+Fluttershy is watching Applejack and Rainbow having a snowball match. Apple Bloom is there to ask Fluttershy why Rainbow “walks like Big Macintosh and Princess Twilight’s brother does”. Apple Bloom even comments that it seems like if she kicked Rainbow on the crotch she would react like a guy does and Fluttershy tells her is not funny.
+She doesn’t really respond the question beyond “Well, Rainbow is how she is… I suppose some would think of it like that”. Next Apple Bloom question if Rainbow is gay because she wants to ask someone more experienced about her relationship with Sweetie Bell. Eventually Apple Bloom tells her about Sweetie Bell trying to lick her tongue while kissing and Fluttershy explains to her what french kissing is, how it’s not really how the French kiss (really), how it’s a “spicy kiss” and how her body can take the germs from another’s tongue and she shouldn’t worry about that. Apple Bloom keeps asking her about french kissing and Fluttershy keeps telling her about “you do have to keep in mind that your breath and your partern’s breath will be a part of the equation, especially the flavours in your mouths. But if you can get past all of that, it’s lovely”, which Apple Bloom finds pleasant at least.
+Next Apple Bloom ask if it’s normal that sometimes she wants to see Sweetie Bell naked. Fluttershy say that is just her hormones kicking in and she find Sweetie Bell sexually attractive, but because Apple Bloom still doesn’t get it, even though it’s nothing that complicated, Fluttershy rephrase it as “You’re growing up into more of a woman and becoming more aware of sex”. Apple Bloom doen’t know about sex between two women so Fluttershy starts to explain to her about sex toys used to simulate a penis and how you can use your fingers and mouth to stimulate your partners. She does add that whatever sexual thing they decide to do has to be done consensually. Apple Bloom wants to talk to Twilight and Ascentia too, but Fluttershy advice her not to because their methods are not for everybody.
+The snowball match finishes and Apple Bloom goes to talk to Rainbow in private. She asks her if she is gay and shen Rainbow say yes, Apple Bloom asks her how did she knew. Rainbow just say that she looked in the mirror one day and that is how she knew she was gay… so I guess the implication is that she felt sexually attracted to her reflection. Apple Bloom wants to know because she thinks she might be gay and not only wants Sweetie Bell to take off her clothes, but she has also been watching the porn magazines that Big Mac saved under his bed. Apple Bloom is scared because of his granny. She mentions how she got very upset very fast when there were rumours of Applejack hooking up with Rainbow, and for some reason this is the momento the narration decides to do a little PSA about the older generation being bad.
“Rainbow was partially reminded of some older ponies slipping out racist comments around ponies like Zecora. Not so much mean, but holding attitudes that they were probably raised with that were inappropriate all the same.”
+Why does she even say ponies there? This is a human AU. Maybe in this universe humans are called ponies, I don’t know.
+Rainbow give this piece of advice that wouldn’t really help a preteen on this situation at all:
“Kid, your granny’s a bit of an old soul. Old school, traditional raising kinda thing,” Rainbow waved it off, “I understand you guys want to respect her wishes and all… but that’s a two way street. And not to say any real disrespect to dead people or oldies who are at death’s door, but think about it. She’s gonna be gone sometime, then it won’t even matter. Life’s too short, kid. Don’t turn it around to please someone else when you’re unhappy.”
+The phrase "old soul" usually refers to someone that is wiser than their actual years, especially if they are youngr. It doesn’t apply to a 90 year old granny.
“Hey, come on, no need to be scared! You make it sound like she’s that grandmother from that book Fluttershy had me read once, where she locked kids in the attic…” Rainbow chuckled, hugging her back, “If you’re gay and you feel this way about Sweetie Belle, just go for it. If you have to, just be honest with her about how you feel. It’s scary, believe me, I know. Took me well over a decade to even come clean to Fluttershy, and she’s my best friend, I tell her everything. Still, it made me realize that it feels a lot better to be honest about how you feel. If your ol’ grandma’s gonna take it badly, that’s her problem. Just take it and keep your chin up. We can’t help who we want to be with, sleep with, and all that jazz, anyway.”
“I know, but… I’m afraid Granny won’t love me anymore…” she said, her eyes watering a little.
“You’re her Granddaughter, she’s always loved you. If she won’t love you because you’re gay, then she never loved you at all. Kid, it’s gonna be okay,” Rainbow assured her, “Besides, you’ve still got AJ, Big Mac, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Fluttershy, me, and the rest of us. You’re not gonna be alone, kid. Promise.”
+That book Rainbow is talking is a reference to Flowers In The Attic, the first on a series of novels that became infamous for treating dark subjects and especially because of the incestuous relationship between the older brother and older sister. I don’t know if Liliana actually read the book or just heard what is about, but if she did I wouldn’t be surprised if she didn’t wanted that to become well known.
+This happens:
“I… I wanna… sleep with Sweetie Belle,” she blushed.
“Everyone wants to sleep with Sweetie Belle. Sweetie Belle’s adorable,” Rainbow chuckled.
+I’m becoming increasingly uncomfortable with the use that “adorable” is given in this fic. Ignoring the red flag, Apple Bloom then asks Rainbow if she can fuck Sweetie Bell at her house because they won’t have privacy at hers. Rainbow accepts, like a creep. Apple Bloom is ever so grateful.
+Getting back with Fluttershy, Rainbow tells her about what they talked about and the plan of Apple Bloom, adding “Don’t want my house being a haven for teenage lesbians to roll around naked in… actually on reflection I’d be very okay with that.” Taking advantage of the fact Fluttershy still thinks this is all a joke, she adds:
“I wouldn’t try anything, I’m not a complete perv,” Rainbow chuckled, “I’d just enjoy the view… and maybe take pictures. No wait, that’s illegal, forget that. I’d just enjoy the view.”
+Fluttershy comments that Rainbow surely wished she could do something like that when she was about Apple Bloom’s age, and Rainbow goes on a little rant about how all girls dressed too slutty and were throwing their tits and asses to her face all the time when they were younger. She mentions how she would openly defend the boys who were creeps having erections on the middle of the class because she understood what was that like, what a problem was to be surrounded by females and not get aroused. Maybe those guys were lesbians too! That would have explained it better why they couldn’t contain themselves!
+Anyway, Rainbow keeps talking about how hot it’s for her the idea of having two preteens that now they are saying are 14 because I guess Liliana forgot what she said before fucking at her house. Fluttershy say that it’s fine, they are just fantasies and as long she doesn’t break the law, which she is sure Rainbow will never do, it’s okay. Spoiler alert: she does break the law.
+“So you’re saying you have no problem with me oogling AJ’s little sister?” Rainbow asked.
Fluttershy smiled, “I said I didn’t want to share you. I didn’t say you couldn’t look. Just don’t make her uncomfortable about it and it’ll be fine.”
Rainbow’s eyes widened, “Damn Shy, you’re darker than I am,” she chuckled, “Next thing I hear, you’re gonna be asking me to describe my twisted fantasies.”
“We can save that for next time,” Fluttershy kissed her nose.
“I don’t know whether to kiss you, call the cops, or both,” Rainbow snickered, “Oh… we’re awful.”
+Everyone talks a lot about Rainbow’s pedophilia and such, but I don’t think people appreciate enough the way it’s treated on fic. Fluttershy is basically a MAP supporter here and a enabler too at that.
+Later they are at Rainbow’s house. Fluttershy is horny and kissing Rainbow.
“This must be what my dolls felt like when I was little and smacking their faces together,” Rainbow panted, biting at Fluttershy’s neck, “Just screaming ‘NOW KISS!’
+This is the second time this analogy happens on this fic. The first times was used by Ascentia refering to Rainbow and Fluttershy. Now Rainbow uses it about herself and Fluttershy because she is a narcissistic plagiarist creep.
+They have a dirty talk in which Rainbow suggest that Fluttershy fucks the critters so they listen to her and Fluttershy say that no, she prefers tentacles and Rainbow say this is cliche. Fluttershy now says that because she shared one fantasy, Rainbow has to do it. This is the moment in which Rainbow confesses that she has masturbated fantasizing about the Crusaders before and Fluttershy, to add more insult to injury, says she already suspected that.
“You don’t have to worry. I mean, it’s not something you should ever say at the dinner table or even to the ones in question, but it’s all right. Just be glad you’re doing that and not molesting them.”
Rainbow covered her eyes with her hands, “It’s embarrassing, though. Alright, your turn again.”
+Having sexual fantasies about kids you have known since they were toddlers is “embarassing”. Not sick. Not disgustig. Not wrong. Embarassing. Let that sink in.
+The next fantasy of Fluttershy is to have wings and being able to fly, as a reference to the wings her pony-pony version has unlike this pony-human version. Next is the turn of Rainbow and you won’t ever believe what it is.
“...Incest.”
“Really?” Fluttershy asked, “I thought you hated your parents.”
“Not my actual family,” Rainbow scoffed, “Just… what if scenarios. Like what if you and I were sisters? What if I was Cheerilee’s daughter? What if…” her words were covered by a very unconvincing cough, “...was actually my sister instead of just… you get the idea.”
Fluttershy giggled, “I see what you mean. I’m an only child, but… it certainly is something interesting to think about. Oh, but if we were sisters… I think we might’ve done this a long time ago.”
Rainbow blushed, “Oh really? How do you figure?”
“If we were close since we were kids as friends, I can only imagine we’d be closer if we lived under the same roof together,” Fluttershy nuzzled her neck, “Playing doctor… taking baths together, growing up together… learning about our bodies…”
+Sounds familiar?
+Fluttershy gets on the fantasy and she makes this whole scenario about how their parents would find out and they would get punished, but they still couldn’t stop seeing each other at their backs until they got caught a second time. Then they would get separated as Rainbow is send to a relative’s home and Fluttershy is so sad, missing my only and wonderful sister, and everything we’ve shared”, until they are all grown up and their parents understand that they made a mistake by keeping them appart so now, in order to compensate them, they are going to pay for a incestuous wedding. The final fantasy, that is from Fluttershy, is to take classy nudes and the scene ends.
+We move now to Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom having a date. Apple Bloom tells her that she wants to have sex, something Sweetie Bell is all up for because she read some porn books of Rarity and thinks she knows what to do, but she reacts less enthusiastically when Apple Bloom tell her that they were going to have sex on Rainbow’s house.
“Oh… Okay,” Sweetie Belle squirmed a bit, “I don’t know, what if she watches us? ...Sometimes I see her looking at me, or any of us….with that weird look in her eyes… The same looks I see her giving Fluttershy… Are you sure it’s safe?”
“What?!” Apple Bloom was genuinely surprised, “Are you sure? I’ve never noticed that before…”
“I know it sounds weird, but trust me… she does that!” Sweetie Belle nodded, “It’s a little creepy… I mean, she looks at Fluttershy like she wants to eat her alive...okay, wait, bad comparison! Kinda like she wants her bad and like she’s on top of the world. When she looks at us, it’s like… I don’t know, like we’re candy or something. She doesn’t do anything and she doesn’t say anything, but I feel kinda weird… Still, I guess it’s nice she’s letting us use her place!”
“Well… if you don’t feel safe going there, we don’t have to,” Apple Bloom said dejectedly, “But I don’t think it’d be safe doing it at my house… or yours…”
Sweetie Belle shook her head, “No, we can! I’m sorry, I just kinda felt a little weird. I know she’s not a pedophile, anyway. So… when do you want to do this?”
+They’re both very excited about losing their virginities. Apple Bloom tells Sweetie Bell that she loves her and Sweetie reciprocates, so they kiss and are find out by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
+What comes next is a long and boring scene in which I think Liliana had one big “this is how the show should have handled it” moment, so I’m going to summarize it the best I can:
+Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon took a picture of them kissing and threaten to tell the granny. Apple Bloom is terrified, but Sweetie Bell keeps mocking them and angering more to the point that she just yells for Rainbow and Fluttershy, who are conveniently nearby, to intervene. They come and tell the girls that is not a good thing to do. Then Twilight and Ascentia appear. Ascentia is a creep.
“You’re not going anywhere,” Twilight growled, “You young ladies have a lot to answer for.”
“Oooh! Are we gonna ‘Interrogate’ them?” Ascentia asked delightedly.
“They’re 14, Ascentia,” Twilight said with a scowl.
“...Killjoy.”
+Instead of doing what I imagine Tara would have done, Ascentia talks to Diamond Tiara in a way that convinces her that if she doesn’t stop bullying Apple Bloom her family will go bankrup and Rainbow name drops the title of the chapter while praising her. There is a lot more dialogue that I don’t care about in which all these four adults verbally gang up on these two little girls, psychoanalyzing Silver Spoon to the point she is too ashamed to want to bully again.
“Does this count as bullying kids?” Ascentia asked.
“Who the fuck cares,” Rainbow snarled.
+They discover that Silver Spoon has daddy issues and that is why she hangs with Diamond Tiara, and Diamond Tiara doesn’t know how to be affectionate because nobody is affectionate on her house and they are saying all of this in the middle of the street. This all ends with Sweetie Bell telling them to be friends and they accept.
“If ya want mah opinion,” Apple Bloom chimed in, “I’m perfectly fine with that. We’ll be yer friends. Everyone deserves a second chance.”
“Or in your case a ninety-sixth,” Ascentia commented,
+Twilight smacks her on the head. Ascentia complains that she had a concussion, pressumably from the last chapter where she had her head hit a wooden table and then somehow still had an orgy. I don’t think Liliana knows what a concussion is.
+The bullies apoligizes. Sweetie Bell tell them that they have a lot of issues and they should go to a doctor, although I don’t know why if they already spilled everything right there and then. She also gives them an assigment to each write a list of all the things they like about the other and read to each other on Monday. Then Fluttershy tells Diamond Tiara to go talk with her father. Then they go and everyone goes back to what they were doing. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell have this conversation to end the chapter.
“Still worried Rainbow might be watchin’ us?” she asked.
“Nah, I’m not scared!” Sweetie Belle waved it off, “She’s known us since we were a lot younger and she’s always been awesome to us. I don’t think we have anything to worry about! First thing tomorrow, it’s going to be just you and me, for our big day!”
+To be young again and not know what grooming is.
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