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Had a skim.

From two sequential panels:

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And then, on the next page:

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Dammit, I'd rather see poorly-drawn art than the same drawing repeated three times in proximity. I can ignore the former, but the latter just rips me out of the story - I can't not notice it. Just me?

Shoddy work in a Zoe Quinn project, how'bout that.
Look at the last panel and particularly the left breast, the lines to expand the dress/bust looks hastily drawn and left to the colorist to deal with.
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There's small changes between each of them but they're all about smoothing out some rough lines. Except for the face in the first two, they're the same, and that's what people will be looking at/noticing. Why she gets full lips and a bigger nose in the last one is also a bit odd.

I haven't read the actual comic but is it about her being a computer construct/AI that's getting more real as she amasses avatars/true believers so that she can move out into the real world? Except it is going to be a plot-twist somewhere down the line? Like a Cool World crossed with Lawnmover Man.

If so I predict that they're going to have to defeat her, give up their cool powers/personas, closing with an open ended monologue about having to face the real battle, being ordinary people in the real world.
 
There's small changes between each of them but they're all about smoothing out some rough lines. Except for the face in the first two, they're the same, and that's what people will be looking at/noticing. Why she gets full lips and a bigger nose in the last one is also a bit odd.

She grows a big nose as she gets more money and grows fat lips as she sucks more dicks.
 
I've only skimmed the first issue and seen a few of the screenshots here from the second, but it doesn't even seem like Quinn really gets the cyberpunk genre. Visually, yeah, there are some elements that are for sure cyberpunk, but the overall story sounds like it is way more magic based. That's fine in some settings (Shadowrun springs to mind) but this seems more like .hack or Sword Art Online or some other setting that is about ordinary people having an internet/game/digital avatar with special powers. I know some settings kinda do the same thing with hackers basically being gods in the digital world, but usually that is because they are manipulating a world heavily connected to the internet, not because they have actual magic powers or can manifest their hacker avatar as a physical force.
 
I know that feel, character of questionable gender identity:
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oh wow, it's something that probably should have happened in issue 1, or the goofy buzzfeed quiz! has anyone gotten a character from the comic as their fursona?
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edit: someone is confused about when issue 3 is supposed to come out.
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So nearly a page introducing characters with literal cut and paste cliches who should have just been introduced by acting like the cliches they are.
 
Imagine being such a retard you look at something like nethack, shadowrun, or neuromancer and be like "I want that, but more confusing and involved with new-age feminism shit. Oh, also, everything needs to look like Lisa Frank puked and shitted all over it. Oh, then I want Frank Miller to do like a Dark Knight Strikes Again thing in that shit and puke."

Edit: Nethack was the wrong word. I'm thinking Synners.
 
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This is astoundingly bad writing.
It's actually par for the course with most capeshit when explaining powers, but you're not wrong.

What's this guy's thing with bizarre, gaping mouths? It's making me ill.

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I bet he volunteered to work with Zoe.

I feel like the mouth was drawn without teeth, just filled in with transparency & then a wicked skull was put on the bottom layer and the two images got squashed.
 
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