That just makes Emily look even more foolish because she didn't even refer to a character.
"Thil" refers to a magic train that is now acting as a spaceship for this paragraph. She has confused describing a character with describing a scene. The only face being that of what I assume is a statue. I dunno, I'm not going to play that Alice video game to find out.
So not only is Emilys ranting nonsensical, it is completely imagined. She has not described a character and this stolen image is not being used to depict or suggest how a character would look.
Thank you for sharing Wandering. Emily continues to find new ways to demonstrate her stupidity.
Debating putting a drawing w a background up to set a scene and describe it like a story of some sort so numpty actually learns how you use those images and tell a story. Probably pointless, and 90% sure I'm blocked.
Debating putting a drawing w a background up to set a scene and describe it like a story of some sort so numpty actually learns how you use those images and tell a story. Probably pointless, and 90% sure I'm blocked.
If you've committed the completely horrendous and unforgivable crime of telling her Numptiness "No" then you're definitely on the block list; it's pretty much a coin flip otherwise.
She most definitely lives off of government issued tardbux, but she maintains delusions that people would line up to buy her "art" if that darn dirty Blogger's Trio would stop pointing out what an asshole she is.
Archive of the blogspam posted by Public Observer - apparently Numpty is challenging Lamby to some undeserved recording drawing session. Emmy, Lamby is so out of your league it wouldn't even be funny.
Also, two new usernames have been added to The List that have been/are being used by her Numptiness; pyrounka and Deriun. One is a Discord account name, the other is a Discord display name. This brings the total of confirmed names used by her Numptiness up to 88 and including unconfirmed names up to 114.
So, I take it that these vids are over half an hour in total length? Because she could have spent that time cleaning her pigsty of an apartment. Seriously, I can see some old bones of an cloned cat within that mess.
If she really doesn't want to deal with troublemakers or drama, why does she come here and why keep harassing the blogging trio? Emmy-poop is a coward and it seems that the people she blocks, she does it because they told her "no" or they told a truth she couldn't handle. It's also why she hides in her profile, because the coward knows her lies are going to be called out, here in the thread.
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If she really doesn't want to deal with troublemakers or drama, why does she come here and why keep harassing the blogging trio? Emmy-poop is a coward and it seems that the people she blocks, she does it because they told her "no" or they told a truth she couldn't handle. It's also why she hides in her profile, because the coward knows her lies are going to be called out, here in the thread.
She only says those yet contradict all of them because she is a massive pussy that is too lazy and fat, and refuses to do anything that she claims she has the balls to do it.
Alright, this Sysaphus is ready to roll her boulder up the hill. @SamanthaPrater , some criticism and advice since you still beg for it in veiled ways before rejecting it.
Your writing examples are shit, many people have described why, but the biggest is you don't have a fleshed out thought with a matching image. Your image should back up a description and help you along with imagining it, not be something random.
Here's a thing I've been working on for fun, (and yet to finish lmao) it honestly took longer to think of a story around it.
A corresponding description should go something like this:
Amongst the lochs that snaked into the seas, and isolated pools that appeared during low tide, sat a strange beast that defied description. Something furred like a mammal, yet was cloaked in vines, leaves and petals that appeared like an extravagant headdress of some foreign noble, though was not just cloaked, but growing, a natural crown for a king of beasts. Horns were stained red on one side, like a reindeer that recently shed its' felt, but bone stained so vibrantly, it brought one to think of the corals in the ocean.
Similarly, its' tail seemed a curious vine of both seaweed and fern, with an equally perplexing growth that also made one think of coral.
Most perplexing of all, though, was the very body of the creature. Long and serpentine, yet furred. Forelimbs a strange mixture of paw and webbing like a salamander, while the hind legs were closer to a bastardization of a hand, perhaps some sort of lizard? But what lizard was furred, seemed to swim in the ocean, yet also carried upon it tropical plants that could not withstand seawater?
Every step that followed the beast seemed to blossom with wild grasses and weeds, digging into the ground with its' green claws next to one of the seaside pools seemed to being forth equally strange lifeforms, diminuative, but no less impressive. Was this a miracle made flesh? Or a cursed demon that wrapped itself in lies to fool the mind, lending one to approach for their demise?
This is an example of environmental storytelling, or what would be considered a building scene. It focuses more on what's happening in a more flowery description, vs something called either perspective storytelling, or character storytelling. Perspective would be telling a story through the view of a character instead of a narrative perspective. Narrative is what I just did, describing things through the lense of a narrator.
Character story telling can be 1st, 2nd or even 3rd person perspective, though is usually told through 3rd or 1st person. Something focusing on a character or their view would look like this:
perspective:
The beast watched the newcomer with great interest, staring them down as it meandered to her favorite spot. "I do wonder, will this human be friend, or foe? No matter." She thought to herself, "it will fall, regardless." Folding her paws to be more comfortable, her gaze felt like beams of light, boreing through the newfound tresspasser. A sense of superiority washed through her, relaxed. She saw no-one as a threat.
Character: The adventurer could only watch in silence as the creature seemed to glide across the ground, a body larger than a draft horse moved as silently as an owl flew, dread, awe and fear bubbled inside them, telling (name of adventurer) to run.
A good story should have a blend of 2 or 3 of these, there are a lot more ways to tell a story, but these are the most commonly used. A good story should go:
-world building
-First scene
-character description
-character interaction
-plot point
-challenge
-second scene
And so on.
Amongst the crumbling section 8 quality government subsidized housing, a great and terrible beast dwelt. Its pendulous breasts hosted a pair of disgusting areolas pointed in two different directions like the googlie eyes of the Cookie Monster. Its own eyes were hidden under spectacles with glass thick as the bottom of a soda bottle. Its wide jaw hung slack as if its inhuman teeth were not meant to fit in such a wretched abyss. The hair on its malformed abomination of a head was dripping with liquid lipid secretions, creating a horrifying nest of stringy, sour smelling strands. When the beast spoke, its voice was as if a thousand damned souls were lamenting an endless eternity of the most horrendous tortures ever thought up by either men or demonkind. The beast opened its abysmal maw, pieces of rancid meat from a recent feline snack slopped out and fell onto the floor making a disgusting splat. The beast uttered five unholy words, "I AM CALLED EMILY CASSIDY".
