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I'm prefacing this by admitting I like most of Karen Travis' EU books. Mississippi Mourning gives a pretty good breakdown of her here.So after much delay, here are my thoughts on the second LOTF Entry, Bloodlines. The reason for this delay has everything to do with the book itself, as I will explain later.
With this being my first brush up against Karen Travissā work, I went in with many reservations. Sheās arguably the most controversial EU writer after Troy Denning (and possibly Kevin J. Anderson, depending on who you ask). Her insatiable Mando obsession, her moral soapbox tirades against the Jedi, her scalding interactions with criticsā¦hell, the number of heated discussions sheās sparked on this very thread should be a testament to how contested her work is. And although herā¦penchant for writing Mando characters is definitely front and center, I didnāt hate it as much as I thought I would.
Boba Fettās characterized the way youād expect, and I think Traviss did a good job with his dialogue. They feel in-character for him without feeling too excessive or edgy, and itās easy to picture Temura Morrison saying these kind of lines in that Kiwi voice of his. I also like the prose around his dialogue, where heāll says something callous and harsh to preserve his uncompromising Mando image, while the prose will detail what actual uncertainties or reservations are running through his mind. His conversation with the Kaminoan scientist in the beginning is a good example of this, especially when closeted feelings about his childhood and his attitude towards the Clone Army are revealed (there was also a moment where he expressed disdain for the Kaminoans using clones to repel the EmpireāI couldnāt tell if that was a reference to the Clone Rebellion mission from the OG Battlefront II, but if it is, thatās really cool to get his reaction to that). Some people might object to all these details about Fett distracting from the narrative, but Iām not too bothered by it. If what Iāve researched is correct, in terms of publishing, these portions of the book were the first major updates regarding Boba Fettās exploits after ROTJ since, what, the Bantam novels and Dark Horse comics in the 90ās? Considering Fett and the Mandalorians play a bigger role than cameos in this story arc, and with more information on Fettās backstory being available now that AOTC had been released, Iām not surprised that Traviss would commit time to getting the reader up to date on what Fettās been up to. Having said all that, I would be lying if I said I was at all interested in Bobaās side of the storyā¦which I wasnāt. I like the character fine, but following his doddering exploits in search of āmuh cureā and āmuh abandoned daughterā did nothing for me, and never matched the emotional weight of what was going on with the rest of the story.
Because if I have any real gripes with the new focus on the Fett and the Mandos, itās the timing. This really didnāt need to be the first thing to be addressed in the wake of the major events of the previous book. Boba Fett having butt cancer and needing to hunt down Taun We really has fuck all to do with the Corellian Uprising, Lumiyaās return, Jacenās downfall, or really anything for at least 2/3rds of the book. Even the element of his daughter eying Thrackan-Salās contract on the Solo Family boils down to settling her daddy issues with Boba than the overarching plot at hand. And even though it eventually intersects with the main plot way later in the book, by then it feels too unimportant and inconsequential compared to everything else for me to care. Like, what possessed Karen Traviss to think that the best course of action was to take the reader, who is still preoccupied with Jacen Soloās character drama that Aaron Alliston spent the entire previous book establishing as the basis for this current story arc, and hand-cuff them to an infinitely less relevant plot about Boba Fett and his retarded Punished Snake melodrama? Why this, and more importantly, why now? This all couldāve easily been pushed to Book #3 of this story arcā¦not the very next thing we read after Jacen decapitates a fellow Jedi Knight and takes his first steps towards Sith teachings. For fuckās sake. Also, another gripe I had was that prologue of Boba Fett in first personāthat shit was cringe to read, and felt like the author getting physical arousal at writing Fett as the most ātoo-cool-for-youā edgelord in the universe. The prose is so try-hard and reads so much like a Sonic OC bio that I half expected Boba to at one point go: āPsh. Nothing personnel, kid.ā Keep in mind, I donāt hate the inclusion of this sub-plot, and enjoyed portions of itāparticularly the reunion of Fett and the Soloās, due to great interactionsābut the implementation was laughable. I can certainly see why this a major point of contention for EU fans.
Now, the juiciest part of this book, and what Iām rapidly coming to enjoy the most about LOTF overall, is the family drama. Jacenās decision to become a Colonel in the Allianceās Anti-Terror effort does not go ignoredā¦it rattles both Skywalker and Solo families, causing divide as some members side with him and others are horrified by what heās doing. It all especially works because unlike most Dark Side Turns, he hasnāt leapt to pure evil yet, and is operating legally and pacifisticallyā¦but his pragmatic measures create a ton of revulsion in Han, Jaina, and especially Luke, all of which is in-character and written superbly. Some of the scenes with Mara and Luke debating whether or not they want their son being contaminated by Jacenās influence, along with the arguments staged between Luke and Jacen, felt so real at times that I sometimes completely phased out of caring about the Civil War being waged, and more about the quiet but gut-wrenching scenes unfolding in the Senate Offices and Apartments. Those horrible moments where the characters return to their homes wracked from battle or politics and realize in hollow defeat that they canāt relieve stress by talking it out with their family anymoreā¦because the family rift has forced them to sever contact with each other. The more I read LOTF, the more I realize that this bitter family division might be the core asset of this story arc, the same way the philosophical drama of the Force and the Vong was to NJO.
The more of Jacenās scenes that I read, the more I feel like this series is going to give NJO a run for its money in terms of pure, heart-wrenching tragedy. NJO allowed for a lot of levity and emotional relief from its more harrowing momentsā¦but LOTF is just constant, wracking sadness, all well-earned and spectacularly written. And if itās one thing I can credit Traviss for, itās for writing Jacenās self-loathing and helpless descent just as well as Alliston, sometimes better. But part of that can be attributed to her not shoe-horning comedy where it doesnāt belong like Alliston, which helped the tonal consistency of the story tremendously.
Scenes like that desperate message that Jacen types for Jaina then deletes, or the sleepless night he spends thinking about his wife and daughter that he canāt see, all tug at the heart strings. You can see that heās struggling under his uncertainty in the bad decisions heās making, and doesnāt feel like he can bring his anxieties to anyone. Itās the kind of conflicted helplessness that I hear Disney Drones inexplicably credit the ST for showing in Crylo Ren, despite it barely materializing in the actual films at all. Also, unlike that lip-quivering brat, Jacen is actually shown to be doing everything with the misguided belief that heās saving everyoneāand that for all of his stupid decisions, he still loves his family, and wants them to stay alive. He doesnāt even want to kill Luke like Kylo does (at least, at the stage that Iām reading), if anything, heās trying to do what his uncle isnāt willing to do, to protect him from his own weaknesses. And probably the most bitter aspect of Jacenās turn, as the shock and horror of his actions start turning the heads of people in his personal life, is watching him forcefullyābut miserablyācut ties with the rest of his family with every act of necessity he takes. The distrust he instills in Luke, the vile resentment he creates in Jainaā¦and then, the final scene. Those of you whoāve read this book know the one I mean: the one where Jacen returns the Falcon to his parentsāwho are waiting with full knowledge of what heās done in a certain interrogation roomāand they greet him the same way the heartbroken and horrified parents of a school shooter would. Let me tell you, as someone who watched the Solo Family grow and bond together as early as Young Jedi Knights, this scene was fucking heart-breaking, especially what Han says to his son right before they depart. I would almost compare it to the frigid confrontation between Han and Anakin Solo in Vector Prime after the Serpindal Moon scene, but this scene actually defies nature and is even more of an emotional, sickening gut punch than even that. I know people accuse the āDenningsverseā books as being gore porn, but I disagree. This is outright misery porn. If thereās been a noticeable gap between this post and the one I made on Betrayal, itās only because this book was a struggle to get through, because I couldnāt make it three chapters without needing to do something, anything else to not sink into a reclusive state of depression.
And I want to be clear about this: this should all be considered mountainous praise. Oh, this book was depressing, but it was a good kind of depressingā¦the kind where you canāt help but marvel at how well the author is achieving their goal. For however dark or bleak this book got, not a single part of it felt unearned. This wasnāt a bad 90ās anime or Zack Snyder film, not an exercise in navel-gazing angst or forced superficial melodrama. Everything about Jacenās parts of the story felt measured, understated and psychologicalā¦everything I didnāt expect to see again after NJO, or in these relentless quantities. And I know itās clichĆ© to parrot at this point, but the more of Jacenās downfall I read, the more Iām flabbergasted that we didnāt get something like this from the ST. How did three random authorsāX-Wing writer, a Mando fetishist, and a Gorehound, all with conflicting interests and writing stylesāmanage to convey a characterās downfall better than a multi-million dollar movie trilogy with infinitely more resources and star power? Itās fucking unbelievable how amateurish these books make the ST look, even with the myriad of problems they have.
The other effective thing this book does is that it firmly establishes the difference between Jacenās swerve to the Dark Side, and Anakinās. Rather than do what the ST did with Kylo, clambering fruitlessly at replicating Anakinās conflict verbatim, this book makes a conscious effort to show Jacen learning about his grandfatherās downfall (even using the Force to explore the bloody memories that ensued in the Coruscant Jedi Temple during the night of Order 66), and definitively saying that he will rise above making the same mistakes his grandfather didā¦and never compromise his morals or his loved ones, no matter how much of the Dark Side he embraces for the āright reasonsā. This is something I definitely appreciate, as this story arc is taking careful measures as to not repeat the events of the films, and even deconstruct themā¦again, as opposed to the ST, which simply regurgitates the same cycle of events as its preceding trilogy for no narrative gain whatsoever. The other thing that really separates Jacen from Anakin during this phase is that in some waysā¦heās actually scarier. Thereās a scene in this book where Jacen interrogates a prisoner and accidentally kills her, in front of his apprentice Ben. The thing that makes this scene so unsettling to me is how unnaturally back to normal and caring Jacen goes back to when Ben expresses discomfort at what he sees, saying that the boy can return home to his parents and that this all might be too much for him. He does these cold, calculating things, and still remains in-character and with his master-student bond with Ben intact. Thereās no murderous angry shift like you see with Anakinā¦heās just the same logical and assertive Jacen heās grown to be through NJO and Dark Nest, but applying that logic to scary conclusions.
Speaking on the conflict itself, itās actually taking more shape in this book. The American Civil War parallels are even more apparent in this book, what with Traviss going out of her way to establish the growing tensions and divisions brought about by itā¦not just between the Coruscanti and the Corellians, but within the Skywalker-Solo families. A lot of Hanās Inner Monologue about his conflicting feelings about his son being involved in the Corellian attack and his daughter siding with the New Republic, how familial ties and political leanings are at odds with each other, is a particular highlight. I want to see more scenes like this and the Dinner Argument from Betrayal, as Civil War media (being a passion of mine) mines some of its greatest storytelling from the narrative drama of families being divided by the war. Also, remember how I said that LOTF continues to cement the idea of the Swarm War being utterly irrelevant? Jacen utters this line about the oncoming Civil War:
āI donāt think the galaxy could endure another war so soon after the Yuuzhan Vong invasion.ā
Fucking ouch. The Swarm War was such a minor nothing on the protagonistsā radar that it doesnāt even come up in a conversation about the state of the galaxy. Troy Denning canāt catch a break, the poor fucker.
However, with all this praise directed at the book (and my middling acceptance of the controversial Mando stuff), I have two massive complaints: the first of which is in regards to what I said earlier about Traviss retaining tone where Alliston seemingly could not. As I mentioned in my megapost on Betrayal, Alliston had a teeth-grittingly frequent tendency to insert cringey Whedon-esque jokes where they didnāt belong, hobbling the dramatic tension and immersion of several scenes. Chief among them was a painfully self-aware and fart-huffing āHan Shot Firstā joke that came out of fucking nowhere, and utterly shattered immersion. For almost the entirety of Bloodlines, Traviss was showing a notable improvement in this aspect, refraining from unbalancing the tone of her book with any needless humorā¦.and then the scene where Boba Fettās daughter murders Thrackan-Sal before Han Solo can, and Boba makes a comment about Han āneeding to learn to shoot first, and I almost threw the fucking book outside of my top-story apartment window. Fucking really? Do we need to shoe-horn this retarded Special Edition joke into EVERY ENTRY in this series? Note to EU authors everywhere: this knuckle-dragging, glue-scarfing, tired-ass meme wasnāt funny in 1997, it wasnāt funny in 2006, and it isnāt funny now. Shoe-horning this joke into dramatic scenes of all things is the literary equivalent of Steve Buschemi hauling two skateboards and asking how his fellow kids are doing, so fucking stop.
My second big complaint is that, yet again, the author has opted to barely use the existing Jedi Characters established in NJOā¦and this is really starting to make my blood boil. This isnāt even just about Tahiri Veila anymore (although that would be a legitimate starting point of contention, considering she has the most narrative potential to exploit, and the authors seem deterimined to do fuck all with her, which is really getting on my last nerve), the story practically ignores all of the young Jedi Knight characters, for reasons that utterly elude me. Hey, Karenā¦maybe instead of dedicating half the book to touching yourself to your favorite oily Kiwi Bounty Hunter, consider utilizing some of the existing Jedi Order Members to contribute to the narrative. I mean, for fuckās sakeā¦you have Jacen Solo join the Galactic Alliance equivalent of the East Berlin Stasi, generating daily controversy on Galactic HoloNews, and getting publicly compared to Darth Vader. You really donāt think some of the other members of the Jedi Order could offer some profound reactions to whatās going on? I mean, get why series regulars like Corran Horn and Kyle Katarnās reactions were relegated to only a few pagesā¦theyāre technically the āold guardā at this point, pushing into their 60ās. But why isnāt Kyp Durron given more to do? What about Tahiri Veila? What about Lowbacca, or Tenel Ka? Hell, Zekk is in this book, but he has barely anything to do or contribute. These are people that Jacen grew up with, his close friends, his companions of the fucking Yuuzhan Vong War. Youād think they would be the first people to react to their best friend wreaking havoc in a black uniform with a secret police SWAT Team on live television. What the fuck is preoccupying them off-page, exactly? Donāt get me wrong, itās nice that Jainaās part of the main dramaāfinallyābut having the other Solo Twin react to her brotherās dark descent is kind of a no-brainer, literally the most basic thing I would expect to be addressed in a story arc like this. Whether Traviss or Alliston care or not, it is their obligation to make use of the carry-over characters from NJOā¦not invent arbitrary one-use Jedi for killing off and boosting Jacenās arc, or Mando characters to sideline the main plot. I hear a lot of complaints about LOTF regarding its āgrimdark toneā and āunbelievable arc for Jacenā and āfocus on Mandosā, but this is the only problem with this series that is actively turning me livid, because it is the LAST fucking blunder I would expect from professional authors to struggle with this late in the EUās lifespan. You have rich and well-developed characters, so for Godās sake make use of them. Iāve been really fucking lenient on this seriesā flaws, but Iām about to enter the 1/3rd mark with Tempest, and if they still havenāt fixed this problem, that lenience is going evaporate.
So those are my experiences with Bloodlines, a book Iām relieved to say is, for the most part, as good if not better than Betrayal was. To be honest, I was expecting a lot worse considering the things Iāve heard about this series, and Travissā contributions in particular, and the quality of the book left me pleasantly surprised. With the almost unanimously bad things Iāve heard about both this story arc and its follow-up, FOTJ, Iāve spent my reading constantly wary about the moment that the quality supposedly takes a swan-dive, and I still havenāt encountered it yet.
But Iām only two books in, and the next oneās by everyoneās favorite edgelord, Troy Denning, so I better not say anything two definitive. Alema Rarās in the next bookās Dramatis Personae, so thatās encouraging at least.
I get the feeling that KT, like Kathleen Kennedy doesn't actually like SW per se. She likes an aspect of SW specifically Mando's and their culture and eventually because her focus was on her wants and preferences and not the well being of the overall whole it shows up in her work. Unlike KK I dont think KT hates SW. But that's the line.
Glad to read your review and looking forward to the next ones. Not to spoil anything but iirc some of your complaints may get remedied either in this series or the next. I agree completely how astounding it is to have the ST fuck up so badly on a fundamental level when they had access to the EU doing it so well. Ita good to keep in mind according to KK they didn't have any source material to draw from somehow.
Disney's decision to make all EU works non canon killed a lot of interest in the franchise from the more hardcore fanbase precisely because the readers knew how good some of the EU content was and had doubts Disney could produce something as good as what they were throwing away. Sadly that was right.