Completed the redo I've been working on for a day or so.
Vaggie
Goddamn, what did Viv do to her? She has no consistent design/backstory/motifs/background. She's the tofu of the group so bland and nothing. She just turned her into a boring lesbian stereotype who hates men and fawns over Charlie. I don't care for her much, nothing for me to attach to.
Old design
Really skinny for a person whos suppose to be a warrior
Her race doesn't add to the story how can she be Salvadorian angel in heaven? Why is there race in heaven/different races of angels?
Muddy design
Another moth motif doesn't really make sense if she's an angel.
Her outfit doesn't fit a warrior she looks like a manager at McDonalds.
Same body type
The X is very confusing and doesn't make sense it also breaks the reveal of her being an angel.
The spear she has is stupid why did Lute let her keep it?
Bad colorscheme
New
Changed her body she's muscular and larger.
She has hyperpigmentation (only because when she was in heaven she was white and because she's becoming a demon she's changing color/will eventually become a full demon)
Changed color scheme
Her motif now is a toy soldier (it makes far more sense for her as a character and her occupations) her body is changing slowly now exposed ball joints on her limbs, mouth hinges, a crank,
Better hairstyle
Gave her an eyepatch (Charlie paints the closed eye for her)
Has a set of armor and the snake on her arm is a weapon. She can kick and throw them at enemies all while holding the chain, it bites and attacks enemies.
The spear isn't hers, but Lucifers.
Story wise
(Going back to Charlie's design)
Charlie helps take care of her while shes injured, hiding her in the castle. Vaggie now fallen feom heaven is already semi transformed into a demon. As she is in critical condition her body is adapting and more suseptible to hells environment. She heals relatively quick.
The longer she stays in hell the more she turns into a demon. It's very painful as her entire biology is changing, organs rearranging. Limbs changing and snapping/becoming new versions of her limbs and her blood is turning. She coughs out glowing golden blood, that's turning black in front of her. The thought and sins of hell slowly infests her mind, making her feel crazy.
Charlie takes care of her. Charlie being very lonely quickly attaches to her, having playdates and playing games with Vaggie as she recovers. Vaggie seeing that the Anticrist is not as evil as she believed is in debt to her.
Charlie is taken aback by her loyalty doesn't accept her commitment fully and states that her friendship is enough.
Vaggie agrees, but still states she will protect her like she did for her in her time of need.
In Lucifers castle there is sets of armor and battle equipment from his youth and even Lucifers angelic weapon (a prototype of the angelic spears). Vaggie takes one of his armors, and the spear in order to protect them.
Vaggie acts much like her bodyguard all while trying to blend in with the demons of hell. She is constantly on edge, which comes across as being grumpy and angry. She is extremely careful to never get hurt or cut as to reveal her blood. And hides when she coughs up the blood/ losing her mind.
She uses the hotel subtlety to attone for her sins and crimes. She herself wants redemption for all of the sinners she's killed as if the Antichrist could be "good" than maybe some of the sinners were.
As she watches sinners actually getting better in the hotel, she wonders why isn't she getting better.
This guilt grows and is slowly consuming her, and her mind changing it becomes her own prison. As she's becoming more demonic she begins to break her down.
Charlie comforts her and tries to do things with her to help, it gives Vaggie a sense of comfort and peace.
The demons in the hotel form a sense of comradery. Something Vaggie isn't use to because of her colder military life before. This is something new and she feels oddly afraid of it, yet wants to keep this feeling.
Eventually Lute and Adam during an extermination recognizes Vaggie in the battle. Seeing the pain hell is causing her, and that she's losing her grip on herself.
Seeing how close she is to Charlie they to tempt her to betray and kill Charlie. If she can do that they would forgive her, bring her back home and give her wings back. That if she goes back to heaven she'll change back and won't have to suffer.
She now has a choice to betray her found family for the family who abandoned her or stay in hell where she might become a full demon and lose herself.
As always
This one is a little harder for me as Vaggie is such a nothingburger. Also if anyone could suggest a rename for her I'd appreciate it. I can't think of one for her that fits her currently that isn't default "
Vagina"