Artcow Frank Breaker / Monostar Leatherknuckles / Frankman64 / Glitchyboy64 / Dr.V / VictorRay67 / Frankie Ferox / Kazuki Oyama - Black Chris Chan? Diehard Weeaboo. Danganronpasperg. OPsec Disaster. Aspiring Mangaka. True & Honest Creator of ЯED MIST. Vore Fetishist. Gachatuber. Questionable Business Practices. Lied About Being an Adult.

[Dive⚓Team]

I ask of constructive criticism not to be doxxed.

I don't think you understand. You doxed yourself. It only took people thinking "who is this retard" and googling your username for all that to pop up.

You really should be looking at how your cartoon has been received so far, it's derivative and uninteresting. Zombies have been over and done with for years. Adding a black main character to the mix doesn't make it interesting, look at that resident evil Netflix series. Plus your interactions here and your digital footprint are a massive red flag to ANY artist worth their salt. You're radioactive because you don't know how to behave online

Your pet project is DOA, pack it up, go home and try again.

 

[Book Thief]

Actually you all are helping me already and you don’t even know it.

Nah, I'm well aware that the best constructive criticism is probably going to come from this place, because we're not afraid to say what's on our minds. Which is why I going to say that I think your work is doomed to suck shit through a straw.

Why? Well besides the fact that you have very little to say about the overall plot behind "It's a zombie apocalypse," which means your premise is incredibly generic and raw, the biggest red flag is that you advertise it as having "LGBTQ+ themes" front and center. Now despite what you think, I'm not against gay people or characters on principle, but I strongly think you should reconsider for two reasons:

1. A lot of amateur writers think that being a minority of some kind automatically makes their character special, as if all they have to do is make their character black or gay and the money will just roll in. What they end up doing is having their identity act as a substitute for a personality, leading to your character feeling like a stereotype defined by their identity first and foremost, when it should just be another minor facet of the character.
2. You've pretty much signaled to any potential reader that this isn't a work to entertain the audience so much as it is a vehicle for you to express your political beliefs. Let me guess: all the good guys are going to be a diverse cornucopia of ethnicities and gender identities who, by sheer fucking coincidence, happen to have all the same political beliefs that you do, while your bad guys are all going to be white Christian conservative types who want to kill fags and trannies because Jesus told them to. Oh, and since your main character is black, you're also going to throw in a bit about racism, perhaps related to how black people are treated in East Asian countries.

People don't want to be lectured. They want to be entertained. If you can't realize that, you're doomed to fail. I suggest watching this video to get a better understanding of where you've gone wrong.

 

[Ogre Magi]

@Monostar Leatherknuckles you should totally talk to @LURKER00. I'm sure he'd help you make your comic dreams a reality. You both seem to be at the same Autism level where you don't really give a fuck about opsec. Here's some of his work. (lol)

 

[Waifu Days]

Who the hell is he supposed to be?

You really came into this without a clue. I could just joke around about this but I tell it to you straight. That was Josh a./k./a. Null. He owns, develops, and runs the Kiwi Farms. He is not a particular fan of anime or the "fanbase". It's a long story. If you are getting messages on your profile from him, you are being annoying no doubt.

Some things that you should probably know by now is that we don't tend to like Discord on this site, Grifters tend to be the target of laughter, and rallying us up to some cause (either personal army or financial grift) makes some users feel like you are trying to use them. This is why people are annoyed with you. At least, part of the reason.

If you are the writer, write a treatment. It's common in the industry especially if you are lacking in the artistic department.

 

[Azdy]

I heard it was a popular subject then why have a art & literature category in here?

Off-topic discussion. But yeah this is still a site for talking about retards on the internet. You came here to pitch an idea for a manga and were confused when people laughed at you doing that. What do you think that makes you?
And I am actually trying to let you know because I feel bad for you. It's not the first time someone who wasn't all there in the head came here acting goofy and didn't get why they got a thread that blew up.

 

[Godchu]

One asshole, just because I’m black doesn’t mean I’m not Japanese as I’m biracial and manga isn’t about people’s backgrounds it’s about their ideas and creativity.

Wait what does that mean, are you half chink or something?

 

[Waifu Days]

There's also a certain pattern this guy has failed to pickup on. This is an anon site and if you are not anonyms it's a 98% chance you are a lolcow.

 

[DEAD BIRD]

Wait what does that mean, are you half chink or something?

Yeah man, this is the most half Asian man I have ever seen, can't you tell?

 

[Love Is Blue]

danganronpaniggers... not even once

 

[Man In A Dress]

Yeah man, this is the most half Asian man I have ever seen, can't you tell?

Not only a weeaboo but....a NIGGER!?!

 

[Coo Coo Bird]

The continued existence of weebs convinced they're going to be a manga-ka warms my heart.

 

[Monostar Leatherknuckles]

There are plenty of chinks in California. What the fuck do you mean it's a show that doesn't apply to you? Are you illiterate? It's a serialized manga on Shonen Jump you retard.

What the fuck are you even talking about you’re not making sense.

You're not the first person to come here to dox themselves on purpose because you crave attention. You also won't be the last. But just know that nobody here cares to do anything to some schizophrenic black weeb. Your fifteen minutes is almost up, and still, no one cares about your tranime bullshit.

Then end them.

I don't think you understand. You doxed yourself. It only took people thinking "who is this retard" and googling your username for all that to pop up.

You really should be looking at how your cartoon has been received so far, it's derivative and uninteresting. Zombies have been over and done with for years. Adding a black main character to the mix doesn't make it interesting, look at that resident evil Netflix series. Plus your interactions here and your digital footprint are a massive red flag to ANY artist worth their salt. You're radioactive because you don't know how to behave online

Your pet project is DOA, pack it up, go home and try again.

You have no idea how to make a project.

I pity the mod who most likely had 29 posts to merge in a cohesive one.

Would a self aware person make this kind of statement after doxing themselves with a half baked collaborative project on KF? Then, trying to defend themselves? I don't think so.

I am curious though. How does the 30% split of the profit with artists work?

If you have more than 3 artists, you're already making a loss on every $ you win. That's kind of an issue.

Is it a pool to share among the different artists? If so, how is the split decided upon? Is the monthly wage of $30-60 also up for sharing? Do you have rough numbers of the amount of hours required?

Also, what do you mean by profit? Is it revenue? Gross margin? Net margin?

How is the profit distribution organized? When does it kick off? What if you have to finance more purchase orders, do artists still get paid or is the money rolled back in?

You're not only promoting a creative project, this is also a business proposition, and I am curious to hear more about your business plan, projection and path to distribution.

Mainly it wasn’t between multiple but I wanted to test which artist I want really doing Red Mist and have them work with me and I’d receive 30% of the revenue and they receive 70% for the art. But I’d make the most on whatever we made with sales either through books, merchandise, other ventures. So in the end it wouldn’t have been with multiple artists it would be me, the artist, and maybe if possible an assistant to help when the artist is unable for a task at the moment.

And everyone keeps trying to bring me down by calling me the N word hard R or calling me a retard like I’m supposed to be offended by it.

You really came into this without a clue. I could just joke around about this but I tell it to you straight. That was Josh a./k./a. Null. He owns, develops, and runs the Kiwi Farms. He is not a particular fan of anime or the "fanbase". It's a long story. If you are getting messages on your profile from him, you are being annoying no doubt.

Some things that you should probably know by now is that we don't tend to like Discord on this site, Grifters tend to be the target of laughter, and rallying us up to some cause (either personal army or financial grift) makes some users feel like you are trying to use them. This is why people are annoyed with you. At least, part of the reason.

If you are the writer, write a treatment. It's common in the industry especially if you are lacking in the artistic department.

A former administrator of 8chan, I’m honored to see I’ve garnered someone’s attention. (Even when 4chan is the more superior)

Off-topic discussion. But yeah this is still a site for talking about retards on the internet. You came here to pitch an idea for a manga and were confused when people laughed at you doing that. What do you think that makes you?
And I am actually trying to let you know because I feel bad for you. It's not the first time someone who wasn't all there in the head came here acting goofy and didn't get why they got a thread that blew up.

So this happens often?

Wait what does that mean, are you half chink or something?

Pretty much.

How?

People keep giving me so many comments so I must respond to them or else they’ll yell at me for doing so.

danganronpaniggers... not even once

Bruh…

Not only a weeaboo but....a NIGGER!?!
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Be creative

The continued existence of weebs convinced they're going to be a manga-ka warms my heart.

Because I will work to be one.

 

[Onni Kalsarikännit]

I told the trolls thats my location if they ever wanted to mail me something.

I remember someone who yelled his adress into a camera and uploaded the video on YouTube and it didn't take long for some trolls to send this guy literally shit in boxes. His local post office gave him a call to come by and pick up his parcels full of feces bc the smell started to infest the whole office. He showed up, got yelled at by the post office workers and had to dump shitboxs himself. Then he went home and recorded another video yelling at the trolls for sending him literal shit. That was fun.

There might be a lesson to learn from this story.

 

[Null]

@Monostar Leatherknuckles If you submit 10 posts again one after the other I am banning you and deleting your shit thread. Figure out the +Quote feature.

 

[The Early 2000s]

Can I get a buck status on this fellow?

 

[Autistic Monkey]

And everyone keeps trying to bring me down by calling me the N word hard R or calling me a retard like I’m supposed to be offended by it.

Nigger

 

[Monostar Leatherknuckles]

@Monostar Leatherknuckles If you submit 10 posts again one after the other I am banning you and deleting your shit thread. Figure out the +Quote feature.

Then why didn’t you tell me earlier you shitty cunt

 

[Azdy]

So this happens often?

Um yes I cannot possibly make it any clearer that this is a site for discussing people on the internet who make a fool of themselves. Here is the category of lolcows who were discovered by posting here. Here is an excellent example.
If you want to wind up with a thread you could just keep posting.

 

[Pizza Time]

I'm going to give benefit of the doubt and assume that the account was made by someone who doesn't like Mr Leatherknuckles here and is trying to sabotage him by purposefully spreading his art and information under his known pseudonym on a website guaranteed to mock and dox him. It just doesn't make sense to me why anyone would come to Kiwi Farms of all places to discuss or advertise a manga idea.

 

[Godchu]

And everyone keeps trying to bring me down by calling me the N word hard R or calling me a retard like I’m supposed to be offended by it.

The way you've been acting says otherwise...