حلال Connor Bible - Everyone's Favorite Molly Ringwald loving, adoption hating, aspiring writer and bellybutton fucker

[Stalin]

I'll take 'em.

PM me then.

 

[Bugaboo]

Connor, please get on Teamspeak

 

[Null]

I am also a writer. Here is a haiku:

Woe is the fat man
Beset by his laziness
Molly shows no love

 

[Connor Bible]

Guys, one at a time. Shit...

 

[Konstantinos]

I'll take 'em.

Connor, how much do you value criticism? I enjoy writing quite a bit as well and I've discovered that the best way to improve is to listen to what other people have to say on your work.

 

[KatsuKitty]

Why not write a navel play erotica?

 

[Stalin]

Why not write a navel play erotica?

NO EROTICA

 

[Connor Bible]

Connor, how much do you value criticism? I enjoy writing quite a bit as well and I've discovered that the best way to improve is to listen to what other people have to say on your work.

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

NO EROTICA

Agreed.

 

[Coster]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

Because hurting your feelings immediately invalidates critique and makes the one who's critiquing wrong. God, you're a fucking pansy.

 

[Ivan Komarov]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

"I agree with criticism except when I don't"

Agreed.

Prude.

 

[Johnny Bravo]

Guys, one at a time. Shit...

If I had as many people offering to critique my writing as you do I'd be creaming my pants in ecstasy. Get on it!

 

[Locksnap]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

You can't just set criticism aside just because you find the manner its delivered objectionable. All you're doing is giving yourself an excuse to not listen to it because you don't like to be criticised.

 

[KatsuKitty]

NO EROTICA

"Molly Ringwald squarted slowly across the room..."

 

[wagglyplacebo]

So do you still hate adopted kids, Connor?

 

[Stalin]

"Molly Ringwald squarted slowly across the room..."

EVEN WORSE NO SQUARTING!!!

 

[lolwut]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

Get used to vitriol. Some people need a heavy hand, and you're one of them. You start ignoring every piece of advice just because it hurts your feelings, then you're just hurting yourself.

 

[Watcher]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

Connor if you want to become a writer you can't be picky with criticism.

I have had to request people give me criticism. And occasionally I've been encouraged to PAY people to criticize my work properly.

If someone gives you actual criticism and insults you at the same time you should still read it. You need to be able to separate your work from yourself. Because your work will always be insulted, that's something you will not be able to prevent no matter how good it is. You can only control how you react to it.

 

[TM Ambrose]

we're waiting for you

 

[Johnny Bravo]

I appreciate criticism if its constructive and serves to benefit both the writer and the reader, but if its loaded with vitriol, forget it.

I've done loads of critique online and in my writing classes. Send me chapter 1 and I will rock your world. Tomorrow.

 

[DN 420]

I'm open to suggestions about how to make my writing attention grabbing and interesting.

You seem to be really keen on writing, so I'm gonna suggest this site that I use. It'll help with your perfectionism.

If you wanna learn how to write better prose, use Google. You gotta be more resourceful than this, man.