🎭 Dramacow Dillin Thomas / DHTDillinThomas - The JEB! of "sonic analysts", whines about Sonic ships, gets in fights with every commentary e-celeb
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You know The Cyclone, Dillin Thomas' web comic? He kept shilling it for a while but I ignored it then. It looked hackey at first glance and not all that impressive. Now after I reading it, I can say I was very wrong, this web comic is much worse.
Color's are awful, it's got way too much black and dark grey which makes looking at the art nigh indecipherable and makes most scenes illegible. The white contrast helps but it can't stop the monotone colors from bleeding into each other. The art design is way too simple to be this dark and the repeating, scratchy, screentones do not help at all.
Characters and their dynamics are boring and one-note. Functionally Lukas is the serious one while Drake is the snarky one. This is a dynamic that everyone and their mother has seen a million times over. It wouldn't be so bad if we got to know them a little bit more but for whatever reason there's no characterization except for the most cliché of banter.
Pacing is slow, even after 5 chapters we are never told much of anything about this world and its stakes. The only things the average reader could even know about the story right now is that there are monsters, and there's these two guys named Lukas & drake that fight the monsters. Overall chapters 1-4 of The Cyclone is edgy, monotonous slop.
The only standout part is Chapter 4, where we are introduced to the creepypasta-esque game show host Mr. TELL.E and the exciting and manic energy he brings, if only due to the fact the rest of the web comic so far is mind-numbing in both execution and comparison.
Dillin I know you are reading this and I want you to tell your artist to quit with the lazy close-up shots of the eyes, the solid dark greys, and get better screentones and textures. That house in chapter 1 looks like it was made out of scat.
Also the word balloons could be paneled better. Chapter one is the most egregious example as much of the early dialogue would only need about a single page or three, not mothercucking ten.
Color's are awful, it's got way too much black and dark grey which makes looking at the art nigh indecipherable and makes most scenes illegible. The white contrast helps but it can't stop the monotone colors from bleeding into each other. The art design is way too simple to be this dark and the repeating, scratchy, screentones do not help at all.
Characters and their dynamics are boring and one-note. Functionally Lukas is the serious one while Drake is the snarky one. This is a dynamic that everyone and their mother has seen a million times over. It wouldn't be so bad if we got to know them a little bit more but for whatever reason there's no characterization except for the most cliché of banter.
Pacing is slow, even after 5 chapters we are never told much of anything about this world and its stakes. The only things the average reader could even know about the story right now is that there are monsters, and there's these two guys named Lukas & drake that fight the monsters. Overall chapters 1-4 of The Cyclone is edgy, monotonous slop.
The only standout part is Chapter 4, where we are introduced to the creepypasta-esque game show host Mr. TELL.E and the exciting and manic energy he brings, if only due to the fact the rest of the web comic so far is mind-numbing in both execution and comparison.
Dillin I know you are reading this and I want you to tell your artist to quit with the lazy close-up shots of the eyes, the solid dark greys, and get better screentones and textures. That house in chapter 1 looks like it was made out of scat.
Also the word balloons could be paneled better. Chapter one is the most egregious example as much of the early dialogue would only need about a single page or three, not mothercucking ten.
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Maybe someone can review that piece of work
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If it’s not behind a paywall I’ll do it.
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Good very good
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I'm pretty much sure I've said all the critique that needs to be said for now. If you go any further you'd only be picking nits out of a mediocre web comic. No need to make a video or whatever for it. Honestly I mainly wrote that whole diatribe in my previous post because the art style annoyed the hell out of me.
The Cyclone - Chapter 1: Bump in the night
After being experimented on by a powerful corporation Drake Scott is now a wanted man. Unable to go back to living a normal life he is recruited to fight crime and deal with seemingly unstoppable monsters.
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eveyrone has suffered enough with itI'm pretty much sure I've said all the critique that needs to be said for now. If you go any further you'd only be picking nits out of a mediocre web comic. No need to make a video or whatever for it. Honestly I mainly wrote that whole diatribe in my previous post because the art style annoyed the hell out of me.
The Cyclone - Chapter 1: Bump in the night
After being experimented on by a powerful corporation Drake Scott is now a wanted man. Unable to go back to living a normal life he is recruited to fight crime and deal with seemingly unstoppable monsters.www.webtoons.com
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Oh god I'm not even past the first page and I already recognize at least 5 unaltered Clip Studio Paint presets.I'm pretty much sure I've said all the critique that needs to be said for now. If you go any further you'd only be picking nits out of a mediocre web comic. No need to make a video or whatever for it. Honestly I mainly wrote that whole diatribe in my previous post because the art style annoyed the hell out of me.
The Cyclone - Chapter 1: Bump in the night
After being experimented on by a powerful corporation Drake Scott is now a wanted man. Unable to go back to living a normal life he is recruited to fight crime and deal with seemingly unstoppable monsters.
Dis gon be gud.
Editing so that I don't double post.
Firstly I didn't even know there was a comic until a few minutes ago (kinda been neglecting this thread), and I don't know who the artist is nor do I care. I also don't know who Jesse is but he seems like a bit of a faggot. All I know is that Dillin is a sperg who probably put some retardedly short deadline on the artist in question and that's probably why things look like this.
These are some vegetation and brush presents from Clip Studio Paint, which is an art program used for many comics.
How many of them can you spot in this first panel?
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I don’t know about that because his and Jesse’s videos criticizing other webcomics like Sonic Legacy are also pretty boring and nitpicky. I feel like I’d rather read this than watch those again.
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Well cow tipping is not encouraged here. But of course Dillin would freak out and go ape shit with the delete button.
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"Hey guys, Dillin here and today we're talking about a group of PEDO DEFENDERS who are part of the group "Jesse's Boys", you know the backstabber Jesse Pajamas that I proved was a pedophile in my previous video linked in the description below, go take a watch.
Anyway so Jesse and his "boys" decided it would be a good idea to "tip" a lolcow because they apparently think that I'm a lolcow. No one is a lowcow except for you Jesse, and all of your pedo defenders over at the Kiwi Farms."
I'm gonna start Dillinposting anytime he does dumb shit like this.
"Hello Dillin, I am MosileZ, one of Jesse's boys. I have been ordered by supreme hugecock JessePajamas to call you gay and a retard. Hope I hurt your feelings! Got to go back to the Jess cave and commit more acts of pedophilia! MUHAHAHAHAHA!"
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Okay fags, read the rules. Dillin deletes shit all the time and none of you archive anything, resulting in people posting dead links with posts like "guys watch this dillin is sperging out"
Remember, Archive Everything
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Edit to avoid double posting: someone decided to bring up Dillin in Rogue's stream last night and this is what he had to say
Transcript:
formula the prod said quit being an asshole to Dillin Thomas
formula you can suck my fuckin dick I don't give a shit
Dillin messages me the other day he's talking about the jabs that I fuckin make Dillin's just a stuck-up asshole
and I hope he fucking hears this you got pissy with me when I was sick and moving
you made a fucking shit fit go look at your fuckin kiwi farms thread and tell me your shit's doing
good asshole
fucking prick
and game pro- oh not game for delta I'm sorry I like you I like you I'm not mad at you
but formula the prod go look at that fucking kiwi farm sir you'll see how much of a fucking retard that Dillin is
He keeps going but I'm too lazy to write it out.
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"Hey guys! You know at first, I didn't believe the things Dillin said about Jesse, but now I totally 100% do! All it took was Dillin reuploading the same video five times for me to realize that there's NO WAY anyone can be wrong about something they repeat constantly! When I looked over the evidence originally, I was too stupid to realize that despite none of it proving Jesse guilty of any crime, Jesse is a bad bad bad man and Dillin is a good good man because Dillin has 50k subscribers and only comments that support and agree with him! What, he deletes the comments calling him out? LIES AND SLANDER! Dillin Thomas is the greatest youtuber of all time and Jesse is just a jealous pedophile rapist!" Is that the result he's after? lol!