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Healthcare issues reflected in yaoi
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I'm working on a Canadian omegaverse fic in which feminine men are placed on a 12-year-long wait list for meds and then painlessly euthanised.
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Yaoi eugenics
Which kind of person watch a child's movie and think they should waste hours writing about a male character getting pregnant
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Will Justin Trudeau make a cameo appearance too?
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At first, it wasn’t more than just the “haha funny meme” of the month, that Kaminari, Mineta and maybe Sero would share with the rest of the class, or just between themselves or the rest of the boys (and Mina)
This one was one of the more secretive ones, only the trio and a couple more heard about it, which led to Iida learning about it, and due to cooperative Class Repping, Momo learned about it too.
The enigmatic three letters, that were just one: NNN. No Nut November. While Momo at first thought it quite literally meant nuts, since some of the memes the group would bring up were fairly nonsensical to begin with, Iida (Todoroki that just so happened to be around) explained the true meaning of the word nut in that occasion
Momo felt puzzled. Why on earth would anyone willingly restrain themselves from such an important part of life for no good reason? But a part of her could understand the appeal
People wanted a challenge, this wasn’t a self-improvement move as much as it was a dick measuring contest. Who could last longer, who could be the most correct.
But… Whatever was the appeal of this stupid meme that transcended from the social media feeds kind of hit Momo.
November was coming tomorrow and she couldn't help but feel like she could skip her masturbation routine for November, and only that. If things got too harsh she could just quit, nothing was in line
Except that's not what happened. By day 7 she was starting to feel like her cock was being far more annoying than ever
By day 12, the other girls started asking why she stopped taking the community baths, and her super suit was a lot more bulging than before
She could quit, of course. But we're talking about Momo the Yaoyorozu. She wouldn't quit this stupid challenge for her life.
By day 20 she noticed her, prior to this ordeal, a fairly average cock grew in size. Before, 8 inches long, and now, bordering 38 inches long, as wide as her thigh probably, and they were fucking thick. Teachers noticed how she was wearing her cape a lot more despite the warm season, but they chose to not object, as Momo always had more of a support role anyway
By day 26, her breasts were engorged, and they would spontaneously start lactating. She'd move away from gatherings just to wait for them to stop
Day 31. Final day, and it went by fairly smoothly considering she was used to all of those problems from the month. She didn't know if it was normal for the participants to just, grow like that, and she was the only participant around, or maybe she was the only one that experienced this growth
Now… Masturbation isn't working. Nothing is. She couldn't cum. She could just edge herself further but never reach orgasm.
She needed someone to help her in some way or another. Who would help her in a situation like this?
The answer was Mina. One day, after she came back from washing the dishes that day, she returned to her bedroom, to find Mina naked, fingering her butthole, laying ass up on her bed.
"A-Ashido! What are you doing in my r-room!" Momo exclaimed, choosing to ignore the girl's questionable choice to please herself there
"You did NNN didn't ya?" She didn't even look at Momo, still staring at the walls, wardrobe and portraits
"I- I did…"
"Can't believe you actually did it! You always go above and beyond Yaomomo!" Mina finally turned to the raven, sitting up, the pink meat rod flopping along with its owner. Ashido's penis was a good 23 inch, she didn't bother hiding it like Momo, and no one ever complained
"And… Why are you here?"
"I see that's not stopping any time soon!"
"Y-yeah…"
"So great! Get naked and let's get frisky!"
"B-but…"
"Even if someone hears us they won't interrupt" She smiled with a shit eating grin, getting up and locking the door behind Momo "If you feel safer that way" She shrugged
"Well, you really are correct…" Momo took off her turtleneck, then her bra. Stripping in front of Mina was no new job, the baths were shared among all girls, there was nothing she didn't see already
"Your dick is huuuuge now!" Except that
Momo was always the smallest (she supposed, not like she could see Hagakure) among the girls, even though no one poked fun at it, she felt a little weak compared to them, luckily this was already the past
"It grew quite a lot…"
"Fuck yeah" Mina contemplated Momo's naked body, her hands grabbing her large pink cock and fingering her urethra "Come closer, I'll suck your dick" Mina said, strangely serious
Momo did as Mina ordered, she was the most experienced of the two. Momo's cock hardened under her touch, growing more and more until it was at full mast
"Now time for lunch" Mina licked her lips, and sucked in Momo's glans in her mouth. Like a vacuum, her pink lips surrounded a good chunk of the larger girl’s magnificent pillar, her tongue only being able to cover a tiny part of it, inside the girl’s mouth
Momo couldn’t hold it in anymore, holding Mina’s horns and shoving it all deep in her mouth. Her large balls overshadowed Mina’s breasts in size, and she could feel Mina’s hard cock pressing her testicles
Mina could feel her throat bulge from the large object, she took it in as it tore apart her insides… She felt something build up in her stomach…
Momo swiftly removed her dick from Mina’s throat, knowing it wouldn’t work, and it maybe hurt her friend
“A-Ashido! A-are you alright?” She stuttered, but Mina had already gotten up, holding the girl’s head, she made contact with her lips.
The two shared a deep and intense kiss… Until Mina barfed inside Momo’s mouth. The jet-haired’s mouth was filled with the sour taste of a mixture between precum and bile as Mina seemed none the wiser to such a gross act
On reflex, Momo swallowed the gross load, in a way, she found it as compensation for widening her friend’s throat
“W-whuuuohhh” She was about to ask why did Mina do it in her mouth, but all Momo felt was the barf shake coming back
Once again Mina grabbed Momo’s face, removing the girl’s hand from her mouth, Mina knew Momo wasn’t going to let it out, so what she did was give the girl’s nuts a strong knee
The pain made Momo expel the vomit directly in Mina’s ready, gaping mouth. The girl expertly swallowed it whole, even licking her lips afterwards
“H-how do you like t-this?” She asked, a little shocked
“It’s not the taste… It tastes like vomit, literally… It’s just the idea y’know… The filth”
“I see… I don’t think I get it completely though…” She said between huffs
“If you want me to go a little easier, no problem on me”
“No no, I want more, anything to make me cum”
“I don’t really feel like puking anymore… I know! Wait a minute…” Mina reached all the way back, inserting her hand inside her butthole… Then her wrist, then her forearm. The outlandish position served a purpose
Mina’s arm came back stained in brown, her hand in particular holding a wet, stinky and mucky piece of shit.
Momo never saw poop this closely before. It was in the toilet, there. She never looked at it for too long either… This time? She couldn’t look away.
Even less sense she had when Mina brought the soft pile of scat to her mouth, not only biting it in, but also chewing it, until she opened her mouth again, and while her teeth were stained brown, her saliva was that same intoxicating color, in her similarly colored tongue laid an almost perfect circle of the previously mushy excrement
Momo knew this was an invitation to come closer, and this time, she began the kiss. Mina’s tongue shoved the little ball of crap inside Momo’s mouth. It was bitter, very bitter… But then again, Momo tried thinking from the outside perspective. She had probably the dirtiest substance a human can produce in her mouth, chewing it, using her tongue to paint her mouth brown.
It almost felt like the bitterness disappeared… An intoxicating flavor taking its place. Momo felt she could stay there forever, and it would never grow tiring. So much so she needed to share this glee with her partner.
Finally, what she had been holding in for a month (since she usually masturbates during her poop) came out… Logs of brown excrement came out, a gross squelching noise made from Momo’s convulsing butthole. She opened her mouth too, showing Mina the mess she had made inside
The pink girl was fisting her urethra, using the dirty hand. She let Momo take the lead, considering how enthusiastic the girl was
Mina removed her hand from inside her cock, leaving her urethra gaping. Momo turned back to her with two large pieces of scat in her hands. She stuffed one in Mina’s mouth, the pinkette gladly accepting it. While she would do the same with the other one, Mina’s urethra was so inviting…
Momo shoved the other piece inside Mina’s cock. Not only that, she sat on Mina’s lap, taking her whole cock in, none of them knew she could even do that in the first place. And despite the fact the large cock filled her belly, it wasn’t enough to stop more shit from coming down. While a good amount dribbled between Momo’s anal ring and Mina’s shaft, a lot of it was sucked in by Mina’s hungry cockhole
The pink girl was now a little taken aback. This was the first time she had raw scat inside and not just its dirt. It felt really good though… It was very warm, wet… It was so many that some escaped her glans, as if she was cumming crap
“You’re even worse than me Yaomomo… Goddamn!” Mina said, her voice sounding a little muffled because of the sheer amount of Momo Scat she had in her mouth.
Talking about Momo and her shit, the girl had sat down where the pile of crap was, bringing it to her mouth, and savoring every second of it. She shoved some in her urethra, some inside her nipples, inside her pussy… Momo wanted shit in every last hole she had. So this is what it meant to be truly filthy…
And finally, Momo came. Her cock released a wave of cum, hitting the ceiling in terms of strength as it coated her roof in white, with some brown stains of the shit she had placed inside there, and flew out along with the cum.
“Yaomomo… C’mon… Life isn’t just shit… Fuck my ass please!” Mina grabbed her attention, and Momo did it, the once posh and refined girl now reduced to an animal that could barely form words. Her mouth was so filled with crap some of it actively fell out
The raven’s huge cock took no time in invading Mina’s widened butthole. In its first pump the thing was already coated brown. Mina saw her belly bulge from the sheer size of Momo’s member as it ravaged her insides, Mina’s huge cock standing between the two, but was pulled aside so Momo could regurgitate some of her shit inside Mina’s mouth. Mina swallowed all the pieces whole, and grabbed Momo’s breasts, sucking the shit still stuck inside the girl’s nipple, in her shitty lactation
Momo’s entire body was brown. The girl was wet, sticky, dirty and her stench was unbearable. Exactly the way Mina liked her
Momo finally came inside Mina… The girl’s asshole pushing out shit in reflex. Mina saw her belly grow and grow in size, until Momo removed her cock from the now prolapsed hole… And all of the cum inserted there flew directly back to its creator. The stream was so powerful it even cleaned some of Momo’s chest
Momo stared in awe at Mina’s gaping hole. It was gigantic, she loved it, it was like she could see Mina’s guts from there, the puffed ring was pulsing and the creature that was Mina’s butthole showed no signs of stopping
The raven seemed a lot more sane now, her movement not as sloppy, she took support on her bed, breathing heavily
“What… Do we do about this?”
“Nothing” Mina responded cheekily “No human being can clean this… You can eat whatever shit is left, but I leave it in my room to keep the stench”
“Oh…” Momo now stopped to think about what she would do after this, but her line of thought was broken by tapping on her balcony door, through the glass, she could see it was Ochako, the girl having floated her way there
Momo opened the door quickly, allowing the brunette in
“Jeez! You did a number here!” Ochako didn’t even react to the cum falling from the ceiling like a semen rain
“Yeah” Momo said, a little embarrassed, scratching the back of her head, the girl’s cock was already soft, as the horny left Momo’s body
“Is it bad if we make it a party of three?” Ochako blurted out
“Not in my book” Mina retorted, Ochako looking at her, seeing the girl laying in bed, her dick was bulging, scat leaving her urethra, the girl’s butthole was wide and open, cum and crap staining her skin
Ochako smiled at that, removing her top, and then her bottom. In no time, her cock was hard too, she was the second largest, being 22 inches, now she was the third largest of course, but still something to brag about
Her foreskin, piled up in the glans, was blocking the view, so Momo pulled it back. Ochako’s cock was covered in smegma. She was also, by far, the dirtiest among the girls. Legends said she never washed her cock once.
Momo got hard at the sight, she and Mina approached the dirty glans, and began licking it all over, eating whatever smegma Ochako had, cleaning her cockhead. It was so much that you couldn’t even see her reddish glans. It was all that light tan dirt
Ochako came, and luckily, Momo closed the door when Ochako entered, because her cum would have flown outside had she not done that
“I wanna pee… Anyone thirsty?” Uraraka spoke, and waited for no answer, a stream of gold was ejected towards the two girls, Momo attempting to drink as much as she could, the urine coating her shit-covered body. Mina was in a similar state
Ochako had finally stopped, and Momo approached Mina, inserting a finger in the girl’s mouth. After activating the pinkette’s gag reflex, barf came out, Momo eating it gladly, some of it fell from her mouth and into her rack.
Ochako watched in amusement, but her spectating ended when Momo engulfed her dirty cock in her mouth. Deepthroating the member, Momo saw how easy it was to do this… It was almost like she was made to do this.
Mina wasted no time, going up to Uraraka and forcing her pink cock down the brunette’s throat. Momo could see the pink butthole gaping open from there. She could also see it as Mina started to shit on top of her. The soft diarrhea like substance kept falling like snow, Momo letting go of the cock to see Mina paint it brown
Momo had another idea. She held Ochako’s cock upwards, along with hers, and with some strength, she pulled Mina out of her holding, and inserted the two cocks inside of Mina’s butthole.
If Momo's cock wasn't already devastating enough, two cocks were beyond Mina's range, by far. The girl's stomach bulged out and her ass prolapsed before anyone even left it
Momo could feel Uraraka's thick smegma being smeared in her shaft as the two furiously penetrated Mina's pink (now purple) butthole
Ochako came, but Momo didn't stop. She ravaged and tore as if it was her only purpose in life. The brunette had fallen to the ground, tired, but Momo did not. She simply came, removed her large cock from Mina, and let the pinkette slip to the cum-covered floor
Her room was a mess of the utmost kind. The floor was covered in the white slimy liquid up to their ankles, there were piles of shit in every direction and the occasional yellow spot, kindly painted by Ochako's piss
Oh yeah, Ochako pissed on her, right? This gave Momo total freedom on what to do next. She aimed her glans and began releasing her golden and warm stream in Ochako's face. It dribbled down to her body, and covered the voluptuous girl in gold
This wasn't the end, oh no.
"Turn around, Ochako" Momo spoke, with a newly found commanding voice that made Uraraka obey without hesitation
Momo also penetrated Ochako. Getting her whole dick inside with no issue, she decided to finish her stream. Piss came out, this time, inside Ochako. It quite fastly began to bloat her belly as more and more liquid was put in.
And the urine had stopped, Momo continued to hammer her dick inside Ochako, it felt like fucking a warm water balloon, considering how much liquid was in there
Momo stopped tearing Ochako's anus apart when she noticed the brunette's cock looked like it was hardening, even though it was already rock hard.
Not only that, it was way bigger now! At least 34 inches in size!
"Holy shit I'm huge!" She commemorated, satisfied with her newly giant cock
"Awwww c'mon I want one too!"
"I don't know how it happened!" Momo defended, letting go of Uraraka, as she pondered.
The one thing Mina had yet to interact with that came from Momo's body was piss. That was conveniently the one thing she did with Ochako before the enlargement
"Keep steady, I will give you your enlargement" Momo spoke in a commanding tone, and as the golden elixir of growth came out, Mina was more than happy to have it. This time Mina directly drank it, so her cock grew immediately
Before, a 23 inch somewhat big cock became a solid 36 inch monster. None of them were as big as Momo was, but were still gigantic
She grabbed both of the cocks, having to hug them to have them both with her. Her cock was hard, and stood between them
"I have been needing a good ass fuck ever since we started…" She stopped to lick some smegma off of Ochako's rod "I think this is the perfect opportunity"
Taking support on her bed, Momo let her meat globes shine in front of the two ladies, she awaited her prize expectantly.
Mina came first, she was surprised to see how loose it was
"Damn girl, how are you this wide open already?"
"I don't know either… But you should take the challenge!"
"Oh if we will!" Ochako joined Mina as the two began going wild inside Momo. Two gigantic cocks breaking her apart! This was heaven!
Why had she never done this before? This would not be the last time, not the last time this week, and it was friday!
She could feel her very anus tear apart, her organs felt like they would burst and Momo adored every second of it. Those two hard rods had no time to even throb inside of her, they felt harder than steel and showed no signs of stopping as Mina and Ochako kept pumping and pumping.
Momo finally came, through her large cock, she released her cum, rope after rope once more, coating her roof again with cum she would never bring herself to clean.
Yaoyorozu finally came… She released her ropes of cum, along with streams of crap that managed to escape the tight hold of the two penises, the manure painting them with an ever darker brown tone, and flopping to the ground. Ochako and Mina came too. Momo felt their mixed cum escape her mouth, her almost spitting it
Like a balloon, she felt herself be filled to the very brim, as her body begged all of that seed to leave as no more space was there to be taken. She began spewing out cum from her ass and mouth, as the two girls allowed her peace, resting in her bed, the fabric hardened by dry cum
Momo went to sleep, far too tired to continue, her last memories before falling asleep were of Mina fucking the shit out of Ochako's urethra, but it didn't matter, as by the time she woke up, none of the two were there any longer
When she woke up, she found that her room was mostly clean. While some spots had cum puddles and shit stains, everything seemed dry enough
She checked her phone, to find herself added to a new LINE group, "Little Shit Stains" in which already were Mina, Ochako, Tsuyu, Kyouka, Ibara, Mei and Nejire.
All those people talked regularly in the group, occasionally sending dick pics, and planned some nights of sex somewhat professionaly, everyone welcomed Momo when she joined, sending a cerimoneous dick pic with nice messages of all kinds of hellos
She also had a private message from Mina, explaining that the cleanup was done by the one and only, as she said she could produce an acid that broke down cum like detergent and fat, and that she and Ochako shared the shit piles among themselves
Her first instinct in the group was to invite someone to get frisky tomorrow, however, only Jirou accepted, being the only one free in that saturday afternoon
More than enough, she thanked everyone for including her in the fornication festivity, and would go on to have a peaceful night of sleep
This one was one of the more secretive ones, only the trio and a couple more heard about it, which led to Iida learning about it, and due to cooperative Class Repping, Momo learned about it too.
The enigmatic three letters, that were just one: NNN. No Nut November. While Momo at first thought it quite literally meant nuts, since some of the memes the group would bring up were fairly nonsensical to begin with, Iida (Todoroki that just so happened to be around) explained the true meaning of the word nut in that occasion
Momo felt puzzled. Why on earth would anyone willingly restrain themselves from such an important part of life for no good reason? But a part of her could understand the appeal
People wanted a challenge, this wasn’t a self-improvement move as much as it was a dick measuring contest. Who could last longer, who could be the most correct.
But… Whatever was the appeal of this stupid meme that transcended from the social media feeds kind of hit Momo.
November was coming tomorrow and she couldn't help but feel like she could skip her masturbation routine for November, and only that. If things got too harsh she could just quit, nothing was in line
Except that's not what happened. By day 7 she was starting to feel like her cock was being far more annoying than ever
By day 12, the other girls started asking why she stopped taking the community baths, and her super suit was a lot more bulging than before
She could quit, of course. But we're talking about Momo the Yaoyorozu. She wouldn't quit this stupid challenge for her life.
By day 20 she noticed her, prior to this ordeal, a fairly average cock grew in size. Before, 8 inches long, and now, bordering 38 inches long, as wide as her thigh probably, and they were fucking thick. Teachers noticed how she was wearing her cape a lot more despite the warm season, but they chose to not object, as Momo always had more of a support role anyway
By day 26, her breasts were engorged, and they would spontaneously start lactating. She'd move away from gatherings just to wait for them to stop
Day 31. Final day, and it went by fairly smoothly considering she was used to all of those problems from the month. She didn't know if it was normal for the participants to just, grow like that, and she was the only participant around, or maybe she was the only one that experienced this growth
Now… Masturbation isn't working. Nothing is. She couldn't cum. She could just edge herself further but never reach orgasm.
She needed someone to help her in some way or another. Who would help her in a situation like this?
The answer was Mina. One day, after she came back from washing the dishes that day, she returned to her bedroom, to find Mina naked, fingering her butthole, laying ass up on her bed.
"A-Ashido! What are you doing in my r-room!" Momo exclaimed, choosing to ignore the girl's questionable choice to please herself there
"You did NNN didn't ya?" She didn't even look at Momo, still staring at the walls, wardrobe and portraits
"I- I did…"
"Can't believe you actually did it! You always go above and beyond Yaomomo!" Mina finally turned to the raven, sitting up, the pink meat rod flopping along with its owner. Ashido's penis was a good 23 inch, she didn't bother hiding it like Momo, and no one ever complained
"And… Why are you here?"
"I see that's not stopping any time soon!"
"Y-yeah…"
"So great! Get naked and let's get frisky!"
"B-but…"
"Even if someone hears us they won't interrupt" She smiled with a shit eating grin, getting up and locking the door behind Momo "If you feel safer that way" She shrugged
"Well, you really are correct…" Momo took off her turtleneck, then her bra. Stripping in front of Mina was no new job, the baths were shared among all girls, there was nothing she didn't see already
"Your dick is huuuuge now!" Except that
Momo was always the smallest (she supposed, not like she could see Hagakure) among the girls, even though no one poked fun at it, she felt a little weak compared to them, luckily this was already the past
"It grew quite a lot…"
"Fuck yeah" Mina contemplated Momo's naked body, her hands grabbing her large pink cock and fingering her urethra "Come closer, I'll suck your dick" Mina said, strangely serious
Momo did as Mina ordered, she was the most experienced of the two. Momo's cock hardened under her touch, growing more and more until it was at full mast
"Now time for lunch" Mina licked her lips, and sucked in Momo's glans in her mouth. Like a vacuum, her pink lips surrounded a good chunk of the larger girl’s magnificent pillar, her tongue only being able to cover a tiny part of it, inside the girl’s mouth
Momo couldn’t hold it in anymore, holding Mina’s horns and shoving it all deep in her mouth. Her large balls overshadowed Mina’s breasts in size, and she could feel Mina’s hard cock pressing her testicles
Mina could feel her throat bulge from the large object, she took it in as it tore apart her insides… She felt something build up in her stomach…
Momo swiftly removed her dick from Mina’s throat, knowing it wouldn’t work, and it maybe hurt her friend
“A-Ashido! A-are you alright?” She stuttered, but Mina had already gotten up, holding the girl’s head, she made contact with her lips.
The two shared a deep and intense kiss… Until Mina barfed inside Momo’s mouth. The jet-haired’s mouth was filled with the sour taste of a mixture between precum and bile as Mina seemed none the wiser to such a gross act
On reflex, Momo swallowed the gross load, in a way, she found it as compensation for widening her friend’s throat
“W-whuuuohhh” She was about to ask why did Mina do it in her mouth, but all Momo felt was the barf shake coming back
Once again Mina grabbed Momo’s face, removing the girl’s hand from her mouth, Mina knew Momo wasn’t going to let it out, so what she did was give the girl’s nuts a strong knee
The pain made Momo expel the vomit directly in Mina’s ready, gaping mouth. The girl expertly swallowed it whole, even licking her lips afterwards
“H-how do you like t-this?” She asked, a little shocked
“It’s not the taste… It tastes like vomit, literally… It’s just the idea y’know… The filth”
“I see… I don’t think I get it completely though…” She said between huffs
“If you want me to go a little easier, no problem on me”
“No no, I want more, anything to make me cum”
“I don’t really feel like puking anymore… I know! Wait a minute…” Mina reached all the way back, inserting her hand inside her butthole… Then her wrist, then her forearm. The outlandish position served a purpose
Mina’s arm came back stained in brown, her hand in particular holding a wet, stinky and mucky piece of shit.
Momo never saw poop this closely before. It was in the toilet, there. She never looked at it for too long either… This time? She couldn’t look away.
Even less sense she had when Mina brought the soft pile of scat to her mouth, not only biting it in, but also chewing it, until she opened her mouth again, and while her teeth were stained brown, her saliva was that same intoxicating color, in her similarly colored tongue laid an almost perfect circle of the previously mushy excrement
Momo knew this was an invitation to come closer, and this time, she began the kiss. Mina’s tongue shoved the little ball of crap inside Momo’s mouth. It was bitter, very bitter… But then again, Momo tried thinking from the outside perspective. She had probably the dirtiest substance a human can produce in her mouth, chewing it, using her tongue to paint her mouth brown.
It almost felt like the bitterness disappeared… An intoxicating flavor taking its place. Momo felt she could stay there forever, and it would never grow tiring. So much so she needed to share this glee with her partner.
Finally, what she had been holding in for a month (since she usually masturbates during her poop) came out… Logs of brown excrement came out, a gross squelching noise made from Momo’s convulsing butthole. She opened her mouth too, showing Mina the mess she had made inside
The pink girl was fisting her urethra, using the dirty hand. She let Momo take the lead, considering how enthusiastic the girl was
Mina removed her hand from inside her cock, leaving her urethra gaping. Momo turned back to her with two large pieces of scat in her hands. She stuffed one in Mina’s mouth, the pinkette gladly accepting it. While she would do the same with the other one, Mina’s urethra was so inviting…
Momo shoved the other piece inside Mina’s cock. Not only that, she sat on Mina’s lap, taking her whole cock in, none of them knew she could even do that in the first place. And despite the fact the large cock filled her belly, it wasn’t enough to stop more shit from coming down. While a good amount dribbled between Momo’s anal ring and Mina’s shaft, a lot of it was sucked in by Mina’s hungry cockhole
The pink girl was now a little taken aback. This was the first time she had raw scat inside and not just its dirt. It felt really good though… It was very warm, wet… It was so many that some escaped her glans, as if she was cumming crap
“You’re even worse than me Yaomomo… Goddamn!” Mina said, her voice sounding a little muffled because of the sheer amount of Momo Scat she had in her mouth.
Talking about Momo and her shit, the girl had sat down where the pile of crap was, bringing it to her mouth, and savoring every second of it. She shoved some in her urethra, some inside her nipples, inside her pussy… Momo wanted shit in every last hole she had. So this is what it meant to be truly filthy…
And finally, Momo came. Her cock released a wave of cum, hitting the ceiling in terms of strength as it coated her roof in white, with some brown stains of the shit she had placed inside there, and flew out along with the cum.
“Yaomomo… C’mon… Life isn’t just shit… Fuck my ass please!” Mina grabbed her attention, and Momo did it, the once posh and refined girl now reduced to an animal that could barely form words. Her mouth was so filled with crap some of it actively fell out
The raven’s huge cock took no time in invading Mina’s widened butthole. In its first pump the thing was already coated brown. Mina saw her belly bulge from the sheer size of Momo’s member as it ravaged her insides, Mina’s huge cock standing between the two, but was pulled aside so Momo could regurgitate some of her shit inside Mina’s mouth. Mina swallowed all the pieces whole, and grabbed Momo’s breasts, sucking the shit still stuck inside the girl’s nipple, in her shitty lactation
Momo’s entire body was brown. The girl was wet, sticky, dirty and her stench was unbearable. Exactly the way Mina liked her
Momo finally came inside Mina… The girl’s asshole pushing out shit in reflex. Mina saw her belly grow and grow in size, until Momo removed her cock from the now prolapsed hole… And all of the cum inserted there flew directly back to its creator. The stream was so powerful it even cleaned some of Momo’s chest
Momo stared in awe at Mina’s gaping hole. It was gigantic, she loved it, it was like she could see Mina’s guts from there, the puffed ring was pulsing and the creature that was Mina’s butthole showed no signs of stopping
The raven seemed a lot more sane now, her movement not as sloppy, she took support on her bed, breathing heavily
“What… Do we do about this?”
“Nothing” Mina responded cheekily “No human being can clean this… You can eat whatever shit is left, but I leave it in my room to keep the stench”
“Oh…” Momo now stopped to think about what she would do after this, but her line of thought was broken by tapping on her balcony door, through the glass, she could see it was Ochako, the girl having floated her way there
Momo opened the door quickly, allowing the brunette in
“Jeez! You did a number here!” Ochako didn’t even react to the cum falling from the ceiling like a semen rain
“Yeah” Momo said, a little embarrassed, scratching the back of her head, the girl’s cock was already soft, as the horny left Momo’s body
“Is it bad if we make it a party of three?” Ochako blurted out
“Not in my book” Mina retorted, Ochako looking at her, seeing the girl laying in bed, her dick was bulging, scat leaving her urethra, the girl’s butthole was wide and open, cum and crap staining her skin
Ochako smiled at that, removing her top, and then her bottom. In no time, her cock was hard too, she was the second largest, being 22 inches, now she was the third largest of course, but still something to brag about
Her foreskin, piled up in the glans, was blocking the view, so Momo pulled it back. Ochako’s cock was covered in smegma. She was also, by far, the dirtiest among the girls. Legends said she never washed her cock once.
Momo got hard at the sight, she and Mina approached the dirty glans, and began licking it all over, eating whatever smegma Ochako had, cleaning her cockhead. It was so much that you couldn’t even see her reddish glans. It was all that light tan dirt
Ochako came, and luckily, Momo closed the door when Ochako entered, because her cum would have flown outside had she not done that
“I wanna pee… Anyone thirsty?” Uraraka spoke, and waited for no answer, a stream of gold was ejected towards the two girls, Momo attempting to drink as much as she could, the urine coating her shit-covered body. Mina was in a similar state
Ochako had finally stopped, and Momo approached Mina, inserting a finger in the girl’s mouth. After activating the pinkette’s gag reflex, barf came out, Momo eating it gladly, some of it fell from her mouth and into her rack.
Ochako watched in amusement, but her spectating ended when Momo engulfed her dirty cock in her mouth. Deepthroating the member, Momo saw how easy it was to do this… It was almost like she was made to do this.
Mina wasted no time, going up to Uraraka and forcing her pink cock down the brunette’s throat. Momo could see the pink butthole gaping open from there. She could also see it as Mina started to shit on top of her. The soft diarrhea like substance kept falling like snow, Momo letting go of the cock to see Mina paint it brown
Momo had another idea. She held Ochako’s cock upwards, along with hers, and with some strength, she pulled Mina out of her holding, and inserted the two cocks inside of Mina’s butthole.
If Momo's cock wasn't already devastating enough, two cocks were beyond Mina's range, by far. The girl's stomach bulged out and her ass prolapsed before anyone even left it
Momo could feel Uraraka's thick smegma being smeared in her shaft as the two furiously penetrated Mina's pink (now purple) butthole
Ochako came, but Momo didn't stop. She ravaged and tore as if it was her only purpose in life. The brunette had fallen to the ground, tired, but Momo did not. She simply came, removed her large cock from Mina, and let the pinkette slip to the cum-covered floor
Her room was a mess of the utmost kind. The floor was covered in the white slimy liquid up to their ankles, there were piles of shit in every direction and the occasional yellow spot, kindly painted by Ochako's piss
Oh yeah, Ochako pissed on her, right? This gave Momo total freedom on what to do next. She aimed her glans and began releasing her golden and warm stream in Ochako's face. It dribbled down to her body, and covered the voluptuous girl in gold
This wasn't the end, oh no.
"Turn around, Ochako" Momo spoke, with a newly found commanding voice that made Uraraka obey without hesitation
Momo also penetrated Ochako. Getting her whole dick inside with no issue, she decided to finish her stream. Piss came out, this time, inside Ochako. It quite fastly began to bloat her belly as more and more liquid was put in.
And the urine had stopped, Momo continued to hammer her dick inside Ochako, it felt like fucking a warm water balloon, considering how much liquid was in there
Momo stopped tearing Ochako's anus apart when she noticed the brunette's cock looked like it was hardening, even though it was already rock hard.
Not only that, it was way bigger now! At least 34 inches in size!
"Holy shit I'm huge!" She commemorated, satisfied with her newly giant cock
"Awwww c'mon I want one too!"
"I don't know how it happened!" Momo defended, letting go of Uraraka, as she pondered.
The one thing Mina had yet to interact with that came from Momo's body was piss. That was conveniently the one thing she did with Ochako before the enlargement
"Keep steady, I will give you your enlargement" Momo spoke in a commanding tone, and as the golden elixir of growth came out, Mina was more than happy to have it. This time Mina directly drank it, so her cock grew immediately
Before, a 23 inch somewhat big cock became a solid 36 inch monster. None of them were as big as Momo was, but were still gigantic
She grabbed both of the cocks, having to hug them to have them both with her. Her cock was hard, and stood between them
"I have been needing a good ass fuck ever since we started…" She stopped to lick some smegma off of Ochako's rod "I think this is the perfect opportunity"
Taking support on her bed, Momo let her meat globes shine in front of the two ladies, she awaited her prize expectantly.
Mina came first, she was surprised to see how loose it was
"Damn girl, how are you this wide open already?"
"I don't know either… But you should take the challenge!"
"Oh if we will!" Ochako joined Mina as the two began going wild inside Momo. Two gigantic cocks breaking her apart! This was heaven!
Why had she never done this before? This would not be the last time, not the last time this week, and it was friday!
She could feel her very anus tear apart, her organs felt like they would burst and Momo adored every second of it. Those two hard rods had no time to even throb inside of her, they felt harder than steel and showed no signs of stopping as Mina and Ochako kept pumping and pumping.
Momo finally came, through her large cock, she released her cum, rope after rope once more, coating her roof again with cum she would never bring herself to clean.
Yaoyorozu finally came… She released her ropes of cum, along with streams of crap that managed to escape the tight hold of the two penises, the manure painting them with an ever darker brown tone, and flopping to the ground. Ochako and Mina came too. Momo felt their mixed cum escape her mouth, her almost spitting it
Like a balloon, she felt herself be filled to the very brim, as her body begged all of that seed to leave as no more space was there to be taken. She began spewing out cum from her ass and mouth, as the two girls allowed her peace, resting in her bed, the fabric hardened by dry cum
Momo went to sleep, far too tired to continue, her last memories before falling asleep were of Mina fucking the shit out of Ochako's urethra, but it didn't matter, as by the time she woke up, none of the two were there any longer
When she woke up, she found that her room was mostly clean. While some spots had cum puddles and shit stains, everything seemed dry enough
She checked her phone, to find herself added to a new LINE group, "Little Shit Stains" in which already were Mina, Ochako, Tsuyu, Kyouka, Ibara, Mei and Nejire.
All those people talked regularly in the group, occasionally sending dick pics, and planned some nights of sex somewhat professionaly, everyone welcomed Momo when she joined, sending a cerimoneous dick pic with nice messages of all kinds of hellos
She also had a private message from Mina, explaining that the cleanup was done by the one and only, as she said she could produce an acid that broke down cum like detergent and fat, and that she and Ochako shared the shit piles among themselves
Her first instinct in the group was to invite someone to get frisky tomorrow, however, only Jirou accepted, being the only one free in that saturday afternoon
More than enough, she thanked everyone for including her in the fornication festivity, and would go on to have a peaceful night of sleep
I like the dedication to sticking with the letter M for the title, but the fic's content? Definitely not. This writer also apparently isn't a fan of using periods (as in the punctuation) either.
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At least post less obvious wank fic. It's straight up masturbation material with no soul in it. Just coom
Edit: Just finished reading pages. Some of the commentary attached is subjectively more disgusting than the actual content presented.
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Leon Trotsky, step aside - another Jew has come to take your place to run a Communist utopia. From Veeforvindicta, the same author who wrote that shotacon deer fic. This time around, surprisingly, everyone is an adult - but with a special surprise at the end. Author also made one of the titular characters a Yiddish Jew who marries a Gentile.
> They aren't living in some sort of cult, founded by a man mad with power
Oy vey, what are you trying to do, compare Viktor with Netanyahu?
> Tried to work out some kind of heroic speech
He did no such thing. He was having a mental breakdown from visions of the apocalypse and had a one-track mind for killing.
> Refreshing in the balmy summer air
Reading this, I wondered where this was taking place, as the commune was originally set in the depths of Zaun, where it's cool and dry. Now there's a different commune in a different location, somewhere outside both cities, where there are forests AND access to the summer heat. Glad he just teleported outside of Valoran.
> Seemingly without money passing hands
This is way more unbelievable than this bitch writing pedophilia; what makes you think A JEW is going to turn down money? They always find a way to exploit those systems.
> It sounds like something a lover would say to their partner returning from war
Boy, do I have a ship to sell you.
> They start at the market
What's this? A commune having a market where goods are exchanged? That is proto-capitalism. That is how humans traded before currency was invented. Payment is whatever you can offer that equals the value of the good you desire. Leave it to the Jew to want it to go both ways.
> It's Yiddish
Eugh, Gutter German. I can see why the author is having them speak this and not Hebrew: one sounds nationalistic and ancient, the other is the sound of the ghetto. Which is what this commune started off as, lmao.
> Zaun was past saving
Viktor would never, EVER abandon Zaun. Those are his people. He helped those who wanted aid and ignored the Chem Barons who were exploiting them. He believed in personal action. Him leaving them behind in favor of this Messiah complex is unironically a very Jewish thing to do.
> The house is larger than the others in the commune, but it's not due to vanity
Of course not. It's anti Semitism when you ask why the Jewish leader has the best house around.
> Sitting with his knees pulled up to his chest
Very feminine.
> Someone good. I am not good
You've been kicked out of 109 academies. Hell yeah it's your fault.
> I regretted every second of being away from you
He was doing just fine in the show.
> Small hands
Oy vey. He's going to have those tiny hands and tiny waist, where Jayce's thumbs will meet in the middle.
> That's how he thrives, so it works out well
Redundant.
> There really isn't anything for him to do in the commune
Figures. An outsider comes in, doesn't do any work or hard labour, and lives off the labour of others. He'd be a brown Bernie Sanders in another life.
> Settling into a brand new body and exploring every sensation for the first time. Which - well. He sort of is, isn't he?
I've seen this kind of writing from Rekki and MGCraig, where they do this, 'Well, yeah.' and 'Well, yeah' when making statements that have already been shown to be true. They're trying to be witty here, and it isn't working.
> As if he's the Herald's consort
This is supposed to be a commune, where there are no social roles, and yet he's getting a higher social role than most. Funny how that works.
> One traditionally celebrated in Zaun
I was told he 'left Zaun behind' because there was nothing left to save, and now he's keeping up with their holidays? Or is he keeping up with the Jewish holidays because those are the only ones that matter?
> What next?
What's next sounds better.
This is their attempt at a baptism, but Jews don't like anything associated with Christ so we go with the Yiddish version instead. I really wonder how Vee here is going to reconcile a traditional Yid intermarrying with a Gentile.
> All Hallow's Eve
That is a CELTIC celebration. Why the fuck is a Jew celebrating it, let alone a GENTILE holiday that they view as idolatry? You don't get to pick and choose which celebrations are fine to celebrate when you make a non-Jewish character a Jew for the sake of your plot, because you will get contradictions like these. It shows that this person either doesn't know much about Jewish culture, or is Jewish herself and that really explains the pedophilia obsession. I'll let you decide.
All Hallow's Eve here sounds fun - but again, why would a Jew celebrate it?
> It was so unrealistic for me. My body could never handle it
Oh you thought this wasn't going to factor in, huh? Our dear Jewish pooner is being asked about pregnancy and childbirth, because it all comes down to the trans man getting pregnant. It's the only thing they're good for, after all.
> The village in general does not suffer from severe sickness often
She wrote that they don't suffer from it AT ALL, hence why there are no medicines and only herbal remedies (which is honestly just stupid, as traditional medicines before pharmaceuticals were made from herbs). She retconned her own work, lmao
Here we get a dramatic confession in that Jayce totally loves Viktor, a claim he already made, and Viktor goes on to say he totally cannot live without him.
> He can see the way his face goes slack, eyes wide
He already told him he loves him. Why is this such a surprise?
> You do not mean that. I do not know how I will continue to live
Spare me. This whole 'I can't live without your love/I'll die if you say you never love me/if you tell me you love me I'll die' emotional tactic is just manipulation. What a fucking shocker the trans man cannot live without another man's love! What a shocker that they cannot be their own person without them! Shocked, shocked I tell you!
> His life is surrounded by casual magic
Guess all that PTSD went poof like Elie Wiesel's reputation after he started groping women.
> That man truly wasn't alive until your return
Here we go.
> She sticks her ground and sees reality better than Jayce ever could
Ah, the classic 'random woman tells man to get his shit together and propose' cliché.
> It's not like things would fall apart if I left
> They would
So Viktor's a shittier Jim Jones, except without the Kool-Aid he does it out of heartache.
> Mel had been...more accidental than anything
Of course the black woman is a tool. Those fucking schvartzes need to stay in their fucking lane.
I'm shocked a war didn't break out over that chocolate. That's a luxury.
> Viktor can be just as oblivious as him sometimes
Haha, get it? They're both autistic so they can't read social cues.
> She sends him on his way with a pink lipstick kiss
Are these people making their own makeup, or did they get it from the outside?
Hopefully they're not the bath salts that make you want to eat someone's face, which was Jayce's mindset after he came back from the apocalypse.
Nothing like a massage followed by some carpet munching.
> Hot peppers and jojoba
I assume the hot peppers here are capsaicin, the same stuff used in Tiger Balm, while the jojoba is meant to add a better, sweeter scent to the overpowering pepper. I just wonder why an anti-arthritic balm is even needed for a biomechanical body.
> Into the muscle underneath the soft layer of fat there
So he still has breasts, and never got the tit chop. Interesting.
> You like being my baby? You'll always be my baby
Glad her shotacon tendencies came out through those lines. Viktor isn't a 12-year-old deer here, but he may be in another installment. Figures all her real effort is put into that vs a sober, mature romance between two adults.
Confessing what the other already knew, eh? You could've summed this up in a thousand words or less.
> Well-worn purple lace
Now, how did they get that fabric if they are a commune that doesn't believe in currency? Either Viktor used his magic to get them that material or the got it through outside trading - which means an exchange of goods - which would mean our Communist-style commune here is engaging in capitalism. The horror!
> It was wholly embarrassing to ask the old man to make him lingerie
If he can make that - and he clearly knows how to make it for cross-dressing men, too - I bet they have a sex shop in the commune, too. There's no money or gold here, but plenty of smut books and dildos, true to a Yid's nature.
> Purple lace bodysuit
> He looks...pretty
In which our Father-To-Be outs himself as an AGP.
> The soft layer of fat over them, his tanned skin and dark body hair
Like sticking a Yeti in cellophane.
> It felt kind of stupid to get himself something lacy and frivolous
For a Jewish-led commune, it seems redundant and hypocritical for frivolous things to exist without class issues arising, but what do I know?
> Who yelps but laughs
It's gotta be one or the other, homie.
> Viktor follows the trail of hair from his stomach to where the lace cups his crotch
There must be so much hair there he could start growing food on his body. Who needs large tracts of land when you've got him?
> Every time he feels Viktor's clit
What, no 'cock' this time around?
Sorry, no graphic porn. That's for her underage shotacon fics.
> Entire chest expands with a gasp
So he's like a pufferfish, then.
> You get fifteen minutes. Then you're fucking me into this mattress
Sorry, no smut for you. That's for Viktor being a 12-year-old deer.
> Everyone seems to know before Jayce does
Because he doesn't seem to think that putting sperm into a vagina leads to pregnancy. Men can get pregnant now, I am told, so how come he didn't suspect anything? Note how it's WOMEN who know, not men.
> Young mothers
Interesting how they are mothers, but Viktor is a seahorse dad or 'gestational carrier'. We seem to know what women are when we want our tradwife cottagecore kids, though.
> He feels stupid being the only one who didn't see it before
Just man things. You were too busy fucking and grunting to ask any questions.
> Finds that his fingers no longer touch around Viktor's waist
Oh look, it's the most repetitive line in this fandom.
> You are not eating any more fish. And no cheese or meat
Women are allowed to eat those things when pregnant, you know. You just have to make sure the meat is cooked and the cheese is not spoiled. Forbidding a woman from eating a food she craves while pregnant is shitty behaviour.
> Even though Viktor's body is seemingly perfectly able to handle carrying a child now
I am glad his worth is solely based on whether or not he can bring a child to term. Who knew shotacons had so much in common with Matt Walsh?
> The commune members clearly already knew
You wrote this already. You had a scene where the young women were blessing him and giving him well wishes.
>He's going to be a fucking father
And what is Viktor? A seahorse dad? A 'pregnant person'? A uterus owner? Do tell.
> Was the most beautiful man Jayce had ever seen when they met
> He was angelic to him, but now he's actually ethereal
Angels are already ethereal beings, you dumb fuck.
> If he isn't being actively fucked
If he's not getting pregnant, he's already pregnant. And when he's not giving birth, he's getting dicked down. What a tradwife life.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Funny how this is the only 'tame' fic this author has to offer, when her repertoire includes open pedophilia and sex abuse. The one time she has a trans character living a happy life they are...getting pregnant. The progress is the preservation of their race, apparently.
But here's the funny thing: Vee wanted to make Viktor a Jew, and a Yiddish one at that, and Yiddish/ultra conservative Jews do not believe whatsoever in miscegenation. The Talmud and Chabad forbid it. Miscegenation is effectively killing off your bloodline and you are a bad, bad Jew if you do it. Viktor here has a commune that has markets and fancy lace because despite throwing away money he still loves expensive things (oy vey) and he race mixes with a Gentile because apparently that works because said Gentile is hot, even though in their holy books Gentiles are animals. I really don't think this author thought that hard about those implications; she just looked up Yiddish terms and that was it. She focuses more on her shotacon shit and it shows. You can have graphic porn between a minor and an adult, but between a Jew and a Gentile you get a cottagecore ending. Hope it doesn't end up like a shtetl, because it sure as hell is starting to look like one.
From the author that has a fetish for human toilets, comes a classic 'boy next door' tale with a divorcee and his one-year-old mixed race baby. The call of white pussy is clearly too strong for him to resist.
> Newly learned how to float things with his mind
Hope that's an exaggeration because damn, half-black mutant babies don't sound fun.
> A dip-dyed bob too uneven to have been done at a Piltovan salon
Are we in 2007? Those haircuts have been out of style for almost 20 years.
> Thread-bare cropped tops on the better ones, sinfully short shorts
Imagine trading in a beautiful black woman for a skinny as shit pooner with no tits. What a downgrade.
> His alabaster midriff translucent under the July sun
Is he a vampire? Is he going to start glittering?
> Hugged tightly at her slim hips
Another weird thing to say towards a teenage girl, but that seems to be a trend here.
> Foreign princess-turned-queen-occasionally visiting ex-wife
So Jayce has sole custody of this kid because our Girl Boss here doesn't want to raise the child she made with him, and Deranged Daddy here wants nothing to do with said kid and chases after white pussy instead. Funny how that works.
> Bum leg
Hey, I thought that was offensive to use.
> What would it feel like against Jayce's cock if he sucks on him like those cherry lollipops he always has in his pretty mouth?
Probably better than going down on a darkie.
> His new neighbour is disgustingly attractive
These would never work if he wasn't hot.
> He stands at least a foot above Viktor
This would make him 5'2, and well within the height range of pooners. They are laughably tiny compared to actual men.
> Waters his plants in only is underwear and a cardigan
I'd be more worried about those mosquitoes and black flies than 'public decency'. Lil pooner here is going to pack welts the size of a fist and they are not going to be from a belt for once.
> He hates that screaming baby
> He just wants to punt him
Wow, the white supremacist wants to drop kick a mixed-race baby. How progressive! I wonder if our Bri'ish white woman author here feels that way about Pakis, too.
> Takes all his willpower to not grab the pale goth bitch and his slender, mole-dotted neck and fling him down the stairs
Oh wow, we have violence against the disabled, too. Look at all these boxes we're ticking off!
> You're an entitled fucking cunt
And he's about to slam his dick inside of it.
> His cute knees, his slender toes
What knees? He's got a 'bum leg' as you've written, and has a body of a scarecrow. What's sexy about it aside from those purple-glossed lips? He wants to fuck his bratty mouth on those 'knobby knees'? Hot. What a trade-off compared to a beautiful black woman.
> You look like a caveman
And he's built like one, too. You can bet your ass the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' is in this, too.
> Stiff nipples and soft tits
Nothing sexier than A-cups.
> The wife is this unnamed kid who Jayce needs to be named
Trans men want to be men, yet are completely fine because reduced to the female role because...well, they identify as men and that's all that matters. It's not gay when you fuck their pussy, oh no.
> A very good man
Who may or may not be fucking an underage teenager.
> His lips are stretched out wide
This author previously wrote Jayce as being as thick or thicker than a whiskey bottle, so we're going with that.
> His palms fit perfectly in the dip of it, his thumbs almost meeting at the belly button
She already used this line in ANOTHER fic, and she used it again here. This line is THE most overused line in this fandom, and I am convinced people are just too fucking lazy to come up with anything else.
> His extremely premature premature ejaculation
Redundant.
> There's a dripping wet cunt where he was expecting a cock
He really didn't clock the 5'2 bum leg cripple as a woman? That's a surprise.
> Jayce thinks he'll never be able to deny this beauty anything he wants
He calls him a beauty but aside from the Barbie lip gloss, this is the mostly spindly, unattractive person ever. There's a lot of projection from these white women onto this character because he is attractive and they are not, so they have to make him look worse in comparison.
> He may have just popped an untouched cherry
> Most-likely-virgin cunt squeezing tight over his cock
Place your bets on how young our Barbie Brat is.
> Mosquito bite tits
That's a term I haven't heard in a long, long while.
> Making the boy look under 18
If he wasn't hot, that 37-year-old going on a minor wouldn't look so good. Luckily, Viktor IS of age in this fic, as the author thankfully clarified in a later paragraph.
Wow, his refractory period sure is great for a 37 year old. Guess he's trying to purge all the times he fucked Mel, because fuck that bitch.
> His pussy hot and swollen and dripping so filthily
Reminds me of a wet, dirty sponge.
> He looks oddly small, he is small, he just spent the past hour tossing his body around like a ragdoll
Because he's 5'2. He's just uwu so smol and we need that sex difference highlighted to the max. They always, ALWAYS make the pooner comically small. I don't even think they're aware of what they're doing.
> He kind of looks like he got mauled by a beast
Funny how it's always the brown man doing that.
> You got fucked stupid
Least he didn't piss in his ass like that one fic.
> A fascinating pink
And what shade is this 'fascinating pink'?
> Perfectly right to have a goth chick in his bathroom
'Chick' is a term exclusively used for women. You wouldn't call a man that at all. The fact this UK author used it for a pooner is hilarious. They really don't know what the fuck they're writing half the time.
> College-aged
For once. He's usually under-15 in these works.
> It really wasn't weird until life made it weird
Yeah, a man filming two lesbians having sex is weird, because it's going to come off as porn made for the viewing of men by men. Why Vi would let Jayce of all people film her doing that is retarded. She would rather film it herself than let a man do it.
Not even actual lesbians are safe. We've got spicy straights and now this.
Very manly, very gothic. I don't know what kind of goth would just wear Barbie hot pink, unless they're cybergoths - and even then they always pair it with black. Bitch tried to get a hot goth chick and she just wrote one with knobby knees and a bum leg. Give me the African Princess over her. You're comparing Iman to a methed up Twiggy.
I am thoroughly convinced that the Reddit for AO3 is filled with has-beens and loser authors who can't even get more than five bookmarks on their works. One spoke about a 'popular' Romanian RPF fic that only got a whopping 2 bookmarks and 63 comments. Link / Archive
Another had an entire debate on healthcare costs surrounding Omegaverse heat suppressants. Link / Archive
Edit: ninja'ed by Aunt Carol.
Obligatory TERF comment:
> They aren't living in some sort of cult, founded by a man mad with power
Oy vey, what are you trying to do, compare Viktor with Netanyahu?
> Tried to work out some kind of heroic speech
He did no such thing. He was having a mental breakdown from visions of the apocalypse and had a one-track mind for killing.
> Refreshing in the balmy summer air
Reading this, I wondered where this was taking place, as the commune was originally set in the depths of Zaun, where it's cool and dry. Now there's a different commune in a different location, somewhere outside both cities, where there are forests AND access to the summer heat. Glad he just teleported outside of Valoran.
> Seemingly without money passing hands
This is way more unbelievable than this bitch writing pedophilia; what makes you think A JEW is going to turn down money? They always find a way to exploit those systems.
> It sounds like something a lover would say to their partner returning from war
Boy, do I have a ship to sell you.
> They start at the market
What's this? A commune having a market where goods are exchanged? That is proto-capitalism. That is how humans traded before currency was invented. Payment is whatever you can offer that equals the value of the good you desire. Leave it to the Jew to want it to go both ways.
> It's Yiddish
Eugh, Gutter German. I can see why the author is having them speak this and not Hebrew: one sounds nationalistic and ancient, the other is the sound of the ghetto. Which is what this commune started off as, lmao.
> Zaun was past saving
Viktor would never, EVER abandon Zaun. Those are his people. He helped those who wanted aid and ignored the Chem Barons who were exploiting them. He believed in personal action. Him leaving them behind in favor of this Messiah complex is unironically a very Jewish thing to do.
> The house is larger than the others in the commune, but it's not due to vanity
Of course not. It's anti Semitism when you ask why the Jewish leader has the best house around.
> Sitting with his knees pulled up to his chest
Very feminine.
> Someone good. I am not good
You've been kicked out of 109 academies. Hell yeah it's your fault.
> I regretted every second of being away from you
He was doing just fine in the show.
> Small hands
Oy vey. He's going to have those tiny hands and tiny waist, where Jayce's thumbs will meet in the middle.
> That's how he thrives, so it works out well
Redundant.
> There really isn't anything for him to do in the commune
Figures. An outsider comes in, doesn't do any work or hard labour, and lives off the labour of others. He'd be a brown Bernie Sanders in another life.
> Settling into a brand new body and exploring every sensation for the first time. Which - well. He sort of is, isn't he?
I've seen this kind of writing from Rekki and MGCraig, where they do this, 'Well, yeah.' and 'Well, yeah' when making statements that have already been shown to be true. They're trying to be witty here, and it isn't working.
> As if he's the Herald's consort
This is supposed to be a commune, where there are no social roles, and yet he's getting a higher social role than most. Funny how that works.
> One traditionally celebrated in Zaun
I was told he 'left Zaun behind' because there was nothing left to save, and now he's keeping up with their holidays? Or is he keeping up with the Jewish holidays because those are the only ones that matter?
> What next?
What's next sounds better.
This is their attempt at a baptism, but Jews don't like anything associated with Christ so we go with the Yiddish version instead. I really wonder how Vee here is going to reconcile a traditional Yid intermarrying with a Gentile.
> All Hallow's Eve
That is a CELTIC celebration. Why the fuck is a Jew celebrating it, let alone a GENTILE holiday that they view as idolatry? You don't get to pick and choose which celebrations are fine to celebrate when you make a non-Jewish character a Jew for the sake of your plot, because you will get contradictions like these. It shows that this person either doesn't know much about Jewish culture, or is Jewish herself and that really explains the pedophilia obsession. I'll let you decide.
All Hallow's Eve here sounds fun - but again, why would a Jew celebrate it?
> It was so unrealistic for me. My body could never handle it
Oh you thought this wasn't going to factor in, huh? Our dear Jewish pooner is being asked about pregnancy and childbirth, because it all comes down to the trans man getting pregnant. It's the only thing they're good for, after all.
> The village in general does not suffer from severe sickness often
She wrote that they don't suffer from it AT ALL, hence why there are no medicines and only herbal remedies (which is honestly just stupid, as traditional medicines before pharmaceuticals were made from herbs). She retconned her own work, lmao
Here we get a dramatic confession in that Jayce totally loves Viktor, a claim he already made, and Viktor goes on to say he totally cannot live without him.
> He can see the way his face goes slack, eyes wide
He already told him he loves him. Why is this such a surprise?
> You do not mean that. I do not know how I will continue to live
Spare me. This whole 'I can't live without your love/I'll die if you say you never love me/if you tell me you love me I'll die' emotional tactic is just manipulation. What a fucking shocker the trans man cannot live without another man's love! What a shocker that they cannot be their own person without them! Shocked, shocked I tell you!
> His life is surrounded by casual magic
Guess all that PTSD went poof like Elie Wiesel's reputation after he started groping women.
> That man truly wasn't alive until your return
Here we go.
> She sticks her ground and sees reality better than Jayce ever could
Ah, the classic 'random woman tells man to get his shit together and propose' cliché.
> It's not like things would fall apart if I left
> They would
So Viktor's a shittier Jim Jones, except without the Kool-Aid he does it out of heartache.
> Mel had been...more accidental than anything
Of course the black woman is a tool. Those fucking schvartzes need to stay in their fucking lane.
I'm shocked a war didn't break out over that chocolate. That's a luxury.
> Viktor can be just as oblivious as him sometimes
Haha, get it? They're both autistic so they can't read social cues.
> She sends him on his way with a pink lipstick kiss
Are these people making their own makeup, or did they get it from the outside?
Hopefully they're not the bath salts that make you want to eat someone's face, which was Jayce's mindset after he came back from the apocalypse.
Nothing like a massage followed by some carpet munching.
> Hot peppers and jojoba
I assume the hot peppers here are capsaicin, the same stuff used in Tiger Balm, while the jojoba is meant to add a better, sweeter scent to the overpowering pepper. I just wonder why an anti-arthritic balm is even needed for a biomechanical body.
> Into the muscle underneath the soft layer of fat there
So he still has breasts, and never got the tit chop. Interesting.
> You like being my baby? You'll always be my baby
Glad her shotacon tendencies came out through those lines. Viktor isn't a 12-year-old deer here, but he may be in another installment. Figures all her real effort is put into that vs a sober, mature romance between two adults.
Confessing what the other already knew, eh? You could've summed this up in a thousand words or less.
> Well-worn purple lace
Now, how did they get that fabric if they are a commune that doesn't believe in currency? Either Viktor used his magic to get them that material or the got it through outside trading - which means an exchange of goods - which would mean our Communist-style commune here is engaging in capitalism. The horror!
> It was wholly embarrassing to ask the old man to make him lingerie
If he can make that - and he clearly knows how to make it for cross-dressing men, too - I bet they have a sex shop in the commune, too. There's no money or gold here, but plenty of smut books and dildos, true to a Yid's nature.
> Purple lace bodysuit
> He looks...pretty
In which our Father-To-Be outs himself as an AGP.
> The soft layer of fat over them, his tanned skin and dark body hair
Like sticking a Yeti in cellophane.
> It felt kind of stupid to get himself something lacy and frivolous
For a Jewish-led commune, it seems redundant and hypocritical for frivolous things to exist without class issues arising, but what do I know?
> Who yelps but laughs
It's gotta be one or the other, homie.
> Viktor follows the trail of hair from his stomach to where the lace cups his crotch
There must be so much hair there he could start growing food on his body. Who needs large tracts of land when you've got him?
> Every time he feels Viktor's clit
What, no 'cock' this time around?
Sorry, no graphic porn. That's for her underage shotacon fics.
> Entire chest expands with a gasp
So he's like a pufferfish, then.
> You get fifteen minutes. Then you're fucking me into this mattress
Sorry, no smut for you. That's for Viktor being a 12-year-old deer.
> Everyone seems to know before Jayce does
Because he doesn't seem to think that putting sperm into a vagina leads to pregnancy. Men can get pregnant now, I am told, so how come he didn't suspect anything? Note how it's WOMEN who know, not men.
> Young mothers
Interesting how they are mothers, but Viktor is a seahorse dad or 'gestational carrier'. We seem to know what women are when we want our tradwife cottagecore kids, though.
> He feels stupid being the only one who didn't see it before
Just man things. You were too busy fucking and grunting to ask any questions.
> Finds that his fingers no longer touch around Viktor's waist
Oh look, it's the most repetitive line in this fandom.
> You are not eating any more fish. And no cheese or meat
Women are allowed to eat those things when pregnant, you know. You just have to make sure the meat is cooked and the cheese is not spoiled. Forbidding a woman from eating a food she craves while pregnant is shitty behaviour.
> Even though Viktor's body is seemingly perfectly able to handle carrying a child now
I am glad his worth is solely based on whether or not he can bring a child to term. Who knew shotacons had so much in common with Matt Walsh?
> The commune members clearly already knew
You wrote this already. You had a scene where the young women were blessing him and giving him well wishes.
>He's going to be a fucking father
And what is Viktor? A seahorse dad? A 'pregnant person'? A uterus owner? Do tell.
> Was the most beautiful man Jayce had ever seen when they met
> He was angelic to him, but now he's actually ethereal
Angels are already ethereal beings, you dumb fuck.
> If he isn't being actively fucked
If he's not getting pregnant, he's already pregnant. And when he's not giving birth, he's getting dicked down. What a tradwife life.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Funny how this is the only 'tame' fic this author has to offer, when her repertoire includes open pedophilia and sex abuse. The one time she has a trans character living a happy life they are...getting pregnant. The progress is the preservation of their race, apparently.
But here's the funny thing: Vee wanted to make Viktor a Jew, and a Yiddish one at that, and Yiddish/ultra conservative Jews do not believe whatsoever in miscegenation. The Talmud and Chabad forbid it. Miscegenation is effectively killing off your bloodline and you are a bad, bad Jew if you do it. Viktor here has a commune that has markets and fancy lace because despite throwing away money he still loves expensive things (oy vey) and he race mixes with a Gentile because apparently that works because said Gentile is hot, even though in their holy books Gentiles are animals. I really don't think this author thought that hard about those implications; she just looked up Yiddish terms and that was it. She focuses more on her shotacon shit and it shows. You can have graphic porn between a minor and an adult, but between a Jew and a Gentile you get a cottagecore ending. Hope it doesn't end up like a shtetl, because it sure as hell is starting to look like one.
From the author that has a fetish for human toilets, comes a classic 'boy next door' tale with a divorcee and his one-year-old mixed race baby. The call of white pussy is clearly too strong for him to resist.
> Newly learned how to float things with his mind
Hope that's an exaggeration because damn, half-black mutant babies don't sound fun.
> A dip-dyed bob too uneven to have been done at a Piltovan salon
Are we in 2007? Those haircuts have been out of style for almost 20 years.
> Thread-bare cropped tops on the better ones, sinfully short shorts
Imagine trading in a beautiful black woman for a skinny as shit pooner with no tits. What a downgrade.
> His alabaster midriff translucent under the July sun
Is he a vampire? Is he going to start glittering?
> Hugged tightly at her slim hips
Another weird thing to say towards a teenage girl, but that seems to be a trend here.
> Foreign princess-turned-queen-occasionally visiting ex-wife
So Jayce has sole custody of this kid because our Girl Boss here doesn't want to raise the child she made with him, and Deranged Daddy here wants nothing to do with said kid and chases after white pussy instead. Funny how that works.
> Bum leg
Hey, I thought that was offensive to use.
> What would it feel like against Jayce's cock if he sucks on him like those cherry lollipops he always has in his pretty mouth?
Probably better than going down on a darkie.
> His new neighbour is disgustingly attractive
These would never work if he wasn't hot.
> He stands at least a foot above Viktor
This would make him 5'2, and well within the height range of pooners. They are laughably tiny compared to actual men.
> Waters his plants in only is underwear and a cardigan
I'd be more worried about those mosquitoes and black flies than 'public decency'. Lil pooner here is going to pack welts the size of a fist and they are not going to be from a belt for once.
> He hates that screaming baby
> He just wants to punt him
Wow, the white supremacist wants to drop kick a mixed-race baby. How progressive! I wonder if our Bri'ish white woman author here feels that way about Pakis, too.
> Takes all his willpower to not grab the pale goth bitch and his slender, mole-dotted neck and fling him down the stairs
Oh wow, we have violence against the disabled, too. Look at all these boxes we're ticking off!
> You're an entitled fucking cunt
And he's about to slam his dick inside of it.
> His cute knees, his slender toes
What knees? He's got a 'bum leg' as you've written, and has a body of a scarecrow. What's sexy about it aside from those purple-glossed lips? He wants to fuck his bratty mouth on those 'knobby knees'? Hot. What a trade-off compared to a beautiful black woman.
> You look like a caveman
And he's built like one, too. You can bet your ass the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' is in this, too.
> Stiff nipples and soft tits
Nothing sexier than A-cups.
> The wife is this unnamed kid who Jayce needs to be named
Trans men want to be men, yet are completely fine because reduced to the female role because...well, they identify as men and that's all that matters. It's not gay when you fuck their pussy, oh no.
> A very good man
Who may or may not be fucking an underage teenager.
> His lips are stretched out wide
This author previously wrote Jayce as being as thick or thicker than a whiskey bottle, so we're going with that.
> His palms fit perfectly in the dip of it, his thumbs almost meeting at the belly button
She already used this line in ANOTHER fic, and she used it again here. This line is THE most overused line in this fandom, and I am convinced people are just too fucking lazy to come up with anything else.
> His extremely premature premature ejaculation
Redundant.
> There's a dripping wet cunt where he was expecting a cock
He really didn't clock the 5'2 bum leg cripple as a woman? That's a surprise.
> Jayce thinks he'll never be able to deny this beauty anything he wants
He calls him a beauty but aside from the Barbie lip gloss, this is the mostly spindly, unattractive person ever. There's a lot of projection from these white women onto this character because he is attractive and they are not, so they have to make him look worse in comparison.
> He may have just popped an untouched cherry
> Most-likely-virgin cunt squeezing tight over his cock
Place your bets on how young our Barbie Brat is.
> Mosquito bite tits
That's a term I haven't heard in a long, long while.
> Making the boy look under 18
If he wasn't hot, that 37-year-old going on a minor wouldn't look so good. Luckily, Viktor IS of age in this fic, as the author thankfully clarified in a later paragraph.
Wow, his refractory period sure is great for a 37 year old. Guess he's trying to purge all the times he fucked Mel, because fuck that bitch.
> His pussy hot and swollen and dripping so filthily
Reminds me of a wet, dirty sponge.
> He looks oddly small, he is small, he just spent the past hour tossing his body around like a ragdoll
Because he's 5'2. He's just uwu so smol and we need that sex difference highlighted to the max. They always, ALWAYS make the pooner comically small. I don't even think they're aware of what they're doing.
> He kind of looks like he got mauled by a beast
Funny how it's always the brown man doing that.
> You got fucked stupid
Least he didn't piss in his ass like that one fic.
> A fascinating pink
And what shade is this 'fascinating pink'?
> Perfectly right to have a goth chick in his bathroom
'Chick' is a term exclusively used for women. You wouldn't call a man that at all. The fact this UK author used it for a pooner is hilarious. They really don't know what the fuck they're writing half the time.
> College-aged
For once. He's usually under-15 in these works.
> It really wasn't weird until life made it weird
Yeah, a man filming two lesbians having sex is weird, because it's going to come off as porn made for the viewing of men by men. Why Vi would let Jayce of all people film her doing that is retarded. She would rather film it herself than let a man do it.
Not even actual lesbians are safe. We've got spicy straights and now this.
Very manly, very gothic. I don't know what kind of goth would just wear Barbie hot pink, unless they're cybergoths - and even then they always pair it with black. Bitch tried to get a hot goth chick and she just wrote one with knobby knees and a bum leg. Give me the African Princess over her. You're comparing Iman to a methed up Twiggy.
I am thoroughly convinced that the Reddit for AO3 is filled with has-beens and loser authors who can't even get more than five bookmarks on their works. One spoke about a 'popular' Romanian RPF fic that only got a whopping 2 bookmarks and 63 comments. Link / Archive
Another had an entire debate on healthcare costs surrounding Omegaverse heat suppressants. Link / Archive
Edit: ninja'ed by Aunt Carol.
Obligatory TERF comment:
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I just clicked on Original Work. I literally did not go out of my way to find this shit.
What the fuck is going on in this hellsite?
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Fujofrankenstein has published the 7th chapter of her magnum opus. Originally, this was supposed to have 12 chapters, but it seems she wants to add more material to make it all come together. The Dream Daddy foster care dream continues - as does the irrational hatred of any and all female characters.
We're still focusing on the roofie date rape, eh? That happened a few chapters ago. Using rape against a trans teen is very cheap, but FF's audience loves it because it is so relatable. Prepare to get reminded for the umpteenth time that Viktor totally didn't want it, but did, because the male stranger reminded him of his Dream Daddy.
> Doesn't need to sit in a pastel office and sob about how violated he feels
But he'll do it to Jayce, because that is the man he wants to fuck.
FF has already stressed multiple times that the drugs had made Viktor feel as if the act was consensual. The contrast between this and the ever-so-predictable child sex abuse is deliberate, because he totally wants it now from an adult he finds hot. Of course, the wider implications that this is a child who is hypersexualized because of said abuse is never touched on. It's just made into a 'novel romance' because, again, the foster father character is hot.
True to form, Viktor loses it at a random woman and blames her for daring to tell the truth. This has happened way too often for it to be a one-off event: Jayce did it with Natalia, the adult store worker, and with the female bank manager. There is a lot of open misogyny in this fic and the author doesn't realize it. Not to mention Jayce initially taking out his rage and hate on Sky and Sam, and not the boy who attacked Viktor. Hatred of female characters is a very common theme among fujos, especially the troon ones.
> Trauma can twist desire
We know. Why would this be written if this wasn't based on child sex abuse?
> His traitorous body had
How many times do we need to stress that he didn't consent, but he did want it, but it was the wrong man who did it? Dr. Singh was right, but he can't agree that a woman is right because he is a self-hating misogynist. Of course he hates women: they remind him of what he actually is, and he can't stand it.
> The way he'd pretended
Guess we're going to hammer this point home again, huh? We know. He didn't want it, but he did, and it was the wrong boy. Drugs will do that. Now, move the fuck on and get to the climax (literally) where they finally 'give in' and fuck. That's what people are really here for.
> Punish me if you need to
So Viktor has been out presumably sleeping with other boys and this enrages Jayce, who tells him to take it out on him instead. Viktor does for all of a minute, and goes back to being a giggling girl again.
> Like a sack of potatoes
The potatoes probably weigh more.
> The bathroom light is so bright it's blinding
> The swell of his chest without his binder
You'll never guess what happens.
> The water can't reach the parts of him that feel dirty
Are these the same parts you wanted to save for Jayce like a Medieval virgin princess? Too late for that now.
> The way his body had responded
WE KNOW. How many times is this going to be repeated?
> What if he takes one look at Viktor and sees him for what he is - broken, used, wrong?
A reminder that this same man touched Viktor's breasts by 'accidentally' brushing against them and that was fine, because Viktor wanted it and is attracted to Jayce, but the moment someone else ogles those non-existent breasts suddenly its DEFCON 4 and we need to lock down the house. Oh wow, a pooner is sexually abused and broken, and acts out and longs for the one attractive, muscular man that shows them affection? You don't fucking say.
> You're safe
This again?
> I can't breathe
Here we go with the George Floyd moment again.
> The way his body had betrayed him
WE FUCKING GET IT, HIS BODY RESPONDED TO EXTERNAL STIMULI BECAUSE OF THE DRUGS. SHUT UP ALREADY
> Before he even knew he was a boy - hands, grabbing, always grabbing
So you're telling me he transitioned so he wouldn't be touched anymore? Shocker.
> I feel like I deserve everything that's ever happened to me. Like I asked for it
Figures. The pooner has a heart-to-heart with Daddy Dearest, and thinks taking T and binding their breasts is going to make the bad touches go away. Funny how it's always males who seem to clock him as female and easy prey.
> The last safe thing in the world
Always about safety with pooners.
> You took their fucking lies and you built yourself anyway
He built himself a bigger lie - him being male - but that still isn't enough because he still gets misgendered and treated like the female he is.
> Why the fuck do I wake up every morning thanking whatever's out there that you're mine?
It was a stroke of luck - and lack of research on the part of the author - that Jayce got Viktor within a day. It usually takes weeks or months. In any case, the 'you're mine' comment is not meant to be wholesome. Jayce has laid his claim on our uwu trans boy and he's getting ready to move in.
> Still six years old and locked in a closet
Knowing the author, she probably bookmarked fics where he does get abused at six years old.
> Lets himself break completely
And it's just a sentence. We don't actually see him break down, lmao.
> Wrapped in the warm blanket of Jayce's love, his partner in all things
You're 16. What are you partners in, exactly? Aside from the scene where he licked your cum off the seat, you aren't partners in anything.
> Fuck him for twisting the knife like that
There's something else that's going to be twisting inside of you, and it's way bigger than a knife.
> None of it's fucking working
But I'm sure a dick delivery will. It's what's needed to 'fuck the woman' back into our pooner, after all.
> You can't fix this with love alone
He's going to fix it with his dick and then we'll get a happily ever after. Watch.
> If the state determines you're not -
If the state finds out he's been lusting after a minor he's getting on that sex offender registry.
> He needs parental consent to get top surgery or start testosterone
Oh? I thought minors weren't getting top surgery? Now I'm told 16-year-olds can and will get their tits chopped off. Leave it to a fanfic to confirm that all those transphobes were right.
> The dysphoria is killing him
He sure did enjoy his vagina when you were fingering it in the back of his car, though.
> Vander's gaze lingers on Jinx when she's not looking
Please, for the love of God, don't make Vander a nonce, you sick bitch.
> You either
Should be, 'you too' or 'you neither', even though the latter doesn't make sense.
Ah, and there's the other twist. The sisters will get reunited, Viktor will get his hormones, more female doctors and professionals will get shit on, and our novel romance will bloom like the petals on Viktor's vulva. So excited to see how long this will go on for.
You'll never guess what kind of friends Fujofrankenstein has.
Talking about sex abuse by males at gyno offices:
Just normal, everyday people. Wouldn't you like to share a room with them?
I've featured Mr. Ratwife here before, before the explosion that occurred back in November. She and her co-author, Valorikei, weren't very popular but gathered some success after writing for someone named Langarang, who made AMVs for extremely popular fics from the likes of ruinthatboy. They've come up with a new piece, based on a character who only existed in a journal and was never animated and never in the show - but since he's white, we've already got a background and a full character profile while characters like Sky get nothing.
> Who was laying his back on the table
*Who was lying on his back. These authors beta-read each other.
> Letting go of the man's slender waist to support one of his twig legs
Hot. Nice that they can basically call him a skeleton, but no one else can because that's ableist.
> The smallest glimpse of a slippery wetness in a mess of unruly hair
There's the Tarzan pubes we know and love! Haven't seen them in a while.
> It was painfully hot to watch
With those 'twig legs'? I don't think so.
> he couldn't deny how erotic it was
See point above.
> Dmitri was far from anything attractive
From the drawing in Jayce's journal, he seems fine. This is a character who doesn't show up in the show and yet he gets more screentime and attention by fans because he's a white male. Tale as old as time.
> Like a thick wine that he couldn't help but to get drunk off of
White pussy do be like that.
> At any second it felt like all of them were about to explode
From pleasure or a car bomb?
> Maybe he would have whored himself out like them
Hey, are you suggesting the trans man is a whore? That's transphobic.
> Brunett
This person cannot spell it right, before going back to the female variant. It is 'brunet'.
> Nearly soiling his report by mere inches
Imagine if he did spill come on his report and he had to explain to Heimerdinger why it smells like old shrimp.
> For such a small guy he seemed to have a decent amount of strength
He's 5'8. He still has some muscle tone at this stage of his life. Since he's on T (presumably) he should have some as a bonus. Lines like these make me think he's 5'2 and under.
> Going to pound town in the professor's office
And you're about to go double dipping and give him a load of your cream.
> His eyes even half-drooping
This makes me think he's falling asleep.
> Cashing in his V-card, too
What was that about being a whore? Guess we forgot about that part.
> To a threeway with two dudes
One has a vagina, so it's Two and a Half Men.
> This wasn't something he could just go ask his mama about
She'd be wondering why her son is calling himself gay when he's fucking vagina. It's straight with extra steps.
> His small body was swimming in the baggy fabric
Let me guess. There's going to be a 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line.
> Brunette
Bitches so dumb they just used the female variant of that word for a female character. Well done, ladies.
> in the meantime Dmitri pulled Viktor's small shorts down and off
He's just so smol. So tiny and cute and so squishable.
> Did he really meet Jayce in the doorway with just a sweatshirt and shorts
Yes? You wrote that as soon as he opened the door?
> Would he do the same for Jayce
Yeah. Would you be in this situation otherwise?
> Smooth and slightly pudgy stomach
He doesn't have a pudgy stomach at all. He's very young and fit here, without a single ounce of fat. This is supposed to make him look relatable, or something.
> Tightened over thin bones he wishes he could wrap his lips around
You want to suck on his fingers, now?
> Hover his snatch over his mouth
What a way to start off a DP scene.
> Drippy and wet sex
Makes me think of a mop.
> Rubbed him to full mast
Now I'm on a boat. I'm on a boat. Take a good look at me, on the motherfuckin' boat.
> Keeping his attention focused on eating out Viktor's pussy
Better than reading 'snatch' at least.
> Get it up again, Jayce
I know he's young, but getting erect after ejaculating that fast at least requires 10 minutes. My man has no refractory period whatsoever.
> Pushed his fingers into Viktor's hole
Which one?
> Brunette
Wrong word.
> He's on the pill, and we both tested recently
If that's the case, why does he need a condom? If they were worried about STDs, they could have just asked him.
> His wrapped cock slipping perfectly into Viktor's loosened hole
This is a double vaginal penetration scene, and it is by far the most boring one I have read. Mr. Ratwife and her co-author have never been good at writing smut; it is clear they have not improved whatsoever over the years.
> dipped a finger back into Viktor's hole
I was about to ask 'which one' again until he slipped his dick inside. Thank God for that.
> They shared their indulgence in Viktor's snatch
What a way to kill the mood. It's just as bad as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' from OhNovi.
> He watched Viktor's spine with fascinated curiosity
Redundant. They are synonyms. They basically mean the same thing. I am glad Viktor's spine can bend like that; he's still young here and has some flexibility. Looks good on a skeleton.
> Plow Viktor's pussy and make the lube squelch wetly inside him
Just makes me think of a squeegee. When you write things like 'snatch' and other stupid shit, I am not going to take your smut seriously. Thankfully, Mr. Ratwife does not indulge on her bad smut and gets it over with quick.
I would not have known it was a rough fucking had you not said so. It came and went faster than Jayce came the first time. However, I am glad it goes quickly, because I don't think I could manage to read a fic of hers that was 8k or more. Bad fics are one thing, but boredom is a real killer. It's not like 'mango loco' where there were so many terrible, quotable lines that it had to be picked through carefully. These authors were never popular before S2, and still aren't, because even other trans Viktor authors don't find them interesting enough to read. How sad is that?
I ran into this one based around Catholic guilt, which is a common thing in my neck of the woods. A bunch of fanfic writers are either ex-Catholics or a flavour of Protestant themselves as they are majority white. You'll see a lot of 'Catholic guilt', but never 'Jewish guilt', or 'Muslim guilt', mainly because there is no guilt among the former and the latter will just cut your head off for mocking Mohammed. Have your usual dose of predatory Catholics instead, from a Twitter users who made this thread into a full-fledged fic. This one isn't a horror per se, despite the tags, but it is interesting to see that Catholicism is the only religion they'll attack.
Stars a character that suffers Catholic guilt, yet has sex outside of marriage and is pro-troon.
Why do they. Always talk. In sentences. Like this? Thankfully this peters out later in the fic but Jesus Christ, queercatfan needs to be exorcised.
> A desperate attempt to feel something that didn't feel like pressure or perfection
He can't masturbate but he knows what trans people are. OK. Even most modern day Catholics know what porn is.
The tags for this were 'underage sex' and I thought it was going to involve underage Viktor, but I was thankfully surprised. Instead, we have a random girl rape Jayce instead, being part of the 2% and under so the author can make a statement. I don't think, 'you were hard, you asked for it' would go as well as the excuses they use for trans Viktor here.
He is allowed to feel guilty and ashamed, but when the opposite happens, the trans victim is told that they asked for it and they later grow to enjoy it. Interesting to watch perspectives change based on who the victim is.
> Guilt doesn't demand rituals or belief
You are engaging in a different set of rituals and belief because of said guilt, making this metaphor incorrect. That is what happens when you engage in a medium critically.
> As if they've known each other in another life
Ah, the cosmic soulmates thing. How quaint.
> Loving Viktor the way he does doesn't feel like sin
Of course not. Complementary genitalia and all.
> He doesn't deserve to feel like a sin
It's because he's trans, isn't it? Is that going to be brought up, or...?
The writing itself is not bad at all. I thought it would be worse. But I am waiting for the epic surprise and critique on Catholicism that is bound to happen. Genderspecials don't like a religion with defined gender roles, who knew.
Small, indeed. How tall is he in this?
He feels guilt over sexual desire and pleasure, the classic Catholic cliché. How does he atone? By seeing a trans person as the face of God.
> When something feels good, but it's not supposed to
This author does realize that even most Catholics know what sex-ed is, right? That they know what birth control is and take it? That they know how babies are made? That they watch porn? This just sounds out of touch in the modern era.
> Sometimes he fantasizes about how they would feel against his skin
I'd rather see him visit an orthodontist.
> The Church might consider this a sin
> Do you think I am a sinner
I think the Church would be confused. It can't be gay sex because only one of you is male, but it is a sin as the one is pretending to be the sex they are not. I guess it cancels itself out in the end.
Always, always about safety with these cunts.
> How many nights has he silently punished himself for wanting this?
So is the guilt over sexual pleasure in general or fucking a troon? He didn't have a crisis of faith upon finding out that Viktor was trans, which is a major thing to overlook. He's pro trans but pro-Catholic, too? OK.
> How could this ever be a sin
Well it is straight sex when you think about it.
> Sex always felt like something he had to do
Wait. You are going to tell me you're a devout Catholic but you're having sex outside of marriage? Seems the author wants to pick and choose which parts of Catholic guilt we're sticking to.
> Worship a broken saint
All the saints were broken people until they met God. If we're being honest here.
I'll give the author this: by avoiding graphic smut she does hammer her point home, but I don't know why this was rated E when it could have been rated M. For once, I'm more miffed about the supposed Catholic guilt than I am anything else.
Now that's blasphemy. A trans man having the face of God? Having sex outside of marriage? Being pro troon but feeling guilt over masturbation? What Bible have you been reading? What Christianity are these people subscribing to, the 'holy but for the cummies' version?
We're still focusing on the roofie date rape, eh? That happened a few chapters ago. Using rape against a trans teen is very cheap, but FF's audience loves it because it is so relatable. Prepare to get reminded for the umpteenth time that Viktor totally didn't want it, but did, because the male stranger reminded him of his Dream Daddy.
> Doesn't need to sit in a pastel office and sob about how violated he feels
But he'll do it to Jayce, because that is the man he wants to fuck.
FF has already stressed multiple times that the drugs had made Viktor feel as if the act was consensual. The contrast between this and the ever-so-predictable child sex abuse is deliberate, because he totally wants it now from an adult he finds hot. Of course, the wider implications that this is a child who is hypersexualized because of said abuse is never touched on. It's just made into a 'novel romance' because, again, the foster father character is hot.
True to form, Viktor loses it at a random woman and blames her for daring to tell the truth. This has happened way too often for it to be a one-off event: Jayce did it with Natalia, the adult store worker, and with the female bank manager. There is a lot of open misogyny in this fic and the author doesn't realize it. Not to mention Jayce initially taking out his rage and hate on Sky and Sam, and not the boy who attacked Viktor. Hatred of female characters is a very common theme among fujos, especially the troon ones.
> Trauma can twist desire
We know. Why would this be written if this wasn't based on child sex abuse?
> His traitorous body had
How many times do we need to stress that he didn't consent, but he did want it, but it was the wrong man who did it? Dr. Singh was right, but he can't agree that a woman is right because he is a self-hating misogynist. Of course he hates women: they remind him of what he actually is, and he can't stand it.
> The way he'd pretended
Guess we're going to hammer this point home again, huh? We know. He didn't want it, but he did, and it was the wrong boy. Drugs will do that. Now, move the fuck on and get to the climax (literally) where they finally 'give in' and fuck. That's what people are really here for.
> Punish me if you need to
So Viktor has been out presumably sleeping with other boys and this enrages Jayce, who tells him to take it out on him instead. Viktor does for all of a minute, and goes back to being a giggling girl again.
> Like a sack of potatoes
The potatoes probably weigh more.
> The bathroom light is so bright it's blinding
> The swell of his chest without his binder
You'll never guess what happens.
> The water can't reach the parts of him that feel dirty
Are these the same parts you wanted to save for Jayce like a Medieval virgin princess? Too late for that now.
> The way his body had responded
WE KNOW. How many times is this going to be repeated?
> What if he takes one look at Viktor and sees him for what he is - broken, used, wrong?
A reminder that this same man touched Viktor's breasts by 'accidentally' brushing against them and that was fine, because Viktor wanted it and is attracted to Jayce, but the moment someone else ogles those non-existent breasts suddenly its DEFCON 4 and we need to lock down the house. Oh wow, a pooner is sexually abused and broken, and acts out and longs for the one attractive, muscular man that shows them affection? You don't fucking say.
> You're safe
This again?
> I can't breathe
Here we go with the George Floyd moment again.
> The way his body had betrayed him
WE FUCKING GET IT, HIS BODY RESPONDED TO EXTERNAL STIMULI BECAUSE OF THE DRUGS. SHUT UP ALREADY
> Before he even knew he was a boy - hands, grabbing, always grabbing
So you're telling me he transitioned so he wouldn't be touched anymore? Shocker.
> I feel like I deserve everything that's ever happened to me. Like I asked for it
Figures. The pooner has a heart-to-heart with Daddy Dearest, and thinks taking T and binding their breasts is going to make the bad touches go away. Funny how it's always males who seem to clock him as female and easy prey.
> The last safe thing in the world
Always about safety with pooners.
> You took their fucking lies and you built yourself anyway
He built himself a bigger lie - him being male - but that still isn't enough because he still gets misgendered and treated like the female he is.
> Why the fuck do I wake up every morning thanking whatever's out there that you're mine?
It was a stroke of luck - and lack of research on the part of the author - that Jayce got Viktor within a day. It usually takes weeks or months. In any case, the 'you're mine' comment is not meant to be wholesome. Jayce has laid his claim on our uwu trans boy and he's getting ready to move in.
> Still six years old and locked in a closet
Knowing the author, she probably bookmarked fics where he does get abused at six years old.
> Lets himself break completely
And it's just a sentence. We don't actually see him break down, lmao.
> Wrapped in the warm blanket of Jayce's love, his partner in all things
You're 16. What are you partners in, exactly? Aside from the scene where he licked your cum off the seat, you aren't partners in anything.
> Fuck him for twisting the knife like that
There's something else that's going to be twisting inside of you, and it's way bigger than a knife.
> None of it's fucking working
But I'm sure a dick delivery will. It's what's needed to 'fuck the woman' back into our pooner, after all.
> You can't fix this with love alone
He's going to fix it with his dick and then we'll get a happily ever after. Watch.
> If the state determines you're not -
If the state finds out he's been lusting after a minor he's getting on that sex offender registry.
> He needs parental consent to get top surgery or start testosterone
Oh? I thought minors weren't getting top surgery? Now I'm told 16-year-olds can and will get their tits chopped off. Leave it to a fanfic to confirm that all those transphobes were right.
> The dysphoria is killing him
He sure did enjoy his vagina when you were fingering it in the back of his car, though.
> Vander's gaze lingers on Jinx when she's not looking
Please, for the love of God, don't make Vander a nonce, you sick bitch.
> You either
Should be, 'you too' or 'you neither', even though the latter doesn't make sense.
Ah, and there's the other twist. The sisters will get reunited, Viktor will get his hormones, more female doctors and professionals will get shit on, and our novel romance will bloom like the petals on Viktor's vulva. So excited to see how long this will go on for.
Talking about sex abuse by males at gyno offices:
Just normal, everyday people. Wouldn't you like to share a room with them?
I've featured Mr. Ratwife here before, before the explosion that occurred back in November. She and her co-author, Valorikei, weren't very popular but gathered some success after writing for someone named Langarang, who made AMVs for extremely popular fics from the likes of ruinthatboy. They've come up with a new piece, based on a character who only existed in a journal and was never animated and never in the show - but since he's white, we've already got a background and a full character profile while characters like Sky get nothing.
> Who was laying his back on the table
*Who was lying on his back. These authors beta-read each other.
> Letting go of the man's slender waist to support one of his twig legs
Hot. Nice that they can basically call him a skeleton, but no one else can because that's ableist.
> The smallest glimpse of a slippery wetness in a mess of unruly hair
There's the Tarzan pubes we know and love! Haven't seen them in a while.
> It was painfully hot to watch
With those 'twig legs'? I don't think so.
> he couldn't deny how erotic it was
See point above.
> Dmitri was far from anything attractive
From the drawing in Jayce's journal, he seems fine. This is a character who doesn't show up in the show and yet he gets more screentime and attention by fans because he's a white male. Tale as old as time.
> Like a thick wine that he couldn't help but to get drunk off of
White pussy do be like that.
> At any second it felt like all of them were about to explode
From pleasure or a car bomb?
> Maybe he would have whored himself out like them
Hey, are you suggesting the trans man is a whore? That's transphobic.
> Brunett
This person cannot spell it right, before going back to the female variant. It is 'brunet'.
> Nearly soiling his report by mere inches
Imagine if he did spill come on his report and he had to explain to Heimerdinger why it smells like old shrimp.
> For such a small guy he seemed to have a decent amount of strength
He's 5'8. He still has some muscle tone at this stage of his life. Since he's on T (presumably) he should have some as a bonus. Lines like these make me think he's 5'2 and under.
> Going to pound town in the professor's office
And you're about to go double dipping and give him a load of your cream.
> His eyes even half-drooping
This makes me think he's falling asleep.
> Cashing in his V-card, too
What was that about being a whore? Guess we forgot about that part.
> To a threeway with two dudes
One has a vagina, so it's Two and a Half Men.
> This wasn't something he could just go ask his mama about
She'd be wondering why her son is calling himself gay when he's fucking vagina. It's straight with extra steps.
> His small body was swimming in the baggy fabric
Let me guess. There's going to be a 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line.
> Brunette
Bitches so dumb they just used the female variant of that word for a female character. Well done, ladies.
> in the meantime Dmitri pulled Viktor's small shorts down and off
He's just so smol. So tiny and cute and so squishable.
> Did he really meet Jayce in the doorway with just a sweatshirt and shorts
Yes? You wrote that as soon as he opened the door?
> Would he do the same for Jayce
Yeah. Would you be in this situation otherwise?
> Smooth and slightly pudgy stomach
He doesn't have a pudgy stomach at all. He's very young and fit here, without a single ounce of fat. This is supposed to make him look relatable, or something.
> Tightened over thin bones he wishes he could wrap his lips around
You want to suck on his fingers, now?
> Hover his snatch over his mouth
What a way to start off a DP scene.
> Drippy and wet sex
Makes me think of a mop.
> Rubbed him to full mast
Now I'm on a boat. I'm on a boat. Take a good look at me, on the motherfuckin' boat.
> Keeping his attention focused on eating out Viktor's pussy
Better than reading 'snatch' at least.
> Get it up again, Jayce
I know he's young, but getting erect after ejaculating that fast at least requires 10 minutes. My man has no refractory period whatsoever.
> Pushed his fingers into Viktor's hole
Which one?
> Brunette
Wrong word.
> He's on the pill, and we both tested recently
If that's the case, why does he need a condom? If they were worried about STDs, they could have just asked him.
> His wrapped cock slipping perfectly into Viktor's loosened hole
This is a double vaginal penetration scene, and it is by far the most boring one I have read. Mr. Ratwife and her co-author have never been good at writing smut; it is clear they have not improved whatsoever over the years.
> dipped a finger back into Viktor's hole
I was about to ask 'which one' again until he slipped his dick inside. Thank God for that.
> They shared their indulgence in Viktor's snatch
What a way to kill the mood. It's just as bad as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' from OhNovi.
> He watched Viktor's spine with fascinated curiosity
Redundant. They are synonyms. They basically mean the same thing. I am glad Viktor's spine can bend like that; he's still young here and has some flexibility. Looks good on a skeleton.
> Plow Viktor's pussy and make the lube squelch wetly inside him
Just makes me think of a squeegee. When you write things like 'snatch' and other stupid shit, I am not going to take your smut seriously. Thankfully, Mr. Ratwife does not indulge on her bad smut and gets it over with quick.
I would not have known it was a rough fucking had you not said so. It came and went faster than Jayce came the first time. However, I am glad it goes quickly, because I don't think I could manage to read a fic of hers that was 8k or more. Bad fics are one thing, but boredom is a real killer. It's not like 'mango loco' where there were so many terrible, quotable lines that it had to be picked through carefully. These authors were never popular before S2, and still aren't, because even other trans Viktor authors don't find them interesting enough to read. How sad is that?
I ran into this one based around Catholic guilt, which is a common thing in my neck of the woods. A bunch of fanfic writers are either ex-Catholics or a flavour of Protestant themselves as they are majority white. You'll see a lot of 'Catholic guilt', but never 'Jewish guilt', or 'Muslim guilt', mainly because there is no guilt among the former and the latter will just cut your head off for mocking Mohammed. Have your usual dose of predatory Catholics instead, from a Twitter users who made this thread into a full-fledged fic. This one isn't a horror per se, despite the tags, but it is interesting to see that Catholicism is the only religion they'll attack.
Stars a character that suffers Catholic guilt, yet has sex outside of marriage and is pro-troon.
Why do they. Always talk. In sentences. Like this? Thankfully this peters out later in the fic but Jesus Christ, queercatfan needs to be exorcised.
> A desperate attempt to feel something that didn't feel like pressure or perfection
He can't masturbate but he knows what trans people are. OK. Even most modern day Catholics know what porn is.
The tags for this were 'underage sex' and I thought it was going to involve underage Viktor, but I was thankfully surprised. Instead, we have a random girl rape Jayce instead, being part of the 2% and under so the author can make a statement. I don't think, 'you were hard, you asked for it' would go as well as the excuses they use for trans Viktor here.
He is allowed to feel guilty and ashamed, but when the opposite happens, the trans victim is told that they asked for it and they later grow to enjoy it. Interesting to watch perspectives change based on who the victim is.
> Guilt doesn't demand rituals or belief
You are engaging in a different set of rituals and belief because of said guilt, making this metaphor incorrect. That is what happens when you engage in a medium critically.
> As if they've known each other in another life
Ah, the cosmic soulmates thing. How quaint.
> Loving Viktor the way he does doesn't feel like sin
Of course not. Complementary genitalia and all.
> He doesn't deserve to feel like a sin
It's because he's trans, isn't it? Is that going to be brought up, or...?
The writing itself is not bad at all. I thought it would be worse. But I am waiting for the epic surprise and critique on Catholicism that is bound to happen. Genderspecials don't like a religion with defined gender roles, who knew.
Small, indeed. How tall is he in this?
He feels guilt over sexual desire and pleasure, the classic Catholic cliché. How does he atone? By seeing a trans person as the face of God.
> When something feels good, but it's not supposed to
This author does realize that even most Catholics know what sex-ed is, right? That they know what birth control is and take it? That they know how babies are made? That they watch porn? This just sounds out of touch in the modern era.
> Sometimes he fantasizes about how they would feel against his skin
I'd rather see him visit an orthodontist.
> The Church might consider this a sin
> Do you think I am a sinner
I think the Church would be confused. It can't be gay sex because only one of you is male, but it is a sin as the one is pretending to be the sex they are not. I guess it cancels itself out in the end.
Always, always about safety with these cunts.
> How many nights has he silently punished himself for wanting this?
So is the guilt over sexual pleasure in general or fucking a troon? He didn't have a crisis of faith upon finding out that Viktor was trans, which is a major thing to overlook. He's pro trans but pro-Catholic, too? OK.
> How could this ever be a sin
Well it is straight sex when you think about it.
> Sex always felt like something he had to do
Wait. You are going to tell me you're a devout Catholic but you're having sex outside of marriage? Seems the author wants to pick and choose which parts of Catholic guilt we're sticking to.
> Worship a broken saint
All the saints were broken people until they met God. If we're being honest here.
I'll give the author this: by avoiding graphic smut she does hammer her point home, but I don't know why this was rated E when it could have been rated M. For once, I'm more miffed about the supposed Catholic guilt than I am anything else.
Now that's blasphemy. A trans man having the face of God? Having sex outside of marriage? Being pro troon but feeling guilt over masturbation? What Bible have you been reading? What Christianity are these people subscribing to, the 'holy but for the cummies' version?
Make sure all the doctors are Indians with names like Dr. Akshit or Suckdeep and have a bunch of boomer Omegas/Alphas bitch about Trump. Oh, that reminds me: age never really factors into Omegaverse. You don't see any elderly people at all, along with women. It's just nothing but young men and the 'women-lite', the men with vaginas. There are also no laws on child support or divorce, because you cannot divorce or leave your alpha once they mark you. The suppressants is akin to birth control so the omegas can have some form of freedom in society, but there are no mood suppressants for alphas to stop them from raping. Isn't that just the damnedest thing?
Trust me, it gets worse. There is always a deeper pit.
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Friendly disagreement; you're missing a whole bunch of stories with Hannibal Lecter's surprise (or exactingly well-planned) perimenopause babies, probably 50/50 with the stories where Hannibal is slightly wistful about no longer being fertile. "Old man yaoi" finds a way; off the top of my head, you'll find that in Kingsman too, and occasionally Metal Gear except that one's more prone to 70-year-old pooner Bosselot.
That one does come up, but it seems to mostly be in scifi (everyone has them) or police/secret agent/military settings, where they wouldn't want a whole platoon of Alphas sperging out and fighting each other all the time.
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I found an oldie but a goodie: " Sonic the Werehog and Amy" . Its a a fanfic where Sonic turns into a werewolf (werehog) , succumbs to his inner animal and rapes the everloving shit out of Amy.
Archived here: https://web.archive.org/web/2015101...ion.net/s/9841973/1/Sonic-the-Werehog-and-Amy
Speaking of Sonic rape fics, there was another one I remember coming across back in the day where Sonic turns into an evil tyrant due to being exposed to a black chaos emerald. As a tyrant he rapes everything with a pulse (even Robotnik. I shit you not) and even has a dedicated rape& torture room where he keeps victims that he especially likes. He kept some squirrel girl as a sex slave . The fic was so over the top grimdark that it almost came across as hilarious at times. I'll post it here if i can find it again.
Archived here: https://web.archive.org/web/2015101...ion.net/s/9841973/1/Sonic-the-Werehog-and-Amy
Speaking of Sonic rape fics, there was another one I remember coming across back in the day where Sonic turns into an evil tyrant due to being exposed to a black chaos emerald. As a tyrant he rapes everything with a pulse (even Robotnik. I shit you not) and even has a dedicated rape& torture room where he keeps victims that he especially likes. He kept some squirrel girl as a sex slave . The fic was so over the top grimdark that it almost came across as hilarious at times. I'll post it here if i can find it again.
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I'd pull up the tweet about "unethical yaoi breeding practices" but I don't think Google would interpret that one the way I want it to.
Well, yeah -- the Catholic church is a bunch of fancily-dressed white dudes ordered within a hierarchy and beholden to a strict set of moral laws. I challenge you to name a more suitable backdrop for pooner angst.
Is the author actually ex-Cath? She doesn't seem to have a very strong handle on the whole religious guilt thing.
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Muzzies and hindus are subhumans. While Buddhists aren't straight up subhuman I feel like having a bunch of bald dudes romancing each other wouldn't be that appealing
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Dmitri yet again makes an appearance for some double dipping. Sit down and dive in for a completely random character who has only risen to prominence because he's a white dude. There will be more screenshots in this one as the format doesn't allow for quick-and-easy summaries. 'I bet I could have smelled your dripping cunt if I tried hard enough' and 'you want to be my personal cocksleeve forever?' are real lines, and were approved by two beta-readers.
> Smoke weed, have sex (always)
Going the full Snopp Dogg route, I see. That weed better be good.
> His back muscles were well-defined, pressing against his tan skin
I know a woman wrote this, because they love focusing on back muscles whenever they can. He's opening a fridge. You're not going to see his muscles flex that much.
Ugh, this dialogue. I get that he's flustered, but they always write him like he's a teenage girl. This is a grown-ass man. They want us to believe that trans men are men, and yet can't write men for shit.
> It was a connection Viktor never expected to make with a man he met while fucking another one
You did admit the Dmitri thing was a FWB. Why would this be a shock when you don't love him?
> He pressed Jayce's shower sponge into his nose
That's weird, bro.
> Viktor imagined Jayce manhandling him into whatever position he wanted, stretching his cunt to its limit
Tiny pooner wants to get a fucking of a lifetime by a hot man? You don't say.
That's a nice way to open a conversation: a threesome with a man who doesn't know you're a 'man with a vagina' yet.
> I've done sex. Had sex. Not a lot.
Ugh. "I've had sex...just never a threesome. It's not something I've ever thought about before." There. Much better.
> it was everything Viktor had hoped it would be and more
Of course. Jayce is never a normal size. We have to have our Hispanic Hog.
> Just long enough for Viktor to stroke with both hands
How small are Viktor's hands?
> it seemed his cunt had been conditioned to lubricate at the smell
Man, some of these lines are just so fucking out there I can't help but snicker. This isn't on the same level as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' or GET PREGNANT GET PREGNANT but it's up there. I'm adding it to the list.
> He grinded his meager cock into the fabric with a groan
'Meager' is right. Jayce can't even fit all the way into his mouth, and here you are with something smaller than your pinky. How embarrassing.
> High on the scent cocktail mixed in Jayce's crotch
Dick and ball small, eh? That's also being added to the list.
> Grew impossibly harder
With what? Your 'meager cock' can't grow any longer than what it already is.
> He can take it
Surprise surprise, Dmitri is not as big as Jayce, because white men have pencil dicks.
> He wondered if he should've worn something nicer
Yeah, wear a suit to a threesome. Watch it get soiled in under five minutes.
> Like I don't smoke so I feel like I'd mess it up?
These pooners sure do love their weed. There's always a scene of them smoking it.
I get the impression this was supposed to be an erotic scene. It sure didn't come off as such.
> Massive hands
Let me guess. There's a 'his thumbs met in the middle' line.
> Cock nudged against his nose
> Enveloping his cock in his wet and impossibly wet mouth
Remember it's 'meager' and nowhere near Jayce's size.
> Easily able to take Dmitri's dick to the hilt after so much practice
He's also not as large as Jayce. He's probably 6 inches or under, unlike our 8 inch and above Hispanic Hog.
> Sucked hard on his clit
> Nub of his cock
Pick one.
> His length slid past Viktor's tongue and peeked into his throat
> Thick, hot, throbbing, almost too long for him to take
> The cock occupying the space in his throat was not the same
Of course not. Only the darker man has the largest penis. Fuck that white boy.
> Pleasure and pain
Cliché.
> Let his holes be used
That seems to be the case for FTMs, eh?
> Pushing down the guilt he felt at imagining two Jayces instead of Dmitri
I bet that'll be in a future fic: caveman Jayce and student Jayce. Double-dipping with the BHC.
> Taking Jayce's dick down his throat was a challenge
Of course. It's the Hispanic Hog. You're deepthroating your forearm.
This reminds me of that Robot Chicken skit where the hands from the Addams Family could only fuck via that method. Funny in hindsight.
> You made the sweetest sounds
Did he sound more feminine or masculine? They never do sound like frogs in these fics, even when they do IRL.
> Was sucking on their supple, pale skin
'Supple' is stretching it. I also noticed that fujos love mentioning Viktor's white skin, and go out of their way to describe how pale and beautiful he is. Lil Confederates, they are.
> Buried his cock to the hilt
Cliché.
> He was filled to the absolute limit
What, no cervix pounding? No belly bulge? Maybe that's for later.
> The inside of his milky thighs
Milky thighs, pale skin, alabaster stomach, white this, white that...wanna get a 1488 tattoo while you're at it?
> I bet I could've smelled your dripping cunt if I tried hard enough
Yep, that's going on the list for 'shit fanficcers say'.
> Does he ever fuck you this good? Make you scream like this?
No, because he's a basic bitch white boy. The brown man with the big dick is where it's at.
> He shook his head and felt his third orgasm from the inside
Uh, that's usually how they work?
> He didn't even need to touch his cock
*Meager cock.
> His cunt milking every drop from his cock that it could
Add this to 'obscene squelching' and 'thumbs met in the middle'. These are the most overused lines in this fandom.
> That was the last night he ever had sex with Dmitri
Of course. Once you got Hispanic, you never wanna jump over that border wall.
> Jayce and Viktor fucked in every room of the apartment but Dmitri's multiple times
I bet you can smell it like you can smell his dripping cunt. Does it smell like oranges or sweetmilk?
> Star Wars themed
I bet he has all the Star Destroyers and X-wings, Y-wings and A-wings.
> He'd just fucked Viktor absolutely boneless
The common dream of every white transmasc: to have a hot, brown, muscular man fuck the woman back into them.
> I love watching the way you take my cock. Like you're made for it
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia.
> Milk my fucking come straight from the source
Another line for the list. 'Yeah, milk my cock like you're a farmhand. Moooo!'
Uh oh. The white side piece is catching feelings. What to do? We'll just brush over it until they meet 16 years down the line while our pooner and their brown pet are married.
> That ship had sailed long ago
Didn't you already establish that this was a FWB, and that you had no feelings for Dmitri? Where'd he catch feelings from? After you started fucking the caveman?
> I guess Dmitri and I are still friends, too
Since when? You were never friends. You had a threesome once and that was it.
> He didn't do casual relationships
So why did he agree to the threesome? oh, right. Access to that white pussy.
> I think it was just...I don't know, instinct?
There. Fixed it.
> Something far too small for a man of his stature
Driving a beat up Beemer, are we?
> Barely containing his muscular arms that were covered in a thin layer of dark hair
Look at that. The pale pooner lusts after the bear. It's never twink-on-twink with them - they want the manly men.
> His hair had been growing out into curling waves
> Did it make his features look too harsh?
No, it just makes you look more like a woman. Which you are.
Very feminine.
> A decade since that first date, and six years since their wedding anniversary
> They're husbands. They're growing old together
You'll never guess how old they actually are.
Yes, that's right: they are in their THIRTIES and have the bones and looks of men in their 50s or 60s. I do not think they are even IN their thirties because if it's been ten years since that first date, and six years since their wedding anniversary, that puts the closer to their forties. The grey hairs are a dead giveaway.
> Calls him his emotional support person
So he uses the pooner as emotional labour. Looks like you can take T and identify as male all you like, but that will never stop actual men from using you as an emotional pin cushion.
> He basically just told one of his old college friends at a networking event that he's fucking his wife raw
...yes? That's what you have to do to impregnate a woman? It was a perfectly innocuous thing and you sexualized it. Leave it to an autistic pooner to make normal human reproduction sound pornographic.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Where's the cottage with the four kids?
He's getting jealous over a man Viktor was never exclusive with. Guess that 80 IQ side of him is rearing its ugly head.
> You better not have been thinking about fucking him
Why? He's married to you and took your cock every day when Dmitri was out. Why would he even entertain the notion? Oh, right. Because you're a jealous wetback and need to mark your territory.
> You're such a slut
What a way to refer to your 'husband'.
> They had abnormally high sex drives
In Viktor's case, that is due to the testosterone, but of course in FTM Fantasy land the vagina never dries up from said testosterone, and continues to be as wet as a waterslide. In real life, Viktor would already be in menopause stage and would need to take estrogen creams for that sand paper vagina - no obsessive sex for you.
> Grinding his engorged clit
What, are we not calling it a 'meager cock' anymore?
> Obscene squelching
You can add this to 'his thumbs met in the middle' for one of the most overused lines in these fics, along with 'cocksleeve' and 'ragdoll'. We get it: his cunt sounds like wet noodles. It gets so wet it puts most 'cis women's' vaginas to shame.
> Get my cock out if you want it so bad, slut
So are we going to talk about how his dick smells this time or was that only for the shower?
> Talking and laughing with the man I had to steal you from
They were never in an exclusive relationship. There was nothing to steal, and Viktor willingly stopped seeing Dmitri. Do you remember that line about Dmitri telling Jayce that he was in love with Viktor? The author sure didn't. That was never brought up again.
> He's so full, so perfectly full
Sorry, no belly bulge this time. But it is the Hispanic Hog, so expect it to be 8 inches or above.
> This pussy is mine
"There are many like it, but this pussy is mine." - Fullmetal Jacket
> Only had to fuck you once to show you how much better I am than him, huh?
White boys stay slacking. White pussy is where it's at.
> You want to be my personal cocksleeve forever?
> My perfect little cockwhore?
He agreed to be that when he married you, you dumb fuck.
> No sharing you with undeserving men that can't make you scream like this
So this really is just your basic bitch white girl fantasy of having the chud replaced by the Chad. He has the bigger muscles, bigger dick, bigger house, is 6'2 with over six figures in the bank, etc. Literally everything they had in Andrew Tate, but in a man they desire.
> Wet smack of Viktor's cunt
But can you smell it through the door? I bet you can. Bet it smells like deer musk.
Nice. Show everyone your property by having them smell like sex like you're a dog that pissed on a tree for the first time. All this for a man who clearly moved on, despite that love confession the author (and her betas) forgot about, who told him he was expecting kids. That's it. Jayce saw that, reverted to spicnigger status, and fucked in a closet. Dmitri's only sin was being a white boy with a small dick. Clearly, that white pussy is meant to be reverse colonized by 8-12 inches of Hispanic man meat. Don't get in his way or he's beating you with that piñata bat.
I wish I could say the story saved it, but no. The smut wasn't all that good, either, what with lines like 'I bet I could smell your pussy'. Stop writing cringeworthy shit like this. It makes for great comedy, and for rubbing your nose in it like shit.
Alright, time for a real horror. An anorexic gets starved of food, but gets a helping of man protein to keep them alive. Author also plans on making his a series. Has the brown man as the quintessential rapist and abuser.
> chowed
*Chewed
Look at that, we have queercatfan style sentences again.
> Was that what he wanted all along? To be skinny?
These women will tell you that Mel is a bitch and a manipulator while making a Eugenia Cooney pooner look hot. The delusion of these fucks cannot be matched.
> He was able to lift him up the desk and overwhelm him with his strength
> He would be so weak. So vulnerable
I love how Jayce's only character trait in here is to be the token Criminal Latino. The women love brown men and swear they aren't racist, but always make the brown man a rapist.
> My diseases are flaring up again
I'm sure the testosterone is helping.
> Hips weren't even half of his arm's length
> He was the perfect size
How is this hot when he's a literal skeleton?
> Finally exert his strength to manhandle him
We know what men are when it comes to muscles and manhandling, huh?
> Basket-case weight down
> How tiny
Just so uwu smol.
> Look at their opponent's eyes as they speak to him
...you view the white (wo)man as your opponent? Well that makes sense.
> Fawn-like eyes
They love adding deer-like properties to Viktor, because it makes him look smaller and more feminine. That is 100% intentional. They do this while making Jayce the bigger brown rapist.
> What he was doing was practically gaslighting
How come it's always trans men getting gaslit?
There's gotta be a theme here.
> Pleasingly obedient boy
Yes, there is age-regression in this, too.
> Purge it against his cock as he makes him choke
Nice. Cum and vomit. That'll be in the sequel. Nothing like making the skeletal pooner choke on your man meat.
> Extremely thin waist
No thumbs meeting in the middle this time.
> His ass was being practically offered to Jayce right now
He doesn't have one and you wrote that he doesn't. What the fuck is he slapping against?
> Viktor was small, fragile, and delicate
Because nothing beats the 'small, fragile' white (wo)man against the big, muscular, brown man who acts like a beast in bed.
> Your cunt is hugging me so tight, baby. Sucking me so enthusiastically
This is a real line.
> Papa will make you feel better soon
I'd rather you take some boiling sugar to the face.
> It seemed like piss, more or less
You'd have thought he would know the difference by now. Perhaps not.
> If Jayce still had his mouth all over his cunt he would have drunk the stream immediately
Eating disorders affect vaginal flora. You'd be tasting a lot of dryness there. Not that the author knows or cares.
> Sucking him off like candy
Nice.
> His technique was quite bad as he put it in, completely childlike
If sexualizing eating disorders wasn't enough, you have to have age regression. What the fuck is wrong with pooners?
> His twisted need to corrupt Viktor
Almost as if you were born with it.
> Viktor was broken from the start
A pooner? Being broken? You don't say.
> Pulverizing his insides
Very hot. Nothing like fucking a living corpse and giving them a vaginal prolapse.
> The piston was visible on Viktor's stomach, his cock bobbing beneath his skin
This is supposed to be hotter than him fucking Mel, according to these people.
> You're taking me apart, Papa!
"YOU'RE TEARING ME APART, LISA!"
> How big he was in comparison to Viktor
He's just so smol and Jayce is so big, that 6'2 monster. Not showing anything about these FTM inner fantasies at all, no ma'am.
> His skeleton pushing outward from his skin because of the gratifying pleasure his cock inflicted
That doesn't sound hot whatsoever. Makes me think you're fucking a mummy.
> Attractive
You're an 80 lb skeleton. Imagine his face on Eugenia Cooney's body. Very few men would find that attractive. You are fucking a living corpse who could probably die if you thrust too hard - like our brown rapist did here earlier by 'pulverizing' his insides. Must be that testosterone that saved him.
Oh, and look who showed up. None other than the author of that Chud Viktor fic, prettybadmagic:
> Smoke weed, have sex (always)
Going the full Snopp Dogg route, I see. That weed better be good.
> His back muscles were well-defined, pressing against his tan skin
I know a woman wrote this, because they love focusing on back muscles whenever they can. He's opening a fridge. You're not going to see his muscles flex that much.
Ugh, this dialogue. I get that he's flustered, but they always write him like he's a teenage girl. This is a grown-ass man. They want us to believe that trans men are men, and yet can't write men for shit.
> It was a connection Viktor never expected to make with a man he met while fucking another one
You did admit the Dmitri thing was a FWB. Why would this be a shock when you don't love him?
> He pressed Jayce's shower sponge into his nose
That's weird, bro.
> Viktor imagined Jayce manhandling him into whatever position he wanted, stretching his cunt to its limit
Tiny pooner wants to get a fucking of a lifetime by a hot man? You don't say.
That's a nice way to open a conversation: a threesome with a man who doesn't know you're a 'man with a vagina' yet.
> I've done sex. Had sex. Not a lot.
Ugh. "I've had sex...just never a threesome. It's not something I've ever thought about before." There. Much better.
> it was everything Viktor had hoped it would be and more
Of course. Jayce is never a normal size. We have to have our Hispanic Hog.
> Just long enough for Viktor to stroke with both hands
How small are Viktor's hands?
> it seemed his cunt had been conditioned to lubricate at the smell
Man, some of these lines are just so fucking out there I can't help but snicker. This isn't on the same level as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' or GET PREGNANT GET PREGNANT but it's up there. I'm adding it to the list.
> He grinded his meager cock into the fabric with a groan
'Meager' is right. Jayce can't even fit all the way into his mouth, and here you are with something smaller than your pinky. How embarrassing.
> High on the scent cocktail mixed in Jayce's crotch
Dick and ball small, eh? That's also being added to the list.
> Grew impossibly harder
With what? Your 'meager cock' can't grow any longer than what it already is.
> He can take it
Surprise surprise, Dmitri is not as big as Jayce, because white men have pencil dicks.
> He wondered if he should've worn something nicer
Yeah, wear a suit to a threesome. Watch it get soiled in under five minutes.
> Like I don't smoke so I feel like I'd mess it up?
These pooners sure do love their weed. There's always a scene of them smoking it.
I get the impression this was supposed to be an erotic scene. It sure didn't come off as such.
> Massive hands
Let me guess. There's a 'his thumbs met in the middle' line.
> Cock nudged against his nose
> Enveloping his cock in his wet and impossibly wet mouth
Remember it's 'meager' and nowhere near Jayce's size.
> Easily able to take Dmitri's dick to the hilt after so much practice
He's also not as large as Jayce. He's probably 6 inches or under, unlike our 8 inch and above Hispanic Hog.
> Sucked hard on his clit
> Nub of his cock
Pick one.
> His length slid past Viktor's tongue and peeked into his throat
> Thick, hot, throbbing, almost too long for him to take
> The cock occupying the space in his throat was not the same
Of course not. Only the darker man has the largest penis. Fuck that white boy.
> Pleasure and pain
Cliché.
> Let his holes be used
That seems to be the case for FTMs, eh?
> Pushing down the guilt he felt at imagining two Jayces instead of Dmitri
I bet that'll be in a future fic: caveman Jayce and student Jayce. Double-dipping with the BHC.
> Taking Jayce's dick down his throat was a challenge
Of course. It's the Hispanic Hog. You're deepthroating your forearm.
This reminds me of that Robot Chicken skit where the hands from the Addams Family could only fuck via that method. Funny in hindsight.
> You made the sweetest sounds
Did he sound more feminine or masculine? They never do sound like frogs in these fics, even when they do IRL.
> Was sucking on their supple, pale skin
'Supple' is stretching it. I also noticed that fujos love mentioning Viktor's white skin, and go out of their way to describe how pale and beautiful he is. Lil Confederates, they are.
> Buried his cock to the hilt
Cliché.
> He was filled to the absolute limit
What, no cervix pounding? No belly bulge? Maybe that's for later.
> The inside of his milky thighs
Milky thighs, pale skin, alabaster stomach, white this, white that...wanna get a 1488 tattoo while you're at it?
> I bet I could've smelled your dripping cunt if I tried hard enough
Yep, that's going on the list for 'shit fanficcers say'.
> Does he ever fuck you this good? Make you scream like this?
No, because he's a basic bitch white boy. The brown man with the big dick is where it's at.
> He shook his head and felt his third orgasm from the inside
Uh, that's usually how they work?
> He didn't even need to touch his cock
*Meager cock.
> His cunt milking every drop from his cock that it could
Add this to 'obscene squelching' and 'thumbs met in the middle'. These are the most overused lines in this fandom.
> That was the last night he ever had sex with Dmitri
Of course. Once you got Hispanic, you never wanna jump over that border wall.
> Jayce and Viktor fucked in every room of the apartment but Dmitri's multiple times
I bet you can smell it like you can smell his dripping cunt. Does it smell like oranges or sweetmilk?
> Star Wars themed
I bet he has all the Star Destroyers and X-wings, Y-wings and A-wings.
> He'd just fucked Viktor absolutely boneless
The common dream of every white transmasc: to have a hot, brown, muscular man fuck the woman back into them.
> I love watching the way you take my cock. Like you're made for it
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia.
> Milk my fucking come straight from the source
Another line for the list. 'Yeah, milk my cock like you're a farmhand. Moooo!'
Uh oh. The white side piece is catching feelings. What to do? We'll just brush over it until they meet 16 years down the line while our pooner and their brown pet are married.
> That ship had sailed long ago
Didn't you already establish that this was a FWB, and that you had no feelings for Dmitri? Where'd he catch feelings from? After you started fucking the caveman?
> I guess Dmitri and I are still friends, too
Since when? You were never friends. You had a threesome once and that was it.
> He didn't do casual relationships
So why did he agree to the threesome? oh, right. Access to that white pussy.
> I think it was just...I don't know, instinct?
There. Fixed it.
> Something far too small for a man of his stature
Driving a beat up Beemer, are we?
> Barely containing his muscular arms that were covered in a thin layer of dark hair
Look at that. The pale pooner lusts after the bear. It's never twink-on-twink with them - they want the manly men.
> His hair had been growing out into curling waves
> Did it make his features look too harsh?
No, it just makes you look more like a woman. Which you are.
Very feminine.
> A decade since that first date, and six years since their wedding anniversary
> They're husbands. They're growing old together
You'll never guess how old they actually are.
Yes, that's right: they are in their THIRTIES and have the bones and looks of men in their 50s or 60s. I do not think they are even IN their thirties because if it's been ten years since that first date, and six years since their wedding anniversary, that puts the closer to their forties. The grey hairs are a dead giveaway.
> Calls him his emotional support person
So he uses the pooner as emotional labour. Looks like you can take T and identify as male all you like, but that will never stop actual men from using you as an emotional pin cushion.
> He basically just told one of his old college friends at a networking event that he's fucking his wife raw
...yes? That's what you have to do to impregnate a woman? It was a perfectly innocuous thing and you sexualized it. Leave it to an autistic pooner to make normal human reproduction sound pornographic.
Progshit in the streets, tradwife in the sheets. Where's the cottage with the four kids?
He's getting jealous over a man Viktor was never exclusive with. Guess that 80 IQ side of him is rearing its ugly head.
> You better not have been thinking about fucking him
Why? He's married to you and took your cock every day when Dmitri was out. Why would he even entertain the notion? Oh, right. Because you're a jealous wetback and need to mark your territory.
> You're such a slut
What a way to refer to your 'husband'.
> They had abnormally high sex drives
In Viktor's case, that is due to the testosterone, but of course in FTM Fantasy land the vagina never dries up from said testosterone, and continues to be as wet as a waterslide. In real life, Viktor would already be in menopause stage and would need to take estrogen creams for that sand paper vagina - no obsessive sex for you.
> Grinding his engorged clit
What, are we not calling it a 'meager cock' anymore?
> Obscene squelching
You can add this to 'his thumbs met in the middle' for one of the most overused lines in these fics, along with 'cocksleeve' and 'ragdoll'. We get it: his cunt sounds like wet noodles. It gets so wet it puts most 'cis women's' vaginas to shame.
> Get my cock out if you want it so bad, slut
So are we going to talk about how his dick smells this time or was that only for the shower?
> Talking and laughing with the man I had to steal you from
They were never in an exclusive relationship. There was nothing to steal, and Viktor willingly stopped seeing Dmitri. Do you remember that line about Dmitri telling Jayce that he was in love with Viktor? The author sure didn't. That was never brought up again.
> He's so full, so perfectly full
Sorry, no belly bulge this time. But it is the Hispanic Hog, so expect it to be 8 inches or above.
> This pussy is mine
"There are many like it, but this pussy is mine." - Fullmetal Jacket
> Only had to fuck you once to show you how much better I am than him, huh?
White boys stay slacking. White pussy is where it's at.
> You want to be my personal cocksleeve forever?
> My perfect little cockwhore?
He agreed to be that when he married you, you dumb fuck.
> No sharing you with undeserving men that can't make you scream like this
So this really is just your basic bitch white girl fantasy of having the chud replaced by the Chad. He has the bigger muscles, bigger dick, bigger house, is 6'2 with over six figures in the bank, etc. Literally everything they had in Andrew Tate, but in a man they desire.
> Wet smack of Viktor's cunt
But can you smell it through the door? I bet you can. Bet it smells like deer musk.
Nice. Show everyone your property by having them smell like sex like you're a dog that pissed on a tree for the first time. All this for a man who clearly moved on, despite that love confession the author (and her betas) forgot about, who told him he was expecting kids. That's it. Jayce saw that, reverted to spicnigger status, and fucked in a closet. Dmitri's only sin was being a white boy with a small dick. Clearly, that white pussy is meant to be reverse colonized by 8-12 inches of Hispanic man meat. Don't get in his way or he's beating you with that piñata bat.
I wish I could say the story saved it, but no. The smut wasn't all that good, either, what with lines like 'I bet I could smell your pussy'. Stop writing cringeworthy shit like this. It makes for great comedy, and for rubbing your nose in it like shit.
Alright, time for a real horror. An anorexic gets starved of food, but gets a helping of man protein to keep them alive. Author also plans on making his a series. Has the brown man as the quintessential rapist and abuser.
> chowed
*Chewed
Look at that, we have queercatfan style sentences again.
> Was that what he wanted all along? To be skinny?
These women will tell you that Mel is a bitch and a manipulator while making a Eugenia Cooney pooner look hot. The delusion of these fucks cannot be matched.
> He was able to lift him up the desk and overwhelm him with his strength
> He would be so weak. So vulnerable
I love how Jayce's only character trait in here is to be the token Criminal Latino. The women love brown men and swear they aren't racist, but always make the brown man a rapist.
> My diseases are flaring up again
I'm sure the testosterone is helping.
> Hips weren't even half of his arm's length
> He was the perfect size
How is this hot when he's a literal skeleton?
> Finally exert his strength to manhandle him
We know what men are when it comes to muscles and manhandling, huh?
> Basket-case weight down
> How tiny
Just so uwu smol.
> Look at their opponent's eyes as they speak to him
...you view the white (wo)man as your opponent? Well that makes sense.
> Fawn-like eyes
They love adding deer-like properties to Viktor, because it makes him look smaller and more feminine. That is 100% intentional. They do this while making Jayce the bigger brown rapist.
> What he was doing was practically gaslighting
How come it's always trans men getting gaslit?
There's gotta be a theme here.> Pleasingly obedient boy
Yes, there is age-regression in this, too.
> Purge it against his cock as he makes him choke
Nice. Cum and vomit. That'll be in the sequel. Nothing like making the skeletal pooner choke on your man meat.
> Extremely thin waist
No thumbs meeting in the middle this time.
> His ass was being practically offered to Jayce right now
He doesn't have one and you wrote that he doesn't. What the fuck is he slapping against?
> Viktor was small, fragile, and delicate
Because nothing beats the 'small, fragile' white (wo)man against the big, muscular, brown man who acts like a beast in bed.
> Your cunt is hugging me so tight, baby. Sucking me so enthusiastically
This is a real line.
> Papa will make you feel better soon
I'd rather you take some boiling sugar to the face.
> It seemed like piss, more or less
You'd have thought he would know the difference by now. Perhaps not.
> If Jayce still had his mouth all over his cunt he would have drunk the stream immediately
Eating disorders affect vaginal flora. You'd be tasting a lot of dryness there. Not that the author knows or cares.
> Sucking him off like candy
Nice.
> His technique was quite bad as he put it in, completely childlike
If sexualizing eating disorders wasn't enough, you have to have age regression. What the fuck is wrong with pooners?
> His twisted need to corrupt Viktor
Almost as if you were born with it.
> Viktor was broken from the start
A pooner? Being broken? You don't say.
> Pulverizing his insides
Very hot. Nothing like fucking a living corpse and giving them a vaginal prolapse.
> The piston was visible on Viktor's stomach, his cock bobbing beneath his skin
This is supposed to be hotter than him fucking Mel, according to these people.
> You're taking me apart, Papa!
"YOU'RE TEARING ME APART, LISA!"
> How big he was in comparison to Viktor
He's just so smol and Jayce is so big, that 6'2 monster. Not showing anything about these FTM inner fantasies at all, no ma'am.
> His skeleton pushing outward from his skin because of the gratifying pleasure his cock inflicted
That doesn't sound hot whatsoever. Makes me think you're fucking a mummy.
> Attractive
You're an 80 lb skeleton. Imagine his face on Eugenia Cooney's body. Very few men would find that attractive. You are fucking a living corpse who could probably die if you thrust too hard - like our brown rapist did here earlier by 'pulverizing' his insides. Must be that testosterone that saved him.
Kingsman is a fandom I remember being huge back in the day. Can't believe it's been ten years. Hannibal still has a steady fandom so I would assume the ABO there is more 'streamlined'. In CoD and Arcane, or 'younger' fandoms, you just don't see any old people or women. Just young studs going out to pasture to jump the omegas in heat like they're breeding bulls.
I would unironically read a fic where a bunch of alpha males throw hands. Just think the UFC but they're spraying pheromones instead of sweat and the whole thing smells like a bear pit.
All you'd get are Tiktoks saying it's gender subversive or some shit.
I'm not sure, but I wager that she is, because the author lukewarmoatmeal is a pooner Catholic who insists she is a gay man. There are a handful of Jews, but nearly all are white women/ white trans men. Fandom is whiter than most European countries at this point.
To keep this on subject, you will notice that in the top pairings on AO3, not a single one has an Indian man or woman in it. The most notable example is The Witcher, where Yennefer went from being a black-haired white woman to an Indian, played by Anya Chalotra. None of the fans of the Netflix series ever wrote a fic involving her, drew art of her, or spoke about her. They instead focused more on Rat King Joey Batey (who's gone bald now) and Henry Cavill's Geralt. White men stay winning - no matter the fandom.
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A JoJo fandom classic for us:
Every word is fucking SHIT here. Boo fucking hoo, a 6'3" overbuffed Jotaro is getting pussywhipped by his EBIL ciswife only to fuck a gay whore Kakyoin (why the actual hell is he a gay whore in every fandom instance). Also, troon Anasui.
Western fandoms were a mistake.
Every word is fucking SHIT here. Boo fucking hoo, a 6'3" overbuffed Jotaro is getting pussywhipped by his EBIL ciswife only to fuck a gay whore Kakyoin (why the actual hell is he a gay whore in every fandom instance). Also, troon Anasui.
Western fandoms were a mistake.
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If it got that many comments you would expect more bookmarks. Do they know that private bookmarks don't show up on the fic but if you check statistics the actual number of total bookmarks will be shown? The number is usually higher because of those private bookmarks.
Still, writing gay fanfic about political candidates is wild work.
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Another silly lil trans guy has decided to post baby's first fanfic...and it happens to be one of the worst shit imaginable. They're always crossing off those boxes while thinking they're unique for doing it. Comments are, predictably, moderated. Manacled, step aside: there's a new 'I'm crying every single sentence' misery porn in town.
> Washing dishes in the kitchen after meals
> These are his favourite rewards for giving up one escape
It will never not amaze me how these pooners always project themselves onto this character, and the first thing they do is make them to feminine, domestic chores. The self-blame, wondering if they're a bad fuck, calling themselves a 'pretty little wife', all this while demanding that people see them as men. They do this and then write this character as the most female-coded character ever.
> Crushing his windpipe and pressing mottled blues and blacks into pale skin
> Striking so ferociously his skin splits
Yes, Jayce is a rapist pedophile who is also a sadist. Gotta make the brown man the worst creature imaginable. Who needs 'toll paid' memes when you've got this?
> Leaves him hysterical
> Used so roughly he bleeds
I will tell you now that this entire thing is just torture porn. It's like 'Manacled', but not novel-length.
> She once told him she dreaded having to deal with a teenage daughter
About that. Viktor has gone through female puberty. This apparently has not caused any dysphoria whatsoever, and the only thing that makes him a 'boy' is his say so. Jayce doesn't view him as a boy at all - and you'll see why in a moment.
> The older he gets the harder it becomes to conjure these fantasies
The pregnancy plot twist is expected. This fic does have 'Room' vibes but it's coming from a 'silly lil trans guy' that's fetishizing the damn thing rather than be a proper horror story.
> The reminder that his body was capable of this was bad enough
You identified as a boy, but that doesn't mean that an actual male was ever going to treat you like one.
> Fleshy clump of cells
Must've been 8 or so weeks.
> He was only fifteen years old
And the rapes began when he was 12. These authors really do aim for younger and younger ages, eh?
> You did so good, baby boy
He calls him 'boy' here, but he knew what sex Viktor was. Otherwise, he would have done anal and avoid pregnancy altogether. He knew what he was doing.
> He looks handsome, and he silently berates himself for thinking it
Stockholm Syndrome is a helluva thing, eh?
> Like the first time he pushed a finger into him and it came away gleaming with blood
I suppose the only benefit I can give this is that Viktor wasn't 'asking for it' for once.
> Who respected his new name and pronouns immediately
Ain't that rich. He called him a 'good boy' and referred to him as male, and then turned around and treated him as his true sex as soon as he locked him up. Funny how that works.
> The bullies started tailing him everywhere
Let me guess. They were just being heckin' transphobes who couldn't see our lil silly trans guy as one of the guys.
> Something gave inside him, a sudden stretch that burned
> Something inside of him tore like paper
If this is a reference to the hymen, it doesn't work like that. That's just general vaginal tearing.
> His smooth brown skin
Ah yes, nothing like making the brown man a rapist. These silly lil guys really should wear 'Toll: Paid' t-shirts.
> Wears long hair
> Wears colorful bracelets
> Wonders why no one else treats them like a man
I am aware men and boys can have both, but there's no effort made here. This was a scrawny girl who wanted to play dress-up, and look where it led her.
Least she got the gaslighting down pat. My man truly is not worthy of redemption.
Gotta emphasize those lips because he while he might be a pedophilic rapist, he's got pretty lips!
> You're not their little boy anymore
When was he?
> They came together to let you go today, but I won't
If this doesn't end with this guy getting lynched I don't know what to tell you.
> His narrow waist, his skin stretched taut over the outline of his ribs
Yes, there is a graphic rape scene. Still waiting on the 'his thumbs met in the middle' comment.
> He gets wet during rape
> Sickened by the shame of finding pleasure in assault
Le sigh. These are physiological reactions. I'm sure the author knows that, but ramp up that misery porn, why don't you? The fact this always happens to an FTM is not lost on me.
> His body is only an animal, all want and hunger despite the fractured glass of his soul
This would be a banger line if it wasn't a 'silly lil guy' writing it.
> He'd never felt so vividly betrayed as the night Mister Talis first took him
Like I said, if this doesn't end with some kind of retribution, this author really just wants to write FTM torture porn and that will be her sole gimmick.
> His dirty and overused sex toy
She got the broken mentality down pat, though.
> Which hole do you want it in, today?
I wasn't aware he was a backdoor raider, too, but it fits.
> His clitoris prodded and groped for
Notice that when he is a victim, it's a clit, but when it's consensual rough sex, it's a 'cock'.
> Make Viktor admit he's a rape slut
Damn. If you didn't make me hate brown men already, you made me hate them more.
> I'm letting you choose which hole it goes in
> You're going to stain the sheets red
He's not joking about that.
I bet he would have been an anal athlete if it wasn't for the fact that the trauma would mean sending Viktor to the hospital. He can't afford that, so he sticks to vaginal instead. This is also one of the few fics that uses vagina properly, but look at the context, ffs.
> Digs a nail into his clitoris
Ouch.
> He tries to stop being human in these moments
I find it very interesting how the FTM is the 'rape slut', the 'cocksleeve' and other derogatory terms reserved for women, while these authors insist they are men. It's just one of those things that outs them for what they are.
> Spreads them so wide that his hip pops
One of the only times his disability gets mentioned, and the guy is breaking his hips. Wow.
> The head of his bulbous cock and leaking
You will never guess how large he is.
True to form, he is 'thick and long', and strikes against his cervix, because a footlong is what we need for a brown rapist.
> His thickness keeps Viktor forced thoroughly open, an obscenity to how widely he's stretched
I guess he's the size of a Jack Daniel's bottle, huh?
> Splitting his pale skin with his nails
Literally. This man has the claws of a sabertooth.
> He's an expert in bleeding
You would think such repeat vaginal damage would lead to a prolapse or infection, but our lil pooner here has gotten very, very lucky. He bleeds, he heals, and this happens again. Misery porn.
> Eyes so hollow they're animal. He fits the perfect category for prey
Yes, making the brown man the rapist and the white pooner his prey is certainly a choice. Who says racial awareness is dead?
> Simply playing the doting wife
Very curious that this always happens to FTMs, and never the other way around. The MTF would be the one calling the shots.
> Pounds him desperately
> Like he's made of paper inside
> He is a dead boy now, it doesn't matter if he leaves him short to bloodied scraps
Misery. Porn. Add in a nice helping of race fetishism, because these pooners really want to be chased by 6'2 brown men for some reason.
> No longer his rapist but his friend, his protector
The author sure did get the mental breakdown right. This is a person who has been thoroughly convinced it's over and that there's nowhere to go. It just so happens that that person is a a white female written by a white female, but we're not going to comment on that.
> The assault on Viktor's cervix has him twisting and writing
I'm surprised it hasn't sent him to the hospital.
> The slick of it stains him rope after rope
> Drawing his seed from his body in bursts
Even during rape, our boy here ejaculates like a farm animal. Who needs breeding bulls when you've got a 6'2 half-brown stud?
> Pumping his seed into Viktor's torn pussy
Like spraying whipped cream on a torn up donut.
> Wanted you from the first time I saw you
> Wanted to take you, to teach you so much more than fucking middle school science
Ah, so the noncery was there from the get go.
> I had to have you
> The bullies, the stigma, nobody believing in you
The stigma came from him not being treated as a boy, and yet, the first thing Jayce did was remind Viktor of his sex. We love dramatic irony here.
> Grown and broad and Viktor so young and narrow. Now they're both men
Only one of them is a man. Viktor never went through male puberty, because he is not male. He only identifies as a man.
> he wet the bed in the middle of it
And his punishment was a cock ring in his mouth so Jayce could rape his throat. What a stand-up figure.
> He doesn't want the predator now
I guess you can say he's a super-predator, eh?
> A spark of something like guilt
Oh, that's not guilt. He's guilty over that lost innocence, not because he's guilty for being a rapist pedophile.
> If he could choose he'd be comforted by somebody different
At this point, putting him with the SCP Foundation would be better. He'd be safer with The Shy Guy than this fuck.
Indeed. This entire fic, as I have said, is nothing but misery porn - but a nice racially aware fic the author didn't know she had. Brown men are bad, people - avoid at all costs.
> Almost looks guilty, almost wearing the face of the person Viktor had believed him to be when he was twelve
It didn't take him long for him to reveal his true colours - and for him to treat you as your true sex - now, did it?
> The phantom sensation of being forced open, of his most intimate space being ravaged
I really am surprised he has not had a medical emergency. He's getting the equivalent of a baseball bat shoved up there. How come his insides haven't perforated?
> It's grief, all this wailing
He hasn't done anything else but cry, so...
So, no hanging. No lynching. No proper punishment. Just Mr. Brown Rapist taking his claim and a fuckton of misery porn to wrap it up. I suppose we should thank our silly lil trans guy for showing us that brown men are super predators and they need to get the fuck over the wall. I don't think I've seen such focus on brown men being rapists and pedophiles outside of the race realist sphere. You wanted your pseudo yaoi, all you got was a lesson in racial awareness. Silly lil trans guys holding the 1488 banner, who knew?
Veeforvindicta has a new series up, and it's got all you can expert from her: panty thievery, brown men being stalker rapists, and white transmascs being the victim. She apologizes for not being 'medically accurate' - she's a lesbian theatre major.
> Skin cool and pallid
Jayviks are obsessed with Viktor's skin tone. I am not kidding. They go out of their way to emphasize how white he is, it's insane.
> His brow bone is low
He is not going to have a pronounced orbital brow ridge as he is female, not male. You can have low brow bones in women, but that's only going to make their eyes look bigger.
> Identifies as male, with no indications of sex, so likely transgender
Look at that, he clocked him as trans right away. Of course it will be a delicate subject: he wants to be treated as a man, even though his medication will be sex-specific, and he will be stalked by a male who will behave in a male-typical manner. Every time these theatre kids want to talk about trans issues, they only highlight everything that makes the sexes different.
> Russian, or Polish
Not Ukrainian? What, you aren't waving the Slava Ukraini flag? Fucking vatnik.
> It feels like he's touching the statue of a god
That's suffering from muscle atrophy and looks like a skeleton.
> Creamy pale skin
This again?
> A major curve that could stump a number of professionals
It's a spinal deformity caused by femoral anteversion. There. It wouldn't 'stump' professionals - they probably know exactly what it is, that's why he's taking so many drugs. It can't 'stump' professionals when the two are co-morbid.
> Their clinic has never done home visits, but Jayce will just give his secondary number
I wonder why Viktor never questioned it, because this takes place in America, and insurance normally doesn't cover PT home visits unless you bitch about it. I assume he's on Medicaid, which makes it easier.
> Like looking at a painting of a child of Aphrodite
Even those statues still had meat on their bones.
> His skin is so smooth
So white, pale, alabaster, translucent, just perfect and white. White pride, worldwide, bitch.
> Prays that he doesn't sound insane
Normally PTs don't give out their first names when meeting first-time clients. I would be suspicious immediately.
> Breaking down Viktor's walls will require as much persistence as working his body
Oh I know something else that's going to 'break down' his walls HEYO
> He imagines Viktor is secretly a romantic
I wonder what kind of smut he reads, just so we can have the classic 4th wall break on how Vee's shit is better than those silly 'cissy' bodice rippers.
> He knows Viktor makes heads turn
Does he? No one really pays attention to him and you wrote that he was malnourished. They'd be staring at him like he's an anomaly. Sure, the face saves the day, but still.
> His life revolving around a body that he likely thinks hates him
This doesn't make a lick of sense. 'He likely thinks'? It DOES. He has spinal issues and has to take a fuckton of drugs just to manage day-to-day life. Why the fuck would you think it LOVES him? His body IS HIM, HE IS HIS BODY.
> A near stranger can be the focus of his affection for months
*Mere
> This isn't the first time
Oh no, what happened to the others? Were they pooners, too? Does he have a type?
> If he didn't so desperately want Viktor alive, he would cut him open and do it himself
Going back to his Sinaloa Cartel roots, I see. Living the brown man = criminal stereotype.
> Quickly setting it up with their identity and follow-requesting
That's suspicious as fuck, especially if you know those people don't do social media.
> Jayce is becoming no stranger to breaking HIPAA laws
I'm surprised he just didn't use his insurance information and the data from that to figure out where he lived.
> It's a terrible neighbourhood
I bet it's very diverse.
I love how his stalking is very male-centric, meanwhile when Viktor is the stalker, he actually tries to make friends and use emotional manipulation. Men just use breaking and entering and cum all over the place.
> it was like Viktor wanted him to come find him
Uh huh, and he wants you to cum on his bedsheets, lick his vibrator and sniff his dirty underwear - that all happens, btw.
> If Rio threw a fit, he'd be completely screwed
It's not like a cat is a dog. If he had a dog, that dog would be mauling you right now. You're lucky that cat is fat and useless.
> His whole body touched these same sheets, every inch of his pale skin
Again with the pale skin shit. We get it, you 'lesbians' love, love, LOVE your white boys. You just won't fuck 'em because you hate 'em.
> Delicate pale limbs
See point above.
Cum cleanup or not, he's going to smell it and wonder why it smells like stale brine in there.
> Deathly skinny, so he probably isn't eating his feelings
Then he isn't turning heads because he's a 'child of Aphrodite'. He's turning heads because he looks like Eugenia Cooney. Second, if Viktor was a death fat who ate his feelings, these fics would NOT be as popular. They may be written by death fats, but they don't like seeing fat people get fucked.
Similar to that skirt fic I reviewed ages ago, Jayce decides to lick Viktor's vibrators. Unlike that fic, Viktor actually cleans his toys, so no dried cum for him to devour. It's still weird for him to stuff it in his mouth and shove it back in the drawer without cleaning it.
Ah yes, nothing like stealing panties thick with the smell of ejaculate and testosterone. That 'dood smell' or 'swamp smell' is never an issue in these stories - and why would it be, when you have a lesbian theatre major who hides the fact she's a shotacon writing it? Theatre kids are major weirdos. It's very fitting that she is one, given the shit she writes.
I suspect this one will be as crazy as Fujofrankenstein's work, so keep a tab on it.
Edit: she has published the second chapter.
> Since he was a child, he's always felt so much
> Threw frequent tantrums, cried from sadness and happiness and disgust
> Emotions were less of a feeling and more of a full-body wave
So he is a Cluster B nightmare, with a heavy dose of histrionic personality disorder and borderline personality disorder. The mood differences tend to lean more on aggressive and over-the-top need to please, rather than the depressive swings seen in women. They are always far more dangerous in men, thanks to that Y chromosome.
> He already knew how to read people's emotions, how to coax the things he wanted out of them
So he's got a little bit of psychopathy to boot.
> Muscle strain and tension comes from stress more than anything else
'It's all due to stress' is the most commonly heard medical gaslighting term out there, and I am not shocked Mr. BPD here is using it. VV here should get an award for writing the most despicable men around.
> He's developed self-restraint philosophers could write epics about
Or they'd rather make a note of it in the ICD. This man has manipulation and gaslighting down to a T.
> If he had been a lesser man, he'd have been locked up
AKA if he'd been more of a Spic, he'd be in jail. Looks like that above average IQ saved the day.
> Jayce isn't actually good at control
Of course not. You're a BPD nightmare. If you don't get it, you'll beat it into someone, instead.
> Physically, he wants to do something mildly unethical
You mean finger fucking? You're talking about finger fucking.
> He's never cared about medical ethics
Psychopaths do eschew social norms, after all.
> Dreams of seeing him as a dying saint, experiencing human pleasure and pain in its purest form
...that means crucifixion or being sawn in half. They were literally tortured.
> Not catlike but almost avian
That's what I've been saying: he has hawk-like eyes.
> The heavenly quiet of the room is better than a grand symphony
This might be a good line if a pedophile wasn't writing it.
> If you ever go to a chiropractor, I'll lecture you endlessly
You are more or less doing the same thing, but with more of a science-backed method.
> Wishing he could lock the door behind himself to keep Viktor in there
Second chapter and we're already getting atticwife vibes. Make the brown man the BPD psychopath, why not?
> He looks so innocent and seductive
Ah, the 'he was asking for it' defense.
> His skin is so smooth, a little cooler than Jayce's palm
> The contrast of those skinny, pale legs against Jayce's large, tanned hands is photo-worthy
You always have to make the rapist stalker as dark as you can, eh? The poor white 'boy', being molested and defamed by the big-dicked brown animal. A horror Rudyard Kipling could not fathom.
> To keep from throwing Viktor back against the chair, devouring his mouth whole, ripping his clothes off to learn his body from every angle
It's the second chapter, keep your dick contained, Don Juan Pablo.
> he's in too deep, and a sliver of pure, animal hunger must be visible in his eyes
Yeah, ramp up those animal metaphors. Show us how these wetbacks don't belong in this country.
> His fingers barely wrap around half the circumference of Jayce's arm
Keep an eye on this, because I know for a fact the 'his thumbs met in the middle' line will be used.
> Jayce has watched plenty of porn
Of course.
> He's had sex plenty of times. He loves the sound of pleasure or pain
So he's a sexual sadist, to boot. Fits with being a Cluster B.
> Mixed pleasure and pain
Cliché. You already wrote this.
> Remember Jayce's hand on his small body
Uwu so smol.
> Almost like a doll in his care
Knew it. Man, these authors are really getting predictable.
> Wishes the thin barrier of his boxers weren't there
So are we gonna start with pussy eating, or finger fucking? Place your bets now.
Expect that 'hip thrusting record' to be put to good use later, as he 'rearranges his insides' and Viktor can 'feel him in his lungs.'
> He is single minded. Now that V is in his head there's no way he's escaping
Oh I'm wondering how this is gonna play out. Is he going to outright kidnap him or weasel him into his home?
> The smell of Viktor's musky, worn clothing makes him salivate
> It tastes better than spicy curry
If you're comparing a T addled vagina to Indian food, you might want to cut out your tongue entirely. If that pussy is so spicy it was created for the sole purpose of killing parasites in shit water you might want to reconsider.
> His small hands in Jayce's hair
Yes, those itty bitty hands that are canonically only slightly smaller than his.
> Holding down his legs
> Pressed in half and spread wide
Glad his spinal issues disappear when it comes to the mating press.
> Pleasure and pain
This is the third time this has been used.
Place your bets on what the kidnapping is going to be: trapped in the closet, car drive-by, café bathroom meet-up gone wrong. I'm betting on the car drive-by myself. The uwu pooner doesn't stand a chance.
> Washing dishes in the kitchen after meals
> These are his favourite rewards for giving up one escape
It will never not amaze me how these pooners always project themselves onto this character, and the first thing they do is make them to feminine, domestic chores. The self-blame, wondering if they're a bad fuck, calling themselves a 'pretty little wife', all this while demanding that people see them as men. They do this and then write this character as the most female-coded character ever.
> Crushing his windpipe and pressing mottled blues and blacks into pale skin
> Striking so ferociously his skin splits
Yes, Jayce is a rapist pedophile who is also a sadist. Gotta make the brown man the worst creature imaginable. Who needs 'toll paid' memes when you've got this?
> Leaves him hysterical
> Used so roughly he bleeds
I will tell you now that this entire thing is just torture porn. It's like 'Manacled', but not novel-length.
> She once told him she dreaded having to deal with a teenage daughter
About that. Viktor has gone through female puberty. This apparently has not caused any dysphoria whatsoever, and the only thing that makes him a 'boy' is his say so. Jayce doesn't view him as a boy at all - and you'll see why in a moment.
> The older he gets the harder it becomes to conjure these fantasies
The pregnancy plot twist is expected. This fic does have 'Room' vibes but it's coming from a 'silly lil trans guy' that's fetishizing the damn thing rather than be a proper horror story.
> The reminder that his body was capable of this was bad enough
You identified as a boy, but that doesn't mean that an actual male was ever going to treat you like one.
> Fleshy clump of cells
Must've been 8 or so weeks.
> He was only fifteen years old
And the rapes began when he was 12. These authors really do aim for younger and younger ages, eh?
> You did so good, baby boy
He calls him 'boy' here, but he knew what sex Viktor was. Otherwise, he would have done anal and avoid pregnancy altogether. He knew what he was doing.
> He looks handsome, and he silently berates himself for thinking it
Stockholm Syndrome is a helluva thing, eh?
> Like the first time he pushed a finger into him and it came away gleaming with blood
I suppose the only benefit I can give this is that Viktor wasn't 'asking for it' for once.
> Who respected his new name and pronouns immediately
Ain't that rich. He called him a 'good boy' and referred to him as male, and then turned around and treated him as his true sex as soon as he locked him up. Funny how that works.
> The bullies started tailing him everywhere
Let me guess. They were just being heckin' transphobes who couldn't see our lil silly trans guy as one of the guys.
> Something gave inside him, a sudden stretch that burned
> Something inside of him tore like paper
If this is a reference to the hymen, it doesn't work like that. That's just general vaginal tearing.
> His smooth brown skin
Ah yes, nothing like making the brown man a rapist. These silly lil guys really should wear 'Toll: Paid' t-shirts.
> Wears long hair
> Wears colorful bracelets
> Wonders why no one else treats them like a man
I am aware men and boys can have both, but there's no effort made here. This was a scrawny girl who wanted to play dress-up, and look where it led her.
Least she got the gaslighting down pat. My man truly is not worthy of redemption.
Gotta emphasize those lips because he while he might be a pedophilic rapist, he's got pretty lips!
> You're not their little boy anymore
When was he?
> They came together to let you go today, but I won't
If this doesn't end with this guy getting lynched I don't know what to tell you.
> His narrow waist, his skin stretched taut over the outline of his ribs
Yes, there is a graphic rape scene. Still waiting on the 'his thumbs met in the middle' comment.
> He gets wet during rape
> Sickened by the shame of finding pleasure in assault
Le sigh. These are physiological reactions. I'm sure the author knows that, but ramp up that misery porn, why don't you? The fact this always happens to an FTM is not lost on me.
> His body is only an animal, all want and hunger despite the fractured glass of his soul
This would be a banger line if it wasn't a 'silly lil guy' writing it.
> He'd never felt so vividly betrayed as the night Mister Talis first took him
Like I said, if this doesn't end with some kind of retribution, this author really just wants to write FTM torture porn and that will be her sole gimmick.
> His dirty and overused sex toy
She got the broken mentality down pat, though.
> Which hole do you want it in, today?
I wasn't aware he was a backdoor raider, too, but it fits.
> His clitoris prodded and groped for
Notice that when he is a victim, it's a clit, but when it's consensual rough sex, it's a 'cock'.
> Make Viktor admit he's a rape slut
Damn. If you didn't make me hate brown men already, you made me hate them more.
> I'm letting you choose which hole it goes in
> You're going to stain the sheets red
He's not joking about that.
I bet he would have been an anal athlete if it wasn't for the fact that the trauma would mean sending Viktor to the hospital. He can't afford that, so he sticks to vaginal instead. This is also one of the few fics that uses vagina properly, but look at the context, ffs.
> Digs a nail into his clitoris
Ouch.
> He tries to stop being human in these moments
I find it very interesting how the FTM is the 'rape slut', the 'cocksleeve' and other derogatory terms reserved for women, while these authors insist they are men. It's just one of those things that outs them for what they are.
> Spreads them so wide that his hip pops
One of the only times his disability gets mentioned, and the guy is breaking his hips. Wow.
> The head of his bulbous cock and leaking
You will never guess how large he is.
True to form, he is 'thick and long', and strikes against his cervix, because a footlong is what we need for a brown rapist.
> His thickness keeps Viktor forced thoroughly open, an obscenity to how widely he's stretched
I guess he's the size of a Jack Daniel's bottle, huh?
> Splitting his pale skin with his nails
Literally. This man has the claws of a sabertooth.
> He's an expert in bleeding
You would think such repeat vaginal damage would lead to a prolapse or infection, but our lil pooner here has gotten very, very lucky. He bleeds, he heals, and this happens again. Misery porn.
> Eyes so hollow they're animal. He fits the perfect category for prey
Yes, making the brown man the rapist and the white pooner his prey is certainly a choice. Who says racial awareness is dead?
> Simply playing the doting wife
Very curious that this always happens to FTMs, and never the other way around. The MTF would be the one calling the shots.
> Pounds him desperately
> Like he's made of paper inside
> He is a dead boy now, it doesn't matter if he leaves him short to bloodied scraps
Misery. Porn. Add in a nice helping of race fetishism, because these pooners really want to be chased by 6'2 brown men for some reason.
> No longer his rapist but his friend, his protector
The author sure did get the mental breakdown right. This is a person who has been thoroughly convinced it's over and that there's nowhere to go. It just so happens that that person is a a white female written by a white female, but we're not going to comment on that.
> The assault on Viktor's cervix has him twisting and writing
I'm surprised it hasn't sent him to the hospital.
> The slick of it stains him rope after rope
> Drawing his seed from his body in bursts
Even during rape, our boy here ejaculates like a farm animal. Who needs breeding bulls when you've got a 6'2 half-brown stud?
> Pumping his seed into Viktor's torn pussy
Like spraying whipped cream on a torn up donut.
> Wanted you from the first time I saw you
> Wanted to take you, to teach you so much more than fucking middle school science
Ah, so the noncery was there from the get go.
> I had to have you
> The bullies, the stigma, nobody believing in you
The stigma came from him not being treated as a boy, and yet, the first thing Jayce did was remind Viktor of his sex. We love dramatic irony here.
> Grown and broad and Viktor so young and narrow. Now they're both men
Only one of them is a man. Viktor never went through male puberty, because he is not male. He only identifies as a man.
> he wet the bed in the middle of it
And his punishment was a cock ring in his mouth so Jayce could rape his throat. What a stand-up figure.
> He doesn't want the predator now
I guess you can say he's a super-predator, eh?
> A spark of something like guilt
Oh, that's not guilt. He's guilty over that lost innocence, not because he's guilty for being a rapist pedophile.
> If he could choose he'd be comforted by somebody different
At this point, putting him with the SCP Foundation would be better. He'd be safer with The Shy Guy than this fuck.
Indeed. This entire fic, as I have said, is nothing but misery porn - but a nice racially aware fic the author didn't know she had. Brown men are bad, people - avoid at all costs.
> Almost looks guilty, almost wearing the face of the person Viktor had believed him to be when he was twelve
It didn't take him long for him to reveal his true colours - and for him to treat you as your true sex - now, did it?
> The phantom sensation of being forced open, of his most intimate space being ravaged
I really am surprised he has not had a medical emergency. He's getting the equivalent of a baseball bat shoved up there. How come his insides haven't perforated?
> It's grief, all this wailing
He hasn't done anything else but cry, so...
So, no hanging. No lynching. No proper punishment. Just Mr. Brown Rapist taking his claim and a fuckton of misery porn to wrap it up. I suppose we should thank our silly lil trans guy for showing us that brown men are super predators and they need to get the fuck over the wall. I don't think I've seen such focus on brown men being rapists and pedophiles outside of the race realist sphere. You wanted your pseudo yaoi, all you got was a lesson in racial awareness. Silly lil trans guys holding the 1488 banner, who knew?
Veeforvindicta has a new series up, and it's got all you can expert from her: panty thievery, brown men being stalker rapists, and white transmascs being the victim. She apologizes for not being 'medically accurate' - she's a lesbian theatre major.
> Skin cool and pallid
Jayviks are obsessed with Viktor's skin tone. I am not kidding. They go out of their way to emphasize how white he is, it's insane.
> His brow bone is low
He is not going to have a pronounced orbital brow ridge as he is female, not male. You can have low brow bones in women, but that's only going to make their eyes look bigger.
> Identifies as male, with no indications of sex, so likely transgender
Look at that, he clocked him as trans right away. Of course it will be a delicate subject: he wants to be treated as a man, even though his medication will be sex-specific, and he will be stalked by a male who will behave in a male-typical manner. Every time these theatre kids want to talk about trans issues, they only highlight everything that makes the sexes different.
> Russian, or Polish
Not Ukrainian? What, you aren't waving the Slava Ukraini flag? Fucking vatnik.
> It feels like he's touching the statue of a god
That's suffering from muscle atrophy and looks like a skeleton.
> Creamy pale skin
This again?
> A major curve that could stump a number of professionals
It's a spinal deformity caused by femoral anteversion. There. It wouldn't 'stump' professionals - they probably know exactly what it is, that's why he's taking so many drugs. It can't 'stump' professionals when the two are co-morbid.
> Their clinic has never done home visits, but Jayce will just give his secondary number
I wonder why Viktor never questioned it, because this takes place in America, and insurance normally doesn't cover PT home visits unless you bitch about it. I assume he's on Medicaid, which makes it easier.
> Like looking at a painting of a child of Aphrodite
Even those statues still had meat on their bones.
> His skin is so smooth
So white, pale, alabaster, translucent, just perfect and white. White pride, worldwide, bitch.
> Prays that he doesn't sound insane
Normally PTs don't give out their first names when meeting first-time clients. I would be suspicious immediately.
> Breaking down Viktor's walls will require as much persistence as working his body
Oh I know something else that's going to 'break down' his walls HEYO
> He imagines Viktor is secretly a romantic
I wonder what kind of smut he reads, just so we can have the classic 4th wall break on how Vee's shit is better than those silly 'cissy' bodice rippers.
> He knows Viktor makes heads turn
Does he? No one really pays attention to him and you wrote that he was malnourished. They'd be staring at him like he's an anomaly. Sure, the face saves the day, but still.
> His life revolving around a body that he likely thinks hates him
This doesn't make a lick of sense. 'He likely thinks'? It DOES. He has spinal issues and has to take a fuckton of drugs just to manage day-to-day life. Why the fuck would you think it LOVES him? His body IS HIM, HE IS HIS BODY.
> A near stranger can be the focus of his affection for months
*Mere
> This isn't the first time
Oh no, what happened to the others? Were they pooners, too? Does he have a type?
> If he didn't so desperately want Viktor alive, he would cut him open and do it himself
Going back to his Sinaloa Cartel roots, I see. Living the brown man = criminal stereotype.
> Quickly setting it up with their identity and follow-requesting
That's suspicious as fuck, especially if you know those people don't do social media.
> Jayce is becoming no stranger to breaking HIPAA laws
I'm surprised he just didn't use his insurance information and the data from that to figure out where he lived.
> It's a terrible neighbourhood
I bet it's very diverse.
I love how his stalking is very male-centric, meanwhile when Viktor is the stalker, he actually tries to make friends and use emotional manipulation. Men just use breaking and entering and cum all over the place.
> it was like Viktor wanted him to come find him
Uh huh, and he wants you to cum on his bedsheets, lick his vibrator and sniff his dirty underwear - that all happens, btw.
> If Rio threw a fit, he'd be completely screwed
It's not like a cat is a dog. If he had a dog, that dog would be mauling you right now. You're lucky that cat is fat and useless.
> His whole body touched these same sheets, every inch of his pale skin
Again with the pale skin shit. We get it, you 'lesbians' love, love, LOVE your white boys. You just won't fuck 'em because you hate 'em.
> Delicate pale limbs
See point above.
Cum cleanup or not, he's going to smell it and wonder why it smells like stale brine in there.
> Deathly skinny, so he probably isn't eating his feelings
Then he isn't turning heads because he's a 'child of Aphrodite'. He's turning heads because he looks like Eugenia Cooney. Second, if Viktor was a death fat who ate his feelings, these fics would NOT be as popular. They may be written by death fats, but they don't like seeing fat people get fucked.
Similar to that skirt fic I reviewed ages ago, Jayce decides to lick Viktor's vibrators. Unlike that fic, Viktor actually cleans his toys, so no dried cum for him to devour. It's still weird for him to stuff it in his mouth and shove it back in the drawer without cleaning it.
Ah yes, nothing like stealing panties thick with the smell of ejaculate and testosterone. That 'dood smell' or 'swamp smell' is never an issue in these stories - and why would it be, when you have a lesbian theatre major who hides the fact she's a shotacon writing it? Theatre kids are major weirdos. It's very fitting that she is one, given the shit she writes.
I suspect this one will be as crazy as Fujofrankenstein's work, so keep a tab on it.
> Since he was a child, he's always felt so much
> Threw frequent tantrums, cried from sadness and happiness and disgust
> Emotions were less of a feeling and more of a full-body wave
So he is a Cluster B nightmare, with a heavy dose of histrionic personality disorder and borderline personality disorder. The mood differences tend to lean more on aggressive and over-the-top need to please, rather than the depressive swings seen in women. They are always far more dangerous in men, thanks to that Y chromosome.
> He already knew how to read people's emotions, how to coax the things he wanted out of them
So he's got a little bit of psychopathy to boot.
> Muscle strain and tension comes from stress more than anything else
'It's all due to stress' is the most commonly heard medical gaslighting term out there, and I am not shocked Mr. BPD here is using it. VV here should get an award for writing the most despicable men around.
> He's developed self-restraint philosophers could write epics about
Or they'd rather make a note of it in the ICD. This man has manipulation and gaslighting down to a T.
> If he had been a lesser man, he'd have been locked up
AKA if he'd been more of a Spic, he'd be in jail. Looks like that above average IQ saved the day.
> Jayce isn't actually good at control
Of course not. You're a BPD nightmare. If you don't get it, you'll beat it into someone, instead.
> Physically, he wants to do something mildly unethical
You mean finger fucking? You're talking about finger fucking.
> He's never cared about medical ethics
Psychopaths do eschew social norms, after all.
> Dreams of seeing him as a dying saint, experiencing human pleasure and pain in its purest form
...that means crucifixion or being sawn in half. They were literally tortured.
> Not catlike but almost avian
That's what I've been saying: he has hawk-like eyes.
> The heavenly quiet of the room is better than a grand symphony
This might be a good line if a pedophile wasn't writing it.
> If you ever go to a chiropractor, I'll lecture you endlessly
You are more or less doing the same thing, but with more of a science-backed method.
> Wishing he could lock the door behind himself to keep Viktor in there
Second chapter and we're already getting atticwife vibes. Make the brown man the BPD psychopath, why not?
> He looks so innocent and seductive
Ah, the 'he was asking for it' defense.
> His skin is so smooth, a little cooler than Jayce's palm
> The contrast of those skinny, pale legs against Jayce's large, tanned hands is photo-worthy
You always have to make the rapist stalker as dark as you can, eh? The poor white 'boy', being molested and defamed by the big-dicked brown animal. A horror Rudyard Kipling could not fathom.
> To keep from throwing Viktor back against the chair, devouring his mouth whole, ripping his clothes off to learn his body from every angle
It's the second chapter, keep your dick contained, Don Juan Pablo.
> he's in too deep, and a sliver of pure, animal hunger must be visible in his eyes
Yeah, ramp up those animal metaphors. Show us how these wetbacks don't belong in this country.
> His fingers barely wrap around half the circumference of Jayce's arm
Keep an eye on this, because I know for a fact the 'his thumbs met in the middle' line will be used.
> Jayce has watched plenty of porn
Of course.
> He's had sex plenty of times. He loves the sound of pleasure or pain
So he's a sexual sadist, to boot. Fits with being a Cluster B.
> Mixed pleasure and pain
Cliché. You already wrote this.
> Remember Jayce's hand on his small body
Uwu so smol.
> Almost like a doll in his care
Knew it. Man, these authors are really getting predictable.
> Wishes the thin barrier of his boxers weren't there
So are we gonna start with pussy eating, or finger fucking? Place your bets now.
Expect that 'hip thrusting record' to be put to good use later, as he 'rearranges his insides' and Viktor can 'feel him in his lungs.'
> He is single minded. Now that V is in his head there's no way he's escaping
Oh I'm wondering how this is gonna play out. Is he going to outright kidnap him or weasel him into his home?
> The smell of Viktor's musky, worn clothing makes him salivate
> It tastes better than spicy curry
If you're comparing a T addled vagina to Indian food, you might want to cut out your tongue entirely. If that pussy is so spicy it was created for the sole purpose of killing parasites in shit water you might want to reconsider.
> His small hands in Jayce's hair
Yes, those itty bitty hands that are canonically only slightly smaller than his.
> Holding down his legs
> Pressed in half and spread wide
Glad his spinal issues disappear when it comes to the mating press.
> Pleasure and pain
This is the third time this has been used.
Place your bets on what the kidnapping is going to be: trapped in the closet, car drive-by, café bathroom meet-up gone wrong. I'm betting on the car drive-by myself. The uwu pooner doesn't stand a chance.
Making women the token villains is very, very common in yaoi ships. The irony being that these authors are female, hating female characters for the crime of existing, when they don't even need to be in the fic at all. JJBA has also seen a major influx of pooners and from the art I've seen in the SJW thread, they get the zippertit treatment a lot.
From the way they were writing it, it seemed they had their 'five minutes of fame', which suggested their fic was wildly popular. Two public bookmarks is abysmal, and 63 comments of back-and-forth bickering with curated language is also shit. If I wanted a full on political fight, I'd go on Reddit or YouTube where punches are thrown. A lot of authors on the AO3 reddit are not very popular, and the few who are can be counted on one hand. It's just shitty memes and bad advice from authors who don't even get five bookmarks.
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Looks like Singed is Chester the Molester this time around. Very low fan interaction because Singed is ugly and does not provoke any sexual interest in readers or the author. Confirms the fact that if the author finds the character hot, even giving them pedophilic traits will lead to an audience praising them and calling the underage character foul names.
> Concept of grossness is narrow for them
They're still going to know what a predator is. Don't underestimate their intelligence.
> Truly an individual
The individual of all individuals. What an individual.
> The dust of books older than this city
Zaun is technically the older city. It was founded first, but sank into the ground over time.
> All children are pretty, and so is Viktor
> As he gets older, it will probably add to his ugliness
So either he's beautiful or his teeth makes him look ugly. Pick one.
> His hand could encompass the side of Viktor's head
He's 11 in this, btw.
> In a cabaret, in a brother
If you're thinking of him being a child prostitute by looking at his moles, you have a problem.
> More than one would like to lick the finger of this child carved in the crystal
*Carved in crystal. This author is definitely ESL. A Chink, I bet.
> For the safety of customers, but also for pleasure
They need to rip his teeth out so it's better for him to offer oral sex. Nice.
> Who has a heart rather than a suction and force pump
You could have just used 'muscle', because that's what a heart is.
> A perverse boy lacking voice or strength
In what way is he perverted?
> He is definitely a winter boy
His birthday is in December, so he is right there.
> Skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood
Snow White reference. The obsession with white is going to be a dominant theme in this fic.
> Likes white foods
> Wonders what the psychology is behind this
I guess you could say he's a whites-only food guy. No brown sugar or foods alive. White food pride, worldwide.
> Singed wonders if maybe he should pour it all on a saucer for him to lick it clean. Kitten
*Like a kitten. Kitten being its own sentence implies it's a pet name.
> Even less
*Stannis voice* Fewer.
> He also is cursed with the disadvantage of all young inventors
> Viktor is not like any other young inventor
So he isn't cursed, then.
> One thing to be concerns
*Concerned
I do like the descriptions of Orianna, though. Very pretty.
So Viktor is entering puberty and is beginning to wonder what sexual urges are, and seeks books and knowledge for answers. Later, Singed admits he is a full blown pedophile and decides to take action before his flower can bloom, so to speak.
> Fly of a rifle
I think she means sights here.
> He sometimes feels an irrational attraction to children
You don't say. That's why the first thing you thought of when looking at this kid was whether he'd make a great child prostitute.
> Dissolving on his retina
The retina is at the back of the eye.
> He wants her to slide smoothly into adulthood
He says, while lusting after an 11 year old.
> Let his hand slip under his underwear and thought about how he could really love this boy
I immediately noticed the difference on how authors treat Singed vs Jayce. You get the impression Singed is a full-blown creep here, a disgusting pedophile, because he looks and acts like one. When it's Jayce, it's all 'Viktor was asking for it' and a little siren teasing the man, because Jayce is hot and they like seeing him naked. Copping for pedos because they are hot is a sad but true thing among this group.
> Singed gets weak
Trust me, it gets worse.
> Even a child would laugh at you
Only because you're ugly. If you were attractive like Jayce, then the authors would be stressing how every teen wants them.
> It's just a kind of smallpox
Smallpox killed both adults and children. I think you mean chickenpox.
> His sweat smells weirdly sweet, as a cake
*Like a cake
> Accidental materials are stitched together whatsoever
*Here and there/haphazardly/mishmash. Yeah, this author is ESL.
> A bit like the sea foam maiden in the painting
I assume that's a reference to the Venus painting, eh?
> He meant well, but was insensitive
Only because he's ugly.
> Humps himself
This dumbass doesn't actually mean 'humps himself', she means HUNCHES OVER. Hunch/hump apparently mean the same thing in their language.
> They were cute, the size of plums
> Porcelain skin
> Instead of a penis, there was something cute hiding between his legs
Here we go with the laser-focus on an 11-year-old's genitalia.
> Singed wants to drown there, up to the tonsils, up to the wrist, up to the base of the penis
This isn't English. You also don't drown if the water goes 'up to your tonsils', because your head is still above water.
> Which being, with a fresh, smooth cunt above them, does not grow a third leg?
Do not ask me what the fuck this sentence was. It doesn't make a single bit of sense and it absolutely was not written in English.
> His father for abuse
Orianna is female.
> He felt skin that had the smoothness of glass, the thinness of paper and the softness of butter
Missed opportunity to describe how his skin is white for the umpteenth time.
> leaving those little cherries for the very end
Ladies, have you ever had your breasts referred to as cherries?
> Very long, a moment longer, and his beautiful skin will wrinkle like a raisin
* Any longer
> It's so small that Singed can cover it all with his three fingers
Uh huh. if it was Jayce, the author would have already dove in and had him penetrate child Viktor and people would be calling him a slut.
> Licks one of his fingers fondly
> Slightly sour
Yes, this guy tasted the vaginal excretion of a child. Your vaginal secretions aren't meant to taste sour, either.
> Now he could crush him, or simply enclose him in his hands
It's only creepy and wrong because Singed is ugly. If he was hot, this would have a ton of people asking for more.
> It's smooth as velvet and slippery, the size of a pea
> Presumably his labia stands out, looks tight and fat
Yes, we're discussing whether an 11-year-old has a cameltoe. These people, man.
> He can see how his little, cute cunt hardly takes his fingers
Nice.
> He could kiss his pussy as if it was his second lips
> He wonders if the color of his nipples and clitoris were the same
Were you not able to see them once the water cleared? Yes, they are the same shade - they darken with maturity.
> He should also take care of his other hole
Of course there's a mention of anal play here. Everything is on the table, it seems.
> If Viktor at least put his lips on the tip, he would have felt the fresh hole left by a milk tooth
explains the oral fixation from earlier.
> They don't do such things with their fathers
So he knows it's wrong. He knows Singed is a pedo. What does Singed do? Convince him it's what loving parents do, as a groomer would.
> No one has ventured into his apartment, seeing a beautiful, sad boy in the window
Again with the child rape and prostitution.
> That's something adults do. I have never seen -
Again, Viktor knows it's wrong. But Singed is going to convince him it's right, because that's what groomers do.
> Firm, petite breasts
He is 11, mind you.
> He resembles a rag doll rather than a growing boy
He isn't even a boy. He is not going through male puberty, but female puberty.
> Orianna is not his son. She is the awaited, real daughter, and Viktor is the son-surprise
Cute, but he isn't a son, either. He's female. He's the daughter pretending to be a son, because...well, because.
> Directs the strongest stream of water on his pussy
This is a kid who is just figuring things out. An adult should NOT be thinking like this.
> If he had a dog, he would let him rub against him and lower his pants, and the curious mutt would lick him with its rough tongue from ass to clit
White girls fuck dogs is really moving out of meme world and into real life. Holy fuck.
>He kisses the mole on his pussy
So was it answered that his nipples and genitalia were the same shade, or...? Guess we missed that part of 'I'm a fucking creep and should not have written this.'
*Faun
They sure do love using the deer language.
> flushed skin and folds skin through as the boy floats and wiggles his legs lazily
Again with wondering if the kid has a cameltoe.
> His pussy and lips are separated by a distance of thirty kisses
See point above.
> Viktor doesn't like penetration
I wonder why that is.
> He took pills and could last longer (four minutes, it was enough) and came in Viktor
I will once again stress that if this was Jayce it would lose the 'creep' factor and more people would be calling young Viktor here foul names. It's only because Singed is weird-looking that it gives them The Ick.
> I broke your hymen
The hymen is not like an elastic band. That bleeding will be from vaginal tears in general. You'd think these people would have paid attention in sex-ed.
That's what groomers/pedos hate the most: their victims growing up and maturing. It's their 'pure, perfect, white' bodies that they want, because they can mould them any which way they want. A mature adult can make their own decisions, and they do not want that. Viktor is still young, mind you - he's barely 12 and just started menstruating, and already this sick fuck thinks he's 'spoiled meat'.
White girls fuck dogs meme aside, I would like to once again bring up the fact that this fic didn't get any attention from the Jayviks who like underage Viktor because Singed is weird-looking and ugly, and Jayce is not. See, when Jayce is the pedo, he's an attractive, wealthy man (problematicism) or a foster dad with a Dad bod and lots of hair (fujofrankenstein). He is an object of their desires, and Singed is not, so Singed is given the creep factor here with his obsession over a child's genitalia. If it was our golden retriever/moonlighting brown rapist, the smut would be far more in-depth and Viktor would be written as if he liked it. You can truly gauge on whether a fic will go a certain way if the author finds the character hot or not. Singed is The Ick, Jayce is
and that's all there is to it.
Here's something to make you giggle: penetration with a 2 inch wonder willy - terms and conditions apply. The title for this fic is once again inspired by Ethel Cain, because these silly lil doods can't be bothered to listen to anyone else. To no one's surprise, the author is an AUdhd 'transmasc'.
That is a reference to an earlier work where Viktor got trapped in a vent and had the daylights fucked out of him. Same author. This time, it's not going to involve a real dick, but a 2 inch roid clit that can't even be used for penetration. Did I mention there was ass-to-mouth in this?
> His narrow waist tapered to a broad chest
Do you like man-tit play? You're gonna get man-tit play.
> He'd spent so many nights jerking off to the fantasy of climbing between them and fucking Jayce's tight hole
That would be nice...if you had an actual dick.
> Toned, brown skin
For once, the male is getting topped. Unfortunately, it's with something that can't even be considered a dick. You'd be better off using a toilet plunger.
> He knew he had no good reason to grab those giant tits
> They're so big I can't even hold them all
> Luscious tits
So...would be be a DD?
> Wiping the drool from his mouth
These people really do act like dogs, wow.
> He opened his mouth as wide as it would go, trying to stuff as much of the plush flesh into it as possible
I just think of a squirrel stuffing its cheeks full of nuts. Same imagery. Just squishier.
> Such a hypocrite - pretending he didn't enjoy it even while he could see the half-hard dick in his pants
Look at that. The pooner is the sex pest this time around. What a twist!
> You let everyone else use you like this...what's so terrible about me?
I suppose the only comfort he has is that you only have a 2 inch roid clit to ass rape him with. No punching out his insides or belly bulges will come from that.
> Practically screaming for attention
> So small it must have never been touched by anyone else
A shame that it's going to be raided by his tongue, which is the only thing he's going to feel penetrating him.
> Puckering as if it wasn't hungry for Viktor's cock
Homie, you can't even penetrate with that 't-dick', who are you fooling?
> he ate as much of Jayce's ass as he could reach, getting lost in bliss as he devoured his partner
He's going Marco Pierre White down there, eh?
> he could dine on his insides
A shame you don't have a penis to pull it out like a skewer. That's usually Jayce's job - and this author writes him having a footlong. The switcharoo must be embarrassing.
> Scratched skin surrounding it and the presence of blood leaking from the rim
Goddamn. Did you use your teeth, or is your tongue the texture of sandpaper?
> Even defiled it was still so beautiful - so tempting
> Like a buffet of flesh laid out for Viktor's enjoyment
Sucks you have the tongue of a penguin.
> Sizable cock resting on his thigh
And then you have Viktor's 'small cock' with 'a few inches of growth' after 15 years on T, which gave him the whopping length of 2 inches. He is 'pounding' his ass with that, something his own pinky can do better. I cannot take this rape scene seriously. Really? You're using THAT?
Plot twist: the Hexcore made our pooner a rapist. He raided that ass like it was 999 England and he was a Viking. Tongue so rough he tore up that rim like a used Snickers bar. Now Jayce has to live with the fact he got sodomized by a 2 inch roid clit.
He does, in fact, violate Viktor in one fic, because this whole thing is a series of one-shots. He uses that big ole proper man dick in the fic with 30k words. This one just has a dash of macabre humour because who the hell thinks a t-dick is a dick? There are rolling pins that are bigger. You can't even rub against his prostate with that - what the fuck are you getting violated by? His tongue did more damage than that t-dick.
Back in the day, fandoms like Hetalia had a whole sub-fandom of Rule 63, where all characters could be fully gender-bent, and it wasn't a problem. Nowadays that would be seen as 'insensitive'. I definitely noticed an uptick circa 2020, but the first time I saw a non binary character was in a Fear The Walking Dead fic. Featured gecko piss and everything. That was 10 years ago. Now, you have book series like 'The Locked Tomb' that features non binary characters and fandoms like Our Flag Means Death that troons out actresses.
Normies may be peaking, but it'll take years, if ever, for fandoms to let that shit go.
> Concept of grossness is narrow for them
They're still going to know what a predator is. Don't underestimate their intelligence.
> Truly an individual
The individual of all individuals. What an individual.
> The dust of books older than this city
Zaun is technically the older city. It was founded first, but sank into the ground over time.
> All children are pretty, and so is Viktor
> As he gets older, it will probably add to his ugliness
So either he's beautiful or his teeth makes him look ugly. Pick one.
> His hand could encompass the side of Viktor's head
He's 11 in this, btw.
> In a cabaret, in a brother
If you're thinking of him being a child prostitute by looking at his moles, you have a problem.
> More than one would like to lick the finger of this child carved in the crystal
*Carved in crystal. This author is definitely ESL. A Chink, I bet.
> For the safety of customers, but also for pleasure
They need to rip his teeth out so it's better for him to offer oral sex. Nice.
> Who has a heart rather than a suction and force pump
You could have just used 'muscle', because that's what a heart is.
> A perverse boy lacking voice or strength
In what way is he perverted?
> He is definitely a winter boy
His birthday is in December, so he is right there.
> Skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood
Snow White reference. The obsession with white is going to be a dominant theme in this fic.
> Likes white foods
> Wonders what the psychology is behind this
I guess you could say he's a whites-only food guy. No brown sugar or foods alive. White food pride, worldwide.
> Singed wonders if maybe he should pour it all on a saucer for him to lick it clean. Kitten
*Like a kitten. Kitten being its own sentence implies it's a pet name.
> Even less
*Stannis voice* Fewer.
> He also is cursed with the disadvantage of all young inventors
> Viktor is not like any other young inventor
So he isn't cursed, then.
> One thing to be concerns
*Concerned
I do like the descriptions of Orianna, though. Very pretty.
So Viktor is entering puberty and is beginning to wonder what sexual urges are, and seeks books and knowledge for answers. Later, Singed admits he is a full blown pedophile and decides to take action before his flower can bloom, so to speak.
> Fly of a rifle
I think she means sights here.
> He sometimes feels an irrational attraction to children
You don't say. That's why the first thing you thought of when looking at this kid was whether he'd make a great child prostitute.
> Dissolving on his retina
The retina is at the back of the eye.
> He wants her to slide smoothly into adulthood
He says, while lusting after an 11 year old.
> Let his hand slip under his underwear and thought about how he could really love this boy
I immediately noticed the difference on how authors treat Singed vs Jayce. You get the impression Singed is a full-blown creep here, a disgusting pedophile, because he looks and acts like one. When it's Jayce, it's all 'Viktor was asking for it' and a little siren teasing the man, because Jayce is hot and they like seeing him naked. Copping for pedos because they are hot is a sad but true thing among this group.
> Singed gets weak
Trust me, it gets worse.
> Even a child would laugh at you
Only because you're ugly. If you were attractive like Jayce, then the authors would be stressing how every teen wants them.
> It's just a kind of smallpox
Smallpox killed both adults and children. I think you mean chickenpox.
> His sweat smells weirdly sweet, as a cake
*Like a cake
> Accidental materials are stitched together whatsoever
*Here and there/haphazardly/mishmash. Yeah, this author is ESL.
> A bit like the sea foam maiden in the painting
I assume that's a reference to the Venus painting, eh?
> He meant well, but was insensitive
Only because he's ugly.
> Humps himself
This dumbass doesn't actually mean 'humps himself', she means HUNCHES OVER. Hunch/hump apparently mean the same thing in their language.
> They were cute, the size of plums
> Porcelain skin
> Instead of a penis, there was something cute hiding between his legs
Here we go with the laser-focus on an 11-year-old's genitalia.
> Singed wants to drown there, up to the tonsils, up to the wrist, up to the base of the penis
This isn't English. You also don't drown if the water goes 'up to your tonsils', because your head is still above water.
> Which being, with a fresh, smooth cunt above them, does not grow a third leg?
Do not ask me what the fuck this sentence was. It doesn't make a single bit of sense and it absolutely was not written in English.
> His father for abuse
Orianna is female.
> He felt skin that had the smoothness of glass, the thinness of paper and the softness of butter
Missed opportunity to describe how his skin is white for the umpteenth time.
> leaving those little cherries for the very end
Ladies, have you ever had your breasts referred to as cherries?
> Very long, a moment longer, and his beautiful skin will wrinkle like a raisin
* Any longer
> It's so small that Singed can cover it all with his three fingers
Uh huh. if it was Jayce, the author would have already dove in and had him penetrate child Viktor and people would be calling him a slut.
> Licks one of his fingers fondly
> Slightly sour
Yes, this guy tasted the vaginal excretion of a child. Your vaginal secretions aren't meant to taste sour, either.
> Now he could crush him, or simply enclose him in his hands
It's only creepy and wrong because Singed is ugly. If he was hot, this would have a ton of people asking for more.
> It's smooth as velvet and slippery, the size of a pea
> Presumably his labia stands out, looks tight and fat
Yes, we're discussing whether an 11-year-old has a cameltoe. These people, man.
> He can see how his little, cute cunt hardly takes his fingers
Nice.
> He could kiss his pussy as if it was his second lips
> He wonders if the color of his nipples and clitoris were the same
Were you not able to see them once the water cleared? Yes, they are the same shade - they darken with maturity.
> He should also take care of his other hole
Of course there's a mention of anal play here. Everything is on the table, it seems.
> If Viktor at least put his lips on the tip, he would have felt the fresh hole left by a milk tooth
explains the oral fixation from earlier.
> They don't do such things with their fathers
So he knows it's wrong. He knows Singed is a pedo. What does Singed do? Convince him it's what loving parents do, as a groomer would.
> No one has ventured into his apartment, seeing a beautiful, sad boy in the window
Again with the child rape and prostitution.
> That's something adults do. I have never seen -
Again, Viktor knows it's wrong. But Singed is going to convince him it's right, because that's what groomers do.
> Firm, petite breasts
He is 11, mind you.
> He resembles a rag doll rather than a growing boy
He isn't even a boy. He is not going through male puberty, but female puberty.
> Orianna is not his son. She is the awaited, real daughter, and Viktor is the son-surprise
Cute, but he isn't a son, either. He's female. He's the daughter pretending to be a son, because...well, because.
> Directs the strongest stream of water on his pussy
This is a kid who is just figuring things out. An adult should NOT be thinking like this.
> If he had a dog, he would let him rub against him and lower his pants, and the curious mutt would lick him with its rough tongue from ass to clit
White girls fuck dogs is really moving out of meme world and into real life. Holy fuck.
>He kisses the mole on his pussy
So was it answered that his nipples and genitalia were the same shade, or...? Guess we missed that part of 'I'm a fucking creep and should not have written this.'
*Faun
They sure do love using the deer language.
> flushed skin and folds skin through as the boy floats and wiggles his legs lazily
Again with wondering if the kid has a cameltoe.
> His pussy and lips are separated by a distance of thirty kisses
See point above.
> Viktor doesn't like penetration
I wonder why that is.
> He took pills and could last longer (four minutes, it was enough) and came in Viktor
I will once again stress that if this was Jayce it would lose the 'creep' factor and more people would be calling young Viktor here foul names. It's only because Singed is weird-looking that it gives them The Ick.
> I broke your hymen
The hymen is not like an elastic band. That bleeding will be from vaginal tears in general. You'd think these people would have paid attention in sex-ed.
That's what groomers/pedos hate the most: their victims growing up and maturing. It's their 'pure, perfect, white' bodies that they want, because they can mould them any which way they want. A mature adult can make their own decisions, and they do not want that. Viktor is still young, mind you - he's barely 12 and just started menstruating, and already this sick fuck thinks he's 'spoiled meat'.
White girls fuck dogs meme aside, I would like to once again bring up the fact that this fic didn't get any attention from the Jayviks who like underage Viktor because Singed is weird-looking and ugly, and Jayce is not. See, when Jayce is the pedo, he's an attractive, wealthy man (problematicism) or a foster dad with a Dad bod and lots of hair (fujofrankenstein). He is an object of their desires, and Singed is not, so Singed is given the creep factor here with his obsession over a child's genitalia. If it was our golden retriever/moonlighting brown rapist, the smut would be far more in-depth and Viktor would be written as if he liked it. You can truly gauge on whether a fic will go a certain way if the author finds the character hot or not. Singed is The Ick, Jayce is
and that's all there is to it.Here's something to make you giggle: penetration with a 2 inch wonder willy - terms and conditions apply. The title for this fic is once again inspired by Ethel Cain, because these silly lil doods can't be bothered to listen to anyone else. To no one's surprise, the author is an AUdhd 'transmasc'.
That is a reference to an earlier work where Viktor got trapped in a vent and had the daylights fucked out of him. Same author. This time, it's not going to involve a real dick, but a 2 inch roid clit that can't even be used for penetration. Did I mention there was ass-to-mouth in this?
> His narrow waist tapered to a broad chest
Do you like man-tit play? You're gonna get man-tit play.
> He'd spent so many nights jerking off to the fantasy of climbing between them and fucking Jayce's tight hole
That would be nice...if you had an actual dick.
> Toned, brown skin
For once, the male is getting topped. Unfortunately, it's with something that can't even be considered a dick. You'd be better off using a toilet plunger.
> He knew he had no good reason to grab those giant tits
> They're so big I can't even hold them all
> Luscious tits
So...would be be a DD?
> Wiping the drool from his mouth
These people really do act like dogs, wow.
> He opened his mouth as wide as it would go, trying to stuff as much of the plush flesh into it as possible
I just think of a squirrel stuffing its cheeks full of nuts. Same imagery. Just squishier.
> Such a hypocrite - pretending he didn't enjoy it even while he could see the half-hard dick in his pants
Look at that. The pooner is the sex pest this time around. What a twist!
> You let everyone else use you like this...what's so terrible about me?
I suppose the only comfort he has is that you only have a 2 inch roid clit to ass rape him with. No punching out his insides or belly bulges will come from that.
> Practically screaming for attention
> So small it must have never been touched by anyone else
A shame that it's going to be raided by his tongue, which is the only thing he's going to feel penetrating him.
> Puckering as if it wasn't hungry for Viktor's cock
Homie, you can't even penetrate with that 't-dick', who are you fooling?
> he ate as much of Jayce's ass as he could reach, getting lost in bliss as he devoured his partner
He's going Marco Pierre White down there, eh?
> he could dine on his insides
A shame you don't have a penis to pull it out like a skewer. That's usually Jayce's job - and this author writes him having a footlong. The switcharoo must be embarrassing.
> Scratched skin surrounding it and the presence of blood leaking from the rim
Goddamn. Did you use your teeth, or is your tongue the texture of sandpaper?
> Even defiled it was still so beautiful - so tempting
> Like a buffet of flesh laid out for Viktor's enjoyment
Sucks you have the tongue of a penguin.
> Sizable cock resting on his thigh
And then you have Viktor's 'small cock' with 'a few inches of growth' after 15 years on T, which gave him the whopping length of 2 inches. He is 'pounding' his ass with that, something his own pinky can do better. I cannot take this rape scene seriously. Really? You're using THAT?
Plot twist: the Hexcore made our pooner a rapist. He raided that ass like it was 999 England and he was a Viking. Tongue so rough he tore up that rim like a used Snickers bar. Now Jayce has to live with the fact he got sodomized by a 2 inch roid clit.
He does, in fact, violate Viktor in one fic, because this whole thing is a series of one-shots. He uses that big ole proper man dick in the fic with 30k words. This one just has a dash of macabre humour because who the hell thinks a t-dick is a dick? There are rolling pins that are bigger. You can't even rub against his prostate with that - what the fuck are you getting violated by? His tongue did more damage than that t-dick.
JJBA has a huge fandom - 67k fics - and around 1.1k fics if you sort by 'trans male', with a variety of the male characters being gender swapped.
Back in the day, fandoms like Hetalia had a whole sub-fandom of Rule 63, where all characters could be fully gender-bent, and it wasn't a problem. Nowadays that would be seen as 'insensitive'. I definitely noticed an uptick circa 2020, but the first time I saw a non binary character was in a Fear The Walking Dead fic. Featured gecko piss and everything. That was 10 years ago. Now, you have book series like 'The Locked Tomb' that features non binary characters and fandoms like Our Flag Means Death that troons out actresses.
Normies may be peaking, but it'll take years, if ever, for fandoms to let that shit go.
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Bluejorts, who insists she is fucking your mother and is pursuing a Master's in environmental science (but also has STEM) has come out with a new series. It is also discovered that she has fatigue flareups that prevent her from working on said Masters degree and that nipples fascinate her. Why? Turns out she got the zippertit surgery that involves the removal of the breasts and nipples, meaning she's as flat and bare as an ironing board. Hot.
She initially didn't like those transphobia comments. Hated them, actually. She decided to use the 'Um, actually, it's good publicity' when she decided to fork out her teenage insults. No, you're not fucking anyone's mother, and the only thing you're breaking is the toilet seat.
> In January, with the winter's ebb
Unless global warming hit jolly ole England, January is still cold. It is one of the coldest months of the year, and there is nothing 'warm' about it. You are several months away from it ebbing. What a dumb sentence to write. I hope this dumbass isn't studying climatology.
> Distracted by the guy's sheer beauty as he faces him
> His shoulders are broad and the wedge of chest he can see past his partially unbuttoned shirt is plush and furred
Some pooners have a type, and if it isn't twinks, it's their attempt at appearing desirable to bears. They like bushy, pudgy, hairy men, who are less of a reflection of actual gay bears than their fat asses on testosterone. This is them trying to project on characters more attractive than them to make themselves and their smut hotter.
> Just ah, talking to hot guys
'Guys' and you both have vaginas.
> Or, uh, new people...new, hot people
Whenever I read Jayce being an anti-social mess, I read less of him and more of the author's autism, right down to their mannerisms.
> This guy is literally one of the most stunning people Viktor has ever seen
And he's coated in hair that could give a Sumatran tiger a run for its money. I bet when he showers, he needs an industrial scrubber just to get the shit out of his chest hair.
>Okay. Uh
Bonus points if I see 'like, uh?' in the future.
> Much more quieter
*Quieter. You're a landed Bong, use the King's English.
> Like now he's been given permission he can't bring himself to stop.
You could have ended it with 'inch of skin at his neck' and it would have done the job. This is a disjointed sentence.
> To try to establish some kind of dominance
Of course. Big, burly men with hair = masculine men, tops, because we suddenly know what men are when it comes to appearances. But wait! There's a twist!
> Want you like this. Standing some other time
Another disjointed sentence. 'I want you like this. We can stand some other time' works just as well, if not better.
> Wow, what a chest
And it's a pudgy, Party City yeti chest with mastectomy scars, too. Twinsies!
> Did I always not have nipples?
> That was a stupid question
Indeed. All humans are born with nipples; that's a part of our embryonic development. Male or female you will have nipples. And what are Viktor's reasons for getting his removed?
> To transition is to evolve, no point keeping parts with no purpose
Oh, NOW we're talking about evolution, the thing that led to you being female from the moment daddy's sperm met mommy's egg. We're going to talk about it when you honestly think getting your nipples chopped off makes you a man. Please go on. I want to see this Master's degree in action.
> He traces the thicker rings of scar tissue around Jayce's areola
So. Keloids.
> Don't really have much
Yeah, I figured. They take off the nipples and re-attach them in the wrong areas, and you lose nerve function when they do. All you end up with are 'pretty' misshapen pepperoni nips on a chest covered in hair.
> His cock
I bet those chest and ass hairs are longer than that thing you call a cock.
Why am I not shocked that the person who sliced off their nipples to 'evolve' into a higher being doesn't like penetration? What, does it remind you of what you are? What you can't have? That your arms are too thin to construct a flesh tube? All that work to 'become' a man and you can't commit to the bit. Sad!
> He feels how Jayce circles his tongue around his shaft
What shaft? There are breakfast sausages that are bigger.
> Honest to God slurp
Ah, the Chinese noodles description. Love to see it.
> Then he shifts his attention to his hole, spreading him with his thumbs at his outer labia
Why is 'labia' fine to use but not 'vagina'? The labia is outwardly female genitalia. That doesn't trigger you, but vagina does? Does one sounds more female than the other, or is it due to the fact that most don't know what 'labia' is and sounds fancy instead of female?
> Maybe this is the best sex of his life
And it's just gold star lesbian sex. No toys, no phallic objects. Just fingers and squirting.
> Holding him up without much effort
I wonder why that is. It's probably because most of his weight is blubber and he's really no heavy than a medicine ball.
> Seam of Jayce's thighs on either side of his cock
Are his legs together? I seem to recall they were spread right open. Did he go back to default mode all of a sudden?
> He's thick, thicker than Viktor's finger
This means that Viktor's fingers are so thin they are probably thinner than a Wendy's straw. Imagine those creepy-crawlies working their way up your snatch.
> Like your voice
Is his voice like dirty talk, or do you like his voice? Butchering the King's English, I see.
> Another shudder, a trickle of slick
Perfect for those Chinese noodles you're slurping there.
> Two fingers
Which would be about as thick as a popsicle stick. I can't imagine him without reeds for fingers, now.
> I imagine you can take three
I imagine you can fist him and said fist would be no larger than a lemon.
> Fuck - I - fuck
Astounding sex dialogue. It really put me in the moment. You can feel the passion dripping through.
> Fucked-out bliss
It sure didn't feel or seem like it. That's what happens when you don't have phallic objects to do the heavy lifting.
> I had a really good time
Sure you did.
> Every other hookup he's ever had he's either outright refused to host to avoid the awkwardness of kicking another person out of his house
Now, have these people been men, or other pooners? If they're men, does that mean he likes dick more, or is he finally coming to terms with his lesbianism under a different label? I guess we'll never find out.
> He huffs like a dog
That sure does happen a lot, doesn't it?
> Walk of shame
Normally one would expect to be fucked properly for one, but he was just fingered and given an orgasm. They both consented to it and were not flat-out drunk. This was a mutually agreed-upon hookup.
> He's also aware that she held a flame for him for a number of years when they were in their teens
You're friends with her and you can't figure out if she is still in love with you or not? Better question is: does she know you're trans, or did she mistakenly fall in love with someone she thought was a man? Sky always seems to catch strays, even when she's not openly shat on.
And there's the twist: the random hookup is his new professor! Now we have our student-professor relationship. Papers will be graded, inventions will be experimented on, desks will creak as they're being fucked on. How long will this go on? Who knows! Maybe 70k or over. These things tend to be drawn out for drama's sake, and bluejorts isn't known to be a long-winded storyteller.
If their sex scenes don't include any kind of phallic toys, it's just going to be boring as fuck. Unless, of course, you can get used to 'fuck oh fuck' being put on repeat. Fun.
VeeforVindicta continues her stalker PT fic, this time from a different POV. Every chapter title comes from a Taylor Swift song, because of course it does. Started off as a stalker fic, devolved into your basic bitch Booktok smut about wanting to be heard and listened to.
Damn, Everclear? 92% straight alcohol content. That lil pooner is getting ROCKED.
> Sensory deprivation only once, because the guy at the clinic was really convincing, and also really hot
So you're telling me that our lil FTM here falls for scams and shit easily because of really hot men. Cool. This puts them on the same level of IG models.
> He may be falling for the same scam again, actually. Dr. Jayce Talis is also really, really hot
And I bet he has a big, big penis that is larger than your forearm and rearranges your insides.
> Shut up, oh my God
I clocked you as female just from that line alone.
> Vi and Cait are gross and couple-y
And from this. If you want to be a grown-ass man, act like it. No man talks like this, not even open faggots. Why would you be 'grossed out' by them at all? Is it because you're lesbophobic and think the vagina should be penetrated by a penis alone? I bet that's what that is.
> He knew that he is incapable of drinking anything but enough alcohol to kill an MMA fighter
Testosterone sure is a superpower, because your lightweight ass would be out in five minutes.
> His ragtag group of weirdos are unfortunately as scatterbrained as he is
You just admitted you hate your friends because they remind you of yourself, which means you're a scatterbrained weirdo who can't form normal human connections. Yeah, that fits.
> Just praying that nobody too awful comes by and whistles at him
> That certainly won't stop a brave enough catcaller
Why would you be catcalled if you're a True and Honest Man? Have you considered dressing more masculine? Are you that easy to clock in public that men, even while drunk and in the dark, can spot you as a woman and wolf whistle at you? Lol. Lmao.
> Drunk party girl status
As opposed to the True and Honest Gay Man Circuit Queen. Those men know how to party.
Pooners love big, beautiful sexy men with big hands. There's a trend there that I just can't put my thumb on. Any guesses?
> Almost pitiful. At least someone actually cares
And here we get into the female-brained side of this fic: from Jayce's perspective, we see him as a budding stalker who can finally find his new pet to use for his pleasure. He breaks into his victim's home, steals their dirty, t-cum stained panties and huffs them like gas. He commits to the bit of breaking Viktor down so he can fuck him to the end of his days.
Viktor? All he can think about is big muscles and how shitty his ex is. Observe.
> Valiantly defend his honor against Dmitri
Why would he do that? You're a man, aren't you? Then you can fight your battles yourself. You are not a woman and aren't a damsel in distress...or are you?
> He's drunk and definitely lonely
> He's pathetic enough to let this loser crawl back to him and get exactly what he wants, every goddamn time
True to form, we have the 'shitty ex' cliché that serves as a juxtaposition between how terrible Dmitri, the skinny ass white boy, is, to how wonderful and masculine Jayce, the muscular, brown PT, is. It's a classic in female smut literature.
> Which is really just saying nasty shit that isn't hot at all
Nice lampshading. It's the only time I've ever seen self-awareness from her.
> Lasts all of two minute
Can't even be a two-pump chump, lol. This is another aspect of the shitty ex: they can't last long in bed, can't find the clit, can't sexually please the woman/pooner, and all the vagina owner can think of is a man who can give them a nice, dirty fuck in the bed - which is exactly what's going to happen. Add on the bit that he wants to 'save' himself and it is your basic BookTok smut.
This is the second part of your basic bitch female smut: the Fantasy Man. The Fantasy Man is always hot, tall, 6'0 and over, big muscles, sexually appealing and with a virile streak to match. It's a man who will kick down doors yet will listen to you - because even while trans men insist they are men, they want someone to value their feelings and worth - and not give a damn about the state of your bush. Clearly, the True and Honest Gay Man, with his 'no fatties, no blacks, no hair' would be deemed a white supremacist in comparison.
Whatever. Whatever what-fucking-ever - let's focus on those large, warm hands that will no doubt encircle his waist and his thumbs will meet in the middle who will give him the fuck of a lifetime. Surely you've never seen this before.
Warm hands, warm, large bodies, a man who knows where the clit is and how to work the g-spot...oh yeah, basic bitch female fantasy. All that work to make Viktor a trans man and we go right back to the beginning. Women want to be heard and listened to and have their needs met; men simply take what they want and are done with it. If it's not shotacon shit, it's ridiculously feminine. I can pick out any smut book from Barnes and Noble and it will have the exact same plot, sans the trans shit.
> Wouldn't resent him or expect something in return
Oh? Are you saying those previous men just used you for easy pussy? You don't say.
> Surprisingly satisfying and sexy
Nice alliteration. Still makes you the basic bitch white woman writing female fantasy. See what I did there? I can alliterate too.
> Not the fake porn kind that pisses him off
See? Vee here writes BETTER than PornHub. She's so much better than those losers who don't put feeling in their porn. She just wants someone to love her pooner! She just wants that hot, muscly man to fuck her into the mattress. You would never know this was the same author who wrote a 12-year-old getting raped by a grown man and who was nearly raped by a buck.
You've heard the meme. Now, you can take it one step further: white women fuck werewolves. 'It screams at him to fuck, breed, claim' and 'naturally presents like a good bitch', 'enthusiastic cock sucker' are real lines.
> Almost always schmoozing and networking
> He'll smell Mel Medarda's vanilla and tobacco body
Mel strikes me as someone who doesn't smoke. Now, why is she in a fic where Jayce is your typical brown man = beast? This woman is ALWAYS catching strays?
> Viktor had been in love with the man, so he forgives himself the stab of arousal
So you had the man one minute, love him the next, hate him and then get turned on. The characterization is giving me whiplash.
> Sticks his tongue into Viktor's ear
Who knew he was a rat?
> The man is so fucked up he won't remember any of this tomorrow
All this to avoid getting raped by a man-dog, nice.
> Just to keep Viktor playing self-conscious high school girlfriend
'Girlfriend'? Aren't you a true and honest man?
> Does he want to fuck a delirious Jayce who barges into his house and humps him forcefully against the wall?
Guess it isn't rape when the man is hot, eh?
> Viktor will feel sick tonight about taking advantage of Jayce's state to indulge in his worst habits
Homie...I don't think you're the one in charge, here.
> Mine, my bitch, I'll make it good, okay
Ain't it something how it is always the trans man getting bitched. Look at that: he came so hard he pissed himself!
> How does someone move on from their soulmate?
Did he even consent to be your soulmate, or is that delusion on your end?
> Almost die in a desperate immigration attempt
Fucking LOL. Did he try crossing their version of the Darian Gap or did his mother cry like AOC in a parking lot? His dad was landed gentry, btw.
> Viktor was practically made to trigger every feral instinct Jayce hadn't even realized he'd had
White pussy can do that.
> He'd ignored Viktor's DNR, lied to Viktor's doctors
Yeah, I can see why he dumped your ass. You broke his explicit wishes because of your selfishness. Then you had to use an innocent black woman to 'relieve' yourself when all you wanted was white pussy. How pathetic.
> He had been made more equal
He's currently boxing him in with his superior male strength, because apparently werewolves don't have regenerative capabilities.
> He was a feral half-man, half-beast
Just say that he's like that because he's brown.
> he cringed to hear who was essentially his little sister talk about her sex life
But I have to hear about yours, because you are a man and you are far more important.
> The human, once bitten, would become docile and submissive to allow the werewolf to fully cement the bond
How convenient that the submissive and breedable one is the FTM. It's never, ever the other way around.
> It screams at him to fuck, breed, claim
There is never a moment where these people read their shit, go, 'yeah, this sounds retarded' and rewrites that sentence. They keep it because they think it sounds good, and have no one to tell them that 'yeah, that sounds retarded'.
> Full access to his top surgery scars and pretty pink nipples
Those 'pretty pink nipples' are going to resemble pieces of bologna. They seldom look good IRL.
> His curly pubes scratch against him
TFW when your pubes are thicker and coarser than literal werewolf fur.
> Glorified sex toy right now
And it's always the brown man written like that. He can't control his urges, he can't help himself, he needs a wet hole for his cock...what else is there?
> Presents naturally like a good bitch
This is a real fucking line.
> Kiss his hole hello
So is this one.
> Loves his ass but he has a special relationship to Viktor's pretty pussy
So is this one.
I regret to inform you that the rest of the fic is written like this: huge ass paragraphs with a sprinkling of terrible smut.
> An enthusiastic cock sucker
While there is no enthusiastic cock sucking, lmao
> Jayce is thrilled to see him fucked out and passive
Huh. I couldn't tell, mainly because that fucked-out session never happened.
> The man is a scientist, telling him the truth is going to result in a distracted Viktor, when he wants a fucked out one
That's not manipulative and fucked up at all.
> He's dizzy and drooling
Like a dog, eh?
> Ah, your hole Jayce. Please fuck your hole
Is he asking Jayce to fuck his own hole? Which one?
> Uhn suh, so much
Are you having a stroke? This is what counts as her smut talk, btw.
Yes, the 'enthusiastic cock sucking' or 'fucked out bliss' happens at the very end of this chapter. You would have thought this was done earlier based on Viktor's mood and reactions, but no...they do it against a fridge, in a single paragraph, and then it's over. Amazing.
> You're going to have my babies, aren't you?
Mother Nature sure is a TERF: his werewolf instincts know exactly what sex he is and what his purpose is. All that testosterone and a werewolf decides to use that pussy for babies, go figure.
This was supposed to have a second chapter. I have no idea if this author will update this, but if she does, guarantee it'll be worse than this one. The huge paragraphs, the terrible dialogue, the mischaracterization and mood changes giving me whiplash...ugh. It's got some funny lines, though. "Enthusiastic cock sucker" sounds like a punk metal band. I'll have to use it as an insult in the future.
Never thought I'd see a Trump reference in my fandom, but here we are.
People focused this much on child sex deserve the rope.
Another piss fic, and the author's first smut:
Least everything is tagged. Thanks, pissfaggot.
And who can forget vore?
On this website, OPSEC is always stressed, and one of the big lessons is never to use the same username on any website. This author decided to not just disregard that rule, but flaunt it: she used the same username on AO3 as her other social media sites, and now her boyfriend knows what she writes in her spare time. Link / Archive
But the real story came later. Introducing Sung-Drippy Woo, and how his wife doesn't speak to him anymore after he found her bookmarked fanfics on Goodreads.
17 years, and she reads smut fics as her own special space. Methinks there's an intimacy problem afoot.
He found them first, btw. He just asked about them and she got cagey. Something is definitely up there.
Turns out, she's a Dramoine fan. Wanna bet she's read Manacled?
Who needs sex toys or therapists when you've got Harry Potter fanfic?
> Posts it on Facebook
> Gets mad when hubby finds out
Oh yeah, she's fucking the pool boy. Drippy Woo here doesn't have the drippy cock she wants.
She initially didn't like those transphobia comments. Hated them, actually. She decided to use the 'Um, actually, it's good publicity' when she decided to fork out her teenage insults. No, you're not fucking anyone's mother, and the only thing you're breaking is the toilet seat.
> In January, with the winter's ebb
Unless global warming hit jolly ole England, January is still cold. It is one of the coldest months of the year, and there is nothing 'warm' about it. You are several months away from it ebbing. What a dumb sentence to write. I hope this dumbass isn't studying climatology.
> Distracted by the guy's sheer beauty as he faces him
> His shoulders are broad and the wedge of chest he can see past his partially unbuttoned shirt is plush and furred
Some pooners have a type, and if it isn't twinks, it's their attempt at appearing desirable to bears. They like bushy, pudgy, hairy men, who are less of a reflection of actual gay bears than their fat asses on testosterone. This is them trying to project on characters more attractive than them to make themselves and their smut hotter.
> Just ah, talking to hot guys
'Guys' and you both have vaginas.
> Or, uh, new people...new, hot people
Whenever I read Jayce being an anti-social mess, I read less of him and more of the author's autism, right down to their mannerisms.
> This guy is literally one of the most stunning people Viktor has ever seen
And he's coated in hair that could give a Sumatran tiger a run for its money. I bet when he showers, he needs an industrial scrubber just to get the shit out of his chest hair.
>Okay. Uh
Bonus points if I see 'like, uh?' in the future.
> Much more quieter
*Quieter. You're a landed Bong, use the King's English.
> Like now he's been given permission he can't bring himself to stop.
You could have ended it with 'inch of skin at his neck' and it would have done the job. This is a disjointed sentence.
> To try to establish some kind of dominance
Of course. Big, burly men with hair = masculine men, tops, because we suddenly know what men are when it comes to appearances. But wait! There's a twist!
> Want you like this. Standing some other time
Another disjointed sentence. 'I want you like this. We can stand some other time' works just as well, if not better.
> Wow, what a chest
And it's a pudgy, Party City yeti chest with mastectomy scars, too. Twinsies!
> Did I always not have nipples?
> That was a stupid question
Indeed. All humans are born with nipples; that's a part of our embryonic development. Male or female you will have nipples. And what are Viktor's reasons for getting his removed?
> To transition is to evolve, no point keeping parts with no purpose
Oh, NOW we're talking about evolution, the thing that led to you being female from the moment daddy's sperm met mommy's egg. We're going to talk about it when you honestly think getting your nipples chopped off makes you a man. Please go on. I want to see this Master's degree in action.
> He traces the thicker rings of scar tissue around Jayce's areola
So. Keloids.
> Don't really have much
Yeah, I figured. They take off the nipples and re-attach them in the wrong areas, and you lose nerve function when they do. All you end up with are 'pretty' misshapen pepperoni nips on a chest covered in hair.
> His cock
I bet those chest and ass hairs are longer than that thing you call a cock.
Why am I not shocked that the person who sliced off their nipples to 'evolve' into a higher being doesn't like penetration? What, does it remind you of what you are? What you can't have? That your arms are too thin to construct a flesh tube? All that work to 'become' a man and you can't commit to the bit. Sad!
> He feels how Jayce circles his tongue around his shaft
What shaft? There are breakfast sausages that are bigger.
> Honest to God slurp
Ah, the Chinese noodles description. Love to see it.
> Then he shifts his attention to his hole, spreading him with his thumbs at his outer labia
Why is 'labia' fine to use but not 'vagina'? The labia is outwardly female genitalia. That doesn't trigger you, but vagina does? Does one sounds more female than the other, or is it due to the fact that most don't know what 'labia' is and sounds fancy instead of female?
> Maybe this is the best sex of his life
And it's just gold star lesbian sex. No toys, no phallic objects. Just fingers and squirting.
> Holding him up without much effort
I wonder why that is. It's probably because most of his weight is blubber and he's really no heavy than a medicine ball.
> Seam of Jayce's thighs on either side of his cock
Are his legs together? I seem to recall they were spread right open. Did he go back to default mode all of a sudden?
> He's thick, thicker than Viktor's finger
This means that Viktor's fingers are so thin they are probably thinner than a Wendy's straw. Imagine those creepy-crawlies working their way up your snatch.
> Like your voice
Is his voice like dirty talk, or do you like his voice? Butchering the King's English, I see.
> Another shudder, a trickle of slick
Perfect for those Chinese noodles you're slurping there.
> Two fingers
Which would be about as thick as a popsicle stick. I can't imagine him without reeds for fingers, now.
> I imagine you can take three
I imagine you can fist him and said fist would be no larger than a lemon.
> Fuck - I - fuck
Astounding sex dialogue. It really put me in the moment. You can feel the passion dripping through.
> Fucked-out bliss
It sure didn't feel or seem like it. That's what happens when you don't have phallic objects to do the heavy lifting.
> I had a really good time
Sure you did.
> Every other hookup he's ever had he's either outright refused to host to avoid the awkwardness of kicking another person out of his house
Now, have these people been men, or other pooners? If they're men, does that mean he likes dick more, or is he finally coming to terms with his lesbianism under a different label? I guess we'll never find out.
> He huffs like a dog
That sure does happen a lot, doesn't it?
> Walk of shame
Normally one would expect to be fucked properly for one, but he was just fingered and given an orgasm. They both consented to it and were not flat-out drunk. This was a mutually agreed-upon hookup.
> He's also aware that she held a flame for him for a number of years when they were in their teens
You're friends with her and you can't figure out if she is still in love with you or not? Better question is: does she know you're trans, or did she mistakenly fall in love with someone she thought was a man? Sky always seems to catch strays, even when she's not openly shat on.
And there's the twist: the random hookup is his new professor! Now we have our student-professor relationship. Papers will be graded, inventions will be experimented on, desks will creak as they're being fucked on. How long will this go on? Who knows! Maybe 70k or over. These things tend to be drawn out for drama's sake, and bluejorts isn't known to be a long-winded storyteller.
If their sex scenes don't include any kind of phallic toys, it's just going to be boring as fuck. Unless, of course, you can get used to 'fuck oh fuck' being put on repeat. Fun.
VeeforVindicta continues her stalker PT fic, this time from a different POV. Every chapter title comes from a Taylor Swift song, because of course it does. Started off as a stalker fic, devolved into your basic bitch Booktok smut about wanting to be heard and listened to.
Damn, Everclear? 92% straight alcohol content. That lil pooner is getting ROCKED.
> Sensory deprivation only once, because the guy at the clinic was really convincing, and also really hot
So you're telling me that our lil FTM here falls for scams and shit easily because of really hot men. Cool. This puts them on the same level of IG models.
> He may be falling for the same scam again, actually. Dr. Jayce Talis is also really, really hot
And I bet he has a big, big penis that is larger than your forearm and rearranges your insides.
> Shut up, oh my God
I clocked you as female just from that line alone.
> Vi and Cait are gross and couple-y
And from this. If you want to be a grown-ass man, act like it. No man talks like this, not even open faggots. Why would you be 'grossed out' by them at all? Is it because you're lesbophobic and think the vagina should be penetrated by a penis alone? I bet that's what that is.
> He knew that he is incapable of drinking anything but enough alcohol to kill an MMA fighter
Testosterone sure is a superpower, because your lightweight ass would be out in five minutes.
> His ragtag group of weirdos are unfortunately as scatterbrained as he is
You just admitted you hate your friends because they remind you of yourself, which means you're a scatterbrained weirdo who can't form normal human connections. Yeah, that fits.
> Just praying that nobody too awful comes by and whistles at him
> That certainly won't stop a brave enough catcaller
Why would you be catcalled if you're a True and Honest Man? Have you considered dressing more masculine? Are you that easy to clock in public that men, even while drunk and in the dark, can spot you as a woman and wolf whistle at you? Lol. Lmao.
> Drunk party girl status
As opposed to the True and Honest Gay Man Circuit Queen. Those men know how to party.
Pooners love big, beautiful sexy men with big hands. There's a trend there that I just can't put my thumb on. Any guesses?
> Almost pitiful. At least someone actually cares
And here we get into the female-brained side of this fic: from Jayce's perspective, we see him as a budding stalker who can finally find his new pet to use for his pleasure. He breaks into his victim's home, steals their dirty, t-cum stained panties and huffs them like gas. He commits to the bit of breaking Viktor down so he can fuck him to the end of his days.
Viktor? All he can think about is big muscles and how shitty his ex is. Observe.
> Valiantly defend his honor against Dmitri
Why would he do that? You're a man, aren't you? Then you can fight your battles yourself. You are not a woman and aren't a damsel in distress...or are you?
> He's drunk and definitely lonely
> He's pathetic enough to let this loser crawl back to him and get exactly what he wants, every goddamn time
True to form, we have the 'shitty ex' cliché that serves as a juxtaposition between how terrible Dmitri, the skinny ass white boy, is, to how wonderful and masculine Jayce, the muscular, brown PT, is. It's a classic in female smut literature.
> Which is really just saying nasty shit that isn't hot at all
Nice lampshading. It's the only time I've ever seen self-awareness from her.
> Lasts all of two minute
Can't even be a two-pump chump, lol. This is another aspect of the shitty ex: they can't last long in bed, can't find the clit, can't sexually please the woman/pooner, and all the vagina owner can think of is a man who can give them a nice, dirty fuck in the bed - which is exactly what's going to happen. Add on the bit that he wants to 'save' himself and it is your basic BookTok smut.
This is the second part of your basic bitch female smut: the Fantasy Man. The Fantasy Man is always hot, tall, 6'0 and over, big muscles, sexually appealing and with a virile streak to match. It's a man who will kick down doors yet will listen to you - because even while trans men insist they are men, they want someone to value their feelings and worth - and not give a damn about the state of your bush. Clearly, the True and Honest Gay Man, with his 'no fatties, no blacks, no hair' would be deemed a white supremacist in comparison.
Whatever. Whatever what-fucking-ever - let's focus on those large, warm hands that will no doubt encircle his waist and his thumbs will meet in the middle who will give him the fuck of a lifetime. Surely you've never seen this before.
Warm hands, warm, large bodies, a man who knows where the clit is and how to work the g-spot...oh yeah, basic bitch female fantasy. All that work to make Viktor a trans man and we go right back to the beginning. Women want to be heard and listened to and have their needs met; men simply take what they want and are done with it. If it's not shotacon shit, it's ridiculously feminine. I can pick out any smut book from Barnes and Noble and it will have the exact same plot, sans the trans shit.
> Wouldn't resent him or expect something in return
Oh? Are you saying those previous men just used you for easy pussy? You don't say.
> Surprisingly satisfying and sexy
Nice alliteration. Still makes you the basic bitch white woman writing female fantasy. See what I did there? I can alliterate too.
> Not the fake porn kind that pisses him off
See? Vee here writes BETTER than PornHub. She's so much better than those losers who don't put feeling in their porn. She just wants someone to love her pooner! She just wants that hot, muscly man to fuck her into the mattress. You would never know this was the same author who wrote a 12-year-old getting raped by a grown man and who was nearly raped by a buck.
You've heard the meme. Now, you can take it one step further: white women fuck werewolves. 'It screams at him to fuck, breed, claim' and 'naturally presents like a good bitch', 'enthusiastic cock sucker' are real lines.
> Almost always schmoozing and networking
> He'll smell Mel Medarda's vanilla and tobacco body
Mel strikes me as someone who doesn't smoke. Now, why is she in a fic where Jayce is your typical brown man = beast? This woman is ALWAYS catching strays?
> Viktor had been in love with the man, so he forgives himself the stab of arousal
So you had the man one minute, love him the next, hate him and then get turned on. The characterization is giving me whiplash.
> Sticks his tongue into Viktor's ear
Who knew he was a rat?
> The man is so fucked up he won't remember any of this tomorrow
All this to avoid getting raped by a man-dog, nice.
> Just to keep Viktor playing self-conscious high school girlfriend
'Girlfriend'? Aren't you a true and honest man?
> Does he want to fuck a delirious Jayce who barges into his house and humps him forcefully against the wall?
Guess it isn't rape when the man is hot, eh?
> Viktor will feel sick tonight about taking advantage of Jayce's state to indulge in his worst habits
Homie...I don't think you're the one in charge, here.
> Mine, my bitch, I'll make it good, okay
Ain't it something how it is always the trans man getting bitched. Look at that: he came so hard he pissed himself!
> How does someone move on from their soulmate?
Did he even consent to be your soulmate, or is that delusion on your end?
> Almost die in a desperate immigration attempt
Fucking LOL. Did he try crossing their version of the Darian Gap or did his mother cry like AOC in a parking lot? His dad was landed gentry, btw.
> Viktor was practically made to trigger every feral instinct Jayce hadn't even realized he'd had
White pussy can do that.
> He'd ignored Viktor's DNR, lied to Viktor's doctors
Yeah, I can see why he dumped your ass. You broke his explicit wishes because of your selfishness. Then you had to use an innocent black woman to 'relieve' yourself when all you wanted was white pussy. How pathetic.
> He had been made more equal
He's currently boxing him in with his superior male strength, because apparently werewolves don't have regenerative capabilities.
> He was a feral half-man, half-beast
Just say that he's like that because he's brown.
> he cringed to hear who was essentially his little sister talk about her sex life
But I have to hear about yours, because you are a man and you are far more important.
> The human, once bitten, would become docile and submissive to allow the werewolf to fully cement the bond
How convenient that the submissive and breedable one is the FTM. It's never, ever the other way around.
> It screams at him to fuck, breed, claim
There is never a moment where these people read their shit, go, 'yeah, this sounds retarded' and rewrites that sentence. They keep it because they think it sounds good, and have no one to tell them that 'yeah, that sounds retarded'.
> Full access to his top surgery scars and pretty pink nipples
Those 'pretty pink nipples' are going to resemble pieces of bologna. They seldom look good IRL.
> His curly pubes scratch against him
TFW when your pubes are thicker and coarser than literal werewolf fur.
> Glorified sex toy right now
And it's always the brown man written like that. He can't control his urges, he can't help himself, he needs a wet hole for his cock...what else is there?
> Presents naturally like a good bitch
This is a real fucking line.
> Kiss his hole hello
So is this one.
> Loves his ass but he has a special relationship to Viktor's pretty pussy
So is this one.
I regret to inform you that the rest of the fic is written like this: huge ass paragraphs with a sprinkling of terrible smut.
> An enthusiastic cock sucker
While there is no enthusiastic cock sucking, lmao
> Jayce is thrilled to see him fucked out and passive
Huh. I couldn't tell, mainly because that fucked-out session never happened.
> The man is a scientist, telling him the truth is going to result in a distracted Viktor, when he wants a fucked out one
That's not manipulative and fucked up at all.
> He's dizzy and drooling
Like a dog, eh?
> Ah, your hole Jayce. Please fuck your hole
Is he asking Jayce to fuck his own hole? Which one?
> Uhn suh, so much
Are you having a stroke? This is what counts as her smut talk, btw.
Yes, the 'enthusiastic cock sucking' or 'fucked out bliss' happens at the very end of this chapter. You would have thought this was done earlier based on Viktor's mood and reactions, but no...they do it against a fridge, in a single paragraph, and then it's over. Amazing.
> You're going to have my babies, aren't you?
Mother Nature sure is a TERF: his werewolf instincts know exactly what sex he is and what his purpose is. All that testosterone and a werewolf decides to use that pussy for babies, go figure.
This was supposed to have a second chapter. I have no idea if this author will update this, but if she does, guarantee it'll be worse than this one. The huge paragraphs, the terrible dialogue, the mischaracterization and mood changes giving me whiplash...ugh. It's got some funny lines, though. "Enthusiastic cock sucker" sounds like a punk metal band. I'll have to use it as an insult in the future.
Never thought I'd see a Trump reference in my fandom, but here we are.
People focused this much on child sex deserve the rope.
Another piss fic, and the author's first smut:
Least everything is tagged. Thanks, pissfaggot.
And who can forget vore?
On this website, OPSEC is always stressed, and one of the big lessons is never to use the same username on any website. This author decided to not just disregard that rule, but flaunt it: she used the same username on AO3 as her other social media sites, and now her boyfriend knows what she writes in her spare time. Link / Archive
But the real story came later. Introducing Sung-Drippy Woo, and how his wife doesn't speak to him anymore after he found her bookmarked fanfics on Goodreads.
17 years, and she reads smut fics as her own special space. Methinks there's an intimacy problem afoot.
He found them first, btw. He just asked about them and she got cagey. Something is definitely up there.
Turns out, she's a Dramoine fan. Wanna bet she's read Manacled?
Who needs sex toys or therapists when you've got Harry Potter fanfic?
> Posts it on Facebook
> Gets mad when hubby finds out
Oh yeah, she's fucking the pool boy. Drippy Woo here doesn't have the drippy cock she wants.
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I love how this is presented like a screwed up monsterfucker fic but the guy doesn't even transform into anything so the "monster" is just a regular brown person.