Sonichu The Sunstone (A Fanfic)

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Should Chris-Chan Sonichu make an appearance?

  • Yes, it's a huge part of the source material.

    Votes: 1 25.0%
  • No, it's refreshing to see him in a support role to the real sonichus.

    Votes: 3 75.0%

  • Total voters
    4
  • Poll closed .
I really like how Edison ended up as a more sympathetic character, at least as far as Deage League goes.

That little twist with Blake was really neat! I didn't expect it at all, yet when I thought about it, it really made sense, and probably should've been kinda obvious in retrospect. Props for actually using Silver Blake too, it was nice seeing him in action.

Didn't expect the whole "Sunstone AND Moonstone shattering" thing either, and at first I thought Solario was some sort of illusion or trick Serene was playing on the good guys, or maybe that HE was betraying them this time. But nope, instead he forgives Serene and they formed a NEW stone, a BETTER stone! At least Serene has company this time, maybe she won't be insane anymore with some company around, a pretty bittersweet ending for them both, and I'm kind of surprised at how sympathetic Serene turned out as well!

So I guess this is gonna end soon, well, it's been a fun ride. I really like how Blake ended up as the hero as well, it's like the episode starring Blake that never was.

Oh yeah and I honestly didn't catch the whole "Rainbow Island" thing until you brought it up. I think Sunstone Island actually makes a lot more sense though and you could've easily passed it off as correcting one of his mistakes (since I don't think the rainbow came from that island or even so much as touched it, but whatever.) But hey, you're just being honest here.
 
I really like how Blake ended up as the hero as well, it's like the episode starring Blake that never
Thank you so much! That was one of my goals here to make Blake interesting, like I did for Angelica in Obscurity.

Well, here's the epilogue.
A month later.

"Blake! Will you hurry up! We're supposed to be on the ferry in only an hour."
"Relax babe, we have a whole hour. It only takes twenty minutes to get there. I just gotta change Splash's diaper and we can go." Blake came out of the house holding Splash, a black, water-type rosechu. He and Bubbles made their way to CWCville's port. The made the ferry with plenty of time to
spare, just like Blake knew they would. On deck, Sonichu and Rosechu were holding hands looking at the water.
"Hiiiiiii Rosey!" Bubbles screeched.
"Bubbles! It's good to see you, and who is this itty bitty rosee?"
"This is Splash Rosechu!"
As Rosey and Bubbles were hovering over Splash, Sonichu gave Blake a friendly slap on the back, "Congratulations Blake."
"Thanks man."
"Why, if it ain't that yellow boy, Sonichu!" Malona was waving on the other side of the deck.
"Miss Malona, what brings you here?"
"I wanted to meet Wild's friends and y'all having a little island shindig would be the perfect place."
Wild showed up behind her and gave her a hug. "That's right, I'm sure they'll love you, my little flame bird."
"Oh, I sure hope they do. If y'all excuse me, I must find the little girl's room." She disappeared to the lower deck.
"Heh, guess you got that roll around in the hay after all."
"Ha, well, actually…I haven't yet."
"Wild!"
"Well, you know, a girl like that. I wanted her to meet my friends, get to know Sandy, take her out a few times to get to know her. I want to make sure her family at the ranch likes me too before I…you know. I've been to the ranch twice now to help her father out, they let me stay for dinner so I think things are going well."
Blake patted him on the head, "Sonichu, I think our Wild has stopped thinking with his dick for once."
"Hey well, errrr. Look. There's sunstone!"
Blake looked towards the island, "Heh, I guess it's not Sunstone Island anymore, we gotta start calling it Starstone Island now. It's home of the Starstone after all."
They made their way to Flame's hut. Chris was sitting outside talking to Flame. Angelica was flying through the air and landed when she saw the rest of her friends.
Blake's looked around, "Didn't Punchy come with you guys? Where is he?"
Chris pointed to the beach, "He's here, he's down at the sand practicing some fighting moves."
Punchy was sparring with Edison down at the beach. He threw a punch which Edison blocked. When he saw his friends Edison was able to deliver a swift blow to his head.
"Punchy, you cannot let distractions alter the result of a fight."
"Commander Edison!" Malcolm ran up to him. "We should be heading back up."
Blake looked at Edison, "So, you've been promoted to commander now?"
"Yeah, Stryker decided I was the right material for a leader and he stepped down."
Everyone gathered around the Starstone, it rested at the same location as the old Sunstone. Flame perched himself on one of the stars corners.
"I'm glad you could all make it today. My ancestors protected the Sunstone for 400 years. Now, I will begin a new family tradition, I will protect the Starstone."
"And we're here to help tahaha." Stryker said
"Yes, Edison and his friends decided to stay here."
"That's right, we like it here, there's some fruit trees, and Flame's teaching us to fish. Edison got me into that farming shit, we got some tomatoes too. It's a hella lot better than Doritos."
"Which reminds me, Stryker and I managed to get quite a catch today. There's gonna be some clams and shrimp for dinner tonight. Malcolm's going to make some fresh mango salsa."
"Fucking A right." Malcolm pulled out a knife and twirled it around.
As everyone waited for dinner, Magi-Chan managed to get Sonichu alone.
"So, did you talk to Swift?"
"Yeah, I have to admit I feel awful. Had I know his team worshipped me like they did, I would've done something to stop them."
"There's no use living in the past."
"Swift contacted me the other day, he said when he got back home to his team, they seemed like they were their old selves again, like they were before coming to our world. I'm not a god to them anymore, I'm just a guy who looks like their Bobby. He can't explain it, maybe Serene was part of it. You know, to get Swift to help her somehow? I don't know."
"I suppose there's no point on dwelling on it now. Let's get ready for dinner."
As the Chaotic Combo and Deege League sat down ready to eat, Flame flew above them. He landed in the middle of the group.
"I may not be good at speaking but I must. I must thank you, all of you, for restoring the order to this world. I protected the Sunstone, now I must protect the Starstone. Without you, terrible things would have happened to our land. I thank you, and Solario thanks you too. He is alive, I feel this. Serene is alive too, but she is different now. This I know. We will all be happy! Hohohoho!"
 
Great ending, everything wrapped up rather nicely. I like how Deage League are actually friends with the Sonichus and Rosechus now that the whole thing is over, that was actually really amusing and even pretty heartwarming to see.

However, I gotta confess something, I had no idea Swift was worshiping Sonichu. When he mentioned that he was a Christian, I thought he meant he just worshiped God like any other Christian, it didn't even cross my mind that he meant Sonichu, I guess I should've kept Sonichu 10 in mind when I read that part, either that or I completely missed a line of dialogue or something that would've cleared it up.

Ah well, regardless, I couldn't help but imagine their feast looking a little something like this:
 
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