This man is so normal. It’s haunting me. All the demented Smurf torture came from a man who wanted to make a Pikachu fondant cake for his son’s bake sale. Wtf is humanity.
I just re-read his own writing vs the SiH stories and honestly, the flow is extremely similar. I think you're right about that.
Typically, people will write in a manner more subdued or internally edited than how they'd speak in real life.
Some people may write well, with a conscious flow, but struggle to translate it to irl speech.
They'll be ordered in writing, but not in conversation. They'd never make a good debater, storyteller or engaging conversationalist.
SiH and this dude have a similar flow. I have a feeling Tolin writes how he speaks, in a stream of consciousness tone, because he's confident in his abilities as an engaging conversationalist.
Which would track with being a lawyer, coz those faggots are nothing if not verbose and over-confident.
Does it mean he's SiH... not for sure, but it would be somewhat logical.
Either way, one of the reasons I think this was an old internet thing, and he's not some depraved loon, was because in one of the SiH pix, it has an art directive note at the top :

Which also means that he either had someone doing the artwork for him or you should be able to dox him by his soft, sensitive, fragile, pink ladyfingers.
It really fits in with a lot of the YTMND era old internet vibe of what was funny, trying to get meme going and creating some internet lore. Bored college kids with a reasonably good ability to write and a wild west internet really tracks.
I mean, I'm sorry but the story was pretty hilarious. He kept going and going, acting like he was oblivious... it's peak 2008 internet humour.