Gretchen Felker-Martin / Micah Elliott Martin / scumbelievable / nonameinanytongue - Transgender media critic, author of MANHUNT, nuclear-grade turbocoomer, FAT, totally does not have a rape fetish

[Soggy paper straw]

I read "No end will be found" - will post my thoughts tomorrow. But wanted to put it out there, so no one else wastes their time on this... thing

This story is short, the pdf is around 70 pages, but that includes blank pages and cover. He calls it a novel, but to me it is barely a novella.

It is dedicate to Halina, whoever that is. I wonder how people feel to be dedicated a rape porn story

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Review:

Spoiler

Reading this story left me empty. Not shocked, not horrified, just left me wondering "why?". Although I did not read Manhunt, I followed most of the Kiwifarm Reads Manhunt thread, so I am fairly familiar of the depravity level Micah is capable of. This novel hints at his perverted thoughts, but it far too mild to leave me shocked.


The summary is the following: "A young wet nurse is arrested, tortured, tried, and executed for witchcraft in 17th century Germany. " (From Gumroad where one can buy this book).
Here is the problem - this is the book. This is all that happens. The characters are not compelling, interesting, or really have a personality. Two characters make actual choices in the whole story, and they are not explained or make any sense to the reader. You don't get attached to them, feel sad, or get angry at them. Their intentions are unknown and their feelings are irrelevant.

This is how the protagonist is introduced - she is young, but readers are have no idea how young.

Ann stood with her father and her aunt where the grass gave way to muck.
She fidgeted between them, daring glances down at the problem which had distracted her all through the sentencing and execution. The hem of her skirt had caught three brown droplets of pond mud, a stain only a beating would, in her aunt’s eyes, remove. If she could find a moment on the walk back to the village, if she could hide herself among the other children and snatch up a fistful of grass and scrape off the mud before it seeped into the wool... Standing still and doing nothing while the stain spread felt like clasping a red-hot poker between her palms.

Ann held her finger, gilt with honey, for the babe to suck. “Go on,” she said to the squalling bundle in her arms [AN: idk the historic accuracy, but please don't give honey to babies]

There is also no room for horniness or shock, because the sex and torture are very very brief. Those scenes are horrifying, partially due to how badly they were written.

This is one of the main/longest rape scene. It is clearly written like erotica, but it is brief enough to not be too horrifying, but there enough to raise a lot of questions about the author's morals. Emphasis mine for terms that are used in erotica, not when describing rape.

Lantern light went with it. Ann felt dull, but there was heat between her thighs. The master’s fingers found it and her gorge rose as he slid inside her. He had deft hands. They made her quiver. Gave her ecstasy more often than not. Afterward, when he was through, he would abuse himself while she watched, spill his seed in the dirt, and bury it like a dog.

Final rape scene:

Ann woke in darkness to someone tugging at her shift. Fingers tickled at her anus, probing blindly. A warm hand closed over her mouth. “It’s me,” said Linhart, his voice hushed. “I’ve put out the torches. We only have a little while.” She curled in on herself as best she could. It had been three days since her breaking on the rack. She could open and close her hands. She could crawl, given time. Her joints were red and swollen. Her thoughts floated in a hot white haze.
“It could be our last chance.” He pressed against her. “Don’t you want it? I
know you do. I can feel it.”
“Please,” she said. Her innards turned to ice. “Please don’t.”
He stiffened. Silence followed for a heartbeat, and then a sob escaped him.
“I’m sorry,” he said thickly, pulling her close. “I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have
said it. I shouldn’t have said it.” He crushed her against his body. He shook with
every shuddering, watery breath, his tears falling on her neck as he rained kisses on her cheeks, her throat, her ears. “I’ll think of something. I’ll get you out of here.”
He fumbled himself out of his hose and into her.
“No,” she said
“It’s all right,” he whispered, pulling out. She heard him spit and felt his
mucus-coated fingers gliding over her sex. “I know you must be frightened, but it’s okay. It’s going to feel good. It’s going to help.”
He filled her again. His hand cupped her breast. He was still crying

He does have some non-porn scenes; but that reinforces the theory that he knows when he is writing porn and when he is not. He could write better, he just wants to write the porn

The men roared with renewed mirth and pressed in close, emboldened.
Fingers pinched and prodded Ann’s buttocks, her arms, her thighs, her breasts.
Someone stuck two fingers in her mouth and another up her right nostril. She
choked, shrinking away, and Kraus gave her bruised and tingling arm another tug to quicken her pace. Blood dripped from her nose where the man’s nail had cut her. The crowd grew bored and fell back to their games and sloth. Ann sucked
in a deep, shuddering lungful of air as the forest of faces and hands thinned and broke, leaving her alone with her captors. She wanted to vomit

And this (she has just been arrested and being transported to prison)-

I have no idea what Micah was trying to convey here. Just WHY?

Ann had seldom ridden and each step the horse took sent a burning jolt up from her anus to her skull.

Micah is also supposedly a history geek. Yet the torture comprises of a beating, using the rack (or something similar), and taking out fingernails (just mentioned, not described in any detail). I have been to a museum showing torture devices, mainly medieval ones, and those plaques had more of a description than this 70 pages book. [Fun fact - I nearly passed out in that museum (I know, I know ...)].

There are torture devices of a sexual nature that I think could have been used in this book, or at least he could be more descriptive of the pain felt by the girl. Again, every scene in this book just feels empty. The girl is in pain, but not excruciating pain like one would imagine from the torture, or to create a "horror-like" atmosphere. She has broken ligaments and bones, but also she just rests in the cell after the torture. I believe she is able to walk days later. And taking out fingernails could make anyone shiver, but not if you are a terrible writer.

In the middle of the torture, this is what the protagonist thinks, because of course. She is described to be in pain, nothing else is sexual in this scene, just this out of the blue

If Melchior’s fingers had been in her, she would have crushed them.

Another aspect of bad writing is how Micah attempts at this more profound style, where he included interludes describing a witch rituals. I found those too boring to read and only skim read those parts - I strongly doubt I missed any gem. Furthermore, one can feel he tries to give more from this novel. He inserts transition scenes and dialogue that is supposed to be interesting and hinting at something more. It fails; it is just bad.

The forest waited. Pines like teeth. [AN: whatever the fuck this means. This is at the beginning, setting the scene]

Bonus --
Breastfeeding fetish:

I ought to squeeze it out myself and give it to the cats, it aches enough when he can’t drink.

This is the culmination of the action. After she was tortured, she is given a semi-real option to repent. Then this happens:

Ann couldn’t remember the last time she’d stood for her own reasons
under her own power, the last time she’d gone somewhere for her own ends. Her life was a line of servitude, a thousand polished floors and dandled babes and sweltering kitchens stretching from a farmer’s squalid hut to a witch’s wretched cell. For the first time since her capture on the road, milk dribbled from her breasts and stained her shift.

Breastfeeding is a theme of the whole story. I will say that it could make sense with a wetnurse as a character, and given the historic period this is set in. Still...


Men being stronger than women:

He bound her limb by limb as she fought him, his lean frame possessed of a terrible strength.

TLDR: this story is nothing. Not horrifying like Manhunt, but creepy enough to want me to have someone check his hard drive. It's not clear whether he wants to write a deep-mature story about the witch trials, a rape porn, or torture porn. He brilliantly succeeds at doing none of these things.

Oh, and this "If Melchior’s fingers had been in her, she would have crushed them." [while she is being tortured]

 

[gigatard]

Sometimes Kiwi Farms isn't safe from weeens either, some supporter of his or just general hater of the farms could alert him and Gooch delete fucking everything. It's a race against time when that happens, archive everything is in effect here as it usually is.

He likes to live loudly and never look ashamed of anything but it's a toy dog barking defense mechanism. He'll cower if he loses. He pretends he doesn't on twitter with his haydurs but him engaging people then going "uhh you're stoopid/fuck you you're not worth my time uh byeee" is him bailing himself out. It's smart not to get caught up in long twitter arguments, but he always enters with the intent of winning then pretends he's not bothered when he has no comeback and tries to switch it up on them.

There are apps out there that allow you to download an entire social media account. Could we host those files here on the farms before publishing this thread to ensure he doesn't delete any more spicy stuff that we haven't yet found?

 

[Precious Bodily Fluids]

I've updated the OP to include a writeup about Jesse Singal as well as a section detailing Micah's tenuous grasp on the concept of consent.

"pedophile" should be in the thread title. His tweets about children should be their own section with the "hall monitor" one at the top - it's the classic style of how pedos passive-aggressively snipe at society's norms against abusing kids while trying to leave themselves some plausible deniability.

 

[gigatard]

This is how the protagonist is introduced - she is young, but readers are have no idea how young.

So she's a child, but also a wet nurse? How does that work? I'm going to add this to the OP because I'm not sure if he's written about child rape in any other of his books.

"pedophile" should be in the thread title. His tweets about children should be their own section with the "hall monitor" one at the top - it's the classic style of how pedos passive-aggressively snipe at society's norms against abusing kids while trying to leave themselves some plausible deniability.

Yeah, I agree frankly, esp after the above.

 

[AMHOLIO]

Nice guy incel pining for women with a fedora-tip moment about porn. If only he'd stayed this way he might just be a spergy but normal dude with a family by now. Highlighted the part about sexual dimorphism because lol.

He's descriptive but clumsy here. I assume all his novels pre-Gretchen are hidden since he's embarrassed at the quality level like most writers are about their past.

That is such a weird way to describe women and men. I'm not sure what else to say to it since it's so strange.

TLDR: this story is nothing. Not horrifying like Manhunt, but creepy enough to want me to have someone check his hard drive. It's not clear whether he wants to write a deep-mature story about the witch trials, a rape porn, or torture porn. He brilliantly succeeds at doing none of these things.

I think "Pines like teeth" was supposed to mean the forest was uninviting, threatening, a living thing about to snatch you up. He fumbled it by writing the sentence so choppy and disconnected.

I have an explanation for his writing style from an AMA thread he did:


(I assume the bottom are his favorite scenes to have or write but the tweet is private.)

Hopefully archive kicks in, I'll post it later.

"pedophile" should be in the thread title. His tweets about children should be their own section with the "hall monitor" one at the top - it's the classic style of how pedos passive-aggressively snipe at society's norms against abusing kids while trying to leave themselves some plausible deniability.

*suspected/possible pedo. We don't have proof yet, rather not raise expectations too much. It seems to be so without anything but conjecture, and even though said possible circumstantial evidence is stronger than the smell of 30 troons in a room, suspected and possible are still the true and honest wording here.

 

[Soggy paper straw]

So she's a child, but also a wet nurse? How does that work? I'm going to add this to the OP because I'm not sure if he's written about child rape in any other of his books.

I did actually go back to see how she was described because I also found it confusing
Chapter 1 she seems like a young child. Chapter 2 and she is nursing? I also have no clue whether she ever gave birth to a child or not. It is written that badly! There could be a time skip - but if there was, it is not clear. It seems a "wink wink* as young as you want*"-type thing

@HAMOLIO - I agree that he was an even worse writer. From what I saw on his writing blog - it was terrible. It seems the plot and world building hasn't improved. It is just that now he can leave a lot of it out, and fills the space with porn.

A series of petty-as-fuck things. These are not necessarily wrong or note-worthy, but in hindsight they are kinda funny that Micah once had these opinions! How much has changed in 10 years.

From his Tumblr:

Spoiler

So, Harry Potter #after all this time, am I right?



Rape jokes bad; rape porn good!




[10 years later:] Women are people. Some women are more people than others.


Favourite book: Moby Dick (I don't think I need to make the obvious joke). Seems too cis-het-white?



Hating on Twilight when it is miles better than Manhunt, which is to say something.


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[Table Country]

The story in Martin's debut print novel is set in a post-apocalyptic world in which a mysterious virus has transformed all men into unthinking, unfeeling rape gorillas who roam around in packs, searching for women to impregnate with their cannibalistic demon offspring.

So does the virus turn men into troons or middle-eastern refugees?

EDIT: Upon further reading I hope this fucker ends up in the same mass grave Mr. Girl will be in, in CSGO.

 

[Soggy paper straw]

These people should feel ashamed.
Emphasis mine in all the quotes

Spoiler: Review 1

From the "consent accident" movement, please welcome "complicated relationships"..."based on need"

Everything about this universe is fresh and exciting because the lens of the narrators through which we view the world is so new.

They run full-on into one another with all their psychological trauma and form these complicated relationships based on attraction, survival, and need. It is unabashedly queer, explicit, greasy, violent, and sensual. *flailing hands and gesturing* all of these things, all at the same time.

It’s a lot of fun and it’s also very dark.

By https://twitter.com/SadieHartmann

Spoiler: Review 2

A masterful genre-bending horror novel, 'Manhunt' is a must read.​

Imagine a world where testosterone induces crazy, murderous urges.

As grim as it sounds, it’s an incredibly acerbic and witty read, going down with equal parts tenderness and brutality. J. K. Rowling dies in a Scottish castle.

Ummm, JKR dies, no one knows how. It's a mystery.
This review randomly forgets to mention the...rape?

Spoiler: Review 3

Manhunt ... hotter than any erotic novel in the post–Fifty Shades landscape

Manhunt is horrifying, at times titillating, and even hilarious — but most importantly, it thrills at every turn. The prose and pacing embody the slow drawback of a bow thrown into release with the shot of an arrow, never missing its target; the building tension of being edged to the pleasure of an orgasm.

Spoiler: Review 4

If it wasn't for those meddling TERFs!!

If only a militant and well-armed group of TERFs (trans-exclusionary radical feminists) would stop trying to gun them—and everyone else who doesn’t fit into a biologically essentialist narrative—down.

Spoiler: Review 5

No really, the TERFs are the real meanies!

Manhunt grapples frankly with sexuality and sexual trauma: rape, coercion, violation of consent, and generally fucking for a whole host of reasons other than desire all happen on the page. Reproductive justice and violence are also important, as a threat experienced by people with uteruses in this world. At the same time, though, some of the most glorious, breath-of-fresh-air moments in the novel are explicit sex scenes between women. And in several of these sex scenes, pleasure comes from appreciating a fat partner’s body as abundant, beautiful, fuckable—which I could use to see far more often.

No one’s perfect, and no one’s righteous, nor are those things possible… though, some people are far more awful than others.
[...] We’ve also got direct villains: the TERFs and their militia, plus the rich white girlboss Sophie.

Spoiler: Review 6

A quick one

The result is a sensual, tender, honest, and inspirational story of imperfect but well-meaning people banding together in an attempt to not only survive but thrive.

 

[frap]

He gives me hiding-in-plain-sight Jimmy Savile vibes.

 

[Soggy paper straw]

I'm not sure if he's written about child rape in any other of his books.

I have started Dreadnought and you will be horrified happy to see what it is in there!

These two characters are 13 yo girls - (Edit: Correction, Leah is 16 and 4 months old)

I should have raped her because that’s what this feels like now.

The rapey one has a fat fatish too. I am 10 pages in

 

[Red Death Ball]

I have started Dreadnought and you will be horrified happy to see what it is in there!

These two characters are 13 yo girls -


The rapey one has a fat fatish too. I am 10 pages in

Wait til you get to the part where the fat girl’s (adult) mentor reminisces about tying her up and fisting her (among other things).

God, I read Dreadnought ages ago and I didn’t even realize those girls were supposed to be 13. Gross.

 

[Wendigo Whorehouse]

Decided to check out his Twitter and I'm regretting it

(a)

 

[Soggy paper straw]

God, I read Dreadnought ages ago and I didn’t even realize those girls were supposed to be 13. Gross.

I got to the point where it comes out that Rape-girl is actually a boy! #PositiveRepresentation

Again, like with the other novel. The age is given in the introduction. IF there is any timeskip, it is not clear.
They did say that Leah had to wait 1 year to pilot the thing, and she does pilot the thing, so maybe 14? (Although it is ambiguous whether she has to wait in the end or not!)

 

[GenderCop]

Reposting my New Years post from the Snakes thread to include here, because I think its funny enough to go in OP:



I guess now we know more about his need for a therapist in the first place.
But does he fully understand he is batshit crazy?
first step is admitting you have a problem.

 

[Soggy paper straw]

Reposting my New Years post from the Snakes thread to include here, because I think its funny enough to go in OP:

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I guess now we know more about his need for a therapist in the first place.
But does he fully understand he is batshit crazy?
first step is admitting you have a problem.

This is very interesting! While going through his Tumblr, I found some posts where he tags his friends and they exchange some friendly banter. None of those friends seem to have evert talked about Manhunt on their blogs - which is not something a good friend would do!
I may investigate a bit more.

 

[AMHOLIO]

@HAMOLIO - I agree that he was an even worse writer. From what I saw on his writing blog - it was terrible. It seems the plot and world building hasn't improved. It is just that now he can leave a lot of it out, and fills the space with porn

Heheheh, ham-olio

Yeah, I'm not sure if we'd discover anything fun in it that tells us about himself, but sometimes people hide things because they're ashamed of the quality. Ironically he should be even more ashamed of his work right now.

Wait til you get to the part where the fat girl’s (adult) mentor reminisces about tying her up and fisting her (among other things).

Nevermind, add pedo to the list.

It sounds like the shit version of Puella Magi meets NGE so far. Can't wait to know more.

He talked about that his next book, "Gynocide", will have people being upset because teenagers will have sex in it. Note the wording: he didn't say they will have sex with other teens, just that they will be having sex. Call the police.

Reposting my New Years post from the Snakes thread to include here, because I think its funny enough to go in OP:

It's still one of the funniest things in the thread, a great L he posted. The author who wrote the TERFnazis mad that someone else he's friends with has a vagina? No way!

I wonder if it was the phrase "real woman" that triggered his freakout. I'm trying to find a polite way to put it, not that the therapists was wrong. Jealous of your friend because she has no need to transition to be a woman? Jealous of your friend for being able to give birth? Jealous of you friend because uhhh she was born without a penis?

Either way, lol, lmao, glad someone said it to him IRL and hope that therapist survived the Grootchen's ma'ampage.

 

[Need4Sneed]

6 people killed by deranged troon. Troons biggest victims.

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[Soggy paper straw]

Heheheh, ham-olio

Look at what you did! Now I need to get that dyslexia diagnosis. Next will become an autist

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Micah's biggest confirmed crime for now is against the english language. It was a severe crime.

I will go over the book again and confirm the age. There was a later reference to maybe a time skip (but near the end, so a lot of sex scenes have gone by)? However it is very interesting how the only age explicitly mentioned is 13, then nothing. There are definitely still mentions of sex with minors, tho. And a few incest-vore scenes that I have no clue what/why were there.

100% confirmed fat and breastfeeding fetish, as well as a "mommy"/incest fetish.

 

[gigatard]

Wonder if his mom knows about his mommy fetish?

 

[AMHOLIO]

6 people killed by deranged troon. Troons biggest victims.
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Jesus. My reaction was complete horror and sadness at what the children amd teachers went through. At least say things to trans people like "If any of you need help there's help, we should never have an episode like this in the trans community again- we're better than this and can't harm the future of others, we should want to raise people up, please seek help before committing things like this." The last part might offer an argument against killing Jesse Signal so he wrote himself into a corner yet again.

This turbosucks. I've been keeping out of the main article for now, too sad for me at the moment.

Look at what you did! Now I need to get that dyslexia diagnosis. Next will become an autist

One of us ONE OF US ONE OF US!!!

Micah's biggest confirmed crime for now is against the english language. It was a severe crime.

His writing in Manhunt was like hitting your head on the ceiling of the stairs as you went down them, consistently painful yet just enough to tie together to make you think of stepping down the next step and hitting your head all over again. Great to know his writing hasn't degraded from Dreadnought to Manhunt, just been consistent.

There are definitely still mentions of sex with minors, tho. And a few incest-vore scenes that I have no clue what/why were there.

I'm going to guess without reading that he would say they're supposed to symbolize being consumed by adulthood and forces beyond your comprehension and evoke fears and facing them, but more importantly it's great jerkoff material and that's "art".

He needs a new religion, this obsessed with sex and violence philosophy is making him stupider.

100% confirmed fat and breastfeeding fetish, as well as a "mommy"/incest fetish.

He really likes fat chicks. Indi (the Indian doctor, because Micah doesn't remember minorities have names and other occupations than their stereotypical ones), the obese in the apocalypse biowoman in Manhunt, was described as being best at sex. He was happy seeing SJW fanart of their looks, as their ugliness was great to him. He's really edgy and subversive in his taste as you can tell.

Wonder if his mom knows about his mommy fetish?

That's what I was trying to figure out and I really don't want to know if she has read any of his books. Because if she has I'm sorry.