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- Sep 7, 2016
Had a skim.
From two sequential panels:
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And then, on the next page:
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Dammit, I'd rather see poorly-drawn art than the same drawing repeated three times in proximity. I can ignore the former, but the latter just rips me out of the story - I can't not notice it. Just me?
Shoddy work in a Zoe Quinn project, how'bout that.
Look at the last panel and particularly the left breast, the lines to expand the dress/bust looks hastily drawn and left to the colorist to deal with.
There's small changes between each of them but they're all about smoothing out some rough lines. Except for the face in the first two, they're the same, and that's what people will be looking at/noticing. Why she gets full lips and a bigger nose in the last one is also a bit odd.
I haven't read the actual comic but is it about her being a computer construct/AI that's getting more real as she amasses avatars/true believers so that she can move out into the real world? Except it is going to be a plot-twist somewhere down the line? Like a Cool World crossed with Lawnmover Man.
If so I predict that they're going to have to defeat her, give up their cool powers/personas, closing with an open ended monologue about having to face the real battle, being ordinary people in the real world.