I think I figured out why this drawing looks so.. unbalanced. (asides from the obvious tr00ning, skin color and bad fashion)
The line weight is just fucking everywhere. On the faces it’s much thinner than everywhere else. Compare the line weight on Polnareff’s head to that of everything neck down, it gets inexplicably thicker, as though the pen pressure ran out or they switched to a new brush. It looks jarring due to the sudden change in pressure.
Perhaps this was a heavily edited image? Would explain the line dissonance.