We begin with Viktor reading off a list that he has not been assigned a professor for his proposal. Sky, the black stand-in, discovers that she has been picked, but Viktor has not. In this AU, Viktor is the adopted son of the Kirammans so if he wants, he can go to them and get some strings pulled, but he doesn't out of pride and does not want people to think he's there because of his parents' money. He ends up going to Jayce's office, where we get a sudden POV change and a dick sucking.
Nice to see that Jayce always takes away Viktor's accomplishments, leaving him with the begging bowl and forced to suck dick like any good trans man has to. Funny how trans men can never be seen as independent, powerful scientists in their own right. They have to beg from 'cis' men to get what they want.
> He looked handsome
> Tanned skin
The perfect contrast to our white, swan-necked, alabaster, creamy-skinned pooner.
> As if he were his councilor mother, as if the Kiramman name meant anything in his office
Their money funds your clinic and your research so yeah, that name has a lot of power. Also, queercatfan sentence structure spotted.
> Full of milk-teeth and rage
Why does an adult male still have his baby teeth?
> Had the young man not been told no in recent years?
> The young man is not, he knows, the carefully protected well-bred high society protégé
You just answered your own question.
> But something more...confusing and perhaps aroused?
You tell me. The POV change hit me like whiplash.
> Jayce is even more sure he would report him to the ethnics board for taking advantage of a student
> He had his own private investors
So why is he concerned, then?
> Would he swallow or gag around him?
Depends - how big are you? If we're going with the classic Coke Can I think there'll be some choking involved.
> He was a pretty thing, a strikingly pretty thing really, pale and sharp-edged
Tim Burton gets shit for saying only white people look good in his gothic style, yet when Jayviks do it it's...queer representation, or some shit.
> Too young for him by twenty years
Hey, at least he's an ADULT. He's not a naïve teenager. If he wants to ride that Hispanic Hog like a Hell's Angels, he can do it.
> A pretty little thing
You said that twice already.
> Oh, it was a scandal in the making
I thought you said scandals wouldn't affect you because you have private investors?
> It was a lovely thing
Make this the third time.
> He is again reminded of a puppy
This is a first. Usually Jayce is the dog.
> A sweet little puppy
Take a drink every time 'sweet little X' is used.
> It went in line with his own work into lung diseases within the undercity
We know; that was his introduction. You don't need to describe it twice. Why would he need his dick sucked if he recognizes Viktor's geniuse?
> His half-hard cock
I'm amazed he wasn't so hard he could plow through the North Sea. A pale, pretty thing x3 sucks your fingers in mimicry of what they plan to do with your dick and you're only half hard? For shame.
> Years ago, this kind of stress would have him curled onto the floor in a coughing fit
Pooners and anxiety attacks, name a better duo.
> Yet no one wanted him
But the reclusive professor goes because you pretended to give him oral sex. Funny how that works.
> Nothing but a sump rat
Who managed to get free surgery to yeet the teets and now is in a prestigious academy.
> Where his tiny little cock throbs
'Tiny little' is redundant. We know it's tiny compared to what Jayce has.
> What had that been?
> He was no blushing virgin
You just answered your own question. Moody, dark, mysterious professors turn you on. More so if they're beefy and have a big dick. It's dark academia booktok all over again.
> Thatch of wet curls
Always rockin' the Tarzan pubes.
> It was being called a good boy
Gender euphoria is a helluva thing. Feel like a man every time you get that pussy slammed!
> His hard jutting cock
And it's smaller than his pinky, lmao.
> Not a boy kissing him sweetly
Ah, the classic, 'romance doesn't turn me on, a hard fucking does' trope. Sweet boys need not apply to pooners, but men nearing middle-age with a beer gut, a buried six pack, and a 6'' (read: 12'') dick. Tender love isn't needed - you need to fuck the woman back into them.
Viktor cleans up and heads to Jayce's office on time. We have another abrupt POV change because line breaks do not exist.
Viktor is still wearing his Academy uniform, and Jayce notes that it 'wasn't a fantasy of his' to fuck one of his students...while fucking one of his students. The math ain't mathing.
> Be a good boy for me?
We really do lean into the dog allegory, albeit this time it's the trans man and not the Latino. Subverting the trope, I see.
> He came here. He came here and told his family that he was going to be his advisor
We know; you already said that.
> I want to be a good boy for you...a good puppy
Yes, there is a collar mention. Because trans men really are dogs and deserve to be treated as such - spaying and neutering included.
> An untrained little treat to shape to his own desires
It's funny how trans men are either experienced sluts or they're 'naïve little pretty things' that need to be moulded into the shape of a cis man's cock. There is no in-between.
> To pet him like a good puppy
Bark.
> Your first lesson with me: how to suck cock
This really is a bad dark academia smut. These are the same people who brag that their fanfic is better than the published shit, but whatever.
> He imagines how they will stretch around his cock
We later find out that Jayce is in the thicker department, not exactly the longer department. So he is a hog, just a fat one. All that cholesterol and fat went downwards.
> Would it be another newly exposed pleasure uncovered?
Redundant. Exposed and uncovered are synonyms.
> It's a thought that goes straight to his cock
Yeah, it does make sense to be hard when receiving a blowjob.
> Even if the idea of keeping him was a tempting one. He would look so very handsome with a delicate collar
Troons and dog memorabilia, name a better duo. All we're missing are shock collars and raw meat while they shit themselves outside.
> He was a larger man, wide enough to stretch his mouth and long enough that someone unskilled would choke or gag on him
So it's like deepthroating bratwurst. OK.
> Tucked pretty under his pectorals are neat and tidy scars
> It made no difference to him...but it was still interesting
Of course not. Being a transphobe is worse than being a pedophile or groomer in this circle. He can take solace in that our 'bonus hole boy' has easy and quick prep rather than a virgin rosebud that needs popping.
> Viktor's eyes are on his cock and they widen at the size of it
You already described it.
> The thought makes his cock jump
> His cock twitching
It does that a lot.
> He makes a contemplative noise as Jayce stretches his mouth
'Mm, tastes like sausage back home.'
> Not someone who had been eager to take their own pleasure
It's funny how the 'cis men' are always the ones who dominate and take control in these relationships. It's almost as if the authors instinctively know the dick owners make the rules.
> Viktor is not unfamiliar with cocks, but Jayce might be one of the biggest he has taken in his mouth
> Perhaps not the longest but the widest
We know. You already wrote that he was thick.
> Straight to his small cock
Small indeed - it's not even the size of his dorsal head.
> keeping his teeth out of the way as Jayce fucks his mouth
I'm still wondering how a grown-ass adults still has baby teeth. You're supposed to lose them by age 12.
>Jayce purrs
He is going to do that a lot.
> It isn't at all like the past flings he had
or the romantic novels he had entertained himself with
Fun fact: it's women, not men, who read pornographic novels. Nice way of clocking your 'totally manly' trans man right there. I've become a real expert in clocking them JUST from their interests.
> His bare and pale skin
We just love our pale, creamy, moon-kissed, swan-necked, pale and white and smooth and pale and white and pale and alabaster and pale white boi, don't we?
> For the first time he really clocks the size difference between them
He's just uwu so smol. I could clock it from the get-go because these authors always make trans Viktor so unbelievably tiny and Jayce the size of a Neanderthal. You really just can't tell who the man and the woman is.
> It feels good. Just as good as the way he pinches his nipples
Glad there's no Dr. Gallagher in Runeterra and you still have nerve function in your pepperoni slabs.
> Slide down his slender hips
No hips, no ass, no tits, nothing. A chopped white person that makes a tweaker look hot and it's this physique these people go mad over.
> He knows he had forgone underwear for this
Yeah? Because he's taking your underwear off?
> He wants those fingers in his mouth, in him
They were already in your mouth.
> Rouge-frilled lips of his cunt
Either his vulva looks like a scalloped donut, or it's a frill shark. I think she meant, 'rouge-filled'.
> Exposing his hard little cock
> His fingers slide on either side of his little cock
We know it's little. Compare him to Jayce and it's like a male angler fish to a female one.
> The softness of his skin, the paleness of it
But whatever you do, DO NOT make this about race.
> he likes the messy thatch of curls covering his mound
I'm shocked you can see his 'little cock' through that Tarzan jungle.
> Gaping to be filled
That's a contradiction. If it's gaping, it means it was already filled and was 'gaped open'. But now that the author used 'rouge-frilled' all I can think of is a frilled shark's mouth.
> His fingers, so pretty, slip up to stroke his cock, circling it and stroking it
Beta-read and the beta-reader couldn't catch she wrote ''stroke' twice.
> A rough purr
This is literally all he does.
> A plaint thing, sweet and eager to behave
This is the fourth time 'sweet and eager' has been used.
> He might have been willing to take him on as a graduate student just for that
...you weren't, though. You denied him. You asked if he was willing to go the full nine yards and he did. This dumb bitch can't even remember what she wrote.
> Taking in this Kiramman boy would be a scandal, would thrust him completely under the scrutiny of high society
You said earlier that you didn't need to worry as you had your own private investors, so any ethics complaints would be useless. Now it's a problem because the author forgot what she wrote.
> He has an idea on how that can be cleaned later
Yeah, he can lick up his cunt juices but that won't get rid of the smell.
> He pinches it between his thumb and forefinger
Ouch. They complain if it gets stuck in their zipper.
> Gives his cunt a sharp spank
That's one way to smooth out the frills, eh?
> To feel your little pussy and cock ache when I fuck you?
I'm shocked it wasn't aching when you decided to give it the purple nurple treatment.
> He fucks him firmly with his fingers
Were you not being firm before?
> He wonders how cute he would look with little clamps on his nipples
That implies he has full nerve function in said nipples.
> Presses against someplace spongy against him
In which Jayce finds out that the g-spot is NOT in a woman's ass.
> Jerk off your little cock for me and don't stop
Gonna be hard when your hand is literally the size of a serving platter.
> He presses against the base of it from the inside
That's not the base. You are touching the ends of the clitoris. The base is located far back in the hood. Has this person even seen what a clit actually looks like? It really does look like an octopus.
> His fingers are still stroking his little cock
You never told him to stop, so why would he?
> Rub at his clit-cock
Lmao.
> He is young, virile
Give it time and he'll be back on the estrogen because that leaking white pussy will be all dried up.
> Crying out and whimpering - crying
Yes, that's what you do when you CRY OUT, you retard.
> Sobbing
You DID just write he was crying, so...
> He looks still, temptation given form
That 'temptation' is as thin as an undercooked chicken wing..
> And he has already come so far?
Why is this a question? Are you confused, too, that your characters pushed it to the limit?
> A wet-hot velvet glove around his cock
Hee hee!
> Buries himself to the hilt in him, feeling him settle fully on his cock
Cliché.
> He is like a plaint little doll
And uwu so smol little doll.
> Fucking up into Viktor
> Thrusting up deep into him
You don't need to write this twice.
> But he fucks him instead, hard and fast
That sure didn't take long, did it?
> Merciless rubs his cock
*Mercilessly. Beta-reader was clearly slacking off.
> Wetness floods between them, overflowing between them
Redundant. What the fuck was bunnypoem doing?
> Soaking his pants and seat
Yes, that's what overflowing entails.
> You will need to catch up on anatomy and medical terminology
Says the fujo who thinks a roid clit is a cock and thinks the ends of the g-spot are the 'base' of the clitoris. That's fucking rich from someone who cannot use the word 'vagina' yet can use it as a tag no problem. Make it make sense.
