Snakes Reads A Terrible Book: Manhunt, by Gretchen Felker-Martin - An utter waste of everyone’s time inspired by the Tranny Sideshows thread and its new favorite author

I'm actually curious to know what Gretch will have the women do with the prepubescent boys or ones going through puberty, are they thrown out, castrated, killed or worse yet are the troons caring for them?

I think there was a throwaway line (which is an understatement in an entire book that deserves to be thrown away, but I digress) about how they'd be castrated or force transed before they reach puberty. So basically Gretch's wet dream. Everything else in this "novel" is a fetish, after all, why not that too?

I have to say, amidst this dumpster fire, I have found one thing I do legitimately enjoy: how close to self-aware GFM is - his tranny characters are constantly denigrating and lamenting what it is to be trans, while the TERFs are mostly real people, just trying to survive in a post-apocalyptic society.
 
He's so pathetic.
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News outlets aren't 'playing telephone'. They've caught site of a trendy news story and decided to cash in. If you care so much about the ratings of your book, then you shouldn't be happy this is starting to get some mainstream coverage.
Now, New York Post shares some pretty retarded stories and is troon-sympathetic most of the time so I was surprised to see them join in on the bandwagon. They even showed how desperate Micah is for some Rowling Rage.
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She's not taking the bait, tard.
 
Well if I'm going to just be messaging you anyway, wouldn't it just be better to have a group convo with every volunteer and just relay information on who is doing which chapter that way? So that the volunteers know who's doing any chapter at any given time.
Idk this is babbys first thread I’m just trying to keep boring af planning shit out of the thread so the shittalking can flow freely. I’m not a high school English teacher I’m a fuckin SNAKE cut me some slack.
 
He's so pathetic.
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News outlets aren't 'playing telephone'. They've caught site of a trendy news story and decided to cash in. If you care so much about the ratings of your book, then you shouldn't be happy this is starting to get some mainstream coverage.
Now, New York Post shares some pretty retarded stories and is troon-sympathetic most of the time so I was surprised to see them join in on the bandwagon. They even showed how desperate Micah is for some Rowling Rage.
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She's not taking the bait, tard.
a peaking article? in my mainstream american media? gimme them rainbows but this feels like a good step
 
Depending on how the T.rex virus is supposed to spread, and given how often they get wounded, keeping their skin clean you'd think would be a matter of life and death, probably far more than the tooth decay PSA we got earlier. AND YET.

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An “attagirl” is waiting upstairs for Ramona in 1B. We do not learn what an “attagirl” is. I do not want to know what it is.
OK, I haven't read the book, but both our readers said "attagirl" was an actual term for a girl probably handing out sex rewards in the universe, but couldn't it just be a literal "Atta girl," like a congratulations? I just got the sense it was "yeah, people are horny for terfs who have just killed some troons, go upstairs if you want to be thanked for it," not that it was a specific term for an institutionalized sex slave. Although it would be actually clever to repurpose a common saying like that.

it really bothers me that this Twitter brained coom-lord can’t go 3 sentences without making an internet reference. dude literally can’t think about anything other than internet culture. memes spoken aloud, constant references to Tumblr and Twitter, esoteric gender shit, acronyms incomprehensible to anyone unfamiliar with niche belief systems of the terminally online.
I wonder what the world outside the USA is like. America's Twitter brains are no doubt holding everyone back by conforming to Western gender bullshit. Everyone else is prepared with their old world fairy tales about all men being wolves and men having to pass rigorous feats of honor in order to get close to a woman and marry her. This book is not just racist but colonialist.
 
It's interesting that so many trans authors that the media decides to focus on release these pieces that'd be labelled as disgusting pervert trash if it was released by a cisman. Anyone remember Porpentine? A few years ago it was like everyone was blowing smoke up my ass about how fantastic an author she was and she just wrote the exact same kind of fetish crap.
 
I’m loving the breakdowns in this thread. 10/10 entertaining and most of the writers here are MUCH better than the author himself.

I think I noticed another plot hole though…what about the animals? If the virus uses testosterone to turn men into rape zombies, shouldn’t it affect basically all male vertebrate animals? It seems like it wouldn’t only causes humanities collapse, but most of nature too. It’s not like the testosterone in animals/people are different kinds. It’s the same thing.
 
OK, I haven't read the book, but both our readers said "attagirl" was an actual term for a girl probably handing out sex rewards in the universe, but couldn't it just be a literal "Atta girl," like a congratulations? I just got the sense it was "yeah, people are horny for terfs who have just killed some troons, go upstairs if you want to be thanked for it," not that it was a specific term for an institutionalized sex slave. Although it would be actually clever to repurpose a common saying like that.
Given that the person telling Ramona felt the need to lean close and be all secretive and that Ramona is hit with a sex flashback just a sentence or two after that, I believe that it is a term for a callgirl/escort/etc.

I’m loving the breakdowns in this thread. 10/10 entertaining and most of the writers here are MUCH better than the author himself.

I think I noticed another plot hole though…what about the animals? If the virus uses testosterone to turn men into rape zombies, shouldn’t it affect basically all male vertebrate animals? It seems like it wouldn’t only causes humanities collapse, but most of nature too. It’s not like the testosterone in animals/people are different kinds. It’s the same thing.
Well, Micah says that all big game has died off although he doesn't stick to this rule too often.
 
I have to admit that I'm very disappointed in you, Kiwis. Why are you referring to this sad excuse of a human bean as 'GFM'? If Gretchen deserves a nickname, then it's Greg Chan. I strongly believe that we have a new Chris Chan in the making. How long until he sexually assaults his mother? His rape fetish is obvious and I highly doubt that any other woman would let him anywhere near her.
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The lack of a sensitivity reader is my biggest issue with this dumpster fire. Yeah, we all know that the writing is complete trash. Yeah, we all know about Greg Chans rape fetish. Yeah, we all know that the main characters are self-inserts. Yeah, we all know that the book has never been edited. But for fucks sake, how can you leave out the sensitivity reader? Twitter degenerates are the weird ones, who get upset about everything. Sensitivity readers are there to make sure that the writer doesn't accidentally misrepresent cultures, stereotype minorities, point out problematic language etc. I'm truly disgusted by the themes and the language in this book. There is so much vile stuff going on and 'horror' is not the reason for it. It's the writer. You have quite a few people complaining about all of that, because they are (rightfully) upset by the themes and language in the book. For example all the rape. Rape is a horrific topic. The problem is that in this book rape is being glorified. And a sensitivity reader would have pointed that out. But since Greg Chan has most likely never faced any kind of negative feedback leading up to the release of the book, now everyone, who dislikes the book, is a nazi TERF.


You know how '50 Shades of Grey' was written by a regular soccer mom, who had BDSM stuff going on through her head? When you read it, you know that the main character is the writer, who has a hot, rich dude spank and pleasure her.
You know how 'Twillight' was written by a regular teenager, who had teenage love stuff going on through her head? When you read it, you know that the main character is the writer, who has a hot vampire and a hot werewolf fighting for her love.
You know how 'Manhunt' was written by a regular tranny, who had just tranny things going through his head? When you read it, you know that the main character is the writer, who wants to rape and kill women, who oppose him.
50 Shades of Grey and Twilight had the advantage of appealing to a big audience. Manhunt appeals to a fraction of a percent. Luckily.

And last but not least: Think about Harry Potter again. It's about a young boy, who finds out that he is a wizard and goes on to have magical adventures. He meets friends, he meets foes. Also think about the Fantastical Creatures story again. Isn't that book about a semi-wizard guy, who can talk to all kinds of fantastical animals? That goes on to show you that a good writer, such as JK Rowling, can keep herself out of the story and just write something, that people will like. And that's what goes on to become a massive franchise.

When it comes to me, respect doesn't have to be earned. It has to be earned back. I respect everyone at the beginning. So I usually don't misgender transgender people. I do try to respect binary pronouns. But when you have a shit human like Greg Chan freely oversharing his disgusting fetishes, I lose all respect for that person. Fuck him and fuck all the people, who enabled him and his book.
 
Dude just tell me you want another chapter and I’ll make sure we have no more overlap.
The more commentary on this abomination of a book the merrier. Chapter overlaps by different users are fine. You all have a different style in the way you rip this terrible book apart. And every user that's read through a chapter and left commentary so far is so much better than the garbage you're all reading for our enjoyment.
 
You know how 'Twillight' was written by a regular teenager, who had teenage love stuff going on through her head? When you read it, you know that the main character is the writer, who has a hot vampire and a hot werewolf fighting for her love.
Stephenie Meyer was definitely in her 30s and a mom when she wrote Twilight. But I take your point.

I'd also say the self-insert phenomenon is much more acceptable in romance because that's often the point of the genre: for the reader to be able to identify with the main character and imagine themselves in their shoes. Readers will most likely be slightly bookish women, and that's exactly what kind of women the writers are, so if they're drawing on their experiences of being like ... awkward or inexperienced, then that just makes their work more relatable to the audience. (#NotAllRomance, it's just that it's a vehicle that makes sense with self-insert characters in ways other genres can't ride on.)

I guess GFM is trying to speak to the troon audience, but unfortunately, the troons are even more cringe than teenage girls, and this is a horror novel where everyone has to do fucked-up things. So it's going to have limited utility as a self-insert novel. It's meant to repulse its audience, but in a way that affirms that repulsion is sexy. Uck.
 
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I have to admit that I'm very disappointed in you, Kiwis. Why are you referring to this sad excuse of a human bean as 'GFM'? If Gretchen deserves a nickname, then it's Greg Chan. I strongly believe that we have a new Chris Chan in the making. How long until he sexually assaults his mother? His rape fetish is obvious and I highly doubt that any other woman would let him anywhere near her.
Optimistic if you think there's anyone out there that rivals Christian. His deadname is Micah, and deadnames make troons seethe so I've been using that.
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The lack of a sensitivity reader is my biggest issue with this dumpster fire. Yeah, we all know that the writing is complete trash. Yeah, we all know about Greg Chans rape fetish. Yeah, we all know that the main characters are self-inserts. Yeah, we all know that the book has never been edited. But for fucks sake, how can you leave out the sensitivity reader? Twitter degenerates are the weird ones, who get upset about everything. Sensitivity readers are there to make sure that the writer doesn't accidentally misrepresent cultures, stereotype minorities, point out problematic language etc. I'm truly disgusted by the themes and the language in this book. There is so much vile stuff going on and 'horror' is not the reason for it. It's the writer. You have quite a few people complaining about all of that, because they are (rightfully) upset by the themes and language in the book. For example all the rape. Rape is a horrific topic. The problem is that in this book rape is being glorified. And a sensitivity reader would have pointed that out. But since Greg Chan has most likely never faced any kind of negative feedback leading up to the release of the book, now everyone, who dislikes the book, is a nazi TERF.

You know how 'Manhunt' was written by a regular tranny, who had just tranny things going through his head? When you read it, you know that the main character is the writer, who wants to rape and kill women, who oppose him.
50 Shades of Grey and Twilight had the advantage of appealing to a big audience. Manhunt appeals to a fraction of a percent. Luckily.

And last but not least: Think about Harry Potter again. It's about a young boy, who finds out that he is a wizard and goes on to have magical adventures. He meets friends, he meets foes. Also think about the Fantastical Creatures story again. Isn't that book about a semi-wizard guy, who can talk to all kinds of fantastical animals? That goes on to show you that a good writer, such as JK Rowling, can keep herself out of the story and just write something, that people will like. And that's what goes on to become a massive franchise.

When it comes to me, respect doesn't have to be earned. It has to be earned back. I respect everyone at the beginning. So I usually don't misgender transgender people. I do try to respect binary pronouns. But when you have a shit human like Greg Chan freely oversharing his disgusting fetishes, I lose all respect for that person. Fuck him and fuck all the people, who enabled him and his book.
This is Kiwifarms, most of us are desensitized to shit like that and no one wants to read over and over again that 'omg you know, raaaaape is howwwwible!' Just gotta accept early on that Micah is going to write all kinds of amoral shit, try to make the reading more bearable for everyone else by poking fun at the inconsistencies, poking fun at his horrible understanding of human behavior, or making some quips about the inevitable counter-productiveness of his abhorrent depiction of trannies. But you're right, pointing out the grammar is beating a dead horse. We will be more moralfaggy next time.

Twilight was written by a woman who was 30 years old at the time.
 
The lack of a sensitivity reader is my biggest issue with this dumpster fire. Yeah, we all know that the writing is complete trash. Yeah, we all know about Greg Chans rape fetish. Yeah, we all know that the main characters are self-inserts. Yeah, we all know that the book has never been edited. But for fucks sake, how can you leave out the sensitivity reader? Twitter degenerates are the weird ones, who get upset about everything. Sensitivity readers are there to make sure that the writer doesn't accidentally misrepresent cultures, stereotype minorities, point out problematic language etc.
I wonder how much his pro free speech worldview, at least when it comes to his own disturbed writing, puts him at odds with others of his ilk. Like if someone started getting bitchy with him about needing to be more sensitive about rape or violence or whatever he'd definitely shut them down with an ironic tweet, right? His whole shtick is upsetting people but wouldn't his widely cast net of bad taste also catch the kind of people who'd want to cancel him? I know I'm looking for logic in a place devoid of it but this bad post made me contemplate Micah's worldview a little more deeply, though I imagine it's likely only as deep as required to be totally self-serving.
 
I like Gretch since it's one letter away from retch.
I think he does have a real woman in his life, and by woman I mean Aiden. He's mentioned having a boyfriend before. I wouldn't be surprised if Robbie was based off her or rather based off what she wishes she was, hence the dumb macho stuff. There was screenshot Gretch did earlier that had a small circle with what looked like an Aiden with a rat on her shoulder, that circle is for whoever you have a message from on Facebook messenger.
 
Given that the person telling Ramona felt the need to lean close and be all secretive and that Ramona is hit with a sex flashback just a sentence or two after that, I believe that it is a term for a callgirl/escort/etc.
Agreed. Which just confirms that "TERF" is the author's word for "woman who disagrees with me." Go on Ovarit and see how they feel about prostitution, Gretchen.
 
I have to admit that I'm very disappointed in you, Kiwis. Why are you referring to this sad excuse of a human bean as 'GFM'?
It's Grootchen now, thank you very much. I don't know who started that, it wasn't me, but it makes me laugh. GFM was simply shorthand because typing Gretchen Felker-Martin over and over becomes extremely tedious. Also his name is Micah so you can always use that. We know how much it bothers him to be deadnamed and misgendered because we're popcorn reading his therapy journal.
 
Also terf is a great word but the plural “terven” is my favorite. It’s like a coven of terfs. It’s a word with FANGS
Considering this is Snake reads, can we be like Ben Stiller in dodgeball and come out like this in our terven?
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OK, I haven't read the book, but both our readers said "attagirl" was an actual term for a girl probably handing out sex rewards in the universe, but couldn't it just be a literal "Atta girl," like a congratulations? I just got the sense it was "yeah, people are horny for terfs who have just killed some troons, go upstairs if you want to be thanked for it," not that it was a specific term for an institutionalized sex slave. Although it would be actually clever to repurpose a common saying like that.
I am legitimately curious to how many women across history have had sex slaves that are male, let alone female. I am also curious to know how many females use prostitutes...ever.

I guess GFM is trying to speak to the troon audience, but unfortunately, the troons are even more cringe than teenage girls, and this is a horror novel where everyone has to do fucked-up things.
It's a bad strategy too: troons don't pay for things. They're internet savvy enough to find weird porn being written for free and LOVE pirating things. We got our hands on a PDF even though there's not many copies being moved - the people this appeals to want it for free and want it NOW NOW NOOOOOW!!!
I wonder how much his pro free speech worldview, at least when it comes to his own disturbed writing, puts him at odds with others of his ilk. Like if someone started getting bitchy with him about needing to be more sensitive about rape or violence or whatever he'd definitely shut them down with an ironic tweet, right? His whole shtick is upsetting people but wouldn't his widely cast net of bad taste also catch the kind of people who'd want to cancel him? I know I'm looking for logic in a place devoid of it but this bad post made me contemplate Micah's worldview a little more deeply, though I imagine it's likely only as deep as required to be totally self-serving.
Pro free speech can be dressed up as "pro troon speech". "THEY'RE TRYING TO KEEP US FROM EXISTING WE MUST SPEAK OUT!!!" Troons, the male ones, are also mostly disconnected from the rest of the sjws. They mostly stick within their own circles with people who like the same things as them and just parrot a bit of the rest of the sjw stuff. You can see a difference between sjw general and trans general thread on it, it's fascinating. They'll even claim PoC women look like men so they can feel more oppressed, which said women fucking hate (with good reason).


Free speech for them also allows them to scream death threats and catchy insults at people. They are a lot on "THERE OUGHT TO BE A LAW" though.
 
Considering this is Snake reads, can we be like Ben Stiller in dodgeball and come out like this in our terven?
Hell fuckin yes.
I am also curious to know how many females use prostitutes...ever.
There’s the stereotype of old rich women having attractive, young “companions.” That’s probably more about having a hot live-in nurse that treats you like a queen, instead of an apathetic caregiver that probably smells like hand sanitizer and doesn’t really give a shit if you’re lonely.

But women usually don’t have to pay for attention or sex. Grootch obviously can’t understand or relate to this as a fat incel.
 
Agreed. Which just confirms that "TERF" is the author's word for "woman who disagrees with me." Go on Ovarit and see how they feel about prostitution, Gretchen.
I was gonna say, feminists who are called "TERFs" - and, you know, the vast majority of actual activist feminists whose activism is more than just a line in their Twitter bio or a pithy TikTok video - are anti-prostitution and advocate strongly for laws that criminalize solicitation, pimping, etc. due to how exploitative and traumatic it is for women. There is absolutely no way some "TERF paradise" where eeeevil TERFs are in charge of everything wouldn't outlaw prostitution.

But they also probably wouldn't have to. lbr, the vast majority of women would never even consider visiting a prostitute and even among the ones who would think about it only the tiniest minority would even come close to doing it, and most of that itty bitty minority of an already tiny minority group would want a male prostitute, not a female one. Having female prostitutes around in a female-only society run by dedicated feminists would just be pointless, it would just be a bunch of women hanging around doing nothing all day, painting their nails or whatever.

Then again, when has a trans-identified male ever, literally ever, bothered to actually learn about what so-called "TERFs" believe before declaring what they think those evil wrongthink women believe in? Thinking "TERFs" would embrace prostitution so long as the Johns were just women is significantly less crazy than, for example, the trend of troons earnestly declaring how "TERFs" are all Fox News-watching Republican tradwives who believe a woman's place is barefoot in the kitchen and pregnant.

On a less spergy note, I've been reading along with y'all here and this is brilliant and much more enjoyable than trying to suffer through the book myself! Looking forward to later chapters. Kinda. You know what I mean. This might just be the worst book I've ever even heard of.
 
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