Since we are on the topic of art. Here's a little critique on one panel I've seen. I am not saying I am a good artist or that I can do better.
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I've only seen snippets but this is one of the pull pages that's available. The first thing I noticed is that the knockoff screen slaver outline is primarily done with the symmetry tool. It's not a bad thing, but it's blatantly obvious. The scene itself is really simple in of itself. To me it's lazy and seems low effort.
The villain itself seems really simple and the design is uninspiring.
The chest for quite awhile bothered me since it looked like he had a thin waist. Then I thought his chest is puffed out, possibly overexaggerated chest armor. In the end after thinking for a moment it's most likely the coat fold. It didn't click for me since the lighting is kind of odd. It's possibly there to fill in the blank space.
With that in mind I don't think the use of negatives is being used to it's full potential. It could be done much better with more detail. Maybe give the Screen slaver some perspective with fish eye lens to make the scene more dynamic and impactful. Maybe instead of having the fold outline for the chest you could've used the light from the screen shining down to contrast the background to fill in the empty space. Or that you could have used the light and drawn more with the ambience and scatter off of the chest.
With the odd choice of light. I could see that more could be done with the boy (?) if more effort was put into it. To me at first glance it looks like he's on a podium. Maybe he is? Can't tell. With ambient and scattering of light it might've been possible to at least put a faint outline of legs.
I can't knock too much on the character might be an artistic choice.
It's a really simple page in the end. Nothing crazy going on. I'm curious if the artist is getting paid seeing how Dillin isn't in the best financial state. Could explain the low effort. I would look more into it, but I really don't want to give money to Dillin. By the looks of it. Doesn't seem that great. Doesn't mean all comics need great art to sell (ex: One Punch Man) but if you don't have decent art. Your writing must be top tier or else it'll get drowned out by the sea of indie comics.
edit: I found some free chapters so might look into it.
