Patrick Sean Tomlinson / @stealthygeek / "Torque Wheeler" / @RealAutomanic / Kempesh / Padawan v2.5 - "Conservative" sci-fi author with TDS, armed "drunk with anger management issues" and terminated parental rights, actual tough guy, obese, paid Quasi, paid thousands to be repeatedly unbanned from Twitter

he's STILL going.

edit: fawk moonface beat me to it

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I've not kept up with this thread, so excuse me if that for which I ask has been posted here already, but I'm not seeing the grievous issues with that dialogue. This seems more like a case of finding things to stack against someone who's already fat and stupid. What's a particularly bad paragraph from this book? Where's his sheer lunacy, like when MovieBob compared The Wizard or whatever to JFK being assassinated and 9/11?
I went through chapter 1 with a moderate amount of specificity and it's genuinely awful. To paraphrase my overall thoughts, before I started I was worried it was mostly just going to be boring if not through his own merits then through the grace of an editor, which would cause me to not have much to talk about. Instead he writes with the creative chutzpah of an elementary student who's seen a few sci-fi shows/movies but hasn't actually done any research and with the technical acumen of me casually chatting at people on Discord. When I paraphrase the work I can't help but try to spice up the prose because the only spice that he uses himself is errors. The third person narrator directly addresses the reader and randomly interjects facts and explanations for things that haven't come up in the story. Rather than not having enough to talk about I had to actively focus on only the most interesting things because if I tried to make a point of breaking everything down that was just wrong I'd just be rewriting it page-by-page. I was actually considering rewriting the first chapter because, at least at that point, it's not wholly unsalvageable and it had two ideas I actually liked, even if they were executed in awful ways. While I was harsh I did try to be as fair as I could. I haven't found any sheer lunacy, just a lack of creativity and technical prowess, but I'm also not terribly far in

Feel super gay to link it but if you want to see my pseudoreview it starts at page post 29,960. @PST Stan Account suggested a thread on the art and literature subforum and that might be a good place to do the chapter one rewrite and more thought-out chapter reviews, with the bullet pointed lists and answering questions here for the people who just enjoy shitting on Pat
 
journos looking at the mountain of evidence that Pat is a deranged weirdo and putting him down easy with a "yeah I don't want to get a bunch of emails, pass"

the media reports negatively on giant AAA global celebrities with tens of thousands of devout fans ALL THE TIME, but sure, it's the backlash what's preventing them from telling Pat's version of the story. A convicted criminal who confessed to making death threats crying about mean tweets.
 
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He's tweeted something that is allegedly from his wife. Apparently calling someone fat online is just as bad as hating abortions? Niki is retarded.

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>have attacked every journalist to accurately report the facts of their crimes.
Freudian slip here. Rick meant to write "For accurately reporting..." As stands it reads like the stalkers are trying to correct the record of Fat's lies, which is exactly what happened in previous articles written about him.
 
He's tweeted something that is allegedly from his wife. Apparently calling someone fat online is just as bad as hating abortions? Niki is retarded.

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This being Pat's second, better wife, I shudder to think of how bad the first one must have been. All the insight, worldly knowledge, and emotional stability of a 7th grade girl on the rag in debate class.
 
He's tweeted something that is allegedly from his wife. Apparently calling someone fat online is just as bad as hating abortions? Niki is retarded.

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Yikes, government retaliation for merely reporting the truth? Thank god, Patirck is helping that law enforcement investigation into the atalkers for their reporting on Pat (or podcasting of Rick-adjacent subjects) that will wind up with all of them in prison.
 
Wow. He must’ve gotten shitfaced today.

Tweet after tweet of ‘no childing‘ and ‘correcTing the record’…

Who the fuck has the time or desire to do this? How long til he officially has a breakdown?
This is exactly what is the most puzzling thing to me about Rick.

I don't consider myself a busy body, by any means. But I simply cannot fathom the amount of time that this man wastes, daily, correcTing the record. What sort of life is that to live? Even when he is on a vacation, convention, sports event, ect, he is posting nonstop. There is no way this man can be present and enjoying his life.
 
HURR DURR I DRIVE A 15 YEAR OLD MUSTANG. Imagine thinking anybody is jealous of that piece of shit. His faggot barbie car is worth $6k tops. I genuinely wish somebody would throw him into a wood chipper and spray his guts all over his faggot car.
I hope Quasi repos it in the process of getting his legal fees. This will make fatrick more mad than anything else.
It will be fun to see the porque squeeler profile singing praises to the 1980s toyota corolla he will end up with.
 
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