Here is my review
The Freeing of the Child a short story
TLDR. Use the fucking enter key to break up your paragraph
Act your age
Switching between 1st and 3rd person is confusing.
Wow, overkill. The diaper/baby punishment for making out with his girlfriend, that is overkill. Lazy excuse for why the main character is in diapers. The story is mostly dialog not a lot of discription going on except the details about the diaper experience. No character development we don't even get a description of what our characters look like.
Oh good god this family is fucked up everyone seems to be really enthused about making their lives harder and more disgusting. Aiden was not the first to get diapered, they have used this punishment before. There appears to be some incest going on, I'd rather not think too much about what I'm reading.
NEXT
Abusive Childhood Or Not
Boring shit indeed. Be careful what I ask for there is more description in this story

. As expected the descriptions are focused on the diapered experience. The writing is slightly better, but he needs to break up his paragraphs more and sometimes he forgets to capitalize words. He needs to use more active words instead of passive, this would help make his sentences feel less choppy.
The story is from the babysitter's perspective. The babysitter is a psychotic fuck and she has no business ever being around children again. In fact, should she ever have children they should be taken away from her to ensure she never puts her child through what she did to that poor boy.
CONCLUSION
Well, its Deeker so you can't expect much on the writing front, but you can expect a lot on the disturbing front. Unless you have a morbid curiosity or a sick fuck, skip.