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Our girl fiveblessings has a new work out. Featuring spread bars and spilled coffee, it was also based on a piece of fanart, seen here.
> There has yet to be a day since they first met when Viktor fails to make him feel like a schoolboy in the throes of his first crush
White pussy do be like that.
> Tailored around a svelte waist
I better not read 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle.'
> Pulls him up
He doesn't, not really. He's still on the ground and doesn't think to remove the cane for a full five minutes while he lusts over his position.
> Hauling him into his lap and cradling him like a baby
He's a grown-ass man - sorta. He's a man and a half. Accessories included.
> Aren't just spread eagled on the floor, they're tangled up in his cane
When I read this, I assumed his legs were wrapped around said cane like a snake. But spread-eagled does explain the spread bar imagery.
> The only thought his neanderthal brain manages to muster is how unintentionally erotic it all looks
And she spends 1k words talking about how hot it is.
> Jayce's mind doesn't seem to care for those details. All he can think of is how good he looks
We know. You just spent a paragraph talking about that.
> His dick chubbing up while his neurons bombard him
You'll never guess how long he stays chubbed up. A real world-record holder, there.
> Made you look as though you're trussed up like a prize
You could have just used this and it would have hammered the point home.
> Lengthwise so as not to force his thighs upwards
He's spread-eagled is he not? I doubt his thighs can go any higher due to his mobility issues. Lifting it up vertically would be stupid.
> There's nothing left to distract him from his half-hard cock
His pants are pretty tight. I guarantee you our boy here noticed.
> Bastardized and used as a sex toy to pin him up like a doll
Interesting how the FTM is always made into a doll.
> I'm a pervert, what can you do?
At least you admit it.
> His erection doesn't fully want until he escapes home
Yes, he's had an erection for hours now, with no consequences, even though you are not supposed to be erect for more than four hours. Tissue damage for your wonder weasel is real, you know.
> Coming embarrassingly quickly, the tiles beneath his feet stained with his white
Who needs Vim when you've got him?
> Imagine of a cane tangled up in pale thighs
We just love our white skin, don't we folks?
> One would think Viktor's obvious pain would be a boner killer, but his sadistic streak is choosing the worst possible moment to rear its head
It's obvious he doesn't actively want to hurt him, but his 'Neanderthal brain' is just talking. I wonder if this author understands the implications of comparing a brown man to a Neanderthal, lol
> Concealing his inopportune boners behind the edge of his desk
I'm more surprised at how frequently he's getting them and how long he's keeping them. How virile! I wonder if he counts the hours and minutes he's erect for.
> Tender skin that reacts to a gentle touch as if it were a full-blown beating
Guess that testosterone didn't grant him male thickness of the skin. Sounds like he needs a Snickers - a different kind of Snickers
> They're made by his hands, a too-tight grip, and his wrists, his hips, his waist
This seems like an incomplete sentence. Blame queercatfan for making me suspicious of sentences like these. It seems like 'his wrists, his hips, and his waist' were supposed to be addled with bruises, but fiveblessings just forgot to write it. This was beta-read, btw.
> Spread out on the floor, his legs tangled and trapped by the metal cane
We just read through several paragraphs of him getting a boner at this mental image. No need to keep repeating it.
> Like he's waiting for Jayce, the beast looming over him, to pounce on his prone body, to use his cane against him
It's always something reading Jayce, the mixed race man, compared to any variety of animals and beasts from the same people who complain about societal racism in the next breath. Steam clean that Klan hood, why don't you?
> He knows he's not been the best at disguising his desires
No shit. You've been walking around with a persistent boner for WEEKS. There is no way Viktor doesn't know. Pants that tight showcase everything.
> The consequence of working a nine-to-five with the an he fucks during his five-to-nine
I like this line. Fiveblessings does have some good ones when she puts her mind to it. The dialogue, for its part, is not as cringeworthy as it is in others - barring that microdick fic. That was a really shitty one.
Of course he's into it. The FTM is always riddled with kinks, and his bestial Neanderthal is there to fulfill every sexual fantasy.
> He's done a lot more than just picture it, planning out every minute detail into the late hours of the night
Yeah, that's something he'd do. He'd plan out every minute, every scene, what bed sheet to use and what specific dirty dialogue he'd use. This man would go down to the fucking wire.
> Cupping Viktor's sex possessively
Interesting how this is normally used for women's genitalia. I don't really see it used as often for men - cock and dick is used more often - but it can be used for either sex. It's just something I've noticed.
> I need to know that you mean it
How nice of him to ask before he goes Slap Mountain on that ass.
> Pale, untouched skin he can mark up
Always with the white skin. I can see why he's doing this to Viktor, because if it was done to Mel, people would ask when we went back to the 1880s.
> Pain, but pleasure too
Cliché.
> He can see everything, the way slick drips from his entrance and collects on his fingers
I will never cease to be amazed at these T pussies dripping like a broken NY water main. They get wetter than most normal women do.
> It's electrifying, how easily Viktor's body accommodates him
Almost as if he has complementary genitalia.
> Jayce will never get used to it, how stunning Viktor is, and reduced to his animal wants. It's like he was made for him to ruin
Almost as if he has complementary genitalia, and is a complementary sex.
> Warning it
This was beta-read, and neither one spotted 'warning' instead of 'warming'.
> He's embarrassingly hard considering he hasn't even touched himself
Are we surprised? He's been walking around with a boner like that for weeks. That man could probably hold up a bank with how firm and secure he is.
> Blood still prickles beneath Viktor's skin
> It's a little worrying how much it spurs Jayce on, feeding the overwhelming urge inside him that's begging to see him crying
Oh, so the brown man loves using physical violence to fulfill his innate sadistic needs. I couldn't have seen that coming at all.
Now, this whole slap session reminds me of Slap Fight or Slap Mountain, where people go all-out on slapping each other across the face. Some of those men get split cheeks and massive swelling, others get knocked out. These are not small men. Jayce is a very, very physically strong man. Viktor's thighs are going to look like a river coated in cranberries once he's done.
> When the next series of hits rain down, his muscles tensing prematurely
See point above. I would not doubt it one moment if the skin actually splits.
> Feeding the starved animal Jayce didn't realize was making its home in his core
We just had a line about how he wants to make Viktor cry and how it's awakening his 'inner beast', so this line is moot. Internal consistency is important; we know that 'Neanderthal' and 'beast' is awake and taking joy at this, so there is no point saying it's waking up when it's already there.
> I'll give your hungry cunt what it's so desperate
Can I get an order of a 10'' wonder weasel with extra sauce? Fill up the bag, please.
> It all contributes to the image of a cock-hungry whore, willing to do anything to get Jayce where he wants him
Along with the 'his thumbs met in the middle' line, writing Viktor as a cock-whore or a cocksleeve is very common. The bit about them copying each other and hanging out in the same Discord servers becomes more and more apparent.
Now, for this pussy slapping. This comes from porn, and based on how hard Jayce is slapping Viktor here, that vulva is going to be very, very damaged. This is a full force slap, not a love tap. That's like punching a man's balls or squeezing them too hard 'to keep the blood flowing'. Genitalia is sensitive for a reason. A t-dick getting slapped like that has got to hurt.
> Contusions left in his image that'll take days on end to heal
Bruises. Nasty ones, at that.
> Flood his cunt with come like he's no more than a glorified cocksleeve
See my point made earlier. If he's not an uwu smol sex doll, he's this.
> He's marked as your property
All you're missing is the leash, collar, and whip. Now send him out to those fields and pick that cotton!
> Still gasps as though he fucked his whole length inside in one go
Would that really make a difference?
> Before Viktor has the time to adjust and hear him cry out at the brutal stretch
According to you, he's also wet as a water slide. Would he really feel the difference at this 'brutal stretch' if he was already ready for it?
> The shade is shockingly similar to that of the metalwork
Damn, son. You hit him so hard you made his skin look GREY?
> Can't you keep still?
Motherfucker, you're the one fucking him so hard he's moving up the bed. YOU stay still. Fucking retard.
> How perfect he would be, trussed up like a gift, all for Jayce's taking
All he's missing is the slave-collar and whips! Split that back like Massa showed you in Barbados.
> His hips setting a punishing pace
'Setting'? Jayce was already fucking Viktor at a rough pace to where he was moving Viktor up and down the bed. He's not 'setting' a punishing pace - HE WAS ALREADY IN ONE.
> His eyes lock onto his cock, thick length disappearing into his well-used hole
You already wrote that. It's also not lost on me how the 'beastly' man has a large penis and is always written to have one, while the 'fragile' bottom here has either a micropenis (in the lone fic where V was, in fact, a man and made to feel ashamed of it compared to the big-dicked brown man) or a roid clit. The dick measuring competition ain't even close.
> This time taking the pace up to the next level
So did he 'set up a punishing pace' or not? Because he went from a rough pace, to a punishing one, to a less punishing one, and now he's cranking it up to 11. Which is it? Was he shaking that pooner up and down the bed like a salt shaker or not?
> His body being used like a ragdoll
You already wrote that.
Haven't you been sleeping together for months? Does this mean the sex was shit before kink was involved?
He does that and Heimerdinger and co will think he fought a Hell Pig. Slap Mountain's got nothing compared to Mr. Favela Fists here. Still not getting over how this boy didn't cum hard enough during their previous sessions and his speed mode kept changing during the 'punishing pace' scene.
My girl Vee has blessed me with another entry. See if you can spot a few recurring themes of hers in this free-for-all gangbang.
> Who even are these people
He asks, while being a Councilor and knowing most of their faces. They've been begging for money for ten years - they should have at least made bank now. Most of them should be on a know-name basis.
> If it weren't for the huge dollar signs
Minor nitpick: they don't use dollars, but a form of gold currency. But I'll let it slide as most don't give a damn.
> Wasn't really sure what the event was
> Author makes no attempt to even embellish the invitation and lure in the readers
> The details are vague but it's clearly a fancy invitation
> It's only for him and him alone
Uh huh. He totally doesn't know.
> Our volunteer is delicate
And fragile. And pale. And smol and with a tiny waist that you can wrap your hands around...you get the drill.
> How glazed over and purple-tinged they were
This implies Jayce knows Viktor is taking Shimmer. He apparently didn't grasp that it was being smoked there, either.
> He wasn't completely naive
So why didn't he have an inkling as to what this party was for? Fancy invitations like that aren't handed out willy-nilly. He would have had an idea.
> Worst of all, Viktor was the chosen party favor
What a shame this keeps happening to trans men.
> He was a little angry. Angry at these people for taking advantage of Viktor, knowing full well who he was
...do they know? Most of the time they had no clue who Viktor was. They just know him as 'that Zaunite'. If Viktor readily goes to these parties, then he is consenting to be used as a fucktoy, simple as.
> Seeing Viktor so vulnerable the whole time
So either he's a full grown adult and a proper 'man', or he's so fragile and vulnerable and pale and whatever have you for this wee waif. Pick one. Why is the trans man always made the weakling, here?
> Weapons sold to rebels
When did Viktor make weapons for rebels? I recall that being a big damn thing when Mel even brought it up as a suggestion.
> Now all he could envision was a young Viktor, leaning against the wall of a bar, waiting for someone to pick him up and ravage him
There's the shotacon we know and love! Vee is friends with problematicism, who wrote just this plot. I wonder if that tidbit is a nod to her.
> Viktor's back arched, the pins in his spine glinting in the dim light
I'm glad he can do that while getting Eiffel Tower'ed.
> He was rock fucking hard in his slacks
Oh yeah, we're getting a rough fucking now.
> Push some of the fluids back into his gaping hole
Which one?
> It was the deep desire to only see Viktor lost in pleasure from him alone
How romantic. I'm sure he'll revert back to Neanderthal status once he gets his prize.
> Expanses of pale skin covered in marks
We sure do love our pale skin, don't we?
If the milk went back, trust me, your ass would feel like you had Viktor's cane shoved inside it. You'd be spending the night on that porcelain throne.
> The amount he spent for a night alone for a man he saw every damn day was ridiculous
Hey, this is private property, and he's an expensive piece of (scarecrow) ass. Cut him some slack, alright?
> An unsettling number of pill bottles cluttered the bedside, accompanied by energy drinks and snack bars
Nothing like a Red Bull and a bottle of Oxy. Knock out both your brain and your heart.
> He smelled like the misty sugarplum of Shimmer
Damn, give me some.
> He didn't recognize him
And like a knight in shining armour, he gives him a night he doesn't forget - sorta.
> That was both reassuring and disturbing
Thank God this is actually a polite Jayce, otherwise he'd just start raping.
> Felt like something out of a fantasy
You already wrote that.
> Pulling him down onto the bed
He's already on the bed. Do you mean pulling him down next to you?
> Slight swells of his chest
So he hasn't got the zippertits yet.
> You're a big boy, aren't you?
> He likes his men big
6'2 and 10-12''. The perfect male specimen of every female fantasy. Even identity cannot erase this basic truth.
> Soft trail of hair on his abdomen
So he's got the yeti fur on top of the Tarzan pubes, nice.
> Dreamed of this moment for a stupidly long time
You already wrote that.
> It was clear he was hastily wiped down after the party
There will still be sperm in there unless he douched. So Jayce will be getting someone's nasty leftovers while tasting free Golden Corral.
> His whole cunt was puffy and red from overuse
I'm glad STIs aren't a thing here. Shimmer must fix up the tearing.
> Hard but of clit
> Sloppily sucking at it like it was a cock
Oh? I thought the clit WAS a cock.
How convenient that it isn't this time around.
> The bulge in his pants is obscenely obvious
Place your bets on how big he is. The footlong is always a winner.
> Those awful people treat you like a piece of meat
You'll never guess what his reasons are for doing this.
> I did far worse things for money in Zaun
AKA he was a child prostitute and he views that as the most normal thing on earth. Of course shotacons don't have an issue with human trafficking in general; they get their socks off at drawn CP. Even if this isn't the case, Vee is known for writing it so I am hedging my bets at him selling himself young.
> They were addressed to me
And here comes the twist.
Yes, these Piltovan Diddy Parties wanted to anally exercise Jayce because he was the perfect man to break into, and Viktor, being his good friend, decided to unironically use the fact that he's weaker, smaller and more fragile to evoke more pity and offer himself instead. Can't break an already experienced cock-hungry whore, after all.
You know that ass would get blasted. I bet someone would want to shove a trumpet up there.
> Can't even understand basic innuendo
I'm sure he can understand that you suck dick for cock, bud.
> The implications finally hit him
As if it wasn't blatantly obvious before.
> You are quite possessive
Until he gets to the point where he's grooming and raping underaged deer 'boys', he gets a pass from me.
> Be gentle with our smaller guest
I thought trans men were hardy and could take anything you threw at them?
You'll never guess what happens next. Viktor isn't the only trans surprise here.
> Brushing over his hole
I would not have guessed that was his anus until I knew his 'front hole' was occupied.
> He gasped as a cock slowly pushed inside of him
> the woman behind him
This author is so keen to stick to being non-transphobic that our pooner here knows to correctly sex a transwoman based on the cock inside of him, vs assume that it's a whole ass male in a dress. Yes, that male person with male genitalia is absolutely a woman, sticking 'her' penis inside your 'male vagina', and you are 100% NOT have gay/straight sex. I don't normally come across many transwomen in fics, but when I do, they stand out more than the trans man. 'Man with a vagina' is silly, but they can't convince anyone other than women. 'Women with dicks' is said with a more threatening tone, and we've all heard the 'suck the girlcock, bitch.'
> The woman was spilling inside of him
Right. Was that bepenised woman as big as the Hispanic Hog, or is that gigantic size saved for our lover boy here?
All that and it's the fucking girl dick that caught me by surprise, lmao. That and the 'I've done worse things in Zaun' which suggests child prostitution. Because we aren't going to criticize that because sex work is work and teenagers can absolutely consent and agree to such drastic lifestyles (read: sex slavery). The gangbang ended up being the most mundane thing about it. This author does have a habit of injecting underage shit into everything, even in fics where both characters are adults. She will forever be known as the underage deer rape author and she wears that with a badge of pride.
Browsing the AO3 subreddit might become a favourite past time of mine. Here was a post (archive here) made by a user who got congratulated on their RPF smut fic...featuring Kurtis Conner - yes, THAT Kurtis Connor. Want to guess how many bookmarks it has?
Foxszn24 goes by the same username on most socials. True to form, it's a 'silly lil trans guy' named Spencer who writes manly subjects like...YouTubers living in an AU where their wives don't exist and they are all gay vampires.
Barely 1k hits. So popular.
> There has yet to be a day since they first met when Viktor fails to make him feel like a schoolboy in the throes of his first crush
White pussy do be like that.
> Tailored around a svelte waist
I better not read 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle.'
> Pulls him up
He doesn't, not really. He's still on the ground and doesn't think to remove the cane for a full five minutes while he lusts over his position.
> Hauling him into his lap and cradling him like a baby
He's a grown-ass man - sorta. He's a man and a half. Accessories included.
> Aren't just spread eagled on the floor, they're tangled up in his cane
When I read this, I assumed his legs were wrapped around said cane like a snake. But spread-eagled does explain the spread bar imagery.
> The only thought his neanderthal brain manages to muster is how unintentionally erotic it all looks
And she spends 1k words talking about how hot it is.
> Jayce's mind doesn't seem to care for those details. All he can think of is how good he looks
We know. You just spent a paragraph talking about that.
> His dick chubbing up while his neurons bombard him
You'll never guess how long he stays chubbed up. A real world-record holder, there.
> Made you look as though you're trussed up like a prize
You could have just used this and it would have hammered the point home.
> Lengthwise so as not to force his thighs upwards
He's spread-eagled is he not? I doubt his thighs can go any higher due to his mobility issues. Lifting it up vertically would be stupid.
> There's nothing left to distract him from his half-hard cock
His pants are pretty tight. I guarantee you our boy here noticed.
> Bastardized and used as a sex toy to pin him up like a doll
Interesting how the FTM is always made into a doll.
> I'm a pervert, what can you do?
At least you admit it.
> His erection doesn't fully want until he escapes home
Yes, he's had an erection for hours now, with no consequences, even though you are not supposed to be erect for more than four hours. Tissue damage for your wonder weasel is real, you know.
> Coming embarrassingly quickly, the tiles beneath his feet stained with his white
Who needs Vim when you've got him?
> Imagine of a cane tangled up in pale thighs
We just love our white skin, don't we folks?
> One would think Viktor's obvious pain would be a boner killer, but his sadistic streak is choosing the worst possible moment to rear its head
It's obvious he doesn't actively want to hurt him, but his 'Neanderthal brain' is just talking. I wonder if this author understands the implications of comparing a brown man to a Neanderthal, lol
> Concealing his inopportune boners behind the edge of his desk
I'm more surprised at how frequently he's getting them and how long he's keeping them. How virile! I wonder if he counts the hours and minutes he's erect for.
> Tender skin that reacts to a gentle touch as if it were a full-blown beating
Guess that testosterone didn't grant him male thickness of the skin. Sounds like he needs a Snickers - a different kind of Snickers
> They're made by his hands, a too-tight grip, and his wrists, his hips, his waist
This seems like an incomplete sentence. Blame queercatfan for making me suspicious of sentences like these. It seems like 'his wrists, his hips, and his waist' were supposed to be addled with bruises, but fiveblessings just forgot to write it. This was beta-read, btw.
> Spread out on the floor, his legs tangled and trapped by the metal cane
We just read through several paragraphs of him getting a boner at this mental image. No need to keep repeating it.
> Like he's waiting for Jayce, the beast looming over him, to pounce on his prone body, to use his cane against him
It's always something reading Jayce, the mixed race man, compared to any variety of animals and beasts from the same people who complain about societal racism in the next breath. Steam clean that Klan hood, why don't you?
> He knows he's not been the best at disguising his desires
No shit. You've been walking around with a persistent boner for WEEKS. There is no way Viktor doesn't know. Pants that tight showcase everything.
> The consequence of working a nine-to-five with the an he fucks during his five-to-nine
I like this line. Fiveblessings does have some good ones when she puts her mind to it. The dialogue, for its part, is not as cringeworthy as it is in others - barring that microdick fic. That was a really shitty one.
Of course he's into it. The FTM is always riddled with kinks, and his bestial Neanderthal is there to fulfill every sexual fantasy.
> He's done a lot more than just picture it, planning out every minute detail into the late hours of the night
Yeah, that's something he'd do. He'd plan out every minute, every scene, what bed sheet to use and what specific dirty dialogue he'd use. This man would go down to the fucking wire.
> Cupping Viktor's sex possessively
Interesting how this is normally used for women's genitalia. I don't really see it used as often for men - cock and dick is used more often - but it can be used for either sex. It's just something I've noticed.
> I need to know that you mean it
How nice of him to ask before he goes Slap Mountain on that ass.
> Pale, untouched skin he can mark up
Always with the white skin. I can see why he's doing this to Viktor, because if it was done to Mel, people would ask when we went back to the 1880s.
> Pain, but pleasure too
Cliché.
> He can see everything, the way slick drips from his entrance and collects on his fingers
I will never cease to be amazed at these T pussies dripping like a broken NY water main. They get wetter than most normal women do.
> It's electrifying, how easily Viktor's body accommodates him
Almost as if he has complementary genitalia.
> Jayce will never get used to it, how stunning Viktor is, and reduced to his animal wants. It's like he was made for him to ruin
Almost as if he has complementary genitalia, and is a complementary sex.
> Warning it
This was beta-read, and neither one spotted 'warning' instead of 'warming'.
> He's embarrassingly hard considering he hasn't even touched himself
Are we surprised? He's been walking around with a boner like that for weeks. That man could probably hold up a bank with how firm and secure he is.
> Blood still prickles beneath Viktor's skin
> It's a little worrying how much it spurs Jayce on, feeding the overwhelming urge inside him that's begging to see him crying
Oh, so the brown man loves using physical violence to fulfill his innate sadistic needs. I couldn't have seen that coming at all.
Now, this whole slap session reminds me of Slap Fight or Slap Mountain, where people go all-out on slapping each other across the face. Some of those men get split cheeks and massive swelling, others get knocked out. These are not small men. Jayce is a very, very physically strong man. Viktor's thighs are going to look like a river coated in cranberries once he's done.
> When the next series of hits rain down, his muscles tensing prematurely
See point above. I would not doubt it one moment if the skin actually splits.
> Feeding the starved animal Jayce didn't realize was making its home in his core
We just had a line about how he wants to make Viktor cry and how it's awakening his 'inner beast', so this line is moot. Internal consistency is important; we know that 'Neanderthal' and 'beast' is awake and taking joy at this, so there is no point saying it's waking up when it's already there.
> I'll give your hungry cunt what it's so desperate
Can I get an order of a 10'' wonder weasel with extra sauce? Fill up the bag, please.
> It all contributes to the image of a cock-hungry whore, willing to do anything to get Jayce where he wants him
Along with the 'his thumbs met in the middle' line, writing Viktor as a cock-whore or a cocksleeve is very common. The bit about them copying each other and hanging out in the same Discord servers becomes more and more apparent.
Now, for this pussy slapping. This comes from porn, and based on how hard Jayce is slapping Viktor here, that vulva is going to be very, very damaged. This is a full force slap, not a love tap. That's like punching a man's balls or squeezing them too hard 'to keep the blood flowing'. Genitalia is sensitive for a reason. A t-dick getting slapped like that has got to hurt.
> Contusions left in his image that'll take days on end to heal
Bruises. Nasty ones, at that.
> Flood his cunt with come like he's no more than a glorified cocksleeve
See my point made earlier. If he's not an uwu smol sex doll, he's this.
> He's marked as your property
All you're missing is the leash, collar, and whip. Now send him out to those fields and pick that cotton!
> Still gasps as though he fucked his whole length inside in one go
Would that really make a difference?
> Before Viktor has the time to adjust and hear him cry out at the brutal stretch
According to you, he's also wet as a water slide. Would he really feel the difference at this 'brutal stretch' if he was already ready for it?
> The shade is shockingly similar to that of the metalwork
Damn, son. You hit him so hard you made his skin look GREY?
> Can't you keep still?
Motherfucker, you're the one fucking him so hard he's moving up the bed. YOU stay still. Fucking retard.
> How perfect he would be, trussed up like a gift, all for Jayce's taking
All he's missing is the slave-collar and whips! Split that back like Massa showed you in Barbados.
> His hips setting a punishing pace
'Setting'? Jayce was already fucking Viktor at a rough pace to where he was moving Viktor up and down the bed. He's not 'setting' a punishing pace - HE WAS ALREADY IN ONE.
> His eyes lock onto his cock, thick length disappearing into his well-used hole
You already wrote that. It's also not lost on me how the 'beastly' man has a large penis and is always written to have one, while the 'fragile' bottom here has either a micropenis (in the lone fic where V was, in fact, a man and made to feel ashamed of it compared to the big-dicked brown man) or a roid clit. The dick measuring competition ain't even close.
> This time taking the pace up to the next level
So did he 'set up a punishing pace' or not? Because he went from a rough pace, to a punishing one, to a less punishing one, and now he's cranking it up to 11. Which is it? Was he shaking that pooner up and down the bed like a salt shaker or not?
> His body being used like a ragdoll
You already wrote that.
Haven't you been sleeping together for months? Does this mean the sex was shit before kink was involved?
He does that and Heimerdinger and co will think he fought a Hell Pig. Slap Mountain's got nothing compared to Mr. Favela Fists here. Still not getting over how this boy didn't cum hard enough during their previous sessions and his speed mode kept changing during the 'punishing pace' scene.
My girl Vee has blessed me with another entry. See if you can spot a few recurring themes of hers in this free-for-all gangbang.
> Who even are these people
He asks, while being a Councilor and knowing most of their faces. They've been begging for money for ten years - they should have at least made bank now. Most of them should be on a know-name basis.
> If it weren't for the huge dollar signs
Minor nitpick: they don't use dollars, but a form of gold currency. But I'll let it slide as most don't give a damn.
> Wasn't really sure what the event was
> Author makes no attempt to even embellish the invitation and lure in the readers
> The details are vague but it's clearly a fancy invitation
> It's only for him and him alone
Uh huh. He totally doesn't know.
> Our volunteer is delicate
And fragile. And pale. And smol and with a tiny waist that you can wrap your hands around...you get the drill.
> How glazed over and purple-tinged they were
This implies Jayce knows Viktor is taking Shimmer. He apparently didn't grasp that it was being smoked there, either.
> He wasn't completely naive
So why didn't he have an inkling as to what this party was for? Fancy invitations like that aren't handed out willy-nilly. He would have had an idea.
> Worst of all, Viktor was the chosen party favor
What a shame this keeps happening to trans men.
> He was a little angry. Angry at these people for taking advantage of Viktor, knowing full well who he was
...do they know? Most of the time they had no clue who Viktor was. They just know him as 'that Zaunite'. If Viktor readily goes to these parties, then he is consenting to be used as a fucktoy, simple as.
> Seeing Viktor so vulnerable the whole time
So either he's a full grown adult and a proper 'man', or he's so fragile and vulnerable and pale and whatever have you for this wee waif. Pick one. Why is the trans man always made the weakling, here?
> Weapons sold to rebels
When did Viktor make weapons for rebels? I recall that being a big damn thing when Mel even brought it up as a suggestion.
> Now all he could envision was a young Viktor, leaning against the wall of a bar, waiting for someone to pick him up and ravage him
There's the shotacon we know and love! Vee is friends with problematicism, who wrote just this plot. I wonder if that tidbit is a nod to her.
> Viktor's back arched, the pins in his spine glinting in the dim light
I'm glad he can do that while getting Eiffel Tower'ed.
> He was rock fucking hard in his slacks
Oh yeah, we're getting a rough fucking now.
> Push some of the fluids back into his gaping hole
Which one?
> It was the deep desire to only see Viktor lost in pleasure from him alone
How romantic. I'm sure he'll revert back to Neanderthal status once he gets his prize.
> Expanses of pale skin covered in marks
We sure do love our pale skin, don't we?
If the milk went back, trust me, your ass would feel like you had Viktor's cane shoved inside it. You'd be spending the night on that porcelain throne.
> The amount he spent for a night alone for a man he saw every damn day was ridiculous
Hey, this is private property, and he's an expensive piece of (scarecrow) ass. Cut him some slack, alright?
> An unsettling number of pill bottles cluttered the bedside, accompanied by energy drinks and snack bars
Nothing like a Red Bull and a bottle of Oxy. Knock out both your brain and your heart.
> He smelled like the misty sugarplum of Shimmer
Damn, give me some.
> He didn't recognize him
And like a knight in shining armour, he gives him a night he doesn't forget - sorta.
> That was both reassuring and disturbing
Thank God this is actually a polite Jayce, otherwise he'd just start raping.
> Felt like something out of a fantasy
You already wrote that.
> Pulling him down onto the bed
He's already on the bed. Do you mean pulling him down next to you?
> Slight swells of his chest
So he hasn't got the zippertits yet.
> You're a big boy, aren't you?
> He likes his men big
6'2 and 10-12''. The perfect male specimen of every female fantasy. Even identity cannot erase this basic truth.
> Soft trail of hair on his abdomen
So he's got the yeti fur on top of the Tarzan pubes, nice.
> Dreamed of this moment for a stupidly long time
You already wrote that.
> It was clear he was hastily wiped down after the party
There will still be sperm in there unless he douched. So Jayce will be getting someone's nasty leftovers while tasting free Golden Corral.
> His whole cunt was puffy and red from overuse
I'm glad STIs aren't a thing here. Shimmer must fix up the tearing.
> Hard but of clit
> Sloppily sucking at it like it was a cock
Oh? I thought the clit WAS a cock.
How convenient that it isn't this time around.
> The bulge in his pants is obscenely obvious
Place your bets on how big he is. The footlong is always a winner.
> Those awful people treat you like a piece of meat
You'll never guess what his reasons are for doing this.
> I did far worse things for money in Zaun
AKA he was a child prostitute and he views that as the most normal thing on earth. Of course shotacons don't have an issue with human trafficking in general; they get their socks off at drawn CP. Even if this isn't the case, Vee is known for writing it so I am hedging my bets at him selling himself young.
> They were addressed to me
And here comes the twist.
Yes, these Piltovan Diddy Parties wanted to anally exercise Jayce because he was the perfect man to break into, and Viktor, being his good friend, decided to unironically use the fact that he's weaker, smaller and more fragile to evoke more pity and offer himself instead. Can't break an already experienced cock-hungry whore, after all.
You know that ass would get blasted. I bet someone would want to shove a trumpet up there.
> Can't even understand basic innuendo
I'm sure he can understand that you suck dick for cock, bud.
> The implications finally hit him
As if it wasn't blatantly obvious before.
> You are quite possessive
Until he gets to the point where he's grooming and raping underaged deer 'boys', he gets a pass from me.
> Be gentle with our smaller guest
I thought trans men were hardy and could take anything you threw at them?
You'll never guess what happens next. Viktor isn't the only trans surprise here.
> Brushing over his hole
I would not have guessed that was his anus until I knew his 'front hole' was occupied.
> He gasped as a cock slowly pushed inside of him
> the woman behind him
This author is so keen to stick to being non-transphobic that our pooner here knows to correctly sex a transwoman based on the cock inside of him, vs assume that it's a whole ass male in a dress. Yes, that male person with male genitalia is absolutely a woman, sticking 'her' penis inside your 'male vagina', and you are 100% NOT have gay/straight sex. I don't normally come across many transwomen in fics, but when I do, they stand out more than the trans man. 'Man with a vagina' is silly, but they can't convince anyone other than women. 'Women with dicks' is said with a more threatening tone, and we've all heard the 'suck the girlcock, bitch.'
> The woman was spilling inside of him
Right. Was that bepenised woman as big as the Hispanic Hog, or is that gigantic size saved for our lover boy here?
All that and it's the fucking girl dick that caught me by surprise, lmao. That and the 'I've done worse things in Zaun' which suggests child prostitution. Because we aren't going to criticize that because sex work is work and teenagers can absolutely consent and agree to such drastic lifestyles (read: sex slavery). The gangbang ended up being the most mundane thing about it. This author does have a habit of injecting underage shit into everything, even in fics where both characters are adults. She will forever be known as the underage deer rape author and she wears that with a badge of pride.
Browsing the AO3 subreddit might become a favourite past time of mine. Here was a post (archive here) made by a user who got congratulated on their RPF smut fic...featuring Kurtis Conner - yes, THAT Kurtis Connor. Want to guess how many bookmarks it has?
Foxszn24 goes by the same username on most socials. True to form, it's a 'silly lil trans guy' named Spencer who writes manly subjects like...YouTubers living in an AU where their wives don't exist and they are all gay vampires.
Barely 1k hits. So popular.
The unintentional racism just makes it so much funnier. No, you aren't getting werewolf transformations and struggles with an actual inhuman beast that cannot listen to reason and operates by brute natural instinct - You are just getting a man who acts like an inhuman beast who cannot listen to reason and operates by brute natural instinct who happens to eat enchiladas and drink Mexican soda in his spare time.
IDK read my badly written trans porn.
Talk about not reading the room!
