The Mysterious Mr. Enter / Jonathan Rozanski's "Growing Around" - IndieGoGo Campaign Failed, John going off the deep end, "Turning Red" is ignorant about 9/11 (later retracted)

[EA 549]

Where is the soy drinks and the 4 pounds of half drunken mountain dew bottles?

Excuse me it's called Hillfrost.
It's totally different.

And couldn't he think of something more original than knock offs of real things? I mean these were made by kids,you think they'd make gummy robots or something interesting.

 

[Jewelsmakerguy]

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lol what are shoulders

What is anything?

 

[Sussy Baka Desu?]

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lol what are shoulders

What the hell is that realistic background for? Did he get lazy or inspired by Amazing World of Gumball?

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The style of this one doesn't mesh too well with all the other backgrounds we've seen.

Also what is this perspective?

 

[Asa_Spades60]

What the hell is that realistic background for? Did he get lazy or inspired by Amazing World of Gumball?

Probably the latter because, as I ranted before, he likes that show, even though it has a lot of stuff on it he'd object to if it were on any other show (namely SpongeBob and Family Guy, the lowest of low-hanging fruit when it comes to discussing bad modern-day cartoons)? Why can't he be a normal cartoon sperg and watch Steven Universe or Adventure Time (you know, one of those safe, fairly bland CalArts-based cartoons). Gumball is more like an experimental visual media piece than an actual TV show for kids (and was made in the United Kingdom, yet Mr. Enter said he didn't like foreign works).

Sorry for the sperg out; his hypocritical love for TAWoG still irritates me.

Also what is this perspective?

That feeling you get when you think, "Hey, my life might suck a bit, but at least I'm not afraid of gummy worms." Seriously, what the hell?

 

[Piga Dgrifm]

Looking for another artist: https://www.deviantart.com/mrenter/journal/Inking-Artist-needed-769468159

 

[Shokew]

Looking for another artist: https://www.deviantart.com/mrenter/journal/Inking-Artist-needed-769468159

Seriously, I certainly hope nobody better be trying to troll him here on KF... It won't be funny and it won't improve this hilarious mess in any sense. Just continue to let this fail on its own accord.

 

[Doctor of Autism]

I can admire he still wants to keep going despite the odds but holy shit he should let it rest!

 

[Mapo Tofu]

I can admire he still wants to keep going despite the odds but holy shit he should let it rest!

Let it rest?
More like Let it die

 

[AnAccount]

Let it rest?
More like Let it die

growing around wasn't just killed, it was murdered.

 

[Gingervitis]

growing around wasn't just killed, it was murdered.

Ironically, Growing Around isn’t growing at all.

 

[andr0id psycho sho(ker]

Ironically, Growing Around isn’t growing at all.

does growing even more stale count as growing?

 

[EA 549]

So is he paying whoever does the line art or..?
Also why doesnt the sketch artist just...do it themselves?
Inking is easiest part of making a drawing. You just trace what you did before,while sometimes making improvments.

 

[AnAccount]

Can we be honest at this point. MR enter won't care about any critique or whatever, at this point all he is doing, or all he wants to do, is pay people to make his personal ideas into reality for him. That's pretty much it.

Not unlike how many people often imagine their own personal video game, or movie, anime or book. He's just using money and internet star points to get others to make it for him at this point.

Pretty much the adult version of a toddler asking their parents to draw them something cool.

 

[8777BB5]

Looking for another artist: https://www.deviantart.com/mrenter/journal/Inking-Artist-needed-769468159

All I can say is a fool and his money are soon parted.

 

[From The Uncanny Valley]

he said he didn't wanna go to college once cause he feared getting raped, when really who tf would even feel sexual attraction to a man who whines about the same 3 shows and treats children shows like their serious fucking business

for an "asexual" he sure does think abput sex a lot

 

[Lucky Wildcard]

All I can say is a fool and his money are soon parted.

The link is 404'd but I found the journal somehow. He got his recruits.

 

[Piga Dgrifm]

New episode:
https://www.deviantart.com/mrenter/art/Growing-Around-Ryker-s-Revenge-Halloween-770299355

 

[8777BB5]

New episode:
https://www.deviantart.com/mrenter/art/Growing-Around-Ryker-s-Revenge-Halloween-770299355

Ignoring the fact that the dialogue is m ore stilted than usual and there's a few crappy lampshade moments I think the biggest problem with this script is that Enter cannot write horror scenes without having some crappy comedy happen after it. It reminds me of a crappy play I did in the fifth grade where every scary or threatening moment was ruined by the play's super annoying comic relief farting/sneezing/blowing his nose/burping/farting even louder in order to add some "comedy" to the material. You can have comedic moments in Halloween specials (Grinch Night and Ed, Edd n Eddy's Boo-Ha-Ha have some excellent ones) but they have to 1) Be Funny and 2) not be something that distracts from the Horror, Creepiness, scariness, etc.

It says something that Thomas the Tank Engine's Halloween Special is way scarier than Ryker's Revenge and keep in mind it's made for toddlers. (By the way if you're wondering how Scary Ghost train is, allow me to show you a still image from that episode.

It's pretty sad an almost forty year old preschool show can beat Enter

 

[Mapo Tofu]

Ignoring the fact that the dialogue is m ore stilted than usual and there's a few crappy lampshade moments I think the biggest problem with this script is that Enter cannot write horror scenes without having some crappy comedy happen after it. It reminds me of a crappy play I did in the fifth grade where every scary or threatening moment was ruined by the play's super annoying comic relief farting/sneezing/blowing his nose/burping/farting even louder in order to add some "comedy" to the material. You can have comedic moments in Halloween specials (Grinch Night and Ed, Edd n Eddy's Boo-Ha-Ha have some excellent ones) but they have to 1) Be Funny and 2) not be something that distracts from the Horror, Creepiness, scariness, etc.

It says something that Thomas the Tank Engine's Halloween Special is way scarier than Ryker's Revenge and keep in mind it's made for toddlers. (By the way if you're wondering how Scary Ghost train is, allow me to show you a still image from that episode. View attachment 579909
It's pretty sad an almost forty year old preschool show can beat Enter

For me it seems that Enter tries to pull what TCM 2 did with it's comedy.
But forgets why it works on horror moments

 

[SpergPatrol]

Ignoring the fact that the dialogue is m ore stilted than usual and there's a few crappy lampshade moments I think the biggest problem with this script is that Enter cannot write horror scenes without having some crappy comedy happen after it. It reminds me of a crappy play I did in the fifth grade where every scary or threatening moment was ruined by the play's super annoying comic relief farting/sneezing/blowing his nose/burping/farting even louder in order to add some "comedy" to the material. You can have comedic moments in Halloween specials (Grinch Night and Ed, Edd n Eddy's Boo-Ha-Ha have some excellent ones) but they have to 1) Be Funny and 2) not be something that distracts from the Horror, Creepiness, scariness, etc.

It says something that Thomas the Tank Engine's Halloween Special is way scarier than Ryker's Revenge and keep in mind it's made for toddlers. (By the way if you're wondering how Scary Ghost train is, allow me to show you a still image from that episode. View attachment 579909
It's pretty sad an almost forty year old preschool show can beat Enter

Dude your above the age of 3 why are you still watching thomas the tank engine?

Your analyzing a show for babies in literal diapers seek help