Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

This is just obsessive. When magazines and promotional images are photoshopping black women to look lighter/less black yeah that’s a real fucking problem. But this? This feels insulting to all these actresses. You really gonna tell biracial kids they’re not black enough? You’re gonna make it sound like they only got a job by not being black enough? Oh yeah that sounds real progressive. Whether or not someone biracial identifies as black is up to them, not some idiot looking for internet points.

Just another example of SJWs being hilariously racist. They just want to have the hottest most progressive take they can think of, but they’re not actually progressive and think all it takes is buzzwords and cancel culture.

The Tiana one pisses me off a little too. All the princesses are designed to fit the Wreck-It Ralph style, none of them look exactly like their official models. But it appears they altered her before the movie came out anyway.

Meanwhile the complaints about them making Merida a one note joke didn’t get as much play.
My thinking is that if they alter an existing character model in such a way that it only superficially resembles the old one that's a fair reason to complain, but slightly lightening the skin tone is the least of those issues. Of course I'm not the same color as these people so I have that bias in me but then again lots of redheads have been replaced by black actresses and actors and I don't hear them speaking up for us so
 
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This is blatantly untrue. It's hard to say whether she genuinely believes this, or whether she's just lying to her audience, however.

WoW Director Alex Afrasiabi in an interview said: “I’ve heard these discussions on the internet about ‘she’s going off the rails,’ but is she? I’ve been writing Sylvanas personally since 2006, and this is pretty much — the Wrathgate and the Blight and the Forsaken — in character. Those were all under Sylvanas’ orders. What we’re seeing now is an escalation of the plans Sylvanas has, clearly, and we’re in the middle of that.”

While yeah, he is admitting that Sylvanas orchestrated the Wrathgate, there is absolutely no mention here, nor anywhere, about Saurfang's son dying to the blight. That shit was shown in the game's first in-game cinematic and he was very clearly killed and had his soul taken by The Lich King. She is straight-up blatantly lying, but you know, what's new with her?

And no, they did not change the invasion of Gilneas to be Sylvanas' idea either. Can't find that anywhere, so again, more lies to make herself and Sylvanas sound better.

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But Lily! I thought it was the right thing to do to cut out abusive pieces of shit out of your life even if they're family? Cuz that's certainly what Sylvanas is to her sisters: Abusive. The reason she was cut out was because she was actively manipulating her sister into becoming a piece of shit just like Sylvanas. Fortunately she wised up and got the fuck out, especially because Sylvanas was literally planning on murdering and raising her and her children into undeath against their will.

Lily harps on and on and on and on and on and on about how Sylvanas is a victim of abuse and rape and shit, but she will never fucking acknowledge that she's also a fucking abuser. She perpetuates the abuse and torture that she was put through, you know, exactly like Lily does. But since Lily totally doesn't do that what are you talking about, neither does Sylvanas.
 

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This is blatantly untrue. It's hard to say whether she genuinely believes this, or whether she's just lying to her audience, however.

WoW Director Alex Afrasiabi in an interview said: “I’ve heard these discussions on the internet about ‘she’s going off the rails,’ but is she? I’ve been writing Sylvanas personally since 2006, and this is pretty much — the Wrathgate and the Blight and the Forsaken — in character. Those were all under Sylvanas’ orders. What we’re seeing now is an escalation of the plans Sylvanas has, clearly, and we’re in the middle of that.”

While yeah, he is admitting that Sylvanas orchestrated the Wrathgate, there is absolutely no mention here, nor anywhere, about Saurfang's son dying to the blight. That shit was shown in the game's first in-game cinematic and he was very clearly killed and had his soul taken by The Lich King. She is straight-up blatantly lying, but you know, what's new with her?

And no, they did not change the invasion of Gilneas to be Sylvanas' idea either. Can't find that anywhere, so again, more lies to make herself and Sylvanas sound better.

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But Lily! I thought it was the right thing to do to cut out abusive pieces of shit out of your life even if they're family? Cuz that's certainly what Sylvanas is to her sisters: Abusive. The reason she was cut out was because she was actively manipulating her sister into becoming a piece of shit just like Sylvanas. Fortunately she wised up and got the fuck out, especially because Sylvanas was literally planning on murdering and raising her and her children into undeath against their will.

Lily harps on and on and on and on and on and on about how Sylvanas is a victim of abuse and rape and shit, but she will never fucking acknowledge that she's also a fucking abuser. She perpetuates the abuse and torture that she was put through, you know, exactly like Lily does. But since Lily totally doesn't do that what are you talking about, neither does Sylvanas.
Lily goes on rants about how 'just following orders' isnt a valid excuse when the things youre doing are horrible, but I find it really funny that that's how she justifies Sylvanas's actions. 'Garrosh told her to invade gilneas!!11!!' like yeah he did but she still went ahead and did it.

I really like Sylvanas as a character, I would compare her to Edelgard from FE3H in a way that shes a good leader and someone you can genuinely sympathize with but that doesnt change the fact that she slaughters innocents. Lily forgets to mention that even after the forsaken do become a unified front who are accepted into the horde that Sylvanas continues to do bad things, namely raise more forsaken. For a character so broken and abused as Lily says she is she sure doesnt have a problem with bringing more people to such a horrible fate (undeath).
 
That’s eerie, how did I never notice this before?

This is me just especulating but maybe it has something to do with the fact that Liliana has never in her life bothered to actually do any research on any social matter and goes with whatever social media tells her to believe. This is the problem when you let Tumblr be your only source of information, you're only going to heard anything from second hand and after everything was already said and done.

People have been complaining about the lightening of black character for years. It's all over twitter wether you want to hear about it or not, and the not hiring enough "real black women" is not a new thing either. To be someone that supposedly has been on the SJW trend for a while now, the lazyness of Liliana really comes through at times like this where she is not even aware of one of the most common SJW talking points there is.
 
This is me just especulating but maybe it has something to do with the fact that Liliana has never in her life bothered to actually do any research on any social matter and goes with whatever social media tells her to believe. This is the problem when you let Tumblr be your only source of information, you're only going to heard anything from second hand and after everything was already said and done.

People have been complaining about the lightening of black character for years. It's all over twitter wether you want to hear about it or not, and the not hiring enough "real black women" is not a new thing either. To be someone that supposedly has been on the SJW trend for a while now, the lazyness of Liliana really comes through at times like this where she is not even aware of one of the most common SJW talking points there is.
that's because Lily is a fake, a hypocritical opportunist

she doesn’t care about social issues that don’t involve her personally, even when she talks about decency and human rights, and she just blindly agrees with any Left-wing demand to say she’s part of the conversation and sympathizes

she only participates when there is a mob involved to protect herself from the responsibility of being well informed
uses his race and gender to deflect criticism from everything: writing, attitude, opinions, abuse, ect.
her tastes and standards are based on what she is allowed to like, that's why her tastes are so specific, limited and constantly projected

Lily, like many other SJWs, doesn't really want or fight for social change, she just wants to blame the system for everything she doesn't have and demand "reparations" like an envious entitled brat.
if she became part of society she would need to be responsible for her own mistakes and words, and that’s why she isolates herself from everything that doesn’t affect her

nothing is genuine, everything she does is to please her idelogy, to take advantage
 
Either Jerry has deluded himself into believing that once you're a victim you can never become a villain, or he's making an exception for Sylvanas because he wants to fuck her. Hell, even a Darth Vader fanboy like me can accept that Anakin became a fucking villain because the actions he committed were pure fucking evil. You can have sympathy for someone without condoning or excusing their behavior. And Jerry has gone right to "Hitler did nothing wrong because they didn't let him be a painter" level argumentation.
 
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I am aware that hating white people is the SJW thing, but going on a conspiracy theory that darker-skinned black female are slowly being "erased" with biracial females will not have an adequate or moral conclusion

what do they want, discriminate against light skin color, accuse them for not being black enough, put "blackness" in a spectrum to segregate those who are not "pure", deny them jobs because of their races?

take a step back, breathe, and think more than twice or more than a few seconds before saying shit you can't delete
Ahh so being a mixed race is now considered racist?

What a an actual tard lily is
 
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I made a joke at the end of last chapter that sooner or later I'd be able to summarise these chapters in a sentence. This chapter is perilously close to it because it revolved around one thing for the whole ass chapter.

Jannah, the stormtrooper/female finn from episode nine touches down with a ship full of children on the resistance base, proceeds to present herself and her capabilities and resources to Leia and Aliana. Immediately deduces that Leia fucking hates Aliana and despite Leia saying "don't worry about it, you just got here." tries to give Leia a bunch of empty advice.

Lily somehow presents this.
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Again. It's fucking insane how Lily is writing Leia in a way that feels like Leia is painful aware she's in a shitty fanfiction and is doing what they can to get by.


Then in the following scene this event happens.
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Which leads to.

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for the TL: DR Leia had a slip of the tongue, said something incredibly unprofessional and in response Aliana electrocuted an old woman. describing her as "crumbled on the floor, smoking"

the next moments in the story are spent with Aliana screaming to rey about the event.

Rey manage to get her to calm down.

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And

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I'd be summarising them but honestly I don't know how to make it sound interesting.

Effectively the gist of this whole chapter is; Leia finally says something rude and snarky to the girl who's done nothing but be snarky and rude to her, upended the entire world around her, dashed her hopes of reforming her son, is the reason her brother is dead, is corrupting the one thing that resembles a return to fucking normal when she finally lets one thing slip Aliana nearly kills her, and then reports up to the rest of command to basically have Leia held hostage by majority rule

Why?
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Also it's fucking funny that "crumpled to the floor, smoking and cursing quietly" is what qualifies as "superficial" and "a warning shot"

Also on the note of "The Sith Fleet"

remember how in Episode 9, when the resistance were fighting against it's version of the sith fleet; a thousand planet destroying star destroyers all armed to the gills in weapons and innumerable tie fighters. And they somehow managed to pull off the victory because Lando Calrissian got every last good willed person in the galaxy to show up? because thats just how big a deal taking out the empire was? because Star Wars is a story about hope and the idea that Good will always win even when the chips are down. Meanwhile under the revisions of Lily Orchard one bratty grey jedi calling herself a Sith Lord is the be all end all of whether or not the Resistance is even able to survive on the day to day.

Lily Orchard wrote a scene where a teenager effectively tazes an elderly woman, because the woman in question had a slip of the tongue. And the elderly woman is in the wrong.

I can't understate this enough.

The worst that Leia has done, is not trust a sith lord. made the sith lord cry from insensitivity. gets electrocuted by said Sith Lord. and then the resistance strip her of her authority as a leader of the Resistance.

And then Rey proposes to Aliana. And the chapter is a cliffhanger.
This is the third or so chapter to make me actually angry/10

I have 2 chapters until I'm caught up
 
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I made a joke at the end of last chapter that sooner or later I'd be able to summarise these chapters in a sentence. This chapter is perilously close to it because it revolved around one thing for the whole ass chapter.

Jannah, the stormtrooper/female finn from episode nine touches down with a ship full of children on the resistance base, proceeds to present herself and her capabilities and resources to Leia and Aliana. Immediately deduces that Leia fucking hates Aliana and despite Leia saying "don't worry about it, you just got here." tries to give Leia a bunch of empty advice.

Lily somehow presents this.
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Again. It's fucking insane how Lily is writing Leia in a way that feels like Leia is painful aware she's in a shitty fanfiction and is doing what they can to get by.


Then in the following scene this event happens.
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Which leads to.

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for the TL:biggrin:R Leia had a slip of the tongue, said something incredibly unprofessional and in response Aliana electrocuted an old woman. describing her as "crumbled on the floor, smoking"

the next moments in the story are spent with Aliana screaming to rey about the event.

Rey manage to get her to calm down.

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And

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I'd be summarising them but honestly I don't know how to make it sound interesting.

Effectively the gist of this whole chapter is; Leia finally says something rude and snarky to the girl who's done nothing but be snarky and rude to her, upended the entire world around her, dashed her hopes of reforming her son, is the reason her brother is dead, is corrupting the one thing that resembles a return to fucking normal when she finally lets one thing slip Aliana nearly kills her, and then reports up to the rest of command to basically have Leia held hostage by majority rule

Why?
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Also it's fucking funny that "crumpled to the floor, smoking and cursing quietly" is what qualifies as "superficial" and "a warning shot"

Also on the note of "The Sith Fleet"

remember how in Episode 9, when the resistance were fighting against it's version of the sith fleet; a thousand planet destroying star destroyers all armed to the gills in weapons and innumerable tie fighters. And they somehow managed to pull off the victory because Lando Calrissian got every last good willed person in the galaxy to show up? because thats just how big a deal taking out the empire was? because Star Wars is a story about hope and the idea that Good will always win even when the chips are down. Meanwhile under the revisions of Lily Orchard one bratty grey jedi calling herself a Sith Lord is the be all end all of whether or not the Resistance is even able to survive on the day to day.

Lily Orchard wrote a scene where a teenager effectively tazes an elderly woman, because the woman in question had a slip of the tongue. And the elderly woman is in the wrong.

I can't understate this enough.

The worst that Leia has done, is not trust a sith lord. made the sith lord cry from insensitivity. gets electrocuted by said Sith Lord. and then the resistance strip her of her authority as a leader of the Resistance.

And then Rey proposes to Aliana. And the chapter is a cliffhanger.
This is the third or so chapter to make me actually angry/10

I have 2 chapters until I'm caught up
Christ, Jerry seems to hate every established character from the original trilogy, doesn't he? Especially Leia. It's almost like women who he isn't attracted to get nothing but abuse, isn't it?
 
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Why do I get the feeling this is exactly how the "Lily is crying on my arms because all of you who bully her online" thing with Mikaila went down. Considering this was right after Lalaina punished the smallest mistake, I can imagine that Liliana too do this whole act right after telling someone to fuck off and have all her retard fans comfort her, the poor innocent victim that never did anything wrong.

This happened in Stockholm too, by the way. Twilight Sparkle had the parents of Fluttershy arrested for disrespecting authority and child abuse after said parents were surprised to not only found out that their daughter, who they haven't seen in months at that point, had not only broken off with the one fiancee that they knew about, but also had cheated on him with a woman, a woman that had a penis and managed to get her daughter pregnant. Fluttlershy didn't even had the decency of speaking with her parents in private, she brought all her friends to their house and then acted all smug and arrogant when her parents were justifiably taken back. The "child abuse" charge was for telling the little sister of Rarity to shut up because that was a family matter (which it was).

Liliana always does this. No matter how minuscule is the portion of power she ever has, she will make sure to abuse it to keep everyone compliant to her and this reflect itself on everything she writes. All her writing feels the same because there is never a moment of instrospection in which she even thinks of doubting if what she is doing is right. No, she wants to do it and she can do it, so it must be right by default.
 
Yeah, no. Ackbar wouldn't take that shit and tell her to get the fuck out before he holds her execution for assaulting their leader for not good reason. It doesn't matter how much of an 'asset' Alaina's fleet is, her showcase of how easily she'll run away and leave innocents to suffer because someone is slightly mean to her immediately makes said fleet more risk then it's worth.
 
God, Lily hates authority figures, doesn't she? Parents, teachers, elders, God itself, all people that are pretty consistently portrayed either negatively or just flat-out wrong even when they obviously are not.

The only thing this chapter convinced me of is Aliana is unstable, dangerous, and Luke should've taken after his father and killed that child.
 
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Change a white character to black? That's fine.
So much as lighten a black character's skin and the autistic screeching will never fucking cease.
Late I know, college has been kicking my ass, but eh. Anyways, on that topic, a fairly recent example of this is from the MCU. You know how Samuel L. Jackson played Nick Fury and everyone loved it so much that they used his likeness in animated cartoons that came out later? Yeah, Nick Fury was originally a white character, and nobody batted a fuckin eye. (Obviously I'm not bashing SLJ or his performance here, I loved it too. Just using this as an example to point out the hypocrisy)
Meanwhile an artist on Twitter drew Nessa from Pokemon Sword and Shield in a slightly lighter tone (As it turns out it was actually due to the lighting of the piece, shocker. I guess lighting is racist now) And sparked a shitstorm, receiving death threats and long, drawn-out posts about how "Whitewashing" characters is racist and this and that and the fuckin other. The shit is so pants-on-head retarded that I want to beat my head against a wall. I swear, people nowadays get offended on a fucking competitive level.
 
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Aliana is a super-strong dangerous Sith Lord who is completely unapologetic and in fact proud of her Sith heritage and upbringing. She attacks people when they piss her off and casually commits mass murder on people she doesn't like. She's been uncooperative with Leia from the word 'go' and is treated in the narrative as being sassy and gutsy and has also low-key threatened Leia with a huge fleet she inexplicably gathred offscreen.

Also she's a fragile butterfly who doesn't understand why big meanie mean-face Leia hates her so much. This is the second time that's been posted here that Leia said something nasty and it left Aliana sobbing in a corner wondering why everybody hates her. She's tries so hard to be nice and prove her loyalty, if you ignore the fact that she has done exactly the opposite, constantly.

I will say that Leia's comment was uncalled for. I will also say that Leia's comment was completely out of character even for this fanfic and obviously written just to give Aliana an excuse to attack her and then cry about how mean Leia is.
 
Aliana is a super-strong dangerous Sith Lord who is completely unapologetic and in fact proud of her Sith heritage and upbringing. She attacks people when they piss her off and casually commits mass murder on people she doesn't like. She's been uncooperative with Leia from the word 'go' and is treated in the narrative as being sassy and gutsy and has also low-key threatened Leia with a huge fleet she inexplicably gathred offscreen.

Also she's a fragile butterfly who doesn't understand why big meanie mean-face Leia hates her so much. This is the second time that's been posted here that Leia said something nasty and it left Aliana sobbing in a corner wondering why everybody hates her. She's tries so hard to be nice and prove her loyalty, if you ignore the fact that she has done exactly the opposite, constantly.

I will say that Leia's comment was uncalled for. I will also say that Leia's comment was completely out of character even for this fanfic and obviously written just to give Aliana an excuse to attack her and then cry about how mean Leia is.
I've said it before and I'll say it again. Jerry protests too much about anime. His characters come straight out of a shitty anime fanfic, and I can only assume he actually reads those with some regularity. Now, an emotionally unstable woman isn't exactly exclusive to anime, but I dunno when I hear the description of a powerful and abusive nutcase who goes crying whenever she's criticized at all, I think of shitty anime characters. Most of the time it's a joke, but Jerry seems to think that's an actual character concept.
 
I've said it before and I'll say it again. Jerry protests too much about anime. His characters come straight out of a shitty anime fanfic, and I can only assume he actually reads those with some regularity. Now, an emotionally unstable woman isn't exactly exclusive to anime, but I dunno when I hear the description of a powerful and abusive nutcase who goes crying whenever she's criticized at all, I think of shitty anime characters. Most of the time it's a joke, but Jerry seems to think that's an actual character concept.
Or worse; they've never actually read those kinds of fanfiction and thinks this is a brilliant subversion of tropes.
 
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TL; DR:
"things that don't shine or move in front of my face every 10 seconds in the narrative are tedious and bad

I will not explain what is satisfactory development, stakes and conclusion, just say it is fun and I like it, who doesn't agree with me is lying and stupid

mystery can be made interesting, but it takes talent and effort to write and demands attention from viewers, and I hate having to think to understand and so it is bad"
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I prefer to call "people have different tastes than you and enjoy different aspects of the same media"

bonus:
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the inequality in the amount of coffee that women can drink, known as "The Coffee Gap" is the greatest violence that has plagued humanity for thousands of years

Lily, as always, attentive and supportive of society's most important topics
 

Oh boy time for me to go off about Jerry's dumb ass opinions on writing again.

One of the reasons the Diamonds didn’t work is that you never got to see them. They just remained an enigma for most of the story, and their entire characters had to be shoved into one or two episodes. White Diamond is redeemed in the same episode that she’s actually characterized.

Yellow Diamond: First mentioned at the end of season 1, continuously mentioned in season 2, introduced in the middle of season 2 in a scene that tells us several things: She's blunt, she's authoritarian, and despite the characters and audience having just been told she's a being of pure logic, Yellow demonstrates an emotionally charged desire to destroy the Earth that the audience doesn't yet understand.

Blue Diamond: Introduced in a flashback where she's shown as equally tyrannical and intimidating as Yellow. Yet when she's introduced in the middle of season 4 she's a weeping mess, but nonetheless otherworldly and dangerous. The audience already knows it's Pink Diamond she's sorrowful over and only see glimpses of what she was like in her prime before indulging in her grief for thousands of years.

White Diamond: Not even mentioned until season 5, but there have been murals of her in ancient ruins that go unaddressed by the characters. The audience can only speculate about her existence up to this point. Her first introduction is haunting, showing her as cold and inhuman, her narcissistic tendencies on full display.

You could also argue all three of them are in different stages of grief: Yellow is anger, Blue is depression, and White is denial.

Yeah it would have been great to have more time with these characters, especially with White as the primary antagonist, but we already know this was a behind the scenes issue. With Cartoon Network telling them Season 5 was the last season while it was presumably already being developed. But these figures casting a long shadow over the plot while being eerily detached from it prevents a lot of power scaling issues, and helps the impression of them being god-like beings. And the show delivers you all the information you need to figure out their characters, mostly showing rather than telling.

His complaint is the show should have cut away to these characters. Except Steven Universe is, unsurprisingly, from Steven Universe's perspective. You won't see anything he isn't present for, that's why you have to piece together the details of so many events just like the protagonist has to. Jerry just can't understand why people find that engaging cause it trips him up at every turn if he's not being spoonfed exposition.

Let me make something very clear: Stories that have antagonists and keep them shrouded in mystery are making no forward progress with the character.

I'd bring up Fire Lord Ozai but he probably hates Avatar too.

But he's still a good example. We learn a lot about Ozai through Azula and Zuko's interactions before he's even on screen. You can have a mysterious villain who is still having an impact on the world and the characters. And gee, that's where, you know, worldbuilding comes in handy.

Steven Universe forgot what a “B Plot” was for and just made literally every single thing its own episode. It also forgot that “11 Minute Episode” shows used to bundle two episodes together. Instead it got 11 minutes of content every three months. And because it’s written like Sugar fed an AI a thousand pages of Invader Zim fanfiction and told it to write the story for her, 80% of the episodes don’t need to be bothered with if you just want the story because everything else is just meandering around.

What the fuck is he talking about? The show has groups of 2 or 3 episodes that continue right into each other. The Return/Jailbreak are one complete story (and are also the episodes that got a huge amount of people into the show), and then the first episode of the next season literally picks up right at the end of Jailbreak. Beta/Earthlings are one complete story. Mirror Gem/Ocean Gem are one complete story. Sometimes they would straight up have 22 minute episodes. There were small story arcs and conflicts that continued throughout episodes even when it wasn't the focus of the episode. The 11 minute limitation is a network mandate and this was a creative team working with it as best they could and they often were successful. There's plenty of episodes even fans find fillery and tedious and tend to skip on a rewatch, but every episode at least does seed important information either about lore, characters, Steven's powers or foreshadowing.

Did he even watch the show? Like for real? Was his two hour monstrosity just him picking out clips and episodes he thought would be problematic enough and then he spent the rest of the time shrieking about Nazis?

And part of the reason it is disposable is because the mystery isn’t worth it. The Pink Diamond twist is unsatisfying, White’s motivations are unsatisfying, the resolution is unsatisfying

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all the characters are flanderized to absurd degrees, it’s all just disappopinting. [sic]

Okay I'm gonna go complete fantard here but the show has some of the best character writing in animation. Full stop. By the end of the series each main character has gone through a journey and come out richer, and the audience has a better understanding of them.

If you wanna argue Steven Universe Future then yeah okay maybe. But the first series? Bullshit, Jerry.

And then there's this shit:

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Worldbuilding is on a need to know basis for the audience. Not for you, the writer. You need to have established the rules of your world. And if you're going to have any major locations that impact the plot, you need to figure that shit out too. The audience doesn't need to know every detail, and it's hard for some writers to resist the urge to just exposit about all these extra details, but you still need to know where things are coming from in a fictional setting. Especially a fantastical one. If you just make up a rule on the fly, and then forget it, and then contradict it, the audience will notice and their suspension of disbelief will be broken. If the things that happen within your world don't follow logically then you won't be able to invest in audience in it. Cause if you don't care why should they?

People know when you're just making up locations and cultures on the fly. It's extremely weak writing. Not to say that things can't be invented and added to a world/story later on, but you still need some solid set up if you want anyone to care.
 
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