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- May 28, 2016
You're the one who came in claiming everyone only likes it because everybody here is thirsty, how exactly would you improve it if a fanfic of a fanfic offends you so?
Fine, let's go piece by piece since everyone is sperging out over this. Remember, this will give you all the material you need to whiteknight and win this girl's heart.
Let's start with the first 20 pages.
Page 1: Oh look, Liquid is the truly good Chris. Never seen this done before. NEXT!
Page 2: "Solid Chris, eager to have his ego validated..." Yes, Chris has an ego and is unoriginal. Nothing new to see here.
Page 3: Okay, we're setting up Rosechu. This is somewhat interesting.
Page 4: Rosechu whining about stuff. Is this going to become a reoccuring theme?
Page 5: Okay, this is Chris's tagline for Sonichu. I'll give her credit, at least when Trickie says this is someone's story and nothing less, she means it.
Page 6: Okay, this kind of explains why Rosechu is kinda useless in the actual comics.
Page 7: Remember what I said at page 4?
Page 8: And back to page 4 again...wait, I'm sorry. This shows that the comic "has heart".
Page 9-12: Better animation for a scene that already happened in the original, so not much to say here. At least it looks like Rosechu quickly moving her head, unlike the CWC version where she looks like she has two heads.
Page 13-14: OH MY GOD QUIT BEING SO DAMN WHINY, ROSECHU!!!! Is this what Rosechu's story is; re-readng Sonichu with her mopey internal monologues?
Page 15: I will give Goddess Trickie some credit here, this is exposition done right. If this were Chris, the textwalling would be in full effect.
Page 16: I should be rooting for Rosechu to convince Kel not to prostitute her to the extreme, but all that whining before...
Page 17: Okay, remember how people used that whole pointed-tail bit to troll Chris...and how funny that was. Yeah, this took all the funny away from that with just more whining.
Page 18: Kel apologizing.
Page 19: Sonichu is gone. Please don't tell me Rosechu is gonna mope some more.
Page 20: She didn't! Thank GodJesus and the Bear!
Shall I go on?
Wouldn't be surprised if his ideas were either "I wouldn't bother" or just incredibly stupid that even Chris would have to ask "Why?".
So, because I'm not writing fanfics, I don't have the right to criticize other people's? By that same right, I have to like every movie I see, since I would only have the right to criticize a film I don't like if I were a filmmaker.