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Scales and Honor: The Dragon's Paladin - Part 4
During the last chapters, Veledar escapes captivity with Arcturus' help and drags him along, they start bonding with each other while going through the fairy realm, and stumble across Lyndis again who joins their quest. While on the way to Lumara's capital city, they fight off some beasts as filler and Veledar decides to take the group on a detour to Drakenburg to hopefully reunite with his mother. Let's see how that turns out.
They're only a few miles away from the busy Drakenburg at this point and we learn that Veledar was bitching to Arcturus and Lyndis for a while off-screen about having to disguise himself, saying he's only doing it to "stop their nagging." He says in response to Lyndis' sarcasm that he doubts any teams sent to capture him would be effective without Arcturus, but she tells him to shut the fuck up and do it already. Veledar casts his spell to shrink himself and, at Lyndis' suggestion that it could "give away his secret," hide his wings so he could pass as a drake. All Lyndis has to say is that it could be better and, after Veledar gripes about how ugly he is, they all basically shrug their shoulders and start to head in.

I know it's said in Chapters 1 and 3 that lizard people aren't prosecuted in Lumara, but that seems unnecessarily risky considering how close Drakenburg is to the capital. Very luckily for the party, all Arcturus has to do to throw off suspicions is to lie that the 'drake' is a dragon-hunting one from Rothdell. Despite most people if not everybody believing them, Veledar's pride is just so bruised at how some of the merchants they encounter on the way to Drakenburg are so amazed that they offered to buy him, and he basically cusses Arcturus out for being exposed to "such indignities." His attitude shifts when they enter the town proper and as Veledar excitedly looks around at all of the banners with a silver dragon on it, an old woman with a "conspicuously clean" green dress walks up from her cart to chat about the 'drake.'

Arcturus gets goosebumps for seemingly no reason as Lyndis repeats the Rothdell lie and says drakes are good at recognizing dragons they hunt, much to Veledar's displeasure. The old woman, later said to be Lida, presses them about why they're looking for the silver dragon since the dragoness was Drakensburg's protector for years. Some of the townsfolk stop to listen and give the party dirty looks as Arcturus denies being a dragon hunter and asks about the dragoness' location. She doesn't buy it and all she says is that the dragoness hadn't been seen for five years and dragons perceive time differently than humans. Lida all-but-outright says that she recognizes Arcturus and tells the party to fuck off, saying nobody's going to help them find her, just as several guards walk up to the group.

She tries to make nice with them, but one of them smacks her hand holding a brooch away and tells her to stop lying since none of the guards has ever seen the dragoness. He and the guards laugh at the mistreatment and walk away, which apparently convinces Lida that the party is telling the truth and repeats her question on what they want with the dragoness. Lyndis answers that they just want to talk to her, and Lida basically says that she knows Veledar is really a dragon since she can spot spells and wishes them luck. However, she cryptically warns them that "to find this town's protector will only bring about hardship and misery," and she and her cart vanish on the spot as soon as Arcturus and Lyndis turn to look at her.

We get a Marvel moment where Veledar quips "well that just happened" and shrugs it off like before, instead complaining that he's hungry. Arcturus, for his part, is stunned at the disappearance since Lida didn't seem to have any magic crystals and is implied to cost a lot of magic to pull off, speculating whether she's an illusion. Lyndis replies that if it was, it's a damned good one considering the illusion seemed like it was really alive. After eating some below-average lunch outside when the innkeeper doesn't allow any sort of pets inside, they decide to ask around about Lida and the dragoness with Lyndis splitting up from the pair. During the information gathering, he learns that the news of Arcturus' disappearance wasn't as widespread as he initially thought and nobody outside of Lida recognized him.

After the first couple hours went nowhere, he and Veledar finally get a break at sundown in the form of a young girl. According to her, the dragoness' lair is located in the northwestern mountains, guarded by an intense snowstorm. While they were returning to the inn, however, they find themselves ambushed by a group of human thugs who want to forcefully buy the 'drake' or they will beat the shit out of Arcturus. The thugs choose to disregard the pair threatening to kill them if they don't back off, believing they will win since they outnumber Arcturus and the 'drake,' and so we get another fight scene. While one of the thugs manage to get a couple good hits in, it's clear that they don't stand a chance against the experienced paladin and the dragon.

One man's throat gets slashed, the second has his hand cut off, a chunk of the third man's arm is ripped off by Veledar, the fourth was shoved to the ground hard enough that something cracked, the fifth one gets vertically slashed "from balls to chin," and the sixth one was shot in the back by an arrow. The last four thugs grow a couple brain cells and cut their losses, running away for their lives. As the pair loot the corpses, Arcturus notices the arrow and realizes that someone decided to help out. Veledar smells the arrow to try to find out who they are, but doesn't recognize anything other than the scent having an "earthy tinge" unlike humans.

They banter some more, with Veledar teasing about how it's like Arcturus is in love with him and the human teasing him back, and make their way back to the inn while keeping an eye out for any danger. On the way, Arcturus internally gets annoyed at how there isn't a single guard anywhere to be found patrolling the streets and briefly thinks about Gus and Elizabeth. They meet up with Lyndis inside of the inn and when the pissed-off innskeeper tries to order them to take their 'pet drake' outside, Veledar yells back that he isn't a pet to anyone and that if he wants to kick out someone with a heavy coin pouch, that's fine by him. The paladin gets annoyed again at the 'drake' blowing his cover like that, but it does make the innskeeper change his tune and apologize, just telling Veledar to behave instead.

The party places their order and Lyndis tells the human and dragon what she learned: there's a path they can use to go up the mountains that the villagers hide from outsiders and the guards, although she confirms what Lida said about nobody seeing the dragoness for five years since people stopped going up there. The path itself should be safe, but the half-elf also confirms the part about the snowstorm. Lyndis says they'll leave first thing in the morning, especially since she stole a small brooch that they need to get past the storm safely. When the other two ask her to explain where she got it from, she elaborates that she stole it from a man named Knives, who's the boss of the other thugs in town and is the reason why the guards aren't around at night.

After some more food and drink, especially for Veledar, he and Arcturus wind up having to cuddle in a single room again. We end the chapter off with a bit of Veledar kicking Arcturus off the bed over some teasing about being called a pet and some more banter between the two happens before they go to sleep again.
Outside some foreshadowing from a mysterious lady and the fight scene, this one's mostly just information gathering and setting things up for later. Again, not a lot to say here.
Remember Knives? Lyndis urgently wakes the pair up and explains he found out about the theft earlier than planned and is one unhappy camper about it. She says they need to head out right now as the party hear sounds of thugs loudly searching her room, who are saying that the boss wants the half-elf alive. Arcturus and Lyndis shut down Veledar's wish to fight them since the inn would get caught in the crossfire and they all leave through a window. The half-elf ushers the human and dragon to a nearby alley and see a large group of "men and women of different races," around the front of the inn.

Arcturus only takes a few steps to follow Lyndis sneaking away, but they hear the innskeeper inside pleading he doesn't know where the "princess" went, which gets him some kind of injury and thrown out the door like a ragdoll. His wife rushes out to his aid asking why the hell a princess would be here just as two half-ogre thugs burst out of the inn and start to beat the shit out of him. Lyndis starts to leave the innkeeper and wife to their fates, ushering Arcturus and Veledar to do the same, but the paladin's loyalty to his oaths stops him from doing that. Instead, he draws his sword and shield, walks out in front of the group, and demands they let the man and woman go.

The thugs react to that and his threats thusly.
After the second round of laughing, a half-elf man in fancy clothes with gold runes steps forward from the group, Knives himself, to tell Arcturus to piss off if he knows what's good for him. When the paladin points out that showing himself is dumb, Knives disagrees since he owns the town and claims he could murder the "random lowlife who stole his daddy's armor" in front of everyone without consequences. The human isn't intimidated by the group's size and basically tells him to bring it, which Knives nonchalantly obliges. It's mentioned that Arcturus could feel Lyndis glaring at him, "scolding him for his actions," and he thinks about Selina again as he slices off an approaching half-ogre's arm in one swing.

The gang practically rush him after that and it's made clear with the number of hits he's taking that if it wasn't for Matilda's armor, he'd be dead already. He puts up a good defense, but eventually finds himself disarmed and surrounded. A cocky Knives asks for his last words or the location of the princess, but Veledar and Lyndis soon come to the rescue with the dragon killing several of the thugs with a fireball. For their part, the elf innkeeper and his wife finally make it to safety while all this is going on. The ensuing fight leaps in the party's favor especially since, as they are cutting down the thugs like butter, the mysterious helper from the previous chapter decides to assist them again by shooting a couple others with their arrows.

Knives knows that his chances of victory is getting slimmer by the second and tries to retreat during the slaughter, but Lyndis jumps in front of him to prevent that. He says it's "best for both sides" that he let her keep the brooch and that they won't hear from him and his gang again, although Lyndis knows that's bullshit and basically tells him he's gonna die. With his poor attempt at negotiation failing, he pulls out a dagger intent on fighting himself even though he's practically shitting his pants in fear, especially since a bloody Arcturus has just killed the last thug at that point. The leader never gets that far, however, as he gets shot with an arrow from their mystery helper and Lyndis quickly ends him with a stab through the heart.

With Knives dead on the ground, Arcturus asks why they were calling her princess, but Lyndis says that it's too long and complicated to go into, before the pair hear someone shouting and rush over to their aid. The human and half-elf see an axe-wielding dwarf woman and her bear fending off seven more thugs and they're defending themselves well, with Arcturus and Lyndis soon joining in on the killing as well. After their opponents hit the floor, the half-elf wastes no time looting them, causing Arcturus to shake his head and mentally note that he eventually "has to do something about that habit of hers." To quote a couple lines from the last chapter...
Veledar grinned as he cut one of the man's purses to see what was inside. "I mean, they attacked us, so they were not entirely thinking straight, but mraawr, look! Ten gold pieces!"

Adorable. Arcturus smiled at Veledar, then went to each of the fallen men to retrieve whatever useful belongings they had.
As the dwarf tends to her bear's wounds, they all introduce themselves, with the dwarf's name being Merlia Gallowglar (though her reference sheet spells her last name differently) and the bear's name being Ulga.
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Merlia explains that she was just walking around when she saw Arcturus and Veledar get attacked a chapter ago and decided to help out, prompting her to ask why they're getting so much attention. Arcturus tries to dodge the answer, but the dwarf cottons on that they're on an adventure and wants in on it since she loves them. Persuaded, the paladin tells her about the dragon's book and wanting to get some answers from the king. We get a bit where she doubts that the small 'drake' is really a dragon and is soon corrected by an undisguised Veledar swooping in, much to Merlia's glee and the dragon's ego. The dwarf tells them that she has a camp a couple miles north and that she's coming with them whether they like it or not.

Veledar whines about bringing another person with them "on HIS adventure," Lyndis convinces him that more hands make for better chances at getting the book back, and the party make their way on the snowy trail to the camp. The winds are strong enough that even Veledar is struggling to fly and Lyndis can't stand how cold it's getting, something Merlia doesn't mind. With a strong fire going, Veledar catches the dwarf up on what happened so far and she asks what they want with the dragoness, speculating that he wants to mate with her, which disgusts the dragon as he explains he only wants to visit his mother since it's been years. Arcturus notices that he didn't mention Lida's cryptic warnings at all, thinking he's either ignoring them or just didn't hear her.

Merlia looks a little hurt for a second when Lyndis asks what brought her to Drakenburg, but it disappears just as quickly when she answers she's on an adventure of her own exploring the unknown, wanting to see the world outside of her underground mountain village literally called the "village of stone." She basically considers humans the best race and the party banters some more before settling in for the night. They wake up the next morning and do their morning routines for half an hour, Arcturus practicing with his sword, Veledar flying off to find himself some dinner, and Merlia meditating alongside Lyndis. The paladin then eats and drinks for a bit before his thoughts are interrupted by the dragon returning and looking noticeably worried. Arcturus snarks if he pissed someone off and the dragon warns that there's around a dozen or so Lumarian gryphons and riders headed their way.

Arcturus realizes Veledar forgot to use the camouflage spell and scolds him for it, although they quickly get to business rather than continue arguing. Everybody is packed up in a few moments, although Lyndis and Merlia didn't manage to completely prepare their spells before they got the news. Lyndis tells the others that they'll follow the path to the passage point and lose their pursuers in the snowstorm, and the party promptly hauls ass. As they push their horses, Arcturus begins to have doubts that he'll be able to claim responsibility or that he'll be capable of swinging his sword against his former comrades if they catch up.

The party soon only has a mile to go, but two gryphons catch up to Veledar and tackle him onto the ground, yelling at him to surrender. Arcturus turns his horse around and runs over to him just as the dragon knocks one out and grabs the other one's neck, pleading Veledar to spare them. Veledar's pissed off, but stays his hand for now as he argues that it's either them or the pursuers that blindly follow their king knowing he wants the dragon dead, and Veledar will kill them before he's locked up again. The paladin appeals to the dragon's morality, bringing up how he's not like Dread Flame, but Veledar's claws will "forever be stained with the blood of the innocent" if he goes through with the deed.

After a few moments, his words get through to Veledar, persuading him to drop the gryphon and let Lyndis put him to sleep with a charm. Lyndis and Merlia are tasked with concealing the group and shooting down their pursuers respectfully, and I guess the women were at Arcturus' side the whole time and...just did nothing and stayed silent until they were addressed. Merlia praises Arcturus' mercy, who responds by saying they are better than people like Knives who kill anyone in their way and use fear and intimidation as weapons, and the party gets moving again. However, they don't run for long as the rest of the pursuers catches up to them as well, landing around the party and forcing them into defensive formations.

Among the gryphons is SkyWing, who tells one of his men to shut up when he's surprised about the paladin's survival, saying that they have to capture the dragon at all costs. Arcturus tries to persuade him to stand down so he can talk to whoever's in charge, but Skywing tells him to shove it since he knows the paladin helped Veledar escape, and orders his soldiers to attack. Arcturus knows that the party's chances were slim, but he reminds Veledar about sparing innocents and charges towards Skywing nonetheless. He's almost immediately thrown off his horse and pinned down by another gryphon tearing at his armor, who Arcturus knocks out with a hard punch to the face and a bash from his sword.

When he gets back up to assess the battle, he finds that his horse was killed, Merlia and Lyndis are nowhere to be seen, and Veledar managed to KO three gryphons and is currently fighting off four more. Arcturus manages to race over there just as their opponents are about to pin the dragon down, freeing him by bashing one with his shield and pulling another one's tail as a distraction. The squad's leader shows concern for his two fallen comrades, but even when the human and dragon point out that they're still breathing, this does nothing to dissuade the gryphons from continuing their attack. More and more gryphons show up and force the pair on the defense, but the fight gets interrupted by a gryphon rider yelling out to stop, revealed to be none other than Garroth from Chapter 3.

He's accompanied by ten more riders as he demands to know what the hell Veledar did with Arcturus, declaring that he's going to pay for all of his crimes. Veledar repeats that his only crime was being in Lumara's lands and points out the paladin right in front of him. Garroth is relieved that Arcturus is alright, although he denies the paladin's request to leave peacefully since the king wants him back and the dragon captured. With another fight imminent, Veledar makes the first move, grabbing Arcturus and taking off into the sky. Garroth orders Veledar shot down as the human and dragon realize with the sudden appearance of intense storm clouds a few moments later that they're getting closer to the passage point.

Arcturus and Veledar get higher and higher as the storm grows more intense with each passing second, but Veledar is wounded from the fight and struggles to flap his wings in the strong winds. Despite the dragon's boast about how they oh-so-obviously escaped by outflying them, twelve other gryphons close in on the pair. While Veledar thinks that the snowstorm will dissuade their pursuers, Arcturus reminds him that the both of them are still in danger since Lyndis and Merlia have the brooch for safe passage. He hears Garroth and another gryphon yelling that they're coming to save the paladin, ignoring Arcturus saying otherwise, just as the gryphons finally catch up to engage the dragon for the second time.

Veledar tries his best, but he's outnumbered and racking up injuries fast. Just as it seems like he's gained an opening, they pounce right back on top of him. Two of the gryphons focus their attention on freeing Arcturus as the others claw into the dragon's flesh and wings. Soon, they succeed in prying Arcturus off and the other one gets ready to catch him as he falls, but they either miss or Veledar swipes them away, leaving the paladin in a free fall. He realizes that he's about to die just as he sees Veledar use a lightning spell that forces the other gryphons to put up their own magic shields to deflect it, both of which takes a big toll on all of them. With the gryphons pacified and Arcturus rushing towards his demise, he internally begs Veledar to be selfish for once and save himself instead of throwing his life away.

We get a perspective switch as Veledar decides not to be like Dread Flame and risk everything to save Arcturus, diving towards him. Nothing else matters. He's going to give Lumara a story of a heroic dragon, whose name will be spoken in every human settlement as a protector. Veledar tucks his wings and limbs in to make himself fall faster, ignoring his instincts yelling at him to back out. As he closes in, however, the dragon quickly realizes that just grabbing Arcturus and suddenly opening his wings will seriously injure the human due to whiplash and tear Veledar's membranes.

They finally reach each other and Veledar pulls Arcturus close as he tries to slowly open his wings to slow the fall, but it's not going to be enough no matter how wide he opens them. It's only a few seconds now before they crash and Veledar only sees one option left. He asks Arcturus to "remember this part of the story" and flips his body around so he faces the brunt of the crash. And with that, they finally hit the ground, Veledar's bleeding and broken body skidding across the snow before slowing to a stop. The dragon tries to stay conscious, but his injuries are too much. Coughing blood from internal bleeding, the pain begins to die down along with his vision until darkness finally takes him.
Merlia has joined the party, and right before the first part of this book's climax that only happens because Veledar forgot to use the camouflage spell. Still, he makes up for it at the end of the chapter. Garroth wants his friend to come back, but neither he or Arcturus is willing to compromise. Will they make up later or will it end in another tragedy?
Arcturus wakes up moments after the crash, alive but injured. He looks around the area and "the compressed snow he had tumbled on when he hit the ground" and thinks they're in some wild area before he remembers what just happened. Through twisted ribs and sore limbs that weigh him down, he painfully stumbles his way to Veledar's bloody and broken body some distance away. Wait, wasn't it mentioned a page ago that Veledar held onto you for the entire crash?
He clutched Arcturus tighter as they skidded through the soft snow, leaving behind splotches and streaks of red.
As a reminder, I'm reading the published version and not the free one on Sofurry. Either the author was not paying attention or his editor was not. Anyways, Veledar miraculously wakes up as well although he's on death's door, with the dragon coughing up blood from who knows how many internal injuries. The paladin sheds some tears seeing his friend still alive, but knows that he's not in any position to heal him. When he tries to tell Veledar not to get up and make his wounds worse, Veledar reminds him that their pursuers are still tracking them down, not helped with the fact that gryphons can smell blood. Arcturus initially sees nothing but snow and winds, but then "as if by a miracle," soon spots a big cave closeby.

Realizing that they might have a shot at eluding the search party if Veledar can get an illusion spell up, he encourages the dragon to use what little strength he has left to get inside and does his best to help. As Veledar gets up and slowly walks to the cave, coughing even more blood all the while, Arcturus hears one of the pursuing men spot the bloody streaks and ordering the others to spread out to search the area. Thankfully for the pair, nobody can see more than a few feet in front of them in the snowstorm. They soon make it inside of the cave, but Veledar's strength runs out and he collapses. The paladin scrambles for the medical box that has some "bandages, materials for stitches," and the two healing potions he picked up during Chapter 3.

He tries to assure Veledar that he'll be fine, although it's clear deep down he knows that it's going to be a tall order and, as Veledar points out, he doesn't stand a chance against the search party getting closer to the cave. Not going to stop him from trying, though. Garroth show up from the storm following the blood trail alongside several of the men and he's berating them, claiming he told them to hold their fire since they could have killed the dragon and paladin. What?
From literally one chapter ago:
"Arcutrus! Incapacitate the red beast! Shoot it down from the sky!" he heard Garroth shout orders as Veledar carried him higher into the sky.
There's also something else I want to point out, but we'll have to wait until Chapter 15 for that. Anyways, Garroth is concerned about Arcturus' survival and calls out for him, causing the paladin to consider if it's a good idea to surrender so he can get Veledar healed damned the consequences, but finds that something's off. The blood trail should've lead the pursuers right to them, but they somehow can't see the rest of it nor even the cave that's right in front of them. Arcturus realizes that Veledar managed to cast the illusion spell, but he has more pressing matters as the dragon's condition is worsening by the second.

He makes Veledar drink the two potions and gets to work on stitching as much of the deep cuts as he could. They converse while he's stitching the dragon up, with Arcturus informing him about how Garroth is a skilled and honorable man, how it wasn't personal since he and the gryphons are just following orders like anyone else, and how he "took the very gryphons [Arcturus] handpicked" to capture Veledar. I was going to bring it up in the last chapter when Arcturus said the gryphons were "specifically requested" by him, but at the time I thought he meant in general over the years. First of all, Arcturus, the king was the one who hand-picked the men and put them under your command; all you did was tell him what kind of people you need. I know the king initially told you to assemble a team with essentially a blank check before changing his mind for some reason, but the beginning of Chapter 5 says the soldiers were assigned by the king, and you know this.
Arcturus stood on the deck of the Indomitous, watching the men assigned by the king -his men now- train for the upcoming task.
Secondly, what gryphons you hand-picked to capture Veledar? Last I recalled, the group that was assigned to you were humans.
From the ramp came a group of humans clad in dark red leathers, swords strapped to their belts, crossbows at the hip, and shields around their backs.
While there was a mention of a gryphon keeper, only one gryphon was mentioned at all that helped track Veledar to his cave and even then, you didn't request for them. During the ambush, the soldiers and sharpshooters were described as humans with no gryphons mentioned at all, not even in a throwaway line like "keep the gryphons on standby in case the dragon gets past us." Gryphons are only mentioned in a plural sense once after Veledar escapes in Chapter 7, but since only one was mentioned before, it's not clear there if he's referring to there being more on the airship or if he's referring to reinforcements from the capital. So in short?

Back to the chapter, the pair banter some more in the middle of stitching, but Veledar eventually closes his eyes for what appears to be the last time. Arcturus practically shits his pants and feels around for a pulse, which is gradually growing fainter. He bangs his fists on the dragon begging him to wake up, that this isn't how a "hero's quest" should end and he has more adventures to go on, humans to amaze, and mates to mount. When the dragon's heart stops, the paladin desperately gives CPR on him with all his might, which successfully restarts it. With a few moments of reprieve, Arcturus pulls out some torches and flint and steel to set up a makeshift campfire, and notices that the cave is much larger than he expected. With the fire lighting up the area, he sees carvings lining the wall and a picture having a "large dragon cradling another one in its paws," which he remembers represents Bahamut.

Veledar's breathing starts to get ragged again and Arcturus tearfully admits he's run out of options to keep him alive for even a moment longer. Unsurprisingly, the potions and stitches barely did shit, and all he can do is watch the "first friend [he] made in a long time" fade away just like his son did. After admitting that he's not a religious man, especially after his family died, he's going to try to pray to the gods as a last ditch move. Closing his eyes, he thinks of Bahamut and screams, pleading for her to save Veledar's life, despite knowing that a God probably won't give a shit about a mortal. After he prays for his friend to be healed for some time, he begins to feel a similar sensation akin to entering the fairy realm earlier. When he opens his eyes again, he's surprised to find himself not on his knees in the cave, but floating in a massive thunderstorm.

He thinks that it's a dream, but he continues to plead for Veledar's life nonetheless. A few seconds later, the surprise tool big as hell silver goddess herself appear from the clouds. When he explains what's going on with Veledar, Bahamut asks why she should care about a dying dragon since everybody dies eventually; it's how the world works. Arcturus sees that she's at least paying attention to him and says that he's not asking her to "fight against the way of the world," but just to give Veledar a second chance. This still fails to convince her since it's all the same to her and claims that intervening is impossible, getting angry when the human says otherwise.

She softens up when he tells her through tears that Veledar saved his life at the cost of his own, but she's still not budging on breaking "one of the most ancient rules of this world." However, when he says that he'll take whatever punishment or do anything to save his life, she becomes interested. Arcturus knows based off some stories that it's a bad idea to make deals with entities "outside the material realm" like Bahamut, but the thought of Veledar causes him to confirm that he'll "go to the void" and back and do anything she asks to save the red dragon. Bahamut then creates a pedestal with a sword in it out of thin air, not saying a word.

Arcturus floats over to the sword and gets the sensation of power coursing through him, the kind that would take over the world, smite the strongest of evils, and make people revere him like a king. He quickly snaps out of it since that's not what he wants and complains that she's wasting time toying or testing him while Veledar is dying, although she clarifies that time isn't exactly a factor for the both of them. Since power is out of the question, he tries another approach: touching her snout and imagining Veledar protecting innocents, his paladin vows, and his wife and son. When he affirms that he only want to heal and protect people, this finally moves Bahamut to act. She shrinks herself and flies straight into his heart, which is pretty painful. She tells him that he will act as her paladin and "bestow [her] light upon [his] wounded friend, along with anything else that follows."

The clouds clears away to show the stars, where the "shapes of thousands of dragons" turn around to look at him. He's amazed at the sight and, after a flash of light, finds himself back in the cave with Veledar with his hands giving off a "faint radiance." Seemingly without thinking, he's using his newfound magical powers to heal the dragon's wounds and Veledar soon opens his eyes once more, which overjoys Arcturus into hugging him. After Veledar awkwardly returns it, the dragon figures out that the human used some kind of magic since the stitches obviously didn't help, and he licks at Arcturus' face and tears. We get some more banter, teasing from Arcturus about how Veledar is so falling in love with him, and the chapter ends with the pair cuddling again with Arcturus mentally thanking Bahamut and promising to be her champion.
The second half of the climax, but also the part where some obvious issues cropped up like Garroth's orders. The foreshadowing about Bahamut finally pays off here, but I still have questions about why she appeared to Arcturus and his son in their dreams despite neither of them knowing who she was. Was it destiny? A coincidence? Her response when he says he knows her doesn't give any answers one way or the other. Maybe we'll find out later on.
Some time after they wake up, Arcturus tells Veledar what happened after the crash. The dragon, of course, is ecstatic about it and calls Bahamut a better god than the others, although he still thinks humans are "puny" compared to him. After a bit of teasing, though, he sincerely thanks the paladin for saving his life and knows he owes him big time even if they succeed in their quest. Veledar then asks Arcturus' if his powers can materialize the dragon's belongings and, while Veledar internally states that his "dismissal" of the human's healing was intended to be a joke, Arcturus doesn't pick up on it and asks if Veledar's going to say "something significant" apart from praising himself.

The dragon then basically downplays Arcturus' role in getting Bahamut to heal him as "a little help," saying the human's just a "vessel to a much higher power." Arcturus grows a pair and snarks that maybe he won't do anything next time Veledar's dying so he can see "how a greater species deals with crippling, life-threatening injuries." Since it's getting a little too heated for Veledar's liking, he changes topics to finding Lyndis and Merlia. However, after he struggles to get up for a few minutes and refuses the human's help out of pride, they get sidetracked by the carvings on the cave wall. He asks about how Arcturus feels about being an actual paladin instead of a "pretender" and he, after some back and forth, answers that it's like a curtain that warms his cold body and eases his headaches and illnesses.

Veledar admits to not knowing everything about himself despite being over a century old and he mentally repeats that, save for his birth mother and adoptive mother, he owes Arcturus more than anyone. He only gave his name to someone he previously thought as a "toy with benefits" out of trust "rather than complete fondness," but what the human did isn't something a simple friend does. The pair banter about Veledar's dirty thoughts about females and how Arcturus is "corrupting" the dragon, and Veledar proposes that the human reads from one of his mother's tomes in her hoard about divine blessings so he can get started practicing with his powers. After some teasing on Veledar's end about how Arcturus still owes him financially for mostly petty shit, he decides to give the paladin some tips about casting a magic bolt. Evidently, Arcturus does it successfully on his first try.

Arcturus asks Veledar if he was afraid while trying to run from the gryphons two chapters ago and, while he tries to deny it, it's pretty clear to the human that he was. It's at this point that Veledar realizes that there's a familiar scent about the cave they're in, and we learn from his thoughts that he actually didn't cast the illusion spell to hide from Garroth and the pursuers; it was there the whole time. The human denies that Garroth was just blind when Veledar asks about it and says it might be smarter to stay where they are while the dragon recovers, since Garroth or his lookouts could still be around.

Some more teasing happens when Veledar tells Arcturus about how seemingly familiar the cave is, and he asks for more info about Garroth. Arcturus explains that he met and befriended Garroth in Rothdell while they were securing one of the villages and fought off a big earth elemental that Rothdell summoned. The dragon then asks why Arcturus never went on his own adventures, but changes the subject when the paladin starts angsting about how his family was still at home when he last sparred with Garroth. Elizabeth, Gus, and Swiftwing are brought up again as Arcturus' friends and Veledar mentions two gryphons he met a few years ago named Rundak and Vik who "paid him tribute" after some wine. The female dragon he mentioned back in Chapter 9 and has fond memories of called herself Pale Lightning (real name: Zyadel)

The paladin manages to magically "apply some sort of enhancement" to his sword and the two of them banter some more about the dragon's cuddling before Veledar decides to get some rest. Cue another dream sequence where Veledar hears Arcturus calling his name before suddenly dropping like a sack of potatoes. A mysterious figure approaches him sword in hand and they briefly fight before Veledar pins the figure down. As he's struggling to bite him, the room changes again to a throne room where the figure also changes to Arcturus. Despite obviously not wanting to kill his friend, he realizes he can't move his body which is acting on its own, determined to do the deed. Arcturus yells at him to fight back and Veledar barely manages to move his head to avoid hitting the human with his fire breath. As soon as that happens, however, Veledar begins to fall again, this time accompanied by his playful silver brother.

Helpless to do anything, he finds himself reliving the memory of his brother getting shot through the chest and plummeting towards the ground. Veledar begs to return to the cave, but it then basically fast-forwards him to a different cave. The brother's death is presumably still only a little bit ago as his mother is comforting a younger crying Veledar and Adalina, telling them that the pain will pass with time. He insists otherwise, saying he hates the humans for taking his sibling away, but she reminds him not to judge a whole race from the actions of a few; humans lose family members too. She reassures him that she "took care" of the murderers and it's pretty clear even at his age what she means by that, but even she admits that dragons can't be brought back from the dead.

As she tells him that Bahamut will take care of the brother in the afterlife, they grieve together and Veledar wakes up from the dream, finally realizing that the familiar scent was actually his mothers. We get a comedy moment where Arcturus refuses to let the dragon go since he's a good blanket and only relents after a roar, as Veledar tells him about it. It's not her actual home, though, since it's much bigger and "far better looking" than this cave. Knowing they're both hungry, Veledar talks about how he'd go for some sheep roast with thick spicy sauce. Lo and behold, it's magically appears to them on a literal silver platter, much to their surprise. The dragon helps himself to it and, at Arcturus' request, summoning up a large banquet table with a large variety of food and wine along with four chairs for the pair and for Merlia and Lyndis when they "stumble upon" the cave.

The pair wastes no time filling their stomachs and Arcturus asks a little later about where Veledar's mother is. Veledar doesn't know, but he figures that she's just out at the moment. When Arcturus worriedly points out that a dragon's perception of time is different than for humans, the dragon dismissively says that she'll back in a day or two, and basically tells the human to keep feasting while they wait for the women to show up. Arcturus agrees with the plan since Lyndis and Merlia will find the cave eventually with the brooch, and they soon get themselves drunk on the wine whilst talking about what they do for fun and about the differences between mating and dancing between dragons and humans. Veledar teases Arcturus for "studying dragon anatomy" in what's probably the most NSFW moment in the whole book, we learn that Arcturus likes to paint dragons, and then Veledar asks the human what he knows about a dragon's weak spots.

Since he's aware that a dragon's wings are both weak and sensitive, Arcturus decides to get revenge for some of Veledar's past actions and starts tickling him. We get an...awkward usage of the word "pause" when Veledar begs him to stop. After he does stop, they decide to wrestle each other, with Veledar having the sense of mind to magically make himself lighter to not crush Arcturus. This goes on for a bit until Veledar emerges victorious, although he doesn't like it when Arcturus plays dead. When the human doesn't appear to be breathing, he moves in to breathe air into Arcturus' lungs in a form of CPR, but a familiar voice chimes in from the cave's entrance.

In a case of bad timing, Lyndis and Merlia finally arrived and they waste no time teasing the fuck out of them for what the women think is a make out session. Arcturus is fine, by the way. The half-elf and dwarf make their way to the table to feast as Arcturus asks how they managed to get to the cave, and the chapter ends with Lyndis telling her story.
A lighter chapter for the most part to cool off from the last two, with the pair learning more about the cave they're in and us learning a bit more about how Veledar's brother died. I'm a little surprised the brother's name isn't mentioned yet considering how Veledar clearly cared for him, though. I'm also a little surprised that Lyndis and Merlia being MIA isn't more worrying to Arcturus and Veledar, but that could probably be chalked up to them knowing the women's capabilities or something.
Fittingly, for the first time, we start from Lyndis' POV when the fight first started in Chapter 12, with her horse being killed like Arcturus' own. None too pleased with the animal's demise, she pulls her rapier and rolls out of the way before a gryphon can grab her. She internally comments about how the gryphon isn't bad looking and feeling some slight regret over what she was about to do, but that's war for ya. After they have some verbal exchanges, Lyndis uses her Mirror Images spell to create copies of herself and the gryphon attacks. While he manages to guess and target the real Lyndis, she still dodges and stabs into his side. He refuses to stand down when the half-elf tells him to and declares he'll never stop hunting her until his last breath, even though he's badly bleeding from her stabbing his main blood vessel.

The stubborn gryphon hits one of her copies when he pounces again and Lyndis stabs him on his other side, which finally makes him fall to the ground. He tells her to make it quick, but a certain "something" inside of her is stopping her from granting it and she decides to save his life. Pulling out a healing potion, she forces it down his throat and patches him up with some bandages. She's wary of the gryphon possibly attacking her at any time, but he fortunately decides not to as she tells him to live another day and "let [his] commander know who spared [his] life." While he says that the others probably won't listen, he promises to never forget the act of mercy. The moment is interrupted by the sound of a certain dragon's roar and she promptly runs towards where she heard it.

She complains internally on the way about why the hell she spared him after what Lumara did, speculating whether or not her people would think of her as weak or a traitor. It's quickly brushed aside as she tries to come up with a plan on getting the party out of this predicament, and she arrives just in time to see Veledar grabbing Arcturus and flying off. Garroth responds by ordering his men to-
"Follow them closely, and avoid attacking at all costs. I need Arcturus alive, hear me? I want him alive!" Shouted a man clad in black armor that quickly mounted a gryphon and took off.
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...That's not what he said at all. He clearly ordered his men to shoot down Veledar in Chapter 12. What the fuck is this? I understand if the author didn't want to repeat entire lines of dialogue verbatim, but that's a completely different order. This could have easily been fixed by changing the 'shoot him down' line to the 'don't attack' one or having us see Garroth change his mind about his orders or something.

Getting back to the chapter, Lyndis hides behind a tree, pulls out her map, and sees that she's close to the passage point; all she has to do is get there and let its magical defenses do the rest. Two gryphon riders land close to where she's at and begin searching the area, which she speculates is because of the gryphon she saved a few minutes ago squealing about her. As one of the men claims the boss only wants to talk to the half-elf, she uses an invisibility spell (which only lasts for a minute) and begins to run towards the passage point. Although she's aware that she's acting selfish for sneaking away while her companions are having trouble, she mentally states that it's an advantage and insists to herself that she's not the bad guy here.

Lyndis notices some boot prints accompanied by some large paw prints and is relieved to see that Merlia escaped the initial ambush as well. She follows the tracks as she thinks about a Pegasus human knight named Gerald Wind-chaser and contemplates her leaving Drenedar for adventure instead of "looking pretty and dancing and wasting her time on art." Gerald was saddened to see her go and gave her a sending stone to keep in contact. The tracks soon split and she decides to follow Merlia's prints instead of Ulga's, which proves to be correct as she hears Merlia's shouts in the clearing. Getting closer, Lyndis sees an unconscious gryphon and Garroth holding Merlia up by the throat. He demands to know where Veledar flied off to and he's getting increasingly pissed off at her not taking his questions seriously.

Merlia then says a bear pun to sic Ulga on him and, after some delay, she appears to charge at him. He tries to pull out his energy crossbow, but the bear swipes it away and forces him to quickly back away and draw his sword instead. Lyndis decides now is the best time to intervene and throws an orb of fire at Garroth's back to knock him towards Ulga, who promptly smacks him to the ground. The dwarf and half-elf try to take advantage of this by closing in on him, but he manages to roll away from Ulga in time and get back on his feet. He first deflects Lyndis' attempt at stabbing him and kicks her to the ground, dodges Ulga's attack, then decapitates the bear with one swing. Surprisingly, Merlia doesn't seem all too concerned and complains about how long it will take for Ulga to recover.

The half-elf gets back up while Garroth and Merlia fight. Merlia manages to hit him in the shoulder with her axe and hurt him, but he counters by knocking her unconscious with a hard punch to the face. He says that they're thugs for taking off and attacking Garroth's group. When he's about to start interrogating Lyndis, he gets a good look at her face and recognizes who she is. We then cut back to the present with Arcturus asking how the hell Garroth knows her. Deciding to delay telling the truth, she takes advantage of Arcturus being drunk and lies that he knew from reading the paladin's reports on Veledar. Veledar asks her to continue the story and we cut back to where we left off.

Garroth says that she's the princess of Drenedar and introduces himself. She tries denying it, but he knows she's bullshitting since he saw her eight years ago during he and his gang's visit to Drenedar for a job. He boasts about how everything's going good for him and caps it off by asking if she aims to get revenge for her kingdom. She angrily asks what he means by that and he explains that Lumara and Drenedar signed a non-aggression pact to end the war, much to her anger and shock considering everything Lumara did. Her family apparently decided to see the "light of reason" and claims that it will free the armies to focus on Rothdell. Of course, Lyndis doesn't believe that her parents would just give up without a fight and thinks they might have not been in the "right state of mind" to even consider it.

Elaborating further, Garroth says that they had to stop a band of Pegasus knights from doing hit-and-runs earlier this month, leading a pissed-off Lyndis to ask if Gerald was leading them. He confirms that he did, saying that Gerald and his crew was looking for her, that he was turned over to inquisitors, and says he was paid enough to "turn the other cheek at the distasteful outcome of [their] mission." Blinded by rage, the half-elf recklessly charges at him, which gets her immediately punished with a stab to her side. Blood begins pouring out of her wound as she tries to grab her rapier, but Garroth stops it with his boot. He tells her she's not going to win and that she's coming with him to answer some questions about Veledar, then she'll be sent home. When he impatiently asks her to surrender and "stop being a sore loser," especially since his contract doesn't involve being nice to her, an idea sprouts up in her mind and she pretends to do so.

Grabbing his hand, a blade sprouts from her boot and she kicks up to stab him in the stomach. Garroth is shocked about the surprise attack and says he's going to kill her for that, only to be stopped by Merlia recovering with an arrow ready to be shot. He tries to threaten the dwarf, but she knows it's empty considering he's wounded and outnumbered. Despite this, he refuses to drop his sword and earns himself an arrow to the knee. The two girls start to approach him and Garroth pulls out a horn to alert the other pursuers. With one more arrow that he deflects, he's obviously out for the count as Merlia heals Lyndis with a spell. The two girls get out of the clearing and make their way to the passage point. When the dwarf is asked about it, she tells the half-elf that Ulga's alright since she's really a spirit that takes the form of an animal.

We get a bit where Arcturus and Veledar drunkenly interrupt the story and Merlia has to yell at them to shut the fuck up before continuing. Even though a bunch of gryphons audibly responded to Garroth's call, the half-elf and dwarf don't encounter any of them while moving. Lyndis makes a cringy Skyrim reference almost word-for-word and Merlia points out that, although it bought the girls some time, he's simply going to get the wound healed by a cleric and continue chasing them. It turns out that Merlia overheard Garroth saying Lyndis is a princess, but the dwarf doesn't give a shit. The half-elf likes staying in the shadows, away from people always treating her like royalty or trying to impress her. She asks Merlia to stay quiet about it to Arcturus and Veledar for now because of that, the reputation dragons tend to get with princesses, and because Arcturus might not trust her to not stab Lumara's king when they get close to him.

Lyndis affirms that she would if she got the chance, although she needs information about Drenedar's surrender and Gerald's location first. Although Merlia thinks that the half-elf should tell Arcturus and Veledar sooner rather than later, she agrees to keeping her royal blood a secret for now. The two women continue to follow the map and soon see a landmark in the form of a rock. After a few moments of trying to figure it out, Merlia just kicks the thing and that's what causes a ghostly dragon to suddenly appear from the rock. He introduces himself as Auron and serves the dragoness' guide for mortals that want to visit the dragoness' lair, inquiring about what they want. We get a moment where it's clear he's a magical creation of sorts since he misinterprets Merlia's full name like a robot, pissing her off.

The half-elf gets back on track and says that they're here to meet the silver dragoness. After seeing they have the brooch, the ghost dragon tells the women to follow him to her lair. While on the way there, they try asking him questions about her, but he only responds in simple terms and refuses to answer about where she is. After a bit of walking, Auron points them to a certain cave and says the women's companions are already inside. Merlia and Lyndis get worried when they spot the blood, but are soon relieved to see Veledar and Arcturus unhurt and playing with each other.
Asides from the continuity error with Garroth's orders, it's a serviceable chapter. We get some exposition about Drenedar, a bit of Lyndis' backstory with this Gerald guy, and see how she and Merlia managed to get to the cave themselves. Lyndis keeping her status as a princess a secret could come back to bite her in the ass, though.

Only a few more chapters to go, not counting the bonus story. I'll catch you guys on the next-to-last post for this book.
 
Is Prisoners of Sol (SpacePaladin's new project)... like... good? Has anyone read it? I read the first couple of chapters but then stopped and never picked it up again. Been meaning to go back but I never did.
 
We're almost done with the book. Previously, the party gathered information on Veledar's mother and killed a gang leader, resulting in Merlia eagerly joining their quest just in time for Garroth and some Lumara soldiers to finally catch up. After Veledar almost sacrificed his life for Arcturus and miraculously stumbled upon his mother's cave, the paladin used his new powers gifted from Bahamut herself to heal him. Lyndis and Merlia managed to get to the cave themselves after fighting off Garroth and a couple gryphons, and we start right after the half-elf finished her slightly fabricated story.
I'll spare you guys from the first couple pages: we get some banter between the party, another tickle session from Arcturus to Veledar, some 'accidental' flirting between the two, and them SO denying they have ANY romantic feelings for each other when the women tease them about it. In between those moments, Veledar explains that the food and furniture was either summoned from a secret stash somewhere or outright created when he pictured them in his mind, likely from his mother's spell. The paladin tells the two women what happened while they were separated and shows his magic to a skeptical Lyndis. Their current plan now is to simply wait for the dragoness to return and everybody has their fill at the table.

Arcturus finally decides to ask Veledar what exactly is the book that he wants back so damn badly. He badly tries to dodge the question, but reluctantly reveals after some pressing that it's basically a kids book about a heroic dragon rising up against an evil one and it holds a "strong memory of [his] mother and brother." We learn Merlia's parents can't pull out of a driveway since she has eighteen siblings and that Arcturus apparently smells good and "more like a dragon" to Veledar. The dragon fails to playfully tackle the paladin, and everybody enjoys some darts and more of their dinner before heading off to sleep. While everybody has their own beds for once thanks to the spell, Arcturus can't help but feel "disappointment" about not cuddling with Veledar.

Merlia's out of the cave the next morning, which Arcturus speculates is because she's hunting, and he leaves as well to take a shit. He and Veledar chat for a bit while the dragon follows along with the paladin's sword practices, and Arcturus thinks Garroth's fucked off by now to "explain his failures and honor new contracts" and won't show up again unless they're dumbasses. Dude's really concerned about you, but whatever. Merlia soon returns as everybody has breakfast and she complements humans for inventing coffee. After some teasing towards the dragon, Veledar leaves the table to find the real entrance and the human soon joins him. The dragon explains she moves the entrance around the place on him when he was young and that the cave is actually connected to her hoard on another plane of existance. Despite this, it doesn't take long for him to find it and a large door soon appears, opening up to a tunnel.

Lyndis and Merlia don't seem to care about the sight and keep eating, leaving only Arcturus to follow Veledar inside. The paladin first thinks that the dragoness' hoard is just going to be one large room, despite what Veledar told him not two minutes ago, but then he sees that's a massive understatement once he sees the place. There's "mountains of gold coins" and gems of every color everywhere he turned, along other ginormous amounts of treasure, armor, art, books, weapons, etc, for seemingly miles. We get a bit where Veledar badly lies about how he's totally not jealous about her hoard, and he expresses some bafflement about how the hell she managed to get so much treasure despite never being gone for more than a couple days. He also tries to say he doesn't want to fly ahead to meet her since it'd be rude to leave his friends but, again, Arcturus cottons on that the dragon wants to ask her for help without making it seem like he's swallowing his pride.

They backtrack to the cave entrance where Lyndis is meditating and Merlia's whispering to Ulga, and Arcturus sees that Lyndis repaired his armor with a spell while he was gone. He tells Veledar about how Matilda would love to see him as he suits up and the women follow the guys back to the hoard. They're also as shocked as you'd expect at the sight, especially since Drenedar doesn't have nearly as much treasure according to the half-elf. As they walk along a trail of coins, Veledar tells the party that everything will be passed on to him eventually since his family "left behind" the tradition of burying the treasure along with their dead relatives, and that her mother adopted him when she found him hunting one day. Lyndis gets pissed off when she sees her kingdom's royal carriage and thinks the dragoness stole it, but she immediately calms down and apologizes when he clarifies everything in the hoard is either a gift from good people or stolen from bad people.

According to Veledar, his mother is a "paragon of goodness and an example to all dragon kind" and admits that she's better than him. He tells a story about how she once saved a noble from a bunch of pirates and took the entire "boat of erisaid" when she apparently took the guy's words literally. After a moment where he refuses to tell them her age and Merlia considering having Ulga turn into an animal with wings, Arcturus feels something suddenly shift beneath him. Without warning, the coins he was standing on slides out beneath him and sends the paladin falling down the coin hill. Dodging all of the valuable shit the best he could, he luckily manages to grab a bar to catch himself, although he's fallen far enough that the others are "small specks" above him. Unluckily for him, however, that bar he grabbed turns out to be attached to part of a big spiderweb.

Despite reassurances from Veledar that there couldn't possibly be any spiders anywhere, he's proven wrong by a human-sized spider ambushing Arcturus that he blocks with his shield in the nick of time. The paladin slashes a couple of its legs off with a "flash of white magic" and dodges its attempt to shoot webbing at him, but it disappears before he can get another attack in. By the tme he yells up to the others what's going on, it grows its legs back and teleports back in to continue the fight. It manages to grab his leg, but he quickly kills it with a stab to the head. Arcturus begins to celebrate, but Veledar warns to look behind him as the party starts to go down the hill to assist him. When he turns around, he sees seven more spiders that rush towards him. Arcturus defends himself somewhat well, but their poisonous venom has a bad effect on his armor.

While he does manage to kill another one with a slash that "explodes with magical energy," more and more spiders are teleporting in as more time passes. One of them bites his left shoulder and he gets distracted with that one while another one bites in the less armored portion of his arm. The venom gets into his skin before he could smash his shield into the spider, which shatters it and leaves him in a world of pain. He rolls around to avoid the other spiders, but one of them pins him down and forces him to thrust his arm and sword into the creature's mouth to keep it from biting him, although the other spiders luckily step back to let it finish the job. Just as his arm begins to weaken from the poison, Veledar finally reaches the human and throws the pinning spider off of him.

The fight goes more in their favor, but it's clear to them that they're eventually going to be overwhelmed by the spiders sheer numbers if they don't run, and Lyndis and Merlia evidently have the same thought with how they turned right back around. Veledar tells Arcturus to climb onto his back so they can fly out of there but the spiders have other ideas and trap the dragon using their webbing, leaving the paladin to defend the dragon while he frees himself with his fire breath. Afterwards, Arcturus mounts Veledar and they fly back up to the top of the coin hill. The human thinks the flight is nowhere near as unpleasant as the first three times despite the circumstances, and Merlia asks the obvious question of why the fuck Veledar's mother has big spiders in her hoard.

He admits he doesn't know, especially since she has a spell that could simply get rid of the vermin, and we get some more totally-not-flirting between him and Arcturus. The paladin uses his powers to heal himself and Veledar as Lyndis explains that phase spiders are territorial ones that "make their home in the ethereal plane," thinking the dragoness simply couldn't completely purge them. Veledar gets annoyed at the territorial comment and the party continue their way further into the hoard, with the dragon getting noticeably nervous. Merlia sings a screechy song that annoys the shit out of everybody, but it thankfully doesn't last long as they soon enter what's basically the bedroom. The dragon calls for his mother, but she's still nowhere to be seen and Auron soon emerges to greet the party again. When asked about it, the ghost says that she was instructed to meet Veledar in the bedroom area, and that he was waiting on Veledar to give the word to get rid of the spiders.

Veledar asks Auron where his mother is and Auron vaguely says that their meeting is a protocol she set up. Arcturus can see where this is heading, but Veledar's a bit slow to catch on when he repeats the question a couple times. Eventually, Auron elaborates by saying that she isn't here "because she is nowhere" and that her hoard belongs to Veledar now. The red dragon is in denial at first, but with Lyndis pointing out an oddity and his own ramblings, it eventually sinks in that she's really dead. Lyndis calls Veledar by his real name, but it doesn't register to him as he furiously yells at the others to leave him. Arcturus sees the pain in the dragon's eyes and refuses to budge, and Lyndis tells him to yell if something happens as she leaves along with Merlia.

Despite the dragon screaming at him to fuck off in ALL CAPS and looking like he's about to attack, Arcturus fights the urge to run and calls his bluff. When he rubs Veledar's snout and points out that he would have just flied away if he actually wanted to be alone, he's swept up into a tearful hug. Arcturus says that he saw himself two years ago when he looked at Veledar instead of just a "large angry dragon," and the chapter ends with the paladin comforting and reassuring him that will become as great and heroic as her mother in due time.
A pretty sad chapter for Veledar, even if some of the impact is lessened for me with the death flags I set up earlier. Arcturus steps up to be a great friend for the dragon during his own onset of grief. The stuff with the spiders is also pretty decent foreshadowing right before the reveal proper.
Starting right where the last chapter left off, Veledar flies off to clear his head while Arcturus goes back to Lyndis and Merlia. He looks at a green flag with a "great lion holding a sword and shield" that belonged to the brother-killing hunters and recalls a memory of his mother bringing in the "cursed memento." She said that it's to serve as a reminder and a trophy of her justice, and asked him what he would do if some of them turned up alive. We also get a repeat of there being human blood on her claws which feels a bit redundant. He didn't have an answer at the time, but now he does in the present. While he tries to listen to her wisdom on not judging an entire race for what only a few did and despite knowing she'd be ashamed, he would have rejected her wisdom and "kill any human that sprouted from the legacy of those murderers."

He decides to burn the flag to get rid of the "grim reminder" and flies off again. We get some brief reminisces about how he would play pretend with the boat he mentioned before, how his mother beamed with pride after he learned to glide for the first time, and how his younger self was inspired by the multiple books of heroic dragons on adventures. The happier memories don't really help his depression much, though. As he flies above where Lyndis and Merlia are looking at dwarven beer, though, he finally realizes that Auron told the women his real name. Although they probably would have gotten it out of him eventually, he lands to talk to them about it. Veledar apologizes for his grieving rage, but then we get a bit where the women tease the fuck out of him for his attraction to Arcturus not ten seconds later. Skipping over that for you, he brings up the name thing, but Lyndis and Merlia tell him that they're fine with just continuing to call him Crimson Sky.

Although he appreciates it, he allows them to call him by his real name and asks where Arcturus is. When they say the human's heading to the sleeping area, Veledar makes his way there. He has another memory of him and his mother having fun in the pool (or mini-lake as the book puts it) and angsts some more about how he'll never see her again, as well as not knowing how she kicked the bucket. He knows that telling Avalina the news isn't going to be pleasant when he meets her again, and thinks how dragons not being able to be resurrected with magic, unlike mortals, is a way of "balancing things out" in regards to the advantages of his species. Arcturus finds him while the dragon's deep in his thoughts and skips some stones while Veledar finally gets around to asking Auron to get rid of the phase spiders.

Some brief banter happens and the dragon asks the ghost about their pursuers. Arcturus' assumption from last chapter is proven wrong when Auron says there's still people around the mountain, and Veledar figures they have to stay in hiding for one more day. When he asks the paladin about what he's going to do once they get the book back, Arcturus admits that while he never really put any thoughts into it, he's encouraged by all that's happened so far to leave Entis behind and go on some more adventures, no longer being restrained by his previous job duties. Veledar asks if he'll help him get some answers on what happened to his mother, and Arcturus teases him about the fees the dragon will pay him for it. They sit for a while until their stomachs growl again, and we learn that Veledar considers mortals "too gamy" and "distasteful" when he once tried eating a woman that was causing trouble at a village.

Lyndis and Merlia arrive afterwards, having eavesdropped on the conversation, and Veledar explains the current plan to wait a day for an opening and give Garroth and his gryphons the slip. During that time, Arcturus tries some spell training and Lyndis tells him and Veledar that it'll be better to find someone or something more attuned to "divine magic" to help the human instead of "arcane magic" like how Veledar does his spells. It's soon night time and the party sit around a fire, eat food, tell stories, and stuff like that. The women briefly tease the two dudes about some bad phrasing and as everyone gets into bed later, Veledar realizes that he misses cuddling with Arcturus and the chapter ends with him correcting that with the human's permission.
Probably one of the shorter chapters here, but there's again not much to say here. It's just Veledar angsting about his mother, some more teasing from the women about how him and Arcturus are totally a thing despite the dragon 'just' learning what happened to his mother (even if he took it in stride after his initial shock, it still doesn't seem appropriate IMO), and the plot-relevant part is only near the end.
The first page is just Arcturus and Veledar waking up from their cuddling, which the human says is ruining the idea of sleeping alone for him, and some totally-not-flirty dialogue that they point out the women would tease them some more over. Everybody has their breakfast and Veledar asks Auron to get his mother's gifts he mentioned earlier, telling the others that he also has some items that the others can "borrow" for the quest, something Lyndis is giddy over. Arcturus asks if he really wants to share his things, but Veledar says he trusts them and he'll get the items back. As the dragon's digging through his hoard, Merlia thinks he's going a little crazy, but Lyndis says he's taking the quest more seriously than he usually does and is just using his resources.

Veledar then emerges holding a cloak with a clasp for Lyndis and, after the half-elf assaults him with guesses, says it's a cloak of invisibility. All she has to do to activate it is say "Houpe" while holding the clasp, which turns her invisible for an hour and can be used up to three times in one day. She tests it out while Veledar goes back to searching his hoard and she excitedly says it's nothing like her invisibility spells before. After some more banter and a few minutes pass by, he pulls out a magical white longbow for Merlia that he calls an Oath-bow. By saying the praise "swift death to you who have wronged me," the arrows will seek out the target and even go around cover to do it, although it has a downside of the target being "harder to hit with every other weapon" once the bow is locked on. He then tells them to take whatever magical weapons they want from the armory.

We get another bit of teasing about the dragon "preferring" the human and Veledar riling up Merlia enough to get her to chase him, and then he asks Arcturus to follow him for the last item, or gift as he puts it, while the women head to the armory. He leads the paladin to his mother's shrine for a human named "Carpenter the brave" that helped her a lot during his lifetime, and hands Arcturus two items: an old book that will help him train his magic and a magical mirror shield that's both tougher than a regular shield and can block the most powerful of spells once a day; maybe twice, although Veledar doesn't remember. They share another hug which turns into a group hug when Lyndis and Merlia suddenly join in on it, and we get more teasing from the girls about the dudes totally being lovers. Be glad I'm skimming through these parts here.

As Veledar comments that Lyndis needs a new tabard, Auron comes back with the dragoness' gifts: her self-fitting riding harness with a lot of pouches, a saddle, and a years-old message from her back when he was a kid. It's basically her doting on a younger Veledar and telling the future Veledar that she knows that he will do many great things, and that she'll always love him and be at his side. Veledar cries his ass off by the end of it and the others comfort him with another group hug. After yet another tease from Lyndis that Merlia shuts up for once, he straps on the harness and seems to be comfortable with it (although not without some brief whining about being a "winged smelly horse"), which Arcturus mentally notes is unlike the harnesses that gryphons typically wear. Veledar decides to stretch his wings by flying outside, figuring that their pursuers should be far away by now that his illusion spell will work or they'll mistake him for a bird if that fails; either way, he'll head back to the cave if he sees them.

He then asks Arcturus if he'd like to join him in the skies, which the paladin immediately agrees to, then asks Merlia to have Ulga transform into an animal capable of flying since they're going to be flying straight to Entis. Everybody else packs up their things and head back to the cave entrance where Lyndis plans out the route while Merlia gets started on transforming Ulga, leaving only the human and dragon to start their flight. Arcturus excitedly places himself over Veledar's saddle, latching himself on a ring to make sure he doesn't fall off, and the pair exchanges some more banter about flying and fighting together as one before the dragon leaps into the sky. After a page of Arcturus creaming himself over how dragon flying is the best thing in the world and better than gryphon flying despite never having ridden one, he sees the massive Forest of Despair off in the distance and thinks that the rumors about it are bullshit since Lumara would have gotten rid of any threats there a long time ago.

Veledar likewise thinks that it's just a regular forest and they flip around spinning in the air some more. They have some more gleeful banter before deciding that's enough flying and land back at the cave. Lyndis gets excited at the idea of riding with Veledar after Arcturus tells her about his experience, with the paladin playing into dragon's ego to get him to agree. Lyndis' plan is thus: they're going to fly straight to the capital over the forest, shrink Veledar to the size of a small drake, and then figure out his disguise from there. She and Merlia have a low enough profile, so they can waltz into the city, figure out how to get into the king's castle, and "simply" get the book back. Merlia transformed Ulga into a big eagle while the men were flying, and Veledar gives Arcturus another item he forgot about: an rod with a blade made of fire at the end that can extend to six feet.

The dragon asks what the women took from his armory and Lyndis answers that she picked up two "ornate handled" rapiers while Merlia simply decided on a chain shirt with a "minor magical aura." Lyndis gets a little nervous about riding on top of Veledar, although she still decides to mount him, and we get some teasing along with a fat joke from Veledar. And with Merlia shooting past the others on top of Ulga and Veledar getting competitive, the party sets off towards Entis. An hour passes and Veledar and Merlia stopped racing at that point, and the party have some more banter about the forest's name and Arcturus being picked up "like prey" in earlier chapters. Lyndis seems to let it slip that she's ridden on Drenedar's pegasai before since Arcturus read in reports that it's usually only for their royal knights, mentally noting that pegasi are faster than gryphons, although the half-elf explains it away by saying "they are just knights, not just trained out by the royal guard."

She brags a bit about how pegasi are faster than Veledar, but the mood turns when they realize that the dragon is descending and isn't responding to them. His limbs almost touch the treeline before Arcturus successfully coaxes him into a conscious enough state to avoid immediately crashing. Veledar "savagely swipes" his head around and soon roars himself awake, then pretty much says that he was seemingly hypnotized into a drunken-like state by a voice saying his name from the forest; which Merlia thinks is a siren. He immediately tries to get as far above the place as he can, but vines suddenly shoot out from the treeline and wrap around the dragon's limbs, intent on dragging the party in. Obviously not too happy about it, Veledar struggles against the tendrils, leading Arcturus to make a quip about it and Lyndis for once telling the paladin to shut the fuck up and help.

Arcturus uses his newly-acquired fire staff to cut them off, which is helped by the fact that fire can't hurt a red dragon like Veledar, but more and more of the vines keep coming no matter how many they slice off. Lyndis tries to use her rapier, Merlia tries using her magic bow, and Veledar tries using his fire breath, but again, that only seems to make more of the vines come at them faster. Eventually, Veledar along with the human and half-elf are dragged into the trees and although the dragon letting out another fire breath gets rid of the tendrils, the momentum causes the dragon to crash to the ground. Thankfully, everybody's unharmed and they get ready for the vines to attack again, but nothing comes after some waiting. The three talk for a bit about their situation before they hear the sound of Merlia yelling and struggling against the vines herself before she falls into view, leading Veledar to catch her.

Everybody's pissed off about being kidnapped, especially the dragon, but since the culprit doesn't want them dead (else the vines would have done worse or kept attacking), the only course of action now is to stick together and find out why they were taken down. The party then sees a path and, after some more banter, the chapter ends with Arcturus being determined to face the danger together as they all head deeper into the forest.
A decent chapter to end things on, with Arcturus finally realizing the dream he had in an earlier chapter and properly riding a dragon, everybody gearing up for their quest, and getting interrupted by the mysterious forest of getting shanked we've known about since the prologue; setting up the obvious questions of her end goal and what the hell her plan is with the party.
To end it off, we switch back to Skywing again on another chapter that was retroactively added in. He's on the Indomitous and we get a little recap about Chapter 12 where he says he's surprised to find that not only were the reports off regarding Veledar's danger and rage as well as Arcturus' apparent death, but none of the gryphons were killed; save for one that Merlia killed rather than Veledar. This leads to him doubting the dragon's guilt and he admits that Garroth's honor is bound more by money, to the point where he supposedly talked the king into paying him more than the original offer to hunt down Veledar despite Arcturus being his friend, something that ticks Skywing off since he would have done it for free. As the airship begins to make its way towards the Forest of Ass Raping, he thinks back to what happened in the prologue and also admits that Veledar is nothing like the Emerald Lady, speculating that Cetaz and Petat are either statues or slaves.

Garroth pops up behind him and confirms that they're heading towards the forest since Veledar fled there. When Skywing asks how he's sure and presses him when he tries to be vague, Garroth shows the gryphon the red orb from Chapter 1 and explains that it can show the closest red dragon for miles and the chances of there being another one is pretty unlikely. While this convinces Skywing, he brings up the obvious issue of the Emerald Lady being powerful and how they can't just waltz in like she's nothing. The mercenary wasn't aware of her before, but he isn't intimidated since they have some serious firepower, although Skywing's explanations does at least convince him to call in some favors.

He determinedly says that he'll "rescue" Arcturus from Veledar and reassures the gryphon that what happened to him before won't happen now. Garroth's confidence gets rid of any doubt still lingering in Skywing's mind as the gryphon states "when her trees burn and the dragon lays defeated at [their] feet, stripped of both title and power, the world will call her lady no longer."
More setup for the next book, like the red orb and the seeds of doubt starting to sprout in Skywing. We get our first hints towards Garroth's douchier side aside from working for Lumara, assuming what Skywing says is true, but we'll have to see if that will eventually translate towards Arcturus or not.

With the main story out of the way, let's skim through the Furaffinity version and see what's different, apart from the ones too minor to be worth mentioning, like small rewordings and additions as well as other things that don't really change anything.
  • Like I said before, the prologue, epilogue, and bonus story weren't added in until later.
  • Chapter 1: Arcturus has less of a reaction to his wife's death; just acknowledging her corpse before the "with a heavy heart" line.
  • Chapter 2: The flower thieves just say to Veledar that they need the flowers rather than try to explain/lie about the sick children in the published version,
  • Chapter 3: The airship captain at the end introduces himself as Victor for some reason before his actual name that's the same in both versions.
  • Chapter 5: Veledar repeats his insult of calling Arcturus a woman twice for some reason.
  • Chapter 6: The line where he immediately dismisses the sick children the flower thieves mentioned being the reason he's captured isn't present in the FA version.
  • Chapter 7: Some inconsistent uses of Crimson Sky and Veledar in the narration, despite the chapter being in Arcturus' POV and him not knowing the dragon's real name yet. He still refers to Veledar by his title in dialogue, though.
  • Chapter 9: The gryphon named DuskTalon is just called Talon and the women bartender bringing up Arcturus' job in the capital isn't present.
  • Chapter 10:
    • Apart from some added lines at the start, Lyndis laughs at Veledar whining about the horses instead of frowning, making the "continued to laugh" part actually make sense.
    • The beginning of Arcturus yelling at Lyndis for her rant about Lumara starts with "not true" (in a way that makes me think of this clip for some reason) rather than the published version's "watch your tongue, woman."
    • The published version fixes a moment where it says Veledar flew for a few minutes to stretch his wings before getting his meal, yet the very next line saying he flew "over the course of an hour." It also removes a line saying Veledar kept bitching "during every break" while they were going to the village and he would just "offer a snarky response and fly off" when he inevitably conceded his points.
  • Chapter 11: Arcturus doesn't try to deny that they're dragon hunters to Lida for some reason, and Veledar's empty threat to Arcturus was just "you know I can kill you right now" instead of his claws and teeth cutting through the human's armor.
  • Chapter 12: Veledar's reasoning for wanting to kill the one gryphon is just a simple "it's us or them." SkyWing first shows up here and is described as a black gryphon instead of a white one with black stripes.
  • Chapter 13: The line about Arcturus personally picking the gryphons to capture Veledar near Deet is omitted here.
  • Chapter 14: The published version omits Arcturus' thoughts (where it says he's actually relieved that Veledar's still his same narcissistic self) before he snarks about Veledar's "vessel to a higher power" line, most likely since the chapter's supposed to be from the dragon's POV.
  • Chapter 15: It has the most significant differences so far.
    • Not only does the gryphon that Lyndis fights not speak at all, she actually kills him by stabbing him through the eye and never considers sparing his life at all, and her thoughts or regrets on doing so are obviously not present. Since dead men tell no tales, the line about him possibly snitching was previously Lyndis thinking he called for help instead.
    • Instead of Garroth suddenly ordering his men to not attack at all despite saying otherwise in Chapter 12, he just says "get them, but watch out for Arcturus!" Holy shit, I can actually infer that he still said the "shoot the dragon down" line here. It still has the same issues where it's not consistent at all with him apparently ordering his men to hold their fire in Chapter 13 (even though he still didn't in the FA version), but it's not a complete 180 like the published version.
    • Despite Arcturus making a big deal out of not killing the gryphons and how they're better than their pursuers in Chapter 12, it's outright said that Veledar killed several gryphons by slicing them or ripping their throats out. Merlia also killed two gryphons rather than just the one in the final version, and it clearly states they died rather than it only being evident in the epilogue.
    • Garroth's attempt at questioning Merlia about Veledar is really short, getting to the part where she sics Ulga on him much more quickly. His dialogue for Lyndis before the first flashforward is cut to just him recognizing Lyndis as a princess.
  • Chapter 17: During the part where Veledar talks to the women about them knowing his real name, they don't tease him for his attraction towards Arcturus. Likewise at the end of the chapter, Arcturus just says he's the best dragon he's known instead of saying he'd kiss him, which naturally doesn't result in any teasing. The line where Arcturus calls out the dragon for eating a person once and the dialogue before their cuddling also isn't present.
The bonus story is over 30,000 words long, so I'll tackle that in its own post.
 
While we finished the main story, we still have the long bonus story to tackle, so let's do this. The version on Sofurry is split into three parts while the published verison is not, so any dashed lines will indicate when the next part begins.
We turn back time to before Dread Flame killed Arcturus' family, back when he was a 12 year old. His father, Markis, is watching him in a 2v1 duel since he kept kicking the asses of one of the other boys. While there's already a rule that you're out if you get hit three times, Markis stacks the odds by asking Arcturus some questions; and getting them wrong will count as a hit against him. Arcturus tells him to bring it on and he gets teased by the other students when he brings up a dragon's genitals as a weak spot, although "a respected Lund" like Markis is quick to shut them up. The questions don't let up even when his son gets hit pretty hard after knocking out one opponent, but Arcturus stops holding back at that point, answers his father correctly every time, and manages to hit his other opponent three times in quick succession.

Markis praises him, but tells him not to get lazy and that dragons are "just as capable of dying" as mortals are. Arcturus doesn't want to be a dragon slayer just because "he was told to". His mother would have objected to it if she's still alive and it's later said she broke her neck five years ago after falling off a rearing horse. Despite this, he goes along with it at least for now, and gets excited when his father decides to reward him for his performance. Passing by a bunch of tents and some "piss-ass" drunk gryphons, we learn that Arcturus is in a tournament with other promising dragon hunters from various families and races, which includes humans, elves, dwarves, minotaurs, and even a gryphon. He's led away from the festivities and towards a locked-up tent, which Markis reveals has two bronze dragons tightly bound in flame-resistant leathers and belts wrapped around their necks to prevent breath attacks, one male and one female.

The father basically says that the "preview" is his reward and Arcturus sees that the female's eyes don't look like monstrous ones, asking what they did to deserve their fates. When Markis elaborates about their supposed crimes, the way he speaks about it and how the beasts will pay makes the boy doubtful. It's the first time Arcturus has actually seen a real dragon up close and he wonders how "something so beautiful" could be evil like everyone says; for every evil dragon, there has to be good ones. His father tells him not to worry since he's going to learn about "delivering justice" to the beasts at the end of the tournament, but since Arcturus knows what he's implying, this only makes the child afraid instead. To shake his mind off that line of thought, he thinks back to how he really likes her scales and decides that he absolutely has to paint the "majestic" creature.

Later that night, he's in his own tent looking at a drawing of a bronze dragon, since Markis is sharing his own with his gryphon nanny for some implied sex. Then a thought occurs to him: why the hell is he reading about dragons when he can just look and talk to one right now? Thinking he's not breaking any rules by observing the female from a distance, he packs up his painting materials, plus a dagger to be on the safe side per his father's previous advice, and sneaks to the dragon tent. Luckily for him, there isn't anyone guarding it since Arcturus figures is because they're either out drinking or passed out, and he goes inside. While he sees the female locked up tight, the male isn't anywhere to be seen and is probably in another tent. Arcturus can't help but feel guilty at the sight, but he's too scared to talk to her and settles for just getting started on his painting. In the middle of sketching her, however, he's spooked to see the dragoness looking right at him and asking what he's doing; enough to fall flat on his ass.

He thinks about how her eyes are like a mothers when she repeats her question, and he answers he accidentally ruined the picture by spilling ink on it. She asks to see it, but when he's hesitant to do so, she's understanding and tells him just to hold it out from a distance. Arcturus, despite his father ramming it into his head that dragons are evil, gets closer and does so. The dragoness complements the picture and we learn that Arcturus is keeping his dragon paintings a secret from Markis. When the human inquires about her crimes, she denies it and explains that they just ambushed her during a morning flight, and asks whether or not people who attack innocents are monsters. Of course, young Arcturus agrees with her and we get another mention of how her voice is motherly.

As Arcturus starts up a new painting, they chat for the next couple pages about painting, how she thinks clothing is "ridiculous," and how she knows the boy "fancies" dragons and unsubtly says how he'll have a "dragon lover in [his] future." Reminder that Arcturus is twelve here, by the way. After that moment, he confesses to her that all his father does is train him (although Arcturus likes it) and he doesn't want to be miserable like Markis, but he accidentally lets it slip to her that part of his training involves killing dragons. The dragoness notices and pointedly asks if he'll look forward to it and, when he clarifies that he's training to kill other threats as well, whether he trains to kill other mortals as well. Arcturus confirms that Markis is training him for that as well, although he's not exactly thrilled about killing people, something that apparently surprises her.

When she asks what he'd rather be, he says he prefers to be a knight to protect people instead. She introduces herself asks for his name, but gets a little angry when he says he's a Lund, since "every dragon family that hasn't lived centuries inside their cave knows the Lunds" and how they killed at least one member of said family. After that bit of awkwardness, she tells him her title of Howling Tempest, but the story inconsistently also refers to her as Howling Storm for some reason. I used Quality Check to search the future books and the Tempest one is the correct one, so I don't know why the hell it's like that.

Arcturus finishes up his painting. She asks to see it and, when she can't see the "fine details," to bring it closer to her. The human's a little more trusting and takes a couple steps closer, admitting to himself that her scheme is working if she's trying to manipulate him, but his foot gets caught on a chain. He falls forward and the dragoness catches him with her head, but this absolutely terrifies him since he's in lethal range and he waits for the end to come. Fortunately for him, she doesn't attack and instead politely tells him to get off.

She responds to his flabbergasted words that of course she didn't do something so thoughtless and senseless, why would she? Harming kids is beneath her and she's not a monster. Arcturus tells her that he wouldn't attack them either and she responds that he might be different from a Lund after all, but their conversation is cut short by the sound of a burp from the drunken guard coming back to his post. As he's packing up his things, Howling Tempest asks if he'll come back tomorrow, which turns rhetorical when she sees through the boy's attempts at acting indifferent. They wish each other a good night and Arcturus quickly returns to his tent, giddy as all hell and so eager to talk to her again that he overrides his father's words about not trusting a dragon lest he be killed.

We cut to the next day where Arcturus says it's getting harder to focus during Markis' intense training for the final test in a few days thanks to Howling Tempest. During lunch, he asks for two serving of pork from his nanny who playfully assumes he's going to date her niece despite him trying to deny it. Fun girl, but she's not his type and he's too busy anyways. Plate in hand, he's soon back into the dragoness' tent, who's grateful for the food. He can't stay for long since it's in the middle of the day, but the human promises he'll be back ASAP and returns to his training for another brief montage. When his father lists off ways to stab a dragon in the eye, Arcturus is horrified to think of the sword stabbing through Howling Tempest.

Markis notices the look on his son's face and tries to reassure him, thinking he's just nervous about fighting his first dragon. Obviously, that couldn't be farther from the truth and Arcturus does his best to tune him out in between the questions. Soon enough, Arcturus is back in the dragoness' tent when night falls. He affirms that he wants to know more about dragons instead of hurting them. She tells him that he's a sweet boy and, after some pressing to the boy, he nervously asks to look at her scales, which she obliges. After a bit of dialogue where he declines her suggestion of simply reading books about dragons and refuses to talk to his father about them, she asks him to undo a couple of the straps so he can get a better look at her.

This immediately raises the manipulation red flags in Arcturus and he initially refuses, but she sweet talks the twelve year old boy into agreeing anyways, saying he can just release one strap at a time and redo them once he's done looking. He admits that his father is so biased against dragons he "shuts down any pleasant talk about them" and Arcturus wants to learn things he wouldn't get otherwise, so Howling Tempest offers a deal: for every question he asks, he'll release one limb for the human to look at. He asks about what it's like to fly and, after some hesitation that gets ereased by how kind she looks, goes through with undoing the strap on her forelimb. He's marveled at touching her and is still surprised she doesn't take advantage to attack.

His next question is whether dragons can feel fear and the conversation turns despondent when she tells him dragons can feel sadness on top of any other emotion. She tears up explaining that she lost her mate to hunters like the Lunds, causing Arcturus to tear up in sympathy as well and get close to her head as he tells her what happened to his mother. Apologizing for assuming his mother was a hunter like his father, she gives him a lick to comfort him. We also get two more mentions of how motherly she sounds and how licking offspring is something that dragon mothers do. Gee, I wonder why she's being so motherly towards a child.

After she explains the licking part to a grossed out Arcturus, she suddenly tells him to hide and he ducks behind her body as a guard comes into the tent. The man heard their voices, but is thankfully too drunk to do any kind of investigating and walks back out after a brief exchange between him and Howling Tempest. With that unpleasantness gone, she finally asks Arcturus to free her. Although he agrees they've gotten closer these past couple days, he reluctantly refuses to go against his family. He internally rationalizes that the dragoness had to be sentenced to death for a reason instead of just being killed for glory and sport, but admits instead that he'll be suspected and she'll likely be captured again anyways. She's understandably disheartened and asks to be left alone with her thoughts.

For some reason that I'm either too stupid to figure out or the story doesn't explain too well, he asks her who her thoughts are about and why, and she says she'll tell him if he comes back tomorrow. He's feeling pretty guilty for refusing, but he has to know about why she was captured and "where her thoughts were keeping her." Cutting to the next night, he returns to continue their conversation. Howling Tempest agrees to the previous deal and he also agrees to her changing the terms a bit so she asks some questions herself: like his honest thoughts about dragons. When he says he doesn't know, she asks whether he'd harm a hatchling for their parent's crimes, which he strongly denies. He laughs at learning the dragoness is ticklish on her foot but the humor stops when she finally confirms that she's a mother. Her young hatchlings are waiting for her back home and won't survive without her help.

This revelation shocks the boy and, after she explains she was captured because one of the lords got pissy when she hunted one of his deer, finally convinces Arcturus to release the dragoness. He frees her from her restraints, but she immediately grabs him, runs out of the tent, and flies off into the night. Screaming and terrified out of his mind, he thinks about how his father was right about dragons being evil scumbags and the one dragoness he trusted is going to devour him as she tells him to shut the fuck up or she'll "cork [his] little snout." Arcturus has no other choice but to obey, leaving only his thoughts on making a last stand. They continues to fly for some time and she sets him down when they eventually land in a cave near the ocean.

The dragoness tells the fearful boy to not be foolish and that it's best to stay with her tonight, but he's insistent on fighting, stabbing her paw with his dagger while screaming that she won't eat him. It doesn't hurt her and just really irritate her, smacking it out of his hands with no effort. She tells him he's not going anywhere and he's lucky she bothered bringing him at all, pushing him into the cave. In the middle of the large room with glowing algae is a large nest with three bronze hatchings, two male and one female all cold and shivering, and Howling Tempest wastes no time sprinting over to reunite with them. Arcturus tries to hide while she's occupied with all of the affection she's showering on her kids, but that obviously doesn't work as she tells him he's staying for dinner.

He freaks the fuck out and begs for his life, and she clarifies that she's going hunting; threatening to actually eat him alive if he harms her kids while she's gone. The three hatchlings seem to be just as nervous of the human than he is of them, but he doesn't really know why since he still believes she's a lying bitch and he's their dinner, so he keeps his distance. Minutes pass by until Howling Tempest comes back with a dead stag and he gets disgusted by the way the dragons eat it, although he's still surprised by the dragoness still being a loving mother in the middle of their dinner. She tells him to stop hiding already and eat the last piece, spelling it out to him that she never lied about her family. When he mentions the tiny part about being kidnapped, she answers that he's insurance for a possible deal in case the dragon hunters find out what happened: his life in exchange for her hatchlings.

She's magically cooks the piece when he points out he can't eat raw meat and he devours it. As he thanks her and apologizes for his actions, he's interrupted by her licking him clean like her hatchlings. The hatchlings beg their mommy for a story, but Howling Tempest tells him a "statement of facts" instead. She tells them that they're leaving their home and Lumara, far away from the king who kills dragons based on lies and petty offenses (or no reason at all) as if all dragons are evil, unlike their gryphon allies. As she goes on with tales of dragons that fell victim to this, a couple of which includes hatchlings who were stoned to death by an angry mob, Arcturus never had the thought that the king would be just like Markis, but finds himself believing "every word" she says.

The hatchlings believe her as well with how scared they are and their mother brings them to her nest to cuddle for the night. She invites Arcturus to join her as well to escape the cold air and he takes it. He thinks about how dragoness treated him the same way as her children, as well as how protected he is by someone so big and powerful, and he soon feels at peace as he falls asleep.

Morning comes and Arcturus is sitting outside near the cave's entrance; although he's reminded he's still a captive since she forbids him from leaving. He watches the hatchlings, later named Xervir, Emmess, and Briva, jumping on some large rocks and the "red-striped talon" one named Xervir falls to the ground, dislocating his wing. Despite the dragoness' instructions, his painted whines causes Arcturus to disregard her and approach him. The hatchlings are still nervous of the human, but his soothing sounds convinces Xervir to stay put and let him move the joint back in its socket, which earns their trust. Xervir introduces himself and asks if the human plays games, and we get a bit where the hatchlings mistake Arcturus' name for one of a game and think it's weird.

They have a debate what name suits him better and when Arcturus asks Xervir if dragon wings are ticklish, he badly lies and quickly has him and his siblings find out a human's tickle spots the old fashioned way. A tickle fight ensues and Arcturus manages to flip it around on Xervir, telling the siblings to continue their "assault." However, this gets interrupted Howling Tempest furiously confronting them. She yells how the human doesn't have the right to play with her kids and she's basically triggered over him using the word assault since she thinks he's "poisoning" her kids with "vile things [he] learned from his family."
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This immediately makes Arcturus break down into tears, which makes her ask why he's crying and if she's being too harsh. He explains he just wanted to play with the hatchlings and he would never hurt them, and she's about to point that he's a Lund before she seemingly realizes what she's doing, kicks herself for being the "most unwise," and tells her kids to go play while she has a private chat with the human. She genuinely apologizes for kidnapping him and admits his family name caused her to mistrust him even after he freed her and that he probably wouldn't have been so mistrusting in turn if she explained herself beforehand. Likewise, he apologizes for stabbing her and she praises him for showing courage against seemingly low chances of victory like a dragon.

With that out of the way, she properly introduces Arcturus to her kids and their names, playfully siccing them on the human when he says he can handle them. The kids spend "the rest of the day" playing together and eating together while the reader probably gets diabetes-HOLD UP. THE REST OF THE DAY?!

I'm cutting ahead here to show my point, but after Howling Tempest brings Arcturus back to the fairgrounds and he gets punished by his father, he can only rest a few moments and "have a few bites of lunch" before he continues his training. Lunch, a mid-day meal after breakfast in the morning, meaning that depending on what time in the morning the dragoness gave the boy the news, the distance between the fairgrounds and the cave is between a couple to a few hours! I can buy the kids not knowing that, but why the FUCK is Howling Tempest not worried during the montage? Does she really think the human's father, a Lund, isn't going to be concerned about his son suddenly going missing for an ENTIRE DAY and not raise the alarm? At that point, it's not a matter of "if" the hunters will come like she says, but WHEN; she's just asking for the deal to take place! Better hope the gryphons don't find something back at the fair they can use to track this irresponsible bitch, like one of her scales!

Anyways, Arcturus thinks about how it's like he's in one big family he wants to stay with and his father is 100% wrong about dragons being inherently evil as everyone cuddles to sleep again. All good things must come to an end, though, and as he continues to say how great it will be to stay with them during the next morning, Howling Tempest destroys the idea by telling him she can't bring him along and he has to go back home.

The human and the hatchlings beg her to take him along, but she points out that while it's what she wants as well and she knows about what he'll be training to do, she has to be realistic. The Lunds are powerful and his father will get an army hunting them down and by returning him, she and her family might have a chance of eluding their pursuers. She gives him her real name of Rasionynth and draws another picture of the human in the family. He tries to beg one last time, but she doesn't relent, and they share a hug. Before they set off, Arcturus gets an idea and has the hatchlings put their pawprints on a page in his book so he can keep them with him as well, sharing one last hug with then. Howling Tempest mentions a blue dragon in Drenedar called Swirling Storm that can help them resettle and the human promises to find them one day as she carries him away.

They land within a mile of the fairgrounds some time later and share one final goodbye before she flies off for good. Left with no other choice, he walks to the tents towards the family "he no longer wanted" and he soon reunites with his relatives. Everybody is happy to see he's alright and pepper the twelve year old boy with questions like if he had a "fling" with his nanny's niece, but Markis is pissed off and scolds him for running off. There isn't any mention of search parties, so I guess someone as controlling as Markis just...didn't assemble them. Arcturus kicks himself for not thinking of a story and all he can come up with is that he got lost in the woods hunting a boar. His father knows that's bullshit and brings him somewhere private so he can scream at him about freeing the dragon since they're bastards. Arcturus musters up the courage to yell back that he's wrong, but this only pisses him off more and earns the boy a hard backhand across the face, accusing the dragoness of casting a spell or manipulation.

Arcturus tries to ask why she didn't kill him if she's really evil, but that falls flat since his father knows she doesn't want him going after her in revenge. Pulling out his belt, Markis punishes him by hitting him with it a bunch of times all over his body as he claims his brother was betrayed by the very dragon he decided to help. Roughly shoving him to the ground, he tells Arcturus that he'll "never be tempted by such evil ever again" and orders Arcturus to get ready to win the upcoming tournament. The dragons already took so much from him and, one day, the boy will thank him and teach his own son the same lessons. This doesn't dissuade Arcturus from being determined to free the male dragon, although he's smart enough to shut his mouth for now lest he get beat some more. Another day of training passes by where he "easily" blasts his targets in archery, ignoring his father's rants about the beasts in exchange for thinking about how lovely the dragoness is.

When he goes back to his tent for the night to enact his plan, he's surprised to find that Markis anticipated him pulling shit and stationed some of the guards around the place to make sure that doesn't happen. All he can do is get some sleep for a couple hours, and he wake up early enough so that the guards are still sleeping. Despite being aware of his newfound security measures and the very brief time before someone realizes it, he sneaks off to search for the male dragon's tent, saying he has to do this. When he finds someone guarding it, he uses his dagger to cut a hole on the other side and makes his way in. This dragon didn't fare nearly as well as Rasionynth did, being noticeably wounded from the clearly-used torture equipment inside, and the human realizes that he's more securely chained up and needed a key to free him.

They exchange some words and the dragon introduces himself as Shining Sun, promising to reward the boy for his actions. Just as Arcturus gets the idea to pickpocket the key from the guard outside, an absolutely furious Markis catches up to him and drags him away. Knowing he's caught with his pants down, Arcturus futilely tries to plead that not all dragons are evil, but again, this only gets him a slap in the face. Markis drags his son to a pole and ties him to it, yelling that he's not going to let his only son be taken from him like his brother was. The boy's pleas continue to fall on deaf ears as his father retrieves a cat o' nine tails, answering him when he brings up his mother that she would smile and approve of "anything [he'd] do."

Markis lashes the hell out of him, only asking the bleeding boy after the twentieth whip what really happened and what he really thinks of the dragoness. Knowing his father just wants to hear the lies rather than the truth but left with no options, Arcturus talks about how she was a monster that enchanted him to free her, threatened him, and only didn't kill him because he was a Lund. While Markis appears to be satisfied at first, he doesn't believe his son isn't just lying to stop the pain rather than telling what he believes to be the truth. Arcturus badly tries to cover it up by asking "did [he] ever lie to [him]," although it likely doesn't matter since Markis decides to continue whipping him so many times that the screaming boy "completely lost count."

It does eventually stop and Markis forces him to drink a healing potion to keep him healthy for the festivities today, saying that he'll understand what he did was for his son's "own good." Naturally, all this does is make Arcturus despise the man even further, and he notices that Shining Sun was taken away while the torture was going on. He's led back to his room and ordered to get ready for the tournament, especially for the beast when he wins. As he's preparing himself, a light bulb pops up in his head: he would win the contest like his father wants, but he'll turn around right around and free Shining Sun to prove his father and everybody else how wrong they are. His mind set, he's led inside of the arena "surrounded by cheering people" with the other dragon hunters, where the announcer reaffirms that whoever wins gets to "finish off" the dragon.

Everybody does a whole bunch of physical and mental challenges that eventually leaves only Arcturus and an elf who is "likely three times his age" remaining in a tie-breaker duel. The human takes a hit and they "went at it like a blur" until Arcturus gets the upper hand and hits him three times, eliminating him and winning the contest. The crowd goes wild and Arcturus confidently gets ready to enact his plan as a proud Markis does his speech about how dragons are Hitler; how his son is ready to become a true hunter by executing the captive dragon. After everybody has their fill of jeering and throwing shit at Shining Sun, he goes on about how Shining Sun destroyed a village and killed every man, woman, and child there, soon ordering Arcturus to kill him and make an example.

After a brief moment of hesitation that's dissolved by Howling Tempest, Arcturus locks in and tells his father to go fuck himself for killing an innocent before using his sword to cut the bindings, freeing Shining Sun. Markis is shocked at this turn of events and Arcturus continues his own speech about how he's doing a good thing, how dragons are not monsters-
Only for Shining Sun to immediately blast a ball of fire towards the crowd and kill who knows how many people not once, but twice. Arcturus has the same shocked reaction like in the video to his "friends, relatives, acquantances" as the dragon says "the debt is paid," telling him to go find the dragoness. When Arcturus asks how the hell he knows about her, he explains that the drunken guard talked, claiming his father heard every word and it was another one of his tests. Markis tells him to shut his "lying" mouth and curses him out as several men attack the dragon. Shining Sun tells him to run the hell away already before it's too late, but Arcturus is still too shocked to move an inch. With a "mighty shake of his head," the dragon takes to the skies to escape. The boy wonders how "something so beautiful" could do that much damage as Markis orders the net cannons to be fired. When Shining Sun is seemingly about to get out of range, the nets catch him at lightning speed and force him back down to the ground, where the hunters immediately unleash their fury on him.

A remorseful Arcturus has no words for how badly he fucked up as his father lays onto him for the deaths he caused. He's dragged by his neck towards where Shining Sun is pinned down, where the other hunters look upon him with hate in their eyes as well. Markis turns to what's left of the crowd (wait, how big is that arena?), telling them how his son did nothing wrong since he was enchanted by the beast's magic to free him and takes the blame for not seeing the signs earlier, which Arcturus has to go along with. The father then orders him to basically torture Shining Sun before killing him or he will use the scent left on the boy's clothes to track down the dragoness. Why Markis didn't do this already, I don't know. Very luckily, he throws his son a bone and promises to allow her to leave Lumara's lands if he goes through with it, and a guilt-ridden Arcturus readies his blade.

Even after what the dragon did, Arcturus is still reluctant, thinking about how Shining Sun tried to help free him as well, that the dragon's eyes apparently showed "no hint of malice" or "monsterous intentions," and realizes what the test was: that his father actually wanted him to off Rasionynth while she was still captive to test his convictions of being a slayer. Shining Sun, for his part, is resigned to his fate as Markis yells to get on with it already. Left with no other choice, Arcturus sadly hardens himself and obeys, stabbing and slicing into the dragon's weak spots. The torture session for the next couple pages has the boy cut off Shining Sun's wings, stab into his genitals, and slice off his fire glands before Markis finally gives the order to finish him.

All the while, Arcturus goes numb from the experience aside from a little bit of pride near the end for "getting vengeance." He takes one last look at the dragon's glare and sees that it held "no remorse" for its actions, but Arcturus still can't help but feel bad for him; apparently thinking Shining Sun just used the "wrong methods to accomplish something he considered good." Still, the boy can't forgive the suffering the dragon caused and runs his sword into his brain to end it. The crowd evidently believes Markis about his son being put under a spell and cheer. Markis tells Arcturus he did a good job, but he won't forget the boy's "treachery" and he "might as well pretend [he] enjoyed it if [he has] any respect for the dead."

Outside of that, Arcturus barely focuses on anything, still numb to the world. Despite this, it's said that his old self is still there underneath "the killer he now was." Walking back to the tent and into his own room, he thinks back to the dragoness, wishing he can be free and becoming determined to not be as cruel as his father; to become a protector instead. But for now, he can only sob alone and apologize, saying he had no choice. The last lines have him hear a roar from far away, leaving him wondering if it was real or just his imagination after what just happened.
Our first look at Arcturus as a small lad and what exactly his relationship to his father was: not a very good one even before he rebels. It starts off a little light, turns fluffy in the middle, and nosedives into heavy shit at the end. Outside of a couple moments of stupidity from the adults, all of them get their point across well, although pretty heavy-handed at times. However, the last part raises a big question you can see further down this post.

Now, the summary of my thoughts on The Dragon's Paladin:
Pros:
- Story was interesting at points, and enough seeds are laid out that I want to see grow in future books, like the Lyndis princess plot thread.
- The fights were entertaining to read, even if one or two of them did come across as a "Monster of the Chapter" kind of deal.
- Characters are decent enough with believable motivations and flaws, especially Veledar.
Cons/Nitpicks:
- I glossed over most of them in my posts, but there's noticeable typos here and there, and only some of them were fixed from the FA version. The inconsistency with Howling Tempest's name just proves that this wasn't proofread nearly as much as I'd expect, either from the author or editor.
- The teasing from Lyndis and Merlia about how the dudes are totally in love near the end was really annoying. I know the author probably wanted to give them more to say compared to the FA version, but doing it not even a couple hours after finding out what happened to Veledar's mother makes them come off as inconsiderate.
- A couple plot holes, like the aforementioned blatant inconsistency/continuity error with Garroth's orders.
- Merlia is easily the weakest main character of the three. She's fun and pleasant enough outside of the con I mentioned, but when someone only joins the roster right before the climax of the story, they tend to be undercooked.

Since this is the first book in a series that was split into three later, these questions aren't cons, but I'm raising them anyways in case they aren't addressed later on.

- Even with the fact that Vargus is really a dragon, why the hell didn't the king have at least one mage in Arcturus' squad after being clearly told that Vargus was a wizard? We later learn there's "hundreds of lookouts" with mages and Cornelius had two weeks of prep time, but he couldn't spare any of them for one mission? All the Emerald Lady said to do was make sure Arcturus was involved, not that he's restricted to just knights. Would have certainly made the first chapter turn out a bit differently if he did.
- Magic is a fact of life in this world and we see the gryphons in Chapter 12 being able to deflect spells, but there's no mention of any anti-magic for Vargus or Veledar when they were captured aside from gagging and restraining them? Remember, Vargus was able to throw Arcturus' crossbow away with a "twitch of his wrist."
- Why wasn't the arena incident ever brought up or even alluded to in the main story? Arcturus' "friends, relatives, acquaintances," and others were killed indirectly by his hand via the dragon he freed and you expect me to believe that he just forgot about that? That nobody besides his father holds a grudge in the present day even with the lie Markis pulled out of his ass? Although at least one part does get explained in the fourth book when I searched ahead in Chapter 5, that's way later. It should have been written or at least implied here so I'm not scratching my head over it.
Overall? It's a pretty average to decent start, despite its flaws, I'm at least interested to see what happens next. That being said, I'm considering doing either Last Fables or the recently released Scion alongside the next book to have a bit of variety.

Until then, I'll see you all in Scales and Honor: Emerald Secrets.
 
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Will mom ever stop being a furry and return to normal? Will single-dad and his furbaby survive? Will the author continue the story at all, and if so, what new fetishes will he introduce next?
I read through it and also looked up the author's posts on socials and there's definitely a chance of it getting weirder down the line. While the comic sticks close to a pretty interesting comic aesthetic, some of the author's other artwork have a style thats akin to the typical gooner furry style with exaggerated sexual characteristics. I do hope it doesn't end up that way though, as its one of the few comics made by furries that didn't gave me the typical "icky" feeling that is typical of its kind.
 
The biggest problem with Gone Feral is the comic's not funny. What's the point of making every character look whimsical if the story's tone is dead ass serious? It looks confused. Some bits are interesting, but its not fun. I suppose one exception is the father and daughter, though personally I find neither the set up nor payoff amusing. It all happens too quick and the girl herself seems too happy. Maybe there's more going on than I remember? IDK
While the comic sticks close to a pretty interesting comic aesthetic, some of the author's other artwork have a style thats akin to the typical gooner furry style with exaggerated sexual characteristics.
It is. It all is. It always is. Even when it's not, it really is. I'm not too bothered by these things myself unless it becomes too obvious and then I can no longer separate the art from the artist in my mind.
I do hope it doesn't end up that way though, as its one of the few comics made by furries that didn't gave me the typical "icky" feeling that is typical of its kind.
I don't see Superfrenzyhare changing the tone drastically. Also don't see him returning to it anytime soon.
Wow. That art is shockingly good.
Anyway, I assume that the black guy comes home hoping he can become a furry too and she just says "Get a job nigger.".
The artist would probably find that funny given he loves Coonskin.
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Bit of an odd one to ask, but has anyone done any looking at that "UTO" setting I mentioned a while back? That "macro furry" one? Been trying to give it a look myself, but time is a bit short on my end; dunno when I'll be getting my review for it up.

Main issue with it besides time is just... the setting is honestly pretty boring so far. Make no mistake, it's very clearly a macro furfag plotline - frequent talks of how small and weak humans are (which frequently have some misanthropic undertones at best), vore fetishism in a few scenes, the first fucking chapter casually alludes towards some "romantic" encounters between humans and giant furfags, etc. - but overall it's just a generic plotline. I'm going to try and comb through it, see if there's anything I can use/mock, but... well, there's not much really noteworthy to report on, in comparison to other furfag stories that I'm planning on ripping. I'd love to rip this whole setting to shreds, as it's one of the longer-running and still popular settings for furries, but it's a slog so far.

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Spreading awareness of a newish furry-adjacent manga that's not made by (or for) furries... Dog Matic. So far only 2 chapters are out. The first chapter was a submission to a contest where the winner gets their story serialized for reals. You may notice that the pacing speed is breakneck, and that's the reason why. Anyway, the art is exceptional. There's gore and nudity (barbie-esque) but it's not overused. The overall tone and themes are super reminiscent of Beastars and BNA: Brand New Animal. Definitely a series to keep an eye on.
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and NO the main human character is NOT A TWINK OR A TRAP. She is canonically a gorl so dont worry about that lol
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Bit unrelated to the thread but after playing Skyrim for the first time in nearly a decade, I wonder if there's any mods that replace the Thalmor (or just high elves in general) with Furries. Mostly because of the whole "superior to filthy humans" attitude they have.
 
Bit unrelated to the thread but after playing Skyrim for the first time in nearly a decade, I wonder if there's any mods that replace the Thalmor (or just high elves in general) with Furries. Mostly because of the whole "superior to filthy humans" attitude they have.

In all honesty? Probably; I know there's a mod that makes all of the Jarls into Argonians, so...
 
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Got bored and I recently delved into a ton of bad webcomics, one of which was Immelman's current ongoing comic, The Order of the Black Dog.
Its... Not terrible? Its really just a kitchen sink eldritch occult setting with a lot less sex and comedy that Concession was infamous for. Nothing really all too notable besides it being... semi-competent as a comic? I don't hate reading it, its like the webcomic equivalent of a bowl of cheap oatmeal.
 
Got bored and I recently delved into a ton of bad webcomics, one of which was Immelman's current ongoing comic, The Order of the Black Dog.
Its... Not terrible? Its really just a kitchen sink eldritch occult setting with a lot less sex and comedy that Concession was infamous for. Nothing really all too notable besides it being... semi-competent as a comic? I don't hate reading it, its like the webcomic equivalent of a bowl of cheap oatmeal.
Oh, BTW. He trooned out a few years back.
 
Think I found another furry author for everyone to watch; guy's name is domusvocis. Judging from the looks of his gallery, he's a fairly prolific author in the fandom; active since 2014, his primary story seems to be "Maverick Hotel", a story about a faggot furry resistance looking to "fight back" against an "oppressive Christianized U.S." and "restore democracy" to the land by... well, killing the "evil Christians", of course. Other stories of this guy include "Cherry", a story of a hitman furry looking to protect his faggot prostitute friend from hitmen, as well as "World of Second Chances", about a group of faggot friends looking to survive the post-apocalyptic U.S. overrun with religious cults, evil rich people, and cannibals. That's not the only stories this guy has written, of course, but it does show a pretty good grasp on what this guy tends to write.

As for whether or not I'll be doing a full review of this guy's stuff... to be honest, I doubt it. My backlog is already pretty full with a number of other stories that I need to get reviews written for, including that "Twin Fires" story that got put on the TF Stories thread - yes, I am continuing it, I just have too much to go through right now. If anyone else wants to take a proper crack at this domusvocis guy though, be my guest; right now, I'm trying to get a proper review of ShadowLugia249's old fanfics properly written up to I can post it here.

What do you guys think?
 
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