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Plenty of white queers take inspiration from Ethel Cain, the troon who was recently outed for saying 'nigger' and experiencing the 'white supremacist to trans pipeline' in the grand ole state of Florida. Keep that in mind while reading this - it's yet another 'religious guilt' with yet another underage character, because if there is one thing trans/queer people insist on, it's that they are NOT sex pests. And yes, this starts off in bumfuck Alabama, how did you know? The main star is a cannibal killer who wants to go after 16-year-old pure white skin.
This gives off Janet Fitch vibes, with a tad more purple prose. "Back as a display case for bruises and rivers of ichor' sounds pretty, but unless your neck has been sliced open, the 'rivers' bit doesn't make sense.
Later, you discover that this stereotypical Southern Christian bigot is a father attracted to his own 'son', and that he's beating him because he wants that underage pussy. Does that shock you? It shouldn't.
"Brother, may I have some oats?" Pigs are smart. If dad isn't smart he may find himself eaten by them.
> Do you think anybody wants that?
A lot of people are into skeletons these days.
> The man leans down and presses a kiss to Viktor's cheek
Told you. Perverted Christian father guilty he's attracted to his own child? Say it ain't so. I'm just surprised we're going with 16 this time and not 12 or 13 as some authors insist.
You literally have no future there. Vi is right. It's better to leave. There's nothing in bumfuck Alabama unless you head off to the university towns.
> She knew how to allow her daughter to be her own person
So the Alabamian dad doesn't want his daughter to be a 'son', hence the beatings. It's hitting every box.
> Spank him like a prepubescent little girl
Interesting choice of words there.
Fifteen dollars? You're cheap as hell. Agent 47 would never.
Hope you don't have Firestone tires with that ensemble.
And we're off to Nebraska with a guy who killed another guy for 15 bucks. This was definitely in the pre Human Genome era because that's cheap even to criminals now.
> Bought a motel
You mean a motel ROOM, buying the whole ass motel means buying insurance, lol
> The clerk thought they were dad and son
How affirming!
> Sort of like the two men
One of those people isn't a man, and it ain't sinful to have penis in vagina sex. That's the sex God commands you to have.
> Reminds Jayce of his mother's ceramic deer figures: fragile, pretty and left in one place
Always with the deer allegories. These are the same people who tell you not to reduce female character to relationships with men, while they write underage shit and routinely describe the token trans man as a 'deer-like' character.
> Small, perky, underage breasts
If this is set in the 1980s as I think it does, there was a lot of media passing off 16-year-olds as grown women. Either way, these adult authors always make teenagers act like accomplished porn stars and it never ceases to be weird as fuck.
> A strange older man that is significantly taller, bigger, and wiser
So he's everything that a woman wants on a gossip site, gotcha.
> I am not the daughter he wanted
So he was trying to beat the girl back into him. Little did he know, he wasn't the right race or appearance; to get that, you need to be a 6'2 hunky Mexican mutt.
> Rosy red cheeks and thick tears and bubbles of snot that result from shoving his face into the mattress
He plays the pity card by saying 'real men don't do this', while fantasizing about raping a minor.
> It makes him question if he screams
Do YOU scream if an ICE agent shoves a baton up your ass? This is where we discover that Jayce is a cannibal killer and Viktor just walked into a Ted Bundy trap. He's just the right appearance - a white girl - and we all know how much these queers love white skin.
"You were just asking for it" - The rapist's motto
> wants to be seen and treated as a boy
> wear a sundress that emphasizes his female features
I just can't with these people. Even tomboys wouldn't be caught dead in one.
> Cute thighs peeking out underneath lace trim
Where'd he get such a nice dress, anyways? Church clothes? And what cute thighs? This kid is stick-thin.
> He is so handsome, so rugged, so beautiful with that look of concern
You can't have a cannibal murderer without him being hot, you know?
> We was meant to find each other, you hear me?
The universe totally means for underage Viktor to get fucked by an older Jayce in every iteration. It's fate, swear.
> How risky, how dangerous, how defiant
They better hope he doesn't have AIDS. This is during the 80s/90s/2000s. No Truvada yet.
You'll never guess what happens in the third chapter. Our Mexican saviour ends up becoming Pablo Escobar and our white pooner finds out she's in real shit.
This is the third fic that has someone shove a gun up someone else's orifice. Two have been in Arcane, and one Assassin's Creed.
> Lives in a house with roaches and mold
> Doesn't think there's anything wrong with it
> Wonders more why he can't be boyfriends with the 36-year-old man
Priorities.
> Men like that will touch you. It's just a part of life
"You're gonna get molested but I'M the one who's gonna molest you and you'll like it"
> 5'6
He's 5'8. We're going with the Charlie White height I see.
> Scratching a red line into his milky thigh
Always with the need to stress how white his skin is.
> Lessons weren't meant to be enjoyable, he knew that since he was a little girl
?? I thought this was a true and honest Trans Boi? What's with all this little girl bullshit? Oh, right. Feminization. It's OK when we do it.
> Bite marks
Oh I wonder who left those.
> He pushes up Viktor's gown to reveal his pink panties
This is a kid who was punished for being trans, supposedly. Yet here they are wearing feminine clothes and underwear, going as far as to behaving like a tradwife. It really makes you wonder if that tag means anything.
So this is the first time Viktor has had any sexual contact and of course it has to be steeped in sexual abuse, because that's not at all a trend.
> Misconstrued tidal wave
Tidal waves cannot be misconstrued. They are a force of nature.
> You love what I've made you
Imagine running from an abusive father only to run into a cannibal killer. Peak 1970s aesthetic.
> Places his lips around the barrell
This is also the third fic where someone has deepthroated a gun. Two for Arcane, one for Assassin's Creed. Imagine if he pulled the trigger.
> I'm making you into the man you wanna be so bad
Imagine writing an underage fic and the man you want everyone to lust after is a transphobe. I'm glad these genderqueers are fine having the woman fucked back into them is OK if the guy is hot.
> The boot kicks his chest and the wind is knocked out of him
Oh, I forgot: his disability is missing in this fic. Because that's OK if we're focusing more on a hot rapist.
> Legs spread open to reveal his cunt and ass
If Steven King wrote this it'd be seen as weird, but when a genderqueer does it it's 'exploring trauma'. I better not catch you publishing original fiction because I'll be there with the receipts that you were a pedo bitch.
Yes, the barrel of the shotgun is shoved between his legs. This is the second fic (the first being Fujofrankenstein's with the Glock) where a character has had a gun shoved up their vagina. This was done roughly enough where there's blood.
> He doesn't understand how he could be so violent in his actions yet so loving in his performance
Because he's a BPD/NPD nightmare. He saw a young, impressionable white teen and decided to shove a gun up their vagina. I bet Ethel Cain has a song about that - that fucker even used the real girl behind the Amber Alert's Missing poster as a basis for an album cover.
> Smallest pigtails possible
Very masc. Why not cut your hair? Or does Jayce not want that because he likes pussy instead of dick like a 100% True and Honest Gay Man?
*Bag. Of course it's cocaine. Gotta drug 'em up to make them pliable and so they can't remember what happened to them.
*For me, it's just murder. All God's creatures do it
Uh huh. If we're gonna act like chimps here, that means your dick is getting ripped off first.
So we have the family annihilation scene, and Viktor's father has his dick chopped off and placed on a table, which, while deserved, should also happen to Jayce. I can't wait until the FBI gets involved.
Of course they always have the rape victim squirting, because it makes them feel better. Forget the 'torn pussy' bit; aren't you glad these two are finally getting together? Isn't it nice that the virgins squirts on the first time? Even bluejorts who enjoys fisting gets irritated at this. I don't blame her for once. It's so cheap.
Oh yeah, this has to be before the North Hollywood Shootout because SWAT teams would be there and they'd snipe his ass. The fact he could rob a bank so easily puts this around 1970s-1980s because banks have better cameras than the Pentagon. Not to mention even in Alabama, everyone is armed. You are getting shot.
> The stray bullet Jayce was throwing at a police officer
You mean shot? Throwing a bullet is so unserious.
> Doomed to watch his lover face the consequences of his actions for maybe the first time in his life
Jayce? Suffer consequences? That's way too good to be true.
So, Jayce burns him, bites him, rips him open, shoves shotguns in his vagina, rapes him until he bleeds, gives him cocaine and other drugs, and this is supposed to be an engaging story. What is it with genderspecials and their obsession with teenage rape?
> The forceful stretch of Viktor's cunt was nauseating and addicting
Either Jayce is his horse cock size, or he just doesn't do foreplay. That one fic I covered earlier had him taking a fire hydrant dick no problem.
> Moaning when he thought he should, orchestrated perfectly to adhere to his preferences
Trans men and sexual abuse, name a better duo.
> When Jayce slapped him, he remembered his father
Amazing how you jump from one abusive relationship to another, eh?
OH HEY JENNY FROM THE BLOCK
Jenny is already my favourite. You know what that means: she has to die.
> He's breathing, he's breathing
You didn't need to repeat this.
You'd think they would because Jayce is a wanted criminal, but crazier shit has happened, and this is way before ankle monitors. You'd seldom get away with it now.
Jenny once again with the common sense. She can see what our poor pooner is going through, but teenage love is a bitch, and we gotta see and read more rape.
Enjoy being an ashtray lil pooner, because that's all you'll ever be with Anton Chigurgh here.
Problematicism, the Gypsy famous for writing the most popular underage fic in this fandom and who styles herself the Anne Rice of it (fitting, as Anne Rice also covered for pedophiles), has dipped her toes into Omegaverse. She loves playing with the worldbuilding, see...by making it the most basic bitch shit you've ever read. Gypsies and unoriginality, name a better duo - on top of them celebrating child brides. She breaks out of her mold by writing something of legal age for once - no underage teens going on BDSM sites this time. She has gotten almost 100 bookmarks already for this, and a sequel may be in the works.
True to form, this version of Omegaverse has omegas being utterly helpless during their ruts (read: ovulation but even more sexualized) and are prone to getting raped by alphas. Forget the richest for a moment: EVERYONE in this society is focused on heats, fertility, bloodlines, because the only biological essentialism we accept here is for Omegaverse. Surprisingly, there IS birth control, but like everything else, omegas are told not to take it. Why? Reasons below.
Suppressants are basically this world's version of puberty blockers/Depo shots/IUDs, and society isn't willing to study or research them because the only purpose an omega serves is to breed. Remind you of anything?
> Likely unable to ever find a mate or have his own family
Ah, the classic, 'I am sterile but can't breed...until I find my hunky alpha and then I can shit out litters and litters of kids because it's a miracle!"
> Cloyingly milky in a way he never is
So he smells like a Hershey's Cookies n Cream bar, OK.
> Pup-like in its simplicity
So sterile Omegas are like newborn animals in that they don't have scents, as everyone in this society operates off pheromone levels like dogs. No scent changing on emotion, this time. No smells of vanilla or pine and absinthe for our alpha here.
> Sometimes low purr when he is frustrated
So he sounds like a V8 engine.
> Wretched vomiting that has turned his stomach loose even now
But if I make a joke about watery shits or how loose his anus is, I'M the ableist one. But we can write pedophilic shit all day long.
> He notices how wet he is
> His hormones have been too imbalanced, too wrong, incapable of sex even outside of a heat cycle
And now it sounds like a pile of wet noodles because our sexy alpha male is here to make everything better.
> It is purely omega, the babypup softness
1. You wrote that already, and 2. As a Gypsy, it is your duty to be obsessed with children at every waking moment, so all the subtle pedo shit hints I'll take as representative of your 'culture'.
> Alpha instincts within him think about how this unclaimed omega is all but presenting for him
Cue the "I'm not like other alphas, I'm a feminist" or some shit, while reverting right back into the 'see, I had to do it, It's Just Biology' excuse.
> Too old for it to be his first
You'd rather have him be sexually active at age six, admit it.
> Horrid tales he has heard of such omegas almost dying without an alpha there
A literal 'fuck or die' scenario. Omegas cannot exist without being fucked or bred. What a morbid existence.
> Type of stuff they say in the movies, the romance novels, the cheesy pornographic videos
I will always love it when these fanficcers will try to paint their shit as 'not like those stupid BookTok novels' while writing the shit BookTok is popular for. Omegaverse fics are now mainstream, thank you very much, because of fanficcers like this.
> Not like he's lesser, not like he's a damsel in distress
> Proceeds to view him as lesser because he is an omega and he, as an alpha, is better and it is his duty to fuck him through the rut
Logic.
> He wonders if Viktor even knows how to make a proper nest
Just throw some clothes around and huff their siblings' clothes, which is weird as fuck. Or hump the couch to slick it in omega juices so an alpha can be tempted to come by like it's deer piss.
> A hint of jealousy at the thought even if it is entirely unfair to think such things
It's Just Biology, yo.
> Had tracked his heat cycle in his journal
That's not creepy.
> Instincts, of course
Just Biology, bro.
> Sound of his slick horrifically loud
So it has the same consistency of engine oil and is as loud as a squeegee, gotcha
> The smell of his heat is making him dizzy
Sounds like you need some air.
> His body can be easily convinced he did his duty to impregnate an omega
But talking like this about women is misogyny. You're 'deconstructing gender' when it's omegaverse.
> Know they will soon be round with a child
"Stop reducing us to our reproductive organs! Now let me write a fic where the character I designate as female is reduced to their reproductive organs!"
> A lewd sound
You wrote that twice already, you retarded Gypsy.
> Sweet and small breasts
So why is he trans, again? He's basically being used for his female reproductive organs.
> Scent of his wet cunt driving Jayce into a state of near-delirium
Maybe SWAT should consider making omega pepper spray to get alphas to behave during riots. Just sayin'.
> Grows even slicker during the intrusion
So it'd be like fucking water.
> Doe-eyes
They really need to stop with this description. Viktor has hawkish eyes, not doe-eyes.
> Alphean instincts
Yes, it's a real thing. Biological essentialism is OK when I do it.
> Viktor his mate. Viktor with a round belly, with a pup on his hip, a baby who resembles them both
How very fascistic and trad. You know where fanficcers stand politically when they start talking about the purity and beauty of their babies and saying that the highest way of living for a woman is to have said babies. What's trans about this? It's literally straight sex.
> He could give her grandchildren
But it's gay sex, yo.
> Thinks of how tight he feels around his hand. He is not sure if Viktor could even take him
Let me guess: alpha Jayce has a horse cock that is so huge he can barely walk around with it, and it's so big it could tear an unprepared omega in half. Just a guess. Gypsies have a thing for phallic objects.
No graphic smut for that big horse cock, not this time. Maybe in the sequel she promises to write. Then we can get those sweet ole pups and tradwife life right from the Gypsy's mouth.
The second chapter of that Bible thumping fic has been posted. Set in bumfuck Kentucky, this is supposed to be set in 90s, yet you really wonder how a kid managed to smuggle testosterone across state lines. Planned Parenthood wasn't forking it out like candy in this time period.
Basically, they sent him to a random religious man so they can break him free of his transgenderism. No idea why he wasn't placed with a foster care family in a more urban area; foreign kids tend to be more expensive. While I praised the writing in the first chapter, the plot is starting to get a little messy.
> What the Church seemed to think he deserved
Again, they're trying to 'break' the trans out of him, simply put. The major plot will be about the 'latent homosexuality' and 'gay struggle' when this is the farthest thing from gay.
> pale line of skin
We love our white boys, don't we?
He has no clothes, no books or belongings, but the testosterone vials are the most important thing. One must wonder how the hell he got those and from where, because without a prescription you are engaging in drug trafficking. Did he get them from Planned Parenthood? If this was set far earlier, it'd be more difficult to get it because PP wasn't so loose with handing them out.
You already said the air in Kentucky feels different, unless you mean the male presence that's around you now.
> He's bee trained to do for others
Hmm, wouldn't have to do with his natal sex, now would it?
This is what gets me: he was dumped in the middle of bumfuck nowhere from a church with no adoption credentials or authority to do that with state authorities. Foreign white kids are expensive and highly sought after; another family would have bid on him. If this kid is an American citizen and was running away, the foster care system would be in control of him. There are just a lot of things that are starting to not make sense.
Ah, here we go with the lingering looks. I can't wait for the chapters and chapters and paragraphs upon paragraphs of Jayce struggling with his 'gay desires' when said kid has to inject T just to 'appear' as a boy.
We've talked about the grass twice already. I know that's going to be a mercy based on how many times Jayce is going to beg God for forgiveness for engaging in gay sin.
Eh? Germany, Czechia, and France will have markets you can go to in the mornings where the animals are butchered fresh. Like, just a few hours ago fresh. Czechia is not some backwater.
> Maybe he thinks Viktor will be disgusted, too much of a city boy
Well he had to get that T from somewhere.
> There's a proper order to everything
How fitting, then, that the actual male will take the 'top' role and the female character saying she is a male will take the submissive role. Just as God intended.
Wool actually dries very well in the heat. It's a fabric that does great in hot weather and in the cold. I thought Yookay ladies had better education.
> Like he knows there's a God above him for all seasons
He considers himself a God-fearing man, does he not? This is a fic based on a 90s Kentuckian wondering if he's a faggot or not.
Because he is, and because we need that romance to start somewhere. At least this Jayce isn't robbing banks.
And there's our first sentimental touch! Onwards and upwards now.
I cut it off here. Jayce makes him a brace and Viktor falls asleep in his room. We know begin their domestic life proper. What I did grab was this line, though:
It'd be thinner, actually. Especially in that humidity. The weight would not change. Yookay authors should Google things more.
This gives off Janet Fitch vibes, with a tad more purple prose. "Back as a display case for bruises and rivers of ichor' sounds pretty, but unless your neck has been sliced open, the 'rivers' bit doesn't make sense.
Later, you discover that this stereotypical Southern Christian bigot is a father attracted to his own 'son', and that he's beating him because he wants that underage pussy. Does that shock you? It shouldn't.
"Brother, may I have some oats?" Pigs are smart. If dad isn't smart he may find himself eaten by them.
> Do you think anybody wants that?
A lot of people are into skeletons these days.
> The man leans down and presses a kiss to Viktor's cheek
Told you. Perverted Christian father guilty he's attracted to his own child? Say it ain't so. I'm just surprised we're going with 16 this time and not 12 or 13 as some authors insist.
You literally have no future there. Vi is right. It's better to leave. There's nothing in bumfuck Alabama unless you head off to the university towns.
> She knew how to allow her daughter to be her own person
So the Alabamian dad doesn't want his daughter to be a 'son', hence the beatings. It's hitting every box.
> Spank him like a prepubescent little girl
Interesting choice of words there.
Fifteen dollars? You're cheap as hell. Agent 47 would never.
Hope you don't have Firestone tires with that ensemble.
And we're off to Nebraska with a guy who killed another guy for 15 bucks. This was definitely in the pre Human Genome era because that's cheap even to criminals now.
> Bought a motel
You mean a motel ROOM, buying the whole ass motel means buying insurance, lol
> The clerk thought they were dad and son
How affirming!
> Sort of like the two men
One of those people isn't a man, and it ain't sinful to have penis in vagina sex. That's the sex God commands you to have.
> Reminds Jayce of his mother's ceramic deer figures: fragile, pretty and left in one place
Always with the deer allegories. These are the same people who tell you not to reduce female character to relationships with men, while they write underage shit and routinely describe the token trans man as a 'deer-like' character.
> Small, perky, underage breasts
If this is set in the 1980s as I think it does, there was a lot of media passing off 16-year-olds as grown women. Either way, these adult authors always make teenagers act like accomplished porn stars and it never ceases to be weird as fuck.
> A strange older man that is significantly taller, bigger, and wiser
So he's everything that a woman wants on a gossip site, gotcha.
> I am not the daughter he wanted
So he was trying to beat the girl back into him. Little did he know, he wasn't the right race or appearance; to get that, you need to be a 6'2 hunky Mexican mutt.
> Rosy red cheeks and thick tears and bubbles of snot that result from shoving his face into the mattress
He plays the pity card by saying 'real men don't do this', while fantasizing about raping a minor.
> It makes him question if he screams
Do YOU scream if an ICE agent shoves a baton up your ass? This is where we discover that Jayce is a cannibal killer and Viktor just walked into a Ted Bundy trap. He's just the right appearance - a white girl - and we all know how much these queers love white skin.
"You were just asking for it" - The rapist's motto
> wants to be seen and treated as a boy
> wear a sundress that emphasizes his female features
I just can't with these people. Even tomboys wouldn't be caught dead in one.
> Cute thighs peeking out underneath lace trim
Where'd he get such a nice dress, anyways? Church clothes? And what cute thighs? This kid is stick-thin.
> He is so handsome, so rugged, so beautiful with that look of concern
You can't have a cannibal murderer without him being hot, you know?
> We was meant to find each other, you hear me?
The universe totally means for underage Viktor to get fucked by an older Jayce in every iteration. It's fate, swear.
> How risky, how dangerous, how defiant
They better hope he doesn't have AIDS. This is during the 80s/90s/2000s. No Truvada yet.
You'll never guess what happens in the third chapter. Our Mexican saviour ends up becoming Pablo Escobar and our white pooner finds out she's in real shit.
> Lives in a house with roaches and mold
> Doesn't think there's anything wrong with it
> Wonders more why he can't be boyfriends with the 36-year-old man
Priorities.
> Men like that will touch you. It's just a part of life
"You're gonna get molested but I'M the one who's gonna molest you and you'll like it"
> 5'6
He's 5'8. We're going with the Charlie White height I see.
> Scratching a red line into his milky thigh
Always with the need to stress how white his skin is.
> Lessons weren't meant to be enjoyable, he knew that since he was a little girl
?? I thought this was a true and honest Trans Boi? What's with all this little girl bullshit? Oh, right. Feminization. It's OK when we do it.
> Bite marks
Oh I wonder who left those.
> He pushes up Viktor's gown to reveal his pink panties
This is a kid who was punished for being trans, supposedly. Yet here they are wearing feminine clothes and underwear, going as far as to behaving like a tradwife. It really makes you wonder if that tag means anything.
So this is the first time Viktor has had any sexual contact and of course it has to be steeped in sexual abuse, because that's not at all a trend.
> Misconstrued tidal wave
Tidal waves cannot be misconstrued. They are a force of nature.
> You love what I've made you
Imagine running from an abusive father only to run into a cannibal killer. Peak 1970s aesthetic.
> Places his lips around the barrell
This is also the third fic where someone has deepthroated a gun. Two for Arcane, one for Assassin's Creed. Imagine if he pulled the trigger.
> I'm making you into the man you wanna be so bad
Imagine writing an underage fic and the man you want everyone to lust after is a transphobe. I'm glad these genderqueers are fine having the woman fucked back into them is OK if the guy is hot.
> The boot kicks his chest and the wind is knocked out of him
Oh, I forgot: his disability is missing in this fic. Because that's OK if we're focusing more on a hot rapist.
> Legs spread open to reveal his cunt and ass
If Steven King wrote this it'd be seen as weird, but when a genderqueer does it it's 'exploring trauma'. I better not catch you publishing original fiction because I'll be there with the receipts that you were a pedo bitch.
Yes, the barrel of the shotgun is shoved between his legs. This is the second fic (the first being Fujofrankenstein's with the Glock) where a character has had a gun shoved up their vagina. This was done roughly enough where there's blood.
> He doesn't understand how he could be so violent in his actions yet so loving in his performance
Because he's a BPD/NPD nightmare. He saw a young, impressionable white teen and decided to shove a gun up their vagina. I bet Ethel Cain has a song about that - that fucker even used the real girl behind the Amber Alert's Missing poster as a basis for an album cover.
> Smallest pigtails possible
Very masc. Why not cut your hair? Or does Jayce not want that because he likes pussy instead of dick like a 100% True and Honest Gay Man?
*Bag. Of course it's cocaine. Gotta drug 'em up to make them pliable and so they can't remember what happened to them.
*For me, it's just murder. All God's creatures do it
Uh huh. If we're gonna act like chimps here, that means your dick is getting ripped off first.
So we have the family annihilation scene, and Viktor's father has his dick chopped off and placed on a table, which, while deserved, should also happen to Jayce. I can't wait until the FBI gets involved.
Of course they always have the rape victim squirting, because it makes them feel better. Forget the 'torn pussy' bit; aren't you glad these two are finally getting together? Isn't it nice that the virgins squirts on the first time? Even bluejorts who enjoys fisting gets irritated at this. I don't blame her for once. It's so cheap.
Oh yeah, this has to be before the North Hollywood Shootout because SWAT teams would be there and they'd snipe his ass. The fact he could rob a bank so easily puts this around 1970s-1980s because banks have better cameras than the Pentagon. Not to mention even in Alabama, everyone is armed. You are getting shot.
> The stray bullet Jayce was throwing at a police officer
You mean shot? Throwing a bullet is so unserious.
> Doomed to watch his lover face the consequences of his actions for maybe the first time in his life
Jayce? Suffer consequences? That's way too good to be true.
So, Jayce burns him, bites him, rips him open, shoves shotguns in his vagina, rapes him until he bleeds, gives him cocaine and other drugs, and this is supposed to be an engaging story. What is it with genderspecials and their obsession with teenage rape?
> The forceful stretch of Viktor's cunt was nauseating and addicting
Either Jayce is his horse cock size, or he just doesn't do foreplay. That one fic I covered earlier had him taking a fire hydrant dick no problem.
> Moaning when he thought he should, orchestrated perfectly to adhere to his preferences
Trans men and sexual abuse, name a better duo.
> When Jayce slapped him, he remembered his father
Amazing how you jump from one abusive relationship to another, eh?
OH HEY JENNY FROM THE BLOCK
Jenny is already my favourite. You know what that means: she has to die.
> He's breathing, he's breathing
You didn't need to repeat this.
You'd think they would because Jayce is a wanted criminal, but crazier shit has happened, and this is way before ankle monitors. You'd seldom get away with it now.
Jenny once again with the common sense. She can see what our poor pooner is going through, but teenage love is a bitch, and we gotta see and read more rape.
Enjoy being an ashtray lil pooner, because that's all you'll ever be with Anton Chigurgh here.
Problematicism, the Gypsy famous for writing the most popular underage fic in this fandom and who styles herself the Anne Rice of it (fitting, as Anne Rice also covered for pedophiles), has dipped her toes into Omegaverse. She loves playing with the worldbuilding, see...by making it the most basic bitch shit you've ever read. Gypsies and unoriginality, name a better duo - on top of them celebrating child brides. She breaks out of her mold by writing something of legal age for once - no underage teens going on BDSM sites this time. She has gotten almost 100 bookmarks already for this, and a sequel may be in the works.
True to form, this version of Omegaverse has omegas being utterly helpless during their ruts (read: ovulation but even more sexualized) and are prone to getting raped by alphas. Forget the richest for a moment: EVERYONE in this society is focused on heats, fertility, bloodlines, because the only biological essentialism we accept here is for Omegaverse. Surprisingly, there IS birth control, but like everything else, omegas are told not to take it. Why? Reasons below.
Suppressants are basically this world's version of puberty blockers/Depo shots/IUDs, and society isn't willing to study or research them because the only purpose an omega serves is to breed. Remind you of anything?
> Likely unable to ever find a mate or have his own family
Ah, the classic, 'I am sterile but can't breed...until I find my hunky alpha and then I can shit out litters and litters of kids because it's a miracle!"
> Cloyingly milky in a way he never is
So he smells like a Hershey's Cookies n Cream bar, OK.
> Pup-like in its simplicity
So sterile Omegas are like newborn animals in that they don't have scents, as everyone in this society operates off pheromone levels like dogs. No scent changing on emotion, this time. No smells of vanilla or pine and absinthe for our alpha here.
> Sometimes low purr when he is frustrated
So he sounds like a V8 engine.
> Wretched vomiting that has turned his stomach loose even now
But if I make a joke about watery shits or how loose his anus is, I'M the ableist one. But we can write pedophilic shit all day long.
> He notices how wet he is
> His hormones have been too imbalanced, too wrong, incapable of sex even outside of a heat cycle
And now it sounds like a pile of wet noodles because our sexy alpha male is here to make everything better.
> It is purely omega, the babypup softness
1. You wrote that already, and 2. As a Gypsy, it is your duty to be obsessed with children at every waking moment, so all the subtle pedo shit hints I'll take as representative of your 'culture'.
> Alpha instincts within him think about how this unclaimed omega is all but presenting for him
Cue the "I'm not like other alphas, I'm a feminist" or some shit, while reverting right back into the 'see, I had to do it, It's Just Biology' excuse.
> Too old for it to be his first
You'd rather have him be sexually active at age six, admit it.
> Horrid tales he has heard of such omegas almost dying without an alpha there
A literal 'fuck or die' scenario. Omegas cannot exist without being fucked or bred. What a morbid existence.
> Type of stuff they say in the movies, the romance novels, the cheesy pornographic videos
I will always love it when these fanficcers will try to paint their shit as 'not like those stupid BookTok novels' while writing the shit BookTok is popular for. Omegaverse fics are now mainstream, thank you very much, because of fanficcers like this.
> Not like he's lesser, not like he's a damsel in distress
> Proceeds to view him as lesser because he is an omega and he, as an alpha, is better and it is his duty to fuck him through the rut
Logic.
> He wonders if Viktor even knows how to make a proper nest
Just throw some clothes around and huff their siblings' clothes, which is weird as fuck. Or hump the couch to slick it in omega juices so an alpha can be tempted to come by like it's deer piss.
> A hint of jealousy at the thought even if it is entirely unfair to think such things
It's Just Biology, yo.
> Had tracked his heat cycle in his journal
That's not creepy.
> Instincts, of course
Just Biology, bro.
> Sound of his slick horrifically loud
So it has the same consistency of engine oil and is as loud as a squeegee, gotcha
> The smell of his heat is making him dizzy
Sounds like you need some air.
> His body can be easily convinced he did his duty to impregnate an omega
But talking like this about women is misogyny. You're 'deconstructing gender' when it's omegaverse.
> Know they will soon be round with a child
"Stop reducing us to our reproductive organs! Now let me write a fic where the character I designate as female is reduced to their reproductive organs!"
> A lewd sound
You wrote that twice already, you retarded Gypsy.
> Sweet and small breasts
So why is he trans, again? He's basically being used for his female reproductive organs.
> Scent of his wet cunt driving Jayce into a state of near-delirium
Maybe SWAT should consider making omega pepper spray to get alphas to behave during riots. Just sayin'.
> Grows even slicker during the intrusion
So it'd be like fucking water.
> Doe-eyes
They really need to stop with this description. Viktor has hawkish eyes, not doe-eyes.
> Alphean instincts
Yes, it's a real thing. Biological essentialism is OK when I do it.
> Viktor his mate. Viktor with a round belly, with a pup on his hip, a baby who resembles them both
How very fascistic and trad. You know where fanficcers stand politically when they start talking about the purity and beauty of their babies and saying that the highest way of living for a woman is to have said babies. What's trans about this? It's literally straight sex.
> He could give her grandchildren
But it's gay sex, yo.
> Thinks of how tight he feels around his hand. He is not sure if Viktor could even take him
Let me guess: alpha Jayce has a horse cock that is so huge he can barely walk around with it, and it's so big it could tear an unprepared omega in half. Just a guess. Gypsies have a thing for phallic objects.
No graphic smut for that big horse cock, not this time. Maybe in the sequel she promises to write. Then we can get those sweet ole pups and tradwife life right from the Gypsy's mouth.
The second chapter of that Bible thumping fic has been posted. Set in bumfuck Kentucky, this is supposed to be set in 90s, yet you really wonder how a kid managed to smuggle testosterone across state lines. Planned Parenthood wasn't forking it out like candy in this time period.
Basically, they sent him to a random religious man so they can break him free of his transgenderism. No idea why he wasn't placed with a foster care family in a more urban area; foreign kids tend to be more expensive. While I praised the writing in the first chapter, the plot is starting to get a little messy.
> What the Church seemed to think he deserved
Again, they're trying to 'break' the trans out of him, simply put. The major plot will be about the 'latent homosexuality' and 'gay struggle' when this is the farthest thing from gay.
> pale line of skin
We love our white boys, don't we?
He has no clothes, no books or belongings, but the testosterone vials are the most important thing. One must wonder how the hell he got those and from where, because without a prescription you are engaging in drug trafficking. Did he get them from Planned Parenthood? If this was set far earlier, it'd be more difficult to get it because PP wasn't so loose with handing them out.
You already said the air in Kentucky feels different, unless you mean the male presence that's around you now.
> He's bee trained to do for others
Hmm, wouldn't have to do with his natal sex, now would it?
This is what gets me: he was dumped in the middle of bumfuck nowhere from a church with no adoption credentials or authority to do that with state authorities. Foreign white kids are expensive and highly sought after; another family would have bid on him. If this kid is an American citizen and was running away, the foster care system would be in control of him. There are just a lot of things that are starting to not make sense.
Ah, here we go with the lingering looks. I can't wait for the chapters and chapters and paragraphs upon paragraphs of Jayce struggling with his 'gay desires' when said kid has to inject T just to 'appear' as a boy.
We've talked about the grass twice already. I know that's going to be a mercy based on how many times Jayce is going to beg God for forgiveness for engaging in gay sin.
Eh? Germany, Czechia, and France will have markets you can go to in the mornings where the animals are butchered fresh. Like, just a few hours ago fresh. Czechia is not some backwater.
> Maybe he thinks Viktor will be disgusted, too much of a city boy
Well he had to get that T from somewhere.
> There's a proper order to everything
How fitting, then, that the actual male will take the 'top' role and the female character saying she is a male will take the submissive role. Just as God intended.
Wool actually dries very well in the heat. It's a fabric that does great in hot weather and in the cold. I thought Yookay ladies had better education.
> Like he knows there's a God above him for all seasons
He considers himself a God-fearing man, does he not? This is a fic based on a 90s Kentuckian wondering if he's a faggot or not.
Because he is, and because we need that romance to start somewhere. At least this Jayce isn't robbing banks.
And there's our first sentimental touch! Onwards and upwards now.
I cut it off here. Jayce makes him a brace and Viktor falls asleep in his room. We know begin their domestic life proper. What I did grab was this line, though:
It'd be thinner, actually. Especially in that humidity. The weight would not change. Yookay authors should Google things more.
The thing I've noticed is that most crossovers are written by male authors, 5% of fanfic authors that they are. There's a huge one combining Mass Effect and Deus Ex: Human Revolution where Adam Jensen takes the role of Shepard after her murder. Another was Mass Effect and Halo and that one was pretty good.
. Babe, word of advice: don't make it sound like your characters are having a STROKE while they're fucking.
