Redesigning Floraverse - Because PK is a fucking idiot

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Hampterfuppinshire said:
I suspect Glip isn't exactly sure what to think of all the redesigns and OCs. It's probably somewhat flattering that even people who dislike/criticize her draw her characters, and somewhat insulting that we're redesigning them. Either way, it's free art.
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when i showed glip some of these about half a year ago they actually seemed to think they were pretty neat
and i must say i agree though, everything here is pretty wonderful, im glad yall love making designs better, im living for all these furfur redesigns lately
 
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DatBepisTho said:
Tbh I'm just here for the autismfest that is The Loveless.

Pretty much over Floraverse itself, as the spoof is more cohesive and gives more than one character the spotlight. Also none of the pedophilia bullshit.
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Plus radicalgoblin is a more competent and willing to accept criticism writer than PK ever was (and just a better person all-around).
 
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ok buddies, i redesigned cayenne.
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i redesigned cayenne so that he looks more like a rabbit and less like a pokemon.
i reduced the ears since such a large amount of ears can be really hard to draw for most fan artists (including myself). i also decided to basically ignore the species guide altogether, since the sheet can, again, be very complicated, along with the fact that this thread is meant to critique the character designs as a whole, including how these weird ass species are supposed to look.
i limited the amount of colors to 4, using a mostly grayscale color palette. the only exception is the small amount of red on the nose, the inner ears, and the eyes, which i tried my best to have pop out, since its obviously one of the most important ways to show a characters expressions.
i gave cayenne big claws and pupils similar to a goats' to further the demonic aesthetic the comic tries to go for (but obviously fails). i also made the ears more oddly place to further a sort of creep factor.
 
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patchy<3 said:
ok buddies, i redesigned cayenne.
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i redesigned cayenne so that he looks more like a rabbit and less like a pokemon.
i reduced the ears since such a large amount of ears can be really hard to draw for most fan artists (including myself). i also decided to basically ignore the species guide altogether, since the sheet can, again, be very complicated, along with the fact that this thread is meant to critique the character designs as a whole, including how these weird ass species are supposed to look.
i limited the amount of colors to 4, using a mostly grayscale color palette. the only exception is the small amount of red on the nose, the inner ears, and the eyes, which i tried my best to have pop out, since its obviously one of the most important ways to show a characters expressions.
i gave cayenne big claws and pupils similar to a goats' to further the demonic aesthetic the comic tries to go for (but obviously fails). i also made the ears more oddly place to further a sort of creep factor.
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Big yaoi claws on a demon rabbit works better when you give him slightly larger feet than PK would, I really like this!
Only suggestion would be to consider making the shape of his ears a little more angular to match the claws and cheek fluff. And maybe some bottom claws to balance the design.
 
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DatBepisTho said:
Big yaoi claws on a demon rabbit works better when you give him slightly larger feet than PK would, I really like this!
Only suggestion would be to consider making the shape of his ears a little more angular to match the claws and cheek fluff. And maybe some bottom claws to balance the design.
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ok, im taking your advice.
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im currently in school, so i cant really make a digital image at the moment. ill probably revamp the digital version once i can get on my laptop, though.
i added claws to the feet and made the ears pointier like how bepis suggested.
i also added darker grays to the big boy hands and the feet, along with a little bit of forehead fur.
also, while were here, i redesigned median too.
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medians original design looked too disturbing in a sense for someone meant to heal others, so i went for a sort of cutesy route. i gave her a nurse hat to replace the weird growth on her head and a heart-centered aesthetic.
i replaced the weird growth on her tail with a pink heart. i like to think its similar to a rattlesnake tail, making rattling noises whenever moved.
i made the things attached to her head (i have no idea what theyre called) so that theres no holes and forms a heart shape.
i replaced the plus-shaped pupils with heart-shaped ones, furthering the heart theme im going for.
 
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patchy<3 said:
ok, im taking your advice.
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im currently in school, so i cant really make a digital image at the moment. ill probably revamp the digital version once i can get on my laptop, though.
i added claws to the feet and made the ears pointier like how bepis suggested.
i also added darker grays to the big boy hands and the feet, along with a little bit of forehead fur.
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He's shaped like a scruffy apple on toothpicks, I love it.
 
Hello been lurking on this thread a bit and then i decided to draw a redesign of beleth and amdusias.
(Sorry if these look dumb or my idea behind it is dumb.)
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So i had this idea where Beleth was a sheriff and his deputy is Amdusias, and they would have some fun adventures in the wild west.
Made it kid friendly because floraverse should be kid friendly not rape-y 2deep4u bullshit.
Will i color these? Maybe.
 
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CancerGoat said:
Hello been lurking on this thread a bit and then i decided to draw a redesign of beleth and amdusias.
(Sorry if these look dumb or my idea behind it is dumb.)
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So i had this idea where Beleth was a sheriff and his deputy is Amdusias, and they would have some fun adventures in the wild west.
Made it kid friendly because floraverse should be kid friendly not rape-y 2deep4u bullshit.
Will i color these? Maybe.
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holy shit I love this it's fantastic
 
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CancerGoat said:
Hello been lurking on this thread a bit and then i decided to draw a redesign of beleth and amdusias.
(Sorry if these look dumb or my idea behind it is dumb.)
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So i had this idea where Beleth was a sheriff and his deputy is Amdusias, and they would have some fun adventures in the wild west.
Made it kid friendly because floraverse should be kid friendly not rape-y 2deep4u bullshit.
Will i color these? Maybe.
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this is very good pardner. yeehaw
 
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