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Watch out guys, the new king of horror manga, writer of such amazing characters such as Bai Dong-Suk, man with "He/They" pronouns in his discord bio just doxed a user on the KiwiFarms
After all, who wouldn't find this guy to be intimidating?
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Cedric_Eff said:
@Monostar Leatherknuckles , you need to have a long rewrite of the script. It’s paper thin as is. The setting is not ideal nor are some of the character names.

The father is characterized more like an Japanese person than an Korean.
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I like how you're actually getting constructive criticism from @Cedric_Eff. He's genuinely giving you advice, so you better take it.
 
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DEAD BIRD said:
Watch out guys, the new king of horror manga, writer of such amazing characters such as Bai Dong-Suk, man with "He/They" pronouns in his discord bio just doxed a user on the KiwiFarms
After all, who wouldn't find this guy to be intimidating?
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Its the Star Wars bed sheets that really give him that "don't fuck with me" vibe
 
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This is straight up just self-insert fantasy man what's wrong with you?

Panel 47
*Night time skip shows a shot of the Bai family house at night*

Panel 48
*Elliot was sleeping in his low bed due to how people in Korea do sleep on beds but they’re
lower compared to beds in America*

Panel 49
*But all the sudden he heard a knock on his room door*

Panel 50
*Elliot went to open it and he was greeted by Bai Ara who was holding a cup of Plum tea*

Panel 51
Bai Ara: Gomez I was wondering if you were thirsty so I came to bring you some plum tea.
Elliot: Oh thanks but I’m actually not thirsty but I appreciate the offer.

Panel 52
Bai Ara: Oh ok. *She said as he walked into his room*
Elliot: You can go now.

Panel 53
*Bai Ara just stood looking at Elliot*
Elliot: Goodnight?

Panel 54
*Just as Elliot said that Bai Ara hugged him*
*Elliot blushed in surprisement*

Panel 55
Bai Ara: I had a nightmare Gomez.
Elliot: What was in this nightmare?

Panel 56
Bai Ara: It was from this movie I watched.
Elliot: What did this dream have?

Panel 57
Bai Ara: I was hanging with my friends at school but then all the sudden the school was
attacked by zombies.

Panel 58
Eliot: Zombies?

Panel 59
Bai Ara: Yeah the school was attacked by a horde of them and they ate everyone except for my
friends and Cho.
Elliot: That sounds like one bad dream

Panel 60
Bai Ara: But there was still good
Elliot: Oh what happened

Panel 61
Bai Ara: A knight rode into the sMa-Riol by a unicorn weilding a powerful sword and he saved
me and my friends from death
Elliot: Who was this knight?

Panel 62
Bai Ara: It was you, you were the heroic knight of my dream!

Panel 63
*Elliot covered Bai Ara’s mouth to keep her quiet*

Panel 64
Elliot: Sshh! You can’t be that loud. I'm not even supposed to be talking to you right now.

Panel 65
*Bai Ara was moving herself and Elliot closer to his bed*

Panel 66
*she pushed him on the bed*

Panel 67
Elliot: Ara what are you doing?
Panel 68
*Bai Ara was unbuttoning Elliot’s sleep shirt revealing his chest making Elliot blush like crazy*

Panel 69
Bai Cho: Ara stop hogging him all to yourself! *She said in a pouted expression*
Bai Ara: Back off I was in here first!
*She said as she held Elliot’s head tightly*

Panel 70
Elliot: Guys!

Panel 71
*Dong-suk loudly knocked on Elliot’s door*

Panel 72
Bai Dong-suk: Stop making that racket boy and go to sleep!
*Meanwhile Ara and Ma-Ri were playing tug of war using Elliot’s arms as ropes and his shirt
was off completely*

Panel 73
Bai Ma-Ri: Go find your own!
Bai Ara: He’s my knight! He would want no interest in a filthy pig like you!

Panel 74
*Ma-Ri and Ara started fighting*

Panel 75
*Dong-suk got up from the couch*
Dong-suk: I swear to Christ if that boy is messing with my girls he’s gonna regret the day he met
me!

Panel 76
Elliot: Quick you two your father is coming! Hide somewhere!

Panel 77
*Bai Dong-suk came into the room*
Bai Dong-suk: What the hell is all this racket about boy!
Elliot: I was sleepwalking.

Panel 78
Bai Dong-suk: Then tell me why the hell were you awake when I came in here and why is your
shirt off!
Elliot: It got hot in here.

Panel 79
Bai Dong-suk: It is literally 32 degrees and you’re literally shivering in front of me right now.
Elliot: Looks like it got colder.

Panel 80
*Bai Dong-suk pointed a finger at Elliot*
Bai Dong-suk: Listen boy I swear if you try to pull one move on my daughters you’ll regret the
day you’ve ever met Bai Dong-suk! Now go back to sleep and I better not hear a sound from
you for the rest of the night or you’ll be spending the night outside!

Panel 81
Elliot: Yes sir.

Panel 82
*Bai Dong-suk left the room* Bai Dong-suk: Damn black boys, they’re always the craziest of
men.

Panel 83
Elliot: You guys see what I mean. Your father hates me and if he sees me even talking to you
two he’ll send me back to Minnesota.

Panel 84
*Bai Ara hugs Elliot from behind*
Bai Ara: Don’t worry about daddy let us handle that.
Bai Ma-Ri: Now where did we leave off.

Panel 85
*Elliot sighed*
Elliot: This is gonna be a long night…
 
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Ogre Magi said:
I like how you're actually getting constructive criticism from @Cedric_Eff. He's genuinely giving you advice, so you better take it.
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Most people were being nice and on so many levels but our lil' edgy buddy did not take the hint.

Monostar Leatherknuckles said:
Scumbags like you are the reason the world is an endless shithole.
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But you did your research, champ. You're right. 4Chan is way better than us oldfags.

P.S. It takes a special type of retard to get me BIG mad at the Internet. You've done it, kiddo.
 
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Oh, come on.
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Oh my god.
I know everyone's already pointed out how played-out zombies are in media at this point, but Jesus Christ. This is like something straight out of 2009. Actually, Mr. Leatherknuckles, when did you start writing this magnum opus? Did you start writing this back when you were a kid and zombies were the Big Thing?
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