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- Sep 9, 2021
I am still waiting for M4M. In the meantime, here is another 1950s roleplay for this BDSM week. The worst day will be Day 4, or the 16th, as the prompts for that are double and triple penetration. I'll give you a guess who the recipient will be for those. The line I used for the spoiler is real. Despite it being an elaborate roleplay, that classic misogyny comes out.
> half awake haze
> eyes till glued shut with sleep
It's one or the other.
> The dress he was wearing, a vintage 1950s housewife button down
Whenever transmen tell you they don't like to be feminized, they're lying. They love it. They just love doing it with a man they find hot.
> Accentuating his slight curves and highlighting the slightness of his waist
He has neither.
> The deep rough of his lipstick stood stark against the paleness of his skin and the eyeliner made his eyes even more doe-like
As someone with doe-eyes, the eyeliner is supposed to make them look more intense and not as dramatic. I bet he went heavy on the winged eyeliner, which was big in the 1960s. 1950s was more about lipstick.
> Enough time to paint yourself as a whore, but not enough to help your husband so he can provide for you?
Whoa, there, Chuck! You're in the kitchen where all the knives are. Watch your mouth.
> His intelligent (being) belittled was beautiful
You can call a pooner a retarded provided it's roleplay, gotcha.
> The mind might be lacking but at least your body knows its duty
And he's thinner than Wilhelmina Cooper, and she ate twice a WEEK.
> Thank any deity that happened to be listening for the bountiful garden before him
His tits are missing, he has no ass, he has sticks for legs, but that bush is unshaved and we're going gorilla hunter. Hoo-ah!
> That's the only way little girls like you learn your lessons
This is a 1950s housewife roleplay. I didn't see no tags about 'girl play'.
>I can't understand Bitch
Thank you for my new catchphrase. I love it.
> The cream of Viktor's skin
Because if he were any other race it'd look like slavery.
> Gonna keep my cum nice and plugged up so you can start growing my baby
"Unlike Planned Parenthood, this ass is funded!"
> That filthy whore mouth
And a fish has bigger lips. He was the one who went down on Viktor, so he would be the one smelling like wild pube meat.
> ate his usual Once
This wasn't proofread.
> At the teasing display of Viktor's skirt, rising and falling against his ass
What ass? I've seen the models. A penguin has more of an ass than him.
> I wouldn't trust a silly little thing like you with my money either
This was based on a window cleaner in this lil English Rose's village. You can tell he's white because it's a roleplay and fujos hate Pakistanis more than they hate black men.
> Mrs Talis
> Damsel in distress
You can degrade a pooner all you like if you're a hung Mexican, got it. You can also treat her like a dumb bitch if you have a nice squeegee, too.
> What the FUCK is this
I audibly laughed at this line. This is supposed to be a uber-serious roleplay and this guy just bursts out like he's Piers Morgan. I now cannot unsee Piers Morgan/Marco Pierre White talking for this man.
> What would a lady like you know about it?
"My hubby gets around with the trans cat lady down the street. Their cock is bigger than his, I've heard.'
> Your hole
Which one? You can say asshole, it's fine.
> An experience that felt like suffocation for his dick
He blows that out in just a few minutes because he's the Hispanic Hog.
> Felt himself spurting ropes
Must be that RFK Jr. diet.
> The piece de resistance was literally gaping at him
> He'd describe himself as erring on the larger end of what would be considered proportional for his body, and he was undeniably taller than Viktor
We're going with the tall man = big dicks thing, when if we take those dick measuring sites seriously, Ecuadorans have the longest ones and they are shorter than the Dutch. I assume we are just dealing with the 10-12'' here.
> The result was a bright red hole that was struggling to close back to its original size
I know I am going to read some wild ones on Thursday with this exact theme, but damn was this underwhelming. You have an anal gape and a big dick - two very big porn themes - and THAT is what you get, bad British accent and all? What a fucking waste.
> Objectively the most beautiful man he'd ever met
Who needs to eat more sandwiches and mimosas, because he has NO ASS
> Do you think I'm a fucking idiot
Yes.
> It'll be fine because surely my wife would know what day it is!
Imagine if it was another random man, a shorter and darker man, and you'd see that inner MS-13 come right out.
> How the FUCK did you cover the bill?
"I let him in through the backdoor, honey! It was free real estate!"
> I let him fuck my hole
Asshole would sound a lot dirtier, and would sell home the image of a dirty wife.
> Without the stick
The author has the 'ableism' tag, but that doesn't change the fact that these people are hypocrites when it comes to depicting this character. This is a character they will cry literal hate crimes over if you don't draw him with his aides, but here, he can walk around just fine without them and said aides are just a 'stick'. Everything is acceptable provided it's a sexual roleplay.
> I don't throw
No, but the author sure did. She means 'know' here.
> It's so hard for you to keep anything in that little brain of yours, isn't it
Should've pulled out the Bell Curve and tell that mutt he's still half a deviation smaller in intelligence. I'll show YOU a housewife, bitch.
Oh, so NOW we are talking about that. He was kneeling on the floor cleaning earlier, and wasn't complaining about pain when he would be.
> He'd never get used to how good his husband was at sucking dick
> He was able to get fully hard again
Pooners: good for nothing but cooking, cleaning, and sucking dick.
> Nose pressed firmly to pubic hair, balls resting on his chi, and let the cum flow straight through his throat
I'm surprised he doesn't gain weight based on how much cum he swallows. Good protein, right there. I bet Jayce's balls are so big they can be used as stress balls.
> Blinking like a cat that got the cream
They're lactose intolerant.
A 'mutt' is what we used to describe an animal that's been crossbred with a different breed. In humans, we use it to describe mixed-race people. Viktor is white. He wouldn't be a mutt, he'd be a 'filthy purebred'. You could have gone for the racial fetish element (to be fair, they already do with the big dick Jayce thing) but that's a step too far. A disabled woman getting her ass blown out? We can do that.
I wanted to get at this author's three-chapter work, but as it is BDSM week, this is her submission.
This only gave me the mental image of Viktor standing there like a Belgian colonist with Jayce's arms chopped off. Definitely not the scene the author wanted to set!
> Like a ravenous parasite begging for mercy
Parasites don't need to beg for mercy. They simply exist. If a parasite is going to 'beg for mercy', it would if it was deprived of nutrients.
> In eager sync
*In sync
> Fully alert erection
Redundant.
> He was also impaled on a dildo Viktor had picked out
Hope it's a big one. Now his ass is gonna get gaped.
> His rock-hard cock throbbing against Viktor
You're going to read that a lot.
> You're going to watch. Only watch.
Redundant.
> Be turned gracefully on his heels and walked to the bed like a feline
He really can't. He's still got a limp. Glad we can erase his disability when it's necessary.
> His cock stood proudly against his stomach
You already wrote that.
> The pale skin aglow in the moonlight
They're doing this in the dark? How the hell can he see his dick throbbing? Helps to put on a lamp!
> You're sin incarnate
He still doesn't have an ass.
> He fucked himself with his hand until his knuckles smacked against his pelvis
Uh...that's quite some dexterity you got there. Do you mean your knuckles would be slapping against your vulva?
> Pressed four fingers side to side over his clit
That's still an awkward position. Sorry, it just reads like he's wrangling a crab, or some shit.
> Deep moans and baritone
Males usually have a baritone voice range. There are some women who can enter that range, but it's uncommon. Viktor does not have a baritone voice; Optimus Prime does.
> Inch by inch
> Let himself be devoured inch my inch
He's just such an expert in sucking cock.
If you think that's the end, nope. He has 'nothing left to give', but goes for round two in under a minute.
There are fics where he actually does that - I covered one here. It was put over his heart. He amazingly did not get a heart attack or infection. Jayce also keeps his nails short, so those would be blunt scratches.
Imagine if he literally THREW him on the bed. That's one way to treat a disabled lad!
> The dildo didn't provide direct stimulation
No shit. He wouldn't be able to feel a thing, except that NNNGH that sounds like Joe Biden is watching. So much for him being tired; he was ready to go round two on that dildo pronto.
> Live scorching lava
Scorching lava is fine, thanks.
> The slick leaking down the sides of the harness gave him away
??? You already wrote he 'soaked his belly with his juices'. He already gave it away there!
The author is Brazilian and posts in English and Portuguese, hence the poor idioms. Consider it a breather for what I'm going to cover later.
'Secretary' has got nothing on this, not when you've got lines like, 'show me how a real slut rides cock', 'your brain is dripping out of your pussy'. This is from Noayaswomb, the one who threatened to off herself during bottomjayceweek as it offended her tradfujo sensibilities.
That's one way to start a fic: plowing into a disabled person with 'reckless abandon' against a wall! Who needs back problems or discussions about ableism when you have this?
> Highly doubts he's ever taken a humanities course
Neither have you. He's so bad at politics he melds ight into it and does too good of a job to where he's told to back off.
> Hot and weeping as it fucks into Viktor's insides
Every time I read a dick 'weeping', it just makes me want to go, 'Tissues'? It's a weird peeve for me.
> Very naked and very fucked
Well if his insides can attest to it, the politicking just makes it so much better.
> Doesn't consider themselves a kinky couple
> Engages in shibari (rope), handcuffs, and choking
That's all kink, you retard. Rough sex is a part of kink.
> Dressing him up in a cow costume and hooking him up to a milking device
I wonder if this is a reference to Mr. A's Farm, because the first chapter has that. What's next, Zaunites roleplay what happened to Mr. Hands?
> Finds no enjoyment in humiliating himself out of nowhere
You have no problem humiliating yourself for kink, though. It's just an FTM thing.
> Milky skin
The obsession with white skin here really shows that these women have their own brands of ethnostates, and this is it. Nobody darker than a Cuban in here, no ma'am.
> Your brain's dripping out your pussy
Another line for the archives. There are some real bangers deserving of mockery from these intelligent lasses.
> Fucks him into next Tuesday
Tuesday should be capitalized. I'm glad he paused to fuck him on a Monday.
> Cock kissing his cervix
Well at least it isn't 'battering' it.
> Uses him as nothing more than a toy
Yeah, that's pretty common. Cocksleeve, fuck toy, sex doll, etc. It always happens to the trans man.
> Bullies his shaft into Viktor's womb
This implies he's literally fucking his uterus.
> Milking his shaft for all it's worth
Cliché.
> Drools even more clear liquid
Oh God, not the 'pussy drooling like a dog' comparison.
> It's just begging to be bred
> Obscene amount (of semen), considering they haven't had sex in a while
So they are obsessed with pregnancy and absurd amounts of semen like it's their favourite yaoi. I regret to inform them that human men don't produce that much, and you aren't getting that wall fucking.
> Embarrassing squelch
Like squeezing an empty dish liquid bottle.
> If he wants to be treated like slutty Zaunite scum
It's OK to be classist when you have a big dick.
> Walks him back to his apartment
He can walk?
> He pretends his heart doesn't ache knowing his lover's attention is no longer his
You just had your pussy fucked like it was an oil rig. The fuck you mean you don't have his attention?
> Likes having sex with Jayce
No shit.
> The pain of being well-fucked is so much better than the pain of being chronically ill
While true, I doubt your back and hips are going to do great when he's literally crushing them.
> He is sexually frustrated beyond belief
Uh oh, the T-induced pooner wants that Hispanic Hog! What lengths (tee hee) will he go to get it?
Sex on the desk! Woo hoo! Nothing like fucking in fancy council chambers! Slick Willy would be proud.
He needs that cane, btw. He won't be able to pick it back up.
> Sluts don't get to choose when they get used
> Waiting for when I decide to bend you over, to cum inside your greedy pussy
Loving this cheesy ass dialogue. I could pay a Vtuber to read off a McDonald's menu and it'd be sexier.
> Show me how a real slut rides cock
I told you this was a real line.
> He's around twenty minutes from leaking through his trousers
He was already leaking in his trousers.
> Thinks he will honestly die if he doesn't get Jayce's cock in him as soon as possible
Literally every pooner when they don't get that hot cis dick.
> He wants to fuck into Viktor's cunt as much as Viktor wants Jayce to fuck into him. He has a different way of showing it
By...being more sexually aggressive? You don't say.
> Can't even comfortably straddle one of Jayce's
He's just uwu so smol.
> Scrambles to his feet
He literally can't do that without his cane. I'm only being anal over this because they sure as hell do it to you if you get a single detail wrong.
> Fucked his boy-toy here
Funny, he isn't a boy, and you won't even allow him to finger your ass.
> Were you born to bark for the first man that throws you a bone?
> Whines like a badly behaved dog
Usually, Jayce is the dog. Now, the pooner is. Quite a turn in events.
> Very hard, very large cock
"One pound fish. Very very big, very very cheap"
> I've done so well, fuck your slut
Another line for the archives.
> He's been bent over so deeply his face is now smushed against the table
This is supposed to be 'semi public sex', but they're doing it in private. I am also glad his disability disappears when it comes time for him to be bent over something.
> All he does is get hard again and continue to plow his pussy
Almost as if this reads like a shitty hentai/yaoi from a woman who has no actual idea how gay sex works. No, really: she threatened to off herself if her Latino dream man was fingered in the ass.
> His guts feel positively rearranged
> His insides feel like they're on fucking fire
These two statements are directly related.
> His vaginal walls kick at him for release
Huh, wasn't aware they could do that.
> Your dick is not that good
It was just rearranging your insides. It absolutely could. You wouldn't need to worry about walking ever again.
I expect more from this trad fujo who can't stand her 'manly' fave getting his prostate tickled. She hangs out with a lot of shotacons so if there's any explanation to her backwards gender shit, there it is. Hard to tell the difference between tradfujos and Charlie Kirk sometimes; they share the same views on 'natural' roles and who the man and woman should be.
This is a first. A reverse race swap: a Latino gets changed for a white man. What breed, you might ask? An Italian. Notaa my chees-a!
> He found himself in a want to touch Viktor
*He found himself wanting to touch Viktor
> Pretty little pussy
Makes sense an Italian is a horn dog over it.
Shower again. That onion and pasta sauce ain't going nowhere.
> God forbid a white boy wants to take his sweet time bathing
BOTH of you are white. I can't wait for this author to get her beatings for race-swapping Jayce.
> My absolutely gorgeous and sexy partner
That has no ass, no thighs, nothing. But so hot.
> He bonks their foreheads together
Ouch.
A white man feeling like an animal? Well, guess you can skip the 'brown man is a predator' thing. He's just a pervy Italian.
> Prominent bulge almost slots right between his clothed folds
Ah, there's that white supremacy.
> Prominent Adam's apple
He is female. That 'prominence' is just his larynx.
Ohhhhhh! Our spicy little FTM is a VIRGIN! Perfect for our Italian loverboy!
> I want to shape you inside and out, make you able to only take me
He means that. Literally.
> Tilts his head like a confused kitty
In which the character sounds more like the author than himself.
He sounds like an Oblivion NPC stuck in the lava, lmao.
> I'm really into everyone knowing I'm yours
The pooner wants to announce she gets fucked good? Colour me surprised.
> You'd be into being my toy, used for my pleasure
> Fuck you until you become loose and unsatisfying, and then fuck you again because you'll always find a way to satisfy me
This is a contradiction. He can't clench that cock if you loosened him out.
> Tell you how pretty you look as you choke on it
> make you my whore, mine only my pretty slut
> Viktor screams
I don't get why he's screaming. Guess it's that mythical virgin hypersexuality.
> Taking up almost the entire space
Yes, this author uses this fucking line, because she can't grasp it's one of the most overused lines in this fandom.
> Size difference
Sexual dimorphism is a helluva thing.
> I masturbated the first time you picked me up and pinned me to the wall
He's just uwu so smol.
> Gets on his knees with no consideration for his bad leg
> Said leg only gets brought up when he gets bent in half
Logic.
> Looking like an innocent fawn
Pooners love fawns because it makes them appear innocent and pure. They're more like coyotes: a menace to public neighbourhoods, covered in ticks and fleas, and insanely inbred.
> Were he another person, he would've already fucked his way inside his mouth
> Has to physically hold himself back from slamming his head down and forcing him to deep throat him
So he is the person he described above, if he has to describe refraining himself twice from fucking a virgin's mouth. Not to worry, though, Viktor takes it like a pro.
> Takes him deep enough to choke
> Jayce decides to go 'fuck it' and fuck his throat
So much for restraint.
> How it reacts to being split in half by its first cock
Calm the fuck down, Miss Meloni. Italians aren't that big in the dick department.
> He went limp a while ago, just letting Jayce fuck his mouth and take control
See point above regarding restraint.
He's not joking about the unconsciousness bit.
> The sound that comes out is animalistic, can be compared to an unatamed beast
He's white this time around, so he can't be your token violent Latino. Sorry, lads!
>Mewling while doing so
I am not a fan of this infantilization. This virgin 'man' started this roleplay. Why is he age regressing all of a sudden?
> Don't angels usually have white-blond hair and light eyes
ARYAN ANGELS HOLY SHIT. Angels are usually freaks of nature because their true forms are meant to defeat demons. The Aryan angel thing comes from Germany's interpretation of Christianity.
> Fuck, a little waist that fits perfectly into your palms
I told you this line would show up three times. It's annoying as hell.
> Lap at it like a man starved
This one, too. Overused to shit.
> Spine arching off the bed
What happened to the bolts in his spine?
He sure does scream a lot. He screams from people talking, he screams when fabric rubs against his camel toe...screaming about everything like a banshee.
> Do you think three fingers will be sufficient to take me, baby
You tell me. Are they the size of zucchinis?
> Viktor sobs
Again?
He's screaming AGAIN, Jesus Christ.
> You're strangling my cock
And he's apparently not in pain from the vagina doing that
Jayce asking him about his leg while folding him in half is definitely authorial oversight. He doesn't have a degenerative illness; all he needs is a good fucking!
> I need you to fuck me like I'm not breakable
Well that leg of yours is, so...
> Not even your cane will help you walk
We can mock the crippled as much as we want so long as they get fucked in the end.
> Switches to his pretty small waist, wrapping his ahnds around the whole thing, his thumbs touching the middle
What did I say about this fucking line? These dumb cunts CANNOT come up with anything different.
> I'm the only lucky bastard that gets to fuck this pussy
> They would be too small, incapable of satisfying your wishes
Quick: what's the average dick size for Europeans? It ain't no Hispanic hog.
> I already wanna punch everyone who has ever laid hands on you
You know what they say about Italians and violence. The niggers of Europe - or is that the Poles?
> Gorgeous body
And he has no ass, waist, hips or thighs, and is a starving scarecrow. That white pussy, though.
> Wrap themselves around it
YOU WROTE THIS THREE TIMES ALREADY FUCK OFF
I didn't add the rest because it was wannabe philosophical shit. Had a line about 'perfection is hard to find' when Jayce was just talking about how perfect virgin pussy was. Author doesn't have much in the intelligence department and forgot that you never, EVER race swap POCs. You can make gingers black, but don't make brown men white. That's a hate crime.
As for the 'his waist was so uwu smol his thumbs met in the middle', that's a language crime. I'm about to gouge my eyes out . Save me from this shit.
Edit: fucked up the formatting, it's fixed now. The screenshots are out of order because my tired ass mind messed up.
> half awake haze
> eyes till glued shut with sleep
It's one or the other.
> The dress he was wearing, a vintage 1950s housewife button down
Whenever transmen tell you they don't like to be feminized, they're lying. They love it. They just love doing it with a man they find hot.
> Accentuating his slight curves and highlighting the slightness of his waist
He has neither.
> The deep rough of his lipstick stood stark against the paleness of his skin and the eyeliner made his eyes even more doe-like
As someone with doe-eyes, the eyeliner is supposed to make them look more intense and not as dramatic. I bet he went heavy on the winged eyeliner, which was big in the 1960s. 1950s was more about lipstick.
> Enough time to paint yourself as a whore, but not enough to help your husband so he can provide for you?
Whoa, there, Chuck! You're in the kitchen where all the knives are. Watch your mouth.
> His intelligent (being) belittled was beautiful
You can call a pooner a retarded provided it's roleplay, gotcha.
> The mind might be lacking but at least your body knows its duty
And he's thinner than Wilhelmina Cooper, and she ate twice a WEEK.
> Thank any deity that happened to be listening for the bountiful garden before him
His tits are missing, he has no ass, he has sticks for legs, but that bush is unshaved and we're going gorilla hunter. Hoo-ah!
> That's the only way little girls like you learn your lessons
This is a 1950s housewife roleplay. I didn't see no tags about 'girl play'.
>I can't understand Bitch
Thank you for my new catchphrase. I love it.
> The cream of Viktor's skin
Because if he were any other race it'd look like slavery.
> Gonna keep my cum nice and plugged up so you can start growing my baby
"Unlike Planned Parenthood, this ass is funded!"
> That filthy whore mouth
And a fish has bigger lips. He was the one who went down on Viktor, so he would be the one smelling like wild pube meat.
> ate his usual Once
This wasn't proofread.
> At the teasing display of Viktor's skirt, rising and falling against his ass
What ass? I've seen the models. A penguin has more of an ass than him.
> I wouldn't trust a silly little thing like you with my money either
This was based on a window cleaner in this lil English Rose's village. You can tell he's white because it's a roleplay and fujos hate Pakistanis more than they hate black men.
> Mrs Talis
> Damsel in distress
You can degrade a pooner all you like if you're a hung Mexican, got it. You can also treat her like a dumb bitch if you have a nice squeegee, too.
> What the FUCK is this
I audibly laughed at this line. This is supposed to be a uber-serious roleplay and this guy just bursts out like he's Piers Morgan. I now cannot unsee Piers Morgan/Marco Pierre White talking for this man.
> What would a lady like you know about it?
"My hubby gets around with the trans cat lady down the street. Their cock is bigger than his, I've heard.'
> Your hole
Which one? You can say asshole, it's fine.
> An experience that felt like suffocation for his dick
He blows that out in just a few minutes because he's the Hispanic Hog.
> Felt himself spurting ropes
Must be that RFK Jr. diet.
> The piece de resistance was literally gaping at him
> He'd describe himself as erring on the larger end of what would be considered proportional for his body, and he was undeniably taller than Viktor
We're going with the tall man = big dicks thing, when if we take those dick measuring sites seriously, Ecuadorans have the longest ones and they are shorter than the Dutch. I assume we are just dealing with the 10-12'' here.
> The result was a bright red hole that was struggling to close back to its original size
I know I am going to read some wild ones on Thursday with this exact theme, but damn was this underwhelming. You have an anal gape and a big dick - two very big porn themes - and THAT is what you get, bad British accent and all? What a fucking waste.
> Objectively the most beautiful man he'd ever met
Who needs to eat more sandwiches and mimosas, because he has NO ASS
> Do you think I'm a fucking idiot
Yes.
> It'll be fine because surely my wife would know what day it is!
Imagine if it was another random man, a shorter and darker man, and you'd see that inner MS-13 come right out.
> How the FUCK did you cover the bill?
"I let him in through the backdoor, honey! It was free real estate!"
> I let him fuck my hole
Asshole would sound a lot dirtier, and would sell home the image of a dirty wife.
> Without the stick
The author has the 'ableism' tag, but that doesn't change the fact that these people are hypocrites when it comes to depicting this character. This is a character they will cry literal hate crimes over if you don't draw him with his aides, but here, he can walk around just fine without them and said aides are just a 'stick'. Everything is acceptable provided it's a sexual roleplay.
> I don't throw
No, but the author sure did. She means 'know' here.
> It's so hard for you to keep anything in that little brain of yours, isn't it
Should've pulled out the Bell Curve and tell that mutt he's still half a deviation smaller in intelligence. I'll show YOU a housewife, bitch.
Oh, so NOW we are talking about that. He was kneeling on the floor cleaning earlier, and wasn't complaining about pain when he would be.
> He'd never get used to how good his husband was at sucking dick
> He was able to get fully hard again
Pooners: good for nothing but cooking, cleaning, and sucking dick.
> Nose pressed firmly to pubic hair, balls resting on his chi, and let the cum flow straight through his throat
I'm surprised he doesn't gain weight based on how much cum he swallows. Good protein, right there. I bet Jayce's balls are so big they can be used as stress balls.
> Blinking like a cat that got the cream
They're lactose intolerant.
A 'mutt' is what we used to describe an animal that's been crossbred with a different breed. In humans, we use it to describe mixed-race people. Viktor is white. He wouldn't be a mutt, he'd be a 'filthy purebred'. You could have gone for the racial fetish element (to be fair, they already do with the big dick Jayce thing) but that's a step too far. A disabled woman getting her ass blown out? We can do that.
I wanted to get at this author's three-chapter work, but as it is BDSM week, this is her submission.
This only gave me the mental image of Viktor standing there like a Belgian colonist with Jayce's arms chopped off. Definitely not the scene the author wanted to set!
> Like a ravenous parasite begging for mercy
Parasites don't need to beg for mercy. They simply exist. If a parasite is going to 'beg for mercy', it would if it was deprived of nutrients.
> In eager sync
*In sync
> Fully alert erection
Redundant.
> He was also impaled on a dildo Viktor had picked out
Hope it's a big one. Now his ass is gonna get gaped.
> His rock-hard cock throbbing against Viktor
You're going to read that a lot.
> You're going to watch. Only watch.
Redundant.
> Be turned gracefully on his heels and walked to the bed like a feline
He really can't. He's still got a limp. Glad we can erase his disability when it's necessary.
> His cock stood proudly against his stomach
You already wrote that.
> The pale skin aglow in the moonlight
They're doing this in the dark? How the hell can he see his dick throbbing? Helps to put on a lamp!
> You're sin incarnate
He still doesn't have an ass.
> He fucked himself with his hand until his knuckles smacked against his pelvis
Uh...that's quite some dexterity you got there. Do you mean your knuckles would be slapping against your vulva?
> Pressed four fingers side to side over his clit
That's still an awkward position. Sorry, it just reads like he's wrangling a crab, or some shit.
> Deep moans and baritone
Males usually have a baritone voice range. There are some women who can enter that range, but it's uncommon. Viktor does not have a baritone voice; Optimus Prime does.
> Inch by inch
> Let himself be devoured inch my inch
He's just such an expert in sucking cock.
If you think that's the end, nope. He has 'nothing left to give', but goes for round two in under a minute.
There are fics where he actually does that - I covered one here. It was put over his heart. He amazingly did not get a heart attack or infection. Jayce also keeps his nails short, so those would be blunt scratches.
Imagine if he literally THREW him on the bed. That's one way to treat a disabled lad!
> The dildo didn't provide direct stimulation
No shit. He wouldn't be able to feel a thing, except that NNNGH that sounds like Joe Biden is watching. So much for him being tired; he was ready to go round two on that dildo pronto.
> Live scorching lava
Scorching lava is fine, thanks.
> The slick leaking down the sides of the harness gave him away
??? You already wrote he 'soaked his belly with his juices'. He already gave it away there!
The author is Brazilian and posts in English and Portuguese, hence the poor idioms. Consider it a breather for what I'm going to cover later.
'Secretary' has got nothing on this, not when you've got lines like, 'show me how a real slut rides cock', 'your brain is dripping out of your pussy'. This is from Noayaswomb, the one who threatened to off herself during bottomjayceweek as it offended her tradfujo sensibilities.
That's one way to start a fic: plowing into a disabled person with 'reckless abandon' against a wall! Who needs back problems or discussions about ableism when you have this?
> Highly doubts he's ever taken a humanities course
Neither have you. He's so bad at politics he melds ight into it and does too good of a job to where he's told to back off.
> Hot and weeping as it fucks into Viktor's insides
Every time I read a dick 'weeping', it just makes me want to go, 'Tissues'? It's a weird peeve for me.
> Very naked and very fucked
Well if his insides can attest to it, the politicking just makes it so much better.
> Doesn't consider themselves a kinky couple
> Engages in shibari (rope), handcuffs, and choking
That's all kink, you retard. Rough sex is a part of kink.
> Dressing him up in a cow costume and hooking him up to a milking device
I wonder if this is a reference to Mr. A's Farm, because the first chapter has that. What's next, Zaunites roleplay what happened to Mr. Hands?
> Finds no enjoyment in humiliating himself out of nowhere
You have no problem humiliating yourself for kink, though. It's just an FTM thing.
> Milky skin
The obsession with white skin here really shows that these women have their own brands of ethnostates, and this is it. Nobody darker than a Cuban in here, no ma'am.
> Your brain's dripping out your pussy
Another line for the archives. There are some real bangers deserving of mockery from these intelligent lasses.
> Fucks him into next Tuesday
Tuesday should be capitalized. I'm glad he paused to fuck him on a Monday.
> Cock kissing his cervix
Well at least it isn't 'battering' it.
> Uses him as nothing more than a toy
Yeah, that's pretty common. Cocksleeve, fuck toy, sex doll, etc. It always happens to the trans man.
> Bullies his shaft into Viktor's womb
This implies he's literally fucking his uterus.
> Milking his shaft for all it's worth
Cliché.
> Drools even more clear liquid
Oh God, not the 'pussy drooling like a dog' comparison.
> It's just begging to be bred
> Obscene amount (of semen), considering they haven't had sex in a while
So they are obsessed with pregnancy and absurd amounts of semen like it's their favourite yaoi. I regret to inform them that human men don't produce that much, and you aren't getting that wall fucking.
> Embarrassing squelch
Like squeezing an empty dish liquid bottle.
> If he wants to be treated like slutty Zaunite scum
It's OK to be classist when you have a big dick.
> Walks him back to his apartment
He can walk?
> He pretends his heart doesn't ache knowing his lover's attention is no longer his
You just had your pussy fucked like it was an oil rig. The fuck you mean you don't have his attention?
> Likes having sex with Jayce
No shit.
> The pain of being well-fucked is so much better than the pain of being chronically ill
While true, I doubt your back and hips are going to do great when he's literally crushing them.
> He is sexually frustrated beyond belief
Uh oh, the T-induced pooner wants that Hispanic Hog! What lengths (tee hee) will he go to get it?
Sex on the desk! Woo hoo! Nothing like fucking in fancy council chambers! Slick Willy would be proud.
He needs that cane, btw. He won't be able to pick it back up.
> Sluts don't get to choose when they get used
> Waiting for when I decide to bend you over, to cum inside your greedy pussy
Loving this cheesy ass dialogue. I could pay a Vtuber to read off a McDonald's menu and it'd be sexier.
> Show me how a real slut rides cock
I told you this was a real line.
> He's around twenty minutes from leaking through his trousers
He was already leaking in his trousers.
> Thinks he will honestly die if he doesn't get Jayce's cock in him as soon as possible
Literally every pooner when they don't get that hot cis dick.
> He wants to fuck into Viktor's cunt as much as Viktor wants Jayce to fuck into him. He has a different way of showing it
By...being more sexually aggressive? You don't say.
> Can't even comfortably straddle one of Jayce's
He's just uwu so smol.
> Scrambles to his feet
He literally can't do that without his cane. I'm only being anal over this because they sure as hell do it to you if you get a single detail wrong.
> Fucked his boy-toy here
Funny, he isn't a boy, and you won't even allow him to finger your ass.
> Were you born to bark for the first man that throws you a bone?
> Whines like a badly behaved dog
Usually, Jayce is the dog. Now, the pooner is. Quite a turn in events.
> Very hard, very large cock
"One pound fish. Very very big, very very cheap"
> I've done so well, fuck your slut
Another line for the archives.
> He's been bent over so deeply his face is now smushed against the table
This is supposed to be 'semi public sex', but they're doing it in private. I am also glad his disability disappears when it comes time for him to be bent over something.
> All he does is get hard again and continue to plow his pussy
Almost as if this reads like a shitty hentai/yaoi from a woman who has no actual idea how gay sex works. No, really: she threatened to off herself if her Latino dream man was fingered in the ass.
> His guts feel positively rearranged
> His insides feel like they're on fucking fire
These two statements are directly related.
> His vaginal walls kick at him for release
Huh, wasn't aware they could do that.
> Your dick is not that good
It was just rearranging your insides. It absolutely could. You wouldn't need to worry about walking ever again.
I expect more from this trad fujo who can't stand her 'manly' fave getting his prostate tickled. She hangs out with a lot of shotacons so if there's any explanation to her backwards gender shit, there it is. Hard to tell the difference between tradfujos and Charlie Kirk sometimes; they share the same views on 'natural' roles and who the man and woman should be.
This is a first. A reverse race swap: a Latino gets changed for a white man. What breed, you might ask? An Italian. Notaa my chees-a!
> He found himself in a want to touch Viktor
*He found himself wanting to touch Viktor
> Pretty little pussy
Makes sense an Italian is a horn dog over it.
Shower again. That onion and pasta sauce ain't going nowhere.
> God forbid a white boy wants to take his sweet time bathing
BOTH of you are white. I can't wait for this author to get her beatings for race-swapping Jayce.
> My absolutely gorgeous and sexy partner
That has no ass, no thighs, nothing. But so hot.
> He bonks their foreheads together
Ouch.
A white man feeling like an animal? Well, guess you can skip the 'brown man is a predator' thing. He's just a pervy Italian.
> Prominent bulge almost slots right between his clothed folds
Ah, there's that white supremacy.
> Prominent Adam's apple
He is female. That 'prominence' is just his larynx.
Ohhhhhh! Our spicy little FTM is a VIRGIN! Perfect for our Italian loverboy!
> I want to shape you inside and out, make you able to only take me
He means that. Literally.
> Tilts his head like a confused kitty
In which the character sounds more like the author than himself.
He sounds like an Oblivion NPC stuck in the lava, lmao.
> I'm really into everyone knowing I'm yours
The pooner wants to announce she gets fucked good? Colour me surprised.
> You'd be into being my toy, used for my pleasure
> Fuck you until you become loose and unsatisfying, and then fuck you again because you'll always find a way to satisfy me
This is a contradiction. He can't clench that cock if you loosened him out.
> Tell you how pretty you look as you choke on it
> make you my whore, mine only my pretty slut
> Viktor screams
I don't get why he's screaming. Guess it's that mythical virgin hypersexuality.
> Taking up almost the entire space
Yes, this author uses this fucking line, because she can't grasp it's one of the most overused lines in this fandom.
> Size difference
Sexual dimorphism is a helluva thing.
> I masturbated the first time you picked me up and pinned me to the wall
He's just uwu so smol.
> Gets on his knees with no consideration for his bad leg
> Said leg only gets brought up when he gets bent in half
Logic.
> Looking like an innocent fawn
Pooners love fawns because it makes them appear innocent and pure. They're more like coyotes: a menace to public neighbourhoods, covered in ticks and fleas, and insanely inbred.
> Were he another person, he would've already fucked his way inside his mouth
> Has to physically hold himself back from slamming his head down and forcing him to deep throat him
So he is the person he described above, if he has to describe refraining himself twice from fucking a virgin's mouth. Not to worry, though, Viktor takes it like a pro.
> Takes him deep enough to choke
> Jayce decides to go 'fuck it' and fuck his throat
So much for restraint.
> How it reacts to being split in half by its first cock
Calm the fuck down, Miss Meloni. Italians aren't that big in the dick department.
> He went limp a while ago, just letting Jayce fuck his mouth and take control
See point above regarding restraint.
He's not joking about the unconsciousness bit.
> The sound that comes out is animalistic, can be compared to an unatamed beast
He's white this time around, so he can't be your token violent Latino. Sorry, lads!
>Mewling while doing so
I am not a fan of this infantilization. This virgin 'man' started this roleplay. Why is he age regressing all of a sudden?
> Don't angels usually have white-blond hair and light eyes
ARYAN ANGELS HOLY SHIT. Angels are usually freaks of nature because their true forms are meant to defeat demons. The Aryan angel thing comes from Germany's interpretation of Christianity.
> Fuck, a little waist that fits perfectly into your palms
I told you this line would show up three times. It's annoying as hell.
> Lap at it like a man starved
This one, too. Overused to shit.
> Spine arching off the bed
What happened to the bolts in his spine?
He sure does scream a lot. He screams from people talking, he screams when fabric rubs against his camel toe...screaming about everything like a banshee.
> Do you think three fingers will be sufficient to take me, baby
You tell me. Are they the size of zucchinis?
> Viktor sobs
Again?
He's screaming AGAIN, Jesus Christ.
> You're strangling my cock
And he's apparently not in pain from the vagina doing that
Jayce asking him about his leg while folding him in half is definitely authorial oversight. He doesn't have a degenerative illness; all he needs is a good fucking!
> I need you to fuck me like I'm not breakable
Well that leg of yours is, so...
> Not even your cane will help you walk
We can mock the crippled as much as we want so long as they get fucked in the end.
> Switches to his pretty small waist, wrapping his ahnds around the whole thing, his thumbs touching the middle
What did I say about this fucking line? These dumb cunts CANNOT come up with anything different.
> I'm the only lucky bastard that gets to fuck this pussy
> They would be too small, incapable of satisfying your wishes
Quick: what's the average dick size for Europeans? It ain't no Hispanic hog.
> I already wanna punch everyone who has ever laid hands on you
You know what they say about Italians and violence. The niggers of Europe - or is that the Poles?
> Gorgeous body
And he has no ass, waist, hips or thighs, and is a starving scarecrow. That white pussy, though.
> Wrap themselves around it
YOU WROTE THIS THREE TIMES ALREADY FUCK OFF
I didn't add the rest because it was wannabe philosophical shit. Had a line about 'perfection is hard to find' when Jayce was just talking about how perfect virgin pussy was. Author doesn't have much in the intelligence department and forgot that you never, EVER race swap POCs. You can make gingers black, but don't make brown men white. That's a hate crime.
As for the 'his waist was so uwu smol his thumbs met in the middle', that's a language crime. I'm about to gouge my eyes out . Save me from this shit.
Edit: fucked up the formatting, it's fixed now. The screenshots are out of order because my tired ass mind messed up.
