Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

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While I don't know much about ginger To make a prediction, I know enough about Mikalia to say that Lily probably did the same thing to her.
nice. Any examples by any chance? Because this might be a decent insite for people who are new to reading this/maybe others just genuinly dont know/havent picked up on it yet?
 
nice. Any examples by any chance? Because this might be a decent insite for people who are new to reading this/maybe others just genuinly dont know/havent picked up on it yet?
Mikalia say recently something along the lines of wanting people to not harrass lily, but instead her. (I think it's in this thread somewhere.)
 
The reason Lily is probably being quite is because she directed her patreon discord to mass dislike and spam Silver yesterday on his newest video with a white knight comment about KP.

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There's nothing I love more than to hold people to their own standards. Most of you who have interacted with me here know this.

There are a few things I find funny about this Silver Quill thing, aside from the fact that Silver Quill was someone that Jerry fellated for years until... something idk

Firstly Jerry has prided himself on having an absolutely immaculate fanbase (despite him saying that they're worse than Nazis and that their interactions with him make him physically unwell) because he filters them all the time, so they don't fall into the same pitfalls that other fanbases do, like they don't mob other people like those brony, alt-right, drama-centric, and Joshscorcher fanbases do, they don't leave hate comments- OOPS! Until Jerry tells them to do exactly that!

The other thing I find funny about this is that Jerry has repeatedly ridiculed people who were upset that they couldn't leave feedback on his videos, especially those directly scrutinizing them. So it's funny to me that he's totally not upset that Silver Quill is moderating his comment section and deleting hate-spam. But hey, if you had something of value to say, a disabled and vestigial system along with a moderated comments section is of no consequence to you. It only is if you're the kind of idiot who needs a Dislike button to make a disagreement for you, or you're a frothing bigot. Isn't that right, Jerry? I'm sure you can't disagree with your own words.
 
Lily's started posting on her tumblr again. Asks are still shut off.
the 4 posts a reblog of a pic of Rey, some shit posts, and this.
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There are a few things I find funny about this Silver Quill thing, aside from the fact that Silver Quill was someone that Jerry fellated for years until... something idk
take your pick between; Silverquill having a hang up about how mlp didn't really have any male characters that weren't villainous/antagonistic or a punchline, Associating with Josh Scorcher, or Siding with Josh and Dr. Wolf during the whole Toonkritic debaucle and refusing to privately debate her regarding the subject.
 
Lily's started posting on her tumblr again. Asks are still shut off.
the 4 posts a reblog of a pic of Rey, some shit posts, and this.
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take your pick between; Silverquill having a hang up about how mlp didn't really have any male characters that weren't villainous/antagonistic or a punchline, Associating with Josh Scorcher, or Siding with Josh and Dr. Wolf during the whole Toonkritic debaucle and refusing to privately debate her regarding the subject.
>straight women
sorry hetros r/prequelmemes boys called dibs on ewab years ago

Also we talkin' bets on how long till she can't stand not sending herself asks and opens it up again
 
Chapter 37 has yet another scene of "Lilly tries to strawman people's criticism and yet still makes her OC sound worse.". Mon Mothma calls a meeting to discuss the very obvious point that, if they ally with Alaina's fleet, said fleet that already overpowers the republic could very easily turn round and conquer them like Sith historically do, as well as pointing out that the last empire rose out of a sith pretending to be an ally. As well as generally pointing out that it's very understandable why people might be very suspicious of a Sith Fleet. To ease her fears, Mothma asks for some show of good faith or insurance to secure any sort of alliance.

Alaina's response? Stomp her feet and cry about how unfair it is that people are judging her for 'just existing' and that the Republic have to prove to HER that they're not hostile. After all, they still have yet to eradicate the Hutt Cartels, so they must be terrible... You know, just ignore that she hasn't done that with her fleet either. And then proceeds that to make herself look even worse by informing Mothma that the last jedi, they keep pretending Rey's a jedi here, now has the sith name Darth Iris. Nothing insidious or shady here!

“Her title is Darth Irus. And she will always be recognized as such among the Sith,” Aliana said with a look of pride.

The horror reached its zenith on Mothma’s face. “...You… you’re not even an actual Jedi are you?”

“I am,” Rey insisted, her composure and resolve never wavering, “Because I am the last of the Jedi. On that basis, I decide what does and does not make a Jedi. It is as I told you, advisor, any Jedi Order that is remade after this war will not be the one you are familiar with.”

“So we have a Jedi trained by a Sith and with a Sith title. No promise of the Jedi order’s return. And a fleet that has very unkind opinions of the Republic,” Mothma scowled, turning to Marek. “And you believe her when she says she isn’t interested in war?!”

Rey decides what a jedi is because no other jedi is in the room to disagree. Even though she knows nothing about jedi teachings or their order, and that Leia was actually trained as a jedi and force ghosts exist to decide what jedi are and there's a bunch of other still living jedi still in the galaxy. But they should totally trust them, because Starkiller says that the force says they're cool... Even though the story has made a point that the force hates these two.

And then dispensing all subtly and excuses, Alaina literally exits the scene telling them all that they can't challenge her decisions because she's stronger than them and will destroy the Republic if they even think of going against her. Our hero is flat out, without any room for interpretation, saying that everyone has to do what she says or she'll murder innocent people.

“Were she much older, or perhaps the apprentice of a greater Sith, your suspicions might have merit, Mothma,” Marek said. “But it is as Admiral Holdo says. She is just a kid, barely any older than I was when I was a pawn of Vader. I do not believe that she has any aspirations of conquest. She just wishes to be .”

Mothma exhaled sharply through her nostrils again, her head lowered in frustration. “And what if you’re all wrong.”

“Well then you get to say ‘I told you so,’” Marek responded with a wry grin. “We all know how much you love to do that.”

“Mothma, what if you’re wrong?” Amilyn asked. “What if it turns out that you’ve been vilifying a grieving kid for nothing?”

“Then at least the Republic will not fall from my mistake!” Mothma shot back. Too sharply for her words to be rooted within reason. The others around her appeared taken aback by her words, cold and cruel as they were, before some looked at her disapprovingly.

And by this point it's not baseless speculation. Alaina literally just threatened the Republic and said she'd attack them if they slightly displease her. So yeah, I'm with Mon Mothra's decision to have Alaina arrested. Of course, Alaina immediately has the Republic subdued and Talon brutally slits Mothra's throat after Alaina implies that her mother, a sith, was actually solely responsible for the rebellion and thus the New Republic. And of course, the Republic does not take the murder of their officials as an act of war.

Also, everyone keeps saying that Alaina is just a kid and hasn't shown any greater ambition for power. She's in her fucking 30's. And I just realized this segment of the chapter is just a shittier version of a segment in the SWTOR Kotet expansion where a rouge senator tries to take over the Player's new alliance faction and you promptly either imprison or execute her on Odessen.
 
She is just a kid,
Plot twist: Aliana is actually a genetically recombined (and shockingly Force senstivie) goat in the shape of a person.

This is such trash. Lily wants to have Aliana be a badass Sith Lord with all kinds of crazy power. Lily wants Aliana to be a sensitive flower who just needs love. Lily wants Aliana to be strong and forceful. Lily wants Aliana to be the one who needs comfort. Lily wants Aliana to have amassed an entire offscreen fleet and place herself as their commander. Lily wants Aliana to just be left alone and not actually strive for power.

This is a common trait you see with Mary Sue characters, honestly. Since the character is the center of the story, they're whatever the plot demands them to be, while the narrative twists itself into knots trying to tell the audience (in contrast to what they're being shown) what the character is like. They're contextualized by the narrative, and then the author pulls in all the secondary characters (who are only able to talk about the Mary Sue despite everything else happening around them) so they can explain to the audience what's going on. It's a really skeezy tactic that tries to sidestep making the character in question look self-centered by praising themselves by instead having everybody else praise them, or else prove to be 'bad people' whose tell was that they weren't praising the character. Or can only redeem themselves by doing so. It makes Mary Sue still seem humble while everybody else gets to say 'but actually she's a super-powerful Force user', 'but actually she could destroy us all in a heartbeat', 'but actually we're being really unfair she's just a k i d'.

And with all the stuff Lily demands that Aliana be, she still always falls back on the fact that she's a 'traumatized kid' and nobody understands her and they're all being so mean to her she's just a KID. Who is... approaching thirty.

I really can't understand how anybody reads this story and doesn't question this statement in particular, or why it keeps being repeated. If Aliana were Rey's age and her mother's death were more recent I could understand this, but she's an adult and her mother died a decade ago. When she was already late into her teenage years she and Darth Mayrik are described as being 'a mother and child'. Yeah, technically true, but I think she was supposed to be fifteen to seventeen when that happened? And is now twenty-seven. At what point is she no longer 'a kid'? At what point does 'traumatized child' stop being an excuse for her murdering people, threatening to murder people, and throwing temper tantrums because she isn't allowed to murder people?
And I just realized this segment of the chapter is just a shittier version of a segment in the SWTOR Kotet expansion where a rouge senator tries to take over the Player's new alliance faction and you promptly either imprison or execute her on Odessen.
Lily aped a cool scene that she liked without putting any thought into the context around it? Say it ain't so.
 
Chapter 37 has yet another scene of "Lilly tries to strawman people's criticism and yet still makes her OC sound worse.". Mon Mothma calls a meeting to discuss the very obvious point that, if they ally with Alaina's fleet, said fleet that already overpowers the republic could very easily turn round and conquer them like Sith historically do, as well as pointing out that the last empire rose out of a sith pretending to be an ally. As well as generally pointing out that it's very understandable why people might be very suspicious of a Sith Fleet. To ease her fears, Mothma asks for some show of good faith or insurance to secure any sort of alliance.

Alaina's response? Stomp her feet and cry about how unfair it is that people are judging her for 'just existing' and that the Republic have to prove to HER that they're not hostile. After all, they still have yet to eradicate the Hutt Cartels, so they must be terrible... You know, just ignore that she hasn't done that with her fleet either. And then proceeds that to make herself look even worse by informing Mothma that the last jedi, they keep pretending Rey's a jedi here, now has the sith name Darth Iris. Nothing insidious or shady here!





Rey decides what a jedi is because no other jedi is in the room to disagree. Even though she knows nothing about jedi teachings or their order, and that Leia was actually trained as a jedi and force ghosts exist to decide what jedi are and there's a bunch of other still living jedi still in the galaxy. But they should totally trust them, because Starkiller says that the force says they're cool... Even though the story has made a point that the force hates these two.

And then dispensing all subtly and excuses, Alaina literally exits the scene telling them all that they can't challenge her decisions because she's stronger than them and will destroy the Republic if they even think of going against her. Our hero is flat out, without any room for interpretation, saying that everyone has to do what she says or she'll murder innocent people.



And by this point it's not baseless speculation. Alaina literally just threatened the Republic and said she'd attack them if they slightly displease her. So yeah, I'm with Mon Mothra's decision to have Alaina arrested. Of course, Alaina immediately has the Republic subdued and Talon brutally slits Mothra's throat after Alaina implies that her mother, a sith, was actually solely responsible for the rebellion and thus the New Republic. And of course, the Republic does not take the murder of their officials as an act of war.

Also, everyone keeps saying that Alaina is just a kid and hasn't shown any greater ambition for power. She's in her fucking 30's. And I just realized this segment of the chapter is just a shittier version of a segment in the SWTOR Kotet expansion where a rouge senator tries to take over the Player's new alliance faction and you promptly either imprison or execute her on Odessen.
so now Lily just admitted that she has no arguments against the criticism of Aliana that she receives and that the only reason she doesn’t suffer consequences is because of her power and, even if they are not a threat to her they still do her sad and that is mean.

also the Jedi are officially dead in this fanfic, Rey who decides what a Jedi is and she only thinks what Aliana says to think and Aliana hates the Jedi
seriously Lily has to stop this narrative of "just reinventing the Orders of the past" her Siths did not change their ideals and clearly not their methods and nothing of the Jedi was used, ideals thrown away and replaced by those of the Sith
Plot twist: Aliana is actually a genetically recombined (and shockingly Force senstivie) goat in the shape of a person.

This is such trash. Lily wants to have Aliana be a badass Sith Lord with all kinds of crazy power. Lily wants Aliana to be a sensitive flower who just needs love. Lily wants Aliana to be strong and forceful. Lily wants Aliana to be the one who needs comfort. Lily wants Aliana to have amassed an entire offscreen fleet and place herself as their commander. Lily wants Aliana to just be left alone and not actually strive for power.

This is a common trait you see with Mary Sue characters, honestly. Since the character is the center of the story, they're whatever the plot demands them to be, while the narrative twists itself into knots trying to tell the audience (in contrast to what they're being shown) what the character is like. They're contextualized by the narrative, and then the author pulls in all the secondary characters (who are only able to talk about the Mary Sue despite everything else happening around them) so they can explain to the audience what's going on. It's a really skeezy tactic that tries to sidestep making the character in question look self-centered by praising themselves by instead having everybody else praise them, or else prove to be 'bad people' whose tell was that they weren't praising the character. Or can only redeem themselves by doing so. It makes Mary Sue still seem humble while everybody else gets to say 'but actually she's a super-powerful Force user', 'but actually she could destroy us all in a heartbeat', 'but actually we're being really unfair she's just a k i d'.

And with all the stuff Lily demands that Aliana be, she still always falls back on the fact that she's a 'traumatized kid' and nobody understands her and they're all being so mean to her she's just a KID. Who is... approaching thirty.

I really can't understand how anybody reads this story and doesn't question this statement in particular, or why it keeps being repeated. If Aliana were Rey's age and her mother's death were more recent I could understand this, but she's an adult and her mother died a decade ago. When she was already late into her teenage years she and Darth Mayrik are described as being 'a mother and child'. Yeah, technically true, but I think she was supposed to be fifteen to seventeen when that happened? And is now twenty-seven. At what point is she no longer 'a kid'? At what point does 'traumatized child' stop being an excuse for her murdering people, threatening to murder people, and throwing temper tantrums because she isn't allowed to murder people?

Lily aped a cool scene that she liked without putting any thought into the context around it? Say it ain't so.
if Lily had the intention of making Aliana the villain of this story it would save much of the narrative for something good even
because there is no way for anyone to look at these last chapters and say that this is not the beginning of a Sith coup with a lot of foreshadowing
but Lily insists that Aliana is both the victim and too powerful to be challenged, that only screams projection
 
Plot twist: Aliana is actually a genetically recombined (and shockingly Force senstivie) goat in the shape of a person.

This is such trash. Lily wants to have Aliana be a badass Sith Lord with all kinds of crazy power. Lily wants Aliana to be a sensitive flower who just needs love. Lily wants Aliana to be strong and forceful. Lily wants Aliana to be the one who needs comfort. Lily wants Aliana to have amassed an entire offscreen fleet and place herself as their commander. Lily wants Aliana to just be left alone and not actually strive for power.

This is a common trait you see with Mary Sue characters, honestly. Since the character is the center of the story, they're whatever the plot demands them to be, while the narrative twists itself into knots trying to tell the audience (in contrast to what they're being shown) what the character is like. They're contextualized by the narrative, and then the author pulls in all the secondary characters (who are only able to talk about the Mary Sue despite everything else happening around them) so they can explain to the audience what's going on. It's a really skeezy tactic that tries to sidestep making the character in question look self-centered by praising themselves by instead having everybody else praise them, or else prove to be 'bad people' whose tell was that they weren't praising the character. Or can only redeem themselves by doing so. It makes Mary Sue still seem humble while everybody else gets to say 'but actually she's a super-powerful Force user', 'but actually she could destroy us all in a heartbeat', 'but actually we're being really unfair she's just a k i d'.

And with all the stuff Lily demands that Aliana be, she still always falls back on the fact that she's a 'traumatized kid' and nobody understands her and they're all being so mean to her she's just a KID. Who is... approaching thirty.

I really can't understand how anybody reads this story and doesn't question this statement in particular, or why it keeps being repeated. If Aliana were Rey's age and her mother's death were more recent I could understand this, but she's an adult and her mother died a decade ago. When she was already late into her teenage years she and Darth Mayrik are described as being 'a mother and child'. Yeah, technically true, but I think she was supposed to be fifteen to seventeen when that happened? And is now twenty-seven. At what point is she no longer 'a kid'? At what point does 'traumatized child' stop being an excuse for her murdering people, threatening to murder people, and throwing temper tantrums because she isn't allowed to murder people?

Lily aped a cool scene that she liked without putting any thought into the context around it? Say it ain't so.
so now Lily just admitted that she has no arguments against the criticism of Aliana that she receives and that the only reason she doesn’t suffer consequences is because of her power and, even if they are not a threat to her they still do her sad and that is mean.

also the Jedi are officially dead in this fanfic, Rey who decides what a Jedi is and she only thinks what Aliana says to think and Aliana hates the Jedi
seriously Lily has to stop this narrative of "just reinventing the Orders of the past" her Siths did not change their ideals and clearly not their methods and nothing of the Jedi was used, ideals thrown away and replaced by those of the Sith

if Lily had the intention of making Aliana the villain of this story it would save much of the narrative for something good even
because there is no way for anyone to look at these last chapters and say that this is not the beginning of a Sith coup with a lot of foreshadowing
but Lily insists that Aliana is both the victim and too powerful to be challenged, that only screams projection
As a writer who's aware of those narrative problems, both of you're right; Aliana is literally a Mary Sue. That's why even a 5-years old kid can dislike this utterly trashed character.

In my 4 years of experience constantly practicing my narrative and the ideas of the plots that I make, I reached the point where my protagonists may initially take a somewhat advanced position, such as military training or be a formidable warrior at a young age but that is compensated with some serious problem that affects even their decisions in the short or long term. This same advice can be applied vice versa with antagonists.

The process of writing a great narrative is currently tedious. I'm not talking about other books because I've never read more novels for the sake of my main plot. The process of writing a great narrative is currently tedious. I'm not talking about other books because I've never read more novels for the sake of my plot. It will sound somewhat ridiculous and even somewhat crazy but believe me I know what I'm talking about.

Some people just can't write something that they endorse or foreshadow all the time, which is why these situations happen. Lily is nothing more than your typical fanfic writer (including that MLP rape atrocity) but I feel like just defending her Star Wars fanfic crap is so ridiculous. The point where it asks her anonymous Tumblr askers to re-read her obnoxious paragraphs is because it doesn't know how the hell to answer, and it's funny.

I'm using a Translate machine since this time is a bit too long
 
Lily wants Aliana to have amassed an entire offscreen fleet and place herself as their commander. Lily wants Aliana to just be left alone and not actually strive for power.
Again, with her insistence on calling herself a nazi, associating herself with the history of nazis, but going "But actually, I've decided I'm the good ones"; you wanna be left alone? STOP PROUDLY CALLING YOURSELF A SPACE NAZI.

Speaking of the fleet, wanna make Aliana even more shady? You know how it was mentioned before that she's opened her legs wide enough to be a one woman whore house? Apparently a lot of the people she fucked were her subordinates, including Talon (one of her many apprentices).
seriously Lily has to stop this narrative of "just reinventing the Orders of the past" her Siths did not change their ideals and clearly not their methods and nothing of the Jedi was used, ideals thrown away and replaced by those of the Sith
And just begs the question of "If you're going to literally throw out everything that makes 'x', 'x'. Why use 'x'?" Just start your own damn force religion, or just become a damn sith. Is it ever stated in this fic why Rey wants to be a jedi and not just another sith? Or the 'Dark Jedi' label Aliana keeps giving to Kylo?
 
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So Aliana's Grandmother was able to copy and download 80% of the jedi database and they have it on the family ship
Somehow, Aliana's mother regularly got into fights with Darth Vader and Galen Marek, held a position on the senate at some point, was responsible for the rebellion and somehow managed to end up alone with her daughter where she was murdered by luke skywalker.
but not one person in this family is a mary sue.

oh and while I'm grabbing images from the comment section
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Another aspect I don't think people mention enough is that Mary Sues many times reveal a great deal about the worldview and thought process of the person who created it. This can easily be seen in how Lalaina is just going around punishing people for not liking her and having everything she wants without doing anything for it, but also on how she makes other characters look at the Sue.

The fact that she wants to put the narrative that Lalaina is just "a traumatized kid" while having the exact same age as Liliana tells me that is also like Liliana percieves herself and wants to be percieved by others. She can't be hold accountable for her actions because she is traumatized and she needs all the love and comfort anyone can provide for her because she is just a kid, and a kid cannot be expected to take responsability for their actions, right? She never does anything wrong because she feels bad sometimes about stuff that happened decades ago (bringing back the "she keeps having the same argument with her mother") and she needs protection, and anyone who denies her any of it is a cruel mean abusive person that deserves the worst.

All of this was predictable if you know a little bit of her pattern of behaviour, but I guess it doesn't stop being disturbing this is exactly the kind of delusion Liliana runs herself into the moment anyone wants her to be responsible for anything.
 
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She's been reading the threads again. How many times have people here mentioned her writing out of spite in the past week? Maybe I've been deprived of content and I'm looking too deep but its fishy to me.
Should this be a joke or did Lily just want to mention it?
because there's no logic in showing this conversation besides Lily wanting to point out "Luke kissed his sister once, so why can't I fuck my sister several times and marry her"
 
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Should this be a joke or did Lily just want to mention it?
because there's no logic in showing this conversation besides Lily wanting to point out "Luke kissed his sister once, so why can't I fuck my sister several times and marry her"
Its especially wild because on top of the questions of "who saw this event take place and decided to document it" and "why is this documented at all" one must wonder "who benefits from knowing Leia Organa kissed her brother on the lips twice before either of them knew they were siblings"

It's such a trivial fact that in a historical context means nothing.
 
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Its especially wild because on top of the questions of "who saw this event take place and decided to document it" and "why is this documented at all" one must wonder "who benefits from knowing Leia Organa kissed her brother on the lips twice before either of them knew they were siblings"

It's such a trivial fact that in a historical context means nothing.
so this confirms that Fury's historical archives are just Wookieepedia.
I wouldn't be surprised if I had crew commentary and making-ofs noted at this point too
 
i dont know what's worse... Lily Fetishizing lesbians or her obsession with incest all of a sudden. God i hope she never has children her future child doesnt end up a lesbian.

I don't know like at least chris chan was only mildly/implied to be racist once or twice, this is ongoing behavior by an autistic spaz who isnt even as much braindead as other cows on this website. Like god damn.

Like she has 3 incest stories to her name. Stockholm (it counts because fucking your adopted child is considered incest across the saner side of the world), this StarWars fic, and Mad House. Fool me once and all that.

Also her asks are still off. She's lasting longer than i thought. Either out of spite/stubbornness or something else is up. my lizard brain's theorizing maybe something is happening behind the scenes but all seems normal on ginger's and mikayla's tumblrs/socials...
 
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