Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

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I prefer to call "people have different tastes than you and enjoy different aspects of the same media"
It's also about getting caught up in the fantasy. People want to know more about world's that intrigue them, either on an academic level (admittedly pretty rare) or because they want to imagine what it would be like if that world was real. Most Star Wars fans love the universe and all of its potential, not just the movies and characters; most Harry Potter fans love imagining all the little minutiae about if they were a wizard and went to Hogwarts; hell, people who watch MLP like to think about what kind of pony they would be and what their cutie mark would be and where they would fit in pony society.

Lily, as a person who writes fanfiction -- especially fanfiction with such a dense lore background as Star Wars (and even pulls up information like lightsaber crystal and fighting styles and character you would only recognize if you knew about the EU) -- fully understands this concept but still dismisses it.

I'm guessing this is because her own worldbuilding attempts have been so poorly received, either by being ignored (see: entire wikis about Poke-Madhouse and Tales of the Val'kyr) or by having people poke holes in it (see: people trying to figure out how her Pokemon universe works, at all). Obviously this can't just mean that she's shit at worldbuilding because she doesn't actually want to put effort into it; it means that the very concept of worldbuilding is bad.

Worldbuilding is on a need to know basis for the audience. Not for you, the writer. You need to have established the rules of your world. And if you're going to have any major locations that impact the plot, you need to figure that shit out too. The audience doesn't need to know every detail, and it's hard for some writers to resist the urge to just exposit about all these extra details, but you still need to know where things are coming from in a fictional setting. Especially a fantastical one. If you just make up a rule on the fly, and then forget it, and then contradict it, the audience will notice and their suspension of disbelief will be broken. If the things that happen within your world don't follow logically then you won't be able to invest in audience in it. Cause if you don't care why should they?
Really just want to reemphasize this, absolutely. If you're making up the rules and changing them on the fly, the audience will never be able to ground themselves in the laws of your world and be able to invest in it. When things can Just Happen, there's no reason to feel tension because the author can just pull a solution out of their ass; when you can't figure out at the rough geography of an area, your audience will be confounded when one passage involves a four-day walk between cities and then the next time it happens they get from Point A to Point B in one afternoon.

Lily's examples of good versus bad worldbuilding are also hilarious. She's correct in that those are aspects you would need to know in the real world, but in a fictional setting, you don't need to be able to read road signs, you might wind up learning the history of a place for an in-universe reason, doing currency conversion is incredibly boring (although broad strokes about the economy of one place versus another might be noteworthy), and it seems utterly insane that you wouldn't hear the name of the local monarch even if you don't necessarily meet them. I'm pretty sure you'd overhear a few Brits talking about the Queen if you happened to walk down a street in London.

People know when you're just making up locations and cultures on the fly. It's extremely weak writing. Not to say that things can't be invented and added to a world/story later on, but you still need some solid set up if you want anyone to care.
Not necessarily. If you're good at improvisation you can absolutely trick an audience into thinking you've actually got something really elaborate when in fact you just made it up literally as you were typing the sentence.

But doing that usually does require a profound foundational understanding of your world and your story and your intentions. I've absolutely made things up on the fly that feel like they were deep worldbuilding, but I could do that because I knew enough about the foundation of my worlds that I can do that and not skip a beat (and trick the people I was writing with into thinking I'm a genius when really, I'm just a good bullshitter). Although your foundation and what you have planned should always play to your strengths. Not everybody can do that but they can make elaborate setpieces and environments that they can call up at a moment's notice, which is something I have trouble with and really admire anybody who can yank out a solid map and timeline.
 
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I also just realized: he says Steven Universe is written like Rebecca Sugar fed Invader Zim fanfiction to an AI. Whatever that's supposed to mean. But oh, is our boy pouting because the creator of an Emmy-nominated TV animation who he unreasonably hates and who has no idea his stupid ass exists grew up a Zim fan and got to write the foreward for the brand new Invader Zim artbook that just released a little bit ago?
 
I also just realized: he says Steven Universe is written like Rebecca Sugar fed Invader Zim fanfiction to an AI. Whatever that's supposed to mean. But oh, is our boy pouting because the creator of an Emmy-nominated TV animation who he unreasonably hates and who has no idea his stupid ass exists grew up a Zim fan and got to write the foreward for the brand new Invader Zim artbook that just released a little bit ago?
They're saying Rebecca can't write and has to use a tool to make her ideas work. Ironic since Lily uses her fanbase all the time for validation :story:
 
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Aliana is a historian, which for Lily means that she (somehow) has access to ALL the secrets and techniques of all Sith Lords who ever existed in the galaxy, in addition to their technology (the best and most successful explorer in the galaxy) where she trained herself (which is the most inefficient form of training imaginable) and became the greatest teacher of the Force who can transform anyone into a God and the best pilot ever, with the best ship which she herself modified to be so

100% not one to Mary Sue

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what is worse is the fact that it is fundamentally impossible for someone to have this level of knowledge, no matter if Lily says "my character trained and studied so her power is earned justly" when no one in the story can compete with such exclusive information

everyone is uninformed and Aliana is the only one with the entire library just for her and whoever she wants to teach
 
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Aliana is a historian, which for Lily means that she (somehow) has access to ALL the secrets and techniques of all Sith Lords who ever existed in the galaxy, in addition to their technology (the best and most successful explorer in the galaxy) where she trained herself (which is the most inefficient form of training imaginable) and became the greatest teacher of the Force who can transform anyone into a God and the best pilot ever, with the best ship which she herself modified to be so

100% not one to Mary Sue
Boy, it sucks when someone tears apart your work doesn't it Lily. That must feel awful.
 
I also just realized: he says Steven Universe is written like Rebecca Sugar fed Invader Zim fanfiction to an AI. Whatever that's supposed to mean. But oh, is our boy pouting because the creator of an Emmy-nominated TV animation who he unreasonably hates and who has no idea his stupid ass exists grew up a Zim fan and got to write the foreward for the brand new Invader Zim artbook that just released a little bit ago?
As somebody who read IZ fanfiction back in the day, yeah, that is an absolutely baffling comparison. I'm guessing it's entirely because of that foreword and I highly doubt that Lily is actually familiar with IZ. Certainly it doesn't seem like something she would watch for... basically all of the reasons. Art style, edge, tone, frenetic energy, absolute lack of romance, dark and surreal humor... these are aspects that commonly translated into fanfiction, too. Even the shipfics.

But Lily's no stranger to talking about things she doesn't bother to research and understand so... sure.

(Man, you remember when she said she was done talking about SU and Rebecca Sugar?)


Aliana is a historian, which for Lily means that she (somehow) has access to ALL the secrets and techniques of all Sith Lords who ever existed in the galaxy, in addition to their technology (the best and most successful explorer in the galaxy) where she trained herself (which is the most inefficient form of training imaginable) and became the greatest teacher of the Force who can transform anyone into a God and the best pilot ever, with the best ship which she herself modified to be so

100% not one to Mary Sue
Just to add to this, her explanation that Aliana has just 'studied better' (even though Kylo Ren had an actual master to teach him for several years) comes off as a bit insufficient when she previously had the power to stall a thousand-mile-wide laser blast for several seconds using the Force. Even if you're a great student and know how to wield it efficiently, that kinda feels like it would require a lot of raw power. In fact I'm pretty sure she's just been backpedaling from this ever since. I mean, the first chunk of the story, Aliana self-identified as the most powerful Force user in the galaxy and only after people started calling her out switched over to her suddenly saying "well actually I'm just average but well-trained I'm going to pull up these midichlorian numbers just to prove that I'm not a Mary Sue".
 
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World building also doesn't only exist to serve to pain the picture of the story's current focus, it can also be used to add to the feel of the story or as a vehicle to get different character to have interesting interactions. I've often used small mentions of on-going events as a way to show the passage of time in the story and the enphesize how relatively small scale the character's adventure is. Time doesn't stop just because the story isn't looking in it's general direction, the greater world that the story inhabits moves even as the main characters are absent; they are a small part of a greater whole.
 
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Aliana is a historian, which for Lily means that she (somehow) has access to ALL the secrets and techniques of all Sith Lords who ever existed in the galaxy, in addition to their technology (the best and most successful explorer in the galaxy) where she trained herself (which is the most inefficient form of training imaginable) and became the greatest teacher of the Force who can transform anyone into a God and the best pilot ever, with the best ship which she herself modified to be so

100% not one to Mary Sue

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what is worse is the fact that it is fundamentally impossible for someone to have this level of knowledge, no matter if Lily says "my character trained and studied so her power is earned justly" when no one in the story can compete with such exclusive information

everyone is uninformed and Aliana is the only one with the entire library just for her and whoever she wants to teach

Someone on tumblr apparently made a post about that scene in particular which seems to have gotten just enough under Lily's skin to warrant a vague post.

Also I didn't want to do a chapter breakdown this evening, but I'm still on my kick of posting about The story in question so have this.
We're getting very close to the end..until lily starts writing again. as it stands I'm making a redo of a post I made back in march....god...7 fucking months ago. I've almost dedicated a fucking year of my life to this shit. well a year of about 4 years I've spent on this site, but thats a digression.

for ease of writing I went back and copy pasted the whole post and will just include the "things that have progressed" in Italics.

Rey: Terminally clueless and sheltered until Aliana shows up, very rapidly descends into falling into the dark side and is also gay because the writer says so. Continues to be manipulated and corrupted by Aliana over the course of the fics story, relishing in the pain of her enemies and becomes an even bigger mary sue than her depiction in the movies, Crushing AT-AT's like soda cans. Still won't murder Kylo Ren though. Proposes to aliana in chapter 33, gets married to her in chapter 35.

Finn: exists mostly so the story can remind us that he exists. Same but is now a jedi with a lightsaber so Lily can say she paid off on Disney's not paying out on the hints in episode 7

Poe: Ditto but is still kicked around for toxic masculinity crimes Unchanged

Both Poe and Finn begin a relationship in Chapter 30 and then both characters proceed to go back to existing solely with in the background of the story. status change seems made purely to appease the FinnPoe audience with the least amount of effort.


Han Solo: Barely exists and contribute to the story, dies and everyone pretends to care.

Chewbacca: literally vanished the moment episode 7's story arc ends. was barely there in the first place He came back in chapter 23. then went away again.

Luke: revised into a boomer so he can get educated on how the Dark Side of the force actually works. Sacrificed his life to allow Aliana to continue to live and treat his sister like a piece of shit.

Leia: revised into a boomer and an apologist so she can get educated on how the dark side of the force actually works and that her son is a lost cause. Now a "stubborn boomer" stuck in her ways and opinions basically existing as an obstacle, right up until chapter 33 where she's electrocuted and stripped of her effective authority so now all she can do is just stand there and be unhappy. Very easy to imagine would be the "Villain" of the story if not for the First Order.

Holdo: Still basically the worst part of episode 8. a "voice of reason" to the cast at large, relegated to keeping Leia from just saying "fuck the sith, and everyone around her" while also trying to prevent Rey and Aliana from pissing off into the sunset. but naturally falls in favor of The Jedi and The Sith.

Rose Tico: literally only just now showing up at 16 so I don't actyually know. Ironically has even less presence in the story than Episode 8 and 9 together and despite being promoted to having a rank on similar level with Leia and Holdo still basically does nothing.

Kylo Ren: Is a Nazi and a Rapist and a serial abuser with no hope for redemption. But also a completely loser that no one (not even his allies) takes seriously and somehow despite having been trained by Luke Skywalker and Snoke is fucking useless as a dark jedi. Remains mostly unchanged but with the caveat of now being "Figure head supreme leader of the first order" has literally had any kind of threatening presence he had taken away from him. Regularly gets the piss kicked out of him and treated like shit even by non-force sensitives. In the current plotline is plannign to fake the return of Emperor Palpatine.

Hux: The effective "real villain" of The Sith Resurgence. but basically a hallow Nazi villain who only exists to make snarky dead pan reactions to Kylo Ren whenever he tries to be threatening.

Phasma: finally shows up at the end of episode 8's storyline, holds Kylo Ren at knife point to keep Kylo Ren from enacting the coolest thing he did as a villain proceeds to go back to not existing

Darth Talon: I have no idea what her "canon" characterisation is. but she's now "Aliana's best friend"

C-3PO, R2D2, BB-8 I realised I never talked about them in the original post, so my presumption is lily hates fun so they're all just gone.


Also, I feel it remiss of me to point out something. During the course of the story in The Sith Resurgence at about chapter 7 or so Lily introduces Roses Sister Paige, who canonically dies during the opening ship to ship battle in The Last Jedi, for a briefe moment Lily flirts with this character becoming a recurring cast member, teases it again when in episode 8 the bombing run that would result in her death doesn't occur, and then paige just stays off screen until chapter 35 where she exists as a bridesmaid. and trying to keep a tangent short. Lily Orchard kept a character from dying, and did nothing with her.
 
Someone on tumblr apparently made a post about that scene in particular which seems to have gotten just enough under Lily's skin to warrant a vague post.

Also I didn't want to do a chapter breakdown this evening, but I'm still on my kick of posting about The story in question so have this.
We're getting very close to the end..until lily starts writing again. as it stands I'm making a redo of a post I made back in march....god...7 fucking months ago. I've almost dedicated a fucking year of my life to this shit. well a year of about 4 years I've spent on this site, but thats a digression.

for ease of writing I went back and copy pasted the whole post and will just include the "things that have progressed" in Italics.

Rey: Terminally clueless and sheltered until Aliana shows up, very rapidly descends into falling into the dark side and is also gay because the writer says so. Continues to be manipulated and corrupted by Aliana over the course of the fics story, relishing in the pain of her enemies and becomes an even bigger mary sue than her depiction in the movies, Crushing AT-AT's like soda cans. Still won't murder Kylo Ren though. Proposes to aliana in chapter 33, gets married to her in chapter 35.

Finn: exists mostly so the story can remind us that he exists. Same but is now a jedi with a lightsaber so Lily can say she paid off on Disney's not paying out on the hints in episode 7

Poe: Ditto but is still kicked around for toxic masculinity crimes Unchanged

Both Poe and Finn begin a relationship in Chapter 30 and then both characters proceed to go back to existing solely with in the background of the story. status change seems made purely to appease the FinnPoe audience with the least amount of effort.


Han Solo: Barely exists and contribute to the story, dies and everyone pretends to care.

Chewbacca: literally vanished the moment episode 7's story arc ends. was barely there in the first place He came back in chapter 23. then went away again.

Luke: revised into a boomer so he can get educated on how the Dark Side of the force actually works. Sacrificed his life to allow Aliana to continue to live and treat his sister like a piece of shit.

Leia: revised into a boomer and an apologist so she can get educated on how the dark side of the force actually works and that her son is a lost cause. Now a "stubborn boomer" stuck in her ways and opinions basically existing as an obstacle, right up until chapter 33 where she's electrocuted and stripped of her effective authority so now all she can do is just stand there and be unhappy. Very easy to imagine would be the "Villain" of the story if not for the First Order.

Holdo: Still basically the worst part of episode 8. a "voice of reason" to the cast at large, relegated to keeping Leia from just saying "fuck the sith, and everyone around her" while also trying to prevent Rey and Aliana from pissing off into the sunset. but naturally falls in favor of The Jedi and The Sith.

Rose Tico: literally only just now showing up at 16 so I don't actyually know. Ironically has even less presence in the story than Episode 8 and 9 together and despite being promoted to having a rank on similar level with Leia and Holdo still basically does nothing.

Kylo Ren: Is a Nazi and a Rapist and a serial abuser with no hope for redemption. But also a completely loser that no one (not even his allies) takes seriously and somehow despite having been trained by Luke Skywalker and Snoke is fucking useless as a dark jedi. Remains mostly unchanged but with the caveat of now being "Figure head supreme leader of the first order" has literally had any kind of threatening presence he had taken away from him. Regularly gets the piss kicked out of him and treated like shit even by non-force sensitives. In the current plotline is plannign to fake the return of Emperor Palpatine.

Hux: The effective "real villain" of The Sith Resurgence. but basically a hallow Nazi villain who only exists to make snarky dead pan reactions to Kylo Ren whenever he tries to be threatening.

Phasma: finally shows up at the end of episode 8's storyline, holds Kylo Ren at knife point to keep Kylo Ren from enacting the coolest thing he did as a villain proceeds to go back to not existing

Darth Talon: I have no idea what her "canon" characterisation is. but she's now "Aliana's best friend"

C-3PO, R2D2, BB-8 I realised I never talked about them in the original post, so my presumption is lily hates fun so they're all just gone.


Also, I feel it remiss of me to point out something. During the course of the story in The Sith Resurgence at about chapter 7 or so Lily introduces Roses Sister Paige, who canonically dies during the opening ship to ship battle in The Last Jedi, for a briefe moment Lily flirts with this character becoming a recurring cast member, teases it again when in episode 8 the bombing run that would result in her death doesn't occur, and then paige just stays off screen until chapter 35 where she exists as a bridesmaid. and trying to keep a tangent short. Lily Orchard kept a character from dying, and did nothing with her.
The almost fetishistic need for Kylo Ren to be both useless and villainous is...irksome.

Like good character writing dictates that a character has to have a reason to survive for so long. Why is Kylo Ren still alive if he is so incompetent and no one takes him seriously? And the story isn't trying to say that he's lucky, or that he's got connections so he gets away with anything. Literally no one in the story likes him, he's not smart, he's lost favor with everyone, and he's only alive at the whims of our protagonists so he can get in their way again.

Damn good writer my ass.
 
The almost fetishistic need for Kylo Ren to be both useless and villainous is...irksome.

Like good character writing dictates that a character has to have a reason to survive for so long. Why is Kylo Ren still alive if he is so incompetent and no one takes him seriously? And the story isn't trying to say that he's lucky, or that he's got connections so he gets away with anything. Literally no one in the story likes him, he's not smart, he's lost favor with everyone, and he's only alive at the whims of our protagonists so he can get in their way again.

Damn good writer my ass.
Because then the story would be over. Lily's not 'going anywhere' with Kylo Ren. He won't be redeemed, or become a secret badass, or anything. Her whole thesis is that Kylo Ren is a shit villain and shit character who doesn't deserve Rey, so making him anything more than Emperor Pilaf would go against her entire point. The only reason he's still alive is because Lily is 'saving him for last' like some kind of sadist.
 
Because then the story would be over. Lily's not 'going anywhere' with Kylo Ren. He won't be redeemed, or become a secret badass, or anything. Her whole thesis is that Kylo Ren is a shit villain and shit character who doesn't deserve Rey, so making him anything more than Emperor Pilaf would go against her entire point. The only reason he's still alive is because Lily is 'saving him for last' like some kind of sadist.
You know, some people when doing a re-write of the Sequel Trilogy and thinking a character is shit would, I dunno, put in the effort to improve said character instead of just making every scene with them a waste of time.
 
You know, some people when doing a re-write of the Sequel Trilogy and thinking a character is shit would, I dunno, put in the effort to improve said character instead of just making every scene with them a waste of time.
I'd guess this is what Lily considers an improvement upon his character.
After all, instead of stealing her waifu, the Filthy Man-pig is put in his place by Strong, Independent Lesbeans who Don't Need No Man and would've totally been Underage Incestuous Lesbeans if given the chance.
She gets to stroke her hateboner AND her incestuous lesbian boner at the same time this way.
 
You know, some people when doing a re-write of the Sequel Trilogy and thinking a character is shit would, I dunno, put in the effort to improve said character instead of just making every scene with them a waste of time.
That would recquire Lily to think Kylo Ren "had room to improve." You have to remember her hatred of him comes from the fact Kylo Ren was unrelentingly evil in episode 7 and went on to do a complete 180 by episode 9. He's just one more character that starts as a villain and gets a redemption arc and we all know how lily feels about those, and plus worse, he gets to kiss Rey at the end of episode 9.

To Lily Orchard Ben Solo is, like all the characters she hates, like all the characters she hates that get dedemption arcs, something that flies in the face of her beliefs; The belief that if you do something morally reprehensible you do not deserve a second chance. Ben Solo, Starlight Glimmer, etc etc etcs. All these characters did bad shit and inspite of that people around them saw the good in them and felt them deserving of a second chance and lily can not stand it Thats the whole thing.

Lily sees Kylo Rens return to Ben Solo as "more than he deserves." Anything less than being humiliated in front of his own allies, shoved into the ground, dragged across the pavement and gravel and shown how wrong his beliefs are, and how much he's hurt people and then being made to pay for his misdeeds at the business end of a lightsaber is the only thing Kylo Ren deserves in the eyes of Lily orchard and anything less than dragging it out as long as possible before writing "Kylo Ren felt the lightsaber blade activate, the blade driving itself up into his chest, through his heart and the last thing he saw before his conciousness faded was Rey's smiling face full of pleasure in his demise" would be seen as not worth lily's time.
Kylo Ren being a complete butt monkey of a villain is a feature. Not a bug.
 
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so you're saying that you have the mentality of a 12 year old writing fanfic, makes sense glad that you agree

if they don't bother you, why whenever it is accused of this do you make a whole superficial text defending yourself as there is no way that any of your characters are Mary Sues?

the truth is that Lily don't know how not to do Mary Sues because she think that putting trauma, abuse, miraculous and exclusive training fixes 100% of the problems when the way she write it just makes them even more special and lovable

and it’s not just the character who is the problem, it’s the world that suffers the most where everything doesn’t work without Sue’s divine presence, incompetent and stupid characters, plot without coherent development, scenes of pure self-indulgence, lack of purpose and consequence of actions "do what you want".

what is the logic of this comparison?
if I liked to eat shit mixed with medical waste, it doesn't matter if I say "It has it’s charm. It satisfies it’s very particular craving." I'm not going to convince anyone to eat either, just so I look more enlightened..

and this is Lily's primary argument when she has no ability to articulate a logic: "if you care about that you are just stupid and childish" but do all the mental gymnastics to say that "enemies to lovers" is toxic and bad
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so you're saying that you have the mentality of a 12 year old writing fanfic, makes sense glad that you agree

if they don't bother you, why whenever it is accused of this do you make a whole superficial text defending yourself as there is no way that any of your characters are Mary Sues?

the truth is that Lily don't know how not to do Mary Sues because she think that putting trauma, abuse, miraculous and exclusive training fixes 100% of the problems when the way she write it just makes them even more special and lovable

and it’s not just the character who is the problem, it’s the world that suffers the most where everything doesn’t work without Sue’s divine presence, incompetent and stupid characters, plot without coherent development, scenes of pure self-indulgence, lack of purpose and consequence of actions "do what you want".

what is the logic of this comparison?
if I liked to eat shit mixed with medical waste, it doesn't matter if I say "It has it’s charm. It satisfies it’s very particular craving." I'm not going to convince anyone to eat either, just so I look more enlightened..

and this is Lily's primary argument when she has no ability to articulate a logic: "if you care about that you are just stupid and childish" but do all the mental gymnastics to say that "enemies to lovers" is toxic and bad

idk if this is just me but i dont think having to do chores counts as abuse. Its a pain sometimes but its a learning experience. Lily’s just lazy+ a wuss
 
Plus, if you were a little kid and your parents forced you to go shopping with them that was probably because they had no money to hire a babysitter or didn't had anyone to leave you with, so it was either taking you to the mall where they could watch you and keep you safe or leave you alone at home where you could hurt yourself. The alternatives then are trying to be responsible parents or neglectful ones.

Of course Liliana "my hybrid mutant thing I call my daughter despite the fact I never do anything to actually raise her only exist to be cute around me" doesn't understand something so simple and has to reduce it to "evil authority figure for telling me what to do."

I do agree that more parents could be more understanding that doing groceries is not a fun time for little kids, especially if it's going to last for five hours, but I wouldn't call that abusive either.
 
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so you're saying that you have the mentality of a 12 year old writing fanfic, makes sense glad that you agree

if they don't bother you, why whenever it is accused of this do you make a whole superficial text defending yourself as there is no way that any of your characters are Mary Sues?

the truth is that Lily don't know how not to do Mary Sues because she think that putting trauma, abuse, miraculous and exclusive training fixes 100% of the problems when the way she write it just makes them even more special and lovable

and it’s not just the character who is the problem, it’s the world that suffers the most where everything doesn’t work without Sue’s divine presence, incompetent and stupid characters, plot without coherent development, scenes of pure self-indulgence, lack of purpose and consequence of actions "do what you want".

what is the logic of this comparison?
if I liked to eat shit mixed with medical waste, it doesn't matter if I say "It has it’s charm. It satisfies it’s very particular craving." I'm not going to convince anyone to eat either, just so I look more enlightened..

and this is Lily's primary argument when she has no ability to articulate a logic: "if you care about that you are just stupid and childish" but do all the mental gymnastics to say that "enemies to lovers" is toxic and bad
Having a hyper-competent main character isn't a problem. Having a hyper-confident main character isn't the problem.

It's the 'easy wins'. If every win is easy, why should we get invested? Even if your character does technically have constant 'easy wins', there should be something interesting about it. Let's be real: you know going into almost any story that the hero is going to win, but that being a foregone conclusion doesn't make the journey any less interesting. Having some kind of struggle or showing how clever that character is is what makes conflict in a story.

And of course the best stories usually really press that main character and push them to their limit. It's only through adversity that we see how strong a character actually is. Destroy them, that we may see their potential.

Meanwhile, a world where everybody agrees with Mary Sue and she's always right and she never struggles just isn't an interesting story, period. And this isn't to say you can't have a hyper-competent extremely powerful character, but never introducing anything that makes them struggle -- whether it's a physical enemy or their existential boredom or having everybody around them just be fed up with their shit so they have adversity to bounce off of -- means that you're just watching somebody else's power fantasy play out.

Uh-huh.

As a reminder, Lily thinks homework is a form of abuse. Having to do boring things with your parents? A form of abuse. Your dad being able to open your door whenever he wants? Abuse. People not giving her constant attention and sometimes prioritizing themselves? Abuse.

Anything that even vaguely inconveniences Lily? Abuse.
 
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