It's less proofreading not being up to par, and more writers having no sense of scale, economics, strategy, physics or even basic mathematics in general. Some of the writers at FASA were pretty autistic and able to do at least some of the necessary number-crunching, but by and large they were more interested in writing fun things like 'Mech fluff and story beats. So whenever anything even remotely related to actual hard figures came up they mostly just shrugged and said "i guess this sounds good lmao", and the proofreaders (also writers) just went "lol, lmao".
From the description it sounded more like that the word actually financed the development of new Mechs with the caveat that the first runs were sold to them exclusivley and then it would be open for everyone. Yes if I were the host nation I would also raise questions on how they are financing it or why they need so much. On the other hand if someone offers to finance Mech development on their own dime then who is the nation to look a gift horse in the mouth? Plus let's not forget how involved the Blakes were with the Free Worlds League: BA development, Omni fighter development etc. Comstar was never so deep into a nations military complex.
On the other hand just look how fast Comstar managed to pluck the holes in their roster after Tukayyid. The Guards lost 40% of their men and women on Tukayyid (and most likely many more due to defections) but they rebuild within 15 years to almost pre Tukayyid levels. How does that work? Especially when you loose Terra not even halfway through and almost every nation is rebuilding shattered forces. Probabaly the reason it's called FASAnomics. And another example: after the FedCom civil war both the AFFS and the LAAF were depleted. but the FM 3067 gave a much more rosy picture for the AFFS then the LAAF in terms of manpower of each unit (and that only after a few months after the war had ended) I get the feeling the proofreading wasn't always the best
I accept it's not EconomicTech: A Game of Resource Management in the 31st Century and the writers have kept numbers fuzzy forever (I think there's a passage or chart in either TRO: 3025 or House Davion about how many 'Mechs were produced a year and that was a close as FASA ever got to trying to give us hard numbers) and that's perfectly fine. I just wish there a little bit of logic behind it. If there are only X number of places in the IS that can make Mechs in the first place and each of them are putting out current models, old models, and entirely new designs all the time (because TROs have always been the game's best sellers), something just doesn't add up. Either add new Mech factories or say GM is no longer producing Maruaders at all on Kathil so they can produce SwordMech or something in the fluff.
I guess it's all academic though. WoB did what it did, the Jihad storyline came and went, the Dark Age, and now the collapse of the RotS has done the same, and there's a whole new storyline and details and illogical points for us to pick apart and roll our eyes at. We've been doing it since the 20 Year Update came out in 1988.
BattleTech: meet the new
boss storyline, same as the old
boss storyline.
Funny thing: that was the long term goal. In fact, the Manei Domini were developed with the express purpose of countering Clan Elementals.
I see two problems though. One is that WoB was starting on the wrong side of the Inner Sphere. So it might make sense to try and take over and consolidate control over the I.S. first before tackling the Clans. Of course, most of the Inner Sphere was like, 'Yeah, hard pass on being ruled by toaster worshippers'.
The second -- and this is purely speculative -- is that the WoB may not have known where the Pentagon Worlds were. Which means they could push out the Clans, but they'd have a much harder time chasing them down and ending them for good.
And they DID pulp the Dragoons. Hard. Remember, they suborned multiple merc commands and staged an attack both from outside Outreach and inside it. I think the Dragoons were reduced to a reinforced battalion by the time the dust settled.
WoB had to know exactly where the Clan Homeworlds were. Operation Serpent had been in 3060 and the Jihad had kicked off in Autumn 3067. Even if they hadn't gone with the fleet or it was made public knowledge afterwards, WoB ROM was so amazingly special and infallible that it had to have gotten the info from somewhere.
As far as the Goons go, I meant eliminated them even before Waco dropped on Outreach. Despite being Wolf's Dragoons and having their own factory and Clan Mechs and author protection, they were only five regiments. Even if it wasn't an out and out military action against them, with their declaration of defending the Chaos March against WoB, WoB could have just kept throwing small force after small force at the Goons and simply eroded them down to nothing long before Waco did his thing.
Herb said Waco's action wasn't prompted by WoB. It was going to happen and they were backing it by putting those other merc units on Outreach, ostensibly to be hired but in reality for the upcoming action, and Waco simply jumped the gun. Then the Goons went to Mars and were all but wiped out there because The Master just happened to be there at the time and thought they were there for him and that was one of the things that scared him into starting the whole Jihad, followed by telling Jamais to scare the IS states back to the SL 2.0 after the Whitting Conference.
Now, I have no problem with getting rid of the Goons. I never liked that they went from one regiment that showed up out of the blue to five and always seemed to rebuild better than they were before. I wish the Waco Rangers hadn't been wiped out because I liked them ever since I read the write up of them in the original Mercenary's Handbook. They could have been a cool foil to the Goons throughout the Jihad and DA instead of being erased on Day One of the Jihad, but that's water under the bridge. I just wish the writers had gone through with it and wiped them out once and for all on Mars instead of leaving them a core to rebuild from.
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that would have been an event to kickstart the Jihad.