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- Aug 11, 2019
The thing about masks/helmets is that they have a very powerful thematic and cultural history going back basically to the first time man ever made clothes. Masks can signify false identities, theatrics, mourning, defensiveness, secrecy, and more. The concept of "the man behind the mask" being scary/impressive for being ordinary isn't a new one either, most famously the Wizard Of Oz's reveal of just being a man behind a curtain.
By revealing to the entire audience that Kylo is human, and an ordinary looking one, and an emotional one, the mystery is dissolved. Him just showing only characters his face, and them reacting in shock and horror could work, especially if his face is hidden until the end, when it's revealed he's been human.
In order for this to really, truly work, the magnitude of his misdeed should have been far greater. He should have been more than an edgy tryhard Vader, he should have been a monster. Then and only then would everything make sense upon the reveal, as the true horror wasn't that he was malformed or an alien or a robot, the true stab to the gut could have been that he was an ordinary man. This would also be fucking poetry with Vader and Palpatine, since let's go over them
Palpatine's face was, according to some EU stuff, always mangled the way it was. That's just what being a Sith did to you. He hid his rot beneath a mask projected by the Force, and he discarded it to show his villainous nature.
Vader wore a mask to hide the fact that he wasn't just a man, but a broken and vulnerable one. The mask kept him alive, and the mask kept him mysterious. He wore a mask to hide his weakness.
This new sith I created could have had the best of both worlds, keeping themask on for an air of mystery, and discarding it to demonstrate to certain captives that anyone could fall to darkness.
Indeed, they had to make Kylo even worse than he was at the movie so then when we see he is just a man, the fact that you could be him is way scarier. YOU could be Kylo Ren if you dont control your darkside and that could have been the scary thing about him, a realized Vader with no lost limbs with only his inner conflict holding him back. Honestly, they should have made Kylo Ren's origins be around stuff more out of his control (and I dont mean just the dark side), I pictured him being the foil to Luke's idealism, Luke sees hope where Ben only saw corruption that had to be dealt with.
Luke: We can teach and show these people a better way.
Ben: What if they dont want to? What if they are okay with doing evil? What if they force us to do something drastic?
Luke:....dont think of scenarios that didnt happen yet. You are young, you still have a lot to learn.
He wants to believe in his uncle, he really does but the galaxy is barely improved because evil people dont WANT to change and get better. I imagine many more examples, showing Ben changing into Kylo and hell, seeing the dark side as a sad necessity or even believing he could USE the Dark Side but not be consumed by it.
Gesh, when you realize you could have made something better. I personally am writing something in my spare time and I think some of that effort is leaking on my "What I would have done" since, you know, I care about consistent universe and character.
God damn it,Disney.
Edit: Hell, make the mask actually be a way for him to hide his own shame. What I mean is that Kylo hates what he is doing and becoming deep down so as long he has the Mask on, he can believe its Kylo Ren doing these things and not Ben solo (who would never).