered - deny coverage if the omega is unwed and unmated. Sounds like they could use a civil rights movement, but does ABO even allow that?
> his scent hasn't changed
What do omega scents smell like when pregnant? Now I'm curious.
Interesting. There are no civil rights protections for omegas, because asking these questions IRL are considered discriminatory thanks to feminism. You only inquire about the health of the woman. Denying coverage would lead to a court case, but that doesn't happen here. Alpha males really do reign supreme.
I don't know how long this one will go for, but I know that other dramatic 'Mpreg' fic that had a full birth scene is due to updated soon. God, that was a bore. This one is interesting for how ABO treats unwed omegas; it's definitely a reference to 1950s dynamics. Let's see how this one turns out.
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