32:40: "Is there a class disconnect between the faunus between the different kingdoms?"
Who cares? Also, Faunus are now called Diamons, and they're emphasizing less on that they're "animal people" and more their "association with the Grimm." Jesus fucking christ. Just write your own story. He even admits he's reworking everything.
54:20: "Syto and Dazco sat me down in a call and basically gave me a university lecture on some of the lore as background and context for a character."

Star Wars EU has ruined a whole generation of writers.
Also, one of the women has this obnoxious tone where she's trying to make herself sound like a toddler. I know there's a minor on this project, and that might be her, but even then it's exaggerated.