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@BoobWhiskers and their wonderful art criticism skills for this issue.
EDIT I spoke to soon, found the baby dick.
Stop it baka ur gonna make me blush

kind of good timing though, I'm just calling it a day after comic stuff so like... topical.
Okay so I do have to say, while I despise this sort of ugly-ass tumblr-y super deformed style this weirdo IS decently proficient at comics; they know how to put together a fairly coherent panel layout and move a story along, and they do it in b/w line style without spot blacks without it being totally anemic. So props to them on that.
THAT SAID, since they're using such a deformed style there are places where it's limiting just because you can't do wierd crops or extreme angles and still have it be recognizable what the fuck you're supposed to be looking at. The second panel (closeup shot of that wierd... creature, idk what the fuck it is) took me way too long to figure out that it WAS the same creature because they completely changed the proportions and those stupid (antlers?) Looked like little wierd grabby arms. Same sort of issue on the panel with the hair being cut, that wierd way of drawing the bangs like a 3 someone drew directly on the forehead is confusing as fuck and made me stare at it trying to figure out what the fuck sort of angle the head was at because I thought it was like, an ear or something. Stylization can be awesome if it works but here it's just confusing. See also how they've stylized their anatomy shorthand three different ways with the same character over the course of the comic (they've got popeye arms for most of it, balls for hands when falling down, and noodle limbs with no hands at all at the end). One for regular and one for 'zoom out/comedic effect chibi' would be fine, but again, when it's already confusing consistency would help a lot.
Also they don't know how to spell handsome, apparently.
Also this person's creepy fetishy style and content are both the most cursed goddamn thing I've ever seen and I feel like I need to scrub both my phone and my eyeballs in bleach and then personally apologize to God and also Jesus every time I see this thread, so there's that too.