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prettybadmagic has updated her puppy play fic after a multi-week delay and the update of that 'is there buttsex in heaven/felt like a sexy poop' underage cowboy fic. The lines for this fic include:
- cuddling you is hitting like molly
- Girly, he often thinks of himself, especially when there's a picture of his wimpy nub right below that god-rod
- he wants him balls deep inside him, deep enough to lobotomize via the pelvis
- his cock was manufactured in the Perfect Cock Factory
- nothing compares the genuine cock and balls experience
- The prettiest pup on the planet. With a pretty face and a very nice tongue and the most perfect cock imaginable.
- I was not bullshitting. I admire your cock to an extreme degree. Your stroke game is unbeatable, same with your size. A perfect fit, I think. You are a wonderful lay.
> cuddling you is hitting like molly
*is like hitting molly
> Correspond with the friends that live exclusively in his phone
The trans gooner that has bottom dysphoria lives exclusively through Discord? You don't say.
> Slighting someone for failing to react to a meme in time
Who does this? Best you'll get is 'you're a latefag' or 'get new material, faggot'. But that's too 'bro-coded' and we can't, like, have that can we dudebros?
> So many nudes. So many levels of hardness. There are pictures that read as painting quality, soft dong, statuesque posture
Along with the syntax being weirdly written (there should be a 'with' in there), if I read 'soft dong' again it might be time to bring out It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia memes.
> The crotch of his boxers clearly dark with grool
Ovulating already despite having the big F tubes yanked? Wow.
> He loves true nudes, cunt out, cock out, slick and desperate and comparatively hairy
He's hairy because he later admits he has bottom dysphoria because his roid clit is nowhere near the size of Jayce's 8 inch Magnum Dong:
> Lifetime of dysphoria and dysmorphia
When even the dick size screams 'YWNBAM', you know it's over.
> Girly, he often thinks of himself, especially when there's a picture of his wimpy nub right below Jayce's god-rod
You said it, not me. Imagine having a mental breakdown because a natal male's penis - that you love being penetrated with - is swinging in your face and is the totality of all things male and masculine, things you will never have and never will be. Your gender is already up for discussion when such a blatant display of the very thing that categorizes you as 'other' is, again, right in your face (and down your throat, and rearranging your guts, etc).
> Viktor's circadian rhythm is thoroughly adjusted to the bedtime wank
Thank God you don't have a day job, then.
> Daddy hasn't made an appearance in their new dynamic, not until this point
> Borderline littlespace
There's that pedophilia play PBM is known for. 'Unblooded girlchild' rears its ugly head again.
> The daddy stuff...woof
Wait until I call PETA. Little Latino here is going to meet Goku in Buttsex Heaven.
> He doesn't know if he can be what Jayce wants him to be
So on top of the gender dysphoria, he feels he cannot be a 'true dom' because there are certain things on the checklist he can't scratch off. It wouldn't happen to involve him not being male, would it?
> Omental
The omental is the fat sheath under the abdominal wall, near the peritoneal folds. Why is he talking about the state of his digestive tract?
> He prefers bottoming
You don't say. The trans man who gets upset when reminded he doesn't have an actual dick takes the receptive, natural role that is expected of his sex? Wow, we are really smashing gender binaries and roles here, man!
> In college I was kinda slutty because I thought I had to be
Implying that bisexuals are natural sluts should be the role of the CDC, not a progshit author who wanted to stick it to 4chan.
>Experiencing liberation from a compulsory masculine dom complex. Being bisexual and cis, this phase seems to be hitting him a bit late
It's fucking funny that she's talking about 'compulsory' roles when she wrote that Viktor prefers bottoming because he believes that is his role due to having female genitalia (it isn't said, but come on, we all know what this is reach around heterosexuality) and in M4M, he also bottomed because we could not break those gender stereotypes of him being a greasy gooner with fungal feet that had lube 'pour down his thighs like diarrhea'. You are THE definition of shoving people into compulsory roles, bitch.
> He wants Jayce balls deep inside him, deep enough to lobotomize via the pelvis
As much as people love imagining Jayce with a horse cock, alas, he's only 8 inches. take it up with OhNovi who wrote him with one.
> This is the sanitized kiddy kind; an ultra hot guy and a preternatural amount of suaveness
There's that pedophilia-lite bullshit. This woman is obsessed with trying to channel Nabokov.
> He unburdened himself of his reproductive cargo three years ago
Wew, thank God we don't have to have abortion and/or pregnancy conversations on top of DDLG and puppy play kinks! That would just be weird.
> I'm feeling really subby
I wonder if his author has ever spoken to an actual gay or bisexual man in her life. The faghag projects too much.
> Dog mode: engaged
Oh, we got our new 'My Dom Triggers Are Activated' line!
> He can't feel a single scrap of social anxiety when it's him and a handsome man and all fours
I wonder what would happen if this guy was balding and had low T like most puppy play guys are. Would it hit the same way? Absolutely not.
> Bisexual button-ups
Maybe someone of the rainbow brigade can tell me what the fuck this means. Bisexual has a look, now?
> There are a couple extra plugs and a dildo so large it makes Viktor blush to look at it
He's trying to recreate Goatse for his Instagram followers. One appreciates the hustle.
> It's like making out with a canine
Insert "white girls fuck dogs" joke here.
> The sheer amount of territory his handspan covers - entire hunks of Viktor's torso - turns Viktor into a wiltier version of himself
He's just uwu so smol.
> He's a little puppy. Not a Don Juan
You do realize that 'Don Juan' references a sexual libertine that seduces WOMEN, right? Nothing like showing that progshit racism!
> Far too much blood pounds in his cock for him to concentrate
It's only 2 inches, relax. You don't need a Victorian fainting couch.
> Jayce is a natural with his tongue. An oral savant
More like an autistic savant.
> In minutes Viktor is writing, cock pounding
It's 2 inches.
> He descends for a sloppy, pussy-juiced kiss. Viktor does not love his own taste
It says a lot when your pussy juice turns you off. Does it taste like sauerkraut?
> Fueled by the sensory maelstrom of skin on skin, of sexy noises, of Jayce's throbbing cock against his
I can't get over Viktor's pussy juice tasting nasty, sorry. You're not graduating to buttsex heaven with that.
> It's your breeding instinct
We're smashing gender roles and masculine/feminine dynamics...by having the penis owner engage in his 'breeding instincts' with a vagina owner. I am very smart.
> Gummed up with grool and piping hot
I just think of a melted gummy bear.
>Nothing compares the genuine cock and balls experience
You don't fucking say! Almost as if you're admitting that EVERYONE craves cock, even those who use exclusively dildos! Ain't that something?
> The prettiest pup on the planet, with a pretty face and a very nice tongue and the most perfect cock imaginable
Keep him away from dog breeders, then, otherwise that cock is getting jorked 24/7.
> Give me all of your pups
You're sterile.
> His cock twitches for a staggering minute and a half
This is the same author who thought 5 mL was an 'obscene amount' of semen when that is the average. Someone send her some penile studies on how long a dick actually lasts.
> With a small amount of manstink pushing through the artificial perfume
On top of the dog fetish, underage fetish and shit fetish, she's got a stinky armpit fetish. Honorary Jeet confirmed.
> I was not bullshitting. I admire your cock to an extreme degree
Just don't compare that roid clit to it, otherwise he'll mentally spiral. But eight inches seems to be the agreed upon perfect size. It's not dioscums' 13 inches, but it'll do.
> To experience such synergy with another human being, to be able to tolerate their smells, their fluids, the exposure and commingling of genitals - it is rare
You just admitted your pussy juice tastes bad. Kudos to Jayce for ploughing through it; it must remind him of abeula's cooking.
> Now somehow he's in this handsome man's dog den, fucked stupid, fucked with hearts in his eyes
White girls fuck dogs, what can I say? You're never beating the allegations.
> Clock full of feelings
More like COCK full of feelings, amirite?
> He's just drawing wild assumptions based on how straight-passing and conventionally handsome this man is
This cunt has no room to talk about 'straight passing' when she was talking about 'forced masculinity' earlier in the fic. Muscular men are straight-passing now? Someone has never heard the Village People's 'YMCA' - it's literally about men fucking in the showers. Gay and bisexual men are big on fitness. It doesn't shock me that the same author who used 'white-passing' for a visible mixed Latino mutt is pulling this shit.
> They will be bound together without having to run to the courthouse and get the government involved
If you don't want the government involved, why did you want legal marriage, then?
> Very sleek and stylish but masculine, powerful
I thought we made it clear that being overtly masculine was too much of a struggle for our puppy-loving bisexual babe here; that he was too 'straight passing'. Now it's nicely masculine because it's the most fitting adjective to a guy with muscles of a god. Pick a fucking Judith Butler lane and stick with it.
The best part about this shit? In the prior chapter PBM was talking about 'internalized homophobia'. What kind of internalized gender shit is this?
> He does not take pet ownership lightly
Nice, so when is he getting his rabies shots as well as SPAYED and NEUTERED?
> Whether it is their partnership, or their dynamic as dominant and submissive
Sounds awfully binary if you ask me.
> Second best are pelvic harnesses that showcase his mouthwatering junk
So do the other troons and poons in that BDSM club feel genital dysphoria or is it for our 'I identify as a dom' lad here?
> Roping will end with groping
Put that on a T-shirt right now.
> Orally services his cock, happy to please the organ that worked so hard to titillate the masses
Now, compare that with Viktor having the 'soul sucked from his dick'. 2 inches compared to 8, and that's only length. What soul is he sucking out of there? Glep from Smiling Friends?
> They experiment with things like squirting and daddy kink
> Viktor can indeed become a human geyser
Porn really has rotted these people's brains, because if women could squirt like geysers, sex wouldn't nearly be as painful. If he's squirting like a geyser, send him to wildfire country. He'd be a portable fire truck.
> Pop culture to politics
I want to know their opinions on race, IQ, and the Jewish Question.
> Discussing a rather unglamourous scientific journal about the rise of colon cancer in their age group
Oh I fucking wonder why a group that dresses like dogs and pisses on the floor has a huge problem with colon cancer. The jokes fucking write themselves.
> The harder throb of his cock
It's 2 inches.
> Who ever said missionary was vanilla?
All this talk about shit being vanilla when you are literally writing a male fucking a female is rich. Here we have a progshit talking about 'straight-passing' and 'bisexual buttons' and how 'cis men' are limited by expectations of masculinity before turning right around and deciding the hunky Adonis God with an eight-pack and an eight-incher is the penetrator who must always remain masculine while the vagina owner occupies some grey area where they want to be a Dom and yet suffer gender dysphoria over their tiny roid clit being compared to a well-endowed male. This Colleen Hoover bitch cannot read the room or understand how retarded she actually sounds.
No one cares someone SPAY AND NEUTER THAT DON JUAN DOG ALREADY
This next work comes from an anon who clearly didn't want her main associated with pedophilia despite taking great pride in having it beta-read and enjoyed by fellow pedophiles. She had to get fact-checked because she thought hockey had quarters, not periods, showing that she is an Amerimutt. The age of the child involved is 10-years-old. Right off the bat in the A/N the author writes that it is not consensual, but that the child 'enjoys it anyways'.
Sup, bro, sup? We're totally manly man brodudes here, bro. Now watch as a woman who knows nothing about hockey talk about shoving a hockey stick up a 10-year-old's vagina.
> He's 10
You will never guess how these characters treat said 10-year-old.
> His chest is warm and also surprisingly squishy
Guys, it's OK to write a pedophile provided he's young, virile and hot with squishy pecs. Don't you want a pedophile with squishy pecs?
> Wraps his large hands around Viktor's chest and easily lifts him
He was already seated on your lap. did you really need to pick him up to move him?
> Maybe it has something to do with what's poking into his hip. Does Jayce have his cellphone in his pocket?
Given that the first age at consuming pornography is 11 (the average), and that the basics of reproductive sex-ed are starting now, the kid should at least be aware that that is male anatomy that is poking into him. They love going the sheltered route because it makes the 'virginity taking' so much worse.
> Get a room, you two
For some reason, the author thought this was a perfectly acceptable thing for someone to say. Who the fuck says that about a 10-year-old and a 17-year-old? Are we speaking from experience, here?
I don't know what's worse: the fact the kid isn't aware of what an erection is, or the fact that fights are common in hockey. This is how I know the author is American because almost every Canadian knows, even if you don't watch hockey, fights are common. If hockey is your national sport or a common past time, then it shouldn't shock the kid either because he'd see other kids do it.
> Jayce's fingers presses directly against Viktor's clit
Just a normal thing for a 17-year-old to do.
> Positive he didn't pee himself
DO NOT tell me that this author is going to write about a 10-year-old squirting. Why do these pedophiles have such an obsession with it?
> Pinches his clit
Ouch. Someone should grab this author's clit and yank. Make her howl for an ambulance for even thinking this was a normal topic to write about.
Hey did you know there's a play-by-play commentator in the comments of this fic? Meet sunsetmountains, who's here to talk about all things CUTE and ADORABLE about a 10-year-old getting the Tai Domi treatment.
Pedophilic comments made by older male teens are DELICIOUS and you are clearly too vanilla to understand that, chud:
She just loves it and it's so cute! Just delicious to talk about a 10-year-old instigating sex with a significantly older teen!
DELICIOUS talking about a 10-year-old's burgeoning sexuality! No, I do not belong on a sex offender list this is FICTION and fiction doesn't affect reality! Forget the fact that I just went YUM! at a child's vaginal secretions!
> Super cute
It'd be SUPER CUTE and DELICIOUS to see you swing from a tree. I hear the tongue pops out and makes it look like you're doing a silly face.
They're all joking and hehe'ing about this as if it's the most normal thing in the world. Yes, let's crack jokes about minors getting fucked by near-adults. Don't call us Epstein-adjacent because he targeted REAL PEOPLE, CHUD
Chapter 2 has the author's note that this is all about 'making the author's dick hard'. Pedophile pooner confirmed. Sorry-not-sorry your rapist wasn't the heartthrob you wanted him to be in your dreams. Uncle Lester didn't have a six-pack 
> Sexually abusing minors makes my dick hard
You don't have a dick, bitch. I'd tell you to rope but you might just crash through the ceiling and hurt someone else. Might I suggest antifreeze?
> He's also an excellent sniper
He can't wait to shove a slug into a well-oiled chamber.
> How good it felt when Jayce touched him and how he licked his fingers clean afterwards
Now, you might notice that this is a precocious ten-year-old who reads books like no tomorrow. You might also notice that this is a female child who is pretending to be male. Who enables that, I wonder?
> Only big kids and adults are allowed in there
*Males. Going into the point made before, this is a 10-year-old trans child who has never been taught about sex differences and why males and females are kept separate. He doesn't know what a penis is - let alone a male body - but has decided, with the help of parents and family members, that he is 'born in the wrong body' and just has 'different parts' for a boy. Girls at this age are already started to experience leers and crude comments from boys about their budding bodies; in this case, it's a 10-year-old girl who may or may not be on puberty blockers watching a naked near-adult shower and talk about how jiggly their butt is.
Again, this kid doesn't know what a penis is - and the author later writes that he does read anatomy textbooks so he would know what it is from a scientific standpoint - but he knows he's 100% trans and a boy trapped in the wrong body. How would he know that if he doesn't know the fundamental differences between male and female bodies? He apparently knows what a clit is because Jayce pinched it in Chapter 1, but he doesn't know what male genitalia is? Girl.
> It's good to learn about different body types
> Especially as a boy in the 'wrong' body
and how would a ten-year-old know that? You mean to tell me that this kid KNOWS that they aren't female and that they are truly male, and yet has no idea what a male body IS and what parts come with it? 'Boys have a penis, girls have a vagina' was apparently never taught to this child.
> Kids your age don't normally get to learn about this kinda stuff
No but he knows he's trans, for some reason. The math ain't mathing here. Kids learn early on that males and females are different and have different parts, and that is why they are kept separated. It does not have to be sexual. So how the fuck are you squaring the circle that this female child knows she's a boy, yet doesn't KNOW what a male body is? What?
> Reads anatomy books
> Does not understand basic human anatomy
You do not have to view pornography to know what human anatomy is. I knew what a penis and vagina was at that age. Girls are taught early on that boys tend to be more aggressive and will get mean once they hit Tanner Stage I.
> It's not blood, is it?
The kid knows what T shots are but not semen. I would not say this had the kid not read anatomy textbooks. That is basic reproduction right there.
> The way they hang makes them look like a nuisance
He won't mind if I snip them with garden shears, then? Nothing like a set of balls to showcase in the Stanley Cup.
> He's been told that by doctors over the years
See my repeat points made about the trans kid thing. Knows nothing about male bodies, but 'knows' deep down that they are male. 200 IQ.
> Your hands are smaller than mine
He's just uwu so smol.
> This might be his only chance to learn about typical boy's bodies in person
...did you not read anatomy textbooks? 10-year-olds already know the differences between girls and boys because they start self-segregating, especially during sports. When boys hit 12-13 and puberty hits, you can FEEL the strength difference. I also have to ask how this kid knows he is trans WITHOUT the Internet; someone had to teach him and he had to go on a forum (Reddit) for it. The math ain't mathing.
> Was that wrong of us?
Yes. Gotta get 'em young before they start getting independent. That is the basis of grooming. It should be emphasized that this author wrote this scenario to 'get her dick hard'. You do not have a dick, you frog-voiced, limp-wristed pooner. I know you are female because even male pedophiles write differently. You cannot get NAFLD fast enough.
Milkshakes are also a food metaphor for a male's ejaculate.
You'll never guess who the fellow pedophiles are liking this fic:
Mistress_of_Vos is known on Twitter for pissing off Meltwt and saying Mel doesn't sell while she's proudly declaring her pedophile status. SCARABORTION is another one and is a mod for the Dadson week. Every single one of these people needs to Long Way Down, pronto.
Chapter 3 has the author talk about a minor's 'fat pussy lips' and how they totally aren't a pedophile because they believe in consent!
> He's always liked guys on the androgynous side
That is to say he likes jail bait.
> More than a little bit problematic
You don't fucking say. He later says that a 10-year-old has 'bedroom eyes' and that he's 'too beautiful to resist', all things pedophiles assume of their young victims. Reminder these people don't want minors in their spaces yet are fine sexualizing them for masturbation purposes.
> No child should be that alluring
No person should be thinking about a child sexually, let alone be celebrated and encouraged to write about it.
> Viktor has a fat pussy
> Feel those fat pussy lips against his bare skin
This is up there with 'protuberant pussy lips' from that child idol fic. He was around the same age in that one, too.
> Forgot he would be completely hairless, and that somehow made it hotter
Yep, that's another pedophile tell: how much they hate pubic hair. I make fun of the Tarzan pubes a lot, but at least they are a sign a sexual maturity. If a man is obsessed with hairless genitalia and can't stand it growing back, you have a problem on your hands.
> Viktor was looking at him with fucking bedroom eyes
Pedophile cope right there. But it's OK, he's not a pervert and he stresses ~consent~
> He isn't taking advantage of him
> Whatever other fucked up excuses real pedophiles use to touch kids
'Real pedophiles'. You groomed a minor to touch your penis and used their naivety around male genitalia to do it. You think they give you bedroom eyes on the regular. You are a pedophile. Anyone who talks about a 10-year-old having 'fat pussy lips' should be crushed by a Tiger II tank. I bet the author thought this excused her from her own pedophilia because 'it isn't REAL pedophilia' even though people with a brain know exactly what it is.
These people's votes are worth the same as yours.
A not-so-subtle actor AU and a dig at the showrunners turns into a spicy romance that clearly is not done for diversity points. Author does not realize that the entire reason her ship is popular because of a white man and assumes it's just because of the chemistry.
> Emphasizing his broad chest and wide shoulders
You know a woman wrote this, when the first thing she talks about is how muscly the top is. But we don't know who the REAL men are, no ma'am.
> He still hates that it happened before he even turned 35
I wonder if fucking with your hormones had anything to do with it. Your liver becoming fried from all that testosterone and your bones not becoming stronger because of its alleged superhuman properties are all just flukes, I'm sure.
> The fans are kind of misinterpreting your characters
Why would executives give a shit about this? They only care whether their show is popular enough to be renewed for a new season. They are upset that fujos are seeing their characters are gay? That's been a thing since Star Trek. They cannot control what fans think of them and they later admit this. Why is this even a thing? Oh, I know: it's meant to skewer Christian Linke who said these two were not written to be romantic. It's been a year and they are still seething.
> They're drawing fanart of Jayce and Viktor fucking. Writing stories about it. Making edits to love songs
"They're also drawing cuck fanart of Mel and calling her a nigger but we don't talk about that. NO NIGGERS IN OUR SLASH!"
> Your characters are just friends!
Uh huh, and who wrote the script?
> They are soul mates. You wrote it yourselves. You say it's platonic
Yeah, this is absolutely a dig at Christian Linke. One year later and they are still mad their white-led ship isn't canon and ended with the two becoming a pile of ash.
> We celebrate all kinds of diversity here
> Picks a white (wo)man to be their star and disabled representative
> Also makes said white character a genocidal god who uses eugenics to start a mind cult
Funny how that wasn't addressed in the script.
> So tired of producers treating diversity as something to add to avoid criticism
That is exactly what you are doing. 'I am disabled/fat/neurodivergent/retarded therefore you can't criticize me' and, of course, the classic, 'this male character is actually trans and being trans is naturally subversive I am very smart'.
> You're disabled, trans, gay - you fit all the boxes
In which the author doesn't realize she's lampshading herself and admitting how retarded it is. Oh wow, a white pooner pretending to be a gay man has VAGINAL SEX. Very subversive!
> You need to stop eye-fucking him in every goddamn scene
Yeah, you need to shut down those biological impulses that command you to be bred by a well-hung masculine male! We are breaking down gender roles over here by having that WHITE PUSSY get tamed!
> He thought that his feelings were his own alone
If your own directors and producers are telling you that you are eye-fucking your co-star, your feelings clearly are not personal. Pooners always think that they're being so secretive with their emotions when they are just autistic and do not realize that everything they do is on public display.
> Alejandro's strong arms not wrapped around his waist and caught him, pulling him into his chest
Wow! We even have our Victorian fainting couch moment!
> Luka Knows that Alejandro wouldn't have anything against a gay storyline
Yeah, because he'd be fucking pussy, not an anus. It's a 'safe gay' play because he doesn't have to go through all the prep. He can tell himself it's gay because it's 'boy pussy', but he doesn't have to dirty his foreskin with pieces of leftover shit.
> If Luka had to wrap his fingers around Alejandro's throat and talk to him in a purring voice while physically fighting him, he's pretty sure he'd combust
He'd also lose because no matter how you identify, you cannot beat raw male strength. Lil Luka here would be thrown aside like a sack of potatoes and he'd wonder how the fuck that happened. Biology is a bitch you cannot tame.
> He wanted to play into the possibility of their characters being gay simply because he wanted such a relationship represented
The fact the author wanted to stress this, when a canon lesbian relationship exists, as if it inherently has more meaning because one of them is male says a lot about how fujos are so male-centric. Lesbians are worth half that of men, so we need to prioritize the white man (and a half) and his Latino pet who is always secondary to him. For people who talk a lot about diversity and representation, they sure do come off as the bigoted fucks they hate.
> I might have encouraged it
Nothing like an actor encouraging fujo bait. He apparently never learned from the Supernatural experience: the more you cater to fujos, the more they are on your ass for every move, thought and action, and the minute you disagree with them, you are drawn and quartered.
> Even printed out fics
This is a specific reference to ruinthatboy - 'I wonder what it's like to be raped by a Latino - and her fic that was signed by Harry Lloyd.
> I can't breathe
Oh no! Don't become George Floyd now!
> I am supposed to be a better actor
> I have an Emmy
What the fuck does that have to do with you catering to fujos? If you KNEW that that was how they acted, and you care oh so much about your white, disabled, trans co-star, why did you betray your principles? If you're a better actor, maybe you'd have an Oscar instead of an Emmy and would be up there with the greats instead of being on trashy reach around hetslop.
> Gasping as strong hands grip his waist and pull him impossibly closer
But this isn't hetslop, no ma'am, where else would we get such delicious dicking downs from men with big hands, big muscles, and big dicks?
> I never thought, fuck -
Your own producer said you two couldn't stop eye-fucking each other. You fucking thought.
> It's hard because they all start like this, with Alejandro's body against his, dominating him, crowding him, overpowering him
Oh? The trans man wants to be dominated and overpowered by the True and Honest Male? You don't fucking say. Sexual dimorphism stays winning.
> I want to feel it between my legs
You'll notice that these I Can't Breathe and 100% Gay Boys here do a lot of fucking talking despite wanting to get down n dirty.
> Luka expects the usual wave of embarrassment at being exposed and vulnerable in front of someone to hit him
Oh? I thought you were an out and proud trans man who didn't give a shit what people thought. You're a real man with a real male body; why should you feel embarrassed over zippertit scars? Oh, that's right. Because you fucking know, deep down, that you aren't a man, and need a penis-owner to tell you how pretty you are to uplift your fragile ego. Peak female writing right here.
> I want you to suck me off, Alejandro
He said sexily, while pointing to his 2 inch growth.
> I've been wet for you since the day we met
You know a woman wrote this when the dialogue meant to be endearing and sexy sounds like something Colleen Hoover would write.
> At 34 years old, Luka is far from inexperienced. He's had his fair share of lovers
So why did you get all clammed up and shy when your boytoy looked at your chest? Is it because you would be judged for being a lesser man? Did you tell your other partners you didn't have a penis? Things to consider.
> If he'd like it just as much if Luka was yanking it while he fucked Alejandro from behind
Hey, our Gay Boy in Training might not like that. If we're abiding by trad fujo dynamics, the dom top with the beard and big muscles cannot be the bottom, ever.
> You're so big, baby. A perfect mouthful for me
And it's 2 inches. Meanwhile, the actual man meat makes it feel 'as if he's in his throat'. Funny, that.
> Can't sleep with a random man while being in love with another
This is how I know this is female-coded. Men have no qualms about cheating - they just do it. This is coming from the perspective of a woman who wants to be pair-bonded. That pesky biology is talking again, and it ain't coming from the mouth of a man.
> Luka is full-on crying now
If this was an actual gay ship he'd be crying from that 8 inch dick being shoved up his ass. It's a different kind of plunger, you know.
> And he thought you were straight
Fucking a vagina and being attracted to vaginas regardless of how you identify does not make you homosexual. Words have meaning. Luka is not the same sex as Alejandro; he is female. Alejandro is not gay. He's very much a straight man. I will believe he is gay when he gets a tongue up his ass.
> Well, Alejandro, wanna fuck me raw?
I don't remember this in the Lady Gaga song.
>The stretch burns, and he feels so full that it's almost unbearable
Cliché. And you want to tell me that Luka's 'cock' is comparable.
> Fuck, you're so tight
"Fucking you is like fucking a Chinese eggroll when the batter is too dry eugggghh"
> Luka can swear he almost feels him in the back of his throat
Cliché.
> He knew Alejandro would be big, it's kind of hard to miss the bulge -but not even his imagination can do it justice
White pooner with image issues who is sexualized by a band of white fujos is getting fucked by a well-hung male? Holy mother of tropes, Batman!
> Knew you'd want it hard and filthy, sweetheart
He is supposed to be fucking him with abandon. He sure is talking a lot despite focusing on using that big Mexican man meat to breed that white pussy. I've always had a problem with people who talk too much during sex: you are FUCKING, not debating philosophy. Save that for Oliver Thorn!
> They're a reminder that his body is capable of so much more than the pain and discomfort he's condemned to every day
Having a vagina sure does help things, doesn't it?
This again a reference to Christian Linke and how they cannot stop seething at him for repeatedly referring to them as brothers. Nothing is stopping them from shipping their ship, but the fact they want to bully a creator to make it canon, even in their own fanfiction, says a lot about them than the supposed bigotry of the creator. Remember: having canon lesbians wasn't enough. They wanted their reach around hetslop to be GREATER than it.
Hopefully your boys didn't die ending a genocide enacted by the white man in the name of love. This machine (the storyline) kills fascists - even if they're trans and disabled!
Fujofrankenstein has decided to dive into some gothic horror. Don't worry, everyone is legal here - you just have to deal with Final Girl misgendering and Jigsaw puzzles with all the plotting and conniving brutality of Hillary Clinton. It's meant to poke fun at slashers, but ends up trying to copycat Dan Brown and The Cabin in the Woods to ill effect.
> You are on your knees, your back strapped to a cold, vertical steel plate
My brain broke trying to figure out the logistics of this position. You're kneeling, but your back is fused to some kind of movable mechanism, while your hands are free to mix some chemicals together? That's one hell of a Jigsaw puzzle to solve. Why do you need to strap their back to a steel plate when steel chains around their ankles will work instead? The steel plate is too much work, bro!
> You have until the pendulum completes its arc
You don't have a stop watch? 'You've got 30 seconds. Good luck' sounds a lot scarier and creates a need for urgency, doesn't it?
> Your shaking fingers reach for the levers and dials controlling the vials
Still thinking about how their mobility would be limited while their back is strapped to that steel plate. How can you expect them to hurry in that?
> Incorruptible purity was required
That a redundant statement if I ever read it.
> The solution was within you. You simply couldn't see it
They literally couldn't because they were strapped to a steel fucking board. How can you expect them to even look left to right with that kind of get-up?
You'll never guess who this serial killer is. He loves making complex mathematical puzzles that only one person in the world can solve.
> His apartment was a study in minimalism
> Proceeds to describe what minimalism is when it is already described in the word itself
> A Final Girl
Wouldn't he be a 'Final Guy'? I guess misgendering doesn't count when you fuck slashers. I'm not kidding about that, btw. He wants to defy the 'virginal final girl trope' by fucking serial killers and killing them. If you really think that it's super easy to kill a man like that as small as Viktor is, I have a bridge to sell you. There's a reason why women drug them or wait until they fall asleep. Your white pussy is not going to be enough to stop a misogynist.
> He wasn't scared
Of course not. That white pussy of yours is the best kind of plot armour. I bet it could cockblock a Xenomorph.
> It is beautiful in its lethality, the blade etched with fine, swirling patterns
Revolver Ocelot had something to say about engravings not improving the handling of a weapon. Yes, your knife is pretty. It's not going to do much against raw male strength. The idea that you can 'tame' a serial killer by being a slut is, quite frankly, retarded.
> Pepper spray brass knuckles
OK now I want to see a fist fight with Crippled McDoodBoi over here. I hope the man does not hold back. Equal rights, equal lefts!
She put more effort into this Dan Brown puzzle piece that is the Holy Grail of serial killers than the actual Jigsaw plots. I'm still not over that random woman being strapped to a steel plate - while on her knees - expecting to have full mobility for a chemistry set.
> Gleeful predator
Never beating the allegations. It should also be noted that, in this drawn-out game, Jayce only ever picks females. He doesn't pick men that share the same IQ as him - otherwise they'd mostly be Jewish or Asian and that'd be anti-Semitic and a hate crime - he goes after vagina owners. That's very gender affirming, I guess.
> The music hall is a cathedral of decay and Jayce is its silent god.
There. Much better, eh?
> He had quenched it not in water, but in the silent anticipation of this moment
Nah you quenched it in water, bro, otherwise it'd just be bitter steel.
> He feels...Seen
Why you picking random college girls, bro? Why not pick random mathematicians or crypto bros? Sounds like you have a type.
He wanted the serial killer to go into a testosterone-fuelled rage, but one tempered by the offer of fresh white pussy, so he can get a nice fuck and then open the man's throat after he got his snatch split.
He is lucky these 'violent finales' are not actually violent and do not involve fists to the face that break one's orbital sockets. They are just men driven to passion, who engage in rough sex but do not rearrange one's face or vagina enough to warrant reconstructive surgery. It's a Final Girl on Easy Mode.
> You didn't solve my game
He literally did. You said as much. You don't get to pull an 'UM, ACTUALLY' when he did everything by the book.
> His final girl
It's never a 'final guy', but a term reserved exclusively for women. Makes you wonder.
> His preferred victim pool - pretty, bookish brunettes
Who are all female, btw. None are male. So Jayce here doesn't even treat Viktor as the male he insists he is, otherwise he would have passed him over. Misgendered by a serial killer's fetish, wew lad.
> Would they be soft, or would they be rough and calloused?
I'm sure you'll be thinking of those hands as much as you'll be thinking of that meat cleaver he calls a dick. Something else is getting split tonight.
Consult the next Dan Brown novel to find out.
- cuddling you is hitting like molly
- Girly, he often thinks of himself, especially when there's a picture of his wimpy nub right below that god-rod
- he wants him balls deep inside him, deep enough to lobotomize via the pelvis
- his cock was manufactured in the Perfect Cock Factory
- nothing compares the genuine cock and balls experience
- The prettiest pup on the planet. With a pretty face and a very nice tongue and the most perfect cock imaginable.
- I was not bullshitting. I admire your cock to an extreme degree. Your stroke game is unbeatable, same with your size. A perfect fit, I think. You are a wonderful lay.
> cuddling you is hitting like molly
*is like hitting molly
> Correspond with the friends that live exclusively in his phone
The trans gooner that has bottom dysphoria lives exclusively through Discord? You don't say.
> Slighting someone for failing to react to a meme in time
Who does this? Best you'll get is 'you're a latefag' or 'get new material, faggot'. But that's too 'bro-coded' and we can't, like, have that can we dudebros?
> So many nudes. So many levels of hardness. There are pictures that read as painting quality, soft dong, statuesque posture
Along with the syntax being weirdly written (there should be a 'with' in there), if I read 'soft dong' again it might be time to bring out It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia memes.
> The crotch of his boxers clearly dark with grool
Ovulating already despite having the big F tubes yanked? Wow.
> He loves true nudes, cunt out, cock out, slick and desperate and comparatively hairy
He's hairy because he later admits he has bottom dysphoria because his roid clit is nowhere near the size of Jayce's 8 inch Magnum Dong:
> Lifetime of dysphoria and dysmorphia
When even the dick size screams 'YWNBAM', you know it's over.
> Girly, he often thinks of himself, especially when there's a picture of his wimpy nub right below Jayce's god-rod
You said it, not me. Imagine having a mental breakdown because a natal male's penis - that you love being penetrated with - is swinging in your face and is the totality of all things male and masculine, things you will never have and never will be. Your gender is already up for discussion when such a blatant display of the very thing that categorizes you as 'other' is, again, right in your face (and down your throat, and rearranging your guts, etc).
> Viktor's circadian rhythm is thoroughly adjusted to the bedtime wank
Thank God you don't have a day job, then.
> Daddy hasn't made an appearance in their new dynamic, not until this point
> Borderline littlespace
There's that pedophilia play PBM is known for. 'Unblooded girlchild' rears its ugly head again.
> The daddy stuff...woof
Wait until I call PETA. Little Latino here is going to meet Goku in Buttsex Heaven.
> He doesn't know if he can be what Jayce wants him to be
So on top of the gender dysphoria, he feels he cannot be a 'true dom' because there are certain things on the checklist he can't scratch off. It wouldn't happen to involve him not being male, would it?
> Omental
The omental is the fat sheath under the abdominal wall, near the peritoneal folds. Why is he talking about the state of his digestive tract?
> He prefers bottoming
You don't say. The trans man who gets upset when reminded he doesn't have an actual dick takes the receptive, natural role that is expected of his sex? Wow, we are really smashing gender binaries and roles here, man!
> In college I was kinda slutty because I thought I had to be
Implying that bisexuals are natural sluts should be the role of the CDC, not a progshit author who wanted to stick it to 4chan.
>Experiencing liberation from a compulsory masculine dom complex. Being bisexual and cis, this phase seems to be hitting him a bit late
It's fucking funny that she's talking about 'compulsory' roles when she wrote that Viktor prefers bottoming because he believes that is his role due to having female genitalia (it isn't said, but come on, we all know what this is reach around heterosexuality) and in M4M, he also bottomed because we could not break those gender stereotypes of him being a greasy gooner with fungal feet that had lube 'pour down his thighs like diarrhea'. You are THE definition of shoving people into compulsory roles, bitch.
> He wants Jayce balls deep inside him, deep enough to lobotomize via the pelvis
As much as people love imagining Jayce with a horse cock, alas, he's only 8 inches. take it up with OhNovi who wrote him with one.
> This is the sanitized kiddy kind; an ultra hot guy and a preternatural amount of suaveness
There's that pedophilia-lite bullshit. This woman is obsessed with trying to channel Nabokov.
> He unburdened himself of his reproductive cargo three years ago
Wew, thank God we don't have to have abortion and/or pregnancy conversations on top of DDLG and puppy play kinks! That would just be weird.
> I'm feeling really subby
I wonder if his author has ever spoken to an actual gay or bisexual man in her life. The faghag projects too much.
> Dog mode: engaged
Oh, we got our new 'My Dom Triggers Are Activated' line!
> He can't feel a single scrap of social anxiety when it's him and a handsome man and all fours
I wonder what would happen if this guy was balding and had low T like most puppy play guys are. Would it hit the same way? Absolutely not.
> Bisexual button-ups
Maybe someone of the rainbow brigade can tell me what the fuck this means. Bisexual has a look, now?
> There are a couple extra plugs and a dildo so large it makes Viktor blush to look at it
He's trying to recreate Goatse for his Instagram followers. One appreciates the hustle.
> It's like making out with a canine
Insert "white girls fuck dogs" joke here.
> The sheer amount of territory his handspan covers - entire hunks of Viktor's torso - turns Viktor into a wiltier version of himself
He's just uwu so smol.
> He's a little puppy. Not a Don Juan
You do realize that 'Don Juan' references a sexual libertine that seduces WOMEN, right? Nothing like showing that progshit racism!
> Far too much blood pounds in his cock for him to concentrate
It's only 2 inches, relax. You don't need a Victorian fainting couch.
> Jayce is a natural with his tongue. An oral savant
More like an autistic savant.
> In minutes Viktor is writing, cock pounding
It's 2 inches.
> He descends for a sloppy, pussy-juiced kiss. Viktor does not love his own taste
It says a lot when your pussy juice turns you off. Does it taste like sauerkraut?
> Fueled by the sensory maelstrom of skin on skin, of sexy noises, of Jayce's throbbing cock against his
I can't get over Viktor's pussy juice tasting nasty, sorry. You're not graduating to buttsex heaven with that.
> It's your breeding instinct
We're smashing gender roles and masculine/feminine dynamics...by having the penis owner engage in his 'breeding instincts' with a vagina owner. I am very smart.
> Gummed up with grool and piping hot
I just think of a melted gummy bear.
>Nothing compares the genuine cock and balls experience
You don't fucking say! Almost as if you're admitting that EVERYONE craves cock, even those who use exclusively dildos! Ain't that something?
> The prettiest pup on the planet, with a pretty face and a very nice tongue and the most perfect cock imaginable
Keep him away from dog breeders, then, otherwise that cock is getting jorked 24/7.
> Give me all of your pups
You're sterile.
> His cock twitches for a staggering minute and a half
This is the same author who thought 5 mL was an 'obscene amount' of semen when that is the average. Someone send her some penile studies on how long a dick actually lasts.
> With a small amount of manstink pushing through the artificial perfume
On top of the dog fetish, underage fetish and shit fetish, she's got a stinky armpit fetish. Honorary Jeet confirmed.
> I was not bullshitting. I admire your cock to an extreme degree
Just don't compare that roid clit to it, otherwise he'll mentally spiral. But eight inches seems to be the agreed upon perfect size. It's not dioscums' 13 inches, but it'll do.
> To experience such synergy with another human being, to be able to tolerate their smells, their fluids, the exposure and commingling of genitals - it is rare
You just admitted your pussy juice tastes bad. Kudos to Jayce for ploughing through it; it must remind him of abeula's cooking.
> Now somehow he's in this handsome man's dog den, fucked stupid, fucked with hearts in his eyes
White girls fuck dogs, what can I say? You're never beating the allegations.
> Clock full of feelings
More like COCK full of feelings, amirite?
> He's just drawing wild assumptions based on how straight-passing and conventionally handsome this man is
This cunt has no room to talk about 'straight passing' when she was talking about 'forced masculinity' earlier in the fic. Muscular men are straight-passing now? Someone has never heard the Village People's 'YMCA' - it's literally about men fucking in the showers. Gay and bisexual men are big on fitness. It doesn't shock me that the same author who used 'white-passing' for a visible mixed Latino mutt is pulling this shit.
> They will be bound together without having to run to the courthouse and get the government involved
If you don't want the government involved, why did you want legal marriage, then?
> Very sleek and stylish but masculine, powerful
I thought we made it clear that being overtly masculine was too much of a struggle for our puppy-loving bisexual babe here; that he was too 'straight passing'. Now it's nicely masculine because it's the most fitting adjective to a guy with muscles of a god. Pick a fucking Judith Butler lane and stick with it.
The best part about this shit? In the prior chapter PBM was talking about 'internalized homophobia'. What kind of internalized gender shit is this?
> He does not take pet ownership lightly
Nice, so when is he getting his rabies shots as well as SPAYED and NEUTERED?
> Whether it is their partnership, or their dynamic as dominant and submissive
Sounds awfully binary if you ask me.
> Second best are pelvic harnesses that showcase his mouthwatering junk
So do the other troons and poons in that BDSM club feel genital dysphoria or is it for our 'I identify as a dom' lad here?
> Roping will end with groping
Put that on a T-shirt right now.
> Orally services his cock, happy to please the organ that worked so hard to titillate the masses
Now, compare that with Viktor having the 'soul sucked from his dick'. 2 inches compared to 8, and that's only length. What soul is he sucking out of there? Glep from Smiling Friends?
> They experiment with things like squirting and daddy kink
> Viktor can indeed become a human geyser
Porn really has rotted these people's brains, because if women could squirt like geysers, sex wouldn't nearly be as painful. If he's squirting like a geyser, send him to wildfire country. He'd be a portable fire truck.
> Pop culture to politics
I want to know their opinions on race, IQ, and the Jewish Question.
> Discussing a rather unglamourous scientific journal about the rise of colon cancer in their age group
Oh I fucking wonder why a group that dresses like dogs and pisses on the floor has a huge problem with colon cancer. The jokes fucking write themselves.
> The harder throb of his cock
It's 2 inches.
> Who ever said missionary was vanilla?
All this talk about shit being vanilla when you are literally writing a male fucking a female is rich. Here we have a progshit talking about 'straight-passing' and 'bisexual buttons' and how 'cis men' are limited by expectations of masculinity before turning right around and deciding the hunky Adonis God with an eight-pack and an eight-incher is the penetrator who must always remain masculine while the vagina owner occupies some grey area where they want to be a Dom and yet suffer gender dysphoria over their tiny roid clit being compared to a well-endowed male. This Colleen Hoover bitch cannot read the room or understand how retarded she actually sounds.
No one cares someone SPAY AND NEUTER THAT DON JUAN DOG ALREADY
This next work comes from an anon who clearly didn't want her main associated with pedophilia despite taking great pride in having it beta-read and enjoyed by fellow pedophiles. She had to get fact-checked because she thought hockey had quarters, not periods, showing that she is an Amerimutt. The age of the child involved is 10-years-old. Right off the bat in the A/N the author writes that it is not consensual, but that the child 'enjoys it anyways'.
Sup, bro, sup? We're totally manly man brodudes here, bro. Now watch as a woman who knows nothing about hockey talk about shoving a hockey stick up a 10-year-old's vagina.
> He's 10
You will never guess how these characters treat said 10-year-old.
> His chest is warm and also surprisingly squishy
Guys, it's OK to write a pedophile provided he's young, virile and hot with squishy pecs. Don't you want a pedophile with squishy pecs?
> Wraps his large hands around Viktor's chest and easily lifts him
He was already seated on your lap. did you really need to pick him up to move him?
> Maybe it has something to do with what's poking into his hip. Does Jayce have his cellphone in his pocket?
Given that the first age at consuming pornography is 11 (the average), and that the basics of reproductive sex-ed are starting now, the kid should at least be aware that that is male anatomy that is poking into him. They love going the sheltered route because it makes the 'virginity taking' so much worse.
> Get a room, you two
For some reason, the author thought this was a perfectly acceptable thing for someone to say. Who the fuck says that about a 10-year-old and a 17-year-old? Are we speaking from experience, here?
I don't know what's worse: the fact the kid isn't aware of what an erection is, or the fact that fights are common in hockey. This is how I know the author is American because almost every Canadian knows, even if you don't watch hockey, fights are common. If hockey is your national sport or a common past time, then it shouldn't shock the kid either because he'd see other kids do it.
> Jayce's fingers presses directly against Viktor's clit
Just a normal thing for a 17-year-old to do.
> Positive he didn't pee himself
DO NOT tell me that this author is going to write about a 10-year-old squirting. Why do these pedophiles have such an obsession with it?
> Pinches his clit
Ouch. Someone should grab this author's clit and yank. Make her howl for an ambulance for even thinking this was a normal topic to write about.
Hey did you know there's a play-by-play commentator in the comments of this fic? Meet sunsetmountains, who's here to talk about all things CUTE and ADORABLE about a 10-year-old getting the Tai Domi treatment.
Pedophilic comments made by older male teens are DELICIOUS and you are clearly too vanilla to understand that, chud:
She just loves it and it's so cute! Just delicious to talk about a 10-year-old instigating sex with a significantly older teen!
DELICIOUS talking about a 10-year-old's burgeoning sexuality! No, I do not belong on a sex offender list this is FICTION and fiction doesn't affect reality! Forget the fact that I just went YUM! at a child's vaginal secretions!
> Super cute
It'd be SUPER CUTE and DELICIOUS to see you swing from a tree. I hear the tongue pops out and makes it look like you're doing a silly face.
They're all joking and hehe'ing about this as if it's the most normal thing in the world. Yes, let's crack jokes about minors getting fucked by near-adults. Don't call us Epstein-adjacent because he targeted REAL PEOPLE, CHUD
> Sexually abusing minors makes my dick hard
You don't have a dick, bitch. I'd tell you to rope but you might just crash through the ceiling and hurt someone else. Might I suggest antifreeze?
> He's also an excellent sniper
He can't wait to shove a slug into a well-oiled chamber.
> How good it felt when Jayce touched him and how he licked his fingers clean afterwards
Now, you might notice that this is a precocious ten-year-old who reads books like no tomorrow. You might also notice that this is a female child who is pretending to be male. Who enables that, I wonder?
> Only big kids and adults are allowed in there
*Males. Going into the point made before, this is a 10-year-old trans child who has never been taught about sex differences and why males and females are kept separate. He doesn't know what a penis is - let alone a male body - but has decided, with the help of parents and family members, that he is 'born in the wrong body' and just has 'different parts' for a boy. Girls at this age are already started to experience leers and crude comments from boys about their budding bodies; in this case, it's a 10-year-old girl who may or may not be on puberty blockers watching a naked near-adult shower and talk about how jiggly their butt is.
Again, this kid doesn't know what a penis is - and the author later writes that he does read anatomy textbooks so he would know what it is from a scientific standpoint - but he knows he's 100% trans and a boy trapped in the wrong body. How would he know that if he doesn't know the fundamental differences between male and female bodies? He apparently knows what a clit is because Jayce pinched it in Chapter 1, but he doesn't know what male genitalia is? Girl.
> It's good to learn about different body types
> Especially as a boy in the 'wrong' body
and how would a ten-year-old know that? You mean to tell me that this kid KNOWS that they aren't female and that they are truly male, and yet has no idea what a male body IS and what parts come with it? 'Boys have a penis, girls have a vagina' was apparently never taught to this child.
> Kids your age don't normally get to learn about this kinda stuff
No but he knows he's trans, for some reason. The math ain't mathing here. Kids learn early on that males and females are different and have different parts, and that is why they are kept separated. It does not have to be sexual. So how the fuck are you squaring the circle that this female child knows she's a boy, yet doesn't KNOW what a male body is? What?
> Reads anatomy books
> Does not understand basic human anatomy
You do not have to view pornography to know what human anatomy is. I knew what a penis and vagina was at that age. Girls are taught early on that boys tend to be more aggressive and will get mean once they hit Tanner Stage I.
> It's not blood, is it?
The kid knows what T shots are but not semen. I would not say this had the kid not read anatomy textbooks. That is basic reproduction right there.
> The way they hang makes them look like a nuisance
He won't mind if I snip them with garden shears, then? Nothing like a set of balls to showcase in the Stanley Cup.
> He's been told that by doctors over the years
See my repeat points made about the trans kid thing. Knows nothing about male bodies, but 'knows' deep down that they are male. 200 IQ.
> Your hands are smaller than mine
He's just uwu so smol.
> This might be his only chance to learn about typical boy's bodies in person
...did you not read anatomy textbooks? 10-year-olds already know the differences between girls and boys because they start self-segregating, especially during sports. When boys hit 12-13 and puberty hits, you can FEEL the strength difference. I also have to ask how this kid knows he is trans WITHOUT the Internet; someone had to teach him and he had to go on a forum (Reddit) for it. The math ain't mathing.
> Was that wrong of us?
Yes. Gotta get 'em young before they start getting independent. That is the basis of grooming. It should be emphasized that this author wrote this scenario to 'get her dick hard'. You do not have a dick, you frog-voiced, limp-wristed pooner. I know you are female because even male pedophiles write differently. You cannot get NAFLD fast enough.
Milkshakes are also a food metaphor for a male's ejaculate.
You'll never guess who the fellow pedophiles are liking this fic:
Mistress_of_Vos is known on Twitter for pissing off Meltwt and saying Mel doesn't sell while she's proudly declaring her pedophile status. SCARABORTION is another one and is a mod for the Dadson week. Every single one of these people needs to Long Way Down, pronto.
> He's always liked guys on the androgynous side
That is to say he likes jail bait.
> More than a little bit problematic
You don't fucking say. He later says that a 10-year-old has 'bedroom eyes' and that he's 'too beautiful to resist', all things pedophiles assume of their young victims. Reminder these people don't want minors in their spaces yet are fine sexualizing them for masturbation purposes.
> No child should be that alluring
No person should be thinking about a child sexually, let alone be celebrated and encouraged to write about it.
> Viktor has a fat pussy
> Feel those fat pussy lips against his bare skin
This is up there with 'protuberant pussy lips' from that child idol fic. He was around the same age in that one, too.
> Forgot he would be completely hairless, and that somehow made it hotter
Yep, that's another pedophile tell: how much they hate pubic hair. I make fun of the Tarzan pubes a lot, but at least they are a sign a sexual maturity. If a man is obsessed with hairless genitalia and can't stand it growing back, you have a problem on your hands.
> Viktor was looking at him with fucking bedroom eyes
Pedophile cope right there. But it's OK, he's not a pervert and he stresses ~consent~
> He isn't taking advantage of him
> Whatever other fucked up excuses real pedophiles use to touch kids
'Real pedophiles'. You groomed a minor to touch your penis and used their naivety around male genitalia to do it. You think they give you bedroom eyes on the regular. You are a pedophile. Anyone who talks about a 10-year-old having 'fat pussy lips' should be crushed by a Tiger II tank. I bet the author thought this excused her from her own pedophilia because 'it isn't REAL pedophilia' even though people with a brain know exactly what it is.
These people's votes are worth the same as yours.
A not-so-subtle actor AU and a dig at the showrunners turns into a spicy romance that clearly is not done for diversity points. Author does not realize that the entire reason her ship is popular because of a white man and assumes it's just because of the chemistry.
> Emphasizing his broad chest and wide shoulders
You know a woman wrote this, when the first thing she talks about is how muscly the top is. But we don't know who the REAL men are, no ma'am.
> He still hates that it happened before he even turned 35
I wonder if fucking with your hormones had anything to do with it. Your liver becoming fried from all that testosterone and your bones not becoming stronger because of its alleged superhuman properties are all just flukes, I'm sure.
> The fans are kind of misinterpreting your characters
Why would executives give a shit about this? They only care whether their show is popular enough to be renewed for a new season. They are upset that fujos are seeing their characters are gay? That's been a thing since Star Trek. They cannot control what fans think of them and they later admit this. Why is this even a thing? Oh, I know: it's meant to skewer Christian Linke who said these two were not written to be romantic. It's been a year and they are still seething.
> They're drawing fanart of Jayce and Viktor fucking. Writing stories about it. Making edits to love songs
"They're also drawing cuck fanart of Mel and calling her a nigger but we don't talk about that. NO NIGGERS IN OUR SLASH!"
> Your characters are just friends!
Uh huh, and who wrote the script?
> They are soul mates. You wrote it yourselves. You say it's platonic
Yeah, this is absolutely a dig at Christian Linke. One year later and they are still mad their white-led ship isn't canon and ended with the two becoming a pile of ash.
> We celebrate all kinds of diversity here
> Picks a white (wo)man to be their star and disabled representative
> Also makes said white character a genocidal god who uses eugenics to start a mind cult
Funny how that wasn't addressed in the script.
> So tired of producers treating diversity as something to add to avoid criticism
That is exactly what you are doing. 'I am disabled/fat/neurodivergent/retarded therefore you can't criticize me' and, of course, the classic, 'this male character is actually trans and being trans is naturally subversive I am very smart'.
> You're disabled, trans, gay - you fit all the boxes
In which the author doesn't realize she's lampshading herself and admitting how retarded it is. Oh wow, a white pooner pretending to be a gay man has VAGINAL SEX. Very subversive!
> You need to stop eye-fucking him in every goddamn scene
Yeah, you need to shut down those biological impulses that command you to be bred by a well-hung masculine male! We are breaking down gender roles over here by having that WHITE PUSSY get tamed!
> He thought that his feelings were his own alone
If your own directors and producers are telling you that you are eye-fucking your co-star, your feelings clearly are not personal. Pooners always think that they're being so secretive with their emotions when they are just autistic and do not realize that everything they do is on public display.
> Alejandro's strong arms not wrapped around his waist and caught him, pulling him into his chest
Wow! We even have our Victorian fainting couch moment!
> Luka Knows that Alejandro wouldn't have anything against a gay storyline
Yeah, because he'd be fucking pussy, not an anus. It's a 'safe gay' play because he doesn't have to go through all the prep. He can tell himself it's gay because it's 'boy pussy', but he doesn't have to dirty his foreskin with pieces of leftover shit.
> If Luka had to wrap his fingers around Alejandro's throat and talk to him in a purring voice while physically fighting him, he's pretty sure he'd combust
He'd also lose because no matter how you identify, you cannot beat raw male strength. Lil Luka here would be thrown aside like a sack of potatoes and he'd wonder how the fuck that happened. Biology is a bitch you cannot tame.
> He wanted to play into the possibility of their characters being gay simply because he wanted such a relationship represented
The fact the author wanted to stress this, when a canon lesbian relationship exists, as if it inherently has more meaning because one of them is male says a lot about how fujos are so male-centric. Lesbians are worth half that of men, so we need to prioritize the white man (and a half) and his Latino pet who is always secondary to him. For people who talk a lot about diversity and representation, they sure do come off as the bigoted fucks they hate.
> I might have encouraged it
Nothing like an actor encouraging fujo bait. He apparently never learned from the Supernatural experience: the more you cater to fujos, the more they are on your ass for every move, thought and action, and the minute you disagree with them, you are drawn and quartered.
> Even printed out fics
This is a specific reference to ruinthatboy - 'I wonder what it's like to be raped by a Latino - and her fic that was signed by Harry Lloyd.
> I can't breathe
Oh no! Don't become George Floyd now!
> I am supposed to be a better actor
> I have an Emmy
What the fuck does that have to do with you catering to fujos? If you KNEW that that was how they acted, and you care oh so much about your white, disabled, trans co-star, why did you betray your principles? If you're a better actor, maybe you'd have an Oscar instead of an Emmy and would be up there with the greats instead of being on trashy reach around hetslop.
> Gasping as strong hands grip his waist and pull him impossibly closer
But this isn't hetslop, no ma'am, where else would we get such delicious dicking downs from men with big hands, big muscles, and big dicks?
> I never thought, fuck -
Your own producer said you two couldn't stop eye-fucking each other. You fucking thought.
> It's hard because they all start like this, with Alejandro's body against his, dominating him, crowding him, overpowering him
Oh? The trans man wants to be dominated and overpowered by the True and Honest Male? You don't fucking say. Sexual dimorphism stays winning.
> I want to feel it between my legs
You'll notice that these I Can't Breathe and 100% Gay Boys here do a lot of fucking talking despite wanting to get down n dirty.
> Luka expects the usual wave of embarrassment at being exposed and vulnerable in front of someone to hit him
Oh? I thought you were an out and proud trans man who didn't give a shit what people thought. You're a real man with a real male body; why should you feel embarrassed over zippertit scars? Oh, that's right. Because you fucking know, deep down, that you aren't a man, and need a penis-owner to tell you how pretty you are to uplift your fragile ego. Peak female writing right here.
> I want you to suck me off, Alejandro
He said sexily, while pointing to his 2 inch growth.
> I've been wet for you since the day we met
You know a woman wrote this when the dialogue meant to be endearing and sexy sounds like something Colleen Hoover would write.
> At 34 years old, Luka is far from inexperienced. He's had his fair share of lovers
So why did you get all clammed up and shy when your boytoy looked at your chest? Is it because you would be judged for being a lesser man? Did you tell your other partners you didn't have a penis? Things to consider.
> If he'd like it just as much if Luka was yanking it while he fucked Alejandro from behind
Hey, our Gay Boy in Training might not like that. If we're abiding by trad fujo dynamics, the dom top with the beard and big muscles cannot be the bottom, ever.
> You're so big, baby. A perfect mouthful for me
And it's 2 inches. Meanwhile, the actual man meat makes it feel 'as if he's in his throat'. Funny, that.
> Can't sleep with a random man while being in love with another
This is how I know this is female-coded. Men have no qualms about cheating - they just do it. This is coming from the perspective of a woman who wants to be pair-bonded. That pesky biology is talking again, and it ain't coming from the mouth of a man.
> Luka is full-on crying now
If this was an actual gay ship he'd be crying from that 8 inch dick being shoved up his ass. It's a different kind of plunger, you know.
> And he thought you were straight
Fucking a vagina and being attracted to vaginas regardless of how you identify does not make you homosexual. Words have meaning. Luka is not the same sex as Alejandro; he is female. Alejandro is not gay. He's very much a straight man. I will believe he is gay when he gets a tongue up his ass.
> Well, Alejandro, wanna fuck me raw?
I don't remember this in the Lady Gaga song.
>The stretch burns, and he feels so full that it's almost unbearable
Cliché. And you want to tell me that Luka's 'cock' is comparable.
> Fuck, you're so tight
"Fucking you is like fucking a Chinese eggroll when the batter is too dry eugggghh"
> Luka can swear he almost feels him in the back of his throat
Cliché.
> He knew Alejandro would be big, it's kind of hard to miss the bulge -but not even his imagination can do it justice
White pooner with image issues who is sexualized by a band of white fujos is getting fucked by a well-hung male? Holy mother of tropes, Batman!
> Knew you'd want it hard and filthy, sweetheart
He is supposed to be fucking him with abandon. He sure is talking a lot despite focusing on using that big Mexican man meat to breed that white pussy. I've always had a problem with people who talk too much during sex: you are FUCKING, not debating philosophy. Save that for Oliver Thorn!
> They're a reminder that his body is capable of so much more than the pain and discomfort he's condemned to every day
Having a vagina sure does help things, doesn't it?
This again a reference to Christian Linke and how they cannot stop seething at him for repeatedly referring to them as brothers. Nothing is stopping them from shipping their ship, but the fact they want to bully a creator to make it canon, even in their own fanfiction, says a lot about them than the supposed bigotry of the creator. Remember: having canon lesbians wasn't enough. They wanted their reach around hetslop to be GREATER than it.
Hopefully your boys didn't die ending a genocide enacted by the white man in the name of love. This machine (the storyline) kills fascists - even if they're trans and disabled!
Fujofrankenstein has decided to dive into some gothic horror. Don't worry, everyone is legal here - you just have to deal with Final Girl misgendering and Jigsaw puzzles with all the plotting and conniving brutality of Hillary Clinton. It's meant to poke fun at slashers, but ends up trying to copycat Dan Brown and The Cabin in the Woods to ill effect.
> You are on your knees, your back strapped to a cold, vertical steel plate
My brain broke trying to figure out the logistics of this position. You're kneeling, but your back is fused to some kind of movable mechanism, while your hands are free to mix some chemicals together? That's one hell of a Jigsaw puzzle to solve. Why do you need to strap their back to a steel plate when steel chains around their ankles will work instead? The steel plate is too much work, bro!
> You have until the pendulum completes its arc
You don't have a stop watch? 'You've got 30 seconds. Good luck' sounds a lot scarier and creates a need for urgency, doesn't it?
> Your shaking fingers reach for the levers and dials controlling the vials
Still thinking about how their mobility would be limited while their back is strapped to that steel plate. How can you expect them to hurry in that?
> Incorruptible purity was required
That a redundant statement if I ever read it.
> The solution was within you. You simply couldn't see it
They literally couldn't because they were strapped to a steel fucking board. How can you expect them to even look left to right with that kind of get-up?
You'll never guess who this serial killer is. He loves making complex mathematical puzzles that only one person in the world can solve.
> His apartment was a study in minimalism
> Proceeds to describe what minimalism is when it is already described in the word itself
> A Final Girl
Wouldn't he be a 'Final Guy'? I guess misgendering doesn't count when you fuck slashers. I'm not kidding about that, btw. He wants to defy the 'virginal final girl trope' by fucking serial killers and killing them. If you really think that it's super easy to kill a man like that as small as Viktor is, I have a bridge to sell you. There's a reason why women drug them or wait until they fall asleep. Your white pussy is not going to be enough to stop a misogynist.
> He wasn't scared
Of course not. That white pussy of yours is the best kind of plot armour. I bet it could cockblock a Xenomorph.
> It is beautiful in its lethality, the blade etched with fine, swirling patterns
Revolver Ocelot had something to say about engravings not improving the handling of a weapon. Yes, your knife is pretty. It's not going to do much against raw male strength. The idea that you can 'tame' a serial killer by being a slut is, quite frankly, retarded.
> Pepper spray brass knuckles
OK now I want to see a fist fight with Crippled McDoodBoi over here. I hope the man does not hold back. Equal rights, equal lefts!
She put more effort into this Dan Brown puzzle piece that is the Holy Grail of serial killers than the actual Jigsaw plots. I'm still not over that random woman being strapped to a steel plate - while on her knees - expecting to have full mobility for a chemistry set.
> Gleeful predator
Never beating the allegations. It should also be noted that, in this drawn-out game, Jayce only ever picks females. He doesn't pick men that share the same IQ as him - otherwise they'd mostly be Jewish or Asian and that'd be anti-Semitic and a hate crime - he goes after vagina owners. That's very gender affirming, I guess.
> The music hall is a cathedral of decay and Jayce is its silent god.
There. Much better, eh?
> He had quenched it not in water, but in the silent anticipation of this moment
Nah you quenched it in water, bro, otherwise it'd just be bitter steel.
> He feels...Seen
Why you picking random college girls, bro? Why not pick random mathematicians or crypto bros? Sounds like you have a type.
He wanted the serial killer to go into a testosterone-fuelled rage, but one tempered by the offer of fresh white pussy, so he can get a nice fuck and then open the man's throat after he got his snatch split.
He is lucky these 'violent finales' are not actually violent and do not involve fists to the face that break one's orbital sockets. They are just men driven to passion, who engage in rough sex but do not rearrange one's face or vagina enough to warrant reconstructive surgery. It's a Final Girl on Easy Mode.
> You didn't solve my game
He literally did. You said as much. You don't get to pull an 'UM, ACTUALLY' when he did everything by the book.
> His final girl
It's never a 'final guy', but a term reserved exclusively for women. Makes you wonder.
> His preferred victim pool - pretty, bookish brunettes
Who are all female, btw. None are male. So Jayce here doesn't even treat Viktor as the male he insists he is, otherwise he would have passed him over. Misgendered by a serial killer's fetish, wew lad.
> Would they be soft, or would they be rough and calloused?
I'm sure you'll be thinking of those hands as much as you'll be thinking of that meat cleaver he calls a dick. Something else is getting split tonight.
Consult the next Dan Brown novel to find out.
Hard disagree there. The author actually wrote that book after lusting after a 3-year-old and admitted to it in the dedication.
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The problem is that unless a crime has been committed jail time over writing something fictional is insane. Is it gross? Yeah, definitely. Should they be investigated? Of course. Tear their devices apart. But unless they've actually harmed a child or have real life CSAM I'm not sure if charging them for child porn over a gross dd/lg book where the protagonist is an 18 year old into age play is the way to go forward. We can agree to disagree. My views will be biased towards absolute free speech because of coming from a country where 'let's protect the kids' quickly escalated into 'tow the line of the government's narrative or you're going to jail'.
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@Chandelier , do you enjoy traumatising the readers of this thread or yourself more?
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@Chandelier is clearly a masochist. But so are we for reading her posts.
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The Fire Emblem Guro fanfic writer M is still making more of them, this time a fic that includes lactation and breast removal:
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Regarding fanfics with debreasting, how many of them are due to FtMs, compared to Guro fics?
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A ninja festival felt like the perfect fit for Yunaka. Not only did she get to dress in a shinobi outfit - that was just too cute! Those fishnets were so slick, and the golden shin guards and forearm guards looked sweet too! Not that anyone was supposed to see her in it anyway - but hey, she could keep the outfit and show it to the Divine One or Micaiah or some other friends later! She also got to show off more of her muscular thighs - and a rather deep cleavage from her huge breasts kept a tiny bit more modest by the fishnets. But also - it let her put all of her skills to use! Silently moving undetected past the guards, a-assassinating anyone who obstructed her… Well, she wasn’t exactly thrilled about the latter - but it seemed it was more than welcome in the world the maroon-haired girl found herself in.
There was a number of goals available to the ninjas this year - so Yunaka picked an infiltration one that tasked her with recovering an unknown artifact from a guarded fortress. It took her basically no time to sneak past the guards. They weren’t half-bad - but they really couldn’t detect a trained assassin like her. Their job was sure made easier by the fact that most of the girls participating had absolutely no clue on how to be stealthy!
The red-haired girl barely stifled a giggle as she watched Micaiah get spotted by one of the guards. The silver-haired girl stood no chance - a sword cleaving through her throat before she even knew she had been spotted. Her golden eyes quickly went dim as the guard’s cock slipped out from her mouth - her huge asscheeks thrust back invitingly once her headless body fell over in a way that caused Yunaka to lick her lips. No! She shouldn’t get distracted! Another guard quickly took the bait, though - plowing the Silver-Haired Maiden’s ass with rapid thrusts. The girl she knew as an Emblem drawing the soldiers to her certainly was helpful, though - so after one more glance at Micaiah’s lifeless face, Yunaka pressed on while trying to ignore the wetness growing between her thighs.
A few more layers - and several would-be-infiltrators dismembered by the security - and Yunaka made her way to the inner chamber. There it was! On a pedestal stood what was undeniably the artifact she was looking for. Though… It was just a dick, wasn’t it? A large, green dildo - with a stretch of nubs and protrusions across its surface. There really wasn’t anything else it could be! She swallowed some saliva as she kept looking at it - it did look rather enticing already! Wonder if winning here meant she got to keep it? But first, she had to actually recover it~ The assassin’s eyes scoured the vault - taking note of the more and less obvious traps and triggers laid out all across it. When combined, they made sure most of the room was off-limits - but with a clear path to take to the pedestal. Of course - if there was to be a winner, there had to be a solution! Here went nothing~
Yunaka dashed across the path she had scouted out - constantly looking around to see if anything was changing. But nope! All went as planned - the maroon-haired ninja stopping in front of the pedestal. Without hesitation, she grabbed the dildo - feeling how firm it was under her digits. She tried taking it - only to see that she had to pull it out of its resting place first. So, she yanked it up - only to see that it was actually a double-ended dildo that was thrust into an onahole made out of some dead girl’s pussy. Still, it came out without any issues - other than some wet squelches from the container. With the sex toy in hand, Yunaka confirmed that the path out was still safe - and upon seeing that it was, darted for the exit.
However, as she ran, a new sensation began to fill the red-haired ninja’s body. Excitement. Arousal. The wetness from before was like a light trickle compared to the flood of pussy juices now pouring through her purple leotard. Her nipples hardened in mere seconds - poking through the fabric of her leotard, their outline clearly marked in her tight clothes. The assassin bit her lip to keep herself from moaning - but each step she took sent a surge of pleasure through her body. Ahhh! W-what happened? Was this… Because of… The dildo? Even her thoughts were punctuated by pants as she glanced at the artifact she was holding while at the chamber’s entrance. Ahhhhhh! She couldn’t take it anymooooore!
With overwhelming desire making short work of Yunaka’s self-restraint, she still nonetheless kept enough reason to glance out the door and check if the coast was clear. With no one in the immediate vicinity, the maroon-haired girl stepped outside - before squatting down, resting her back against the wall. Setting her bow aside, Yunaka immediately sent a hand towards her nethers - a soundless gasp making it out of her mouth the moment her fingers brushed against her pussy even through the single layer of cloth guarding it. She yanked the crotch of her leotard to the side - another muffled moan getting out as the cold air brushed against her overflowing slit. Wasting no time, the assassin put the dildo in front of her entrance with the other hand - and thrust it in.
“Ahhhhh~”
Yunaka couldn’t contain the sigh of relief that shot out of her lips as the toy entered her - a pleased shiver going through her entire body. The penetration did bring her some clarity too - enough for her to question just what in the world she was doing. This was risky! So risky! She had already seen first-hand what happened to shinobi who got caught… Each moment she spent here masturbating was a moment someone could find her! B-but… Oh, Divine One… Acknowledging the danger like that only made her more excited!
The moment the thought crossed her head, her hips began moving on their own - lowering her pelvis further onto the giant dildo below her. Ohhhhhhhhh… The new wave of pleasure surged through the Brodian ninja, knocking reason out of her head. If she waaaas… Quiiiiick… It’d beeee… Fiiiine… Riiiiight? Her strong legs pushed her up and down the toy as Yunaka fully gave in to the pleasure - gasps punctuating her thoughts once more, this time audible. Her pussy juices gushed out of her entrance as she took the toy deeper inside her - her inner walls clenching on the artificial dick inside her. It felt… Soooo goooooood…
While Yunaka rode the toy with all the vigor her body could muster up, her hands began moving on their own. Grabbing the seams of her cleavage, she yanked them down and to the side - freeing her large titties from their confines. After tugging the fishnets down as well, Yunaka’s large papayas were fully uncovered - and free for her hands to fiddle with. The maroon-haired assassin began groping herself with just as much energy as she was putting into fucking the toy below her - kneading and feeling up her tits as hard as she could. The aching caused by her strong palms mixed perfectly with the pleasure her hands also provided - adding even more to the excitement Yunaka was feeling. Her fingertips touched her nipples from time to time as they moved across her chest - each touch sending another thrill through her body.
With all the pleasure coursing through her, Yunaka leaned against the wall harder and harder. Her muscles were so shaky already~ Moans were now flowing freely past her lips - and she was having trouble keeping her eyes open! It was so tempting to just close her eyelids and lose herself completely in the pleasure… Ohhhhh… Y-yeahhhhh… Her eyes slid shut as Yunaka embraced the pleasure even more - focusing on what her body was feeling. On the dildo poking against her cervix. On her own nails pushing into the flesh of her ample bosom. Ahhhh… Ahhhhhhhhh… Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
As Yunaka found herself on the verge of a climax, she felt something new. Something unmistakable. The cold touch of metal right against her throat. Her eyes immediately darted open - only to see a girl with messy, purple hair wearing a white kimono with even deeper cleavage than Yunaka’s own over some fishnets. Standing over her. Holding a kunai right against the perfectly vulnerable skin of Yunaka’s neck.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!”
Despite the shock, Yunaka’s hips still moved down - pushing her over the edge. The puddle of her arousal on the floor was fueled even more by some powerful squirts that shot out from around the dildo. Her entire body shivered in pleasure - Yunaka struggling to keep her head in place to keep it from leaning onto the weapon in front of her. A few squirts of milk even emerged from her thoroughly-squeezed breasts - the sensation a pleasant shock for the half-naked shinobi. Her jaw dropped down - her tongue slipping free, saliva leaking past her gaping lips and onto the kunai and the large tits below.
“Maaaaaad! She’s here! She didn’t get far at all!”
Bernadetta called out to her girlfriend while still holding her weapon by the cumming ninja’s neck - using one of her sandal-clad feet to kick away Yunaka’s bow. She also fished out the short sword from behind the red-haired girl’s back - setting it so that Yunaka couldn’t reach it, but close enough that it could come in handy later. Once she did, the purplette looked down at the moaning girl in front of her once more. It was so tempting to just drive her kunai in, open up Yunaka’s neck and have her cough up some blood! Buuuut she couldn’t just kill her with Mad not there. Plus, if she let her live, they’d get to see the spell on the dildo in action some more!
“A-ahh… Y-you… C-caught m-me…”
Yunaka breathed out at the purplette as she waited - completely unaware of the deadly thoughts running through her head.
It didn’t take Madelyn long to arrive at the scene too. The Askran princess was also dressed for the ninja festival - wearing a leotard over her own bodystocking fishnets. When the festival was announced, both Madelyn and Bernie were thrilled for another chance to put on their special outfits and kill some girls. While Madelyn would have enjoyed the near-guaranteed death that came with being a contestant in the festival, it was absolutely out of the question for her beloved purplette. Because of that, the pair became ninja slayers instead. To start things off, the duo made use of the final trap waiting for the first ninja to reach this goal. The dildo Yunaka picked up was enchanted with an extremely potent aphrodisiac spell - the spell unleashed on the unlucky girl who removed it from its resting place. Providing the princess and the noble with a perfect victim to kick the night off.
“Since you found her, you go first~”
The green-haired ninja told her partner - with Bernie quick to take her up on the offer. Retracting her weapon, she pushed Yunaka over and away from the wall - the maroon-haired ninja falling over, her muscles still too weak from her orgasm to resist. Yunaka landed on her side, but Bernie rolled her onto her back - before grabbing the dildo and pulling it slightly out of the helpless assassin’s pussy. She dragged the crotch of her kimono out of the way - opening a small tear in her fishnets below it as she lined her entrance up with the tip of the toy’s other end. The purplette took it inside herself while groaning - to a pleased moan from Yunaka as Bernie’s movements caused the dildo to shift inside her cunt.
With the toy now inside her, Bernie lowered herself onto it - pushing it back into Yunaka once more as she did it. She lifted one of the shinobi’s legs - and embraced it for stability as she began bouncing up and down on the toy. The purplette’s forcefulness couldn’t quite match Yunaka’s own lust-filled thrusts from before - but Bernie came rather close as she got into it, her tits bouncing within her kimono as she rammed the toy deep into her own snatch and Yunaka at the same time. The purplette moaned openly as she moved up and down the toy - the shinobi with shurikens in her hair groaning and drooling on the ground below her. With the magic-fueled pleasure overpowering her completely, there was little Yunaka could do - her hips instinctively moving back against the archer’s as she just gave in to her lust once more.
While her girlfriend kept hammering the toy into both herself and Yunaka, Madelyn instead went for the captured shinobi’s open mouth. Lowering herself on top of Yunaka’s face, the Askran princess also tugged the crotch of her outfit to the side - and opened a hole in her fishnets. Then, she pushed her pussy against the red-haired girl’s lips - with Yunaka’s tongue immediately springing into action, starting to eat her out. As with her hips, it was just instinct - the Brodian shinobi rewarded for her skilled tongue’s swiped with some squirts from the curvy princess above her.
While Yunaka’s tongue worked on her pussy, Madelyn reached for the ninja’s bare boobs - starting to give them as much care as Yunaka herself did moments before. The princess’s greedy fingers groped them with full force - to a slightly different result than before. The first milk squirts from the red-haired girl’s orgasm put her milk ducts into action - and now just squeezing them was enough to cause more milk to leak out. The green-haired ninja proceeded to milk Yunaka for a bit - before lifting her hands to her mouth and licking the milk off her fingers. Tasty~
Smearing more milk onto her hand, Madelyn then reached out for Bernie’s face - letting her girlfriend lick some of Yunaka’s milk off it. The purplette did that and more - taking her fingers into her mouth and suckling on each of them, and teasing them with her tongue. The sensation sent a thrill down Madelyn’s spine - and after she managed to get her hand out of Bernie’s mouth, she immediately reached behind her head and pulled her towards herself instead. Their lips connected in a powerful kiss - both ninjas fighting for dominance as they continued to ride each side of Yunaka’s body. They remained locked in the kiss until they came - Yunaka’s orgasm making her squirm on the ground below the pair long before their joint climax.
With both girls shaking, they moved off Yunaka’s body - the drooling shinobi laying there cross-eyed, with her mouth hanging open. She seemed clearly mindbroken - only panting for more pleasure as Bernie stirred the dildo again while getting off it. Still, the pair swapped places - Madelyn taking the dildo lubed up with Bernie’s girlcum up her pussy while the purplette moved towards playing with the top half of Yunaka’s body instead.
The green-haired princess thrust the dildo all the way into Yunaka - tearing through her cervix and having the tip reach her womb. The sudden pain caused the shinobi to jerk up on the ground - eyes focusing for a moment, mouth spitting out some saliva in shock as some pained spasms ran through her. But that moment of pain-fueled clarity was rather short - the maroon-haired girl back to her happy moans soon enough.
Bernadetta dove towards Yunaka’s chest - latching her mouth onto the Brodian girl’s large knockers. The milk she tasted from her lover’s hand was great - and she wanted more. She began suckling on Yunaka’s chest with plenty of experience - sucking out plenty of the yummy liquid from the huge milk jugs. As the flow of milk slowed down, the purplette moved on to the other tap - drinking even more milk from the second tit. And when that one began to run out - the first tit was ready with more milk again, Bernie returning back to it. She swapped between the breasts for a while - milk covering her cheeks and chin by the time she was done.
Looking up at Madelyn, Bernie could tell her girlfriend was approaching another climax. In that case~ The purplette snatched up the short sword that she took from Yunaka earlier. And brought it down on the shinobi’s neck - hacking her head off with one proper swing.
Yunaka’s body began thrashing on the ground with its head gone. Her legs kicked out against Madelyn. Her arms smacked into the ground. Her breasts bounced back and forth as her torso began spasming - more milk flowing freely from them as a result. Blood spurted from her neck - gushing onto the ground below. A release began flowing from her pussy too - soon joined by the Askran princess’s love juices as the sight and movements of Yunaka’s headless body drove her over the edge.
Bernie snatched Yunaka’s head up - watching her red eyes focus once more, brought back by the pain in her neck. Yunaka stared at her at first - tears starting to flow down her cheeks as she processed what was going on. Bernie gave her a kiss as she saw that - touching the star on her cheek with her tongue too before attacking the maroon-haired girl’s lips.
So, they killed her… Oh, Yunaka, Yunaka… Masturbating there really was a dumb idea, wasn’t it? But she just couldn’t help herself… The dildo was a trap, that much was clear now. But really, the mistake was assuming the game was fair - anyone who picked the dildo up probably would have done the same thing. She should have waited for another girl to try it out first. But she just assumed she’d be done once she got it… Oh, Yunaka, Yunaka, you stupid girl… The red-haired girl kept bashing herself in her head until her consciousness faded away - tears continuing to pour down her cheeks while Bernie kept making out with the severed head.
As Madelyn pulled the dildo out of herself - and then out of Yunaka - the headless body spasmed some more on the ground. More juices flowed from the shinobi’s pussy as it was unplugged. The pair was about done there now. There were still so many more ninja girls for them to kill!
Leaving the fortress, the pair dragged Yunaka’s corpse with them - leaving it at the door for the guards to enjoy. While the men thrust into Yunaka’s neck stump and ass, spitroasting the headless girl on their cocks, Madelyn and Bernie moved on - taking the head and dildo with them. The head would look amazing on their wall - and the dildo, even with the spell gone, would definitely prove useful on any other ninjas they were going to take down for the rest of the day.
There was a number of goals available to the ninjas this year - so Yunaka picked an infiltration one that tasked her with recovering an unknown artifact from a guarded fortress. It took her basically no time to sneak past the guards. They weren’t half-bad - but they really couldn’t detect a trained assassin like her. Their job was sure made easier by the fact that most of the girls participating had absolutely no clue on how to be stealthy!
The red-haired girl barely stifled a giggle as she watched Micaiah get spotted by one of the guards. The silver-haired girl stood no chance - a sword cleaving through her throat before she even knew she had been spotted. Her golden eyes quickly went dim as the guard’s cock slipped out from her mouth - her huge asscheeks thrust back invitingly once her headless body fell over in a way that caused Yunaka to lick her lips. No! She shouldn’t get distracted! Another guard quickly took the bait, though - plowing the Silver-Haired Maiden’s ass with rapid thrusts. The girl she knew as an Emblem drawing the soldiers to her certainly was helpful, though - so after one more glance at Micaiah’s lifeless face, Yunaka pressed on while trying to ignore the wetness growing between her thighs.
A few more layers - and several would-be-infiltrators dismembered by the security - and Yunaka made her way to the inner chamber. There it was! On a pedestal stood what was undeniably the artifact she was looking for. Though… It was just a dick, wasn’t it? A large, green dildo - with a stretch of nubs and protrusions across its surface. There really wasn’t anything else it could be! She swallowed some saliva as she kept looking at it - it did look rather enticing already! Wonder if winning here meant she got to keep it? But first, she had to actually recover it~ The assassin’s eyes scoured the vault - taking note of the more and less obvious traps and triggers laid out all across it. When combined, they made sure most of the room was off-limits - but with a clear path to take to the pedestal. Of course - if there was to be a winner, there had to be a solution! Here went nothing~
Yunaka dashed across the path she had scouted out - constantly looking around to see if anything was changing. But nope! All went as planned - the maroon-haired ninja stopping in front of the pedestal. Without hesitation, she grabbed the dildo - feeling how firm it was under her digits. She tried taking it - only to see that she had to pull it out of its resting place first. So, she yanked it up - only to see that it was actually a double-ended dildo that was thrust into an onahole made out of some dead girl’s pussy. Still, it came out without any issues - other than some wet squelches from the container. With the sex toy in hand, Yunaka confirmed that the path out was still safe - and upon seeing that it was, darted for the exit.
However, as she ran, a new sensation began to fill the red-haired ninja’s body. Excitement. Arousal. The wetness from before was like a light trickle compared to the flood of pussy juices now pouring through her purple leotard. Her nipples hardened in mere seconds - poking through the fabric of her leotard, their outline clearly marked in her tight clothes. The assassin bit her lip to keep herself from moaning - but each step she took sent a surge of pleasure through her body. Ahhh! W-what happened? Was this… Because of… The dildo? Even her thoughts were punctuated by pants as she glanced at the artifact she was holding while at the chamber’s entrance. Ahhhhhh! She couldn’t take it anymooooore!
With overwhelming desire making short work of Yunaka’s self-restraint, she still nonetheless kept enough reason to glance out the door and check if the coast was clear. With no one in the immediate vicinity, the maroon-haired girl stepped outside - before squatting down, resting her back against the wall. Setting her bow aside, Yunaka immediately sent a hand towards her nethers - a soundless gasp making it out of her mouth the moment her fingers brushed against her pussy even through the single layer of cloth guarding it. She yanked the crotch of her leotard to the side - another muffled moan getting out as the cold air brushed against her overflowing slit. Wasting no time, the assassin put the dildo in front of her entrance with the other hand - and thrust it in.
“Ahhhhh~”
Yunaka couldn’t contain the sigh of relief that shot out of her lips as the toy entered her - a pleased shiver going through her entire body. The penetration did bring her some clarity too - enough for her to question just what in the world she was doing. This was risky! So risky! She had already seen first-hand what happened to shinobi who got caught… Each moment she spent here masturbating was a moment someone could find her! B-but… Oh, Divine One… Acknowledging the danger like that only made her more excited!
The moment the thought crossed her head, her hips began moving on their own - lowering her pelvis further onto the giant dildo below her. Ohhhhhhhhh… The new wave of pleasure surged through the Brodian ninja, knocking reason out of her head. If she waaaas… Quiiiiick… It’d beeee… Fiiiine… Riiiiight? Her strong legs pushed her up and down the toy as Yunaka fully gave in to the pleasure - gasps punctuating her thoughts once more, this time audible. Her pussy juices gushed out of her entrance as she took the toy deeper inside her - her inner walls clenching on the artificial dick inside her. It felt… Soooo goooooood…
While Yunaka rode the toy with all the vigor her body could muster up, her hands began moving on their own. Grabbing the seams of her cleavage, she yanked them down and to the side - freeing her large titties from their confines. After tugging the fishnets down as well, Yunaka’s large papayas were fully uncovered - and free for her hands to fiddle with. The maroon-haired assassin began groping herself with just as much energy as she was putting into fucking the toy below her - kneading and feeling up her tits as hard as she could. The aching caused by her strong palms mixed perfectly with the pleasure her hands also provided - adding even more to the excitement Yunaka was feeling. Her fingertips touched her nipples from time to time as they moved across her chest - each touch sending another thrill through her body.
With all the pleasure coursing through her, Yunaka leaned against the wall harder and harder. Her muscles were so shaky already~ Moans were now flowing freely past her lips - and she was having trouble keeping her eyes open! It was so tempting to just close her eyelids and lose herself completely in the pleasure… Ohhhhh… Y-yeahhhhh… Her eyes slid shut as Yunaka embraced the pleasure even more - focusing on what her body was feeling. On the dildo poking against her cervix. On her own nails pushing into the flesh of her ample bosom. Ahhhh… Ahhhhhhhhh… Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
As Yunaka found herself on the verge of a climax, she felt something new. Something unmistakable. The cold touch of metal right against her throat. Her eyes immediately darted open - only to see a girl with messy, purple hair wearing a white kimono with even deeper cleavage than Yunaka’s own over some fishnets. Standing over her. Holding a kunai right against the perfectly vulnerable skin of Yunaka’s neck.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!”
Despite the shock, Yunaka’s hips still moved down - pushing her over the edge. The puddle of her arousal on the floor was fueled even more by some powerful squirts that shot out from around the dildo. Her entire body shivered in pleasure - Yunaka struggling to keep her head in place to keep it from leaning onto the weapon in front of her. A few squirts of milk even emerged from her thoroughly-squeezed breasts - the sensation a pleasant shock for the half-naked shinobi. Her jaw dropped down - her tongue slipping free, saliva leaking past her gaping lips and onto the kunai and the large tits below.
“Maaaaaad! She’s here! She didn’t get far at all!”
Bernadetta called out to her girlfriend while still holding her weapon by the cumming ninja’s neck - using one of her sandal-clad feet to kick away Yunaka’s bow. She also fished out the short sword from behind the red-haired girl’s back - setting it so that Yunaka couldn’t reach it, but close enough that it could come in handy later. Once she did, the purplette looked down at the moaning girl in front of her once more. It was so tempting to just drive her kunai in, open up Yunaka’s neck and have her cough up some blood! Buuuut she couldn’t just kill her with Mad not there. Plus, if she let her live, they’d get to see the spell on the dildo in action some more!
“A-ahh… Y-you… C-caught m-me…”
Yunaka breathed out at the purplette as she waited - completely unaware of the deadly thoughts running through her head.
It didn’t take Madelyn long to arrive at the scene too. The Askran princess was also dressed for the ninja festival - wearing a leotard over her own bodystocking fishnets. When the festival was announced, both Madelyn and Bernie were thrilled for another chance to put on their special outfits and kill some girls. While Madelyn would have enjoyed the near-guaranteed death that came with being a contestant in the festival, it was absolutely out of the question for her beloved purplette. Because of that, the pair became ninja slayers instead. To start things off, the duo made use of the final trap waiting for the first ninja to reach this goal. The dildo Yunaka picked up was enchanted with an extremely potent aphrodisiac spell - the spell unleashed on the unlucky girl who removed it from its resting place. Providing the princess and the noble with a perfect victim to kick the night off.
“Since you found her, you go first~”
The green-haired ninja told her partner - with Bernie quick to take her up on the offer. Retracting her weapon, she pushed Yunaka over and away from the wall - the maroon-haired ninja falling over, her muscles still too weak from her orgasm to resist. Yunaka landed on her side, but Bernie rolled her onto her back - before grabbing the dildo and pulling it slightly out of the helpless assassin’s pussy. She dragged the crotch of her kimono out of the way - opening a small tear in her fishnets below it as she lined her entrance up with the tip of the toy’s other end. The purplette took it inside herself while groaning - to a pleased moan from Yunaka as Bernie’s movements caused the dildo to shift inside her cunt.
With the toy now inside her, Bernie lowered herself onto it - pushing it back into Yunaka once more as she did it. She lifted one of the shinobi’s legs - and embraced it for stability as she began bouncing up and down on the toy. The purplette’s forcefulness couldn’t quite match Yunaka’s own lust-filled thrusts from before - but Bernie came rather close as she got into it, her tits bouncing within her kimono as she rammed the toy deep into her own snatch and Yunaka at the same time. The purplette moaned openly as she moved up and down the toy - the shinobi with shurikens in her hair groaning and drooling on the ground below her. With the magic-fueled pleasure overpowering her completely, there was little Yunaka could do - her hips instinctively moving back against the archer’s as she just gave in to her lust once more.
While her girlfriend kept hammering the toy into both herself and Yunaka, Madelyn instead went for the captured shinobi’s open mouth. Lowering herself on top of Yunaka’s face, the Askran princess also tugged the crotch of her outfit to the side - and opened a hole in her fishnets. Then, she pushed her pussy against the red-haired girl’s lips - with Yunaka’s tongue immediately springing into action, starting to eat her out. As with her hips, it was just instinct - the Brodian shinobi rewarded for her skilled tongue’s swiped with some squirts from the curvy princess above her.
While Yunaka’s tongue worked on her pussy, Madelyn reached for the ninja’s bare boobs - starting to give them as much care as Yunaka herself did moments before. The princess’s greedy fingers groped them with full force - to a slightly different result than before. The first milk squirts from the red-haired girl’s orgasm put her milk ducts into action - and now just squeezing them was enough to cause more milk to leak out. The green-haired ninja proceeded to milk Yunaka for a bit - before lifting her hands to her mouth and licking the milk off her fingers. Tasty~
Smearing more milk onto her hand, Madelyn then reached out for Bernie’s face - letting her girlfriend lick some of Yunaka’s milk off it. The purplette did that and more - taking her fingers into her mouth and suckling on each of them, and teasing them with her tongue. The sensation sent a thrill down Madelyn’s spine - and after she managed to get her hand out of Bernie’s mouth, she immediately reached behind her head and pulled her towards herself instead. Their lips connected in a powerful kiss - both ninjas fighting for dominance as they continued to ride each side of Yunaka’s body. They remained locked in the kiss until they came - Yunaka’s orgasm making her squirm on the ground below the pair long before their joint climax.
With both girls shaking, they moved off Yunaka’s body - the drooling shinobi laying there cross-eyed, with her mouth hanging open. She seemed clearly mindbroken - only panting for more pleasure as Bernie stirred the dildo again while getting off it. Still, the pair swapped places - Madelyn taking the dildo lubed up with Bernie’s girlcum up her pussy while the purplette moved towards playing with the top half of Yunaka’s body instead.
The green-haired princess thrust the dildo all the way into Yunaka - tearing through her cervix and having the tip reach her womb. The sudden pain caused the shinobi to jerk up on the ground - eyes focusing for a moment, mouth spitting out some saliva in shock as some pained spasms ran through her. But that moment of pain-fueled clarity was rather short - the maroon-haired girl back to her happy moans soon enough.
Bernadetta dove towards Yunaka’s chest - latching her mouth onto the Brodian girl’s large knockers. The milk she tasted from her lover’s hand was great - and she wanted more. She began suckling on Yunaka’s chest with plenty of experience - sucking out plenty of the yummy liquid from the huge milk jugs. As the flow of milk slowed down, the purplette moved on to the other tap - drinking even more milk from the second tit. And when that one began to run out - the first tit was ready with more milk again, Bernie returning back to it. She swapped between the breasts for a while - milk covering her cheeks and chin by the time she was done.
Looking up at Madelyn, Bernie could tell her girlfriend was approaching another climax. In that case~ The purplette snatched up the short sword that she took from Yunaka earlier. And brought it down on the shinobi’s neck - hacking her head off with one proper swing.
Yunaka’s body began thrashing on the ground with its head gone. Her legs kicked out against Madelyn. Her arms smacked into the ground. Her breasts bounced back and forth as her torso began spasming - more milk flowing freely from them as a result. Blood spurted from her neck - gushing onto the ground below. A release began flowing from her pussy too - soon joined by the Askran princess’s love juices as the sight and movements of Yunaka’s headless body drove her over the edge.
Bernie snatched Yunaka’s head up - watching her red eyes focus once more, brought back by the pain in her neck. Yunaka stared at her at first - tears starting to flow down her cheeks as she processed what was going on. Bernie gave her a kiss as she saw that - touching the star on her cheek with her tongue too before attacking the maroon-haired girl’s lips.
So, they killed her… Oh, Yunaka, Yunaka… Masturbating there really was a dumb idea, wasn’t it? But she just couldn’t help herself… The dildo was a trap, that much was clear now. But really, the mistake was assuming the game was fair - anyone who picked the dildo up probably would have done the same thing. She should have waited for another girl to try it out first. But she just assumed she’d be done once she got it… Oh, Yunaka, Yunaka, you stupid girl… The red-haired girl kept bashing herself in her head until her consciousness faded away - tears continuing to pour down her cheeks while Bernie kept making out with the severed head.
As Madelyn pulled the dildo out of herself - and then out of Yunaka - the headless body spasmed some more on the ground. More juices flowed from the shinobi’s pussy as it was unplugged. The pair was about done there now. There were still so many more ninja girls for them to kill!
Leaving the fortress, the pair dragged Yunaka’s corpse with them - leaving it at the door for the guards to enjoy. While the men thrust into Yunaka’s neck stump and ass, spitroasting the headless girl on their cocks, Madelyn and Bernie moved on - taking the head and dildo with them. The head would look amazing on their wall - and the dildo, even with the spell gone, would definitely prove useful on any other ninjas they were going to take down for the rest of the day.
Shez wasn’t quite an expert on being stealthy. Still, being a ninja couldn’t be that different from being a mercenary, right? And when push came to shove, she could always fight her way out of it! Her special dagger cut through anyone who stood in her way with ease~ For example, Shamir - the ex-mercenary stood no chance, the other Fodlan ninja’s head splitting open as the purple-haired ninja’s weapon pierced through her skull. Her corpse collapsed with an expression Shez found delightful - eyes crossed, tongue sticking out. While ripping her dagger out, Shez made sure to plant a kiss on the dead sniper’s lips - playing with the sticking out tongue and pawing at her top to free Shamir’s huge titties. A few gropes, and Shez was ready to move on - her sandals taking her forwards while the dead ninja’s brains poured from her open skull.
Another part of being a ninja was dealing with traps - something Shez wasn’t super keen on. Paying close attention to her surroundings was boring! She’d rather just move swiftly and carry out her mission quickly. Still, better to do that than to end up splattered by the defense mechanisms… And she did understand the basics of dismantling those things too. It was as simple as pressing in a few right spots, and the whole thing usually just fell apart! Right? …This corridor she was in was awfully quiet, wasn’t it? The purple-haired ninja took a more careful look around - spotting some suspicious indentations along the walls. Along with some floor tiles in line with them. Hmmm.
Eager to put her disarming skills to a test, Shez knelt down by one of the suspicious tiles on the floor - one leg below her chest, the other stretched out behind her. Taking her dagger, the mercenary tried slipping it into the gap in the floor tiles - aiming to use it to prop the suspicious tile up. However, her blade was a bit too wide for that - pressing the tile down instead. And triggering the trap the purple-haired ninja had been trying to disarm.
Vertically-oriented blades shot out from the wall in the blink of an eye. Luckily for Shez, they emerged behind her - so most of her body was safe. Except for the leg that was behind her. A blade sliced right through it without slowing down at all - cutting the mercenary’s leg in two directly under her knee.
“Aaaah!”
Shez yelled in pain - twisting backwards on her surviving leg, barely keeping her balance as she did. That was not how this was supposed to go! The ninja stared in shock at the piece of limb laying on the ground in front of her - blood spurting from the stump. She could see her toes moving in her sandals - and some of the red wraps starting to unroll from her leg. The mercenary glanced down at the stump still attached to her body - shaking her head in disbelief at how short her leg was now. There was no way she could continue like this…
Gritting her teeth, Shez grabbed the severed limb - rolling off more of the wraps to use them on the other stump. They were red already - it was fitting to have blood pour into them, right? She used as much of them as she could to cover up her leg stump - stopping the bleeding somewhat.
With her wound treated - as much as she could do it right away, anyway - Shez began her return trip. She moved on her fours - well, threes - back through the corridors. Her leg hurt a lot - but she kept telling herself that once she got out, she’d easily find someone to treat her leg properly. They had so many mages in this world. Surely fixing her leg would be no issue for them, right?
Reassuring herself this way, Shez was able to make some proper progress. Soon, she got to the spot she struck Shamir down earlier. There was now a guard there - but luckily for the amputee ninja, the man was entirely focused on Shamir’s corpse. The opening in the dead mercenary’s head was large enough for a cock to fit through - the man doing his best to turn her brains into mush with his thrusts. He was entirely focused on Shamir’s corpse as he did that - which let Shez sneak by even in her current state.
However, the purple-haired ninja’s luck wouldn’t last forever. Soon, she saw a pair of ninjas going in her direction - and they spotted her without any issues. The duo went straight for her - but they would help her, right? She clearly wasn’t a threat to them, like Shamir had been for her…
As the girls drew closer, Shez was able to recognize one of them. Well, somewhat. The purplette didn’t look exactly the way she remembered her - but close enough that she could still tell it was a classmate of hers from Garreg Mach.
“Bernie! Is that you? Wow, you grew a really nice pair of tits! This place really suits you, huh? Way better than the monastery did. Would you mind helping me out? For old times’ sake?”
Bernadetta looked down at Shez - a worrying smirk appearing on her face instead of pity.
“Nope! Mad, you can take first round this time~”
As she spoke, the purplette used her sandals-clad feet to stomp on Shez’s hands - making her drop one of her daggers. Madelyn’s heel cracked into one of Shez’s vulnerable elbows to achieve the same result on her other arm - both standing ninjas kicking the amputee ninja's weapons away so she couldn’t reach them anymore.
First round of what? Shez asked herself that while looking at the two ninjas over her - watching as the green-haired one began pulling something out from her satchel. It was a dildo - and a rather hefty one, at that. Wait, how did it even fit into the satchel? But it rather clearly answered what the pair was gonna do to her.
“M-Maybe we can talk about it?”
Shez shook her head while Madelyn walked over to her lower body. With the purple-haired ninja on her belly on the ground, it left her ass perfectly accessible. Madelyn just had to slice some - rather large - bits of her ninja tunic off, and then she exposed the mercenary’s sizable asscheeks.
“Bernie? P-Please?
The mercenary asked in panic as Madelyn knelt behind her - the Askran princess’s fingers grabbing onto her panties. She pulled them down onto Shez’s pretty meaty legs - well, on one side at least, the girl’s fishnets stopping her on the other. But what mattered was uncovering the small hole of the mercenary’s sphincter. Shez shook her head as she felt Madelyn probe her backdoor with her fingers - stretching it out a bit to try things out. The purple-haired ninja had seen how large the toy was - there was just no way it’d fit…
But there was. Madelyn rammed the toy into the tiny opening - breaking the ring of flesh in with a strong thrust. Shez screamed in agony as the pain from her ass hit her - tears flashing in her eyes as the green-haired ninja forced the toy as deep into her rectum as it would go. Once it was firmly stuck inside Shez’s ass, Madelyn tucked her leotard to the side - and took the toy inside her pussy once more. Lowering herself onto the dildo, she also put pressure into it, forcing it deeper into the amputee ninja’s ass - Shez growling in pain as Madelyn violated her butt even more.
Bernie savored the agony and tears on Shez’s face for a moment - before also getting to work on the purple-haired ninja. Walking besides her lover, she reached for the wounded leg behind Madelyn. The messily-tied wraps Shez put on quickly fell apart under her touch - exposing the stump of the mercenary’s leg once more. Only a bit of blood trickled out now - but as Bernie began rubbing her fingers against the wound, she got more blood to come out of it. Along with some more pained gasps from the purple-haired ninja.
After teasing the wound for a bit, Bernie took Madelyn’s short sword. Then, she lined it up with Shez’s other knee - though not before removing the metal kneepad shielding it. Maybe if she had that on her other leg, she’d have been fine now! But instead Bernie was able to just bring the sword down - and hack Shez’s other leg off, leaving the amputee ninja just with her pair of very meaty thighs. Blood immediately spurted from the open wound - Shez yelling in pain once more.
Bernie immediately snatched the leg up - its toes still curling and opening as the purplette got to the front of Shez’s body once more. Showing the mercenary ninja her severed limb. And then, as Shez tried to say something, she shoved the front of the foot into the amputee’s mouth - Shez’s voice muffled by her own toes as they went in between her lips. She could still feel them moving inside her mouth, touching her tongue and teeth… Ugh! Her stomach revolted at the sensation…
The purplette left the foot inside Shez’s mouth for a moment longer - before pulling it out, the purple-eyed ninja’s saliva dripping from her toes onto her sandal. She quickly took the short sword up again - targeting another one of the amputee ninja’s limbs. The end of Shez’s forearm guard provided a nice reference point for where to cut - Bernie swinging the weapon down to hack yet another limb off in a quick slice. The bones of Shez’s arm provided barely any resistance - and just like that, the arm was gone. Shez let out another pained yelp as that happened - but this one had a bit less vigor than her previous pained screams.
Madelyn kept riding the dildo with plenty of force - Shez’s inner walls stretching more and more underneath her. She watched her girlfriend amputate more of Shez’s limbs - the sight pushing the green-haired ninja towards cumming. A few more bounces, and she came - squirting her release over the purple-haired ninja’s curvy buttocks. Getting off the toy moments later, she exchanged a kiss with Bernie - who took her spot at plowing the mercenary’s ass while handing the princess’s weapon back to her.
The princess wasted no time hacking Shez’s remaining limb off - leaving the mercenary with just half the length of limbs she started the day with. Shez’s arm was covered in fishnets on that side - but they offered no protection, a single strike more than enough to detach it. Lifting the arm up, Madelyn removed the forearm guard from it - before going behind her girlfriend.
While Bernie fucked herself and Shez with the dildo, Madelyn pushed both of Shez’s leg stumps apart - exposing the purple-haired mercenary’s bare pussy. She guided the severed arm in between Shez’s thighs - teasing the entrance with the ninja’s still-moving fingers. Then, she shoved the arm in, with just as much force as she did for Shez’s asshole - the entire hand pushed inside Shez’s cunt in one go.
Running the arm back and forth, Madelyn began fisting Shez using her own severed arm - her sensitive walls poked at by her limp fingers and fingernails. She kept thrusting the toy in and out - the pained gasps from in front of her just a sign to keep going - while her girlfriend continued to violate Shez’s asshole with another oversized insertion. The pair fucked both of Shez’s holes together for a bit longer - Madelyn only stopping as she got almost the entire arm to stick inside Shez.
Madelyn moved to the front of Shez’s body once more. She was rewarded with a sight of Shez’s strained face - with a blush, and two streams of tears on each of her cheeks. The quad amputee looked at her through her tears. Beneath all the pain, Madelyn could still sense an inkling of disdain - and anger at the girls who put her through all this suffering. Impressive, she didn’t break fully! Not that it was going to make a difference for her anyway.
Kneeling down besides Shez’s head, Madelyn placed her hands on each of the purple-haired ninja’s temples. Then, she began twisting. Shez’s eyes widened as she understood what Madelyn was doing - Madelyn savoring the fresh fear that appeared in them. In no time, Shez was looking to the side. It was as far as her spine would twist. But the green-haired ninja kept going. Sounds of bones breaking filled the corridor as Shez’s spine began to crack - until finally, with one loud CRACK, her neck broke.
A shiver went through Shez’s entire body - the dying girl starting to spasm on the ground underneath Bernie. Her four shortened limbs smacked at the ground a few times each - her breasts spilling free from her ninja dress as her chest dragged across the ground. Her eyes rolled in their eye sockets - going bloodshot as they shot up to the roof, her irises barely visible. Her mouth hung open once more - a limp tongue sticking out as drool and foam joined the tears still pumping out of her eyes.
Madelyn kept twisting Shez’s head until it ended up facing the opposite direction - giving her girlfriend a great look of the dead ninja’s dying expression. Then, the green-haired ninja just glanced over at Bernie - and watched the purplette ride the dildo to another climax just a few bounces later.
With Bernie cumming, Madelyn resumed twisting Shez’s neck - to more spasms from the amputee mercenary. Her skin and flesh began to stretch as she forced the head to complete a full rotation. They began to tear midway through the second turn. As strands of skin and tissue began to snap, it in turn made it easier for Madelyn to keep turning the head. In total, it took her about four rotations to fully separate the head from the rest of Shez’s body. Once she did, she immediately placed a kiss on the dead girl’s lips - tasting both her saliva and her tears for a bit. Then, she handed the head over to her girlfriend - Bernie getting to taste both Shez’s saliva, and Madelyn’s as well as she, too, made out with the severed head.
After a bit of shuffling Shez’s limp tongue around - and retrieving the dildo out of Shez’s ass - both ninja hunters were ready to leave the headless amputee behind. Shez would join Yunaka on their trophy wall - but they had no further use for the body. The guard who fucked Shamir’s brains into a mush would later come across Shez’s carcass - smearing the brains of Shez’s last kill all over the insides of her pussy after ripping out the arm that Madelyn had stuffed inside it.
Another part of being a ninja was dealing with traps - something Shez wasn’t super keen on. Paying close attention to her surroundings was boring! She’d rather just move swiftly and carry out her mission quickly. Still, better to do that than to end up splattered by the defense mechanisms… And she did understand the basics of dismantling those things too. It was as simple as pressing in a few right spots, and the whole thing usually just fell apart! Right? …This corridor she was in was awfully quiet, wasn’t it? The purple-haired ninja took a more careful look around - spotting some suspicious indentations along the walls. Along with some floor tiles in line with them. Hmmm.
Eager to put her disarming skills to a test, Shez knelt down by one of the suspicious tiles on the floor - one leg below her chest, the other stretched out behind her. Taking her dagger, the mercenary tried slipping it into the gap in the floor tiles - aiming to use it to prop the suspicious tile up. However, her blade was a bit too wide for that - pressing the tile down instead. And triggering the trap the purple-haired ninja had been trying to disarm.
Vertically-oriented blades shot out from the wall in the blink of an eye. Luckily for Shez, they emerged behind her - so most of her body was safe. Except for the leg that was behind her. A blade sliced right through it without slowing down at all - cutting the mercenary’s leg in two directly under her knee.
“Aaaah!”
Shez yelled in pain - twisting backwards on her surviving leg, barely keeping her balance as she did. That was not how this was supposed to go! The ninja stared in shock at the piece of limb laying on the ground in front of her - blood spurting from the stump. She could see her toes moving in her sandals - and some of the red wraps starting to unroll from her leg. The mercenary glanced down at the stump still attached to her body - shaking her head in disbelief at how short her leg was now. There was no way she could continue like this…
Gritting her teeth, Shez grabbed the severed limb - rolling off more of the wraps to use them on the other stump. They were red already - it was fitting to have blood pour into them, right? She used as much of them as she could to cover up her leg stump - stopping the bleeding somewhat.
With her wound treated - as much as she could do it right away, anyway - Shez began her return trip. She moved on her fours - well, threes - back through the corridors. Her leg hurt a lot - but she kept telling herself that once she got out, she’d easily find someone to treat her leg properly. They had so many mages in this world. Surely fixing her leg would be no issue for them, right?
Reassuring herself this way, Shez was able to make some proper progress. Soon, she got to the spot she struck Shamir down earlier. There was now a guard there - but luckily for the amputee ninja, the man was entirely focused on Shamir’s corpse. The opening in the dead mercenary’s head was large enough for a cock to fit through - the man doing his best to turn her brains into mush with his thrusts. He was entirely focused on Shamir’s corpse as he did that - which let Shez sneak by even in her current state.
However, the purple-haired ninja’s luck wouldn’t last forever. Soon, she saw a pair of ninjas going in her direction - and they spotted her without any issues. The duo went straight for her - but they would help her, right? She clearly wasn’t a threat to them, like Shamir had been for her…
As the girls drew closer, Shez was able to recognize one of them. Well, somewhat. The purplette didn’t look exactly the way she remembered her - but close enough that she could still tell it was a classmate of hers from Garreg Mach.
“Bernie! Is that you? Wow, you grew a really nice pair of tits! This place really suits you, huh? Way better than the monastery did. Would you mind helping me out? For old times’ sake?”
Bernadetta looked down at Shez - a worrying smirk appearing on her face instead of pity.
“Nope! Mad, you can take first round this time~”
As she spoke, the purplette used her sandals-clad feet to stomp on Shez’s hands - making her drop one of her daggers. Madelyn’s heel cracked into one of Shez’s vulnerable elbows to achieve the same result on her other arm - both standing ninjas kicking the amputee ninja's weapons away so she couldn’t reach them anymore.
First round of what? Shez asked herself that while looking at the two ninjas over her - watching as the green-haired one began pulling something out from her satchel. It was a dildo - and a rather hefty one, at that. Wait, how did it even fit into the satchel? But it rather clearly answered what the pair was gonna do to her.
“M-Maybe we can talk about it?”
Shez shook her head while Madelyn walked over to her lower body. With the purple-haired ninja on her belly on the ground, it left her ass perfectly accessible. Madelyn just had to slice some - rather large - bits of her ninja tunic off, and then she exposed the mercenary’s sizable asscheeks.
“Bernie? P-Please?
The mercenary asked in panic as Madelyn knelt behind her - the Askran princess’s fingers grabbing onto her panties. She pulled them down onto Shez’s pretty meaty legs - well, on one side at least, the girl’s fishnets stopping her on the other. But what mattered was uncovering the small hole of the mercenary’s sphincter. Shez shook her head as she felt Madelyn probe her backdoor with her fingers - stretching it out a bit to try things out. The purple-haired ninja had seen how large the toy was - there was just no way it’d fit…
But there was. Madelyn rammed the toy into the tiny opening - breaking the ring of flesh in with a strong thrust. Shez screamed in agony as the pain from her ass hit her - tears flashing in her eyes as the green-haired ninja forced the toy as deep into her rectum as it would go. Once it was firmly stuck inside Shez’s ass, Madelyn tucked her leotard to the side - and took the toy inside her pussy once more. Lowering herself onto the dildo, she also put pressure into it, forcing it deeper into the amputee ninja’s ass - Shez growling in pain as Madelyn violated her butt even more.
Bernie savored the agony and tears on Shez’s face for a moment - before also getting to work on the purple-haired ninja. Walking besides her lover, she reached for the wounded leg behind Madelyn. The messily-tied wraps Shez put on quickly fell apart under her touch - exposing the stump of the mercenary’s leg once more. Only a bit of blood trickled out now - but as Bernie began rubbing her fingers against the wound, she got more blood to come out of it. Along with some more pained gasps from the purple-haired ninja.
After teasing the wound for a bit, Bernie took Madelyn’s short sword. Then, she lined it up with Shez’s other knee - though not before removing the metal kneepad shielding it. Maybe if she had that on her other leg, she’d have been fine now! But instead Bernie was able to just bring the sword down - and hack Shez’s other leg off, leaving the amputee ninja just with her pair of very meaty thighs. Blood immediately spurted from the open wound - Shez yelling in pain once more.
Bernie immediately snatched the leg up - its toes still curling and opening as the purplette got to the front of Shez’s body once more. Showing the mercenary ninja her severed limb. And then, as Shez tried to say something, she shoved the front of the foot into the amputee’s mouth - Shez’s voice muffled by her own toes as they went in between her lips. She could still feel them moving inside her mouth, touching her tongue and teeth… Ugh! Her stomach revolted at the sensation…
The purplette left the foot inside Shez’s mouth for a moment longer - before pulling it out, the purple-eyed ninja’s saliva dripping from her toes onto her sandal. She quickly took the short sword up again - targeting another one of the amputee ninja’s limbs. The end of Shez’s forearm guard provided a nice reference point for where to cut - Bernie swinging the weapon down to hack yet another limb off in a quick slice. The bones of Shez’s arm provided barely any resistance - and just like that, the arm was gone. Shez let out another pained yelp as that happened - but this one had a bit less vigor than her previous pained screams.
Madelyn kept riding the dildo with plenty of force - Shez’s inner walls stretching more and more underneath her. She watched her girlfriend amputate more of Shez’s limbs - the sight pushing the green-haired ninja towards cumming. A few more bounces, and she came - squirting her release over the purple-haired ninja’s curvy buttocks. Getting off the toy moments later, she exchanged a kiss with Bernie - who took her spot at plowing the mercenary’s ass while handing the princess’s weapon back to her.
The princess wasted no time hacking Shez’s remaining limb off - leaving the mercenary with just half the length of limbs she started the day with. Shez’s arm was covered in fishnets on that side - but they offered no protection, a single strike more than enough to detach it. Lifting the arm up, Madelyn removed the forearm guard from it - before going behind her girlfriend.
While Bernie fucked herself and Shez with the dildo, Madelyn pushed both of Shez’s leg stumps apart - exposing the purple-haired mercenary’s bare pussy. She guided the severed arm in between Shez’s thighs - teasing the entrance with the ninja’s still-moving fingers. Then, she shoved the arm in, with just as much force as she did for Shez’s asshole - the entire hand pushed inside Shez’s cunt in one go.
Running the arm back and forth, Madelyn began fisting Shez using her own severed arm - her sensitive walls poked at by her limp fingers and fingernails. She kept thrusting the toy in and out - the pained gasps from in front of her just a sign to keep going - while her girlfriend continued to violate Shez’s asshole with another oversized insertion. The pair fucked both of Shez’s holes together for a bit longer - Madelyn only stopping as she got almost the entire arm to stick inside Shez.
Madelyn moved to the front of Shez’s body once more. She was rewarded with a sight of Shez’s strained face - with a blush, and two streams of tears on each of her cheeks. The quad amputee looked at her through her tears. Beneath all the pain, Madelyn could still sense an inkling of disdain - and anger at the girls who put her through all this suffering. Impressive, she didn’t break fully! Not that it was going to make a difference for her anyway.
Kneeling down besides Shez’s head, Madelyn placed her hands on each of the purple-haired ninja’s temples. Then, she began twisting. Shez’s eyes widened as she understood what Madelyn was doing - Madelyn savoring the fresh fear that appeared in them. In no time, Shez was looking to the side. It was as far as her spine would twist. But the green-haired ninja kept going. Sounds of bones breaking filled the corridor as Shez’s spine began to crack - until finally, with one loud CRACK, her neck broke.
A shiver went through Shez’s entire body - the dying girl starting to spasm on the ground underneath Bernie. Her four shortened limbs smacked at the ground a few times each - her breasts spilling free from her ninja dress as her chest dragged across the ground. Her eyes rolled in their eye sockets - going bloodshot as they shot up to the roof, her irises barely visible. Her mouth hung open once more - a limp tongue sticking out as drool and foam joined the tears still pumping out of her eyes.
Madelyn kept twisting Shez’s head until it ended up facing the opposite direction - giving her girlfriend a great look of the dead ninja’s dying expression. Then, the green-haired ninja just glanced over at Bernie - and watched the purplette ride the dildo to another climax just a few bounces later.
With Bernie cumming, Madelyn resumed twisting Shez’s neck - to more spasms from the amputee mercenary. Her skin and flesh began to stretch as she forced the head to complete a full rotation. They began to tear midway through the second turn. As strands of skin and tissue began to snap, it in turn made it easier for Madelyn to keep turning the head. In total, it took her about four rotations to fully separate the head from the rest of Shez’s body. Once she did, she immediately placed a kiss on the dead girl’s lips - tasting both her saliva and her tears for a bit. Then, she handed the head over to her girlfriend - Bernie getting to taste both Shez’s saliva, and Madelyn’s as well as she, too, made out with the severed head.
After a bit of shuffling Shez’s limp tongue around - and retrieving the dildo out of Shez’s ass - both ninja hunters were ready to leave the headless amputee behind. Shez would join Yunaka on their trophy wall - but they had no further use for the body. The guard who fucked Shamir’s brains into a mush would later come across Shez’s carcass - smearing the brains of Shez’s last kill all over the insides of her pussy after ripping out the arm that Madelyn had stuffed inside it.
Participating in the ninja festival seemed like a good way to get Kiran’s attention to Gullveig. The Golden Seer gladly put on a ninja kimono - one that left sides of her head-sized breasts exposed, as well as her overly meaty thighs and hips. Because of that, it also left the scales and golden lines stretching across the skin of her legs fully visible. She considered putting an undershirt on too - but quickly realized the summoner would be happier if she didn’t.
Dressed for the festival, the woman with the horn sticking out of her forehead arrived at the festival grounds. Her heart fluttered wildly as she saw the summoner notice her. The fact the robes-clad man immediately made his way towards her only made her even happier. The man stared at her giant tits for a moment - before starting to speak. She was surprised to hear him forbid her from using her time powers during the festival - but the snake-haired woman would gladly do anything he demanded from her.
“I shall do as you say, Kiran. I promise you. And I will triumph for you!”
Gullveig declared confidently. The summoner just nodded in response - before moving on to checking out the other girls participating that day.
Before long, the festival began in the earnest - and all the ninja girls set off. All except for Gullveig. As the golden-eyed woman stood there and watched the others leave, she realized there was something she didn’t really understand about ninjas. Just what exactly did ‘stealth’ mean? Normally, she would just crush anyone standing in her way using her magic. Basically no one could withstand her powers - which meant she had no need for any special tactics like that. She tried to wrap her head around the concept for a little longer - but the nonexistent frame of reference led to her being unsuccessful in that. Eventually, she just shook her head and set off too - deciding to just default to what she knew best.
***
“N-No! L-Laegjarn…”
Fjorm gasped in shock and pain as she watched Laegjarn’s head fall to the ground - most of the Muspell princess’s body devoured by a giant golden snake in a single bite. As the snake vanished, leaving only sand behind, so did her girlfriend’s body - with the head being the only remaining piece of the green-haired ninja that was still intact. Fjorm looked at the perpetrator with tears in her eyes - Gullveig’s face emotionless as she continued to float in the Nifl princess’s direction.
“Please… Don’t…”
The blonde weakly shook her head - watching as Gullveig outstretched her arms to the sides to summon another giant snake. Fjorm closed her eyes as the snake pounced at her - finding herself knocked up into the air. Her legs were pushed aside as the snake’s head went in between them - the ninja princess’s entire torso in the magical reptile’s mouth. Then, it bit down - its two fangs piercing into the base of Fjorm’s neck. The nifl princess lost contact with the rest of her body at that point - only feeling pain from the stump of her neck.
As the snake dissolved into sand, so did all of Fjorm’s torso. Her arms and legs fell to the ground - with her head following them. The thud of a rough landing made her eyes open up again - seeing Laegjarn’s dead face right in front of her. The ice princess stared at her lover’s lifeless expression as she too faded away - while Gullveig floated above the bloody remains, entirely unconcerned about them.
Fjorm and Laegjarn had been the latest of the Golden Seer’s victims - the silver-haired woman just unleashing her magic on anyone that she came across. Be it guards who tried to stop her after noticing her just floating forwards without any attempt to conceal herself - or other ninja girls who could take the winner’s spot from her. They were all obstacles in her path - obstacles that she easily dispatched. Sooner or later, she’d find the secret message - and become the festival’s victor.
Her rampage didn’t exactly go unnoticed, though.
“Gullveeeeeeig!”
A yell reached Gullveig’s ears - the woman with time powers turning in the air to see who was calling her name. As she saw a ninja girl approach, she immediately began preparing her magic again - but stopped just short of using it. That green hair, those breasts that compared evenly against her own… It was Kiran’s daughter, wasn’t it? The summoner had forbidden Gullveig from interfering with the girl in any way the day the snake-haired woman had been summoned. Was she here with a message from her father?
“You haven’t even tried to act like a ninja! You failed! You didn’t conceal your presence in the slightest! We can’t have a winner who isn’t even really participating in the main challenge! Sorry, but you’ve been disqualified from the festival. And dad sent me here to dish out your punishment for it~”
As Madelyn spoke, she eyed Gullveig with anticipation. Would she get to experience what dissolving into sand as one of the Golden Seer’s victims felt like? …Awwww, it seemed like mentioning her father worked and the golden-horned woman wasn’t gonna use her magic on her simply because she didn’t like what she heard. Bummer.
Gullveig closed her eyes as she heard it. Her plan failed. Once again. How many loops, and yet no success for her… Oh, Kiran…
“If that is what Kiran wishes, then so be it.”
She answered sorrowfully - with Madelyn nodding excitedly in response, the anticipation for killing the girl already replacing the ninja princess’s disappointment.
“Great! Before we start, let’s get to a more fitting spot~”
Madelyn glanced around - spotting the remains of a nearby wall. Gullveig’s magic had broken off most of it off the top - with just a stone pedestal being left behind. A pedestal that was just the perfect height if a certain heavy-chested ninja knelt down in front of it.
“Theeere!”
The green-haired ninja pointed at the pedestal before running towards it. Once she got there, she dug into her satchel - taking out a magical orb on a stick. She drove the base of it into the ground - pushing it deep enough into the ground to keep it from falling over.
“With this, dad can watch it all happen~!”
Madelyn explained to Gullveig as she saw the golden-eyed woman look at it - Gullveig’s heart beating faster as she heard it. So, at least Kiran would witness her final moments…
“To start things off, your clothes have to go~!”
The princess told Gullveig cheerfully. The golden-horned woman didn’t respond - she simply unclasped her sash and let it fall. Then, she let the kimono unwrap from the rest of her body - her mountainous mammaries bouncing free as she helped the outfit downwards. Her areolas were golden, like the other lines on her skin - her nipples also that color, already sticking out proudly from her chest. After her flat stomach, her pussy began to show - the Golden Seer wearing no underwear under her outfit. The inner sides of her thighs had some more scales across them - but her entrance didn’t.
Madelyn had since gotten out of her leotard, with just the fishnets covering her own giant tits. The hole she opened in them for her pussy earlier was still there - letting the cold air brush right against her slit too. Once Gullveig’s kimono fell off, the princess got by her - one hand going for Gullveig’s pussy while the other felt up her tits. The naked ninja made no sound as Madelyn teased her slit and groped her - but some wetness did get onto the princess’s palm as she slipped her digits inside for a moment. She pumped them in and out a few times - moving away as she saw some heat creep onto Gullveig’s cheeks.
“Now~ Get to your knees right there!”
Madelyn gestured at the pedestal once more - Gullveig floating over to it. Then, she lowered herself to the ground - her sandals-clad feet connecting with the ground for what felt like the first time in centuries. Kneeling? That was also something she had no experience with… But she could recall some of the people she killed dropping to their knees in the instant before her magic reached them. That’s what Kiran’s daughter wanted from her, then? So be it.
As she dropped down to her knees, Gullveig’s chest ended up right by the pedestal’s edge - with its edge poking into the front of her tits. Madelyn was by her right away - bringing the oversized orbs up to have them rest fully on the rough stone surface. That let Gullveig shuffle a bit closer to the pedestal.
Still over Gullveig, Madelyn reached into her satchel once more. Her normal sword ninja wouldn’t do it there! With such a nice pair of boobs, she needed something that could take them off in one go! She took out a ninja katana instead - holding it in both hands as she let the blade rest on top of Gullveig’s breasts. A thrill caused by the cold running down the horned woman’s spine was all she was looking for - and once the princess saw the kneeling seer shiver, she lifted the blade above Gullveig’s chest.
Just as Madelyn was getting ready to swing it down, another idea popped into her head - one which she promptly announced:
“Oh, I know! Dad would like it even more if you do part of it yourself.”
As the green-haired girl said that, she took out her normal ninja sword back after all - and put it on the pedestal. Gullveig looked at it - unsure what the princess wanted from her.
“What am I to do with this?”
The horned woman asked after a moment.
“You’ll take it, and drive it into your stomach! Oh, wait, but first, can you shift over to the side of this thing? Then dad will get to see your belly getting cut open too!”
Madelyn explained - Gullveig obeying by making her entire body levitate in her kneeling position and then rotating around the wall until she was sideways from the magical orb’s perspective. Then, she lowered herself back to the ground once more - to a satisfied nod from the green-haired ninja.
“Oh, one more thing! Could you use your magic to hold your hair out of the way? Like this?”
As Madelyn explained, she pushed Gullveig’s long hair out to the side - giving herself easier access to the Golden Seer’s neck. There were a few scales on it that the ninja girl teased with her fingers - but they shouldn’t pose a problem to her katana anyway. The hair began to glow a little as its owner listened to that request of the Askran princess too - staying out of the way even after Madelyn let go of it.
“Alright, now we can begin! Lean forward a bit, and take the knife!”
The green-haired girl shouted another order - Gullveig’s fingers grasping the handle of the ninja sword. With Madelyn’s earlier words, she knew to grab while having it point at herself. She leaned forwards over the pedestal as she took it towards her belly - her defenseless neck and giant breasts now lined up perfectly. Soon, the sword’s tip was poking against the top part of Gullveig’s stomach.
“A bit more to the side… Perfect!”
Madelyn guided Gullveig some more - and once she approved, the snake-haired woman thrust it into her belly. There was no reaction from her as her flesh split open - with a trickle of golden blood starting to drip down her skin.
“Now, pull it to the side~”
The princess gave Gullveig one final command - the golden-horned woman dragging the blade sideways across her stomach. More golden blood began to flow from her wound - with coils of cut innards starting to fall out of the opening too. Despite that, Gullveig didn’t even flinch. This type of physical pain was entirely new to her - but it wasn’t anywhere close to shaking her.
Whoosh!
With the initial cut finished, Madelyn brought her katana down. It cut through the neck, severing the head without any issues and avoiding the hair - before continuing downwards. And cleaving both of Gullveig’s massive tits off in one go too.
The head rolled forwards onto the pedestal - the horn making it fall to the side, with Gullveig facing the magic orb while her hair fell to the side. Her hair snakes went limp right away dangling off the side of it too. Her breasts remained on the pedestal - with golden blood fountaining from the neck stump and onto them from above, joining the blood spilled on them by the falling head. Without the head, her body began spasming - one hand still clutching the sword in her belly, the other swinging a bit. Her torso rocked back and forth - two large circular stumps on it continuing to leak blood and fat that dripped down her belly. Her hips shook from side to side - but her legs remained in place, locked in by the position of her body.
Gullveig’s golden eyes focused on the orb. She knew Kiran could see her through it. What did he think of her final moments? Was he satisfied with them? She hoped watching her die at least made him happy… With what she knew of him, he most definitely did… But she’d never know… For sure… Too bad… She didn’t get… To do more… With him…
Two small trails of tears left Gullveig’s eyes as she thought that - the golden eyes going dim moments later.
Once the snake-haired woman’s body stopped twitching, it slumped forwards - resting against the pedestal once more. By the time it did, Madelyn had already hidden the weapon she used to behead the Golden Seer - and now, with her body limp, the Askran princess went to recover her other sword. Gullveig’s fingers were clamped down hard on the handle, though - Madelyn taking some time to pry them off the handle. Once she did, she threw the sword into her satchel too - before running over to the magical orb.
Stashing the magical device away too, the princess returned to the corpse. The princess stuffed the head into her satchel as well - the long hair with snakes at the ends requiring a lot of effort to fit it in even into a magical container. Afterwards, she threw the severed tits in as well. Finally, she hoisted the headless, debreasted corpse up - bringing it over to where her father had been watching the improvised seppuku.
Arriving at the festival’s main desk where her father had been waiting, Madelyn dropped the corpse off. She also gave Kiran the head - she knew he’d like a go at it too. She kept the severed breasts, though - moving on to where Bernie had been waiting too. The purplette wanted absolutely nothing to do with Gullveig - and Madelyn agreed with her on that. They had no guarantee that Gullveig was gonna be as obedient as she ended up being - it was way safer for the purplette to just stick around back there. She got to watch the whole show just like Kiran did, though - the messy-haired ninja also grinding her head against Shez’s lips and making out with Yunaka’s head while she watched her girlfriend murder the golden-horned woman. The pair reunited with a happy kiss - before going to the field kitchen to throw Gullvegi’s breasts over the flames and have a little feast with them.
As the green-haired ninja handed Gullveig’s corpse over, her father was immediately on it. Kiran rammed his dick up Gullveig’s still-warm pussy with ease - feeling it twitch in response to his penetration. At first, his fingers were all over her wide hips and thighs as he kept thrusting deeper and deeper inside her. Besides feeling the rich flesh up, he also touched the golden lines across it - as well as the scales. Each of them felt different, and way rougher compared to her soft skin - but the summoner still enjoyed feeling them up. If Gullveig were still alive, she’d be so happy about the attention she was getting. Instead, her empty eyes just got to watch her headless body get fucked by the man she loved.
After groping Gullveig’s thighs for a bit longer, Kiran moved on to teasing her breast stumps instead. The unusual blood color made it more interesting - but the exposed flesh felt normal otherwise. Finally, his attention turned to the hole in the corpse’s stomach. Madelyn carrying it around shook some more guts out - but there were still plenty more of them inside. He kept pulling on them while his thrusts kept picking up the pace - getting them all over the headless body. His thrusts kept shaking the corpse for a bit longer while he did - all the way to filling her pussy up with his release.
Following that, Kiran grabbed the head up. He thrust in between Gullveig’s gaping lips - making sure to avoid the horn sticking out of the dead seer’s forehead. Her golden eyes rolled around in their sockets as he kept thrusting. Her tongue somehow still licked his shaft once its tip touched it. Because of the horn, he needed to be more careful than usual while fucking the severed head - which in turn made the sensation less fun. Still, the half-dried tears on her cheeks soon were joined by his spunk - the summoner quickly blowing his load before setting the head down.
Madelyn retrieved the head from her father after the festival - her and Bernie adding it to her trophy wall along with Shez and Yunaka. While those two could just go on normal spikes like the dozens of other heads decorating the walls, Gullveig required special treatment. She had so much hair, she would have needed a less crowded spot by herself anyway. However, some of her hair strands also connected together - with the large braid-like batches of hair turning into golden snakes. They weren’t as giant as the ones she summoned with her magic - but they were permanently there, even long after she died. Being such an unique feature for one of their trophies, the two ninjas put some extra supports with that spike - coiling each snake around one. Between them and the horn, the Golden Seer was easily the most unique trophy in their collection - both Mad and Benrie very happy that they were able to get it.
Dressed for the festival, the woman with the horn sticking out of her forehead arrived at the festival grounds. Her heart fluttered wildly as she saw the summoner notice her. The fact the robes-clad man immediately made his way towards her only made her even happier. The man stared at her giant tits for a moment - before starting to speak. She was surprised to hear him forbid her from using her time powers during the festival - but the snake-haired woman would gladly do anything he demanded from her.
“I shall do as you say, Kiran. I promise you. And I will triumph for you!”
Gullveig declared confidently. The summoner just nodded in response - before moving on to checking out the other girls participating that day.
Before long, the festival began in the earnest - and all the ninja girls set off. All except for Gullveig. As the golden-eyed woman stood there and watched the others leave, she realized there was something she didn’t really understand about ninjas. Just what exactly did ‘stealth’ mean? Normally, she would just crush anyone standing in her way using her magic. Basically no one could withstand her powers - which meant she had no need for any special tactics like that. She tried to wrap her head around the concept for a little longer - but the nonexistent frame of reference led to her being unsuccessful in that. Eventually, she just shook her head and set off too - deciding to just default to what she knew best.
***
“N-No! L-Laegjarn…”
Fjorm gasped in shock and pain as she watched Laegjarn’s head fall to the ground - most of the Muspell princess’s body devoured by a giant golden snake in a single bite. As the snake vanished, leaving only sand behind, so did her girlfriend’s body - with the head being the only remaining piece of the green-haired ninja that was still intact. Fjorm looked at the perpetrator with tears in her eyes - Gullveig’s face emotionless as she continued to float in the Nifl princess’s direction.
“Please… Don’t…”
The blonde weakly shook her head - watching as Gullveig outstretched her arms to the sides to summon another giant snake. Fjorm closed her eyes as the snake pounced at her - finding herself knocked up into the air. Her legs were pushed aside as the snake’s head went in between them - the ninja princess’s entire torso in the magical reptile’s mouth. Then, it bit down - its two fangs piercing into the base of Fjorm’s neck. The nifl princess lost contact with the rest of her body at that point - only feeling pain from the stump of her neck.
As the snake dissolved into sand, so did all of Fjorm’s torso. Her arms and legs fell to the ground - with her head following them. The thud of a rough landing made her eyes open up again - seeing Laegjarn’s dead face right in front of her. The ice princess stared at her lover’s lifeless expression as she too faded away - while Gullveig floated above the bloody remains, entirely unconcerned about them.
Fjorm and Laegjarn had been the latest of the Golden Seer’s victims - the silver-haired woman just unleashing her magic on anyone that she came across. Be it guards who tried to stop her after noticing her just floating forwards without any attempt to conceal herself - or other ninja girls who could take the winner’s spot from her. They were all obstacles in her path - obstacles that she easily dispatched. Sooner or later, she’d find the secret message - and become the festival’s victor.
Her rampage didn’t exactly go unnoticed, though.
“Gullveeeeeeig!”
A yell reached Gullveig’s ears - the woman with time powers turning in the air to see who was calling her name. As she saw a ninja girl approach, she immediately began preparing her magic again - but stopped just short of using it. That green hair, those breasts that compared evenly against her own… It was Kiran’s daughter, wasn’t it? The summoner had forbidden Gullveig from interfering with the girl in any way the day the snake-haired woman had been summoned. Was she here with a message from her father?
“You haven’t even tried to act like a ninja! You failed! You didn’t conceal your presence in the slightest! We can’t have a winner who isn’t even really participating in the main challenge! Sorry, but you’ve been disqualified from the festival. And dad sent me here to dish out your punishment for it~”
As Madelyn spoke, she eyed Gullveig with anticipation. Would she get to experience what dissolving into sand as one of the Golden Seer’s victims felt like? …Awwww, it seemed like mentioning her father worked and the golden-horned woman wasn’t gonna use her magic on her simply because she didn’t like what she heard. Bummer.
Gullveig closed her eyes as she heard it. Her plan failed. Once again. How many loops, and yet no success for her… Oh, Kiran…
“If that is what Kiran wishes, then so be it.”
She answered sorrowfully - with Madelyn nodding excitedly in response, the anticipation for killing the girl already replacing the ninja princess’s disappointment.
“Great! Before we start, let’s get to a more fitting spot~”
Madelyn glanced around - spotting the remains of a nearby wall. Gullveig’s magic had broken off most of it off the top - with just a stone pedestal being left behind. A pedestal that was just the perfect height if a certain heavy-chested ninja knelt down in front of it.
“Theeere!”
The green-haired ninja pointed at the pedestal before running towards it. Once she got there, she dug into her satchel - taking out a magical orb on a stick. She drove the base of it into the ground - pushing it deep enough into the ground to keep it from falling over.
“With this, dad can watch it all happen~!”
Madelyn explained to Gullveig as she saw the golden-eyed woman look at it - Gullveig’s heart beating faster as she heard it. So, at least Kiran would witness her final moments…
“To start things off, your clothes have to go~!”
The princess told Gullveig cheerfully. The golden-horned woman didn’t respond - she simply unclasped her sash and let it fall. Then, she let the kimono unwrap from the rest of her body - her mountainous mammaries bouncing free as she helped the outfit downwards. Her areolas were golden, like the other lines on her skin - her nipples also that color, already sticking out proudly from her chest. After her flat stomach, her pussy began to show - the Golden Seer wearing no underwear under her outfit. The inner sides of her thighs had some more scales across them - but her entrance didn’t.
Madelyn had since gotten out of her leotard, with just the fishnets covering her own giant tits. The hole she opened in them for her pussy earlier was still there - letting the cold air brush right against her slit too. Once Gullveig’s kimono fell off, the princess got by her - one hand going for Gullveig’s pussy while the other felt up her tits. The naked ninja made no sound as Madelyn teased her slit and groped her - but some wetness did get onto the princess’s palm as she slipped her digits inside for a moment. She pumped them in and out a few times - moving away as she saw some heat creep onto Gullveig’s cheeks.
“Now~ Get to your knees right there!”
Madelyn gestured at the pedestal once more - Gullveig floating over to it. Then, she lowered herself to the ground - her sandals-clad feet connecting with the ground for what felt like the first time in centuries. Kneeling? That was also something she had no experience with… But she could recall some of the people she killed dropping to their knees in the instant before her magic reached them. That’s what Kiran’s daughter wanted from her, then? So be it.
As she dropped down to her knees, Gullveig’s chest ended up right by the pedestal’s edge - with its edge poking into the front of her tits. Madelyn was by her right away - bringing the oversized orbs up to have them rest fully on the rough stone surface. That let Gullveig shuffle a bit closer to the pedestal.
Still over Gullveig, Madelyn reached into her satchel once more. Her normal sword ninja wouldn’t do it there! With such a nice pair of boobs, she needed something that could take them off in one go! She took out a ninja katana instead - holding it in both hands as she let the blade rest on top of Gullveig’s breasts. A thrill caused by the cold running down the horned woman’s spine was all she was looking for - and once the princess saw the kneeling seer shiver, she lifted the blade above Gullveig’s chest.
Just as Madelyn was getting ready to swing it down, another idea popped into her head - one which she promptly announced:
“Oh, I know! Dad would like it even more if you do part of it yourself.”
As the green-haired girl said that, she took out her normal ninja sword back after all - and put it on the pedestal. Gullveig looked at it - unsure what the princess wanted from her.
“What am I to do with this?”
The horned woman asked after a moment.
“You’ll take it, and drive it into your stomach! Oh, wait, but first, can you shift over to the side of this thing? Then dad will get to see your belly getting cut open too!”
Madelyn explained - Gullveig obeying by making her entire body levitate in her kneeling position and then rotating around the wall until she was sideways from the magical orb’s perspective. Then, she lowered herself back to the ground once more - to a satisfied nod from the green-haired ninja.
“Oh, one more thing! Could you use your magic to hold your hair out of the way? Like this?”
As Madelyn explained, she pushed Gullveig’s long hair out to the side - giving herself easier access to the Golden Seer’s neck. There were a few scales on it that the ninja girl teased with her fingers - but they shouldn’t pose a problem to her katana anyway. The hair began to glow a little as its owner listened to that request of the Askran princess too - staying out of the way even after Madelyn let go of it.
“Alright, now we can begin! Lean forward a bit, and take the knife!”
The green-haired girl shouted another order - Gullveig’s fingers grasping the handle of the ninja sword. With Madelyn’s earlier words, she knew to grab while having it point at herself. She leaned forwards over the pedestal as she took it towards her belly - her defenseless neck and giant breasts now lined up perfectly. Soon, the sword’s tip was poking against the top part of Gullveig’s stomach.
“A bit more to the side… Perfect!”
Madelyn guided Gullveig some more - and once she approved, the snake-haired woman thrust it into her belly. There was no reaction from her as her flesh split open - with a trickle of golden blood starting to drip down her skin.
“Now, pull it to the side~”
The princess gave Gullveig one final command - the golden-horned woman dragging the blade sideways across her stomach. More golden blood began to flow from her wound - with coils of cut innards starting to fall out of the opening too. Despite that, Gullveig didn’t even flinch. This type of physical pain was entirely new to her - but it wasn’t anywhere close to shaking her.
Whoosh!
With the initial cut finished, Madelyn brought her katana down. It cut through the neck, severing the head without any issues and avoiding the hair - before continuing downwards. And cleaving both of Gullveig’s massive tits off in one go too.
The head rolled forwards onto the pedestal - the horn making it fall to the side, with Gullveig facing the magic orb while her hair fell to the side. Her hair snakes went limp right away dangling off the side of it too. Her breasts remained on the pedestal - with golden blood fountaining from the neck stump and onto them from above, joining the blood spilled on them by the falling head. Without the head, her body began spasming - one hand still clutching the sword in her belly, the other swinging a bit. Her torso rocked back and forth - two large circular stumps on it continuing to leak blood and fat that dripped down her belly. Her hips shook from side to side - but her legs remained in place, locked in by the position of her body.
Gullveig’s golden eyes focused on the orb. She knew Kiran could see her through it. What did he think of her final moments? Was he satisfied with them? She hoped watching her die at least made him happy… With what she knew of him, he most definitely did… But she’d never know… For sure… Too bad… She didn’t get… To do more… With him…
Two small trails of tears left Gullveig’s eyes as she thought that - the golden eyes going dim moments later.
Once the snake-haired woman’s body stopped twitching, it slumped forwards - resting against the pedestal once more. By the time it did, Madelyn had already hidden the weapon she used to behead the Golden Seer - and now, with her body limp, the Askran princess went to recover her other sword. Gullveig’s fingers were clamped down hard on the handle, though - Madelyn taking some time to pry them off the handle. Once she did, she threw the sword into her satchel too - before running over to the magical orb.
Stashing the magical device away too, the princess returned to the corpse. The princess stuffed the head into her satchel as well - the long hair with snakes at the ends requiring a lot of effort to fit it in even into a magical container. Afterwards, she threw the severed tits in as well. Finally, she hoisted the headless, debreasted corpse up - bringing it over to where her father had been watching the improvised seppuku.
Arriving at the festival’s main desk where her father had been waiting, Madelyn dropped the corpse off. She also gave Kiran the head - she knew he’d like a go at it too. She kept the severed breasts, though - moving on to where Bernie had been waiting too. The purplette wanted absolutely nothing to do with Gullveig - and Madelyn agreed with her on that. They had no guarantee that Gullveig was gonna be as obedient as she ended up being - it was way safer for the purplette to just stick around back there. She got to watch the whole show just like Kiran did, though - the messy-haired ninja also grinding her head against Shez’s lips and making out with Yunaka’s head while she watched her girlfriend murder the golden-horned woman. The pair reunited with a happy kiss - before going to the field kitchen to throw Gullvegi’s breasts over the flames and have a little feast with them.
As the green-haired ninja handed Gullveig’s corpse over, her father was immediately on it. Kiran rammed his dick up Gullveig’s still-warm pussy with ease - feeling it twitch in response to his penetration. At first, his fingers were all over her wide hips and thighs as he kept thrusting deeper and deeper inside her. Besides feeling the rich flesh up, he also touched the golden lines across it - as well as the scales. Each of them felt different, and way rougher compared to her soft skin - but the summoner still enjoyed feeling them up. If Gullveig were still alive, she’d be so happy about the attention she was getting. Instead, her empty eyes just got to watch her headless body get fucked by the man she loved.
After groping Gullveig’s thighs for a bit longer, Kiran moved on to teasing her breast stumps instead. The unusual blood color made it more interesting - but the exposed flesh felt normal otherwise. Finally, his attention turned to the hole in the corpse’s stomach. Madelyn carrying it around shook some more guts out - but there were still plenty more of them inside. He kept pulling on them while his thrusts kept picking up the pace - getting them all over the headless body. His thrusts kept shaking the corpse for a bit longer while he did - all the way to filling her pussy up with his release.
Following that, Kiran grabbed the head up. He thrust in between Gullveig’s gaping lips - making sure to avoid the horn sticking out of the dead seer’s forehead. Her golden eyes rolled around in their sockets as he kept thrusting. Her tongue somehow still licked his shaft once its tip touched it. Because of the horn, he needed to be more careful than usual while fucking the severed head - which in turn made the sensation less fun. Still, the half-dried tears on her cheeks soon were joined by his spunk - the summoner quickly blowing his load before setting the head down.
Madelyn retrieved the head from her father after the festival - her and Bernie adding it to her trophy wall along with Shez and Yunaka. While those two could just go on normal spikes like the dozens of other heads decorating the walls, Gullveig required special treatment. She had so much hair, she would have needed a less crowded spot by herself anyway. However, some of her hair strands also connected together - with the large braid-like batches of hair turning into golden snakes. They weren’t as giant as the ones she summoned with her magic - but they were permanently there, even long after she died. Being such an unique feature for one of their trophies, the two ninjas put some extra supports with that spike - coiling each snake around one. Between them and the horn, the Golden Seer was easily the most unique trophy in their collection - both Mad and Benrie very happy that they were able to get it.
Regarding fanfics with debreasting, how many of them are due to FtMs, compared to Guro fics?
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Our ~professional~ has come out with Chapter 4. No mention of cancer in this one but there's enough shit here to cause it, anyways.
From the same author that gave you that pedophile priest fic where he goes after a child vampire, comes a prompt that anon was inspired by. Imagine feeling inspired and proud over writing child rape.
You will never guess who was spotted in the kudos section: 'Unblooded girlchild' and 'feels like a sexy poop' star PrettyBadMagic. If you had your doubts, let them be dispersed now. She's a pedo.
> He's unusually handsome for the type of person who spends time in caves
He is taking the role of Singed here, and the big difference here is that Singed is ugly and doesn't inspire sexual arousal in these people. Jayce does. So it's so much easier for them to write a hot, sexually attractive man as a pedophile because it doesn't make them feel awful writing it.
> Isn't a complete idiot
> Begins blushing when an attractive man complements them
Either way, someone decided it'd be a great idea for a ten-year-old to get raped, and it wasn't me. I'm just here to call a spade a spade.
> He's an otherworldly handsome genius
And that somehow makes the rapist pedophile not so bad, eh? If he makes you wet, that means it wasn't really rape, yeah?
He's talking about a 10-year-old, btw.
Nothing like shoving a syringe up a minor's vagina. These people are the same ones wondering why they get such a bad rap. Not even GoT has this many people justifying child sex.
> They've never looked so stiff and inflamed
Now does he have a diseased dick, or is that just the author's way of going, WOW LOOK AT IT IT'S SO BIG!
> His presence has a way of doing that to him
He just met him and he's already over the moon? Yeah, you're still a rapist pedophile, please face the wall now.
> Fairly familiar with his own anatomy
He says, while insisting he is male and that the vagina is simply a 'hole' meant for menstruating and childbearing. The uterus gestates the fetus. The vagina is the canal that helps push it out. It is not a hole, you dirtbag misogynist.
> You're so little. I bet someone walking in wouldn't even notice you under me
Yeah because HE IS TEN YEARS OLD, YOU FUCK. Where is Ice-T and the glock when you need him?
> Press his penis against the hole he's been stretching
The kid hasn't even entered puberty. 'Injury' is the daintiest way of putting it - it's going to be turned inside out, especially if pedo bitch here is being literal about the belly bulge here.
> Everything Jayce is doing hurts
> He can pretend he doesn't feel every nerve screaming at him
The word you are looking for is disassociation. Rape victims do that to go somewhere else to protect their mental health.
> Puts a hand on his lower stomach
DO NOT tell me you are going to write a 10-year-old squirting. I will go full Dresden on you.
> He's afraid it's pee
So the author backed out from writing about a 10-year-old squirting, but decided to stick with the belly bulge anyways. In any case, she later admits she had a blast writing it, because some people legitimately enjoy writing child rape for masturbatory purposes:
I think you should have more fun having your blood vessels popped by a noose. Don't kick the chair too soon, now.
BSwaves has updated her 'Juno'-inspired fic. It is one of the few instances where the groomer actually suffers social and narrative punishment.
tigerchristabel, when she isn't writing about human pet shops or keeping disabled people in cages, has written a piece for a gothic horror week, and the film she is basing it on is 'Scream'. Of course, one might think, ' Scream isn't even a gothic horror, it's a satire on other horror films of its era' but don't use those IQ points. Just sit back and let me make Scary Movie references as this whole thing reads like it was cut out of the first film. TL;DR just watch the movie. This is just a cheap, dumber copy-and-paste version.
> She'd debating
*She's debating
> He tuned out ages ago
Yeah who gives a fuck what that babbling nigger is talking about, eh? I bet you tune out when she talks about Malcolm X, too.
> Dmiti
This is a beta-reader who can't even proofread her own work. 200 IQ right there.
> He did get Dmitri arrested, and he knows the accusation was false
You know you can be held in contempt of court over that, right? That 'Dmiti' can sue you for big sums for ruining his life? You don't want him to go Law Abiding Citizen on you.
> I shouldn't waste the rest of my life, and ruining everyone else's in the process, wallowing in grief
Calm down, Cindy Campbell. There's a girl coming out of the TV.
> Unspoken knowledge about his mother's proclivities
Your mom was the town whore just like Maureen Prescott, eh? I wouldn't say you're a rotten apple; that is, unless you decide to fulfill the stereotype of the pooner being the town slut. Trans men getting railed by the town hall is not what I'd consider small-town politics, but they gotte be represented somehow.
> Stay your pretty eyes on course
Of course we have the TOP reference. It has no purpose here. I might as well sing 'Fuck the Shit' by the 'Sons of Butcher'.
> He only moves to fold his arms over his binder
If this is supposed to be set in the 90s, it's nice that modern-day binders you can buy off of Amazon are used. I also don't get how Dmitri is supposed to be the villain when he's constantly asking for permission to remove his clothing.
> Doesn't bother with the binder, it's been on for too long anyway
Nothing says 'wild 90s' and 'fuck gender roles' like warping your ribs! Should've waited to roleplay in the aughts then you can really be accurate.
It's also not a good idea to share hairbrushes. You might get lice, ew.
You got the Ring footage? I bet he could find you on TikTok and amass an army of Kpop stans armed with autism and geolocation to track you down.
In the words of the great, late Sir Christopher Lee, 'Do you know what it's like to be stabbed?' All this dramatic arcing of blood and screaming should be the first clue it's faked. If you are stabbed in the chest like that, and you'd have to angle it to get your ribs or heart, you are not going to be screaming. You'd going to be gasping and grunting. You'd sound like a snorting pig. You definitely won't have time to scream if an artery got hit - and you'd know smarty pants if it was foamy or not.
Then I remembered: this is basically a word-for-word retelling of the 'Scream' script, and that's why there's so much blood. Anyways, have you tried shoving a piano down the steps to fight your attacker?
> What kind of freak has two closets on the same floor?
...Most 90s houses do? Have you lived with teenage siblings? If you are rich you can have connected closets with hidden doors. He also answered his own question so what was the point of this?
> Not even from a stray partygoer
It's not the same one stuck in the garage door, is it?
> When (he) looks down to see his nipples very away of the temperature
...yes, the cold does that. I don't know why this is such a shock.
Oh no! Not Gale Weathers! Who invited these people? If this is supposed to be a parody - read: copy and paste - of the Scream script, how do these characters and the Arcane characters mesh? You're just shoving them into this scenario with no rhyme or reason. Where is Sydney Prescott? Oh, right, she got written out of the story and had this self-insert placed in her stead.
> She takes it too sharp, and the van crashes into the ditch
The way this is written makes it seem as if she crashed into the ditch twice. That's on top of him just standing there while she tries to get a corpse of her roof and veers right toward him. Sucks he's a cripple, otherwise he'd jump out of the way like a GTA pedestrian.
> The wicked smirk of the knife glinting in her back
I wasn't aware knives smirked. Did this one sneak out of the shoe torture scene in 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit'?
> Drag the knife out
More like tug and pull, because muscles are rather thick.
Look, I don't know if this is an elaborate roleplay or a genuine isekai of the film, but screaming into a police radio like that is going to land YOU in jail just as much as your attackers. If you really wanted the cops to come, you should've screamed 'WHITE WOMAN IN TROUBLE!' they'd be right there ready with batons and a Rodney King beatdown.
> His stick
To this day this author refuses to call his cane a cane. She's just so sensitive to disabled people, you know.
> She's a bunny to his fawn
That's cute, I guess. But I really have to laugh: this progshit really, really went with making the Token Black a criminal
Someone doesn't know their tropes; that's the worst one you can do! Imagine SHOOTING the Token Black as a white person? Blasphemy! This ain't the 90s! You can't make jokes like that no more!
Oh I bet. She loved the scene where President and Ja Rule beat up a bunch of disabled people because they thought they were aliens. Must suck to be left outside where the cops can jump her instead of Jayce because she's still darker than he is.
You're not even trying to be original here. I'm just waiting for Dmitri to admit he's gay only for his best bud only to find out that the other just likes clothes and disco music and isn't gay at all.
> I won't tell anyone you're going mad
One can say he's a little...hysterical.
> The Shining and Psycho, right?
There was no 'Here's Johnny!' And a distinctive lack of pianos being thrown down stairs.
> He looks between the two men he's trapped between
Hey, don't feel sad. You'll get your guts rearranged a different way!
> The other is dragging Viktor's father by the collar
But does he sell cocaine on the side?
> Place the phone in his shirt pocket
Must be a big-ass pocket because you could knock someone out with a 90s phone.
> We're playing UESS HOW I'M GONNA DIE
BUT WAIT! THERE'S MORE! HANG ON TO YOUR SEAT, BABY, CUZ THIS ONE'S A SCREAMER
> Rictus
Damn they managed to get Rictus busted for murder? How the hell did Dmitri get arrested, then, if he was the 'real' culprit all along?
> You fucked your own mother's killer, Christ!
Eh, I've read worse. Try fucking a wannabe killer in Walmart jeans.
I'd laugh too, because this is too fucking ridiculous to take seriously. 'Scream' worked as it was mocking other slasher films at the time, and had its main Final Girl do something smart by shooting the killer. Viktor just...goes along with this elaborate plan that really involves killing Dmitri and blaming it on his dad...?
BTW, that line about not going too deep is literally lifted from the movie. It's a shitty copypasta if I've ever seen one.
Faking a murder plot is bad, but you know what's worse? Misgendering! All this drama about running from the killer and nearly getting killed by a reporter was just a ploy for him to kill his abusive boyfriend! If that sounds retarded as fuck, it's because it is. I was completely lost reading this entire thing. She's shoving these random characters into Scream while keeping the Scream characters...what?
> You were being a dick to Viktor
"Yeah I scared the shit out of you by chasing you down and trying to mock-murder you to the point you screamed into a police scanner that you were about to be murdered, but I did it out of love and to defend you from the REAL dick: the guy with the pony tail!"
> Daddy snapped because of the anniversary and went on a murder spree
The FBI is going to know he isn't the killer because the prints don't match, you fucking retard. You'd also be placing a bigger limelight on yourself as they would view you as a potential motive. The child of a woman who fucked her own killer? Her father going on a murder spree while not having the profile of a killer? Yeah that makes a lot of sense, doesn't it? How'd daddy go on a killer spree when he has duct tape around his hands and mouth and the residue is still going to be there? That the angle of the knife wounds don't match?
BTW, Jayce also got stabbed for real. What the fuck happened to that? Did the author just forget he was injured?
Now I'm wondering whether she was injured for real and he just left her to just get stabbed by Ghostface. If so, that's a remarkably shitty thing to do, especially with the Token Black Girl. Progshits stay winning, I guess.
If you just want Scream, watch the movie - or Scary Movie. I have no idea what the fuck was happening here and I was slightly buzzed. Anything want to crack this beta-reader code for me? Maybe I'm too stupid to grasp such brilliance.
Jinx is at the bar upset at Viktor's diagnosis and frustrated that she cannot do anything to help him. She wants him at The Last Drop so he can die with family surrounding him vs dying Topside where 'Goldie' - Giopara - might not return until hours after he has expired. Vander tells her not to worry and that she is one of the smartest people there and if anyone can cure him, she can.
Viktor later arrives at the bar with Giopara in tow, and he does not recognize her because Giopara is drugging him. It turns out that Viktor has a court date for destroying hospital property - withdrawals from the Shimmer no doubt - and Vander rightfully calls out Giopara for not being there when his love needed him most. Giopara snipes back that he cannot be there for him 24/7. Vander again tells him that if he cannot take care of him, he should relinquish care to those who care for Viktor - such as himself and Jinx - vs Giopara himself. Giopara responds that Viktor only trusts him and that he will not leave his side. Giopara tries to one-up Vander by saying he 'didn't see' Viktor fall or the ugliest sides of him, but Vander doesn't buy it one bit. He refuses to be cowed and Giopara at last relents, handing him Viktor's medicine and telling him to take it with water, not whiskey. He finally leaves and Jinx returns with Viktor in tow after being told to take him elsewhere, and she shows him her new paintball launcher. Viktor asks where Jayce is and he has another confused moment before he enters a coughing fit. After he recovers and Jinx tells him that Vi left her behind, too, Viktor tells her that he is scared of Jayce. She offers to get Silco and Vander involved, but he refuses, not wanting Giopara to get hurt. Then she tells him that Talis is looking for him and can help him. He will be at the bar on Christmas Eve and everything will get better, she promises.
Then Jinx asks him if it's really the chemo that's making him lose his memory, something she noted when he couldn't even remember her or her sister. Viktor agrees that it might be Jayce behind it, and when Jinx asks how she can help, he tells her 'let my work die with me'. She naturally gets upset at this and doesn't want him to die, but those are his final wishes. He agrees to look at Jinx's gadgets with a clearer mind, and that scene ends.
We then cut to a flashback. The year is 2017 and Viktor has just been kicked out of his host/adoptive parents' home. Why? Cut-and-dry bigotry, that's why. You're supposed to feel upset over him being kicked out for the most bullshit of reasons. Anyways, he partially lives in the Academy's labs, and resorts to stealing food from Giopara because his bestest friend who doesn't want to be a bully doesn't notice his predicament and is too busy bragging about the price of his shoes (something Giopara would actually find rather frivolous). He saves leftovers from sleepovers (they still have sleepovers at 16), and takes showers at the gym with his gym membership. He sleeps in 24/7 diners when he can (the author writes that 'depriving himself is better than sleeping on concrete' which makes zero sense at all) and hangs around dumpsters where he pilfers old electronics. Later, he comes across the clinic he volunteered at in the original and the dialogue goes the same way: the nurse says the clinic doesn't treat chronic conditions and that he's not able-bodied, and he responds his intelligence will make up for what he lacks physically.
Much of the following paragraphs are unchanged from the original, as well: he is tasked with organizing supply closets and taking patients' blood pressure and gives his name as 'Herald', because he views himself as 'The Herald Angel of Healing'. It's all one word. He is again a 'sagacious enigma', and the patients adore him. Kids in particular love his discussions around robotics, and he enjoys his 12-hour shift. And just like the original, he also gets jumped and beaten up in front of Jayce's house. He stays there until a drunk Jayce is driven home, and again he whines about wanting a grilled cheese sandwich. Jayce, drunk as fuck, acts obstinate and tells Viktor he's going to have to spank him in order to get him water - his specific words are, 'You'll have to spank me, daddy!' - and they end up falling asleep in the same bed. Viktor wakes up in bed, Giopara is a smelly drunk log on top of him, and has to be told to shower. There's a bath tub scene that drags on for a bit - solely because of how shitty the dialogue is.
> his impossibly ginormous pecs
Not bad for a natty 17-year-old.
> I've got tits, Jayce
> Negative A-cups
So you don't have tits. He later gets triggered at this comment and this friendship-with-benefits doofus doesn't get that he made a heckin' transphobic comment.
> Dysphoria set in a little too hard after his unintentionally hurtful statement
He says, while also insisting he's his best friend. What happened to him not being a bully? You're not going to call him out for such a heckin' transphobic statement?
> I've seen your tiny penis a thousand times
> I know I'm above average, it just looks smaller cause I am a big guy
Height doesn't have a strong correlation with penis size, btw.
> Why would I judge your body? I'd never be mean about your body
You just were. You said he had negative A-cups.
> Squeezing his A-cup breasts to nearly a flat chest
Glad your dysphoria went away. It's not so bad when a guy with bigger tits says it, eh?
> He did not mention the lack of insurance either
Even Runeterra isn't safe from the American healthcare system.
> Heh
Here we go again.
> You imagined me naked
> I imagine everyone naked
Very bro-coded. Says a lot that he thinks about the flat-chested pooner with the Tarzan bush more than his girlfriend. No niggers in slash!
> Two boys
One of these things is not like the other.
> You're beautiful. Like a statue of marble crafted from an artist's agony
That's not what you said the first time. You said he was like a Greek statue in a museum. You never said he was like the marble ones.
> I'll shave it off because I replaced your shampoo with glue
Was it gorilla glue?
> Just don't go evil badass on me
This is someone who has a mental breakdown if you throw a tampon at them. Their greatest weakness is Valium and Shimmer. He isn't threatening anybody.
> You don't smell like a drunken bitchass
I haven't heard men talk like this since 2005.
> Their friendship was already beyond that
He takes an intimate bath with his 'best friend' that he doesn't know is homeless or starving. But we gotta remind the audience that Mel is the disposable black girlfriend and we do not want niggers in slash.
> I'm gay
You are not the same sex as him; you are straight. Penis-in-vagina sex is not and will never be homosexual.
> No one wants to date the cripple sumprat
Sounds like a you issue. There are homeless men that have drip. Have you tried smoking cigarettes and investing in a sense of fashion?
> I hate him so much
Glad these 17-year-olds hold grudges like Regina Hall. Does he have a Burn Book under his bed?
> Fucking furry
Weird thing to say when you have goat-men and an entire race of actual half-human animal people. Would you say that to a Khajiit?
These insults are so juvenile they're things you'd hear in a 2009 CoD lobby, but with considerably fewer racial insults. 'Butt plugger' reminds me of 'butt pirate' and that is an ANCIENT insult. This author wants them to be edgy teenagers but will never have them say 'faggot' like real teenage boys do.
> I'm claiming it before Mel does
Scramble for Africa: League of Legends edition.
Oh? I thought you were the sole designer of Hextech? How come you ain't nigga rich yet? Sounds like a plot hole to me. He invests all this time to cracking Hextech, and then it becomes something trivial that other people have. Which is it, my dear ~professional~?
> Says he will be his partner
> Gets betrayed while he vomits in the toilet
Sounds like a very close friendship, indeed. This man cared more about his bubble bath than his poor disabled partner.
> Twink prison
This is someone suffering from a debilitating illness. Twinks are males who CHOOSE to look that way. They are not comparable.
Leave it to a kid to deadname him in public, LMAO. Bad Jinx, bad! Be more respectful of heckin' pronouns!
'Please', even dragged out, as an 'a' in it. C'mon, man.
Oh man I can't imagine what the betrayal is going to be like next! Is he going to still be vomiting in the toilet or over a urinal?
Viktor later arrives at the bar with Giopara in tow, and he does not recognize her because Giopara is drugging him. It turns out that Viktor has a court date for destroying hospital property - withdrawals from the Shimmer no doubt - and Vander rightfully calls out Giopara for not being there when his love needed him most. Giopara snipes back that he cannot be there for him 24/7. Vander again tells him that if he cannot take care of him, he should relinquish care to those who care for Viktor - such as himself and Jinx - vs Giopara himself. Giopara responds that Viktor only trusts him and that he will not leave his side. Giopara tries to one-up Vander by saying he 'didn't see' Viktor fall or the ugliest sides of him, but Vander doesn't buy it one bit. He refuses to be cowed and Giopara at last relents, handing him Viktor's medicine and telling him to take it with water, not whiskey. He finally leaves and Jinx returns with Viktor in tow after being told to take him elsewhere, and she shows him her new paintball launcher. Viktor asks where Jayce is and he has another confused moment before he enters a coughing fit. After he recovers and Jinx tells him that Vi left her behind, too, Viktor tells her that he is scared of Jayce. She offers to get Silco and Vander involved, but he refuses, not wanting Giopara to get hurt. Then she tells him that Talis is looking for him and can help him. He will be at the bar on Christmas Eve and everything will get better, she promises.
Then Jinx asks him if it's really the chemo that's making him lose his memory, something she noted when he couldn't even remember her or her sister. Viktor agrees that it might be Jayce behind it, and when Jinx asks how she can help, he tells her 'let my work die with me'. She naturally gets upset at this and doesn't want him to die, but those are his final wishes. He agrees to look at Jinx's gadgets with a clearer mind, and that scene ends.
We then cut to a flashback. The year is 2017 and Viktor has just been kicked out of his host/adoptive parents' home. Why? Cut-and-dry bigotry, that's why. You're supposed to feel upset over him being kicked out for the most bullshit of reasons. Anyways, he partially lives in the Academy's labs, and resorts to stealing food from Giopara because his bestest friend who doesn't want to be a bully doesn't notice his predicament and is too busy bragging about the price of his shoes (something Giopara would actually find rather frivolous). He saves leftovers from sleepovers (they still have sleepovers at 16), and takes showers at the gym with his gym membership. He sleeps in 24/7 diners when he can (the author writes that 'depriving himself is better than sleeping on concrete' which makes zero sense at all) and hangs around dumpsters where he pilfers old electronics. Later, he comes across the clinic he volunteered at in the original and the dialogue goes the same way: the nurse says the clinic doesn't treat chronic conditions and that he's not able-bodied, and he responds his intelligence will make up for what he lacks physically.
Much of the following paragraphs are unchanged from the original, as well: he is tasked with organizing supply closets and taking patients' blood pressure and gives his name as 'Herald', because he views himself as 'The Herald Angel of Healing'. It's all one word. He is again a 'sagacious enigma', and the patients adore him. Kids in particular love his discussions around robotics, and he enjoys his 12-hour shift. And just like the original, he also gets jumped and beaten up in front of Jayce's house. He stays there until a drunk Jayce is driven home, and again he whines about wanting a grilled cheese sandwich. Jayce, drunk as fuck, acts obstinate and tells Viktor he's going to have to spank him in order to get him water - his specific words are, 'You'll have to spank me, daddy!' - and they end up falling asleep in the same bed. Viktor wakes up in bed, Giopara is a smelly drunk log on top of him, and has to be told to shower. There's a bath tub scene that drags on for a bit - solely because of how shitty the dialogue is.
> his impossibly ginormous pecs
Not bad for a natty 17-year-old.
> I've got tits, Jayce
> Negative A-cups
So you don't have tits. He later gets triggered at this comment and this friendship-with-benefits doofus doesn't get that he made a heckin' transphobic comment.
> Dysphoria set in a little too hard after his unintentionally hurtful statement
He says, while also insisting he's his best friend. What happened to him not being a bully? You're not going to call him out for such a heckin' transphobic statement?
> I've seen your tiny penis a thousand times
> I know I'm above average, it just looks smaller cause I am a big guy
Height doesn't have a strong correlation with penis size, btw.
> Why would I judge your body? I'd never be mean about your body
You just were. You said he had negative A-cups.
> Squeezing his A-cup breasts to nearly a flat chest
Glad your dysphoria went away. It's not so bad when a guy with bigger tits says it, eh?
> He did not mention the lack of insurance either
Even Runeterra isn't safe from the American healthcare system.
> Heh
Here we go again.
> You imagined me naked
> I imagine everyone naked
Very bro-coded. Says a lot that he thinks about the flat-chested pooner with the Tarzan bush more than his girlfriend. No niggers in slash!
> Two boys
One of these things is not like the other.
> You're beautiful. Like a statue of marble crafted from an artist's agony
That's not what you said the first time. You said he was like a Greek statue in a museum. You never said he was like the marble ones.
> I'll shave it off because I replaced your shampoo with glue
Was it gorilla glue?
> Just don't go evil badass on me
This is someone who has a mental breakdown if you throw a tampon at them. Their greatest weakness is Valium and Shimmer. He isn't threatening anybody.
> You don't smell like a drunken bitchass
I haven't heard men talk like this since 2005.
> Their friendship was already beyond that
He takes an intimate bath with his 'best friend' that he doesn't know is homeless or starving. But we gotta remind the audience that Mel is the disposable black girlfriend and we do not want niggers in slash.
> I'm gay
You are not the same sex as him; you are straight. Penis-in-vagina sex is not and will never be homosexual.
> No one wants to date the cripple sumprat
Sounds like a you issue. There are homeless men that have drip. Have you tried smoking cigarettes and investing in a sense of fashion?
> I hate him so much
Glad these 17-year-olds hold grudges like Regina Hall. Does he have a Burn Book under his bed?
> Fucking furry
Weird thing to say when you have goat-men and an entire race of actual half-human animal people. Would you say that to a Khajiit?
These insults are so juvenile they're things you'd hear in a 2009 CoD lobby, but with considerably fewer racial insults. 'Butt plugger' reminds me of 'butt pirate' and that is an ANCIENT insult. This author wants them to be edgy teenagers but will never have them say 'faggot' like real teenage boys do.
> I'm claiming it before Mel does
Scramble for Africa: League of Legends edition.
Oh? I thought you were the sole designer of Hextech? How come you ain't nigga rich yet? Sounds like a plot hole to me. He invests all this time to cracking Hextech, and then it becomes something trivial that other people have. Which is it, my dear ~professional~?
> Says he will be his partner
> Gets betrayed while he vomits in the toilet
Sounds like a very close friendship, indeed. This man cared more about his bubble bath than his poor disabled partner.
> Twink prison
This is someone suffering from a debilitating illness. Twinks are males who CHOOSE to look that way. They are not comparable.
Leave it to a kid to deadname him in public, LMAO. Bad Jinx, bad! Be more respectful of heckin' pronouns!
'Please', even dragged out, as an 'a' in it. C'mon, man.
Oh man I can't imagine what the betrayal is going to be like next! Is he going to still be vomiting in the toilet or over a urinal?
From the same author that gave you that pedophile priest fic where he goes after a child vampire, comes a prompt that anon was inspired by. Imagine feeling inspired and proud over writing child rape.
You will never guess who was spotted in the kudos section: 'Unblooded girlchild' and 'feels like a sexy poop' star PrettyBadMagic. If you had your doubts, let them be dispersed now. She's a pedo.
> He's unusually handsome for the type of person who spends time in caves
He is taking the role of Singed here, and the big difference here is that Singed is ugly and doesn't inspire sexual arousal in these people. Jayce does. So it's so much easier for them to write a hot, sexually attractive man as a pedophile because it doesn't make them feel awful writing it.
> Isn't a complete idiot
> Begins blushing when an attractive man complements them
Either way, someone decided it'd be a great idea for a ten-year-old to get raped, and it wasn't me. I'm just here to call a spade a spade.
> He's an otherworldly handsome genius
And that somehow makes the rapist pedophile not so bad, eh? If he makes you wet, that means it wasn't really rape, yeah?
He's talking about a 10-year-old, btw.
Nothing like shoving a syringe up a minor's vagina. These people are the same ones wondering why they get such a bad rap. Not even GoT has this many people justifying child sex.
> They've never looked so stiff and inflamed
Now does he have a diseased dick, or is that just the author's way of going, WOW LOOK AT IT IT'S SO BIG!
> His presence has a way of doing that to him
He just met him and he's already over the moon? Yeah, you're still a rapist pedophile, please face the wall now.
> Fairly familiar with his own anatomy
He says, while insisting he is male and that the vagina is simply a 'hole' meant for menstruating and childbearing. The uterus gestates the fetus. The vagina is the canal that helps push it out. It is not a hole, you dirtbag misogynist.
> You're so little. I bet someone walking in wouldn't even notice you under me
Yeah because HE IS TEN YEARS OLD, YOU FUCK. Where is Ice-T and the glock when you need him?
> Press his penis against the hole he's been stretching
The kid hasn't even entered puberty. 'Injury' is the daintiest way of putting it - it's going to be turned inside out, especially if pedo bitch here is being literal about the belly bulge here.
> Everything Jayce is doing hurts
> He can pretend he doesn't feel every nerve screaming at him
The word you are looking for is disassociation. Rape victims do that to go somewhere else to protect their mental health.
> Puts a hand on his lower stomach
DO NOT tell me you are going to write a 10-year-old squirting. I will go full Dresden on you.
> He's afraid it's pee
So the author backed out from writing about a 10-year-old squirting, but decided to stick with the belly bulge anyways. In any case, she later admits she had a blast writing it, because some people legitimately enjoy writing child rape for masturbatory purposes:
I think you should have more fun having your blood vessels popped by a noose. Don't kick the chair too soon, now.
BSwaves has updated her 'Juno'-inspired fic. It is one of the few instances where the groomer actually suffers social and narrative punishment.
Decided to combine these two chapters as Chapter 8 was short. This has Viktor being taken in by Mel, and they go to a restaurant where she treats him to whatever he wants. She brings her wife, Elora, and she is a much-needed relief compared to the utter drudgery she has treated the titular character. Mel and Elora provide the happy ending: Viktor avoids the abortion and decides to give them the child so they can avoid all the hoops involving adoption. They also offer to pay for all the medical bills relating to his gyno care, so that's a bonus, too. An all-around do-nothing happy chapter.
Chapter 9 is where it gets semi-good.
Uh oh. White boys don't deliver like hung Latinos do. It's that Latin spice you need in your life - even if they are groomers and ruined your education with an unexpected pregnancy.
You have to love it when background characters are moral arbiters. This is also one of the few fics where they actually admit it is wrong vs talk about the 'protuberant pussy lips' of child idols. Oh, BTW, in some states, a rapist father CAN sue for custody. Hope you have a good lawyer.
He needs a place to park that meat stick, is all.
You have to love how the male is always the one centering and making themselves the victims. 'You were just too beautiful not to resist' ahh reasoning.
That's why so many authors writing this are Pick Mes: they wish their attackers were hot like Jayce so they wouldn't feel guilty masturbating to the thought at night. They want to be desired so hotly that a man could do this to them.
> This is hard for me, too
You aren't the one gestating a fetus. Shut up.
> I didn't know what I wanted
You wanted a teenager to groom, simple. You knew an adult woman would refuse you, so you had to go with the teen with self-esteem issues. It's a classic groomer tactic and unfortunate statistic.
> Sniveling teenage boy
Gonna need a fact check on that one, chief.
> I've been dealing with a lot
Holy fucking DARVO, Batman! But, I will give the author this: she did a great job writing a piece of shit who is referred as such in the narrative. That doesn't happen often.
Chinese should be capitalized. It's a proper noun.
> The grown-ass man whines at the sixteen-year-old
Well, fuck. Who's the real man-child here?
Based Mom. I want to see her chuck a Molotov at this Latino. Show him what a REAL gang war looks like.
Six more chapters to go.
Chapter 9 is where it gets semi-good.
Uh oh. White boys don't deliver like hung Latinos do. It's that Latin spice you need in your life - even if they are groomers and ruined your education with an unexpected pregnancy.
You have to love it when background characters are moral arbiters. This is also one of the few fics where they actually admit it is wrong vs talk about the 'protuberant pussy lips' of child idols. Oh, BTW, in some states, a rapist father CAN sue for custody. Hope you have a good lawyer.
He needs a place to park that meat stick, is all.
You have to love how the male is always the one centering and making themselves the victims. 'You were just too beautiful not to resist' ahh reasoning.
That's why so many authors writing this are Pick Mes: they wish their attackers were hot like Jayce so they wouldn't feel guilty masturbating to the thought at night. They want to be desired so hotly that a man could do this to them.
> This is hard for me, too
You aren't the one gestating a fetus. Shut up.
> I didn't know what I wanted
You wanted a teenager to groom, simple. You knew an adult woman would refuse you, so you had to go with the teen with self-esteem issues. It's a classic groomer tactic and unfortunate statistic.
> Sniveling teenage boy
Gonna need a fact check on that one, chief.
> I've been dealing with a lot
Holy fucking DARVO, Batman! But, I will give the author this: she did a great job writing a piece of shit who is referred as such in the narrative. That doesn't happen often.
Chinese should be capitalized. It's a proper noun.
> The grown-ass man whines at the sixteen-year-old
Well, fuck. Who's the real man-child here?
Based Mom. I want to see her chuck a Molotov at this Latino. Show him what a REAL gang war looks like.
Six more chapters to go.
tigerchristabel, when she isn't writing about human pet shops or keeping disabled people in cages, has written a piece for a gothic horror week, and the film she is basing it on is 'Scream'. Of course, one might think, ' Scream isn't even a gothic horror, it's a satire on other horror films of its era' but don't use those IQ points. Just sit back and let me make Scary Movie references as this whole thing reads like it was cut out of the first film. TL;DR just watch the movie. This is just a cheap, dumber copy-and-paste version.
> She'd debating
*She's debating
> He tuned out ages ago
Yeah who gives a fuck what that babbling nigger is talking about, eh? I bet you tune out when she talks about Malcolm X, too.
> Dmiti
This is a beta-reader who can't even proofread her own work. 200 IQ right there.
> He did get Dmitri arrested, and he knows the accusation was false
You know you can be held in contempt of court over that, right? That 'Dmiti' can sue you for big sums for ruining his life? You don't want him to go Law Abiding Citizen on you.
> I shouldn't waste the rest of my life, and ruining everyone else's in the process, wallowing in grief
Calm down, Cindy Campbell. There's a girl coming out of the TV.
> Unspoken knowledge about his mother's proclivities
Your mom was the town whore just like Maureen Prescott, eh? I wouldn't say you're a rotten apple; that is, unless you decide to fulfill the stereotype of the pooner being the town slut. Trans men getting railed by the town hall is not what I'd consider small-town politics, but they gotte be represented somehow.
> Stay your pretty eyes on course
Of course we have the TOP reference. It has no purpose here. I might as well sing 'Fuck the Shit' by the 'Sons of Butcher'.
> He only moves to fold his arms over his binder
If this is supposed to be set in the 90s, it's nice that modern-day binders you can buy off of Amazon are used. I also don't get how Dmitri is supposed to be the villain when he's constantly asking for permission to remove his clothing.
> Doesn't bother with the binder, it's been on for too long anyway
Nothing says 'wild 90s' and 'fuck gender roles' like warping your ribs! Should've waited to roleplay in the aughts then you can really be accurate.
It's also not a good idea to share hairbrushes. You might get lice, ew.
You got the Ring footage? I bet he could find you on TikTok and amass an army of Kpop stans armed with autism and geolocation to track you down.
In the words of the great, late Sir Christopher Lee, 'Do you know what it's like to be stabbed?' All this dramatic arcing of blood and screaming should be the first clue it's faked. If you are stabbed in the chest like that, and you'd have to angle it to get your ribs or heart, you are not going to be screaming. You'd going to be gasping and grunting. You'd sound like a snorting pig. You definitely won't have time to scream if an artery got hit - and you'd know smarty pants if it was foamy or not.
Then I remembered: this is basically a word-for-word retelling of the 'Scream' script, and that's why there's so much blood. Anyways, have you tried shoving a piano down the steps to fight your attacker?
> What kind of freak has two closets on the same floor?
...Most 90s houses do? Have you lived with teenage siblings? If you are rich you can have connected closets with hidden doors. He also answered his own question so what was the point of this?
> Not even from a stray partygoer
It's not the same one stuck in the garage door, is it?
> When (he) looks down to see his nipples very away of the temperature
...yes, the cold does that. I don't know why this is such a shock.
Oh no! Not Gale Weathers! Who invited these people? If this is supposed to be a parody - read: copy and paste - of the Scream script, how do these characters and the Arcane characters mesh? You're just shoving them into this scenario with no rhyme or reason. Where is Sydney Prescott? Oh, right, she got written out of the story and had this self-insert placed in her stead.
> She takes it too sharp, and the van crashes into the ditch
The way this is written makes it seem as if she crashed into the ditch twice. That's on top of him just standing there while she tries to get a corpse of her roof and veers right toward him. Sucks he's a cripple, otherwise he'd jump out of the way like a GTA pedestrian.
> The wicked smirk of the knife glinting in her back
I wasn't aware knives smirked. Did this one sneak out of the shoe torture scene in 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit'?
> Drag the knife out
More like tug and pull, because muscles are rather thick.
Look, I don't know if this is an elaborate roleplay or a genuine isekai of the film, but screaming into a police radio like that is going to land YOU in jail just as much as your attackers. If you really wanted the cops to come, you should've screamed 'WHITE WOMAN IN TROUBLE!' they'd be right there ready with batons and a Rodney King beatdown.
> His stick
To this day this author refuses to call his cane a cane. She's just so sensitive to disabled people, you know.
> She's a bunny to his fawn
That's cute, I guess. But I really have to laugh: this progshit really, really went with making the Token Black a criminal
Someone doesn't know their tropes; that's the worst one you can do! Imagine SHOOTING the Token Black as a white person? Blasphemy! This ain't the 90s! You can't make jokes like that no more!Oh I bet. She loved the scene where President and Ja Rule beat up a bunch of disabled people because they thought they were aliens. Must suck to be left outside where the cops can jump her instead of Jayce because she's still darker than he is.
You're not even trying to be original here. I'm just waiting for Dmitri to admit he's gay only for his best bud only to find out that the other just likes clothes and disco music and isn't gay at all.
> I won't tell anyone you're going mad
One can say he's a little...hysterical.
> The Shining and Psycho, right?
There was no 'Here's Johnny!' And a distinctive lack of pianos being thrown down stairs.
> He looks between the two men he's trapped between
Hey, don't feel sad. You'll get your guts rearranged a different way!
> The other is dragging Viktor's father by the collar
But does he sell cocaine on the side?
> Place the phone in his shirt pocket
Must be a big-ass pocket because you could knock someone out with a 90s phone.
> We're playing UESS HOW I'M GONNA DIE
BUT WAIT! THERE'S MORE! HANG ON TO YOUR SEAT, BABY, CUZ THIS ONE'S A SCREAMER
> Rictus
Damn they managed to get Rictus busted for murder? How the hell did Dmitri get arrested, then, if he was the 'real' culprit all along?
> You fucked your own mother's killer, Christ!
Eh, I've read worse. Try fucking a wannabe killer in Walmart jeans.
I'd laugh too, because this is too fucking ridiculous to take seriously. 'Scream' worked as it was mocking other slasher films at the time, and had its main Final Girl do something smart by shooting the killer. Viktor just...goes along with this elaborate plan that really involves killing Dmitri and blaming it on his dad...?
BTW, that line about not going too deep is literally lifted from the movie. It's a shitty copypasta if I've ever seen one.
Faking a murder plot is bad, but you know what's worse? Misgendering! All this drama about running from the killer and nearly getting killed by a reporter was just a ploy for him to kill his abusive boyfriend! If that sounds retarded as fuck, it's because it is. I was completely lost reading this entire thing. She's shoving these random characters into Scream while keeping the Scream characters...what?
> You were being a dick to Viktor
"Yeah I scared the shit out of you by chasing you down and trying to mock-murder you to the point you screamed into a police scanner that you were about to be murdered, but I did it out of love and to defend you from the REAL dick: the guy with the pony tail!"
> Daddy snapped because of the anniversary and went on a murder spree
The FBI is going to know he isn't the killer because the prints don't match, you fucking retard. You'd also be placing a bigger limelight on yourself as they would view you as a potential motive. The child of a woman who fucked her own killer? Her father going on a murder spree while not having the profile of a killer? Yeah that makes a lot of sense, doesn't it? How'd daddy go on a killer spree when he has duct tape around his hands and mouth and the residue is still going to be there? That the angle of the knife wounds don't match?
BTW, Jayce also got stabbed for real. What the fuck happened to that? Did the author just forget he was injured?
Now I'm wondering whether she was injured for real and he just left her to just get stabbed by Ghostface. If so, that's a remarkably shitty thing to do, especially with the Token Black Girl. Progshits stay winning, I guess.
If you just want Scream, watch the movie - or Scary Movie. I have no idea what the fuck was happening here and I was slightly buzzed. Anything want to crack this beta-reader code for me? Maybe I'm too stupid to grasp such brilliance.
Mm, good question. Might be a toss up. Let's ask Little Stinker Nico:
Guro seems to be a more male-centric fetish because of the autistic detail placed on it. In cases of debreasting, it is absolutely in the FTM ring. Maybe 10 years ago it would have been a part of the guro camp, but with the growth of non-traditional gender identities in fandom, it is something considered 'essential' to said identity. The difference, as always, relies on how the debreasting is written: is it seen as something euphoric, manly and affirming? That's a woman. Does it have an air of fetishization with the breast itself rather than as a weight to be removed? That's a man.
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Point of order, it was Naked Snake who said that first. Ocelot just pays a lot of attention to his Big Bae, enough to switch pistol models because of him, to quote him to a recruit 20 years later,
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In another instalment of 'Ow, The Edge', comes a twist on virgin sacrifice and milky white lambs being slaughtered by Satanic priests. No other race need apply; whites work best for gothic horror - ask Tim Burton. Does not feature Gordon Ramsay shouting, 'WHERE'S THE LAMB SAUCE?!' in the background. I should warn you that I didn't change the font on this - stupidsarah made that decision to make it look 'spookier'.
> He's a priest, but he performs Satanic rituals
In a house of God? He should belong to a Church of Satan, then, not Christ. Oh and she isn't kidding about the flesh eating thing; he doesn't go at it like a zombie but he isn't Hannibal Lecter, either.
> The fire is an attempt to purify
> Describes how the fire burns everything totally and how it isn't an attempt at all but a completed act
Logic.
> Canines prowl the streets for a lone scrap of feline or a crying, abandoned infant
That implies the cats aren't starving, too, and that cannibalism wouldn't be happening among said dogs. They'd be eating homeless people, too. Do homeless people exist in this edgy Tim Burton horror tale?
> Families strung apart like leathered skin
Uh, leather doesn't work that way. They wouldn't be 'torn apart', they'd be made rubbery and smoothed into flat planes. Leathery skin doesn't give the impression of something easily torn apart, but something worn and made for a fashion accessory. It's a malapropism.
> At this time of night, nothing illuminates the stone beneath his feet, his waiting presence hidde in the encompassing darkness
We get the impression the entire street is dark, but that it previously wasn't because why would there be a 'shadow of the street' of nothing illuminates the stone under his feet? Wouldn't the entire area be dark? It'd be one thing if she wrote, 'He stands in the shadow of the street, avoiding the streetlights and the flickering candles above him'. This would mean he is actively trying to hide. This means the entire street is dark and no one can see shit.
> The personality of a dove, cooing sweet hymns for those willing to listen
Get it? The white one is a dove, a lamb, any animal associated with sweet innocence, while the Latino is a Satanist who will corrupt said purity. What do you think the author means by that?
>The grout allows nothing but water to seep against gravity through the walls
...that's what it's for?
> Heel to toe, a soft landing rather than a thud against the cobbelstone
Your shoes are still going to echo. The trick is toe to heel, which the Natives do to muffle their footsteps while hunting.
> A pristine white neck, sliced clean and bled dry
White skin is the best for gothic horror. No other races need apply - unless you want to be a Satanic Latino.
Wait until you find out how deep and insightful the author's grasp on Christianity is.
> He was brought up like a crop beneath the dirt
That's how crops start, you fucking retard. You plant the seeds beneath the soil!
> Being clean wasn't something Jayce had known until his adolescence was eclipsed by adulthood
"I was born in the filth, raised in it. I didn't see a bar of soap until I was already a man."
>gifted biology preventing Viktor from feeling pain
Must be that second X chromosome doing its job.
> > Gentle swell of his breasts
Hey, he might be a virgin-sacrificing Satanic blasphemer, but he ain't a transphobe!
> Blood drips over the short, trimmed hair that coats Viktor's cunt
Hey, look at that! Gothic horror requires trimmed pubes! Who would've thought?
> It flows between the silky flesh of his labia, and percolates down the short length of his cock
I told you: white skin works the best for horror. If we had any nignogs they'd be killed first. Nothing darker than a Latino mix, thank you!
> Back into the reality of his biology mixing pain with pleasure
Lol. Lmao. We are talking about the 'reality of his biology' while pretending that that's male anatomy and a male body he's cutting up. It's part of a virgin sacrifice, yeah? Which sex's virginity was overwhelmingly signaled as a sign for purity?
> Dyeing his hair a red so deep that it shines indigo
Any darker and he'll become his spirit animal: Khal Drogo.
> A divine man, no higher than God but no less than the seraphim
You would not be saying this to a priest engaging in human sacrifice. For one, no priest is considered higher than God; they are messengers of the Word of God. Seraphim are God's highest ranking angels. A Satanist would, if anything, invoke the ire of said Seraphim who would smite him and then banish him to Hell.
> Tell me, was I correct in my assumption that your cunt is untouched by pleasure?
Again, which sex's purity and virginity is more valued culturally and socially? Something tells me he wasn't doing it to actual male virgins. He picked a vagina owner for a reason. Very gender-affirming!
> Dragging the sharpened edge down the length of his thigh
He's flaying him, but the author doesn't want to commit to a full flaying because even THAT is overkill. We still need our pure white virgin getting fucked by the Satanist, not a war crime!
> When the Time has come, when I have to shed my humanity for the feast of Mammon
Mammon is an entity associated with wealth and greed. He is considered a demon, but he is not the Antichrist, which is what The Beast is. You gotta get your demons right, Sarah.
> I may be a wolf in sheep's skin
Something to be said about the brown man always being a predator in the house of God. I wonder what the author could possible mean by that.
> She may have been one of God's chosen
She was a filthy goyim, so no.
> the barbs digging into his skin scrape against the ivory ribcage
White skin is best for horror x3.
> With a gasp, Jayce rips his teeth from Viktor's abdomen
> His stomach, a constellation of bite marks and torn meat, Jayce's teeth having buried themselves in his buttery soft skin
I wonder what the racial implications are of a brown man eating the flesh of a white (wo)man. What do you mean an evil entity occupying a holy place greater men have built is feasting themselves on the labour of said holy white people and has a psychosexual obsession with white skin? Nothing to parse from that, I'm sure!
Hey, at least his cunt is dripping! Yeah your stomach is getting chunks bitten out of it like it's a Crumbl cookie but we're ready for cock!
> You think I am an abomination
A brown man being a Satanist and pissing on the House of God? Yeah I can see why the Spaniards cannonballed Tenochtitlan to dust.
> Why would he prevent carnage, and gratify us to survive another year?
Because the Antichrist sows discord, and knows that if people spurn God, they would turn to the one thing that promises them salvation. You answered your own question: Satan appears as a beautiful saviour to people who think God has abandoned them.
> I do not see Mammon as malevolent
The demon associated with greed and monetary wealth isn't malevolent? OK, then.
> A fallen angel
BTW, Mammon is considered the SON of Lucifer, not Lucifer himself (thanks, Constantine!) Other times they aren't even RELATED. Stupidsarah has a poem praising Satan at the end and yet she can't tell the difference between Lucifer and Mammon? Huh?
> You are virginal. A chalice of virginity wrapped in wool
I'm not getting over the fact that a trans man is being sacrificed to Satan
You trying to say they're evil, or something? Which sex is overwhelmingly considered for virgin sacrifices in these tropes, again?
> Devouring the cunt slathered on his tongue
I was honestly surprised he didn't just take a bite out of his clit. He did partially devour his stomach muscles.
> Free the women of man's insatiable lust
Oh? That sounds very bioessentialist! Are you suggesting men are natural born sex pests and AFABs are their victims? What the fuck is Viktor, then?
> Uses his remaining strength to rip his staked feet from the wooden cross
Yeah, that isn't happening. He can kiss his feet goodbye.
> Blood pours from his jaw, the lamb having bitten his tongue so hard that is split down the middle
Add a tongue piercing and he'd give perfect head. It'd be like a floppy lamp chop.
Not getting over how this guy was preaching to Mammon and Lucifer as if they were the same entity. Or the fact that the token brown man worships the Devil. Not even a true and honest racist could come up with shit like that.
> Gently pulls the metal barbs from his flesh
You must've prayed for antibiotics because not only is that shit going to lead to nasty infections, you ATE part of his stomach. That 'pale, milky white skin' is going to look like a Kinder egg after a group of five-year-olds had access to it.
> If this were Hell, you would be sitting upon a throne
Trans people belong in Hell? Whoa, man! That's kinda based!
> Be a virginal trans man
> You are sacrificed by a Satanist priest to Lucifer
> You are tortured and have parts of your stomach eaten (but not your genitalia because we aren't THAT evil)
> You are restored to health because your only natural role is serving the Antichrist
> Author's end note is a poem praising Satan
Huh. I wonder why these people hate Christians so much.
Nakura, our 'Everyone has AIDS' author, has also participated in this gothic horror week. Her entry features the classic extreme yaoi features: biceps larger than the bottom's waist and a fist that can encircle the chest completely. Think James from Smiling Friends grappling DJ Spit.
> The machete was the size of his forearm
Yes, that's how big machetes get. The author conflates a machete with a 'very large knife' - and yes, while a machete IS a knife - the two evoke completely different feelings. One suggest something slim that you can hide in your pocket. The other is meant for hacking down jungle growth and human limbs. Helps to know the difference.
> Sums of money appeared in his account, not large enough to raise suspicions of fraud
Hey, if he wanted his stalker doxxed immediately, all he has to do is report it to the IRS. Those tax men will be hunting him down Batman style and he would have his social security number on his desk by the end of the week.
> The bow will look great at your waist
Very masc. Next you'll be doing Korean colour wheels and delivering clothes based on his season.
> Why Viktor needed to meet stupid men who wouldn't appreciate him?
If you thought this was another 'all these men suck except this one who makes me orgasm/squirt' trope, you'd be right. That is exactly how it goes.
> Or a serial killer decided to target him because he had a disability
If that was the case, he'd be visiting a homeless camp, but then the crack addicts and tweakers would jump him.
> Making them cross-eyed for a moment
So he was in front of his nose?
> After a strange monologue about possessing a body that didn't belong to him
Who knew serial killers suffered from body dysmorphia, too? Next thing he'll be coming out as trans.
> His hand, strong and large, holding his own
He's just uwu so smol.
> He was taller and stronger, his physique accentuated by the sleeves pulled up, showing the certainty of someone who regularly went to the gym
*Showing someone who went to the gym
> A bath bomb had been used
Damn. Does he have the expensive exfoliating shit?
> That he had a vulva
Yeah, can't imagine a serial killer being a transphobe. We can be Satanists, rapists, pedophiles and racists, but we can NEVER be transphobic.
> If the kidnapper wanted to show that the blade was sharp, he was convincing
Machetes are better at hacking off limps vs cutting off clothes. If it had a knife similar to what the US Marines use, then I'd believe it. It just looks goofy seeing something as cumbersome as a machete cut off someone's shirt in an erotic manner.
> He was an adult and perfectly capable in his own right. If he wanted to go the moon (something he considered applying for a job)
You are too short and too disabled to be an astronaut, if that's what you mean. The G-force would fuck with your bones, too. You are the last person to be sent into space.
> People so-so, so forgettable
She meant, 'people so-so, and those so forgettable'. So-so means something in the middle, not an exaggeration.
> Little chest he had with his whole hand and squeezed
This makes it seem as if his chest is so tiny a man can wrap his hand around it. No human alive has a waist that small, not even Eugenia Cooney.
> He had his preferences when watching videos
Oh I wonder what those could be.
> He didn't masturbate as often as most adult men his age did
Funny, but you aren't an adult male. You can orgasm more than men do in a shorter amount of time. You'd think T would make him a horn dog but here he is.
> He had a certain charm in his letters, he smelled good
Oh wow, a kidnapping serial killer (or a roleplaying one) who smells good. I bet he's laying on YSL and has matching glasses. A kidnapper who smells good AND makes you squirt? Talk about a jackpot! I can almost forget you pissed the bed!
> A man a head bigger than him, with biceps bigger than his waist
This isn't humanly possible, unless Jayce looks like this:
He is not the physique of The Mountain That Rides. Dial back the yaoi anatomy.
> Luckily, his bladder wasn't very full before
You still pissed yourself.
> You've already achieved so much because you decided to believe in yourself
Imagine a kidnapper who admits he's going to take away your agency and your life so he can take care of you like a doll is giving you a pep talk in order to accept it easier. In another life he would've been selling door-to-door vacuum cleaners.
> Avoiding contact with his cock
Two inches.
> More of an attempt to connect better with his captor
Now, which sex is known to do that in order to make them nicer and softer to them? This ain't shooting the shit, you know.
> How did he end up there, what did he do wrong?
Be a serial killer's type. Next thing you know he'll be ordering his T shots, too, because we can't have our tiny waifu revert back to factory settings.
> Why didn't he seek help when he could?
Hey, free money is free money. An anonymous sugar daddy is better than none.
Haha more like short for JACKIN' OFF AM I RIGHT?
> Had J put something in the food?
You are a genius. You tell me whether losing consciousness as soon as you finish eating is the result of drugs. You'd think he'd know, having a pharmacy in his nightstand and all.
> At least he could protest, act like a child and rebel
No man is going to be moved by a tiny, 4'9 transman with a frog voice throwing a tantrum. You're small enough to be thrown into a crib. You saw those muscles of his; if you can be bent in half by Chef Boyardee over here, you might as well shut the fuck up and go with it. Acting like a child isn't very masc and isn't going to help you.
> He wanted to rip that mask off his head and hit the man with a piece of wood
You'd be worn out as soon as you lifted it over your head.
> He found himself powerless, as he always was when he got deeply angry
What's that? People aren't afraid of you when you're mad? They don't back away, don't threaten to call the cops and don't pull out weapons in self-defense? Weird, that! It's almost as if all the effort to present as male doesn't fool anybody.
> It was so common for him not to understand others
Oh, so you're autistic.
> how much he had already gushed out
Either this is a fetish or you were given an aphrodisiac. Sea World ain't in season.
> His tongue was thick and firm, it must be good
All I can think of is that he has a tongue like a cow: big, unwieldly, and something people eat as a delicacy.
> The greatest form of exposure he had ever experienced at someone's hands
Ah, so we're going with the Sexy Stockholm Syndrome trope here: where you not only feel sympathy for your captor, you see them as the only one who can make you feel sexually complete. None of those other losers could make him come, but the guy with a machete and a dick to match can!
> The man's thick fingers knew how to move just right against him, and his pusys throbbed at the mere thought of being filled with one of them
You get the pussy happy, anything is possible, even if you are an obsessed stalker. Pooners are so desperate for love they'll seek it from anyone, even from Ghostface Machete here.
> Realized he had never been kissed with such desire - and had never had such a good kiss
This is 'Never Been Kissed' had Drew Barrymore's character lived and started lusting after Ghostface instead. We're hitting all the hetslop tropes now.
> That's why I kidnapped you, V. Because this is our destiny. We have to be together.
"I kidnapped you because you're too mentally weak for masculine jobs and you need to stay home and be my mommy, maid and wife!" That sounds very gender-affirming. The Handmaid's Tale if the kidnappers were all Chippendale baddies and every handmaiden squirted on commant.
> Ngggh
Everyone loves it when someone starts moaning like Joe Biden.
> They were destined for this, for each other
Guess anything can mean a happy ending if you get a good dicking!
> Viktor had never been normal, he never thought he would be loved
So what you're saying is that trans men can only find love through maladaptive behaviour and men who are the embodiment of said behaviour? You don't say
>Nnngh my God
Me when I find out this actually has a cliffhanger
> Barely felt the liquid forming beneath him
Aunt Carol might have fun with this: caloric loss and dehydration from squirting. Anyone want to write a paper on that?
> Only enhancing a well-prepared beauty
Literally the OH NO HE'S NOT Spongebob meme.
> I thought were going to die of dehydration from all the squirting you did
So he looks like Spongebob during that episode where they're at Sandy's house. Good to know. I still want to know what kind of caloric and metabolic loss is involved with so much squirting.
> I am face to face with my stalker
"But he's hot and he made me squirt so we're all good."
> Was this how the gaslighting process began, the manipulation of victims to convince them they weren't actual victims?
He already achieved that when he called you beautiful. You folded like a deck of cards, and that's on top of the 'woe is me nobody loves me or wants to fuck me' weight he was carrying on his shoulders. Can it even be considered gaslighting when you already believed what a sexy stalker had to say?
And yes, the fic ends with this. No penetration, no whipping out of the good ole Thick n Veiny. Just a cliffhanger to get you mad and bothered like the sexy stalker who decided to wring out your orgasm a little more. I wonder if there will be a sequel and if it will continue right where this left off. If not...well, there's always the AIDS AU.
If you missed the 'you can be my full time daddy' series, you won't be lost reading this standalone piece. It is a companion to the main fic, and Cleo/FF has summarized it thus: a 45-year-old hooks up with a 15-year-old at a 'gay' bar, fingers him in the back of his truck (in the NSFW version, they actually do have sexual intercourse), adopts him from his meth-dealing stepfather, nearly has a mental breakdown from bad BPD meds, and has a weird wedding where the main plot involved going to a state or country where open trans marriages were accepted, yet decided to have an illegitimate marrige in the backyard. That's not going to be seen as husband-husband or common law spouses in the law, btw.
So, instead of a Glock being shoved up a vagina, our man who managed to withstand three erections and subsequent ejaculations in a row (two in the pink, one in the stink), has decided to bottom at last. Hooray!
> He wants Viktor to fuck him so bad it makes his teeth hurt
Funny, because Jayce bottoming was never on the cards, never in the original. He was the 'masc' bear who always tops because that's how this reach around heterosexual relationship worked. To see her go, 'Whoopsie, did a fast one on ya!' is narratively jarring, but whatever.
> Dads know everything. Husbands, too
Did you say that when you had a BPD meltdown and were tempted to use the gun on yourself? Red flag laws could've helped there. He nearly lost custody of Viktor in court and had to be told multiple times to be polite to the judge because he called her a bitch (and there was a trend of the narrative being misogynistic towards any female character that did not affirm our lil dood here). Don't forget Cait. Poor girl got fucked over so hard she viewed herself a failure.
> He's not as young as he once was
He was able to remain erect after ejaculating three times in a row, all with an absurd amount of seminal volume. Not bad for a 50-year-old man. Fresh white pussy sure has that effect, eh?
> The act of prepping to bottom muscle memory at this point
IIRC there was a mention of him having sex with men, but there was no mention of him bottoming. He has always been written as the dom top. This reversal is, again, something out of the blue because the author NEVER writes Bottom Jayce. It's anathema to most tradfujos.
> The dildo (was) long and thick, much like Jayce's own cock
Can we get some measurements on that? Is he 8''? 9? The legendary 13'' horse cock? Throw me some numbers.
> Breeches
That is a term for a baby that is positioned the wrong way. I wonder if that is intentional; Fujofrankenstein does hang out with shotacons and even had an icon drawn by one.
> When he curls Viktor's finger against his prostate
His ass must be blown out wide for him to shove both hands up there.
> He should have known Viktor had this in him
He was 15 hanging out at a 'gay' bar picking up men. The fuck you mean he didn't have it in him? You groomed him into being your slut, anyways.
> Spread hs legs wider for his husband, his son
They had a backyard marriage because Cleo dropped the plot where they were supposed to marry in a country that allows self-ID and would allow Viktor to be an openly trans man marrying another man. It's like a reverse lavender marriage. Problem is, no court is going to take it seriously, and lawyers aren't going to split the bill. You're fucked.
> Fucking his dad open like it's what he was born to do
So is he going to get a gun up his ass like Viktor had one shoved in his hooha? It's only fair.
> Should have done this ages ago
Your sole Dom Top Jayce fans wouldn't have liked that. A 50-year-old washed up bear taking a dildo up the ass from the kid he groomed at a gay bar? Talk about subverting expectations! Tradfujos don't want that; overtly masculine men can ONLY top. No prostate tickling allowed!
> Doesn't even realize he's crying softly
Must be the BPD kicking in.
> Mindful of his age and Viktor's leg as he fucks himself on his baby's dick
Your age sure didn't matter when you plowed that pussy twice and popped that anal cherry.
> He eats Viktor out the way he knows his husband loves - fast and hard and messy
Which will be the end result of the divorce court proceedings. He'll get to an age where his dick will start shriveling and he cannot keep it up anymore, and you will want to seek greener pastures. He's 50. You are 19. 10 more years and he'll be nearing retirement age. By then he'll be a sugar daddy. I bet those lawyers are already seeing dollar bills.
I guarantee you this will be the first and only time Cleo will write Jayce as a bottom. Top 'cis' Jayce is too much of a draw and her reach around hetslop is what sells. People like uwu trans Viktor getting plowed, not the other way around. It does say something when the trans men/gender diverse people writing this can't even see themselves as masculine tops. They're always dainty bottoms ready for the actual man to fuck them.
My sincere condolences to Caitlyn - she still feels guilt over facilitating this quasi-incestuous relationship and she has been condemned by the narrative. Poor girl did nothing wrong. Justice for my Wasian.
Another entry for the gothic horror weeks comes a work that is trying to harness 'House of Leaves' and the mindfuck of early Stephen King. Unfortunately, a lot of it becomes quickly redundant and leaves you wondering if this is an ESL author.
> Beckoned him (though he did not visibly beckon him)
But he was being visibly beckoned, by the beckoning that was clearly visible.
> With their muted, deteriorating faces, eyeless gazes at him
This is the kind of writing where I have to wonder if the author is ESL, or simply retarded. I get what the author is aiming for: an unreliable narrator driven mad by environmental stresses, but it's coming off as if she is doesn't understand how English works. "With their muted, deteriorating faces and eyeless gazes" sounds better, but then it's followed by another broken sentence. There are ways to convey madness without leading me to think you have a sub 100 IQ.
> Will-o-whisp
*Will-o'-the-whisp. C'mon, you can use the dictionary.
> External skeleton
You mean exoskeleton?
> Alongside the blacking viscuous excretions
This is where the author is trying to convey said madness, but it comes off as an ESL writer trying their hands at purple prose. "Viscous excretions" works on its own, or 'black excretions'. The reader can fill in the rest.
> Sometimes, he wept as he ate
>If there was enough water in his body to cry
Sounds like he has enough to cry when he eats.
> He had never seen it rain. He had never felt it rain
Uh, it was raining quite heavily before he fell in the pit. This is SUPPOSED to be him in the ravine, yet she actually has him on the surface here - where it was raining. She can't even keep her locations consistent.
>If there was enough water in his body to cry
> It was grubs and insects, mostly
We know, because you just had him eating one.
> Just a bit smaller, just marginally smaller than his hand
Redundant.
> Entail
*Entrails
> meat was meat
And you still have to cook it. I wonder if Jayce is suffering from meningitis in this - and know what a sudden cause of it is? Eating raw frogs. My man is tripping himself to a brain-damaging illness.
> He wondered if his leg was rotting. He was fairly sure it was rotting
'The floor is made of floor' ahh logic.
> If any plague or bacteria dared to dwell in the open would still, this would kill it
You are still at risk of infection because bacterial colonies evolve and grow rapidly and they can pose a risk to blistered skin like that. Cauterization is meant to stop blood loss. If burns kill bacteria, then burn victims don't need to be kept in vacuum-sealed room.
> Starting with the soft parts first. Would they go for eyes?
They'll also go for your balls and your anus because that's also soft skin, and you haven't washed your ass in months.
> Little lives. Little lives with wet eyes that he did not want to waste just like he did not want to waste the water to cry
Mind you, he's not boiling this water. He's drinking it raw and magically has not contracted dysentery. I guess the Arcane prevents flukes and tapeworms from living in one's intestines, eh?
> That he could ever live again. Would he ever live again?
I don't know, you tell me.
> He almost wish it had just popped out
It did. It was a compound fracture. You just don't see it because it didn't go through his boot. I don't think the author remembers this episode.
> He just lay there and cried
Hey, what happened to wasting all that precious water?
> Would it feel like falling asleep? No, drowning would feel like being crushed
You are not at the level of the Laurentian Abyss, calm down.
> How his mother had never been the best baking
A LATINA is not good at baking? Who the fuck are you fooling? If a Latina is not good at cooking, then it is the greatest treasonous act of their race. Your daddy is the white one, not her!
> There was never a place to just be boys
You were full grown adults with responsibilities. Enough.
> And in compulsive haste, clumsily, awkwardly lost their virginity to one another
Oh, that's nice. Are we getting that scene or is Jayce still sticking with the Klaus Schwab diet?
> The schematics on the wall were for a brace
You said that already. Yes, I am aware she is trying to convey a state of mind where repetition adds to the madness. The problem is, I cannot honestly tell this apart from the other author's writing.
> To getting out, out out, and that was the goal of things: to get out
I didn't catch the goal there. Can you say it one more time?
> Watching the viscous excretions and blood alike stain the water for a moment
Now were these 'viscous excretions' blacky or not? Because how can you see the blood disappear if you are practically in darkness? Did paranoia give him night vision?
> Even Viktor. Even Viktor
> There had to be a way to save Viktor
You need to save who again? I missed that name the first three times.
> Would it bury his bones in the soil and rest its head upon them
You've asked that already, and the answer is no because salamanders can hold shovels and do not grasp the meaning of 'six feet under'.
> If the...thing put off body heat
> Were they warm
?? You tell me, you just touched it!
> Was there nothing permanent? Did anything really die
I'm sure the salamanders and fish died when you ate them. There isn't a Firekeeper to raise their souls back from the dead.
> Bathing was baptism
As much as I wanted to breathe a sigh of relief at some sense, the author has him do this:
> He drank the same water he bathed in because it was still cleaner
BATHING YOUR STINKY-ASS SIX MONTH OF SHIT, GRIME AND BLOOD IN THE WATER YOU DRINK IN IS ABSOLUTELY RETARDED. WHO CARES IF IT'S MAGIC. WASH THAT ASS SEPARATELY!
The first thing that came to mind after I read that was the 'Naked and Afraid' episode where the woman has diarrhea and shits in the same pond they fish in. The shocking result? The fish died.
> Clean. Clean. As clean as he could be, letting the water drip down his skin. Getting back into vile clothes
Why the fuck would you not wash them? Find another pond or dig a hole and wash your clothes in them! If you have time to scrub, you can do that! Dirty clothes will just get YOU dirty again!
> If he survived, would he lose the leg?
You tell me, he's got an arcane infection and has wondered about cutting it off.
> Can these even be clean again? Was it even worth it to try?
...yes? You don't want shit-stained clothes near your clean asshole, yeah? WASH YOUR CLOTHES.
> It was the goal, wasn't it? He could only assume that it was a goal
It sounds like a goal, then it's a goal. That's our goal, goal.
> Was the anomaly truly something that had corrupted so and now - there was only this?
Okay, maybe you really are retarded. You are seriously asking if the Arcane had something to do with it when you've A) had visions of it and B) TOUCHED THE FUCKING WILD RUNE. Take a good look around and come to your own goddamn conclusions.
> There, with him, in the same way he breathed with him
*Through all this, all of it, he was present there in the back of his mind; there, with him, in the same way he breathed and and in the shudder of his heartbeat
I tried.
> How much of it was his fault
All of it, actually. You brought Viktor back to life without his consent and touched the wild rune. The fuck you asking for?
>Viscous excretions
This is the third time you've written this.
> He was getting hungrier and hungrier. No lily-pad stems because he had not thought to harvest them
You know it's bad when fucking Katniss Everdeen would've hoarded that shit and so would anyone else. If I saw a fresh water source, I'd maybe try to make a canteen/sac with the dirty-ass clothes I cleaned in a separate water source? Couldn't be more. I don't have a MENSA IQ.
> Like a leashed dog
Here we go with the dog allegories again.
> Something had to be wrong in this body of his
No shit. You are definitely suffering some kind of meningitis infection from all the shit you've eaten and drank.
> If he died here, in the sun, that is how he would like to go
> If he was going to die, he would die here in the sun
Redundant.
> It is bygone
*Those bygone days
>Linked. Bound, Woven tapestry threads, nuclear stars, the earth itself
Nothing says cosmic romance and conjoined fates like mentally torturing and inflicting PTSD on the guy you saved as a child. Nothing says woven tapestry threads like a guy shitting himself on the daily, GRRM style, in clothes he doesn't wash. Nothing says nuclear stars like a guy wondering if he did something wrong and caused the apocalypse while eating raw salamanders and infected drinking water from a guy who spooked him into falling into a ravine. COSMIC YAOI ALWAYS WINS
> I found myself in a situation where I had to trick you
This entire situation exists because you decided to trick Jayce.
> Over the wrist that felt so, so thin, much thinner than his own
He's just uwu so small.
> Shined
*Shone
So, nothing is alive in this world, so Viktor has been offering up pieces of his own flesh to feed Jayce. Similar to Prometheus who regenerates every morning, he uses the Arcane to regrow skin. But, you're probably wondering...how can something come from nothing? Surely he has to draw on more magic to regenerate himself and why, for example, are there butterflies around Jayce's figure if there are no life forms left on Earth? Fuck you, stop asking questions.
I will admit, this is an interesting twist. It makes up for the redundant repetitiveness of the earlier chapter, which did more harm than good to make me go, 'Yeah, this guy is tripping' vs my 'Yeah he's retarded' observation. I will admit, it would even be more horrific if he was eating the automatons who were turned BACK into flesh. That would make Viktor more of a villain, and we can't have that.
> What was love but all consuming? What was affection but a means to an end
Resorting to cannibalism because you were rotting in a ravine sounds like it fits in a Rammstein song rather than be a poignant reflection of love. He'd make a great live-action Armin Meiwes, though.
> Meat was meat. Meat was meat
You gonna start saying your name is Reek, now?
> Such a fucked by beautiful intimacy
I wonder if this is what would happen if 'Meil Teil' was written by a woman.
> Trying to keep him alive out of adoration and knowing, knowing there was no other option
??? There were plenty of other options, the biggest being not shoving him in that ravine to begin with. All of this is happening because Mage Viktor is up there with Griffith in villainy.
He had almost forgotten his cock could twitch
Which sex is known for getting horny around corpses, again?
But then again, we have a dirty hobo that's going to fuck the pussy he practically ate. I don't think this is what Megan Thee Stallion intended with WAP.
> Oh, what tendon had he severed with his teeth
Damn, he really is going caveman mode, lol
> If Viktor was not the most beautiful lamb to slaughter
Ah yes, the pure white (wo)man is the innocent lamb (or genocidal lamb, if we're being honest) while the Latino is the starving, ferocious beast. Nothing to interpret from that, I'm sure.
> How vile, how revolting, these urges that mankind thought themselves greater than, beyond
> Proceeds to think about said vile urges while engaging in them
Top kek.
> Malaise of madness had set in. Illness. Sickness
Translation: A sickness of madness had set in. Sickness. Sickness.
Which would work if this was better written. This author just isn't skilled enough to pull it off.
> Maidenhood
A very curious choice of words there, because that is a word - again -reserved for females, not males. They can't even stick with their own scripts.
> It was a fucked intimacy
You said that already.
> No intimacy he could ever know would rival it
It has been said consuming one's own is the closest and most intimate you can get to them. Now, is he going to ACTUALLY eat that pussy? Time will tell.
> The desire to rut, to fuck, to be inside this body he blasphemed
Another day, another fic where he is made into a bloodthirsty animal who ruts and rapes because his cock is doing the thinking for him.
> Font of food
Was he looking at a fancy menu that said, 'Eat my pussy for calories'?
> Not for reasons of menses but from a tongue and mouth that explored to find the soft spots
He doesn't actually bit off his clit or chew on his vulva. We are not that deranged. But he does fuck in the 'froth' of whatever is coming from his thighs and stomach so it does make you think someone took his vulva to a Ninja blender.
>The swollen tip that fit so nicely between his lips
If he ate that, it'd be like a Jolly Rancher: hard, a little bit hairy, and something you can't chew on the first sucks.
> Herein who, who of them was the most disturbed could be left up to speculation
Stop writing like you are a tenured professor. It isn't working.
> Like the humming of a machine utilized to eradicate excessive noise
??? What? That'd just be adding more noise. Wouldn't you try to fix the machines making those loud noises in the first place?
> What isolation. What rot. Was it the same rot that infected his bones?
Yeah? It seems this author cannot grasp the concept of intelligent madness: whereas some senses will be dulled or warped by trauma, others are heightened. This character has repeatedly wondered whether their leg is worth saving and whether it is infected. I consider this less a character issue than the author just forgetting to add smart thinking to her 'itchy, tasty' tale.
> Fingers locked in his hair
He's done that like four times already.
> Dripping with an execrable union of vaginal secretion and blood
Again: Ninja blender. It's like tomato fruit juice or boba tea.
> He had looked upon the rolling expanse of vile and seen the worst
And yet he still wonders if the world he is in is an apocalyptic one. No, really: he had a good look around him and thought, legitimately, 'hey, is still place still functioning? It looks functioning'.
> Panted like some violated madonna
Another interesting choice of words because that is a term used exclusively for women. There are just no other terms to use for trans men, eh?
> Poetic, if fucked, if absolutely fucked
We know. You said that four times already.
>Had turned into a repugnant froth on his lips
Is it frothy enough to sell as fruit juice?
> It was carnal, animalistic, basal, what they were both reduced to
Something something about the brown man always written as an animal while the while one is a madonna to be soiled...hmm, nothing to deconstruct from that, I'm sure.
> The only thought in his mind was that he buried himself in that hole
There's a reason why they tie up the legs of female corpses.
> Still a bit of pectoral fat
He has none. Objectively, even as a man, he had none at that period. Why would he have them as a trans man?
> Oedupusian
That is not what an Oedipus Complex is. It's when you want to fuck your own mother (son) or father (daughter). Is he treated Viktor like his mom, now?
> Something had gotten into him and left him with rot and ruin but all he wanted to eat was eat and fuck, basemose instincts
I really was waiting for him to literally eat that pussy. It seems that way if he can see his cum mix with blood like some fucked up German strudel.
> This was disgusting and it was wrong and he had eaten him
Disgusting? Yes. The worst? No, I legit thought he would have nommed on that labia like it was a turkey sandwich.
> Of course the light at the end was Viktor
He's more like Chicxulub.
> Fingers through his hair
Drink.
> This never should have happened
Agreed. But the writers wanted to make you like Euron Greyjoy so here we are.
> Laid open, down to the muscle? How he was so, so sure he could crack open those ribs and crawl inside
'Vut are you doing? Eez getting too beeg!'
Let me say that I do understand that the author was trying to replicate a man in the midst of madness. I get it; the repetitive words, the unsettling atmosphere, the desperation and hunger. But that isn't coming through the writing as the author thinks it is. It's there, but it's not as effective as it could be. Compare this to the 'Itchy, Tasty' scene from Resident Evil: while simple, you could absolutely tell this man was losing it and becoming a zombie. Here, it's hard to tell whether that's a narrative device or if the author is just not good at writing. I've used similar tactics before, and they can absolutely be effective - provided it isn't redundant. That was a big problem I had with this, on top of wondering if the author knows what an Oedipus Complex is.
All in all, it isn't awful. It just didn't hit the way it should, and the 'hurr, brown man animalistic caveman' thing is such a common trope here that I cannot take it as seriously as the author would like. I really do think a Rammstein song would cover it better, and it did - Mein Teil.
Not as big as Arcane, but it seems Huey and Ocelot are headcanoned as pooners a lot.
> He's a priest, but he performs Satanic rituals
In a house of God? He should belong to a Church of Satan, then, not Christ. Oh and she isn't kidding about the flesh eating thing; he doesn't go at it like a zombie but he isn't Hannibal Lecter, either.
> The fire is an attempt to purify
> Describes how the fire burns everything totally and how it isn't an attempt at all but a completed act
Logic.
> Canines prowl the streets for a lone scrap of feline or a crying, abandoned infant
That implies the cats aren't starving, too, and that cannibalism wouldn't be happening among said dogs. They'd be eating homeless people, too. Do homeless people exist in this edgy Tim Burton horror tale?
> Families strung apart like leathered skin
Uh, leather doesn't work that way. They wouldn't be 'torn apart', they'd be made rubbery and smoothed into flat planes. Leathery skin doesn't give the impression of something easily torn apart, but something worn and made for a fashion accessory. It's a malapropism.
> At this time of night, nothing illuminates the stone beneath his feet, his waiting presence hidde in the encompassing darkness
We get the impression the entire street is dark, but that it previously wasn't because why would there be a 'shadow of the street' of nothing illuminates the stone under his feet? Wouldn't the entire area be dark? It'd be one thing if she wrote, 'He stands in the shadow of the street, avoiding the streetlights and the flickering candles above him'. This would mean he is actively trying to hide. This means the entire street is dark and no one can see shit.
> The personality of a dove, cooing sweet hymns for those willing to listen
Get it? The white one is a dove, a lamb, any animal associated with sweet innocence, while the Latino is a Satanist who will corrupt said purity. What do you think the author means by that?
>The grout allows nothing but water to seep against gravity through the walls
...that's what it's for?
> Heel to toe, a soft landing rather than a thud against the cobbelstone
Your shoes are still going to echo. The trick is toe to heel, which the Natives do to muffle their footsteps while hunting.
> A pristine white neck, sliced clean and bled dry
White skin is the best for gothic horror. No other races need apply - unless you want to be a Satanic Latino.
Wait until you find out how deep and insightful the author's grasp on Christianity is.
> He was brought up like a crop beneath the dirt
That's how crops start, you fucking retard. You plant the seeds beneath the soil!
> Being clean wasn't something Jayce had known until his adolescence was eclipsed by adulthood
"I was born in the filth, raised in it. I didn't see a bar of soap until I was already a man."
>gifted biology preventing Viktor from feeling pain
Must be that second X chromosome doing its job.
> > Gentle swell of his breasts
Hey, he might be a virgin-sacrificing Satanic blasphemer, but he ain't a transphobe!
> Blood drips over the short, trimmed hair that coats Viktor's cunt
Hey, look at that! Gothic horror requires trimmed pubes! Who would've thought?
> It flows between the silky flesh of his labia, and percolates down the short length of his cock
I told you: white skin works the best for horror. If we had any nignogs they'd be killed first. Nothing darker than a Latino mix, thank you!
> Back into the reality of his biology mixing pain with pleasure
Lol. Lmao. We are talking about the 'reality of his biology' while pretending that that's male anatomy and a male body he's cutting up. It's part of a virgin sacrifice, yeah? Which sex's virginity was overwhelmingly signaled as a sign for purity?
> Dyeing his hair a red so deep that it shines indigo
Any darker and he'll become his spirit animal: Khal Drogo.
> A divine man, no higher than God but no less than the seraphim
You would not be saying this to a priest engaging in human sacrifice. For one, no priest is considered higher than God; they are messengers of the Word of God. Seraphim are God's highest ranking angels. A Satanist would, if anything, invoke the ire of said Seraphim who would smite him and then banish him to Hell.
> Tell me, was I correct in my assumption that your cunt is untouched by pleasure?
Again, which sex's purity and virginity is more valued culturally and socially? Something tells me he wasn't doing it to actual male virgins. He picked a vagina owner for a reason. Very gender-affirming!
> Dragging the sharpened edge down the length of his thigh
He's flaying him, but the author doesn't want to commit to a full flaying because even THAT is overkill. We still need our pure white virgin getting fucked by the Satanist, not a war crime!
> When the Time has come, when I have to shed my humanity for the feast of Mammon
Mammon is an entity associated with wealth and greed. He is considered a demon, but he is not the Antichrist, which is what The Beast is. You gotta get your demons right, Sarah.
> I may be a wolf in sheep's skin
Something to be said about the brown man always being a predator in the house of God. I wonder what the author could possible mean by that.
> She may have been one of God's chosen
She was a filthy goyim, so no.
> the barbs digging into his skin scrape against the ivory ribcage
White skin is best for horror x3.
> With a gasp, Jayce rips his teeth from Viktor's abdomen
> His stomach, a constellation of bite marks and torn meat, Jayce's teeth having buried themselves in his buttery soft skin
I wonder what the racial implications are of a brown man eating the flesh of a white (wo)man. What do you mean an evil entity occupying a holy place greater men have built is feasting themselves on the labour of said holy white people and has a psychosexual obsession with white skin? Nothing to parse from that, I'm sure!
Hey, at least his cunt is dripping! Yeah your stomach is getting chunks bitten out of it like it's a Crumbl cookie but we're ready for cock!
> You think I am an abomination
A brown man being a Satanist and pissing on the House of God? Yeah I can see why the Spaniards cannonballed Tenochtitlan to dust.
> Why would he prevent carnage, and gratify us to survive another year?
Because the Antichrist sows discord, and knows that if people spurn God, they would turn to the one thing that promises them salvation. You answered your own question: Satan appears as a beautiful saviour to people who think God has abandoned them.
> I do not see Mammon as malevolent
The demon associated with greed and monetary wealth isn't malevolent? OK, then.
> A fallen angel
BTW, Mammon is considered the SON of Lucifer, not Lucifer himself (thanks, Constantine!) Other times they aren't even RELATED. Stupidsarah has a poem praising Satan at the end and yet she can't tell the difference between Lucifer and Mammon? Huh?
> You are virginal. A chalice of virginity wrapped in wool
I'm not getting over the fact that a trans man is being sacrificed to Satan
You trying to say they're evil, or something? Which sex is overwhelmingly considered for virgin sacrifices in these tropes, again?> Devouring the cunt slathered on his tongue
I was honestly surprised he didn't just take a bite out of his clit. He did partially devour his stomach muscles.
> Free the women of man's insatiable lust
Oh? That sounds very bioessentialist! Are you suggesting men are natural born sex pests and AFABs are their victims? What the fuck is Viktor, then?
> Uses his remaining strength to rip his staked feet from the wooden cross
Yeah, that isn't happening. He can kiss his feet goodbye.
> Blood pours from his jaw, the lamb having bitten his tongue so hard that is split down the middle
Add a tongue piercing and he'd give perfect head. It'd be like a floppy lamp chop.
Not getting over how this guy was preaching to Mammon and Lucifer as if they were the same entity. Or the fact that the token brown man worships the Devil. Not even a true and honest racist could come up with shit like that.
> Gently pulls the metal barbs from his flesh
You must've prayed for antibiotics because not only is that shit going to lead to nasty infections, you ATE part of his stomach. That 'pale, milky white skin' is going to look like a Kinder egg after a group of five-year-olds had access to it.
> If this were Hell, you would be sitting upon a throne
Trans people belong in Hell? Whoa, man! That's kinda based!
> Be a virginal trans man
> You are sacrificed by a Satanist priest to Lucifer
> You are tortured and have parts of your stomach eaten (but not your genitalia because we aren't THAT evil)
> You are restored to health because your only natural role is serving the Antichrist
> Author's end note is a poem praising Satan
Huh. I wonder why these people hate Christians so much.
Nakura, our 'Everyone has AIDS' author, has also participated in this gothic horror week. Her entry features the classic extreme yaoi features: biceps larger than the bottom's waist and a fist that can encircle the chest completely. Think James from Smiling Friends grappling DJ Spit.
> The machete was the size of his forearm
Yes, that's how big machetes get. The author conflates a machete with a 'very large knife' - and yes, while a machete IS a knife - the two evoke completely different feelings. One suggest something slim that you can hide in your pocket. The other is meant for hacking down jungle growth and human limbs. Helps to know the difference.
> Sums of money appeared in his account, not large enough to raise suspicions of fraud
Hey, if he wanted his stalker doxxed immediately, all he has to do is report it to the IRS. Those tax men will be hunting him down Batman style and he would have his social security number on his desk by the end of the week.
> The bow will look great at your waist
Very masc. Next you'll be doing Korean colour wheels and delivering clothes based on his season.
> Why Viktor needed to meet stupid men who wouldn't appreciate him?
If you thought this was another 'all these men suck except this one who makes me orgasm/squirt' trope, you'd be right. That is exactly how it goes.
> Or a serial killer decided to target him because he had a disability
If that was the case, he'd be visiting a homeless camp, but then the crack addicts and tweakers would jump him.
> Making them cross-eyed for a moment
So he was in front of his nose?
> After a strange monologue about possessing a body that didn't belong to him
Who knew serial killers suffered from body dysmorphia, too? Next thing he'll be coming out as trans.
> His hand, strong and large, holding his own
He's just uwu so smol.
> He was taller and stronger, his physique accentuated by the sleeves pulled up, showing the certainty of someone who regularly went to the gym
*Showing someone who went to the gym
> A bath bomb had been used
Damn. Does he have the expensive exfoliating shit?
> That he had a vulva
Yeah, can't imagine a serial killer being a transphobe. We can be Satanists, rapists, pedophiles and racists, but we can NEVER be transphobic.
> If the kidnapper wanted to show that the blade was sharp, he was convincing
Machetes are better at hacking off limps vs cutting off clothes. If it had a knife similar to what the US Marines use, then I'd believe it. It just looks goofy seeing something as cumbersome as a machete cut off someone's shirt in an erotic manner.
> He was an adult and perfectly capable in his own right. If he wanted to go the moon (something he considered applying for a job)
You are too short and too disabled to be an astronaut, if that's what you mean. The G-force would fuck with your bones, too. You are the last person to be sent into space.
> People so-so, so forgettable
She meant, 'people so-so, and those so forgettable'. So-so means something in the middle, not an exaggeration.
> Little chest he had with his whole hand and squeezed
This makes it seem as if his chest is so tiny a man can wrap his hand around it. No human alive has a waist that small, not even Eugenia Cooney.
> He had his preferences when watching videos
Oh I wonder what those could be.
> He didn't masturbate as often as most adult men his age did
Funny, but you aren't an adult male. You can orgasm more than men do in a shorter amount of time. You'd think T would make him a horn dog but here he is.
> He had a certain charm in his letters, he smelled good
Oh wow, a kidnapping serial killer (or a roleplaying one) who smells good. I bet he's laying on YSL and has matching glasses. A kidnapper who smells good AND makes you squirt? Talk about a jackpot! I can almost forget you pissed the bed!
> A man a head bigger than him, with biceps bigger than his waist
This isn't humanly possible, unless Jayce looks like this:
He is not the physique of The Mountain That Rides. Dial back the yaoi anatomy.
> Luckily, his bladder wasn't very full before
You still pissed yourself.
> You've already achieved so much because you decided to believe in yourself
Imagine a kidnapper who admits he's going to take away your agency and your life so he can take care of you like a doll is giving you a pep talk in order to accept it easier. In another life he would've been selling door-to-door vacuum cleaners.
> Avoiding contact with his cock
Two inches.
> More of an attempt to connect better with his captor
Now, which sex is known to do that in order to make them nicer and softer to them? This ain't shooting the shit, you know.
> How did he end up there, what did he do wrong?
Be a serial killer's type. Next thing you know he'll be ordering his T shots, too, because we can't have our tiny waifu revert back to factory settings.
> Why didn't he seek help when he could?
Hey, free money is free money. An anonymous sugar daddy is better than none.
Haha more like short for JACKIN' OFF AM I RIGHT?
> Had J put something in the food?
You are a genius. You tell me whether losing consciousness as soon as you finish eating is the result of drugs. You'd think he'd know, having a pharmacy in his nightstand and all.
> At least he could protest, act like a child and rebel
No man is going to be moved by a tiny, 4'9 transman with a frog voice throwing a tantrum. You're small enough to be thrown into a crib. You saw those muscles of his; if you can be bent in half by Chef Boyardee over here, you might as well shut the fuck up and go with it. Acting like a child isn't very masc and isn't going to help you.
> He wanted to rip that mask off his head and hit the man with a piece of wood
You'd be worn out as soon as you lifted it over your head.
> He found himself powerless, as he always was when he got deeply angry
What's that? People aren't afraid of you when you're mad? They don't back away, don't threaten to call the cops and don't pull out weapons in self-defense? Weird, that! It's almost as if all the effort to present as male doesn't fool anybody.
> It was so common for him not to understand others
Oh, so you're autistic.
> how much he had already gushed out
Either this is a fetish or you were given an aphrodisiac. Sea World ain't in season.
> His tongue was thick and firm, it must be good
All I can think of is that he has a tongue like a cow: big, unwieldly, and something people eat as a delicacy.
> The greatest form of exposure he had ever experienced at someone's hands
Ah, so we're going with the Sexy Stockholm Syndrome trope here: where you not only feel sympathy for your captor, you see them as the only one who can make you feel sexually complete. None of those other losers could make him come, but the guy with a machete and a dick to match can!
> The man's thick fingers knew how to move just right against him, and his pusys throbbed at the mere thought of being filled with one of them
You get the pussy happy, anything is possible, even if you are an obsessed stalker. Pooners are so desperate for love they'll seek it from anyone, even from Ghostface Machete here.
> Realized he had never been kissed with such desire - and had never had such a good kiss
This is 'Never Been Kissed' had Drew Barrymore's character lived and started lusting after Ghostface instead. We're hitting all the hetslop tropes now.
> That's why I kidnapped you, V. Because this is our destiny. We have to be together.
"I kidnapped you because you're too mentally weak for masculine jobs and you need to stay home and be my mommy, maid and wife!" That sounds very gender-affirming. The Handmaid's Tale if the kidnappers were all Chippendale baddies and every handmaiden squirted on commant.
> Ngggh
Everyone loves it when someone starts moaning like Joe Biden.
> They were destined for this, for each other
Guess anything can mean a happy ending if you get a good dicking!
> Viktor had never been normal, he never thought he would be loved
So what you're saying is that trans men can only find love through maladaptive behaviour and men who are the embodiment of said behaviour? You don't say
>Nnngh my God
Me when I find out this actually has a cliffhanger
> Barely felt the liquid forming beneath him
Aunt Carol might have fun with this: caloric loss and dehydration from squirting. Anyone want to write a paper on that?
> Only enhancing a well-prepared beauty
Literally the OH NO HE'S NOT Spongebob meme.
> I thought were going to die of dehydration from all the squirting you did
So he looks like Spongebob during that episode where they're at Sandy's house. Good to know. I still want to know what kind of caloric and metabolic loss is involved with so much squirting.
> I am face to face with my stalker
"But he's hot and he made me squirt so we're all good."
> Was this how the gaslighting process began, the manipulation of victims to convince them they weren't actual victims?
He already achieved that when he called you beautiful. You folded like a deck of cards, and that's on top of the 'woe is me nobody loves me or wants to fuck me' weight he was carrying on his shoulders. Can it even be considered gaslighting when you already believed what a sexy stalker had to say?
And yes, the fic ends with this. No penetration, no whipping out of the good ole Thick n Veiny. Just a cliffhanger to get you mad and bothered like the sexy stalker who decided to wring out your orgasm a little more. I wonder if there will be a sequel and if it will continue right where this left off. If not...well, there's always the AIDS AU.
If you missed the 'you can be my full time daddy' series, you won't be lost reading this standalone piece. It is a companion to the main fic, and Cleo/FF has summarized it thus: a 45-year-old hooks up with a 15-year-old at a 'gay' bar, fingers him in the back of his truck (in the NSFW version, they actually do have sexual intercourse), adopts him from his meth-dealing stepfather, nearly has a mental breakdown from bad BPD meds, and has a weird wedding where the main plot involved going to a state or country where open trans marriages were accepted, yet decided to have an illegitimate marrige in the backyard. That's not going to be seen as husband-husband or common law spouses in the law, btw.
So, instead of a Glock being shoved up a vagina, our man who managed to withstand three erections and subsequent ejaculations in a row (two in the pink, one in the stink), has decided to bottom at last. Hooray!
> He wants Viktor to fuck him so bad it makes his teeth hurt
Funny, because Jayce bottoming was never on the cards, never in the original. He was the 'masc' bear who always tops because that's how this reach around heterosexual relationship worked. To see her go, 'Whoopsie, did a fast one on ya!' is narratively jarring, but whatever.
> Dads know everything. Husbands, too
Did you say that when you had a BPD meltdown and were tempted to use the gun on yourself? Red flag laws could've helped there. He nearly lost custody of Viktor in court and had to be told multiple times to be polite to the judge because he called her a bitch (and there was a trend of the narrative being misogynistic towards any female character that did not affirm our lil dood here). Don't forget Cait. Poor girl got fucked over so hard she viewed herself a failure.
> He's not as young as he once was
He was able to remain erect after ejaculating three times in a row, all with an absurd amount of seminal volume. Not bad for a 50-year-old man. Fresh white pussy sure has that effect, eh?
> The act of prepping to bottom muscle memory at this point
IIRC there was a mention of him having sex with men, but there was no mention of him bottoming. He has always been written as the dom top. This reversal is, again, something out of the blue because the author NEVER writes Bottom Jayce. It's anathema to most tradfujos.
> The dildo (was) long and thick, much like Jayce's own cock
Can we get some measurements on that? Is he 8''? 9? The legendary 13'' horse cock? Throw me some numbers.
> Breeches
That is a term for a baby that is positioned the wrong way. I wonder if that is intentional; Fujofrankenstein does hang out with shotacons and even had an icon drawn by one.
> When he curls Viktor's finger against his prostate
His ass must be blown out wide for him to shove both hands up there.
> He should have known Viktor had this in him
He was 15 hanging out at a 'gay' bar picking up men. The fuck you mean he didn't have it in him? You groomed him into being your slut, anyways.
> Spread hs legs wider for his husband, his son
They had a backyard marriage because Cleo dropped the plot where they were supposed to marry in a country that allows self-ID and would allow Viktor to be an openly trans man marrying another man. It's like a reverse lavender marriage. Problem is, no court is going to take it seriously, and lawyers aren't going to split the bill. You're fucked.
> Fucking his dad open like it's what he was born to do
So is he going to get a gun up his ass like Viktor had one shoved in his hooha? It's only fair.
> Should have done this ages ago
Your sole Dom Top Jayce fans wouldn't have liked that. A 50-year-old washed up bear taking a dildo up the ass from the kid he groomed at a gay bar? Talk about subverting expectations! Tradfujos don't want that; overtly masculine men can ONLY top. No prostate tickling allowed!
> Doesn't even realize he's crying softly
Must be the BPD kicking in.
> Mindful of his age and Viktor's leg as he fucks himself on his baby's dick
Your age sure didn't matter when you plowed that pussy twice and popped that anal cherry.
> He eats Viktor out the way he knows his husband loves - fast and hard and messy
Which will be the end result of the divorce court proceedings. He'll get to an age where his dick will start shriveling and he cannot keep it up anymore, and you will want to seek greener pastures. He's 50. You are 19. 10 more years and he'll be nearing retirement age. By then he'll be a sugar daddy. I bet those lawyers are already seeing dollar bills.
I guarantee you this will be the first and only time Cleo will write Jayce as a bottom. Top 'cis' Jayce is too much of a draw and her reach around hetslop is what sells. People like uwu trans Viktor getting plowed, not the other way around. It does say something when the trans men/gender diverse people writing this can't even see themselves as masculine tops. They're always dainty bottoms ready for the actual man to fuck them.
My sincere condolences to Caitlyn - she still feels guilt over facilitating this quasi-incestuous relationship and she has been condemned by the narrative. Poor girl did nothing wrong. Justice for my Wasian.
Another entry for the gothic horror weeks comes a work that is trying to harness 'House of Leaves' and the mindfuck of early Stephen King. Unfortunately, a lot of it becomes quickly redundant and leaves you wondering if this is an ESL author.
> Beckoned him (though he did not visibly beckon him)
But he was being visibly beckoned, by the beckoning that was clearly visible.
> With their muted, deteriorating faces, eyeless gazes at him
This is the kind of writing where I have to wonder if the author is ESL, or simply retarded. I get what the author is aiming for: an unreliable narrator driven mad by environmental stresses, but it's coming off as if she is doesn't understand how English works. "With their muted, deteriorating faces and eyeless gazes" sounds better, but then it's followed by another broken sentence. There are ways to convey madness without leading me to think you have a sub 100 IQ.
> Will-o-whisp
*Will-o'-the-whisp. C'mon, you can use the dictionary.
> External skeleton
You mean exoskeleton?
> Alongside the blacking viscuous excretions
This is where the author is trying to convey said madness, but it comes off as an ESL writer trying their hands at purple prose. "Viscous excretions" works on its own, or 'black excretions'. The reader can fill in the rest.
> Sometimes, he wept as he ate
>If there was enough water in his body to cry
Sounds like he has enough to cry when he eats.
> He had never seen it rain. He had never felt it rain
Uh, it was raining quite heavily before he fell in the pit. This is SUPPOSED to be him in the ravine, yet she actually has him on the surface here - where it was raining. She can't even keep her locations consistent.
>If there was enough water in his body to cry
> It was grubs and insects, mostly
We know, because you just had him eating one.
> Just a bit smaller, just marginally smaller than his hand
Redundant.
> Entail
*Entrails
> meat was meat
And you still have to cook it. I wonder if Jayce is suffering from meningitis in this - and know what a sudden cause of it is? Eating raw frogs. My man is tripping himself to a brain-damaging illness.
> He wondered if his leg was rotting. He was fairly sure it was rotting
'The floor is made of floor' ahh logic.
> If any plague or bacteria dared to dwell in the open would still, this would kill it
You are still at risk of infection because bacterial colonies evolve and grow rapidly and they can pose a risk to blistered skin like that. Cauterization is meant to stop blood loss. If burns kill bacteria, then burn victims don't need to be kept in vacuum-sealed room.
> Starting with the soft parts first. Would they go for eyes?
They'll also go for your balls and your anus because that's also soft skin, and you haven't washed your ass in months.
> Little lives. Little lives with wet eyes that he did not want to waste just like he did not want to waste the water to cry
Mind you, he's not boiling this water. He's drinking it raw and magically has not contracted dysentery. I guess the Arcane prevents flukes and tapeworms from living in one's intestines, eh?
> That he could ever live again. Would he ever live again?
I don't know, you tell me.
> He almost wish it had just popped out
It did. It was a compound fracture. You just don't see it because it didn't go through his boot. I don't think the author remembers this episode.
> He just lay there and cried
Hey, what happened to wasting all that precious water?
> Would it feel like falling asleep? No, drowning would feel like being crushed
You are not at the level of the Laurentian Abyss, calm down.
> How his mother had never been the best baking
A LATINA is not good at baking? Who the fuck are you fooling? If a Latina is not good at cooking, then it is the greatest treasonous act of their race. Your daddy is the white one, not her!
> There was never a place to just be boys
You were full grown adults with responsibilities. Enough.
> And in compulsive haste, clumsily, awkwardly lost their virginity to one another
Oh, that's nice. Are we getting that scene or is Jayce still sticking with the Klaus Schwab diet?
> The schematics on the wall were for a brace
You said that already. Yes, I am aware she is trying to convey a state of mind where repetition adds to the madness. The problem is, I cannot honestly tell this apart from the other author's writing.
> To getting out, out out, and that was the goal of things: to get out
I didn't catch the goal there. Can you say it one more time?
> Watching the viscous excretions and blood alike stain the water for a moment
Now were these 'viscous excretions' blacky or not? Because how can you see the blood disappear if you are practically in darkness? Did paranoia give him night vision?
> Even Viktor. Even Viktor
> There had to be a way to save Viktor
You need to save who again? I missed that name the first three times.
> Would it bury his bones in the soil and rest its head upon them
You've asked that already, and the answer is no because salamanders can hold shovels and do not grasp the meaning of 'six feet under'.
> If the...thing put off body heat
> Were they warm
?? You tell me, you just touched it!
> Was there nothing permanent? Did anything really die
I'm sure the salamanders and fish died when you ate them. There isn't a Firekeeper to raise their souls back from the dead.
> Bathing was baptism
As much as I wanted to breathe a sigh of relief at some sense, the author has him do this:
> He drank the same water he bathed in because it was still cleaner
BATHING YOUR STINKY-ASS SIX MONTH OF SHIT, GRIME AND BLOOD IN THE WATER YOU DRINK IN IS ABSOLUTELY RETARDED. WHO CARES IF IT'S MAGIC. WASH THAT ASS SEPARATELY!
The first thing that came to mind after I read that was the 'Naked and Afraid' episode where the woman has diarrhea and shits in the same pond they fish in. The shocking result? The fish died.
> Clean. Clean. As clean as he could be, letting the water drip down his skin. Getting back into vile clothes
Why the fuck would you not wash them? Find another pond or dig a hole and wash your clothes in them! If you have time to scrub, you can do that! Dirty clothes will just get YOU dirty again!
> If he survived, would he lose the leg?
You tell me, he's got an arcane infection and has wondered about cutting it off.
> Can these even be clean again? Was it even worth it to try?
...yes? You don't want shit-stained clothes near your clean asshole, yeah? WASH YOUR CLOTHES.
> It was the goal, wasn't it? He could only assume that it was a goal
It sounds like a goal, then it's a goal. That's our goal, goal.
> Was the anomaly truly something that had corrupted so and now - there was only this?
Okay, maybe you really are retarded. You are seriously asking if the Arcane had something to do with it when you've A) had visions of it and B) TOUCHED THE FUCKING WILD RUNE. Take a good look around and come to your own goddamn conclusions.
> There, with him, in the same way he breathed with him
*Through all this, all of it, he was present there in the back of his mind; there, with him, in the same way he breathed and and in the shudder of his heartbeat
I tried.
> How much of it was his fault
All of it, actually. You brought Viktor back to life without his consent and touched the wild rune. The fuck you asking for?
>Viscous excretions
This is the third time you've written this.
> He was getting hungrier and hungrier. No lily-pad stems because he had not thought to harvest them
You know it's bad when fucking Katniss Everdeen would've hoarded that shit and so would anyone else. If I saw a fresh water source, I'd maybe try to make a canteen/sac with the dirty-ass clothes I cleaned in a separate water source? Couldn't be more. I don't have a MENSA IQ.
> Like a leashed dog
Here we go with the dog allegories again.
> Something had to be wrong in this body of his
No shit. You are definitely suffering some kind of meningitis infection from all the shit you've eaten and drank.
> If he died here, in the sun, that is how he would like to go
> If he was going to die, he would die here in the sun
Redundant.
> It is bygone
*Those bygone days
>Linked. Bound, Woven tapestry threads, nuclear stars, the earth itself
Nothing says cosmic romance and conjoined fates like mentally torturing and inflicting PTSD on the guy you saved as a child. Nothing says woven tapestry threads like a guy shitting himself on the daily, GRRM style, in clothes he doesn't wash. Nothing says nuclear stars like a guy wondering if he did something wrong and caused the apocalypse while eating raw salamanders and infected drinking water from a guy who spooked him into falling into a ravine. COSMIC YAOI ALWAYS WINS
> I found myself in a situation where I had to trick you
This entire situation exists because you decided to trick Jayce.
> Over the wrist that felt so, so thin, much thinner than his own
He's just uwu so small.
> Shined
*Shone
So, nothing is alive in this world, so Viktor has been offering up pieces of his own flesh to feed Jayce. Similar to Prometheus who regenerates every morning, he uses the Arcane to regrow skin. But, you're probably wondering...how can something come from nothing? Surely he has to draw on more magic to regenerate himself and why, for example, are there butterflies around Jayce's figure if there are no life forms left on Earth? Fuck you, stop asking questions.
I will admit, this is an interesting twist. It makes up for the redundant repetitiveness of the earlier chapter, which did more harm than good to make me go, 'Yeah, this guy is tripping' vs my 'Yeah he's retarded' observation. I will admit, it would even be more horrific if he was eating the automatons who were turned BACK into flesh. That would make Viktor more of a villain, and we can't have that.
> What was love but all consuming? What was affection but a means to an end
Resorting to cannibalism because you were rotting in a ravine sounds like it fits in a Rammstein song rather than be a poignant reflection of love. He'd make a great live-action Armin Meiwes, though.
> Meat was meat. Meat was meat
You gonna start saying your name is Reek, now?
> Such a fucked by beautiful intimacy
I wonder if this is what would happen if 'Meil Teil' was written by a woman.
> Trying to keep him alive out of adoration and knowing, knowing there was no other option
??? There were plenty of other options, the biggest being not shoving him in that ravine to begin with. All of this is happening because Mage Viktor is up there with Griffith in villainy.
He had almost forgotten his cock could twitch
Which sex is known for getting horny around corpses, again?
But then again, we have a dirty hobo that's going to fuck the pussy he practically ate. I don't think this is what Megan Thee Stallion intended with WAP.
> Oh, what tendon had he severed with his teeth
Damn, he really is going caveman mode, lol
> If Viktor was not the most beautiful lamb to slaughter
Ah yes, the pure white (wo)man is the innocent lamb (or genocidal lamb, if we're being honest) while the Latino is the starving, ferocious beast. Nothing to interpret from that, I'm sure.
> How vile, how revolting, these urges that mankind thought themselves greater than, beyond
> Proceeds to think about said vile urges while engaging in them
Top kek.
> Malaise of madness had set in. Illness. Sickness
Translation: A sickness of madness had set in. Sickness. Sickness.
Which would work if this was better written. This author just isn't skilled enough to pull it off.
> Maidenhood
A very curious choice of words there, because that is a word - again -reserved for females, not males. They can't even stick with their own scripts.
> It was a fucked intimacy
You said that already.
> No intimacy he could ever know would rival it
It has been said consuming one's own is the closest and most intimate you can get to them. Now, is he going to ACTUALLY eat that pussy? Time will tell.
> The desire to rut, to fuck, to be inside this body he blasphemed
Another day, another fic where he is made into a bloodthirsty animal who ruts and rapes because his cock is doing the thinking for him.
> Font of food
Was he looking at a fancy menu that said, 'Eat my pussy for calories'?
> Not for reasons of menses but from a tongue and mouth that explored to find the soft spots
He doesn't actually bit off his clit or chew on his vulva. We are not that deranged. But he does fuck in the 'froth' of whatever is coming from his thighs and stomach so it does make you think someone took his vulva to a Ninja blender.
>The swollen tip that fit so nicely between his lips
If he ate that, it'd be like a Jolly Rancher: hard, a little bit hairy, and something you can't chew on the first sucks.
> Herein who, who of them was the most disturbed could be left up to speculation
Stop writing like you are a tenured professor. It isn't working.
> Like the humming of a machine utilized to eradicate excessive noise
??? What? That'd just be adding more noise. Wouldn't you try to fix the machines making those loud noises in the first place?
> What isolation. What rot. Was it the same rot that infected his bones?
Yeah? It seems this author cannot grasp the concept of intelligent madness: whereas some senses will be dulled or warped by trauma, others are heightened. This character has repeatedly wondered whether their leg is worth saving and whether it is infected. I consider this less a character issue than the author just forgetting to add smart thinking to her 'itchy, tasty' tale.
> Fingers locked in his hair
He's done that like four times already.
> Dripping with an execrable union of vaginal secretion and blood
Again: Ninja blender. It's like tomato fruit juice or boba tea.
> He had looked upon the rolling expanse of vile and seen the worst
And yet he still wonders if the world he is in is an apocalyptic one. No, really: he had a good look around him and thought, legitimately, 'hey, is still place still functioning? It looks functioning'.
> Panted like some violated madonna
Another interesting choice of words because that is a term used exclusively for women. There are just no other terms to use for trans men, eh?
> Poetic, if fucked, if absolutely fucked
We know. You said that four times already.
>Had turned into a repugnant froth on his lips
Is it frothy enough to sell as fruit juice?
> It was carnal, animalistic, basal, what they were both reduced to
Something something about the brown man always written as an animal while the while one is a madonna to be soiled...hmm, nothing to deconstruct from that, I'm sure.
> The only thought in his mind was that he buried himself in that hole
There's a reason why they tie up the legs of female corpses.
> Still a bit of pectoral fat
He has none. Objectively, even as a man, he had none at that period. Why would he have them as a trans man?
> Oedupusian
That is not what an Oedipus Complex is. It's when you want to fuck your own mother (son) or father (daughter). Is he treated Viktor like his mom, now?
> Something had gotten into him and left him with rot and ruin but all he wanted to eat was eat and fuck, basemose instincts
I really was waiting for him to literally eat that pussy. It seems that way if he can see his cum mix with blood like some fucked up German strudel.
> This was disgusting and it was wrong and he had eaten him
Disgusting? Yes. The worst? No, I legit thought he would have nommed on that labia like it was a turkey sandwich.
> Of course the light at the end was Viktor
He's more like Chicxulub.
> Fingers through his hair
Drink.
> This never should have happened
Agreed. But the writers wanted to make you like Euron Greyjoy so here we are.
> Laid open, down to the muscle? How he was so, so sure he could crack open those ribs and crawl inside
'Vut are you doing? Eez getting too beeg!'
Let me say that I do understand that the author was trying to replicate a man in the midst of madness. I get it; the repetitive words, the unsettling atmosphere, the desperation and hunger. But that isn't coming through the writing as the author thinks it is. It's there, but it's not as effective as it could be. Compare this to the 'Itchy, Tasty' scene from Resident Evil: while simple, you could absolutely tell this man was losing it and becoming a zombie. Here, it's hard to tell whether that's a narrative device or if the author is just not good at writing. I've used similar tactics before, and they can absolutely be effective - provided it isn't redundant. That was a big problem I had with this, on top of wondering if the author knows what an Oedipus Complex is.
All in all, it isn't awful. It just didn't hit the way it should, and the 'hurr, brown man animalistic caveman' thing is such a common trope here that I cannot take it as seriously as the author would like. I really do think a Rammstein song would cover it better, and it did - Mein Teil.
You are correct - for that scene I was thinking of the MGSV cutscene where Ocelot said that line. Speaking of MGS:
Not as big as Arcane, but it seems Huey and Ocelot are headcanoned as pooners a lot.
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Ocelot because he's a big buff man with a moustache, but he has long hair and likes to stand next to ...unless? an even buffer man, so therefore if someone's gonna be the woman. The original MGS3 with 19-year-old Major Ocelot vs hairy jungle hobo Naked Snake needs even less mental editing.Speaking of MGS:
Not as big as Arcane, but it seems Huey and Ocelot are headcanoned as pooners a lot.
I don't recall as much Pooner Huey; mostly I see Huey abuse. Dude is canonically first known for siring a biological child, then later being revealed a betrayer and sniveling, lesbian-murdering weasel, so he's a Pyrrhic claim for the FtMs.
Lots and lots of FtM Raiden or coincidentally-has-a-vagina-but-isn't-a-woman Raiden. Again, dude canonically had a whoops baby, but most of the stories are placed he gets almost entirely cyborged. Wouldn't you just check the "penis" option, if your entire body below the maxilla is getting replaced?
IMO the worst current trend in Metal Gear fanfic is 12-year-old Liquid Snake, Eli in MGSV, except he has a vagina (but isn't trans) and also has sex with lots of adults, including/especially one who fully believes he's Eli's father. I guess when even the twinks in a property are buff and murdery, they have to go underage.
The other weird trend in MGS fanfic are the ones where someone's trans, and everyone's super nice and cautious about it. Anyone who's listened to Big Boss' codec calls would know he'd immediately be Full of Questions. And probably keep bugging the person about how they could store holdout weapons in their front hole. There are some where it's written thoughtfully, not really exploitation, and with slow, adult pacing--you just wish they'd drop the trans brainrot to the betterment of their story about thirty years of longing and sacrifice.
That one lady who likes pooping wrote something about Ocelot having horrible opiate addict poops, which is at least a type of diversity you don't usually see.
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Our 'Everyone has AIDS' author has decided to dip into the tradwife life, with a touch of Planned Parenthood. The author writes that 'mpreg is very scary', not realizing which sex would actually find it scary, and writing instead that those who make such an important choice are bloodthirsty monsters who eat live goats. No, I'm not joking. This actually happens.
You did the exact opposite. You wrote the equivalent of an evangelical infomercial, and I'm saying this as a non-religious person.
> The tanned body giving way so that he could complete the mission
...complete WHAT mission?
> Long hair, perfect lungs, slightly bent spine, aching, twisted inward leg
> He was finally flexible enough to bend his knees to his chest
With a twisted inward leg?
> And a life free from prejudice from the local inhabitants
Yeah, can you imagine how they'd act if they found out the white pregnant person there enacted genocide upon multiple timelines and has a greater kill count that Euron Greyjoy? I wonder how they would feel knowing their other selves are eradicated from existence. You'd be kicked out of 109 vineyards.
> With his history of being born with a disability
> With the use of hormones and Shmmer and experiences with the Hexcore, he imagined he was far beyond infertility
But wait! There's more! His new life has given him a fully functioning set of ovaries so he can complete his true purpose: being a tradwife walking around a cottage on a hill barefoot and pregnant with his partially white kids! It's not your Aryan Woman in a Wheat Field, but it's close.
> Perhaps it was a miracle, an opportunity, a gift from the Arcane in this new world
Who knew that atoning for genocide was as easy as getting pregnant and birthing babies? Such a miracle indeed - I wonder how that happened.
> Perhaps no amount of time would be enough to understand the complexity. Perhaps they would never understand
Look, it's pretty fucking simple: you had penis-in-vagina sex. Heterosexual sex. The sex that propagates the human species. You did that and you are running a blank how your uterus owner there is now gestating a fetus? Someone teach them that 'basic biology' these troons are so good at.
> Small fruits that took a long time to grow but were incredibly easy to harvest
> Even a small space for grapevines
You must live in a mild climate in order to grow grapevines that high up and that late in the year.
> No matter your decision, baby. It's your choice.
And men can't get pregnant. I know this is a shocking revelation for you.
> A chronically ill man with a period of partial peace
> A man with a pregnancy
I'm sure the people who look at your growing stomach are all going, 'Yeah, that's totally a man' instead of immediately clocking you as female, because no other male species gestates and lactates their young.
> How, in the first place, had he gotten pregnant?
You took a few heavy seminal loads inside your vagina - that still works - and a sperm cell wriggled past your cervix and made the long journey to make it to the egg. He would still have to be ovulating, which suggest some form of a cycle, and he isn't on testosterone. Why is this such a grand revelation?
> All the changes brought on by the transition were firm and strong. So how?
Apparently that did not necessitate the full removal of your female reproductive organs. The Arcane couldn't even make you a situational hermaphrodite; it just put you back on factory settings.
> He felt more clearly the fingers on his waist, the difference in size and strength between them igniting something deep in his stomach
He's just uwu so smol. Also the perfect time to use this image:
> I want to feel you putting it in. Fill me with your cum
Uh, he's been doing that on the regular?
> Surely there son would be too
And how do you know your fetus is male?
> He could take his husband's cock spearing him in half
He doesn't suffer vaginal tears from that, but a baby is too much. OK.
> He really wanted to follow Viktor's order and impregnate him right there
...he's already impregnated? Was this a flashback I missed?
> It seemed like nothing besides being surrounded by Jayce mattered
Ah, nothing like mate-bonding. Male-female monogamy really IS the way to go!
> As if his hormones were going crazy or something
Gee, I wonder what could be responsible for that.
Who knew they made mifepristone in Runeterra?
> Like a fetus in the womb of the generator
Is that what we're using now? 'Generator'? A libshit prolife tale is using 'generator' for a pregnant woman? Wow.
> Jayce had the right to grieve over something that never came, right?
Whoa, cis male father's rights?
> He had just annihilated his chances of having -
Relax, you can have one again at the end of the month. You're like a hen - all it takes is a light being shone on your bits and you'll hatch year round.
> The guilt of stopping a natural phenomenon flooded his chest
The author wanted to show how 'mpreg was hard' in a fic that also centers abortion, while said author comes from a country where abortion is completely banned. Pro-choice, but it comes off as weirdly pro-life. I wouldn't be saying that if it wasn't for the tradwife dynamic. It's very...conservative.
> What if there was a punishment? What if he was, deep down, horrible?
Ain't no way. Are we going with the evangelical, 'Genocide is fine, but I draw the line at abortion'? The Arcane really wants that baby born, goddamn!
I am reminded of Bran's warg dreams from ASOIAF, where he lives through Summer and eats raw meat, but the twist here is that Viktor is becoming some kind of carnivorous cannibal due to trying to terminate a 'miracle' pregnancy. That's right: the pro-choice author decided to have the character become a blood-sacrificing, goat-eating, human flesh desiring demon. You have to laugh.
> But sometimes, that didn't seem like Viktor
Becoming a monster after trying to have an abortion is NOT the spin I thought this would take, but hey, it's markedly better than the ravine fic I just read above. At least this one gets to the point and you, the reader, really are left wondering if he's going to shit out a xenomorph Arcane baby or not.
> They had, after all, destroyed entire timelines with ancient magic
And the universe has decided that you must atone with a mutant baby. You should call it 'Daywalker' and have it hunt vampires.
> Realized he had no control over anything. Over his illness, his body, socially
I guess the social transition didn't do much if it still led you back to square one.
> India ink
India does not exist in Runeterra - thank God.
> One of the goats from the neighbouring farm ended up between his teeth
He's turning into a Hazbin Hotel character and that's the real horror.
> The other part screamed that Jayce was disgusted by him
I mean...he did find you with a literal goat between your teeth. If he can withstand mass genocide and still forgive you, what is a goddamn goat going to do?
> The blankets smelled of the two of them together, and soon they would smell of the family
I really wonder what this demon baby is going to smell like. Is it going to look like a Bloodborne boss? That would be an amazing crossover.
> The difficulties of walking were worsened with pregnancy
Because pregnancy is the only thing his broken body can do.
Are you really asking that after multiple rounds of abortion drugs failed and you are looking at giving birth to a Great One? Forget raising a family - you're raising another version of the Antichrist and you still want to frolic as a tradwife? Buddy.
I'm still not getting over that the implications of trying to terminate a miracle pregnancy is that you become a bloodthirsty demon who feasts on live goats.
Bonus: this was better than that 10k ravine fic. This was legitimate body horror, albeit on the cheekier side. It reminded me a lot of 'Slither', even unintentionally.
Bonus bonus: trying to end a pregnancy makes you a bloodthirsty monster. This is a Christian server, you know.
I have mentioned MGCraig before - most notably for that fic where the wedding served Coors Lite and who is responsible for the 'affront to biology that merits consideration' line - but what I didn't have time or a lot of evidence for is that she hangs around, and is friends with, noted pedophile prettybadmagic. PBM gifted this to her. Craig is aware that she has been mentioned here, and if she comes across this again: you wonder why you get blamed for so much fandom drama. Being friends with a pedophile will do that. The lines for this fic include:
- Where is the wealth, eight inches deep, in the locus of life's inception? Shower me with value, oh god, that I may work another day.
- He did not have intellect. He did not need intellect. If nothing else, his body would accept a hot load of semen.
- His bowels susurrated with the threat of liquid shit, a fiery sort of pain. The force of the fucking had maligned his spine
You will never guess who showed up:
It's political if you ever wanted to read a modern take on the Rhineland bastards.
And a compare and contrast:
Might have something to do with you being best friends with a pedophile, IDK. I can't ever say I had a pedophile friend who likes, comments and bookmarks pedophilic works write me a gift fic that I then slobbered over.
> The gay stuff sells, believe me
White vagina sells more.
> He was susceptible to that white crescent smile and the large hand strategically placed on his waist
This author has always gotten away with writing Jayce as a predator, a rapist, a wild animal, a pedophile, what have you, and no one has called out out aside from Meltwt and a thread from July. Apparently, writing Colleen Hoover-esque porn with eight inch dicks and buttsex that will get you into heaven will earn you prestige and bookmarks, not shame.
> Knew his sizeable dick would draw a crowd
Ah, so we're sticking with the eight inches here.
> An anonymous blowjob scene that verged on a throat fuck, as it often did with Jayce
Making your partner gag to the point they vomit - multiple times, in fact - smacks of sexual sadism. The author later goes hard on this interpretation as he not only enjoys rough oral sex, he enjoys producing porn men will enjoy the most.
> Cute twink chokes on massive cock
Something to be said here about the 'cute twink' being dehumanized and degraded, and never the top.
> flexing while he impaled his face on Jayce's admittedly massive cock
You already said he was eight inches and that throat fucking was normal.
> Initiated by Jayce the same way a wolf initiated a hunt
Yeah, that makes sense. Jayce is always written as a dog or a beast, and it looks like we're leaning into 'savage wolf' here. This is the same woman who wrote him as 'white-passing' and a rapist to 'own' 4chan.
> Sex work was valid work. It was hard work
It's valid alright...you're just used and abused by a male who views you as a collection of holes. Sex work is work, but your pimp is your boyfriend and the IRS. You won't be singing your praises once it takes half of what you own or busts you for tax evasion.
> As a fawn to the toothy maw. He was a disabled man alone with a chiseled behemoth, a man who showered him with praise and sweet somethings
Nothing like highlighting the extreme sex differences in a medium where you insist said differences do not exist. We are also going full steam ahead with the 'white twink is the innocent animal and the brown top is the beast' trope, a classic case of the author's progshit racism.
> They neglected protection because it went unspoken that whatever happened in Viktor's innards was his business
And I doubt our chiseled beast here is paying his medical bills when he develops an STI or hepatitis.
> Testosterone will fix it, right?
> Surely his biologically enhanced would reject implantation of an embryo
Testosterone is not birth control. In the first few months where a pooner takes it, they do become more fertile. Then the testosterone fries their eggs and causes them to atrophy. This is the same woman who thought 5 mL of seminal volume was 'above average'.
> Wetter yet when he pissed himself
He's going to do that a lot.
> The aggression remained
You don't say.
> He did so with cum still seeping from his orifices
> Has to sit in a way so his ass won't be aggravated as that is used the most
Guess his shit really will be dripping down his thighs like diarrhea. All that heavenly buttsex will cause those sexy poops to slide right on out.
> Because the notion that a man like him had something to offer a man like Jayce
Now, what does PBM mean by this? Is she trying to suggest trans men can't offer anything to 'cis' men, while the opposite is true? I have to ask because the woman who tried to mock 4chan and decided to make the Latino a rapist and racial stereotype might not be forthwith with her meaning.
> The aggravation of his spinal and femoral conditions
The sex he's having is so rough that it's making his conditions worse, but he refuses to say anything because nothing he says will make the penis-owner stop. Why would that be, I wonder?
> Am I really that hairy
FTM discovers that a largely bisexual male audience actually does care about pubic hair. Better start with that ass hair; no one wants to see loose shit stuck to it.
> The filmed vaginal sex, anal sex, and the fisting of both
Jayce has big ole Yeti hands. Did he already go the Goatse path?
> They wished they had a cum pet like him
They're going to wish they never have to pay those medical bills because that Goatse anus might take you to heaven, it won't hold any of those sexy poops. It's all going to come out like diarrhea lube.
> You were always submissive, V
This is the same man who went, 'fuck it, let's break into a lab and test your hypothesis' at risk of expulsion and loss of status. He is the farthest thing from submissive, but this is a pedo bitch writing him so the dynamics were always going to be fixed.
> Petite Zaunite twink gaped by fat piltie cock
> Juicy boypussy takes three huge loads
> Well-bred hunk teaches pathetic undercity kitty a lesson
Now, those of you well-versed in Sharty dynamics or 4chan culture knows that this is nothing but a race humiliation fetish. The 'well-bred' Latino is sexually dominating and humiliating a white (wo)man, combined with the class element of a rich man fucking 'gutter trash'. That has always been a huge thing in porn and it has always involved humiliation.
> Their cities of origin included
If we made it, 'countries of origin' then this heckin' progressive libshit would be sounding heckin' racist. You can't be mocking 4chan with that language, baby.
> A fair price to pay for his dignity
Ask Bonnie Blue if it's worth her dignity, or the many porn stars that have committed suicide. Note that it is only ONE person's dignity at stake here, and it isn't the male's. Funny, that.
> He downplayed his anxieties for the sake of their nascent technology
What's that? The trans man has to downplay his feelings, his wants and desires, and dignity to please a bunch of males who utterly refuse to see him as one of them? You don't fucking say! And they say we are the real transphobes. When other trans men say they are sick of the fetishization of their bodies and themselves, they need look no further than their greatest allies.
> What about piss? There's a lot to explore there
What about liquid diarrhea? I bet all that lube is pouring down his thighs like it.
> We play into the tension at the border
> A human pet more or less
At this rate, put Jayce in an ICE outfit and have him beat Viktor for daring to cross the border without proper documents. Tell him he's about to be deported and that this 'naturalized Latino cock' is about to give him a real taste of America.
> Overriding the deep slithering in his gut
Uh oh, sounds like you're having a little too much to think! You're upset that you, a trans man, are being treated like a human pet by a penis-owner? Time to shut up because that's the Authentic Male Experience.
> He didn't look down on Zaunites
He says, while pissing on his boyfriend and enacting a whole race/class play dynamic where he literally fucks over someone society views as gutter trash. Ho hum.
> This role wasn't so distant from his daily self
Oh, that makes it so much better. Are you trying to say that trans men are human pets, PBM? Because if that's the case, you are an Ally Behaving Badly, because you aren't trans and you are making the trans man lower than an animal. I don't even have to go far to see this shit; but by all means - keep talking!
> He had made it so far in his career because of his adherence to custom, his conformity to power structures far larger than himself
From the same man who said, 'If you want to change the world, don't ask for permission'. How the fuck is that conformity? How is a man who decided to break in to a lab to crack Hextech an 'adherence to custom'? You don't like these characters, PBM. You never have.
> When Jayce initiated sex, Viktor never said no. It was their dynamic from the outset
You are the type of Pick Me that would excuse marital rape. It says a lot how a trans man just gets raped by the penis-owner and that's seen as normal.
> Found comfort in throwing himself at Jayce's feet, hand selected to gag on his ample endowment
See? Pick Me behaviour. He's a male-centric woman pretending to be a man, who is treated like a human pet because that is his ordained role.
> Crooked teeth, but strong. Nothing rotten
Next you'll be pulling out the calipers and determining whether he's 'Aryan' enough.
> His smiles made him look particularly pitiful
I wonder who might be the cause for such pitiful smiles.
> The release of urine from his thickened cock grace the camera with genuine shock from Viktor
So he didn't consent or agree to this; it was just taken as a given because he, as a vagina-owner, is just biologically programmed to be a bottom bitch, or something.
> Invaded his guppying lips
He doesn't have guppy lips. He has thin lips. He didn't develop Nicki Minaj lips out of the blue.
> He could not calibrate himself to the sensory onslaught of ammonia
> He blinked away stinging tears and forced globs of pissy phlegm down his raw throat
It's been determined PBM has the following fetishes:
- pedophilia (the biggest one as evidenced by 'tight as an unblooded girlchild)
- scat (sexy poop, comparing lube to diarrhea)
- piss (see above, good luck paying for those hepatitis shots
- phlegm and snot
- vomit (she even jokes about this on her Twitter)
- race play (but she would never, ever want to be fucked by a nigger or an actual 5'5 Latino, get those disgusting bastards away from her)
So. Pissy phlegm is your new tagline of the day. Have fun...I guess.
> Viktor could handle a face fucking, Jayce had trained away his gag reflex after a few messy bouts of vomit
Oh that is absolutely a humiliation fetish. This is a man creating male-centric porn for a male-centric audience that gets off to seeing female bodies degraded. It's not pooners watching this. It's the same men you call transphobic.
> He demanded the same force and depth from Viktor's face as he did his other holes
Oh, nice. I'm sure his dentist has many, many questions as to why his throat is bruised and why his teeth keep getting more crooked.
> Balls thwacking Viktor's chin
Sounds like he needs to be SPAYED and NEUTERED.
> Otherwise he battled snotty nose breath
I am reminded of that scene from Scary Movie when the woman parodying Gale runs into the forest Blair Witch style and has a big snot bubble pop out of her nose.
> He accepted the lobotomy of eight inches crammed down his throat like any pretty hausfrau
That's not what a lobotomy is. Second, 'hausfrau' is a very deliberate choice of words because she only ever views this character as some dainty thing that happens to be an 'idiot whore'. Meanwhile, Jayce is going on that hausfrau like it's 1945 and his name is Reznov.
> Wrong city, wrong gender, wrong skeletal construction
Weird how you're getting gender-affirming throat fucking and sexual humiliation.
> Fuck, that's a good pet. You like gagging on cock, don't you? I see your little smile
How can he smile against that ample, eight inch man meat?
> Only to drop his slobbery heft onto Viktor's face
So is his dick covered in snot, too, or...?
> Do you know you're my property?
"Did you know marital rape was finally made illegal in 1993? Totally normal and legal to rape your vagina-owning spouse. Don't ask me how I know that. Don't ask me how I know about age of consent laws, either."
> Thighs spread six or so inches to accommodate the foot between them
This makes it seem his foot is six inches wide. The average foot width is 3-4 inches. This means his foot width is the same size as a grizzly bear's paw.
> Naughty beast. You'll always be a pathetic animal
If trans men ever wonder why people say such awful shit about them, I can just point them to this lady. She can peak anyone.
> He didn't even particularly enjoy squirting
Oh? That's a first. Usually they have him go like a GTA firetruck, spraying pedestrians into walls and everything.
> It was terribly shy
Up there with stupidsarah's 'his pussy fluttered shyly'.
> Useless zaunite whore fucks himself on shiny piltie boot
More like, 'Zaunite traitor fucks himself on fascist cock, takes boot after'.
> He did have the erection to spur himself into a proper feedback loop
You don't have a dick. What are two inches going to give you, eh
> His own pleasure disturbed him. It maintained the same autonomic savagery as puking and shitting
Nothing like introducing a scat fetish for your lil pooner to try out. I'm sure that will go over juuuuuuuuuuuuuuust fine.
>Slick webbed over his boot like science fiction goop. It had a genital stink
So xenomorph egg goo. I also forgot to add that PBM has a genital stink fetish, too; she loves smelly dicks and assholes. One has to wonder if her snatch smells like Cairo during a heatwave - with the garbage out.
> Licking was preferable to suffocating on cock or being drenched in piss
It sounds like you don't have a lot of control in your sexual life and the penis-owner is the one setting the terms. It's almost as if...he doesn't actually see you as male.
> With a distinct reek of barn animal
Latino rapist smells like a dirty animal? Wow! 4chan could've told you that!
> Make me a soft hole, a cleaning instrument, a toilet. I am far from human
I will never, ever get over on how this is supposed to be representation. This is supposed to be gender diverse people writing porn by and for them, and all they can achieve is by writing FTMs as dirty animals and less-thans who literally get pissed and shat on because they are human toilets. 4chan chuds cannot achieve what she/her shotacons come up with in a single day.
> You're leaning quite into the human chattel angle
It doesn't count because you're white.
> He wanted Jayce to see his inflamed guts
Uh, which one?
> He often felt the barrier of Viktor's cervix, and tried his best to penetrate it
You are not penetrating the cervix. I encourage you to actually read up on female anatomy rather than be a pedophile, bitch.
> He used these to slick up his cock, recharged and hard
And it still stinks like barn animal. This author has a fetish for genitalia smelling rank. What is it with white women and writing dirty dicks? If it were me, they'd be shining like Dawn dish liquid. But I'm not a pedophile with a shit fetish, so...
> You want to make a little hybrid
Holy fuck. This bitch really wanted to own 4chan and here she is talking about her version of a Rhineland bastard
> He aimed himself into Viktor's guts
...which one?
> Viktor had never claimed to be strong nor resilient
> Gay, trans, disabled, a true example of perserverance in the face of adversity
You just said you never claimed to be strong and resilient, while also claiming you are strong and resilient. Besides, that's as fake as you being a gay man because here you are being treated like a human toilet by an actual man.
> He liked being split in half
I'm sure you like being pissed on like a human toilet, too.
> On Jayce's cock he became a heat-rotted cat. An unspayed queen whose cunt drove himself mad
..a queen is a female cat, you dumb fucking retard. You can't even use the MALE variants of animals because you know he isn't a fucking male.
> It puckered while Jayce plundered the hole below
Something something men wanting to plunder virgin soil something
> Just the onslaught of cock and thumb
Put that on a t-shirt.
> It sprayed out in time to his wild convulsions and wetted Jayce's shaft
Oh, that's nice. A serial squirter who doesn't even like to squirt making a mess out of an eight-inch dick that smells 'like barn animal stink'. What is this obsession with stinking genitalia?
> Neither of them were acting
Sounds like someone needs to be SPAYED and NEUTERED, and it isn't the horny queen whose cunt is acting up.
> Jayce was master in bed and at work
In an earlier life he would've been holding the whip. Massa needs to make sure dat cotton gets picked.
> Then you'll take my pups
I love the idea that mixed race kids are comparable to animals. You must've been on the white nationalist boards BIG TIME, girl.
> Each stroke was a lance to Viktor's battered guts
Related:
> He was a slip, a sleeve, a wretched husk in the sunny muscles of an industrious man
Local pooner figures out real men will never accept her as a man and will only use her as a collection of holes: news at 11
> Where is the wealth, eight inches deep, in the locus of one's life?
If you are that focused on dick that smells like 'barn animal stink', it's time to reconsider your life. You're living like a fucking homeless crackhead with no standards.
> Christening Viktor as vessel and object. He did not have intellect. He did not need intellect
'Fucked stupid' is very gender-affirming. I, too, will see this character as male and not as the AFAB that is acting like a human washing machine taking all those 'hot loads of semen.'
> Pretty adamant about aftercare
And it's informed by porn. This is a nightmare in the works, something you'd read on Reddit as a horror story that will inform others on what happens when the love of your life decides to reenact the graphic, violent porn he watches online.
> Sat on the toilet, leaking spunk
> His bowels susurrated with the throat of liquid shit, a fiery sort of porn
This woman has a bizarre fucking obsession with shit, cum, stinky genitalia, people acting like animals, and pedophilia. It's the worst kind of femcel you can imagine and one who has never had a proper whack about the head. Who in their right mind thinks writing about getting liquid shit after having sex?
> At present he would conject that Jayce fucked straight through to his uterus
Related:
> Would having a child soften Jayce? Shift his focus from pornography to parenthood?
FUCK NO, then he'd start sexualizing his child and try to involve the kid, too. What makes you think he wouldn't view his 'hybrid' spawn as human toilet 2.0?
> Wanted a small creature to protect, as he could not protect himself
Now, why would a trans man feel as if he couldn't protect himself? Is there something about them that makes them fundamentally different to penis-owners?
I wonder why the person you believe is a 'natural submissive' would not tell you whether something was too much. Such a fucking mystery.
This stinky pedophile bitch continues to blow me away. People keep fellating her and her work when all she is good at is writing the trans man as a human toilet who exists to get sexually abused and treated like a woman in hardcore pornography. She continues to write the darker-skinned man as an abusive rapist who does not care about consent despite writing an entire fic where she claimed to 'skewer' incel and manosphere beliefs.
People say that TERFs have the nastiest views on trans people, but even this crazy bitch has me feeling sympathy for the lil Mr. Frogs. You're trying to fight nasty stereotypes and want to be seen as the real men you are, only to have she/hers with no gender identity problems come around and write popular stories where the trans man is viewed as cocksleeve, a human vessel, a toilet, a pet, a set of perforated bowels, a liquid shit taker, a 'natural submissive'. You're set back several years and no one, not even your own people, calls out someone like that. The only people who do are black Nigerian non binaries who don't give a shit and are yelling against the wind. Then you have said author proudly proclaim they are trying to take down 4chan culture with their fic, when anyone reading it can see that it's bullshit and that the author makes no effort to hide the fact that she makes the Latino a beastly pedophile rapist and the white one a helpless victim.
Out of all the authors I have reviewed, this one continues to be one of the worst, as she is the most high profile pedophiles in the fandom. Why hasn't she been cancelled? White woman privilege - and being friends with proshippers.
I had to laugh at this comment:
OK, babe. I will treat you like a human pet and animal and find a homeless man to dump liquid shit all over you. I am so glad you find an abusive male who engages in brutal sex to mimic pornography is adequate disability representation.
Speaking of disabled people finding representation sans brutal pornography and genitalia that smells like barn animal stink, AO3 has a thread where they tell their audience to step away from Reddit and go outside for once. They are trying to highlight disability and diversity by...closing the thread and preventing further discussion.
Lol. Lmao:
You type pretty good for a blind girl. Want to translate the Epic of Gilgamesh?
I do know of some trans Raiden content. I'm surprised Vamp isn't the one to get transed as he has been an out and proud bisexual since 2001/2002. He fits the bill, and there is a contingent of Vamp/Raiden shippers who'd get their representation. It's always the 'twinks' or the kids they go after...makes you wonder.
Or this:
You did the exact opposite. You wrote the equivalent of an evangelical infomercial, and I'm saying this as a non-religious person.
> The tanned body giving way so that he could complete the mission
...complete WHAT mission?
> Long hair, perfect lungs, slightly bent spine, aching, twisted inward leg
> He was finally flexible enough to bend his knees to his chest
With a twisted inward leg?
> And a life free from prejudice from the local inhabitants
Yeah, can you imagine how they'd act if they found out the white pregnant person there enacted genocide upon multiple timelines and has a greater kill count that Euron Greyjoy? I wonder how they would feel knowing their other selves are eradicated from existence. You'd be kicked out of 109 vineyards.
> With his history of being born with a disability
> With the use of hormones and Shmmer and experiences with the Hexcore, he imagined he was far beyond infertility
But wait! There's more! His new life has given him a fully functioning set of ovaries so he can complete his true purpose: being a tradwife walking around a cottage on a hill barefoot and pregnant with his partially white kids! It's not your Aryan Woman in a Wheat Field, but it's close.
> Perhaps it was a miracle, an opportunity, a gift from the Arcane in this new world
Who knew that atoning for genocide was as easy as getting pregnant and birthing babies? Such a miracle indeed - I wonder how that happened.
> Perhaps no amount of time would be enough to understand the complexity. Perhaps they would never understand
Look, it's pretty fucking simple: you had penis-in-vagina sex. Heterosexual sex. The sex that propagates the human species. You did that and you are running a blank how your uterus owner there is now gestating a fetus? Someone teach them that 'basic biology' these troons are so good at.
> Small fruits that took a long time to grow but were incredibly easy to harvest
> Even a small space for grapevines
You must live in a mild climate in order to grow grapevines that high up and that late in the year.
> No matter your decision, baby. It's your choice.
And men can't get pregnant. I know this is a shocking revelation for you.
> A chronically ill man with a period of partial peace
> A man with a pregnancy
I'm sure the people who look at your growing stomach are all going, 'Yeah, that's totally a man' instead of immediately clocking you as female, because no other male species gestates and lactates their young.
> How, in the first place, had he gotten pregnant?
You took a few heavy seminal loads inside your vagina - that still works - and a sperm cell wriggled past your cervix and made the long journey to make it to the egg. He would still have to be ovulating, which suggest some form of a cycle, and he isn't on testosterone. Why is this such a grand revelation?
> All the changes brought on by the transition were firm and strong. So how?
Apparently that did not necessitate the full removal of your female reproductive organs. The Arcane couldn't even make you a situational hermaphrodite; it just put you back on factory settings.
> He felt more clearly the fingers on his waist, the difference in size and strength between them igniting something deep in his stomach
He's just uwu so smol. Also the perfect time to use this image:
> I want to feel you putting it in. Fill me with your cum
Uh, he's been doing that on the regular?
> Surely there son would be too
And how do you know your fetus is male?
> He could take his husband's cock spearing him in half
He doesn't suffer vaginal tears from that, but a baby is too much. OK.
> He really wanted to follow Viktor's order and impregnate him right there
...he's already impregnated? Was this a flashback I missed?
> It seemed like nothing besides being surrounded by Jayce mattered
Ah, nothing like mate-bonding. Male-female monogamy really IS the way to go!
> As if his hormones were going crazy or something
Gee, I wonder what could be responsible for that.
Who knew they made mifepristone in Runeterra?
> Like a fetus in the womb of the generator
Is that what we're using now? 'Generator'? A libshit prolife tale is using 'generator' for a pregnant woman? Wow.
> Jayce had the right to grieve over something that never came, right?
Whoa, cis male father's rights?
> He had just annihilated his chances of having -
Relax, you can have one again at the end of the month. You're like a hen - all it takes is a light being shone on your bits and you'll hatch year round.
> The guilt of stopping a natural phenomenon flooded his chest
The author wanted to show how 'mpreg was hard' in a fic that also centers abortion, while said author comes from a country where abortion is completely banned. Pro-choice, but it comes off as weirdly pro-life. I wouldn't be saying that if it wasn't for the tradwife dynamic. It's very...conservative.
> What if there was a punishment? What if he was, deep down, horrible?
Ain't no way. Are we going with the evangelical, 'Genocide is fine, but I draw the line at abortion'? The Arcane really wants that baby born, goddamn!
I am reminded of Bran's warg dreams from ASOIAF, where he lives through Summer and eats raw meat, but the twist here is that Viktor is becoming some kind of carnivorous cannibal due to trying to terminate a 'miracle' pregnancy. That's right: the pro-choice author decided to have the character become a blood-sacrificing, goat-eating, human flesh desiring demon. You have to laugh.
> But sometimes, that didn't seem like Viktor
Becoming a monster after trying to have an abortion is NOT the spin I thought this would take, but hey, it's markedly better than the ravine fic I just read above. At least this one gets to the point and you, the reader, really are left wondering if he's going to shit out a xenomorph Arcane baby or not.
> They had, after all, destroyed entire timelines with ancient magic
And the universe has decided that you must atone with a mutant baby. You should call it 'Daywalker' and have it hunt vampires.
> Realized he had no control over anything. Over his illness, his body, socially
I guess the social transition didn't do much if it still led you back to square one.
> India ink
India does not exist in Runeterra - thank God.
> One of the goats from the neighbouring farm ended up between his teeth
He's turning into a Hazbin Hotel character and that's the real horror.
> The other part screamed that Jayce was disgusted by him
I mean...he did find you with a literal goat between your teeth. If he can withstand mass genocide and still forgive you, what is a goddamn goat going to do?
> The blankets smelled of the two of them together, and soon they would smell of the family
I really wonder what this demon baby is going to smell like. Is it going to look like a Bloodborne boss? That would be an amazing crossover.
> The difficulties of walking were worsened with pregnancy
Because pregnancy is the only thing his broken body can do.
Are you really asking that after multiple rounds of abortion drugs failed and you are looking at giving birth to a Great One? Forget raising a family - you're raising another version of the Antichrist and you still want to frolic as a tradwife? Buddy.
I'm still not getting over that the implications of trying to terminate a miracle pregnancy is that you become a bloodthirsty demon who feasts on live goats.
Bonus: this was better than that 10k ravine fic. This was legitimate body horror, albeit on the cheekier side. It reminded me a lot of 'Slither', even unintentionally.
Bonus bonus: trying to end a pregnancy makes you a bloodthirsty monster. This is a Christian server, you know.
I have mentioned MGCraig before - most notably for that fic where the wedding served Coors Lite and who is responsible for the 'affront to biology that merits consideration' line - but what I didn't have time or a lot of evidence for is that she hangs around, and is friends with, noted pedophile prettybadmagic. PBM gifted this to her. Craig is aware that she has been mentioned here, and if she comes across this again: you wonder why you get blamed for so much fandom drama. Being friends with a pedophile will do that. The lines for this fic include:
- They wished they had a cum pet like him.
-juicy boypussy takes three huge loads
- well bred hunk teaches pathetic undercity kitty a lesson
- found comfort in throwing himself at his feet, hand selected to gag on his ample endowment
- He could not calibrate himself to the sensory onslaught of ammonia, of brazen moisture, of tartness on his tongue.
- He blinked away stinging tears and forced globs of pissy phlegm down his raw throat.
- He accepted the lobotomy of eight inches crammed down his throat like any pretty hausfrau, drool and idiot moans abundant.
- Fuck, that’s a good pet. You like gagging on cock, don’t you? I see your little smile.
- His own pleasure disturbed him. It maintained the same autonomic savagery as puking and shitting, acts that many pockets of the internet sought out
- Slick webbed over his boot like science fiction goop. It had a genital stink.
- Licking was far preferable to suffocating on cock or being drenched in piss.
- On his cock he became a heat-rotted cat. An unspayed queen whose cunt drove himself mad.
- Just the onslaught of cock and thumb, the aggravation of nerves so fierce, his body reacted of its own accord.
-juicy boypussy takes three huge loads
- well bred hunk teaches pathetic undercity kitty a lesson
- found comfort in throwing himself at his feet, hand selected to gag on his ample endowment
- He could not calibrate himself to the sensory onslaught of ammonia, of brazen moisture, of tartness on his tongue.
- He blinked away stinging tears and forced globs of pissy phlegm down his raw throat.
- He accepted the lobotomy of eight inches crammed down his throat like any pretty hausfrau, drool and idiot moans abundant.
- Fuck, that’s a good pet. You like gagging on cock, don’t you? I see your little smile.
- His own pleasure disturbed him. It maintained the same autonomic savagery as puking and shitting, acts that many pockets of the internet sought out
- Slick webbed over his boot like science fiction goop. It had a genital stink.
- Licking was far preferable to suffocating on cock or being drenched in piss.
- On his cock he became a heat-rotted cat. An unspayed queen whose cunt drove himself mad.
- Just the onslaught of cock and thumb, the aggravation of nerves so fierce, his body reacted of its own accord.
- He did not have intellect. He did not need intellect. If nothing else, his body would accept a hot load of semen.
- His bowels susurrated with the threat of liquid shit, a fiery sort of pain. The force of the fucking had maligned his spine
You will never guess who showed up:
It's political if you ever wanted to read a modern take on the Rhineland bastards.
And a compare and contrast:
Might have something to do with you being best friends with a pedophile, IDK. I can't ever say I had a pedophile friend who likes, comments and bookmarks pedophilic works write me a gift fic that I then slobbered over.
> The gay stuff sells, believe me
White vagina sells more.
> He was susceptible to that white crescent smile and the large hand strategically placed on his waist
This author has always gotten away with writing Jayce as a predator, a rapist, a wild animal, a pedophile, what have you, and no one has called out out aside from Meltwt and a thread from July. Apparently, writing Colleen Hoover-esque porn with eight inch dicks and buttsex that will get you into heaven will earn you prestige and bookmarks, not shame.
> Knew his sizeable dick would draw a crowd
Ah, so we're sticking with the eight inches here.
> An anonymous blowjob scene that verged on a throat fuck, as it often did with Jayce
Making your partner gag to the point they vomit - multiple times, in fact - smacks of sexual sadism. The author later goes hard on this interpretation as he not only enjoys rough oral sex, he enjoys producing porn men will enjoy the most.
> Cute twink chokes on massive cock
Something to be said here about the 'cute twink' being dehumanized and degraded, and never the top.
> flexing while he impaled his face on Jayce's admittedly massive cock
You already said he was eight inches and that throat fucking was normal.
> Initiated by Jayce the same way a wolf initiated a hunt
Yeah, that makes sense. Jayce is always written as a dog or a beast, and it looks like we're leaning into 'savage wolf' here. This is the same woman who wrote him as 'white-passing' and a rapist to 'own' 4chan.
> Sex work was valid work. It was hard work
It's valid alright...you're just used and abused by a male who views you as a collection of holes. Sex work is work, but your pimp is your boyfriend and the IRS. You won't be singing your praises once it takes half of what you own or busts you for tax evasion.
> As a fawn to the toothy maw. He was a disabled man alone with a chiseled behemoth, a man who showered him with praise and sweet somethings
Nothing like highlighting the extreme sex differences in a medium where you insist said differences do not exist. We are also going full steam ahead with the 'white twink is the innocent animal and the brown top is the beast' trope, a classic case of the author's progshit racism.
> They neglected protection because it went unspoken that whatever happened in Viktor's innards was his business
And I doubt our chiseled beast here is paying his medical bills when he develops an STI or hepatitis.
> Testosterone will fix it, right?
> Surely his biologically enhanced would reject implantation of an embryo
Testosterone is not birth control. In the first few months where a pooner takes it, they do become more fertile. Then the testosterone fries their eggs and causes them to atrophy. This is the same woman who thought 5 mL of seminal volume was 'above average'.
> Wetter yet when he pissed himself
He's going to do that a lot.
> The aggression remained
You don't say.
> He did so with cum still seeping from his orifices
> Has to sit in a way so his ass won't be aggravated as that is used the most
Guess his shit really will be dripping down his thighs like diarrhea. All that heavenly buttsex will cause those sexy poops to slide right on out.
> Because the notion that a man like him had something to offer a man like Jayce
Now, what does PBM mean by this? Is she trying to suggest trans men can't offer anything to 'cis' men, while the opposite is true? I have to ask because the woman who tried to mock 4chan and decided to make the Latino a rapist and racial stereotype might not be forthwith with her meaning.
> The aggravation of his spinal and femoral conditions
The sex he's having is so rough that it's making his conditions worse, but he refuses to say anything because nothing he says will make the penis-owner stop. Why would that be, I wonder?
> Am I really that hairy
FTM discovers that a largely bisexual male audience actually does care about pubic hair. Better start with that ass hair; no one wants to see loose shit stuck to it.
> The filmed vaginal sex, anal sex, and the fisting of both
Jayce has big ole Yeti hands. Did he already go the Goatse path?
> They wished they had a cum pet like him
They're going to wish they never have to pay those medical bills because that Goatse anus might take you to heaven, it won't hold any of those sexy poops. It's all going to come out like diarrhea lube.
> You were always submissive, V
This is the same man who went, 'fuck it, let's break into a lab and test your hypothesis' at risk of expulsion and loss of status. He is the farthest thing from submissive, but this is a pedo bitch writing him so the dynamics were always going to be fixed.
> Petite Zaunite twink gaped by fat piltie cock
> Juicy boypussy takes three huge loads
> Well-bred hunk teaches pathetic undercity kitty a lesson
Now, those of you well-versed in Sharty dynamics or 4chan culture knows that this is nothing but a race humiliation fetish. The 'well-bred' Latino is sexually dominating and humiliating a white (wo)man, combined with the class element of a rich man fucking 'gutter trash'. That has always been a huge thing in porn and it has always involved humiliation.
> Their cities of origin included
If we made it, 'countries of origin' then this heckin' progressive libshit would be sounding heckin' racist. You can't be mocking 4chan with that language, baby.
> A fair price to pay for his dignity
Ask Bonnie Blue if it's worth her dignity, or the many porn stars that have committed suicide. Note that it is only ONE person's dignity at stake here, and it isn't the male's. Funny, that.
> He downplayed his anxieties for the sake of their nascent technology
What's that? The trans man has to downplay his feelings, his wants and desires, and dignity to please a bunch of males who utterly refuse to see him as one of them? You don't fucking say! And they say we are the real transphobes. When other trans men say they are sick of the fetishization of their bodies and themselves, they need look no further than their greatest allies.
> What about piss? There's a lot to explore there
What about liquid diarrhea? I bet all that lube is pouring down his thighs like it.
> We play into the tension at the border
> A human pet more or less
At this rate, put Jayce in an ICE outfit and have him beat Viktor for daring to cross the border without proper documents. Tell him he's about to be deported and that this 'naturalized Latino cock' is about to give him a real taste of America.
> Overriding the deep slithering in his gut
Uh oh, sounds like you're having a little too much to think! You're upset that you, a trans man, are being treated like a human pet by a penis-owner? Time to shut up because that's the Authentic Male Experience.
> He didn't look down on Zaunites
He says, while pissing on his boyfriend and enacting a whole race/class play dynamic where he literally fucks over someone society views as gutter trash. Ho hum.
> This role wasn't so distant from his daily self
Oh, that makes it so much better. Are you trying to say that trans men are human pets, PBM? Because if that's the case, you are an Ally Behaving Badly, because you aren't trans and you are making the trans man lower than an animal. I don't even have to go far to see this shit; but by all means - keep talking!
> He had made it so far in his career because of his adherence to custom, his conformity to power structures far larger than himself
From the same man who said, 'If you want to change the world, don't ask for permission'. How the fuck is that conformity? How is a man who decided to break in to a lab to crack Hextech an 'adherence to custom'? You don't like these characters, PBM. You never have.
> When Jayce initiated sex, Viktor never said no. It was their dynamic from the outset
You are the type of Pick Me that would excuse marital rape. It says a lot how a trans man just gets raped by the penis-owner and that's seen as normal.
> Found comfort in throwing himself at Jayce's feet, hand selected to gag on his ample endowment
See? Pick Me behaviour. He's a male-centric woman pretending to be a man, who is treated like a human pet because that is his ordained role.
> Crooked teeth, but strong. Nothing rotten
Next you'll be pulling out the calipers and determining whether he's 'Aryan' enough.
> His smiles made him look particularly pitiful
I wonder who might be the cause for such pitiful smiles.
> The release of urine from his thickened cock grace the camera with genuine shock from Viktor
So he didn't consent or agree to this; it was just taken as a given because he, as a vagina-owner, is just biologically programmed to be a bottom bitch, or something.
> Invaded his guppying lips
He doesn't have guppy lips. He has thin lips. He didn't develop Nicki Minaj lips out of the blue.
> He could not calibrate himself to the sensory onslaught of ammonia
> He blinked away stinging tears and forced globs of pissy phlegm down his raw throat
It's been determined PBM has the following fetishes:
- pedophilia (the biggest one as evidenced by 'tight as an unblooded girlchild)
- scat (sexy poop, comparing lube to diarrhea)
- piss (see above, good luck paying for those hepatitis shots
- phlegm and snot
- vomit (she even jokes about this on her Twitter)
- race play (but she would never, ever want to be fucked by a nigger or an actual 5'5 Latino, get those disgusting bastards away from her)
So. Pissy phlegm is your new tagline of the day. Have fun...I guess.
> Viktor could handle a face fucking, Jayce had trained away his gag reflex after a few messy bouts of vomit
Oh that is absolutely a humiliation fetish. This is a man creating male-centric porn for a male-centric audience that gets off to seeing female bodies degraded. It's not pooners watching this. It's the same men you call transphobic.
> He demanded the same force and depth from Viktor's face as he did his other holes
Oh, nice. I'm sure his dentist has many, many questions as to why his throat is bruised and why his teeth keep getting more crooked.
> Balls thwacking Viktor's chin
Sounds like he needs to be SPAYED and NEUTERED.
> Otherwise he battled snotty nose breath
I am reminded of that scene from Scary Movie when the woman parodying Gale runs into the forest Blair Witch style and has a big snot bubble pop out of her nose.
> He accepted the lobotomy of eight inches crammed down his throat like any pretty hausfrau
That's not what a lobotomy is. Second, 'hausfrau' is a very deliberate choice of words because she only ever views this character as some dainty thing that happens to be an 'idiot whore'. Meanwhile, Jayce is going on that hausfrau like it's 1945 and his name is Reznov.
> Wrong city, wrong gender, wrong skeletal construction
Weird how you're getting gender-affirming throat fucking and sexual humiliation.
> Fuck, that's a good pet. You like gagging on cock, don't you? I see your little smile
How can he smile against that ample, eight inch man meat?
> Only to drop his slobbery heft onto Viktor's face
So is his dick covered in snot, too, or...?
> Do you know you're my property?
"Did you know marital rape was finally made illegal in 1993? Totally normal and legal to rape your vagina-owning spouse. Don't ask me how I know that. Don't ask me how I know about age of consent laws, either."
> Thighs spread six or so inches to accommodate the foot between them
This makes it seem his foot is six inches wide. The average foot width is 3-4 inches. This means his foot width is the same size as a grizzly bear's paw.
> Naughty beast. You'll always be a pathetic animal
If trans men ever wonder why people say such awful shit about them, I can just point them to this lady. She can peak anyone.
> He didn't even particularly enjoy squirting
Oh? That's a first. Usually they have him go like a GTA firetruck, spraying pedestrians into walls and everything.
> It was terribly shy
Up there with stupidsarah's 'his pussy fluttered shyly'.
> Useless zaunite whore fucks himself on shiny piltie boot
More like, 'Zaunite traitor fucks himself on fascist cock, takes boot after'.
> He did have the erection to spur himself into a proper feedback loop
You don't have a dick. What are two inches going to give you, eh
> His own pleasure disturbed him. It maintained the same autonomic savagery as puking and shitting
Nothing like introducing a scat fetish for your lil pooner to try out. I'm sure that will go over juuuuuuuuuuuuuuust fine.
>Slick webbed over his boot like science fiction goop. It had a genital stink
So xenomorph egg goo. I also forgot to add that PBM has a genital stink fetish, too; she loves smelly dicks and assholes. One has to wonder if her snatch smells like Cairo during a heatwave - with the garbage out.
> Licking was preferable to suffocating on cock or being drenched in piss
It sounds like you don't have a lot of control in your sexual life and the penis-owner is the one setting the terms. It's almost as if...he doesn't actually see you as male.
> With a distinct reek of barn animal
Latino rapist smells like a dirty animal? Wow! 4chan could've told you that!
> Make me a soft hole, a cleaning instrument, a toilet. I am far from human
I will never, ever get over on how this is supposed to be representation. This is supposed to be gender diverse people writing porn by and for them, and all they can achieve is by writing FTMs as dirty animals and less-thans who literally get pissed and shat on because they are human toilets. 4chan chuds cannot achieve what she/her shotacons come up with in a single day.
> You're leaning quite into the human chattel angle
It doesn't count because you're white.
> He wanted Jayce to see his inflamed guts
Uh, which one?
> He often felt the barrier of Viktor's cervix, and tried his best to penetrate it
You are not penetrating the cervix. I encourage you to actually read up on female anatomy rather than be a pedophile, bitch.
> He used these to slick up his cock, recharged and hard
And it still stinks like barn animal. This author has a fetish for genitalia smelling rank. What is it with white women and writing dirty dicks? If it were me, they'd be shining like Dawn dish liquid. But I'm not a pedophile with a shit fetish, so...
> You want to make a little hybrid
Holy fuck. This bitch really wanted to own 4chan and here she is talking about her version of a Rhineland bastard
> He aimed himself into Viktor's guts
...which one?
> Viktor had never claimed to be strong nor resilient
> Gay, trans, disabled, a true example of perserverance in the face of adversity
You just said you never claimed to be strong and resilient, while also claiming you are strong and resilient. Besides, that's as fake as you being a gay man because here you are being treated like a human toilet by an actual man.
> He liked being split in half
I'm sure you like being pissed on like a human toilet, too.
> On Jayce's cock he became a heat-rotted cat. An unspayed queen whose cunt drove himself mad
..a queen is a female cat, you dumb fucking retard. You can't even use the MALE variants of animals because you know he isn't a fucking male.
> It puckered while Jayce plundered the hole below
Something something men wanting to plunder virgin soil something
> Just the onslaught of cock and thumb
Put that on a t-shirt.
> It sprayed out in time to his wild convulsions and wetted Jayce's shaft
Oh, that's nice. A serial squirter who doesn't even like to squirt making a mess out of an eight-inch dick that smells 'like barn animal stink'. What is this obsession with stinking genitalia?
> Neither of them were acting
Sounds like someone needs to be SPAYED and NEUTERED, and it isn't the horny queen whose cunt is acting up.
> Jayce was master in bed and at work
In an earlier life he would've been holding the whip. Massa needs to make sure dat cotton gets picked.
> Then you'll take my pups
I love the idea that mixed race kids are comparable to animals. You must've been on the white nationalist boards BIG TIME, girl.
> Each stroke was a lance to Viktor's battered guts
Related:
> He was a slip, a sleeve, a wretched husk in the sunny muscles of an industrious man
Local pooner figures out real men will never accept her as a man and will only use her as a collection of holes: news at 11
> Where is the wealth, eight inches deep, in the locus of one's life?
If you are that focused on dick that smells like 'barn animal stink', it's time to reconsider your life. You're living like a fucking homeless crackhead with no standards.
> Christening Viktor as vessel and object. He did not have intellect. He did not need intellect
'Fucked stupid' is very gender-affirming. I, too, will see this character as male and not as the AFAB that is acting like a human washing machine taking all those 'hot loads of semen.'
> Pretty adamant about aftercare
And it's informed by porn. This is a nightmare in the works, something you'd read on Reddit as a horror story that will inform others on what happens when the love of your life decides to reenact the graphic, violent porn he watches online.
> Sat on the toilet, leaking spunk
> His bowels susurrated with the throat of liquid shit, a fiery sort of porn
This woman has a bizarre fucking obsession with shit, cum, stinky genitalia, people acting like animals, and pedophilia. It's the worst kind of femcel you can imagine and one who has never had a proper whack about the head. Who in their right mind thinks writing about getting liquid shit after having sex?
> At present he would conject that Jayce fucked straight through to his uterus
Related:
> Would having a child soften Jayce? Shift his focus from pornography to parenthood?
FUCK NO, then he'd start sexualizing his child and try to involve the kid, too. What makes you think he wouldn't view his 'hybrid' spawn as human toilet 2.0?
> Wanted a small creature to protect, as he could not protect himself
Now, why would a trans man feel as if he couldn't protect himself? Is there something about them that makes them fundamentally different to penis-owners?
I wonder why the person you believe is a 'natural submissive' would not tell you whether something was too much. Such a fucking mystery.
This stinky pedophile bitch continues to blow me away. People keep fellating her and her work when all she is good at is writing the trans man as a human toilet who exists to get sexually abused and treated like a woman in hardcore pornography. She continues to write the darker-skinned man as an abusive rapist who does not care about consent despite writing an entire fic where she claimed to 'skewer' incel and manosphere beliefs.
People say that TERFs have the nastiest views on trans people, but even this crazy bitch has me feeling sympathy for the lil Mr. Frogs. You're trying to fight nasty stereotypes and want to be seen as the real men you are, only to have she/hers with no gender identity problems come around and write popular stories where the trans man is viewed as cocksleeve, a human vessel, a toilet, a pet, a set of perforated bowels, a liquid shit taker, a 'natural submissive'. You're set back several years and no one, not even your own people, calls out someone like that. The only people who do are black Nigerian non binaries who don't give a shit and are yelling against the wind. Then you have said author proudly proclaim they are trying to take down 4chan culture with their fic, when anyone reading it can see that it's bullshit and that the author makes no effort to hide the fact that she makes the Latino a beastly pedophile rapist and the white one a helpless victim.
Out of all the authors I have reviewed, this one continues to be one of the worst, as she is the most high profile pedophiles in the fandom. Why hasn't she been cancelled? White woman privilege - and being friends with proshippers.
I had to laugh at this comment:
OK, babe. I will treat you like a human pet and animal and find a homeless man to dump liquid shit all over you. I am so glad you find an abusive male who engages in brutal sex to mimic pornography is adequate disability representation.
Speaking of disabled people finding representation sans brutal pornography and genitalia that smells like barn animal stink, AO3 has a thread where they tell their audience to step away from Reddit and go outside for once. They are trying to highlight disability and diversity by...closing the thread and preventing further discussion.
Lol. Lmao:
You type pretty good for a blind girl. Want to translate the Epic of Gilgamesh?
I will never understand the draw or even entertain the concept of why a 12-year-old would willingly be a slut. It takes a degree of degeneracy to sit there and go, 'Yeah, I'll make this minor fuck the whole island' and write it seriously, with a smile on their face, and feel proud about it. Is this how furries feel? Is this how Bossman Jack feels after he wins? Is it some kind of Freudian Nirvana? I don't know.
I do know of some trans Raiden content. I'm surprised Vamp isn't the one to get transed as he has been an out and proud bisexual since 2001/2002. He fits the bill, and there is a contingent of Vamp/Raiden shippers who'd get their representation. It's always the 'twinks' or the kids they go after...makes you wonder.
I am reminded of that one author who wrote all the characters having IBS and farting every other sentence. The author was selling used (or new) dildos on her tumblr, back when you could sell sexual paraphernalia on there as well as post porn. But opiate addict poops? Better than this:
Or this:
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Probably too much chest hair. He'd be swarthy if he weren't "undead."
If you're a dude in a game with a blond twink/twunk, you can rest easy knowing he's the one who's going to get headcanoned into a pooner.
Stand as close to him as possible.
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OhNovi has moved on from pussies drooling like dogs and horse fucking to vampires being treated badly. Have you ever read a vampire being misgendered maliciously? Well, now you have. The lines for this fic include:
- possessed angel. A demon dripping with desire. Moans of a tied up princess.
- It is no gentle cock-sucking maiden
- Taste the way I make you feel. My blood mixed with your wet, greedy cunt.
- He shoves himself in with one swift brutal buck, burying himself into the undead’s soaking, bloody pussy like a stake.
- “Take it, take my big fucking cock.”
- His dick throbs, his skin prickles with a feral, desperate desire to fuck and fuck and fuck.
- He grunts, pulling out and squeezing his dick, painting white sticky cum across his hairy pussy.
- "I’ll have you drinking cum as deliriously as you drink blood,” he promises. “Sucking my cock dry like the good slut you are just to get a drop of my blood. God you are a desperate horny thing. You’re my cure and my destiny, my cunt to force my seed into.”
Novi also had fanart done of this work. It is done by an artist named 'Marn Draws', whose art style is very similar to Yakichou, and who has a weird habit with drawing her 'bottom' like a child. Also hangs around shotacons.
Not the worst I've seen, but he's just uwu so smol.
> Hunched over a chemistry set so small compared to his bulk that even his most careful moments risk shattering the delicate vials and rattling the metal stands
What, is he a 7'0 Yeti man? Is he working with a child's chemistry set, too? Jayce is 6'2 and bulky, but these authors always, always write him (and in this case, draw) as if he's the yaoi caveman. This is set in modern times; if you don't have a fume hood or proper kit for your chemistry work, what the fuck are you doing?
> Scratching dirty nails into his beard
This man had a nose hair trimmer. Those nails would be manicured, O'Keefe's cream and all.
> Let me in so I can kick your ass
Please do. The rapist male here needs to be humbled by a no-nonsense lesbian.
> Of course Jayce gets strapped with a heart-of-gold team with a do-good attitude
He's supposed to be like Whistler from Blade: no-nonsense, cynical, experienced in monster hunting but will always have your back, but edgier, more aggressive, and a rapist. This makes it seem he hates people who are in monster hunting out of their own good will, compared to him who straps waif-like vampires to his bed so he can rape them.
> Every one of them is one
I can't imagine his electricity and Internet bill. He's worried about that tiny-ass chemistry set? Try a fire hazard with all those wires next to all those liquids.
> The nest of a hairy tech-savvy rat
You're saying Jayce is hairy vermin? Huh.
> He is clever and devious, a trained killer, in his chosen hovel of intellectual pleasures
> Latino
> Devious
Leaning into the 'brown man as beast' thing, are we?
> Wraith-like figure of bones
Jayvik fans get angry when you call Viktor an ugly skeleton because that's ableist. When they do it, they are just writing vampire porn and exploring 'bad BDSM dynamics'.
> A monster so hideous that he's nearly beautiful
> Proceeds to write said vampire as a bone-thin corpse that could only appeal to men who fuck corpses
Beautiful indeed.
> So emaciated that Jayce's fingers encircle the starved muscle
Hot. Look at this beautiful, godly piece of ass here. You think his pussy looks like dried pork?
> Showing off a hairy cunt bruised with ancient bitemarks
Everything else might resemble Auschwitz, but the Tarzan pubes remain untouched.
> An insane person wouldn't even think about capturing one
You just did, though. It didn't sound that hard because this vampire is more emaciated than others and did not put up a fight. Hell, shining a strobe light in his face would probably kill him. The smell of your barn stink animal balls might do him in.
> You need some water
Vampires don't drink water. This taunt doesn't make sense.
> He is the most intelligent man ever to live
Oh? What are your SAT scores. You a MENSA member? Clearly not with all those PC wires posing a fire hazard and a lack of a fume hood and safety equipment in your chemistry lab. I bet you don't even have a pressurized lock system. Don't make me call OSHA.
> Shallow-breathed
??
> Even now you want me. Even the weaker blood of a nosebleed has you hypnotized
Yeah? He's a starving vampire Elder who's been in that coffin for centuries. You are literally starving him. No shit a nosebleed is going to make him go wild like a crack addict.
> The memory of Jayce's hulking form captured in it and holding the vampire like a mouth
He's just so huge and Viktor is uwu so smol.
> If you kill me, you'll never escape this place
Assuming vampires can learn from the memories of the ones they feed on, it's safe to say he can figure out how to leave pretty quick once he learns which PC to use to unlock the doors. I am going by this assumption as Viktor would learn what time period he is in by drinking droplets of Jayce's blood.
> You're going crazy over a drop of blood
Yeah, because he's a starving corpse, you shithead.
> Do you smell it
> Does it make you hungry
Do you want a Slim Jim?
> Jayce is enormous compared to this little waif of a man
I am obligated to use this meme again:
> Adjusts his half-hard cock
How come we don't have our waif-waifu vampire here bite his dick for nutrients? Oh, I forgot: that's too feminist and an assault against gender norms. We cannot have our dom be punished like that! Trad dynamics only!
What's worse than a vampire that looks like a Hollowed from Dark Souls? One that sounds like Joe Biden shitting himself.
> A lighter shaped like a cross.
I'm sure Jesus would be very pleased to learn one of his disciples is a rapist, and one attracted to corpses no less.
> He presses a fag between his lips
OhNovi, IIRC, is a Yookay inhabitant, but is unaware of the memo that 'fags' as a synonym for cigarettes has fallen out of favour decades ago. It stopped being used because it was widely seen as a homophobic insult. 'I want to smoke a fag' has far different connotations today than it did yesteryear. Today, 'smoking a fag' doesn't involve a lighter but a 9mm.
> Who cares if he st(r)okes himself off to the blood-crazed moaning of some creature?
I'd be more concerned about that cigarette ash falling on your dick. Can't have holes being burned in your veins, now.
> He pinches his cigarette between two fingers, then uses that same hand to stroke himself off
They talk a lot about nicotine hands, but do they talk about nicotine cock?
> Ah, ah, mmmph
Get Joe Biden back to his ice cream, already.
> The warmth of his cigarette drawing closer to delicate skin as it burns down its slender length
Poor man's circumcision if I ever heard one.
> He's spread like a call-girl already stuffed with seed
The author has trigger warnings for all the female-centric terms used for our corpse-like vampire, because misgendering is OK when they do it, sweaty.
> A demon whore. A vampire seductress
Novi isn't even trying to entertain the thought that this vampire is male. They never do when push comes to shove. In her fairy fic, she gave him the ability to change sex yet kept the default vagina option, and had him clocked as a fairy because he couldn't change the shape of his ears. That's some high IQ shit, right there.
> He is Jayce's prize, his property
Something something trans men always being the property of men something.
> A deeper voice than his waifish body should have
Did they have magic vampire testosterone back in the Victorian era, or did it achieve it through radium like all the other highborn ladies?
> Moans of a tied-up princess
But if you point out that these people are writing heteronormative hetslop, YOU are called a hater. Rules for thee but not for me.
> It is no gentle cock-sucking maiden
This is a real line. It's not the 'his pussy drooled like a dog' infamy - that comes later.
> You'll probably take this whole place with you
Whose fault is that? The devious genius here with his 200 IQ and computer wires gangbanging their sockets, or the vampire who would probably smell like shoe leather when burned? He'd probably go poof like a burnt tissue.
> All I have to satisfy me...is your foul flesh
Reminder that this vampire is supposedly ancient and powerful, and yet looks like an emaciated corpse. You are meant to masturbate to said fantasy of a corpse getting fucked. Even Resident Evil and TWD zombie fuckers put more effort into making their zombies juicier.
> His marks capture the impossible cut of Viktor's waist
Thankfully, there is no 'his waist was so small his thumbs could meet in the middle', but its spirit is there. This man really is a matchstick to his faggot.
> The curls of the creature's cunt hair are swept into smooth waves, licking up his slender thights and down to creast over the cleft of his lips
He may be a corpse, but those Tarzan pubes are of Fabio quality. Dracula (pick your type) and Nosferatu can only dream of having pubes like that.
> Pleasure or pain, Jayce doesn't know
I think he's turned on more by the blood, tbh.
> Sticky webs of slick come with them
So, vampire elders can look like emaciated corpses when starved, yet their vaginal secretions work like that of a healthy woman. Good to know; you might be near starvation and can be blown away like a paper airplane, but that pussy is DTF.
> You like a man being inside you? Controlling you, capturing you
Thank you for confirming what I have always known: you don't see trans Viktor as male. You just see him as woman-lite; a 'cuntboy' that is more cunt than boy. Because what do you mean that the penis-owner is the only real man here? It sounds like you know exactly what a male is when you want them to be the penetrator, whether he's human or a horse. Dick = male from the people who want you to pretend that shit doesn't matter.
> His cock hard and laying across the warmth of the vampire's pussy
I guess all that remaining blood went to his downstairs, eh?
> The vampire starts to retch
I wasn't aware vampires had gag reflexes, let alone corpses. The more you know.
> Jayce's cock throbs
> Jayce has a throbbing erection
Well, shit. Can you describe what his penis is doing, again?
> Biting the shell of Viktor's ear until it crunches under his teeth
Dried out vampires are like stale Tostitos, good to know.
> Or the next cigarette I light goes out in your eye
Faggot-on-faggot violence, ouch.
> The rest of his fingers splay across the vampire's face, claiming him. Pressing him into the bed in a dominating grip
He's gripping him like he's the Super Bowl football and he doesn't want to lose against Tom Brady in his prime.
> Suckling from Jayce with all the desperation of a starved creature
...because he IS one?
> A wash hysteria
*Awash in hysteria
> Folding the delicate man in half with a brutality that feels good
Because you can bend disabled men with bolts in their spine or inverted femurs like they're a boomerang to show your dominance. Have you tried bending your partner like a bendy straw? You aren't alpha male enough, faggot.
> Admiring the way his cunt is on dripping display. Barely exposed by the mess of silky hair that creeps down enough to even make his puckered hair a secretive thing
Damn, the Tarzan pubes are thick around his asshole, too? I bet he has to use a boar brush to detangle the knots down there. He's lucky he doesn't need to shit anymore because those sexy poops would be an absolute mess.
> He shoves himself in with one brutal buck, burying himself into the undead's soaking, bloody pussy like a stake
I'm sure Leon Belmont or the rest of the Belmont clan could've used that advice. Dealing with evil vampires? Shove your cock in like a stake. They might be dead but that pussy sure isn't.
> You feel like a virgin
A virgin vampire getting bred and fucked by a well-hung Latino who lives like a gooner? Say it ain't so.
> Take it, take my big fucking cock
Another real line.
> A stolen Ancient tied up and tested on, fed, then bred. Jayce is the first. The best. The boldest
Along with the very male habit of fucking corpses comes the virgin obsession. They love conquering new soil as a means of cementing their eminent domain. Whoever has the biggest dick owns the biggest tract of land.
> Remember that, you pathetic little bitch
Imagine wanting to be a vampire to escape the constraints of your sex and demanding that the audience view said character as male, only to shove them firmly into the 'female' box by having the penis-owner use degrading terms against them.
> His dick throbs
It's been doing that a lot.
> His skin prickles with a feral, desperate desire to fuck and fuck and fuck
Oh? The Latino is a sex-addicted feral beast? You don't say.
> Never tasting anything but my cock and my blood
So are you going to offer your dick as food or is that too much for our tradfujo here?
> Weightless, fearless, a sexual creature, a man in his prime of life, still dressed and dominating his claim
And they say white women are racist. Look at this one here, writing about a Latino being a sexual creature that dominates his waifish, waifu white vampire and stakes his claim and talks about masculine pride and...oh.
> Squeeze Viktor's thighs with a brutality that can only come from this strange, feral desire inside of him
He's been called feral three times. I am beginning to think you see brown men as feral beasts, Novi. If that's the case, you should try calling ICE sometime.
> He uses his strength to pull Viktor onto his cock, using his body as a sleeve
Sex dolls or cocksleeves, take your pick. Funny how these are the only options.
> Ploughs deep inside and cums, filling up the sweet tight hole of his vampire. He grunts, pulling out and squeezing his dick, painting white sticky cum across Viktor's hairy pussy
Ah, there's our Evergreen moment. Ploughing that cum inside like you're trying to avoid a decade-long famine. You keep ploughing that hoe, son.
> How fitting, blood and cum, their two vices
I still find it interesting how a vampire can still produce vaginal excretions while being, you know, a corpse. Dry everywhere else but wet down there. It really is like fucking a wet leather shoe.
> Hair gets between his teeth and Jayce bites at Viktor's unkempt lips
Might as well get a comb for that Fabio hair. Can't have you swallowing it and choking on it like a hair ball. That's 200 years of Tarzan pubes, right there.
> I'll have you drinking cum as deliriously as you drink blood. Sucking my cock dry like the good slut you are just to get a drop of my blood. God, you are a desperate horny thing.
Another Evergreen moment. Not as legendary as 'his pussy drooled like a dog', or the shit from the horse fucking fic, but it's something you do a dramatic reading on.
> I'm gonna breed you like a prized whore
Me when I pit my Pokemon against each other (I am not a Pokemon fan)
I guess vampire pussy is an aphrodisiac, because my man didn't go soft once. It's a real miracle. Maybe fae Viktor could have done that before getting outed by his ears at a party, yeah?
Our professional has had another update (you'll be seeing quite a few of these) for her 30-chapter magnum opus. This is a drag, so prepare for the Sparknotes edition.
Been a long time since I found a cucking fic. How about a cucking with horror? This Midsommar-inspired folktale will have you shivering...and wondering why only one person is getting their holes stuffed, and not the man involved. TL;DR it's an Aryan fertility cult where they want a miracle baby to get closer to Nirvana, or some shit. Think Heaven's Gate but with 'down with the patriarchy' while centering the patriarchy.
tigercristabel is nearly done with her Littlest Human Pet Shop AU. I was today years old when I found out that the 'alpha male' was actually trans in this AND had penile extension surgery which somehow exists.
- possessed angel. A demon dripping with desire. Moans of a tied up princess.
- It is no gentle cock-sucking maiden
- Taste the way I make you feel. My blood mixed with your wet, greedy cunt.
- He shoves himself in with one swift brutal buck, burying himself into the undead’s soaking, bloody pussy like a stake.
- “Take it, take my big fucking cock.”
- His dick throbs, his skin prickles with a feral, desperate desire to fuck and fuck and fuck.
- He grunts, pulling out and squeezing his dick, painting white sticky cum across his hairy pussy.
- "I’ll have you drinking cum as deliriously as you drink blood,” he promises. “Sucking my cock dry like the good slut you are just to get a drop of my blood. God you are a desperate horny thing. You’re my cure and my destiny, my cunt to force my seed into.”
Novi also had fanart done of this work. It is done by an artist named 'Marn Draws', whose art style is very similar to Yakichou, and who has a weird habit with drawing her 'bottom' like a child. Also hangs around shotacons.
Not the worst I've seen, but he's just uwu so smol.
> Hunched over a chemistry set so small compared to his bulk that even his most careful moments risk shattering the delicate vials and rattling the metal stands
What, is he a 7'0 Yeti man? Is he working with a child's chemistry set, too? Jayce is 6'2 and bulky, but these authors always, always write him (and in this case, draw) as if he's the yaoi caveman. This is set in modern times; if you don't have a fume hood or proper kit for your chemistry work, what the fuck are you doing?
> Scratching dirty nails into his beard
This man had a nose hair trimmer. Those nails would be manicured, O'Keefe's cream and all.
> Let me in so I can kick your ass
Please do. The rapist male here needs to be humbled by a no-nonsense lesbian.
> Of course Jayce gets strapped with a heart-of-gold team with a do-good attitude
He's supposed to be like Whistler from Blade: no-nonsense, cynical, experienced in monster hunting but will always have your back, but edgier, more aggressive, and a rapist. This makes it seem he hates people who are in monster hunting out of their own good will, compared to him who straps waif-like vampires to his bed so he can rape them.
> Every one of them is one
I can't imagine his electricity and Internet bill. He's worried about that tiny-ass chemistry set? Try a fire hazard with all those wires next to all those liquids.
> The nest of a hairy tech-savvy rat
You're saying Jayce is hairy vermin? Huh.
> He is clever and devious, a trained killer, in his chosen hovel of intellectual pleasures
> Latino
> Devious
Leaning into the 'brown man as beast' thing, are we?
> Wraith-like figure of bones
Jayvik fans get angry when you call Viktor an ugly skeleton because that's ableist. When they do it, they are just writing vampire porn and exploring 'bad BDSM dynamics'.
> A monster so hideous that he's nearly beautiful
> Proceeds to write said vampire as a bone-thin corpse that could only appeal to men who fuck corpses
Beautiful indeed.
> So emaciated that Jayce's fingers encircle the starved muscle
Hot. Look at this beautiful, godly piece of ass here. You think his pussy looks like dried pork?
> Showing off a hairy cunt bruised with ancient bitemarks
Everything else might resemble Auschwitz, but the Tarzan pubes remain untouched.
> An insane person wouldn't even think about capturing one
You just did, though. It didn't sound that hard because this vampire is more emaciated than others and did not put up a fight. Hell, shining a strobe light in his face would probably kill him. The smell of your barn stink animal balls might do him in.
> You need some water
Vampires don't drink water. This taunt doesn't make sense.
> He is the most intelligent man ever to live
Oh? What are your SAT scores. You a MENSA member? Clearly not with all those PC wires posing a fire hazard and a lack of a fume hood and safety equipment in your chemistry lab. I bet you don't even have a pressurized lock system. Don't make me call OSHA.
> Shallow-breathed
??
> Even now you want me. Even the weaker blood of a nosebleed has you hypnotized
Yeah? He's a starving vampire Elder who's been in that coffin for centuries. You are literally starving him. No shit a nosebleed is going to make him go wild like a crack addict.
> The memory of Jayce's hulking form captured in it and holding the vampire like a mouth
He's just so huge and Viktor is uwu so smol.
> If you kill me, you'll never escape this place
Assuming vampires can learn from the memories of the ones they feed on, it's safe to say he can figure out how to leave pretty quick once he learns which PC to use to unlock the doors. I am going by this assumption as Viktor would learn what time period he is in by drinking droplets of Jayce's blood.
> You're going crazy over a drop of blood
Yeah, because he's a starving corpse, you shithead.
> Do you smell it
> Does it make you hungry
Do you want a Slim Jim?
> Jayce is enormous compared to this little waif of a man
I am obligated to use this meme again:
> Adjusts his half-hard cock
How come we don't have our waif-waifu vampire here bite his dick for nutrients? Oh, I forgot: that's too feminist and an assault against gender norms. We cannot have our dom be punished like that! Trad dynamics only!
What's worse than a vampire that looks like a Hollowed from Dark Souls? One that sounds like Joe Biden shitting himself.
> A lighter shaped like a cross.
I'm sure Jesus would be very pleased to learn one of his disciples is a rapist, and one attracted to corpses no less.
> He presses a fag between his lips
OhNovi, IIRC, is a Yookay inhabitant, but is unaware of the memo that 'fags' as a synonym for cigarettes has fallen out of favour decades ago. It stopped being used because it was widely seen as a homophobic insult. 'I want to smoke a fag' has far different connotations today than it did yesteryear. Today, 'smoking a fag' doesn't involve a lighter but a 9mm.
> Who cares if he st(r)okes himself off to the blood-crazed moaning of some creature?
I'd be more concerned about that cigarette ash falling on your dick. Can't have holes being burned in your veins, now.
> He pinches his cigarette between two fingers, then uses that same hand to stroke himself off
They talk a lot about nicotine hands, but do they talk about nicotine cock?
> Ah, ah, mmmph
Get Joe Biden back to his ice cream, already.
> The warmth of his cigarette drawing closer to delicate skin as it burns down its slender length
Poor man's circumcision if I ever heard one.
> He's spread like a call-girl already stuffed with seed
The author has trigger warnings for all the female-centric terms used for our corpse-like vampire, because misgendering is OK when they do it, sweaty.
> A demon whore. A vampire seductress
Novi isn't even trying to entertain the thought that this vampire is male. They never do when push comes to shove. In her fairy fic, she gave him the ability to change sex yet kept the default vagina option, and had him clocked as a fairy because he couldn't change the shape of his ears. That's some high IQ shit, right there.
> He is Jayce's prize, his property
Something something trans men always being the property of men something.
> A deeper voice than his waifish body should have
Did they have magic vampire testosterone back in the Victorian era, or did it achieve it through radium like all the other highborn ladies?
> Moans of a tied-up princess
But if you point out that these people are writing heteronormative hetslop, YOU are called a hater. Rules for thee but not for me.
> It is no gentle cock-sucking maiden
This is a real line. It's not the 'his pussy drooled like a dog' infamy - that comes later.
> You'll probably take this whole place with you
Whose fault is that? The devious genius here with his 200 IQ and computer wires gangbanging their sockets, or the vampire who would probably smell like shoe leather when burned? He'd probably go poof like a burnt tissue.
> All I have to satisfy me...is your foul flesh
Reminder that this vampire is supposedly ancient and powerful, and yet looks like an emaciated corpse. You are meant to masturbate to said fantasy of a corpse getting fucked. Even Resident Evil and TWD zombie fuckers put more effort into making their zombies juicier.
> His marks capture the impossible cut of Viktor's waist
Thankfully, there is no 'his waist was so small his thumbs could meet in the middle', but its spirit is there. This man really is a matchstick to his faggot.
> The curls of the creature's cunt hair are swept into smooth waves, licking up his slender thights and down to creast over the cleft of his lips
He may be a corpse, but those Tarzan pubes are of Fabio quality. Dracula (pick your type) and Nosferatu can only dream of having pubes like that.
> Pleasure or pain, Jayce doesn't know
I think he's turned on more by the blood, tbh.
> Sticky webs of slick come with them
So, vampire elders can look like emaciated corpses when starved, yet their vaginal secretions work like that of a healthy woman. Good to know; you might be near starvation and can be blown away like a paper airplane, but that pussy is DTF.
> You like a man being inside you? Controlling you, capturing you
Thank you for confirming what I have always known: you don't see trans Viktor as male. You just see him as woman-lite; a 'cuntboy' that is more cunt than boy. Because what do you mean that the penis-owner is the only real man here? It sounds like you know exactly what a male is when you want them to be the penetrator, whether he's human or a horse. Dick = male from the people who want you to pretend that shit doesn't matter.
> His cock hard and laying across the warmth of the vampire's pussy
I guess all that remaining blood went to his downstairs, eh?
> The vampire starts to retch
I wasn't aware vampires had gag reflexes, let alone corpses. The more you know.
> Jayce's cock throbs
> Jayce has a throbbing erection
Well, shit. Can you describe what his penis is doing, again?
> Biting the shell of Viktor's ear until it crunches under his teeth
Dried out vampires are like stale Tostitos, good to know.
> Or the next cigarette I light goes out in your eye
Faggot-on-faggot violence, ouch.
> The rest of his fingers splay across the vampire's face, claiming him. Pressing him into the bed in a dominating grip
He's gripping him like he's the Super Bowl football and he doesn't want to lose against Tom Brady in his prime.
> Suckling from Jayce with all the desperation of a starved creature
...because he IS one?
> A wash hysteria
*Awash in hysteria
> Folding the delicate man in half with a brutality that feels good
Because you can bend disabled men with bolts in their spine or inverted femurs like they're a boomerang to show your dominance. Have you tried bending your partner like a bendy straw? You aren't alpha male enough, faggot.
> Admiring the way his cunt is on dripping display. Barely exposed by the mess of silky hair that creeps down enough to even make his puckered hair a secretive thing
Damn, the Tarzan pubes are thick around his asshole, too? I bet he has to use a boar brush to detangle the knots down there. He's lucky he doesn't need to shit anymore because those sexy poops would be an absolute mess.
> He shoves himself in with one brutal buck, burying himself into the undead's soaking, bloody pussy like a stake
I'm sure Leon Belmont or the rest of the Belmont clan could've used that advice. Dealing with evil vampires? Shove your cock in like a stake. They might be dead but that pussy sure isn't.
> You feel like a virgin
A virgin vampire getting bred and fucked by a well-hung Latino who lives like a gooner? Say it ain't so.
> Take it, take my big fucking cock
Another real line.
> A stolen Ancient tied up and tested on, fed, then bred. Jayce is the first. The best. The boldest
Along with the very male habit of fucking corpses comes the virgin obsession. They love conquering new soil as a means of cementing their eminent domain. Whoever has the biggest dick owns the biggest tract of land.
> Remember that, you pathetic little bitch
Imagine wanting to be a vampire to escape the constraints of your sex and demanding that the audience view said character as male, only to shove them firmly into the 'female' box by having the penis-owner use degrading terms against them.
> His dick throbs
It's been doing that a lot.
> His skin prickles with a feral, desperate desire to fuck and fuck and fuck
Oh? The Latino is a sex-addicted feral beast? You don't say.
> Never tasting anything but my cock and my blood
So are you going to offer your dick as food or is that too much for our tradfujo here?
> Weightless, fearless, a sexual creature, a man in his prime of life, still dressed and dominating his claim
And they say white women are racist. Look at this one here, writing about a Latino being a sexual creature that dominates his waifish, waifu white vampire and stakes his claim and talks about masculine pride and...oh.
> Squeeze Viktor's thighs with a brutality that can only come from this strange, feral desire inside of him
He's been called feral three times. I am beginning to think you see brown men as feral beasts, Novi. If that's the case, you should try calling ICE sometime.
> He uses his strength to pull Viktor onto his cock, using his body as a sleeve
Sex dolls or cocksleeves, take your pick. Funny how these are the only options.
> Ploughs deep inside and cums, filling up the sweet tight hole of his vampire. He grunts, pulling out and squeezing his dick, painting white sticky cum across Viktor's hairy pussy
Ah, there's our Evergreen moment. Ploughing that cum inside like you're trying to avoid a decade-long famine. You keep ploughing that hoe, son.
> How fitting, blood and cum, their two vices
I still find it interesting how a vampire can still produce vaginal excretions while being, you know, a corpse. Dry everywhere else but wet down there. It really is like fucking a wet leather shoe.
> Hair gets between his teeth and Jayce bites at Viktor's unkempt lips
Might as well get a comb for that Fabio hair. Can't have you swallowing it and choking on it like a hair ball. That's 200 years of Tarzan pubes, right there.
> I'll have you drinking cum as deliriously as you drink blood. Sucking my cock dry like the good slut you are just to get a drop of my blood. God, you are a desperate horny thing.
Another Evergreen moment. Not as legendary as 'his pussy drooled like a dog', or the shit from the horse fucking fic, but it's something you do a dramatic reading on.
> I'm gonna breed you like a prized whore
Me when I pit my Pokemon against each other (I am not a Pokemon fan)
I guess vampire pussy is an aphrodisiac, because my man didn't go soft once. It's a real miracle. Maybe fae Viktor could have done that before getting outed by his ears at a party, yeah?
Our professional has had another update (you'll be seeing quite a few of these) for her 30-chapter magnum opus. This is a drag, so prepare for the Sparknotes edition.
Arcane Herald Viktor has arrived from the heavens and Jayce is performing diagnostics to find out what he is (she, a professional, also spells 'lungs' like 'longs'). For a moment he awakens, says Jayce's name, apologizes then goes dormant again. Giopara wonders what Viktor is apologizing for before the scene cuts back to a flashback.
We go back to 2017 where Viktor has gone from 15 to 45 as his illness has progressed and he is now walking with a fully warped spine. Heimerdinger is there to discuss his AP schedule and his dual online courses. He wants to speedrun his credits so he can go right into university. He is on the verge of an anxious breakdown, and Heimerdinger knows it. Similar to the original, Heimerdinger refuses to place him in those classes as he is experiencing hallucinations and episode of 'religious euphoria' that are affecting his QOL. He assigns a him a mentor, Stanwick, who will then go on to steal Blitzcrank while Giopara stands there watching. It is this chapter where our deal loverboy and 'anti bully' is a bit of a selfish prick: he gets into all the classes Viktor cannot; gets straight-As while doing nothing and basically enjoys his white male privilege while our white male and a half here has to struggle to be heard. In contrast, he finds a newfound family in Powder and therefore Silco and Vander, who offer him Sunday dinners and a place to stay. He finds wholesome work at the clinic - for now - and tirelessly helps victims when a chemical explosion happens. He makes a mental note that he is glad Powder is not there to see the aftermath, and we go to another flashback, this time in 2008.
We find out that Viktor had an abusive, alcoholic father who invoked terror in him at the ripe age of 8-years-old. He comes home one day to find his father standing in the kitchen with a Christmas present opened from his late mother, an Academy uniform (I think). Viktor gets misgendered as 'Viktoria' and that is seen as the worst possible thing that could happen. In an effort to prevent him from selling it, the eight-year-old tells his father that he can apply for a job at the factory, working a paltry $2.50 an hour for 10-hour shifts (child labour laws and minimum wage sure are shitting in this neck of the woods, eh?). During one incident while trying to open up a valve to prevent a machine from exploding, he gets a whiff of toxic gas, the same gas that will whither away his lungs later in life.
We return to 2017 in the aftermath of the chemical explosion. Turns out, Powder's adopted brothers Mylo and Claggor were involved, and Mylo has a metal bar stuck in his chest. In the original, the author simply had him pop his chest cavity open with no anesthetics (in reality, it was a nameless child) and place a synthetic trachea in his throat. He managed to do this by himself, with random tools, and not a blueprint in sight. Impressive...if not retarded. This time, the explosion is more personal as it involves Powder and her siblings, rather than a random chemical explosion with random people. Having a name to a face does add more drama and a personal note to the scene. Viktor feels responsible for those peoples' deaths and injuries. as he informed Powder of the Hextech crystals and led to her taking one, rather than a personal inadequacy based on petty reasons.
As he curls in on himself and cries to his guilt, we return to 2008. Viktor continues to inhale toxic fumes and operate in terrible, dangerous working conditions. He finds out that his father his now the head of the department and is now forcing his child into child labour without paying him his wages. His father also tells him that due to his work ethic, Viktor has been taken out of school and will now work extra shifts at the factory as he has exceeded the expectations of the factory owner. Viktor's father continues to drink and hit Viktor, and he sees an opportunity to get rid of his father once and for all: an exploding valve pours boiling hot chemicals onto him, roasting him alive. Viktor, still thinking he's alive somehow, tries to touch his still-boiling corpse. An ambulance arrives (corrupt businessmen hire ambulances?) and the scene ends.
We are back to 2018 at the Distinguished Innovator's Competition. This is where Stanwick steals Blitzcrank - and it should be noted there were no scenes spent on Viktor building Blitzcrank whatsoever - while Viktor is vomiting in the toilet. Jayce offers him his scholarship if he wins (because he already has one) and notes that Viktor does not look well. Rather than be comforting, Giopara just asks if something happened because Viktor has been aloof lately. He asks if they are still best friends. Viktor answers in the affirmative - for now.
Looks like we kept the Stanwick stealing Blitzcrank while Viktor was tossing his guts into the toilet. A shame he didn't have time to shit out some panic sexy poops.
> Jayce has your back
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> He has been planning this since you presented your idea
I love how the author wrote Giopara as an 'anti bully' who would 'never hurt Viktor' and then she has him turn around and go, 'Yeah he's been planning this for a while, I didn't tell you because I'm an asshole'. Some friendship!
> What about me? What about ethics?
This is supposed to be the start of Viktor's mental breakdown and downfall, and while the author COULD have had something go down in the clinic in the aftermath of the chemical explosion, having him lose everything while vomiting in a toilet sounds like something Leslie Nielsen would parody. It's perfect for satire, but not for a serious scene that is the climax of this fic.
> I'm angry! I deserve recognition!
He says in a Carrie Bradshaw meltdown (Carrie would actually fight Stanwick with her heels). I wonder why you are never taken seriously, my dood.
> His mind kept wishing Viktor was there by his side
He says while stabbing him in the back and admitting he knew about the betrayal the whole time. You didn't just poison the well, you poisoned the whole ocean.
> His arm was clearly amputated by an industrial table saw
When 'down the river' ain't enough and you need to become the Yellow River that ended the Yuan dynasty.
> No one wanted the boy dying of cancer with a failing memory ruining their Christmas
...he was invited there? They're throwing that party because they know it's going to be his last one?
> Docile cancer zombie
The most honest thing this author has written so funny. Also kinda funny.
> I miss him when he leaves me. I feel like there is a huge hole in my chest...like he shot right through my heart with his big stupid hammer
Laying it on thick there, don't you think?
I wonder if the knife Silco have Viktor will be used to stab Hobo Jayce, and then Giopara. Maybe both? Weird how the knife is the most interesting character so far.
> I don't trust Giopara
> All we have is another Piltie-bred Giopara
Eh? Is he talking about Viktor there? He's all sweet and supportive and now Viktor is some kind of backstabber? Huh?
Le gasp! He's been kidnapped! I wonder who could possibly be behind this...you know who I'm talking about.
We go back to 2017 where Viktor has gone from 15 to 45 as his illness has progressed and he is now walking with a fully warped spine. Heimerdinger is there to discuss his AP schedule and his dual online courses. He wants to speedrun his credits so he can go right into university. He is on the verge of an anxious breakdown, and Heimerdinger knows it. Similar to the original, Heimerdinger refuses to place him in those classes as he is experiencing hallucinations and episode of 'religious euphoria' that are affecting his QOL. He assigns a him a mentor, Stanwick, who will then go on to steal Blitzcrank while Giopara stands there watching. It is this chapter where our deal loverboy and 'anti bully' is a bit of a selfish prick: he gets into all the classes Viktor cannot; gets straight-As while doing nothing and basically enjoys his white male privilege while our white male and a half here has to struggle to be heard. In contrast, he finds a newfound family in Powder and therefore Silco and Vander, who offer him Sunday dinners and a place to stay. He finds wholesome work at the clinic - for now - and tirelessly helps victims when a chemical explosion happens. He makes a mental note that he is glad Powder is not there to see the aftermath, and we go to another flashback, this time in 2008.
We find out that Viktor had an abusive, alcoholic father who invoked terror in him at the ripe age of 8-years-old. He comes home one day to find his father standing in the kitchen with a Christmas present opened from his late mother, an Academy uniform (I think). Viktor gets misgendered as 'Viktoria' and that is seen as the worst possible thing that could happen. In an effort to prevent him from selling it, the eight-year-old tells his father that he can apply for a job at the factory, working a paltry $2.50 an hour for 10-hour shifts (child labour laws and minimum wage sure are shitting in this neck of the woods, eh?). During one incident while trying to open up a valve to prevent a machine from exploding, he gets a whiff of toxic gas, the same gas that will whither away his lungs later in life.
We return to 2017 in the aftermath of the chemical explosion. Turns out, Powder's adopted brothers Mylo and Claggor were involved, and Mylo has a metal bar stuck in his chest. In the original, the author simply had him pop his chest cavity open with no anesthetics (in reality, it was a nameless child) and place a synthetic trachea in his throat. He managed to do this by himself, with random tools, and not a blueprint in sight. Impressive...if not retarded. This time, the explosion is more personal as it involves Powder and her siblings, rather than a random chemical explosion with random people. Having a name to a face does add more drama and a personal note to the scene. Viktor feels responsible for those peoples' deaths and injuries. as he informed Powder of the Hextech crystals and led to her taking one, rather than a personal inadequacy based on petty reasons.
As he curls in on himself and cries to his guilt, we return to 2008. Viktor continues to inhale toxic fumes and operate in terrible, dangerous working conditions. He finds out that his father his now the head of the department and is now forcing his child into child labour without paying him his wages. His father also tells him that due to his work ethic, Viktor has been taken out of school and will now work extra shifts at the factory as he has exceeded the expectations of the factory owner. Viktor's father continues to drink and hit Viktor, and he sees an opportunity to get rid of his father once and for all: an exploding valve pours boiling hot chemicals onto him, roasting him alive. Viktor, still thinking he's alive somehow, tries to touch his still-boiling corpse. An ambulance arrives (corrupt businessmen hire ambulances?) and the scene ends.
We are back to 2018 at the Distinguished Innovator's Competition. This is where Stanwick steals Blitzcrank - and it should be noted there were no scenes spent on Viktor building Blitzcrank whatsoever - while Viktor is vomiting in the toilet. Jayce offers him his scholarship if he wins (because he already has one) and notes that Viktor does not look well. Rather than be comforting, Giopara just asks if something happened because Viktor has been aloof lately. He asks if they are still best friends. Viktor answers in the affirmative - for now.
Looks like we kept the Stanwick stealing Blitzcrank while Viktor was tossing his guts into the toilet. A shame he didn't have time to shit out some panic sexy poops.
> Jayce has your back
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> He has been planning this since you presented your idea
I love how the author wrote Giopara as an 'anti bully' who would 'never hurt Viktor' and then she has him turn around and go, 'Yeah he's been planning this for a while, I didn't tell you because I'm an asshole'. Some friendship!
> What about me? What about ethics?
This is supposed to be the start of Viktor's mental breakdown and downfall, and while the author COULD have had something go down in the clinic in the aftermath of the chemical explosion, having him lose everything while vomiting in a toilet sounds like something Leslie Nielsen would parody. It's perfect for satire, but not for a serious scene that is the climax of this fic.
> I'm angry! I deserve recognition!
He says in a Carrie Bradshaw meltdown (Carrie would actually fight Stanwick with her heels). I wonder why you are never taken seriously, my dood.
> His mind kept wishing Viktor was there by his side
He says while stabbing him in the back and admitting he knew about the betrayal the whole time. You didn't just poison the well, you poisoned the whole ocean.
> His arm was clearly amputated by an industrial table saw
When 'down the river' ain't enough and you need to become the Yellow River that ended the Yuan dynasty.
> No one wanted the boy dying of cancer with a failing memory ruining their Christmas
...he was invited there? They're throwing that party because they know it's going to be his last one?
> Docile cancer zombie
The most honest thing this author has written so funny. Also kinda funny.
> I miss him when he leaves me. I feel like there is a huge hole in my chest...like he shot right through my heart with his big stupid hammer
Laying it on thick there, don't you think?
I wonder if the knife Silco have Viktor will be used to stab Hobo Jayce, and then Giopara. Maybe both? Weird how the knife is the most interesting character so far.
> I don't trust Giopara
> All we have is another Piltie-bred Giopara
Eh? Is he talking about Viktor there? He's all sweet and supportive and now Viktor is some kind of backstabber? Huh?
Le gasp! He's been kidnapped! I wonder who could possibly be behind this...you know who I'm talking about.
Been a long time since I found a cucking fic. How about a cucking with horror? This Midsommar-inspired folktale will have you shivering...and wondering why only one person is getting their holes stuffed, and not the man involved. TL;DR it's an Aryan fertility cult where they want a miracle baby to get closer to Nirvana, or some shit. Think Heaven's Gate but with 'down with the patriarchy' while centering the patriarchy.
We begin with a dinner scene near in late autumn. The fireplace is crackling in the background and we are treated to a scrumptious meal - well, as scrumptious as a WASP can make it - with a single roast chicken, lentils, vegetable salads served in jars, and bowls of rice and potatoes. We are introduced to Henry and Viktor - not to be confused with Henry from Kingdom Come: Deliverance, but let's use him as a face claim - a couple that is looking for more spice in their life than garlic powder and paprika. It's in the hallway that Henry asks Jayce to fuck his husband.
They live in a shared apartment complex - it must be a nice one to allow an open fireplace - and Henry and Viktor R. Cane (get it?) are his neighbours. Henry is 6'3 and a true Aryan: blond hair, blue eyes that pierce the sky, and a groomed, layered and waxed body that is the 'white, cisgender and wealthy view of society'. Yes, this is a real line. One wonders why she'd write this when the Aryan here is married to a white Slav pretending to be a male - and Jayce remarks that the only thing missing is 'him being straight' - but I digress. Jayce knows Viktor because he saved him from his suicide attempt, and the one thing Jayce remembers is how pale his skin was in the moonlight, because nothing says 'white, cisgender society' like highlighting how white skin is the best. Viktor insists that the Lord has cured him of his terminal illness, but Jayce doubts that. He also notes how it's Henry, not Viktor, who speaks with an imposing, powerful, dangerous voice - and you are once again wondering why that is. Is there something about this tiny, pale Slav that isn't worthy of being powerful?
It's a random Tuesday, but that's not nearly as important as how Viktor dresses: jewelry, makeup to hide his pallid, corpse-like face, a blouse with puffy sleeves that accentuate his waist (and I guarantee you there will be the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line), and his long hair tied up in a ponytail. Jayce has always found him beautiful, and is aroused at the idea of dismantling said beauty. The author does not realize that such a view is typical of the 'cisgender male' who wants to break a woman's independence.
> First of all, Viktor is a man
> So he was trans. He had no idea
He managed to clock him from his femur length in one fic. How come he wasn't able to tell in this one?
> How much they had changed the conception of basic things to fit the values of the religion
This is THE least self-aware thing I have ever read. You are writing about a BIOLOGICAL FEMALE getting pregnant, who is then called MALE by everyone around them, and then have the narrative brute force the 'fact' that said character is male while basing this entire plot around their reproductive organs. This is the worst and best case of projection I have ever seen.
> His concept of a cult was really limited to evangelical people who didn't even accept homosexual unions
This isn't a homosexual union so there. It's a workaround straight set-up. You can't impregnate a man, you can only impregnate a woman. You're welcome.
> Nothing about his body or what was inside his pants would change his attraction to the man
Of course not. We aren't going to be like the Aryan cisgender man here. You are just happy you don't have to do all that prep to fuck a man. You will get an organ that's all ready to go.
> The sheet is light, but darker than Viktor's skin
So it's an off-white beige compared to our whiter-than-white trans man because those are our default factory settings. Anything darker than the surface of the moon isn't Aryan material and we don't want that.
> Long legs, with sparse dark hair covering them, thin, well-groomed feet
Thank God he has no toenail fungus. White skin is pure and free from hair, as always.
> He had to feel pleasure in the process
> Their cult believed that full fertility was linked to the pleasure of both involved, an innovative idea in Jayce's view
Uh, that's also backed by science? Even the Medieval Catholic Church agreed that a woman's orgasm was integral to quickening. A man had to perform. Why would this be innovative to a guy like Jayce?
> In conclusion, Viktor liked to submit, to be used, to even be hurt
Now how much of that is due to male projection vs authentic desire? We admire authenticity here.
> He was in power - the whole act would be done for him
Aryan Henry was the one who suggested it. It sounds like Viktor has a preference for Aryan men and Aryan-adjacent ones, because if Jayce was as dark as a Venezuelan, he wouldn't count.
> He liked the rough, the painful, the lack of feelings
And the twist is he actually wants a nice man to take care of him and his baby because all he really wants to be is a tradwife.
> His chest is small, though not surgically altered
Because we can't breastfeed a child with zippertits, you know.
> A trail of dark hair descends to his trimmed groin
Look at that. No Fabio pubes unlike that vampire fic. He likes to keep that topiary clean.
> He wonders how much if it is caused by health problems
I don't think anemia causes human bite marks to appear on the skin. Also, why do you assume only men do it? What if those men identify as women? Are you being a heckin' transphobe?
> Smelled of passion fruit and vanilla
Soft Soap or the good shit?
> He's too thin, but not for long. He imagines Viktor with his seed, growing and growing, the belly big and the folds more prominent
Those are totally homosexual thoughts. We are defeating the Aryan cis male patriarchy with this one.
> This is wrong, this is so wrong
Oh? It sounds like you want to pair bond with a little touch of sperm competition! The leftovers of the Spanish conquest are talking and they want to scrape every last drop of that WASPy Aryan heritage out. Henry is about to fight the Reconquista microscopically.
> I control it, Jayce. To judge it is to judge myself
...you mean you only include white people and chose an Aryan man as your stand-in husband? Sounds like a restrictive covenant to me. While we're at it, I don't think nakura has featured anyone darker than a Korean addicted to skin whiteners. Where's the diversity?
> His fingers were so thin, so slender, so thirsty for his own
He's just uwu so smol.
> His pale skin gleaming silvery under the moonlight
We are condemning the white patriarchy by endlessly talking about the beauty of white skin. Take that, cis males!
> A poor, disabled, homosexual man
You are not homosexual as you are not the same sex as the men you fuck. You are female, and pregnancy is THE most female thing you can do. You are straight; a straight white woman married to an Aryan man. That's a WASPy attitude if I've ever seen it.
> His pale legs
We know he's white, thank you.
> Free the outlet so that more of that liquid could gush out
Wanna try investing in calipers?
> He continues suckling the honey that spills between his legs
Better keep that away from Yogi bear.
> Jayce didn't even want to think about one man arriving at the neighboring house to take Viktor's body as if it were free to be used
Uh, it is? What do you think you're doing with it?
> They didn't know how intelligent and kind Viktor was
Do you? Aside from a few conversations and him talking you off the ledge, are you even friends?
> How could he? If he were Jayce, he would take such good care of Viktor
*If it were Jayce. He's getting all mate-guarding now.
> For a moment he understands why Henry chose him, why all other men must seek him out, why Viktor was seemingly made for this
White pussy has that effect on men. There's no feeling like bleaching your bloodlines.
> Symbols of a strange polygon with no explanation
Skinwalker Ranch but make it filled with white people - oh wait, that's NXIVM.
It's fitting that the token black girl gets eliminated first. We cannot have black people in our Aryan covenant. Only Aryans can ascend and be the true disciples of Yakub.
> All his thoughts boil down to the thirst for this cunt
Sounds like your cis male biology is talking! We are showing that patriarchy what's up by engaging in reproductive sex!
> There's no doubt why other men wanted more after having Viktor in their beds
> Who wouldn't love having their prey handed to them on a silver platter
So what I am getting is that trans men love to be used by 'cis' men and bred like an animal and that's their only purpose in life. No darker skinned men need apply; we are pre 1965 Hart-Celler act over here. One could say we're starting an ethnostate with that white pussy.
> The sweet thing is so fragile beneath him
Nothing like the 'fragile white woman' and the big, muscly, bronzed Latino statue dynamic. I think I know what nakura's type is.
> Wanting to kiss his cervix
You mean he isn't? OhNovi had a centaur kiss, pound, and tenderize his cervix. What's the dealio?
> Long legs and a slim waist and well-hydrated hair
So, a white woman.
> When Jayce noticed that Sky had disappeared
He already noticed her disappearance and did nothing about it, because we don't give a shit about blacks in slash.
> Stares wat him with pure eyes
> Yet, purity
Redundant.
> His beautiful freckles, his accept, his deep voice, his slender bones, his full lips
> Full lips
> Thin mouth
Pick one.
> He wants to transform into an animal and seize him by the nape of his neck and steal him for himself
The brown man is turned into an animal in order to kidnap the beautiful and pure white (wo)man? You don't say?
> He just obeys the intrusion as he is made for it - as if it were predestined from birth
Because it was? That's what happens when you have complementary genitalia.
> I'm 64-years-old
> I avoid drinking coffee
Nicotine ages you. But I guess the blood of virgins/the innocent/adrenochrome is hitting just right.
> His skin is white and smooth
Anything darker than a Floridian tan doesn't count as Aryan, so we cannot achieve our Yakubian dreams.
> Viktor is light and fits like a doll on his lap
You don't say.
> Imagines the intrusion isn't very pleasant in an unlubricated ass
Don't worry, that rosebud works as intended. There will be no lube pouring down his thighs like diarrhea.
> Mesmerized by how easily Henry penetrates him
It's that magical white booty. Sure, it might not have any junk in the trunk, but it can swallow that spunk.
> His cock seems to respond along with that of the man behind Viktor, with a similar size to his
What's that? The Aryan man has a matching cock to the well-hung Latino? No way!
> How would you explain your health to a police officer?
1. Say you're vegan. 2. Get a Jewish lawyer and plead the 5th.
> Jayce is already completely hard again
I keep telling ya, white pussy is magic.
> So small compared to the size of his hand
He's just uwu so smol.
> My husband has this gift, you know, of seducing anyone who catches his eye. That's why when I say I must punish someone, I'm referring exclusively to him
Hmm, I wonder which sex is always painted as being responsible for the actions of male sexual violence. Not very gender-affirming if you ask me.
> Jayce feels the thin barrier between them
A different kind of frottage, eh?
> His hot, sinful body
No hips, no ass, no tits, protruding ribs worse than Nicole Ritchie during her pro-ana days, and a tiny neck? You keep telling yourself that's an angel of fertility right there.
> So perfect, despite being terribly broken
> You'll never be broken, because you already are
This doesn't make any sense. He's perfect, but he's broken, but he can't be broken because he's already broken? What Aryan IQ trick is this?
> The realization of how much is inside Viktor hits Jayce
Yeah, he's taking a double-dipping of 8 inch sausage. Now I really want to know what kind of magic shit this cult is into.
BTW, these flashbacks interjected in the middle of these paragraphs are scenes between Jayce and Viktor as friends. Seems more like a 'here, goddammit' way of describing their relationship rather than make it a focal point.
> His face is turning red, then purple
If your partner is turning into Grimace, then it really must be magic protecting them because the blood vessels in their eyes will pop and their tongue will start swelling. You've never seen a body after strangulation and it shows.
> The genius you cherish so much, reduced to nothing more than a womb to use and impregnate
In which the author perfectly describes what's wrong with this niche. Trans men aren't men, they're wombs to use and impregnate. They will never be seen or treated as men by their fellow males, and will always fit into the tradwife niche in this white, cisgender patriarchy. And who is responsible for such backwards thinking? Why, the author herself.
> Young, healthy, virile, single
I bet you've got his SAT scores, too.
> He'll hurt you, Vik, when he discovers your true nature
Oh? Does this true nature involve some form of magic? Or is it just him figuring out he's trans and he's got a bonus hole to use?
> I don't want you to go through the pain
He says as he turns him into Grimace.
> He's not going to fall in love with you
You just said he was in love with him.
> He ejaculates inside the violated hole
That's the only one? Or does it count as a violation when the Aryan cis man does it?
NGL, these flashbacks are far more interesting than the main plot. A two-headed salamander? Write more of that, please.
> The shadow partially hiding his swollen eyes and marked neck
'Marked neck'? His neck is so purple he could classify as another race. Irish Sunglasses? Try the Irish Choker.
> Jayce can't stop thinking about the other men
That unironically makes you gayer than Viktor. Why you thinking about random cocks, bro?
> Viktor will be a good wife
It's not misgendering when WE do it, sweaty~
> There's twice as much love as usual inside their hearts
So much for not falling in love, eh?
> Oh, a dream?
Literally an 'It came to me in a dream' ahh plot. Amazin'.
> He feels his heart being one with Viktor's
> Beating, beating, both in sync
> But Viktor's heart is beating like his right now
Wow, I can't tell that your hearts are beating in sync. Run it by me again?
This was a real bait-and-switch. I really expected this to have more folklore behind it - as that was the prompt - but all that happens is they fuck in an apartment. What happened to the bizarre symbols they were finding? The missing people? What happened to Sky? Do we even care about her? What about the dynamics of the cult? Did Viktor really fuck those people? Why are they all Aryan? Shit like that doesn't get answered. Ironically, the real horror and folklore lay in the flashbacks where they buried that mutated animal. A few sentences of that held way more intrigue and stuck with the theme. This was just one long, drawn out cuck fic where an Aryan man tells a half-Latino man to fuck his wife - er, husband - get him pregnant because that's all he's good for, and give him a miracle child because our Aryan is 64 and looks young thanks to all those adrenochrome injections. The author really missed a chance to include that as a plot point, but I simply think she forgot about those missing characters.
It didn't even seem like a fertility cult at all, just a man using his neighbour to impregnate his tradwife. It's not Gothic, it's not horror, it's more like a domestic dispute that has an Aryan choking a Slav until they are purple. Which, thematically and historically, fits when you think about it. In any case, this was a waste of time. It didn't fit the theme at all. I expected a Midsommar-type setting - and that film and his cult work! It fits! - but no. At least it isn't someone becoming a goat-eating demon after trying to end a pregnancy or him getting AIDS. Now that would be goofy.
They live in a shared apartment complex - it must be a nice one to allow an open fireplace - and Henry and Viktor R. Cane (get it?) are his neighbours. Henry is 6'3 and a true Aryan: blond hair, blue eyes that pierce the sky, and a groomed, layered and waxed body that is the 'white, cisgender and wealthy view of society'. Yes, this is a real line. One wonders why she'd write this when the Aryan here is married to a white Slav pretending to be a male - and Jayce remarks that the only thing missing is 'him being straight' - but I digress. Jayce knows Viktor because he saved him from his suicide attempt, and the one thing Jayce remembers is how pale his skin was in the moonlight, because nothing says 'white, cisgender society' like highlighting how white skin is the best. Viktor insists that the Lord has cured him of his terminal illness, but Jayce doubts that. He also notes how it's Henry, not Viktor, who speaks with an imposing, powerful, dangerous voice - and you are once again wondering why that is. Is there something about this tiny, pale Slav that isn't worthy of being powerful?
It's a random Tuesday, but that's not nearly as important as how Viktor dresses: jewelry, makeup to hide his pallid, corpse-like face, a blouse with puffy sleeves that accentuate his waist (and I guarantee you there will be the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line), and his long hair tied up in a ponytail. Jayce has always found him beautiful, and is aroused at the idea of dismantling said beauty. The author does not realize that such a view is typical of the 'cisgender male' who wants to break a woman's independence.
> First of all, Viktor is a man
> So he was trans. He had no idea
He managed to clock him from his femur length in one fic. How come he wasn't able to tell in this one?
> How much they had changed the conception of basic things to fit the values of the religion
This is THE least self-aware thing I have ever read. You are writing about a BIOLOGICAL FEMALE getting pregnant, who is then called MALE by everyone around them, and then have the narrative brute force the 'fact' that said character is male while basing this entire plot around their reproductive organs. This is the worst and best case of projection I have ever seen.
> His concept of a cult was really limited to evangelical people who didn't even accept homosexual unions
This isn't a homosexual union so there. It's a workaround straight set-up. You can't impregnate a man, you can only impregnate a woman. You're welcome.
> Nothing about his body or what was inside his pants would change his attraction to the man
Of course not. We aren't going to be like the Aryan cisgender man here. You are just happy you don't have to do all that prep to fuck a man. You will get an organ that's all ready to go.
> The sheet is light, but darker than Viktor's skin
So it's an off-white beige compared to our whiter-than-white trans man because those are our default factory settings. Anything darker than the surface of the moon isn't Aryan material and we don't want that.
> Long legs, with sparse dark hair covering them, thin, well-groomed feet
Thank God he has no toenail fungus. White skin is pure and free from hair, as always.
> He had to feel pleasure in the process
> Their cult believed that full fertility was linked to the pleasure of both involved, an innovative idea in Jayce's view
Uh, that's also backed by science? Even the Medieval Catholic Church agreed that a woman's orgasm was integral to quickening. A man had to perform. Why would this be innovative to a guy like Jayce?
> In conclusion, Viktor liked to submit, to be used, to even be hurt
Now how much of that is due to male projection vs authentic desire? We admire authenticity here.
> He was in power - the whole act would be done for him
Aryan Henry was the one who suggested it. It sounds like Viktor has a preference for Aryan men and Aryan-adjacent ones, because if Jayce was as dark as a Venezuelan, he wouldn't count.
> He liked the rough, the painful, the lack of feelings
And the twist is he actually wants a nice man to take care of him and his baby because all he really wants to be is a tradwife.
> His chest is small, though not surgically altered
Because we can't breastfeed a child with zippertits, you know.
> A trail of dark hair descends to his trimmed groin
Look at that. No Fabio pubes unlike that vampire fic. He likes to keep that topiary clean.
> He wonders how much if it is caused by health problems
I don't think anemia causes human bite marks to appear on the skin. Also, why do you assume only men do it? What if those men identify as women? Are you being a heckin' transphobe?
> Smelled of passion fruit and vanilla
Soft Soap or the good shit?
> He's too thin, but not for long. He imagines Viktor with his seed, growing and growing, the belly big and the folds more prominent
Those are totally homosexual thoughts. We are defeating the Aryan cis male patriarchy with this one.
> This is wrong, this is so wrong
Oh? It sounds like you want to pair bond with a little touch of sperm competition! The leftovers of the Spanish conquest are talking and they want to scrape every last drop of that WASPy Aryan heritage out. Henry is about to fight the Reconquista microscopically.
> I control it, Jayce. To judge it is to judge myself
...you mean you only include white people and chose an Aryan man as your stand-in husband? Sounds like a restrictive covenant to me. While we're at it, I don't think nakura has featured anyone darker than a Korean addicted to skin whiteners. Where's the diversity?
> His fingers were so thin, so slender, so thirsty for his own
He's just uwu so smol.
> His pale skin gleaming silvery under the moonlight
We are condemning the white patriarchy by endlessly talking about the beauty of white skin. Take that, cis males!
> A poor, disabled, homosexual man
You are not homosexual as you are not the same sex as the men you fuck. You are female, and pregnancy is THE most female thing you can do. You are straight; a straight white woman married to an Aryan man. That's a WASPy attitude if I've ever seen it.
> His pale legs
We know he's white, thank you.
> Free the outlet so that more of that liquid could gush out
Wanna try investing in calipers?
> He continues suckling the honey that spills between his legs
Better keep that away from Yogi bear.
> Jayce didn't even want to think about one man arriving at the neighboring house to take Viktor's body as if it were free to be used
Uh, it is? What do you think you're doing with it?
> They didn't know how intelligent and kind Viktor was
Do you? Aside from a few conversations and him talking you off the ledge, are you even friends?
> How could he? If he were Jayce, he would take such good care of Viktor
*If it were Jayce. He's getting all mate-guarding now.
> For a moment he understands why Henry chose him, why all other men must seek him out, why Viktor was seemingly made for this
White pussy has that effect on men. There's no feeling like bleaching your bloodlines.
> Symbols of a strange polygon with no explanation
Skinwalker Ranch but make it filled with white people - oh wait, that's NXIVM.
It's fitting that the token black girl gets eliminated first. We cannot have black people in our Aryan covenant. Only Aryans can ascend and be the true disciples of Yakub.
> All his thoughts boil down to the thirst for this cunt
Sounds like your cis male biology is talking! We are showing that patriarchy what's up by engaging in reproductive sex!
> There's no doubt why other men wanted more after having Viktor in their beds
> Who wouldn't love having their prey handed to them on a silver platter
So what I am getting is that trans men love to be used by 'cis' men and bred like an animal and that's their only purpose in life. No darker skinned men need apply; we are pre 1965 Hart-Celler act over here. One could say we're starting an ethnostate with that white pussy.
> The sweet thing is so fragile beneath him
Nothing like the 'fragile white woman' and the big, muscly, bronzed Latino statue dynamic. I think I know what nakura's type is.
> Wanting to kiss his cervix
You mean he isn't? OhNovi had a centaur kiss, pound, and tenderize his cervix. What's the dealio?
> Long legs and a slim waist and well-hydrated hair
So, a white woman.
> When Jayce noticed that Sky had disappeared
He already noticed her disappearance and did nothing about it, because we don't give a shit about blacks in slash.
> Stares wat him with pure eyes
> Yet, purity
Redundant.
> His beautiful freckles, his accept, his deep voice, his slender bones, his full lips
> Full lips
> Thin mouth
Pick one.
> He wants to transform into an animal and seize him by the nape of his neck and steal him for himself
The brown man is turned into an animal in order to kidnap the beautiful and pure white (wo)man? You don't say?
> He just obeys the intrusion as he is made for it - as if it were predestined from birth
Because it was? That's what happens when you have complementary genitalia.
> I'm 64-years-old
> I avoid drinking coffee
Nicotine ages you. But I guess the blood of virgins/the innocent/adrenochrome is hitting just right.
> His skin is white and smooth
Anything darker than a Floridian tan doesn't count as Aryan, so we cannot achieve our Yakubian dreams.
> Viktor is light and fits like a doll on his lap
You don't say.
> Imagines the intrusion isn't very pleasant in an unlubricated ass
Don't worry, that rosebud works as intended. There will be no lube pouring down his thighs like diarrhea.
> Mesmerized by how easily Henry penetrates him
It's that magical white booty. Sure, it might not have any junk in the trunk, but it can swallow that spunk.
> His cock seems to respond along with that of the man behind Viktor, with a similar size to his
What's that? The Aryan man has a matching cock to the well-hung Latino? No way!
> How would you explain your health to a police officer?
1. Say you're vegan. 2. Get a Jewish lawyer and plead the 5th.
> Jayce is already completely hard again
I keep telling ya, white pussy is magic.
> So small compared to the size of his hand
He's just uwu so smol.
> My husband has this gift, you know, of seducing anyone who catches his eye. That's why when I say I must punish someone, I'm referring exclusively to him
Hmm, I wonder which sex is always painted as being responsible for the actions of male sexual violence. Not very gender-affirming if you ask me.
> Jayce feels the thin barrier between them
A different kind of frottage, eh?
> His hot, sinful body
No hips, no ass, no tits, protruding ribs worse than Nicole Ritchie during her pro-ana days, and a tiny neck? You keep telling yourself that's an angel of fertility right there.
> So perfect, despite being terribly broken
> You'll never be broken, because you already are
This doesn't make any sense. He's perfect, but he's broken, but he can't be broken because he's already broken? What Aryan IQ trick is this?
> The realization of how much is inside Viktor hits Jayce
Yeah, he's taking a double-dipping of 8 inch sausage. Now I really want to know what kind of magic shit this cult is into.
BTW, these flashbacks interjected in the middle of these paragraphs are scenes between Jayce and Viktor as friends. Seems more like a 'here, goddammit' way of describing their relationship rather than make it a focal point.
> His face is turning red, then purple
If your partner is turning into Grimace, then it really must be magic protecting them because the blood vessels in their eyes will pop and their tongue will start swelling. You've never seen a body after strangulation and it shows.
> The genius you cherish so much, reduced to nothing more than a womb to use and impregnate
In which the author perfectly describes what's wrong with this niche. Trans men aren't men, they're wombs to use and impregnate. They will never be seen or treated as men by their fellow males, and will always fit into the tradwife niche in this white, cisgender patriarchy. And who is responsible for such backwards thinking? Why, the author herself.
> Young, healthy, virile, single
I bet you've got his SAT scores, too.
> He'll hurt you, Vik, when he discovers your true nature
Oh? Does this true nature involve some form of magic? Or is it just him figuring out he's trans and he's got a bonus hole to use?
> I don't want you to go through the pain
He says as he turns him into Grimace.
> He's not going to fall in love with you
You just said he was in love with him.
> He ejaculates inside the violated hole
That's the only one? Or does it count as a violation when the Aryan cis man does it?
NGL, these flashbacks are far more interesting than the main plot. A two-headed salamander? Write more of that, please.
> The shadow partially hiding his swollen eyes and marked neck
'Marked neck'? His neck is so purple he could classify as another race. Irish Sunglasses? Try the Irish Choker.
> Jayce can't stop thinking about the other men
That unironically makes you gayer than Viktor. Why you thinking about random cocks, bro?
> Viktor will be a good wife
It's not misgendering when WE do it, sweaty~
> There's twice as much love as usual inside their hearts
So much for not falling in love, eh?
> Oh, a dream?
Literally an 'It came to me in a dream' ahh plot. Amazin'.
> He feels his heart being one with Viktor's
> Beating, beating, both in sync
> But Viktor's heart is beating like his right now
Wow, I can't tell that your hearts are beating in sync. Run it by me again?
This was a real bait-and-switch. I really expected this to have more folklore behind it - as that was the prompt - but all that happens is they fuck in an apartment. What happened to the bizarre symbols they were finding? The missing people? What happened to Sky? Do we even care about her? What about the dynamics of the cult? Did Viktor really fuck those people? Why are they all Aryan? Shit like that doesn't get answered. Ironically, the real horror and folklore lay in the flashbacks where they buried that mutated animal. A few sentences of that held way more intrigue and stuck with the theme. This was just one long, drawn out cuck fic where an Aryan man tells a half-Latino man to fuck his wife - er, husband - get him pregnant because that's all he's good for, and give him a miracle child because our Aryan is 64 and looks young thanks to all those adrenochrome injections. The author really missed a chance to include that as a plot point, but I simply think she forgot about those missing characters.
It didn't even seem like a fertility cult at all, just a man using his neighbour to impregnate his tradwife. It's not Gothic, it's not horror, it's more like a domestic dispute that has an Aryan choking a Slav until they are purple. Which, thematically and historically, fits when you think about it. In any case, this was a waste of time. It didn't fit the theme at all. I expected a Midsommar-type setting - and that film and his cult work! It fits! - but no. At least it isn't someone becoming a goat-eating demon after trying to end a pregnancy or him getting AIDS. Now that would be goofy.
tigercristabel is nearly done with her Littlest Human Pet Shop AU. I was today years old when I found out that the 'alpha male' was actually trans in this AND had penile extension surgery which somehow exists.
Jayce gets a tip on where to look for Viktor from Silco, and after traversing some underground tunnels, he finds Viktor at the ledge near the water pipes, the same place he attempted suicide after Sky's death. Jayce pulls the 'Am I interrupting?' line as a lightheaded, familiar memory but it comes off as extremely callous. When Viktor turns to Jayce, he can see the bump - Viktor is expecting. I assume this has to do with his previous assaults because he and Jayce never had sex. In any case, he talks him off the ledge after proclaiming that he is his partner, not his pet, despite buying him from a human pet shop and putting a tracker in him. They get a carriage ride back and Viktor nearly falls asleep due to how hot it is inside it. Jayce reflects on the parallels of this scene with how he first got him: a scared little omega, nervous of their surroundings, suddenly finding safety in a warm carriage. Jayce tells him not to run away again, and to tell him when he needs space - even when he can't, because the author sometimes forgets that Viktor is mute.
Anyways, back at home, Jayce tells Viktor to strip for a shower, and wouldn't you know it...Viktor starts speaking!
> He knew he was fussing, mother henning as Cait would say
I never put two and two together until now: all the speech mannerisms, all this faux bravado, all this stuttering and dialogue...Jayce is a pooner, too!
> His inner alpha sigh in relief
The only reason he hasn't been sold is due to luck at birth. If he was not an alpha, he'd be in Viktor's position. As to what kind of alpha male cock he has...you're in for a major disappointment.
> Just because his omega was cold, he needed to make sure he warmed him up and took care of him properly
Who knew Alpha 'males' could be such 50s housewives?
> Couldn't bring himself to find out the truth
Yeah, Viktor just starts speaking out of the blue. Why couldn't he speak before, you ask? Because he'd get electrocuted any time he did so thanks to that omegan shock collar. That's right: this author decided to treat one of the protagonists like Kaya the dog.
We still are refusing to use the word 'cane', eh?
> Viktor's hair was a forest for his face to explore
We're going back to our Tarzan roots, fam.
> Proof that he was a worthy alpha
But can he pay child support? That is the question.
> His thighs wrapped around the furious bulge that strained against the fabric
You can be forgiven for thinking that this is a normal, if not comically enlarged, male penis. You are wrong. The author decided to go one step further with this Frankenweiner.
> Preened when the omega didn't simply cower, or even relax into submission
You may be wondering, 'this omega must really be experienced with huge alpha dicks in order to not put up a fight'. You'd be wrong.
> It wasn't like it was a bad dick, not in size given that it was the larger end of the average beta dick
> Big enough that he'd never been too fussed on looking into the surgeries to alter it beyond what presentation had done to his former clit
Yes, they have phalloplasties for trans alpha males. While male alpha males have cocks 13 inches and above, enough to fence with and pump gas with, female alpha males have roid clits that only give them - ahem - beta sized cocks. This monstrous meat-packer just suffered shrinkflation, and will serve a lesser volume of semen than what would occur naturally.
> But Jayce was a weak man and plunged his dick straight in
The author also wants you to believe this 'beta-sized penis' is also penetrating, or rubbing against, Viktor's cervix.
> The most delicious pulsing around his cock
And he only gets 4 inches, lmao.
> So desperate for me, aren't you
I would not be talking sexily if my dick was the size of the average Indian. You cannot redeem this trait.
> All were helping Viktor to drop
Drop from what?
> What the fu -"
I'd be saying the same thing if a beta-sized dick owner was trying to act like an alpha male. You can't even get an alpha dick despite your presentation
> Started slowly rutting through the silky petals
Stop referring to the vulva like a flower. It sounds ridiculous.
> His pussy remained empty
It will still remain empty because he has a beta-sized cock.
> Bottomed out before Viktor even finished the word, his knot slipping in with a single thrust
Now, is his knot alpha-sized, or is it smaller? Where is the knot forming? Under the clit? Ouch.
> Encouraging Jayce to brutalize his cervix
He is not even big enough to reach his cervix. If he could, why did you write that he was 'slightly larger than a beta'?
> If he kept forcing his hips up to meet Jayce's groin, his spine could get caught in the crossfire
AKA he'll break his spine by jackhammering.
> Letting his hips rock at an almost feral tempo
It's like sticking an eraser to a vibrator: yeah you'll get the sensation, but you ain't getting anything shoved up there.
> What it felt like as he poured himself into the other male
I assume that female alpha males have testicles or some combination of the genitalia of both sexes. If Jayce is trans, how did he manage to produce sperm? I don't think I've ever seen balls on this man. Where are you getting the semen? A semen pump you've hidden under the bed?
> The size of his hands against Viktor's had his chest puffing with pride
He's got those trans yaoi hands. You might not get any bottom growth but you can get the Mike Tyson fists.
>Why did you start speaking
> Admits it was due to the shock collar
All that time wasted on sign language - writing letters wasn't even considered as an alternative, btw - and trying to communicate in different ways was just thrown out the window. What a retarded way to introduce the 'Haha, I was normal all along!' trope. This is beta-read, btw.
> He hid by pressing his forehead to the omega's crown
??? That's a weird way to hide embarrassment.
> It's not like I needed my voice
Bitch tried to pull an Ariel and it ended up as smart as one of Awkwafina's songs.
> Wondering if there was some sort of divine joke at bay, only one of them capable of speaking at a time
It's not a divine joke. The author is just retarded. 'I can't talk because of a shock collar' could have been posted on a post-it note.
> It's obscene. Taking away someone's voice like that
He says, while living in a society that sells omegas like human pets and puts them in collars. Talk about a lack of self-awareness.
> This is going to end, the collars, the fucking tongue cutting
Cool, you gonna give them civil rights, too? Or are they still going to be segregated?
> Your cock, I suppose. Good in its own right, and how you use it
Imagine being an alpha male and yet you cannot have an alpha cis male dick, just a hyena clit, and an omega is saying to your fault.
Too bad this isn't revealed to be one big fucked-up dream.
So he smells like orange Lysol. Nice.
They have breakfast, and Jayce ponders how his mating bite makes Viktor his biologically, as if there weren't enough questions as to how our alpha dood can ejaculate from a penis that is not actually a penis. Jayce asks if Viktor regrets having sex, and he says no. He enjoys his bolder, independent omega despite the attempted 'suicide' earlier and all the instances of traumatized behaviour. Turns out it was all due to the shock collar! Who knew you could swap away PTSD that easily with the press of a button?
Anyways, back at home, Jayce tells Viktor to strip for a shower, and wouldn't you know it...Viktor starts speaking!
> He knew he was fussing, mother henning as Cait would say
I never put two and two together until now: all the speech mannerisms, all this faux bravado, all this stuttering and dialogue...Jayce is a pooner, too!
> His inner alpha sigh in relief
The only reason he hasn't been sold is due to luck at birth. If he was not an alpha, he'd be in Viktor's position. As to what kind of alpha male cock he has...you're in for a major disappointment.
> Just because his omega was cold, he needed to make sure he warmed him up and took care of him properly
Who knew Alpha 'males' could be such 50s housewives?
> Couldn't bring himself to find out the truth
Yeah, Viktor just starts speaking out of the blue. Why couldn't he speak before, you ask? Because he'd get electrocuted any time he did so thanks to that omegan shock collar. That's right: this author decided to treat one of the protagonists like Kaya the dog.
We still are refusing to use the word 'cane', eh?
> Viktor's hair was a forest for his face to explore
We're going back to our Tarzan roots, fam.
> Proof that he was a worthy alpha
But can he pay child support? That is the question.
> His thighs wrapped around the furious bulge that strained against the fabric
You can be forgiven for thinking that this is a normal, if not comically enlarged, male penis. You are wrong. The author decided to go one step further with this Frankenweiner.
> Preened when the omega didn't simply cower, or even relax into submission
You may be wondering, 'this omega must really be experienced with huge alpha dicks in order to not put up a fight'. You'd be wrong.
> It wasn't like it was a bad dick, not in size given that it was the larger end of the average beta dick
> Big enough that he'd never been too fussed on looking into the surgeries to alter it beyond what presentation had done to his former clit
Yes, they have phalloplasties for trans alpha males. While male alpha males have cocks 13 inches and above, enough to fence with and pump gas with, female alpha males have roid clits that only give them - ahem - beta sized cocks. This monstrous meat-packer just suffered shrinkflation, and will serve a lesser volume of semen than what would occur naturally.
> But Jayce was a weak man and plunged his dick straight in
The author also wants you to believe this 'beta-sized penis' is also penetrating, or rubbing against, Viktor's cervix.
> The most delicious pulsing around his cock
And he only gets 4 inches, lmao.
> So desperate for me, aren't you
I would not be talking sexily if my dick was the size of the average Indian. You cannot redeem this trait.
> All were helping Viktor to drop
Drop from what?
> What the fu -"
I'd be saying the same thing if a beta-sized dick owner was trying to act like an alpha male. You can't even get an alpha dick despite your presentation
> Started slowly rutting through the silky petals
Stop referring to the vulva like a flower. It sounds ridiculous.
> His pussy remained empty
It will still remain empty because he has a beta-sized cock.
> Bottomed out before Viktor even finished the word, his knot slipping in with a single thrust
Now, is his knot alpha-sized, or is it smaller? Where is the knot forming? Under the clit? Ouch.
> Encouraging Jayce to brutalize his cervix
He is not even big enough to reach his cervix. If he could, why did you write that he was 'slightly larger than a beta'?
> If he kept forcing his hips up to meet Jayce's groin, his spine could get caught in the crossfire
AKA he'll break his spine by jackhammering.
> Letting his hips rock at an almost feral tempo
It's like sticking an eraser to a vibrator: yeah you'll get the sensation, but you ain't getting anything shoved up there.
> What it felt like as he poured himself into the other male
I assume that female alpha males have testicles or some combination of the genitalia of both sexes. If Jayce is trans, how did he manage to produce sperm? I don't think I've ever seen balls on this man. Where are you getting the semen? A semen pump you've hidden under the bed?
> The size of his hands against Viktor's had his chest puffing with pride
He's got those trans yaoi hands. You might not get any bottom growth but you can get the Mike Tyson fists.
>Why did you start speaking
> Admits it was due to the shock collar
All that time wasted on sign language - writing letters wasn't even considered as an alternative, btw - and trying to communicate in different ways was just thrown out the window. What a retarded way to introduce the 'Haha, I was normal all along!' trope. This is beta-read, btw.
> He hid by pressing his forehead to the omega's crown
??? That's a weird way to hide embarrassment.
> It's not like I needed my voice
Bitch tried to pull an Ariel and it ended up as smart as one of Awkwafina's songs.
> Wondering if there was some sort of divine joke at bay, only one of them capable of speaking at a time
It's not a divine joke. The author is just retarded. 'I can't talk because of a shock collar' could have been posted on a post-it note.
> It's obscene. Taking away someone's voice like that
He says, while living in a society that sells omegas like human pets and puts them in collars. Talk about a lack of self-awareness.
> This is going to end, the collars, the fucking tongue cutting
Cool, you gonna give them civil rights, too? Or are they still going to be segregated?
> Your cock, I suppose. Good in its own right, and how you use it
Imagine being an alpha male and yet you cannot have an alpha cis male dick, just a hyena clit, and an omega is saying to your fault.
Too bad this isn't revealed to be one big fucked-up dream.
So he smells like orange Lysol. Nice.
They have breakfast, and Jayce ponders how his mating bite makes Viktor his biologically, as if there weren't enough questions as to how our alpha dood can ejaculate from a penis that is not actually a penis. Jayce asks if Viktor regrets having sex, and he says no. He enjoys his bolder, independent omega despite the attempted 'suicide' earlier and all the instances of traumatized behaviour. Turns out it was all due to the shock collar! Who knew you could swap away PTSD that easily with the press of a button?
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Who doesn't love 10k words of pure porn? Well, that's promised in Chapter 2, but celestialthread promises to give it her all. In this chapter, a fat, chubby kid loses weight, shoots up a foot or two, and meets a femmeboy twink* (*terms and conditions apply). How romantic!
> He was restless, overeager, and overbearing
You know it's bad when there is a consensus among middle schoolers that you are overbearing. This will translate into possessiveness in adulthood, something that is rewarded rather than corrected.
> It didn't help that he'd always been chubby
Part and parcel of living in a Latino household. If you aren't DJ Spit skinny, you're fat. It's all those carbs, ese.
Vi swooping in there like a white saviour. Don't these kids know you don't pick on the Hispanic kids? They'll jump you - and in this case, this kid will jump on you like Eddie Guerrero.
Eleven is like sixteen in Latino years. Literally all he has to do is sit on these white kids.
Jayce goes through a growth spurt in seventh or eighth grade - the years when puberty hits - and everybody is shocked that the fat Latino lost weight and gained two feet in height. He's lankier and clumsier like a Divider, and Vi now has to retrain him because those long-ass limbs can't hit. Nevertheless, Vi is proud of him and continues to train him. One night, while they are sitting on the room enjoying the last few summer nights, Vi says her fathers - Silco and Vander - are going to adopt another kid. We find out that it's a baby girl named Millie that has health issues, and the reader is meant to conclude that this baby girl is actually Viktor, but we can't misgender babies like that just yet. We need to let the kindergartner teacher decide.
> The prettiest little girl he had ever seen, with huge golden eyes
> A connection immediate and effortless, like their souls recognized each other
He's feeling as if he's soul mates with a literal fucking baby. That's creepy as fuck. The author promises that there will be no pedophilia in this, but that is the closest thing to it. Thanks, this is the second fic I've read where he's in love with a baby.
> Millie had been born with a skeletal defect
I wonder if 'Millie' here is a reference to Millie Bobby Brown. If so, here's hoping he doesn't look 45 in his twenties.
> Even girls had started noticing him
I can't wait for the eventual reveal of, 'Um, actually, I've been gay this whole time' when he starts fucking Viktor in that 10k word smut chapter.
He didn't come out of his room but he will come out of the closet HEYO
> That's what phones are for
Wow, we're finally using modern technology for its intended purpose. You don't have to worry about losing friends when you've got Snapchat!
BTW, you wanna know how old baby Millie/Viktor is? Five.
And what does this five-year-old ask of him? That when she grows up he'll be his boyfriend.
I've read instances of 50-year-old Jayce cumming three times in a row and maintaining an erection. You'll be fine at the grand ole age of *checks tags* 32.
> Not this love
Still weird to think a fucking baby, and then a young child, is your soul mate. You should be soul mates with the sex offender registry instead.
> Somehow, by some cosmic miracle, this girl liked Jayce
And, somehow, by a peculiar twist of fate, the token black girl is thrown out of the equation because we do not want blacks tainting our slash. What is more romantic? A man having a consensual relationship with an adult black woman, or deciding a five-year-old is his soul mate?
> Brunette
*Brunet, plus his hair is black. He's got his momma's hair.
> I had a great time and would love to do that again
You will also never see her again because Meljay is hetslop and this workaround involving white pussy is not.
Sounds like a reference to 'Coming Home', another hugely popular fic that had the author misremember details of her own plot.
> Mel broke off the engagement
Of course. We need her out of the way. Our soul mates are white-only.
> She had been accepted into the FBI
This fandom likes to say they are ACAB and yet they seem oddly comfortable making Cait a Fed. What do you think the Feds do in their spare time? Let's hope Cait is more competent than Kash Patel.
> Her name was Violet, she was one hell of a bad bitch
And he doesn't grasp that this Violet and his Violet are the same until he sees her. There's no curiosity there whatsoever. He doesn't even THINK to ask if they're the same.
ACAB but the cop is a Fed, ACAB and the butch lesbian is a part of the military. I guess it's out of the question to ask how many kids she's bombed?
> She'd wait until the next family dinner and serve you and Powder tamales spiked with laxatives
She doesn't even need to do that. A lot of those extra hot peppers act as natural laxatives. White people don't season they intestines.
> She moved to Florida to live with her sister after her husband passed away
What happened to her prestigious nursing job? Did she give that up? Did she retire? Details matter.
> He came out as transgender. He started transitioning earlier this year
But we don't put minors on cross-sex hormones, no sir. That's a transphobic lie. They always wait until they are 18 to get T.
> He's always been mature and knew who he wanted to be
He wanted Jayce to be his boyfriend at the ripe old age of FIVE. And Jayce took it to HEART. What is that if not pedophilia-adjacent?
> He's a good-looking guy
> Still misgenders said 'good-looking guy' in his memories
Lol. Lmao. It's almost as if he still sees the transman as a woman.
> Jayce wasn't a creep. Or a pedophile
You thought a baby was your literal soul mate. That's creepy as fuck, bro.
We needed to get Mel out of the way because white pussy is better. White pussy is what promises soul mates. The Belle Curve is clearly in his favour.
> I don't think I can be friends with her right now
No, but you can rekindle a relationship with a teenager that you decided was your soul mate as an infant. That's way more wholesome and cosmically aligned. Better keep those sperm donor children away from him, else he'll be thinking they're his soul mates, too.
You ready for 10k words of porn? If it's anything like this, maybe it'll go quicker. But we'll see how our infant soul mates finally grow up and convince each other they're actually gay men.
Here is Chapter 2. Our man gets to dive into his boypussy haver at the country club. The lines for this fic are:
- That pussy… perfectly smooth. Pale pink on the outside, with darker, plush labia swelling from the lighter skin, flushed full with heat and blood. And at the center, nestled between the folds, his clit jutted out - swollen, vivid, almost throbbing. It was the cutest little cock he had ever seen.
- Perfect boy with a perfect pussy. Mine.
- The scent rising from his cunt grew stronger with each breath: warm, musky, with a faint, intoxicating sweetness.
- “And I have to fuck you, I’m going to die if I don’t fuck you, I need to come inside you.”
Did you know the author has her PhD? She would like you to know she got her PhD.
> He can get married in my shithole
Hey, I thought we were supposed to avoid all the 'shithole countries' discourse. You know where that comes from, right? You can't be talking like Orange Man in your cuntboy porn.
> A half-feral lumberjack than a polished CEO
Oh we are crossing off all the boxes here: the gruff, older, lonely male with a big dick sticking it in the pale, white, pale, snow-white, alabastrine, swan-neck cuntboy over here. If you think I'm exaggerating, I am not - the author, like all other fujos, is obsessed with white skin.
> He didn't have to be the perfectly groomed, impeccable gentleman Mel had once paraded around
Always catching strays, this woman. These people really do not want that black woman in their slash. She is always written as someone who makes this man feel bad and/or humiliates him, and she needs to be humbled narratively by a character who he was in love with as a baby. We can't tolerate black pussy, but we can tolerate softcore pedophilia.
> Why had his fiancee left him?
Because she had to get the fuck out of the narrative because there are no niggers in slash. There are more trans Viktor fics than there are Meljay fics across the board. Fujos want white pussy to be stuffed, and white pussy only. White pride worldwide.
> Sitting beside him was...a boy. No, a young man
And he is dressing like a young Bjorn Andresen. That look is intentional as Bjorn was once considered the 'most beautiful boy alive' and the film that made him famous was set in a country club of sorts. Dressing like a twinky sailor is part of the appeal.
> His exposed shoulder was pale and smooth
We know he's white, thank you. The author proceeds to talk about said pale, white skin three more times.
> To the long, elegant neck adorned with a black ribbon choker, a delicate silver heart resting at the center
Very masc, wearing a heart choker. Usually troons like heart chokers. You couldn't aim for something more gender neutral like a brooch?
> Full lips, slightly parted
He does not have full lips. His lips look like that meme of white men having thin baby lips.
> They reminded him of Millie's eyes
This is the same kid he thought was his soul mate at the grand ole age of infancy, btw.
> Want to see my ID?
Considering most Arcane fans are American, the legal drinking age is 21. They never set it in Europe or European laws where you can start drinking at 16.
> He hadn't even realized until recently that men interested him at all. It had always been women, always Mel
Now, are you into men with actual dicks, or 'boypussy' havers? Are these men a diverse selection, or are they white? Because if you ain't taking black dick I'm not believing for a second that you're diverse or bisexual. Fujos hate nothing more than their paper-bag brown man getting topped by a man darker than them.
> He caught himself staring at a man
That 'man' has a vagina and is wearing a choker meant to highlight his female neck and wears perfume that are geared towards women. It's the most obvious hetslop bait there is.
> Something soft and sweet, like vanilla and citrus and the faintest hint of something floral
Very masc. These fujos want their boypussy bottom to be seen as a man, yet take no steps to actually make them masculine. They believe that the feminine one is ALWAYS the bottom and you cannot break that rule.
> What would he sound like riding Jayce's cock?
Never without the frog-voiced vocal fry. He'll sound the same. Want to place your bets on the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line being used?
> My fiancée broke off our engagement
I told you: No niggers in slash.
> That there isn't some girl waiting in your room, thinking she'll be the one you'll be fucking tonight
Awfully heteronormative to assume that, eh? Why would you think of a random girl when you're a True and Honest Man...unless you instinctively think of yourself as a woman?
> Though you definitely have that daddy vibe
BTW there is a "Dadson" week and that will happen in the first week of January. You can thank Fujofrankstein and her coterie of pedophiles for that.
> Pale, smooth, scattered with tiny moles
> Forget the milky skin that surely felt like silk under the fingertips
We know he's white, thank you. Keep talking about this white skin and I'll think you're auditioning for a remake of 'American History X'.
> Pressing their bodies together like he'd been waiting for this. For him.
You decided he was your soul mate when he was A) still referred to with female pronouns and B) when he was a literal fucking baby. All this talk about how musky his pussy smells isn't going to change that.
> His hands found V's slim waist and gripped hard
But is it small enough where his thumbs can meet in the middle?
> V's skin, God, warm, impossibly soft, exactly the kind of softness Jayce wanted to get addicted to
Get that? He's totally gay he wants warm, soft, impossibly smooth skin that even the greatest twinks can't achieve. It almost as if he has a female preference, while insisting he is gay. I ain't never seen him get on his knees to suck cock.
> That it was my cock you were choking on the day before
This could be really nice dirty talk, were it not for the fact that this author cannot stop comparing Viktor to Mel and had Jayce consider a literal infant his soul mate.
> Every dick will feel too small, too pathetic next to mine
Anyone want to place your bets on how big he is? I'm guessing 10 inches. In any case, I can't help but notice he is bragging about his dick size in relation to vaginal penetration. If you're gay, how come you aren't thinking of other guy's dicks compared to yours?
> He would have thrown V over his shoulder and sprinted down the hallway to his room
He's just gonna pop that unblooded girlchild, dontchaknow.
> V fit against him perfectly. Naturally. Like he was meant to be there
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia and you are having 'natural' sex to begin with. This man insists he is gay, yet thinks vagina is the most compatible for him. Really makes you think.
True to form, we always have the 'gay' man be open minded and understanding rather than be betrayed and disgusted that the twink he thought was super cute and had a super cute dick has a vagina instead. We can tolerate rape-by-deception or misleading behaviour, but we draw the line at transphobia.
> His voice has trembled because he'd needed reassurance, because he deserved to hear exactly how Jayce saw him
He sees him as a 'perfect pussy' who has a nice musky vagina, unlike his former black girlfriend. If you think I am joking about the pussy thing, I am not. Also, very masc to start crying about your identity as a pussy-owner. You'd think you'd be proud over converting a 'gay' man with it.
> Revealing pale skin
We know he's white, thank you.
> He'd dealt with bras before, but this one had far too many hooks
He sounds totally homosexual. He's always dealt with bras, but never anal prep to take a dick. Weird, huh?
> His sweet, perfect breasts...fuck. They were small, yes, definitely smaller than Mel's
Here we go again comparing your chicken-wing vagina owner to a black woman. She has an ass, lips, and hips. Viktor does not.
> They were flawless - soft, inviting, almost unreal
What you're missing: chafed nipples from the binder, bruised ribs, a foul, sweaty smell, and maybe a few fungal infections here or there. That shit isn't going to smell heavenly - it's going to smell like a jock strap.
> At one point he even tried to take the entire breast into his mouth
> It wasn't going to work
If he can wrap his mouth around that tiny 'dick' of his, he can suck back an A-cup titty.
> Those perfect breasts
An an Eggo waffle has more give and fluff than them.
> His vision went red and there was a ringing in his ears
White pussy do be like that.
> That pussy...perfectly smooth
What, no Tarzan pubes? That is a first. He really was leaning into the sailor twink, wasn't he?
> Pale pink on the outside, with darker, plush labia swelling from the lighter skin
We even get racial comparisons with fucking labias. Black women, step aside - pale pink labias are where it's at.
> And at the center, nestled between the folds, his clit jutted out - smaller, vivid, almost throbbing. It was the cutest little cock he had ever seen
It is just a clit. He's not on T. Most trans authors don't even GIVE Viktor a big t-dick even when they write about it; it is Jayce and Jayce along that has the proud and tall male genitalia (compare 430 top Viktor trans fics to over 1100 bottom Viktor trans fics). It's almost as if they are writing heterosexual sex with the labels swapped and a bit of racial warfare sprinkled in.
> Perfect boy with a perfect pussy
At least you can argue you aren't 'totally gay' because you don't have to take Tyrone up your ass.
> The scent rising from V's cunt grew stronger with each breath; warm, musky with a faint, intoxicating sweetness
That's right: that white pussy smells so good it acts like a lure to feral lumberjacks. You choose the bear? Nah, the bear chooses you with that pussy perfume!
> His milky skin yielding beneath his teeth
Ah yes, give me more of that milky, pale, alabaster, pale, moonlight, pale, white, pale, white, milky, alabastrine, ivory, swan-neck pale skin.
> V was entirely different
In what way? Is it the fact he identifies as a man that makes it different? His vagina is the same as the other ones you've fucked, including the black one that turned you off all women, allegedly. Or is he addictive because he's white and the 'femboy' you won't feel emasculated by?
> Closing his lips around V's hardened cock
He isn't on T; you can't even call it that. It is just a clit.
> An entrance that resisted even his tongue
Let me guess. He's a virgin.
> Jayce could have come right then, without a single touch, just from imagining how impossibly tight and perfect V would feel when the moment finally came to fuck him
I told ya: white pussy hits different. Just look what it does to lonely lumberjacks with axes in their pants like this.
> God you're so tight. You're not a virgin, right?
In a twist of luck, he is not, but that only means our Latino beast here doesn't like competition. Only he can see that pretty pink, smooth pussy with the red labia.
> Felt a flash of something sharp and territorial tighten in his chest
Uh oh, are we mate-guarding?
> Jayce's thumb teasing V's clit
We're back to this and not the cock language, eh?
> The moment V finished, he guided him straight into a third
For the record, he has five orgasms in this.
> Pretty impressive. For an old man
You ain't seen impressive until a 50-year-old comes three times in a row while remaining hard. That's your six million dollar man right there.
> It was hard as a rock, flushed red with arousal and leaking
> V's eyes widened - clearly impressed, curiosity darkening into something deeper
There is no mention of how big his dick is, but we can safety say it's 9 inches or above, and 4 inches or so thick. Viktor wants to gargle on it, but not before the author makes sure to mention how Mel was a dick-shamer:
> Jayce knew he was well-endowed. His partners had always been impressed
> Gets upset when his former fiancée talks about his dick size
Meanwhile, he was just bragging to Viktor about how big it was and how no one will ever compare to it. It's fine for him to brag, but not Mel? Sounds like it's another way of showing how she was such a nasty bitch while this tiny white 'femboy' is the more perfect one.
> You said I'd be choking on your dick tonight
Correct. Now our 32-year-old senior can't decide whether he wants this to be a one-time thing or to be the beast marking his territory and claiming what's his for eternity. Gotta wash the taste of black pussy out of his mouth somehow.
> I have to fuck you, I'm going to die if I don't fuck you, I need to come inside you
Mantra of every dick-owner.
Hang on a minute. Did you not just say you wanted to mark Viktor to show that he was taken? Promise him that no other dick would compare to yours? Make him crave for it every moment of his waking life? Did you not admit you were lonely and wanted company? Where the fuck is this 'NO MICHAEL DON'T LEAVE ME HERE' shit coming from?
> Did he want Jayce to take him raw?
> Testosterone wasn't exactly reliable birth control, right?
Correct, it isn't. But there hasn't been any reference to Viktor being on it, because normally these authors explicitly talk about some kind of bottom growth. This one did not, and said that V was pre top surgery and 'everything'. I also press X to doubt because he has virtually no hair anywhere when T causes them to sprout Tarzan pubes on their pelvic bone and in the cracks of their ass. He's smooth as a stick of butter here. That waxing regimen can only do so much.
> How much hotter it would be to see himself spill inside V and watch it slowly drip out of him
Wow, it's almost as if your biological instincts are coming through and all you want to do is breed - and you know exactly which sex to do it with.
> Why did you bring them? Were you planning to meet someone here?
Are you really asking that when hookups happen at weddings all the time? You went to a stranger's bedroom - as an underage drinker no less - to get fucked. Why wouldn't the man have a condom?
> V destroyed him
White pussy hits so hard and so well it's like a second K-T event - not like that black coochie, which the author brings up AGAIN:
> It had to hurt - Jayce knew that
This guy is allegedly into men and has heard plenty of men praise his dick (and never complained about that, btw) but has never taken one himself, let alone met one who has a dick bigger than him. I am guessing he is 'gay in name only' and prefers women as I've said before. He doesn't actually like real men.
> Being inside V...there were no words for it. Jayce couldn't understand how he'd fit it all
Fit all 9-10-11-12 inches, you say? This is magical trans pussy time. You can fit a Patriot missile up there.
> It felt different from anyone else. Different from Mel
In what way is this vagina different from hers? Is it because Viktor is the pristine white pussy and hers was not? Did it stink? Did it make your mouth curdle instead of water from its delicious musky scent? Do elaborate on that. I want to read more on how fujos rate vaginas between the races.
> He was sure he was rubbing against V's cervix
And so did centaur Jayce. Do you have a literal horse cock?
> You're so big...I've never felt so full
Words every woman wants to say, but can't. Thank God for reach around het smut.
> He drove into him like a man unhinged
> Moved like a wild animal now, uncoordinated, uncontrolled, driven purely by instincts. He took him like a man possessed
Ah, making the brown man an animal again, I see. Something about bearded Jayce = bestial in these people's heads.
> He began to stimulate V's clit with fast, purposeful movements
I guess we stopped calling it a cock compared to that Mexican man meat, eh?
> Something animal and unrestrained
We know, you just wrote that.
> This was the best sex and best orgasm he had ever had
You don't say. You didn't have any great orgasms with your black fiancée that you didn't like praising your dick while praising said dick to your - ahem - preferred race, but this hits different. White pussy reigns supreme, now and forever.
Aww are we pair-bonding? We're pair bonding. He wants to stay with the soul mate he declared such from when he was baby.
> Couldn't make himself let V go. He needed him, needed his warmth, his closeness
He needs to make sure his baby soul mate is all grown up, you know?
> A possessive satisfaction at the knowledge that anyone else who saw V would know exactly what he'd been doing
They'd think he was a victim of domestic violence.
Jayce wakes up alone and figures out that Cait and Vi forgot their cake, so he has to go and pick it up. Before he realizes his femboy is gone, he finds his choker and a note with his phone number on it. Before he leaves to pick up the cake, he masturbates three times - once with the choker, once with the note, another in the shower - and goes to the rehearsal dinner. The cliffhanger? When he sees Vander and his family there, Viktor turns around and LE GASP! it's the same angel he fucked in bed! Who could have possibly predicted this? Fantastic writing from a PhD holder. I'm scandalized.
Have you ever taken strange mushrooms in the woods that make you slaughter a deer with your own hands and teeth and fuck madly in -20 C weather? No? Well let this be your very first shroom trip. The author promises that this is the most complex things structurally she's ever written.
> The forest is not a place for people used to luxury
> Devoid of luxury, the forest does still have much to offer. The forest is a place of plenty
Almost as if...it's a place of luxury, despite being devoid of luxury, in a place where people are not used to luxury.
> Fluorescein
That is a very specific reference. It also wouldn't stick to his brain, it would flow through the veins of his brain.
> Viktor was not versed in mycology
> Eats the nearest mushrooms he can and is surprised to find he's tripping the fuck out
He is lucky he did not eat the poisonous ones. Nothing like escaping death only to die again because you decided to devour some death caps (see? I can alliterate too).
As for Jayce, while he doesn't eat any mushrooms, he has a grand total of three speaking lines in this story, and they are all centered around saying Viktor's name.
> The flayed-open carcass of what was once a small deer
Not only do those mushrooms make him trip balls, it grants him inhuman strength because he was able to overpower an 150 lb animal. It also protects him from food poisoning and intestinal parasites. No one likes going down on some arcane pussy and pulling a tapeworm out with your beard.
> Viktor crawled to Jayce
> Pushed himself to his knees
He's already on his knees. 'Raised himself up on his knees' makes more sense.
> Using his bloodied hands to push Jayce by his shoulders to the forest floor
...on his knees? That's quite the height difference.
I wasn't joking about Jayce only having three lines. He says them like he's an NPC. Did he lose all his intelligence after he got zapped out of existence? It appears so.
> Cruor
Another word for gore. Better off in better hands.
No, literally, that's all this fuckwad says. It's like he's a programmable Elmo.
> Their skin was hardly touching
> Describes their skin literally touching
And Viktor is literally being held, because Jayce's hand is gripping his thigh.
> Jayce had imagined this moment a million times since the day they'd met
Does that include deer meat in his teeth? This is by far the most metal thing I've ever seen a pooner do. Forget tradwives: this one went out and killed an animal Red Sonja style!
> He was not that man anymore
Well all you are capable of is saying his name like a broken NPC, so it's clear you lost a few standard deviations while drinking salamander shit.
> Though it had been since leaving Piltover he'd had it
*He hadn't had it since he left Piltover
> The slow crawl of Jayce through him like a fireplace in his core
This doesn't make sense.
> Viktor kissed Jayce, and it tasted like blood
Yeah, because his mouth is filled with deer blood. He didn't spit it out.
> He could never be disgusted by the taste of Viktor, gore and all
You won't be saying that when you've got a tapeworm wriggling up there. I don't think 'I BOTTOM FOR TAPEWORMS' looks good on a t-shirt or boxers.
And there's the very last line Jayce speaks. I was not joking about those being his only lines.
> Viktor rolled off Jayce and onto the forest floor, forcing Jayce with him
This basically means he did a Twister move to A) dismount Jayce B) drag Jayce with him while turning around in the process. Mentally, it looks really weird. Did he twist around on his dick, or something?
> The look he found made him feel like predator turned prey
Odd how that keeps happening. Why is the top man, the 'cis male', the predator and you the uwu sweet lamb?
> Nor to be faced with the sight of his red, soaking cunt, shy between his legs
Ah, we've got the 'his cunt fluttered shyly' line. Why would it be shy when he mounted Jayce first? That is a brave and bold pussy, not a shy one.
> Spurring him to continue to treat Viktor as the animal he was so desperate to act like, affording him no agency
Funny how this only happens to him. I've read to read trans Jayce be treated like this; if he is, it's never with the same gusto, insistence, or popularity. It only goes one way.
> Jayce thrust the tips of his thumbs into Viktor, testing the give of the elastic flesh of him
Well thank God you clarified that this 'hole' is actually his vagina, otherwise I'd think you were fingering his asshole.
> His thumbs were able to pull his hole open wide enough that he could fit four fingers inside, if not his whole hand
Damn, those mushrooms really do grant you superpowers. I bet you could shove some shrubbery up there.
> Peering into the darkness inside, he wished only for a light so he could gaze upon the warm, pink depths of his partner
Should've asked for a flashlight before you were reduced to atoms. Then you can play gyno with your deer-eating waifu.
> Viscous, wet slick still poured from him
I just think of bacon grease.
> Viktor's body was pliant beneath him, willing to be whatever Jayce needed him to be to chase his spoils
It's really something how he is literally a brainless animal in this, having no lines other than saying Viktor's name, and the only thing he does is spread Viktor's vagina until it looks like a stretched-out finger puppet.
> Cutting through the air and Jayce's skin and the very core of him like glorious knives, carving out the shape of them
Carving out the shape of what? The knives? Saying that Viktor's moans 'carve out the core of him like glorious knives' works just as well, if not better.
> Diluted by his own spend but stark against the red of his pussy regardless
Interesting that he wanted a light to see the insides of his pussy, yet can see the red of it just fine in the moonlight. Bloody cum eating aside, Jayce only having three lines just floors me. I told you he sounds like a malfunctioning Elmo doll, where all he can say is someone's name over and over before they drown him in the kiddie pool. As to what references were mentioned here, I couldn't be arsed to find them and neither do the readers.
BTW, this fic has already gotten bot comments. Looks like the Indians have finally found AO3.
The second chapter of that Battle of the Sexes: Serial Killer edition has been updated from our girl Cleo. Our Final Girl is upset he cannot use his 'feminine wiles' to win over the killer of the century, and now has to mope at home while furiously masturbating.
> He was restless, overeager, and overbearing
You know it's bad when there is a consensus among middle schoolers that you are overbearing. This will translate into possessiveness in adulthood, something that is rewarded rather than corrected.
> It didn't help that he'd always been chubby
Part and parcel of living in a Latino household. If you aren't DJ Spit skinny, you're fat. It's all those carbs, ese.
Vi swooping in there like a white saviour. Don't these kids know you don't pick on the Hispanic kids? They'll jump you - and in this case, this kid will jump on you like Eddie Guerrero.
Eleven is like sixteen in Latino years. Literally all he has to do is sit on these white kids.
Jayce goes through a growth spurt in seventh or eighth grade - the years when puberty hits - and everybody is shocked that the fat Latino lost weight and gained two feet in height. He's lankier and clumsier like a Divider, and Vi now has to retrain him because those long-ass limbs can't hit. Nevertheless, Vi is proud of him and continues to train him. One night, while they are sitting on the room enjoying the last few summer nights, Vi says her fathers - Silco and Vander - are going to adopt another kid. We find out that it's a baby girl named Millie that has health issues, and the reader is meant to conclude that this baby girl is actually Viktor, but we can't misgender babies like that just yet. We need to let the kindergartner teacher decide.
> The prettiest little girl he had ever seen, with huge golden eyes
> A connection immediate and effortless, like their souls recognized each other
He's feeling as if he's soul mates with a literal fucking baby. That's creepy as fuck. The author promises that there will be no pedophilia in this, but that is the closest thing to it. Thanks, this is the second fic I've read where he's in love with a baby.
> Millie had been born with a skeletal defect
I wonder if 'Millie' here is a reference to Millie Bobby Brown. If so, here's hoping he doesn't look 45 in his twenties.
> Even girls had started noticing him
I can't wait for the eventual reveal of, 'Um, actually, I've been gay this whole time' when he starts fucking Viktor in that 10k word smut chapter.
He didn't come out of his room but he will come out of the closet HEYO
> That's what phones are for
Wow, we're finally using modern technology for its intended purpose. You don't have to worry about losing friends when you've got Snapchat!
BTW, you wanna know how old baby Millie/Viktor is? Five.
And what does this five-year-old ask of him? That when she grows up he'll be his boyfriend.
I've read instances of 50-year-old Jayce cumming three times in a row and maintaining an erection. You'll be fine at the grand ole age of *checks tags* 32.
> Not this love
Still weird to think a fucking baby, and then a young child, is your soul mate. You should be soul mates with the sex offender registry instead.
> Somehow, by some cosmic miracle, this girl liked Jayce
And, somehow, by a peculiar twist of fate, the token black girl is thrown out of the equation because we do not want blacks tainting our slash. What is more romantic? A man having a consensual relationship with an adult black woman, or deciding a five-year-old is his soul mate?
> Brunette
*Brunet, plus his hair is black. He's got his momma's hair.
> I had a great time and would love to do that again
You will also never see her again because Meljay is hetslop and this workaround involving white pussy is not.
Sounds like a reference to 'Coming Home', another hugely popular fic that had the author misremember details of her own plot.
> Mel broke off the engagement
Of course. We need her out of the way. Our soul mates are white-only.
> She had been accepted into the FBI
This fandom likes to say they are ACAB and yet they seem oddly comfortable making Cait a Fed. What do you think the Feds do in their spare time? Let's hope Cait is more competent than Kash Patel.
> Her name was Violet, she was one hell of a bad bitch
And he doesn't grasp that this Violet and his Violet are the same until he sees her. There's no curiosity there whatsoever. He doesn't even THINK to ask if they're the same.
ACAB but the cop is a Fed, ACAB and the butch lesbian is a part of the military. I guess it's out of the question to ask how many kids she's bombed?
> She'd wait until the next family dinner and serve you and Powder tamales spiked with laxatives
She doesn't even need to do that. A lot of those extra hot peppers act as natural laxatives. White people don't season they intestines.
> She moved to Florida to live with her sister after her husband passed away
What happened to her prestigious nursing job? Did she give that up? Did she retire? Details matter.
> He came out as transgender. He started transitioning earlier this year
But we don't put minors on cross-sex hormones, no sir. That's a transphobic lie. They always wait until they are 18 to get T.
> He's always been mature and knew who he wanted to be
He wanted Jayce to be his boyfriend at the ripe old age of FIVE. And Jayce took it to HEART. What is that if not pedophilia-adjacent?
> He's a good-looking guy
> Still misgenders said 'good-looking guy' in his memories
Lol. Lmao. It's almost as if he still sees the transman as a woman.
> Jayce wasn't a creep. Or a pedophile
You thought a baby was your literal soul mate. That's creepy as fuck, bro.
We needed to get Mel out of the way because white pussy is better. White pussy is what promises soul mates. The Belle Curve is clearly in his favour.
> I don't think I can be friends with her right now
No, but you can rekindle a relationship with a teenager that you decided was your soul mate as an infant. That's way more wholesome and cosmically aligned. Better keep those sperm donor children away from him, else he'll be thinking they're his soul mates, too.
You ready for 10k words of porn? If it's anything like this, maybe it'll go quicker. But we'll see how our infant soul mates finally grow up and convince each other they're actually gay men.
Here is Chapter 2. Our man gets to dive into his boypussy haver at the country club. The lines for this fic are:
- That pussy… perfectly smooth. Pale pink on the outside, with darker, plush labia swelling from the lighter skin, flushed full with heat and blood. And at the center, nestled between the folds, his clit jutted out - swollen, vivid, almost throbbing. It was the cutest little cock he had ever seen.
- Perfect boy with a perfect pussy. Mine.
- The scent rising from his cunt grew stronger with each breath: warm, musky, with a faint, intoxicating sweetness.
- “And I have to fuck you, I’m going to die if I don’t fuck you, I need to come inside you.”
Did you know the author has her PhD? She would like you to know she got her PhD.
> He can get married in my shithole
Hey, I thought we were supposed to avoid all the 'shithole countries' discourse. You know where that comes from, right? You can't be talking like Orange Man in your cuntboy porn.
> A half-feral lumberjack than a polished CEO
Oh we are crossing off all the boxes here: the gruff, older, lonely male with a big dick sticking it in the pale, white, pale, snow-white, alabastrine, swan-neck cuntboy over here. If you think I'm exaggerating, I am not - the author, like all other fujos, is obsessed with white skin.
> He didn't have to be the perfectly groomed, impeccable gentleman Mel had once paraded around
Always catching strays, this woman. These people really do not want that black woman in their slash. She is always written as someone who makes this man feel bad and/or humiliates him, and she needs to be humbled narratively by a character who he was in love with as a baby. We can't tolerate black pussy, but we can tolerate softcore pedophilia.
> Why had his fiancee left him?
Because she had to get the fuck out of the narrative because there are no niggers in slash. There are more trans Viktor fics than there are Meljay fics across the board. Fujos want white pussy to be stuffed, and white pussy only. White pride worldwide.
> Sitting beside him was...a boy. No, a young man
And he is dressing like a young Bjorn Andresen. That look is intentional as Bjorn was once considered the 'most beautiful boy alive' and the film that made him famous was set in a country club of sorts. Dressing like a twinky sailor is part of the appeal.
> His exposed shoulder was pale and smooth
We know he's white, thank you. The author proceeds to talk about said pale, white skin three more times.
> To the long, elegant neck adorned with a black ribbon choker, a delicate silver heart resting at the center
Very masc, wearing a heart choker. Usually troons like heart chokers. You couldn't aim for something more gender neutral like a brooch?
> Full lips, slightly parted
He does not have full lips. His lips look like that meme of white men having thin baby lips.
> They reminded him of Millie's eyes
This is the same kid he thought was his soul mate at the grand ole age of infancy, btw.
> Want to see my ID?
Considering most Arcane fans are American, the legal drinking age is 21. They never set it in Europe or European laws where you can start drinking at 16.
> He hadn't even realized until recently that men interested him at all. It had always been women, always Mel
Now, are you into men with actual dicks, or 'boypussy' havers? Are these men a diverse selection, or are they white? Because if you ain't taking black dick I'm not believing for a second that you're diverse or bisexual. Fujos hate nothing more than their paper-bag brown man getting topped by a man darker than them.
> He caught himself staring at a man
That 'man' has a vagina and is wearing a choker meant to highlight his female neck and wears perfume that are geared towards women. It's the most obvious hetslop bait there is.
> Something soft and sweet, like vanilla and citrus and the faintest hint of something floral
Very masc. These fujos want their boypussy bottom to be seen as a man, yet take no steps to actually make them masculine. They believe that the feminine one is ALWAYS the bottom and you cannot break that rule.
> What would he sound like riding Jayce's cock?
Never without the frog-voiced vocal fry. He'll sound the same. Want to place your bets on the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle' line being used?
> My fiancée broke off our engagement
I told you: No niggers in slash.
> That there isn't some girl waiting in your room, thinking she'll be the one you'll be fucking tonight
Awfully heteronormative to assume that, eh? Why would you think of a random girl when you're a True and Honest Man...unless you instinctively think of yourself as a woman?
> Though you definitely have that daddy vibe
BTW there is a "Dadson" week and that will happen in the first week of January. You can thank Fujofrankstein and her coterie of pedophiles for that.
> Pale, smooth, scattered with tiny moles
> Forget the milky skin that surely felt like silk under the fingertips
We know he's white, thank you. Keep talking about this white skin and I'll think you're auditioning for a remake of 'American History X'.
> Pressing their bodies together like he'd been waiting for this. For him.
You decided he was your soul mate when he was A) still referred to with female pronouns and B) when he was a literal fucking baby. All this talk about how musky his pussy smells isn't going to change that.
> His hands found V's slim waist and gripped hard
But is it small enough where his thumbs can meet in the middle?
> V's skin, God, warm, impossibly soft, exactly the kind of softness Jayce wanted to get addicted to
Get that? He's totally gay he wants warm, soft, impossibly smooth skin that even the greatest twinks can't achieve. It almost as if he has a female preference, while insisting he is gay. I ain't never seen him get on his knees to suck cock.
> That it was my cock you were choking on the day before
This could be really nice dirty talk, were it not for the fact that this author cannot stop comparing Viktor to Mel and had Jayce consider a literal infant his soul mate.
> Every dick will feel too small, too pathetic next to mine
Anyone want to place your bets on how big he is? I'm guessing 10 inches. In any case, I can't help but notice he is bragging about his dick size in relation to vaginal penetration. If you're gay, how come you aren't thinking of other guy's dicks compared to yours?
> He would have thrown V over his shoulder and sprinted down the hallway to his room
He's just gonna pop that unblooded girlchild, dontchaknow.
> V fit against him perfectly. Naturally. Like he was meant to be there
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia and you are having 'natural' sex to begin with. This man insists he is gay, yet thinks vagina is the most compatible for him. Really makes you think.
True to form, we always have the 'gay' man be open minded and understanding rather than be betrayed and disgusted that the twink he thought was super cute and had a super cute dick has a vagina instead. We can tolerate rape-by-deception or misleading behaviour, but we draw the line at transphobia.
> His voice has trembled because he'd needed reassurance, because he deserved to hear exactly how Jayce saw him
He sees him as a 'perfect pussy' who has a nice musky vagina, unlike his former black girlfriend. If you think I am joking about the pussy thing, I am not. Also, very masc to start crying about your identity as a pussy-owner. You'd think you'd be proud over converting a 'gay' man with it.
> Revealing pale skin
We know he's white, thank you.
> He'd dealt with bras before, but this one had far too many hooks
He sounds totally homosexual. He's always dealt with bras, but never anal prep to take a dick. Weird, huh?
> His sweet, perfect breasts...fuck. They were small, yes, definitely smaller than Mel's
Here we go again comparing your chicken-wing vagina owner to a black woman. She has an ass, lips, and hips. Viktor does not.
> They were flawless - soft, inviting, almost unreal
What you're missing: chafed nipples from the binder, bruised ribs, a foul, sweaty smell, and maybe a few fungal infections here or there. That shit isn't going to smell heavenly - it's going to smell like a jock strap.
> At one point he even tried to take the entire breast into his mouth
> It wasn't going to work
If he can wrap his mouth around that tiny 'dick' of his, he can suck back an A-cup titty.
> Those perfect breasts
An an Eggo waffle has more give and fluff than them.
> His vision went red and there was a ringing in his ears
White pussy do be like that.
> That pussy...perfectly smooth
What, no Tarzan pubes? That is a first. He really was leaning into the sailor twink, wasn't he?
> Pale pink on the outside, with darker, plush labia swelling from the lighter skin
We even get racial comparisons with fucking labias. Black women, step aside - pale pink labias are where it's at.
> And at the center, nestled between the folds, his clit jutted out - smaller, vivid, almost throbbing. It was the cutest little cock he had ever seen
It is just a clit. He's not on T. Most trans authors don't even GIVE Viktor a big t-dick even when they write about it; it is Jayce and Jayce along that has the proud and tall male genitalia (compare 430 top Viktor trans fics to over 1100 bottom Viktor trans fics). It's almost as if they are writing heterosexual sex with the labels swapped and a bit of racial warfare sprinkled in.
> Perfect boy with a perfect pussy
At least you can argue you aren't 'totally gay' because you don't have to take Tyrone up your ass.
> The scent rising from V's cunt grew stronger with each breath; warm, musky with a faint, intoxicating sweetness
That's right: that white pussy smells so good it acts like a lure to feral lumberjacks. You choose the bear? Nah, the bear chooses you with that pussy perfume!
> His milky skin yielding beneath his teeth
Ah yes, give me more of that milky, pale, alabaster, pale, moonlight, pale, white, pale, white, milky, alabastrine, ivory, swan-neck pale skin.
> V was entirely different
In what way? Is it the fact he identifies as a man that makes it different? His vagina is the same as the other ones you've fucked, including the black one that turned you off all women, allegedly. Or is he addictive because he's white and the 'femboy' you won't feel emasculated by?
> Closing his lips around V's hardened cock
He isn't on T; you can't even call it that. It is just a clit.
> An entrance that resisted even his tongue
Let me guess. He's a virgin.
> Jayce could have come right then, without a single touch, just from imagining how impossibly tight and perfect V would feel when the moment finally came to fuck him
I told ya: white pussy hits different. Just look what it does to lonely lumberjacks with axes in their pants like this.
> God you're so tight. You're not a virgin, right?
In a twist of luck, he is not, but that only means our Latino beast here doesn't like competition. Only he can see that pretty pink, smooth pussy with the red labia.
> Felt a flash of something sharp and territorial tighten in his chest
Uh oh, are we mate-guarding?
> Jayce's thumb teasing V's clit
We're back to this and not the cock language, eh?
> The moment V finished, he guided him straight into a third
For the record, he has five orgasms in this.
> Pretty impressive. For an old man
You ain't seen impressive until a 50-year-old comes three times in a row while remaining hard. That's your six million dollar man right there.
> It was hard as a rock, flushed red with arousal and leaking
> V's eyes widened - clearly impressed, curiosity darkening into something deeper
There is no mention of how big his dick is, but we can safety say it's 9 inches or above, and 4 inches or so thick. Viktor wants to gargle on it, but not before the author makes sure to mention how Mel was a dick-shamer:
> Jayce knew he was well-endowed. His partners had always been impressed
> Gets upset when his former fiancée talks about his dick size
Meanwhile, he was just bragging to Viktor about how big it was and how no one will ever compare to it. It's fine for him to brag, but not Mel? Sounds like it's another way of showing how she was such a nasty bitch while this tiny white 'femboy' is the more perfect one.
> You said I'd be choking on your dick tonight
Correct. Now our 32-year-old senior can't decide whether he wants this to be a one-time thing or to be the beast marking his territory and claiming what's his for eternity. Gotta wash the taste of black pussy out of his mouth somehow.
> I have to fuck you, I'm going to die if I don't fuck you, I need to come inside you
Mantra of every dick-owner.
Hang on a minute. Did you not just say you wanted to mark Viktor to show that he was taken? Promise him that no other dick would compare to yours? Make him crave for it every moment of his waking life? Did you not admit you were lonely and wanted company? Where the fuck is this 'NO MICHAEL DON'T LEAVE ME HERE' shit coming from?
> Did he want Jayce to take him raw?
> Testosterone wasn't exactly reliable birth control, right?
Correct, it isn't. But there hasn't been any reference to Viktor being on it, because normally these authors explicitly talk about some kind of bottom growth. This one did not, and said that V was pre top surgery and 'everything'. I also press X to doubt because he has virtually no hair anywhere when T causes them to sprout Tarzan pubes on their pelvic bone and in the cracks of their ass. He's smooth as a stick of butter here. That waxing regimen can only do so much.
> How much hotter it would be to see himself spill inside V and watch it slowly drip out of him
Wow, it's almost as if your biological instincts are coming through and all you want to do is breed - and you know exactly which sex to do it with.
> Why did you bring them? Were you planning to meet someone here?
Are you really asking that when hookups happen at weddings all the time? You went to a stranger's bedroom - as an underage drinker no less - to get fucked. Why wouldn't the man have a condom?
> V destroyed him
White pussy hits so hard and so well it's like a second K-T event - not like that black coochie, which the author brings up AGAIN:
> It had to hurt - Jayce knew that
This guy is allegedly into men and has heard plenty of men praise his dick (and never complained about that, btw) but has never taken one himself, let alone met one who has a dick bigger than him. I am guessing he is 'gay in name only' and prefers women as I've said before. He doesn't actually like real men.
> Being inside V...there were no words for it. Jayce couldn't understand how he'd fit it all
Fit all 9-10-11-12 inches, you say? This is magical trans pussy time. You can fit a Patriot missile up there.
> It felt different from anyone else. Different from Mel
In what way is this vagina different from hers? Is it because Viktor is the pristine white pussy and hers was not? Did it stink? Did it make your mouth curdle instead of water from its delicious musky scent? Do elaborate on that. I want to read more on how fujos rate vaginas between the races.
> He was sure he was rubbing against V's cervix
And so did centaur Jayce. Do you have a literal horse cock?
> You're so big...I've never felt so full
Words every woman wants to say, but can't. Thank God for reach around het smut.
> He drove into him like a man unhinged
> Moved like a wild animal now, uncoordinated, uncontrolled, driven purely by instincts. He took him like a man possessed
Ah, making the brown man an animal again, I see. Something about bearded Jayce = bestial in these people's heads.
> He began to stimulate V's clit with fast, purposeful movements
I guess we stopped calling it a cock compared to that Mexican man meat, eh?
> Something animal and unrestrained
We know, you just wrote that.
> This was the best sex and best orgasm he had ever had
You don't say. You didn't have any great orgasms with your black fiancée that you didn't like praising your dick while praising said dick to your - ahem - preferred race, but this hits different. White pussy reigns supreme, now and forever.
Aww are we pair-bonding? We're pair bonding. He wants to stay with the soul mate he declared such from when he was baby.
> Couldn't make himself let V go. He needed him, needed his warmth, his closeness
He needs to make sure his baby soul mate is all grown up, you know?
> A possessive satisfaction at the knowledge that anyone else who saw V would know exactly what he'd been doing
They'd think he was a victim of domestic violence.
Jayce wakes up alone and figures out that Cait and Vi forgot their cake, so he has to go and pick it up. Before he realizes his femboy is gone, he finds his choker and a note with his phone number on it. Before he leaves to pick up the cake, he masturbates three times - once with the choker, once with the note, another in the shower - and goes to the rehearsal dinner. The cliffhanger? When he sees Vander and his family there, Viktor turns around and LE GASP! it's the same angel he fucked in bed! Who could have possibly predicted this? Fantastic writing from a PhD holder. I'm scandalized.
Have you ever taken strange mushrooms in the woods that make you slaughter a deer with your own hands and teeth and fuck madly in -20 C weather? No? Well let this be your very first shroom trip. The author promises that this is the most complex things structurally she's ever written.
> The forest is not a place for people used to luxury
> Devoid of luxury, the forest does still have much to offer. The forest is a place of plenty
Almost as if...it's a place of luxury, despite being devoid of luxury, in a place where people are not used to luxury.
> Fluorescein
That is a very specific reference. It also wouldn't stick to his brain, it would flow through the veins of his brain.
> Viktor was not versed in mycology
> Eats the nearest mushrooms he can and is surprised to find he's tripping the fuck out
He is lucky he did not eat the poisonous ones. Nothing like escaping death only to die again because you decided to devour some death caps (see? I can alliterate too).
As for Jayce, while he doesn't eat any mushrooms, he has a grand total of three speaking lines in this story, and they are all centered around saying Viktor's name.
> The flayed-open carcass of what was once a small deer
Not only do those mushrooms make him trip balls, it grants him inhuman strength because he was able to overpower an 150 lb animal. It also protects him from food poisoning and intestinal parasites. No one likes going down on some arcane pussy and pulling a tapeworm out with your beard.
> Viktor crawled to Jayce
> Pushed himself to his knees
He's already on his knees. 'Raised himself up on his knees' makes more sense.
> Using his bloodied hands to push Jayce by his shoulders to the forest floor
...on his knees? That's quite the height difference.
I wasn't joking about Jayce only having three lines. He says them like he's an NPC. Did he lose all his intelligence after he got zapped out of existence? It appears so.
> Cruor
Another word for gore. Better off in better hands.
No, literally, that's all this fuckwad says. It's like he's a programmable Elmo.
> Their skin was hardly touching
> Describes their skin literally touching
And Viktor is literally being held, because Jayce's hand is gripping his thigh.
> Jayce had imagined this moment a million times since the day they'd met
Does that include deer meat in his teeth? This is by far the most metal thing I've ever seen a pooner do. Forget tradwives: this one went out and killed an animal Red Sonja style!
> He was not that man anymore
Well all you are capable of is saying his name like a broken NPC, so it's clear you lost a few standard deviations while drinking salamander shit.
> Though it had been since leaving Piltover he'd had it
*He hadn't had it since he left Piltover
> The slow crawl of Jayce through him like a fireplace in his core
This doesn't make sense.
> Viktor kissed Jayce, and it tasted like blood
Yeah, because his mouth is filled with deer blood. He didn't spit it out.
> He could never be disgusted by the taste of Viktor, gore and all
You won't be saying that when you've got a tapeworm wriggling up there. I don't think 'I BOTTOM FOR TAPEWORMS' looks good on a t-shirt or boxers.
And there's the very last line Jayce speaks. I was not joking about those being his only lines.
> Viktor rolled off Jayce and onto the forest floor, forcing Jayce with him
This basically means he did a Twister move to A) dismount Jayce B) drag Jayce with him while turning around in the process. Mentally, it looks really weird. Did he twist around on his dick, or something?
> The look he found made him feel like predator turned prey
Odd how that keeps happening. Why is the top man, the 'cis male', the predator and you the uwu sweet lamb?
> Nor to be faced with the sight of his red, soaking cunt, shy between his legs
Ah, we've got the 'his cunt fluttered shyly' line. Why would it be shy when he mounted Jayce first? That is a brave and bold pussy, not a shy one.
> Spurring him to continue to treat Viktor as the animal he was so desperate to act like, affording him no agency
Funny how this only happens to him. I've read to read trans Jayce be treated like this; if he is, it's never with the same gusto, insistence, or popularity. It only goes one way.
> Jayce thrust the tips of his thumbs into Viktor, testing the give of the elastic flesh of him
Well thank God you clarified that this 'hole' is actually his vagina, otherwise I'd think you were fingering his asshole.
> His thumbs were able to pull his hole open wide enough that he could fit four fingers inside, if not his whole hand
Damn, those mushrooms really do grant you superpowers. I bet you could shove some shrubbery up there.
> Peering into the darkness inside, he wished only for a light so he could gaze upon the warm, pink depths of his partner
Should've asked for a flashlight before you were reduced to atoms. Then you can play gyno with your deer-eating waifu.
> Viscous, wet slick still poured from him
I just think of bacon grease.
> Viktor's body was pliant beneath him, willing to be whatever Jayce needed him to be to chase his spoils
It's really something how he is literally a brainless animal in this, having no lines other than saying Viktor's name, and the only thing he does is spread Viktor's vagina until it looks like a stretched-out finger puppet.
> Cutting through the air and Jayce's skin and the very core of him like glorious knives, carving out the shape of them
Carving out the shape of what? The knives? Saying that Viktor's moans 'carve out the core of him like glorious knives' works just as well, if not better.
> Diluted by his own spend but stark against the red of his pussy regardless
Interesting that he wanted a light to see the insides of his pussy, yet can see the red of it just fine in the moonlight. Bloody cum eating aside, Jayce only having three lines just floors me. I told you he sounds like a malfunctioning Elmo doll, where all he can say is someone's name over and over before they drown him in the kiddie pool. As to what references were mentioned here, I couldn't be arsed to find them and neither do the readers.
BTW, this fic has already gotten bot comments. Looks like the Indians have finally found AO3.
The second chapter of that Battle of the Sexes: Serial Killer edition has been updated from our girl Cleo. Our Final Girl is upset he cannot use his 'feminine wiles' to win over the killer of the century, and now has to mope at home while furiously masturbating.
In the last chapter, our Final Girl realizes he cannot use his pussy to 'tame' the male serial killer he spent ages figuring out and winning over, and goes him to cry to his cat about his failure. He thinks of all the other women who have been murdered - including how Jinx lost a finger for him - and vomits. Did you know he was a freelance journalist? I sure didn't. He's a freelance journalist who 'tames' his targets with his pussy. Bet you didn't expect that on the CV, did ya?
Jayce, by contrast, keeps playing this cat-and-mouse game with a journalist who can't cover murder stories and instead has to talk about boring construction projects. He pays for his Starbucks order with a hilariously misspelled name - done deliberately as to show him he's been there - and Viktor is turned on as much as he is afraid (but mostly turned on). When he goes home, there's a gear hanging on his doorknob with coordinates etched on its teeth. Viktor finds them and breaks the cypher, and as a reward, he gets full blown, matte-printed photographs of him at a park. They aren't photographs taken by a mere stalker, no - they're portraits. It's meant to be tender and romantic, see. Viktor only gets offended when he sends him a picture of him petting his cat. THAT sends him into overdrive and he pens an angry 'STAY AWAY FROM MY CAT YOU PYSCHO' and, I shit you not, seeks out Etsy witches that he pays in cryptocurrency (or, to be specific, seeks out seedy ads that 'cast spells' on people).
Our stalker doesn't like being referred to as a psycho, so he goes to Viktor's apartment and waits there in the shadows until Viktor arrives. He makes sure to put away his groceries after he knocks him out and tells a neighbour he's just taking him to the hospital. He drives 60 in a 30 mph zone, lucky he doesn't run into a state trooper, and marvels at how the moonlight shines in our Final Girl's hair. When he wakes up, he is in a 'Saw' type scenario, where he has to solve complex chemical equations to break free, find the antidote, and get out. Jayce even talks over the intercom the way Jigsaw does, cryptic lines and everything, but that doesn't budge our genius Final Girl. He snorts at the clichés and finds out that this puzzle is solved by making an anticoagulant out of his blood - something that Jayce must've learned from going through his medical records. This causes a real shiver to go down Viktor's spine because our Jigsaw copycat means it. Viktor doesn't like the implications - metaphorical and literal - of giving his blood to a serial killer, but reasons that if his cat warmed up to him that quick, he doesn't have much to fear. He willingly gives up his arm and completes the formula, much to Jayce's delighted surprise. Our Final Girl even has time to snark about how he couldn't feed his cat dinner!
Jayce goes back to Viktor's home to feed his cat, and Viktor in the hour or so he's away, breaks free and then tries to lung at Jayce with his knife when he comes back. A mind as brilliant as he is has to know he cannot overpower a 6'2, 240 lb and above man in peak physicality like that. He quickly disarms him and puts him in a chokehold, causing our Final Dood to submit within seconds. Jayce takes him back home to his cat, saying 'until next time' so he can kidnap him again and put him in a new murder machine.
When Viktor returns home, he examines it and finds it untouched. He marvels at how Jayce is the perfect slasher and notes with some black humour that said perfect slasher put his groceries away. He goes room-to-room looking for more clues, and on his nightstand in the bedroom sits a case with a perfectly preserved finger - Jinx's finger. He calls her to see if she is alright, and has to bite back a sob to hear that she is untouched. He turns off the phone so she cannot call him back. He boots up his computer and goes to the forum where he and others discuss murder mysteries, and finds a message that says, 'I can't quite put my finger on it.' Very punny. Did the mods notice this? Our dood sees red - but before he can type out a Reddit response, he realizes that there are no new missing persons reports posted on the forum. They have all stopped because our dear slasher is lonely and has finally found his Final Girl waifu.
He goes a full week without getting any gifts, but when he does, it's another set of coordinates on a copper box. Initially, the coordinates are gibberish, leading him to places in the middle of the ocean, but he discovers that the letters all correspond to prime numbers - A:2 B:3 C:5 etc - and he figures out that the true coordinates lead him to an abandoned art deco theatre at the edge of the city, and he has to meet him there at 1:10 AM. This invitation is not merely a taunt, but a welcome to a private showing. He leaves immediately, and when he arrives, the area he goes to first is littered with broken mirrors, but the floor is brand new, covered in elaborate interlocking mechanisms. There's a brass lever that is in the OFF position and he goes to move it. This puzzle requires one to cross the length of the room for the duration of the song, but what Viktor figures out is that you're supposed to synchronize to each beat. He slaps the lever up at the song's crescendo, and the killing machine descends from the ceiling like a Resident Evil death trap. Viktor pulls his trump card and waits for the death machine to kill him, staring at the mirrors knowing Jayce will not allow it. He doesn't: he jumps through a false panel and whisks our boy out of the way to safety.
Well, not really - there's a huge piece of glass embedded in Jayce's arm, and he's upset that Jayce broke the rules of his game. Viktor sees his face (well, part of it) and realizes that he actually felt genuine terror during that near-death experience. He tells Viktor that the rules don't apply to him because he's perfect. This confession means that our serial killer is rewriting the 'rules of his universe'. Jayce tells him there's a first-aid kit behind one of the false mirror panels, and he sets to work patching him up. They have a little bonding moment where Jayce tells Viktor his name and Viktor has to pretend he's surprised by all of it. Jayce allows him to go home. He ponders his life's choices and how Jayce risked his entire game and MO to save him when he, logically, should have let him die. He realizes that this is more than an obsession and that the serial killer he built an entire profile on subverts his expectations: the killer wants to keep him and worship him, rather than hack him into pieces. He's breaking his own script for someone he views as perfect. Viktor finds this fascinating.
We cut to Jayce's POV. He is endlessly fascinated by Viktor and how he chose to break the rules; he deliberately did not solve a deadly puzzle to bait Jayce into saving him and it worked. Our killer, endlessly intrigued and even a little bit in love, goes to the forums where Viktor hangs out and builds a profile on him himself. He notes his 'lonely, intellectual arrogance' and goes 'wow, that's me'. He finds out his email by deducing his Czech accent and his sarcastically used 'nobody' in front of his VPN email (if he even uses one). We get this back-and-forth email exchange.
> He had taken a man's man and found the secret, gleaming gears inside
> He had his address
You'd think he'd already know it if he had access to his medical records or his IP. People have been phonebooked for less, and with greater ease (see Keffals and how a doorknob did him in).
I do think Fujo forgot how to use work skins, because she was able to use Instagram type messages in her 'you can be my full time daddy' fic. In any case, can you feel the higher end of the Bell Curve in these messages?
> I'm far too interesting to die without your express permission
Are you sure about that?
> Lover's Lever
Sounds like the brand name for a sex toy.
> It presented a binary choice
Whoa, there. Don't you know nature isn't binary? Nothing is binary. That's a transphobic microaggression right there. Where are all the gender diverse endings? Where is the polyamorous variables? Why does it have to be binary, you bigot?
> It requires two participants to function; a duet
Wow, that sounds awfully monogamous. Very patriarchal and heterosexual-coded.
We also get our first smut scene after this.
Never bring a knife to a gym bro. Bring an actual gun. You know you will never overpower him because that dreaded sexual dimorphism and greater male strength will come into play. The second rule is: never bring a face to a boot fight, either.
> His traitorous flesh reacting before his brain has a chance to catch up
Ah, this trope again.
> Who says he can't get an orgasm out of Jayce before he kills him
He already told you you aren't going to do it. You barely weight 100 lbs soaking wet. It is a miracle you were able to kill anyone at all.
> Fuck me? No, baby, I'm going to fuck you.
Gotta admit, this IS a hot line. It sucks it's written by a pedo bitch.
> He's taken a few cocks in his day and none were this big
Naturally. He's always two standard deviations in intelligence and in dick size, putting mere mortal men to shame.
> In the first true act of cruelty Viktor has seen from him, enters him immediately
Didn't he just say he was 'so fucking wet'? What happened there?
> It feels like Jayce is tearing him apart from the inside; he's sure he's going to be bleeding
That's what happens when your tiny dagger meets a real meat dagger. It's a metaphor for something, I'm sure.
> Cock as deep in his cunt as it can go without penetrating his cervix
Oh? It's the magical lengthening vagina: long enough to take literal horse cock without touching the cervix, and short enough to take a mere 9-10 inches. It's it beautiful?
> Hope he doesn't piss himself if he comes
Then you don't have to worry about bleeding that much, eh? You got a portable car wash up there.
> We fit together like puzzle pieces, don't we?
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia.
> You're going to come just from my cock
> Let me feel you come on my cock
You want to say it a third time to be sure? Third time's the charm, and all.
> Viktor wants to bite it off
He had that opportunity to do it as a vampire, but these fujos don't want to commit. Nothing like popping a dick vein in your teeth!
I'd be seething too if I lost a fight against a sexy serial killer who was obsessed with me and had a nice dick. I'd bring the garden shears or a pit bull next time.
Jayce, by contrast, keeps playing this cat-and-mouse game with a journalist who can't cover murder stories and instead has to talk about boring construction projects. He pays for his Starbucks order with a hilariously misspelled name - done deliberately as to show him he's been there - and Viktor is turned on as much as he is afraid (but mostly turned on). When he goes home, there's a gear hanging on his doorknob with coordinates etched on its teeth. Viktor finds them and breaks the cypher, and as a reward, he gets full blown, matte-printed photographs of him at a park. They aren't photographs taken by a mere stalker, no - they're portraits. It's meant to be tender and romantic, see. Viktor only gets offended when he sends him a picture of him petting his cat. THAT sends him into overdrive and he pens an angry 'STAY AWAY FROM MY CAT YOU PYSCHO' and, I shit you not, seeks out Etsy witches that he pays in cryptocurrency (or, to be specific, seeks out seedy ads that 'cast spells' on people).
Our stalker doesn't like being referred to as a psycho, so he goes to Viktor's apartment and waits there in the shadows until Viktor arrives. He makes sure to put away his groceries after he knocks him out and tells a neighbour he's just taking him to the hospital. He drives 60 in a 30 mph zone, lucky he doesn't run into a state trooper, and marvels at how the moonlight shines in our Final Girl's hair. When he wakes up, he is in a 'Saw' type scenario, where he has to solve complex chemical equations to break free, find the antidote, and get out. Jayce even talks over the intercom the way Jigsaw does, cryptic lines and everything, but that doesn't budge our genius Final Girl. He snorts at the clichés and finds out that this puzzle is solved by making an anticoagulant out of his blood - something that Jayce must've learned from going through his medical records. This causes a real shiver to go down Viktor's spine because our Jigsaw copycat means it. Viktor doesn't like the implications - metaphorical and literal - of giving his blood to a serial killer, but reasons that if his cat warmed up to him that quick, he doesn't have much to fear. He willingly gives up his arm and completes the formula, much to Jayce's delighted surprise. Our Final Girl even has time to snark about how he couldn't feed his cat dinner!
Jayce goes back to Viktor's home to feed his cat, and Viktor in the hour or so he's away, breaks free and then tries to lung at Jayce with his knife when he comes back. A mind as brilliant as he is has to know he cannot overpower a 6'2, 240 lb and above man in peak physicality like that. He quickly disarms him and puts him in a chokehold, causing our Final Dood to submit within seconds. Jayce takes him back home to his cat, saying 'until next time' so he can kidnap him again and put him in a new murder machine.
When Viktor returns home, he examines it and finds it untouched. He marvels at how Jayce is the perfect slasher and notes with some black humour that said perfect slasher put his groceries away. He goes room-to-room looking for more clues, and on his nightstand in the bedroom sits a case with a perfectly preserved finger - Jinx's finger. He calls her to see if she is alright, and has to bite back a sob to hear that she is untouched. He turns off the phone so she cannot call him back. He boots up his computer and goes to the forum where he and others discuss murder mysteries, and finds a message that says, 'I can't quite put my finger on it.' Very punny. Did the mods notice this? Our dood sees red - but before he can type out a Reddit response, he realizes that there are no new missing persons reports posted on the forum. They have all stopped because our dear slasher is lonely and has finally found his Final Girl waifu.
He goes a full week without getting any gifts, but when he does, it's another set of coordinates on a copper box. Initially, the coordinates are gibberish, leading him to places in the middle of the ocean, but he discovers that the letters all correspond to prime numbers - A:2 B:3 C:5 etc - and he figures out that the true coordinates lead him to an abandoned art deco theatre at the edge of the city, and he has to meet him there at 1:10 AM. This invitation is not merely a taunt, but a welcome to a private showing. He leaves immediately, and when he arrives, the area he goes to first is littered with broken mirrors, but the floor is brand new, covered in elaborate interlocking mechanisms. There's a brass lever that is in the OFF position and he goes to move it. This puzzle requires one to cross the length of the room for the duration of the song, but what Viktor figures out is that you're supposed to synchronize to each beat. He slaps the lever up at the song's crescendo, and the killing machine descends from the ceiling like a Resident Evil death trap. Viktor pulls his trump card and waits for the death machine to kill him, staring at the mirrors knowing Jayce will not allow it. He doesn't: he jumps through a false panel and whisks our boy out of the way to safety.
Well, not really - there's a huge piece of glass embedded in Jayce's arm, and he's upset that Jayce broke the rules of his game. Viktor sees his face (well, part of it) and realizes that he actually felt genuine terror during that near-death experience. He tells Viktor that the rules don't apply to him because he's perfect. This confession means that our serial killer is rewriting the 'rules of his universe'. Jayce tells him there's a first-aid kit behind one of the false mirror panels, and he sets to work patching him up. They have a little bonding moment where Jayce tells Viktor his name and Viktor has to pretend he's surprised by all of it. Jayce allows him to go home. He ponders his life's choices and how Jayce risked his entire game and MO to save him when he, logically, should have let him die. He realizes that this is more than an obsession and that the serial killer he built an entire profile on subverts his expectations: the killer wants to keep him and worship him, rather than hack him into pieces. He's breaking his own script for someone he views as perfect. Viktor finds this fascinating.
We cut to Jayce's POV. He is endlessly fascinated by Viktor and how he chose to break the rules; he deliberately did not solve a deadly puzzle to bait Jayce into saving him and it worked. Our killer, endlessly intrigued and even a little bit in love, goes to the forums where Viktor hangs out and builds a profile on him himself. He notes his 'lonely, intellectual arrogance' and goes 'wow, that's me'. He finds out his email by deducing his Czech accent and his sarcastically used 'nobody' in front of his VPN email (if he even uses one). We get this back-and-forth email exchange.
> He had taken a man's man and found the secret, gleaming gears inside
> He had his address
You'd think he'd already know it if he had access to his medical records or his IP. People have been phonebooked for less, and with greater ease (see Keffals and how a doorknob did him in).
I do think Fujo forgot how to use work skins, because she was able to use Instagram type messages in her 'you can be my full time daddy' fic. In any case, can you feel the higher end of the Bell Curve in these messages?
> I'm far too interesting to die without your express permission
Are you sure about that?
> Lover's Lever
Sounds like the brand name for a sex toy.
> It presented a binary choice
Whoa, there. Don't you know nature isn't binary? Nothing is binary. That's a transphobic microaggression right there. Where are all the gender diverse endings? Where is the polyamorous variables? Why does it have to be binary, you bigot?
> It requires two participants to function; a duet
Wow, that sounds awfully monogamous. Very patriarchal and heterosexual-coded.
We also get our first smut scene after this.
Never bring a knife to a gym bro. Bring an actual gun. You know you will never overpower him because that dreaded sexual dimorphism and greater male strength will come into play. The second rule is: never bring a face to a boot fight, either.
> His traitorous flesh reacting before his brain has a chance to catch up
Ah, this trope again.
> Who says he can't get an orgasm out of Jayce before he kills him
He already told you you aren't going to do it. You barely weight 100 lbs soaking wet. It is a miracle you were able to kill anyone at all.
> Fuck me? No, baby, I'm going to fuck you.
Gotta admit, this IS a hot line. It sucks it's written by a pedo bitch.
> He's taken a few cocks in his day and none were this big
Naturally. He's always two standard deviations in intelligence and in dick size, putting mere mortal men to shame.
> In the first true act of cruelty Viktor has seen from him, enters him immediately
Didn't he just say he was 'so fucking wet'? What happened there?
> It feels like Jayce is tearing him apart from the inside; he's sure he's going to be bleeding
That's what happens when your tiny dagger meets a real meat dagger. It's a metaphor for something, I'm sure.
> Cock as deep in his cunt as it can go without penetrating his cervix
Oh? It's the magical lengthening vagina: long enough to take literal horse cock without touching the cervix, and short enough to take a mere 9-10 inches. It's it beautiful?
> Hope he doesn't piss himself if he comes
Then you don't have to worry about bleeding that much, eh? You got a portable car wash up there.
> We fit together like puzzle pieces, don't we?
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia.
> You're going to come just from my cock
> Let me feel you come on my cock
You want to say it a third time to be sure? Third time's the charm, and all.
> Viktor wants to bite it off
He had that opportunity to do it as a vampire, but these fujos don't want to commit. Nothing like popping a dick vein in your teeth!
I'd be seething too if I lost a fight against a sexy serial killer who was obsessed with me and had a nice dick. I'd bring the garden shears or a pit bull next time.
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Who doesn't love tatted up MS-13 stalkers who want that prime rib coochie all to themselves? White people don't season they stalkings.
> Check beneath his pillow for the knife
What, does this city not allow guns? You are dealing with a violent, rapist 6'2 ex. A knife is not going to stop him, but six rounds into a well oil slicked chamber will. Six shots. Enough to kill any man.
> Watch the apartment for me
What's the cat gonna go? Scratch and hiss? Rent a pit bull so it can chew on his 'more well-hung than hung' dick of his. You can't rape when a dog is eating your penis on the floor.
> He can do this
He cannot, in fact, do this. Nice League reference with TFGraves there, btw.
Shame about Dmitri; he seems like a nice guy here. He just can't add that seasoning the way his rapist ex can.
Haha yeah, get that goddamn nigger out of my slash! No darkies allowed!
> Cottages by the stream
I see what you did there.
> The one who had chained him up and held him in the basement
But the real horrific question is: did he take away your T medication?
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> Two pink ones a day. A yellow pill occasionally, for when he cannot sleep
"The first I take against depression
The second is pure energy
The green one for my self-aggression
Then the red one, ecstasy"
> The atmosphere became too overstimulating for him
Autism or PTSD? Both? You decide. I can't believe I'm saying this, but the MTF troon there, Lest, is the best character so far. They're actually interesting compared to whatever rape fest the author has in mind.
He still can't help but think of his Latino baddie, kidnapping and all. Poor thing.
> It's different with Dmitri
> feels none of the scorching hot emotions and passion he had experienced before
White people don't season they romances.
> had he really improved
You never got a gun, so no. Cats, bats, and knives are not going to stop a rapist. An SUV or vat of acid will.
> Unlike most people, she had the good sense to understand that Viktor didn't like to talk about the past
She's his only female friend, that's why he's talking to her about it. Everyone else is male. It's an AFAB to AFAB conversation and he trusts her with that knowledge because of it.
> Love Whirlpool
I wonder if that's a reference to 'Love Island'.
> The cats are curled around him like they've known him their whole lives
I legit thought he would've killed the cats. Cats are supposed to detect evil, yet they never picked up on this gigantic rapist sitting on the bed. Figures.
> The man still looks like he can tear him limb from limb
Sexual dimorphism is a bitch, ain't it?
> The baseball bat was at the front
The only thing that is going to do is serve as a de-facto sex toy. You are not hurting him with it.
> He towers over Viktor's form as if dwarfing his entire existence as he always had
Pooners can't even tower over their own rapists Why does Nature have to be such a TERF?
> Need to be punished for pushing me away because of your insecurities
And that punishment? Violent anal sex with buttplugs. He needs to plug up the gaps in that border somehow.
> Shoved thick fingers deep inside of him until he sobbed for the man to stop
These are the same people bragging about how their ship outnumbers Meljay 20:1 btw.
> He would spend hours collars with Jayce's cum in his ass, plugged up by a toy. Or how he was forced to take his thick cock everyday
You think he's going to be epically saved this time around, or raped until he likes it? Guess we'll find out in Chapter 2.
In honour of Jayvik hitting 20k fics - the first milestone was 10k back in January, so things have slowed down a bit - here's a pregnancy/kid fic! We all love these cottagecore fics, don't we? How about one where they fuck while their own child is in the bed? The lines for this one are:
- The first senses of arousal began to arise as lips of his cunt began to sob with slick from the need he didn't have before.
> Subtle snores of his daughter
How does he know that that is a female child? The author stresses this character has not had any type of transition-related work down. This is a woman doing womanly things; so, I ask again: how do you know your child OC is female?
> I missed you, V. It's been too long, please
You didn't carry a child for nine months and didn't deal with afterbirth discharge. It's always MUH DICK MUH DICK MUH DICK NEEDS TO GET WET with these characters.
> The nest of dark curls
Hello Tarzan pubes, my old friend...
> Their little angel by Viktor's side sighed into his sprawled hand
Yes, they are about to have sex - read: instigated by the impatient penis-owner here - in front of their child. No fucking self respect to be found here.
> His husband's pale thighs
> Sparse thighs
The pristine white beauty that has captured a fandom, everyone.
> His cunt began to sob with slick
That's up there with 'his pussy drooled like a dog' and 'his cunt fluttered shyly'. I wasn't aware vaginas could sob. Do you need some tissues and Mariah Carey playing in the background?
> There was not much choice
Sounds like the penis-owner is the one making all of the sexual choices in this relationships. There's a word for that, in fact - one I juuuuuuuuuuust can't put my finger on.
> Attention to his cock
> Took hold of the engorged clit
Pick one. He's not on T, so it would be the latter.
> Saliva pooled in his open mouth, coating Jayce's gagging palm
This suggests that his palm is the one physically gagging, rather than Viktor himself.
> I want you. I need your pussy
What kind of 80s porn dialogue is this?
> The gooey fluid overflowed between the delicate fingers
He's just so delicate and smol and pale and sweet and such a waifu.
> Their daughter was still fast asleep, nestled in the blankets
Nothing says sexual trauma like being subjected to your parents having sex while you sleep in the same bed. If that girl doesn't become Aileen Wuornos, she'll be the female Edmund Kemper.
Nothing says celebrating 20k fics of a white-led yaoi ship like talking about child trauma because your pet Latino wanted to have sex! Nothing says respecting boundaries like gagging your partner so they are forced to agree to your acts! It's not marital rape when a child is involved, sweaty - it's just fun sex!
Nothing says fandom forgiveness and privilege like being a shotacon and still being gifted fics in time for Christmas. This is a Frankenstein-themed fic, with a little bit of gender fluidity and whether someone gets more excited over being called a husband or wife. Lines for this fic include:
- swallowed hard at the thought of his husband’s perfect pussy,
- (...)the way he could lick a line from his pretty entrance to his chubby little clit, and suckle on the small head.
- There was no time to waste in burying his dripping, thick cock into his waiting, drooling pussy.
> I will take my research to the grave
> Proceeds to explain his research, his name, and what he did in the name of scientific research
200 IQ right there.
> Viktor and him were officially a unit now, bound by law, till death do them part
There are no disability rights or votes for women, but at least there's gay marriage, right? But now we have to ask: does this gay marriage include actual unions between men, or did they allowed it because he was a woman pretending to be one?
> They hadn't announced their marriage publicly
They have gay marriage but they haven't synthesized testosterone yet. I suppose necromancy and wishful thinking will do.
Jayviks have this habit of diminishing Jayce's intelligence despite claiming he is one of their faves and the reason why they love the ship so much. The concept of harnessing magic for public use is Jayce's idea; Viktor just helped refine it and added his own genius to it. Maybe in another time and place he could have done it himself, but the work is in Jayce's name. All he's good for is being a mean daddy dom, it seems.
> It you still wish to bring our predecessor into the world
*Successor. Predecessor is someone who came BEFORE you; if this is a reference to pregnancy, your successor is who comes AFTER you.
> The blood rushing to his chubbing cock
Now is he 8 inches in this or is he a real monster? Guess we'll find out when Jayce puts his genderfluid waifu in a collar.
I hate to break it to you: but plants and mammals have vastly different biology because they are two separate kingdoms. Testing a herbicide on plants will have a different effect on mammals, despite it being toxic across the board. You can just use mice as scientists have always done before moving on to monkeys. Plants don't have the same proteins we do. If you really want to get creative, use a pig. We share a lot more biology with them. You also need a control plant to see what would happen if the magitech was never used on it. A sickly plant may give you one result; you need a multitude of plants.
> He retched into an old tin bucket
Uh oh. Is our Frankenwaifu pregnant?
That's a GOT reference right there. 'My Sun and Stars'. It's a reverse Khal Drogo situation here.
> Jayce was utterly obsessed
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> There are a lot of people out there who think I am your wife
Oh? You mean you don't even make an attempt to appear male, despite getting legally married with your sex being listed on the papers as male? Funny, that.
> Felt a little warm under the collar at the prospect of Viktor being his wife
Translation: "I don't have to commit to the gay, I can still have heterosexual sex while telling myself it's gay sex"
> Not because he wanted a wife
You factually have one and just admitted you got 'hot under the collar' at the prospect.
> There was something a little exhilarating about the misconception, a sort of secret
Is it a secret when people clock Viktor as female? Really, bitch? You find it exhilarating because, again, you don't have to commit to the gay bit. You don't have to prep for anal sex because you will use an orifice that is designed for such penile penetration. It's almost as if you're engaging in reproductive sex with the opposite sex and are subconsciously associated that role with that act.
> I don't know how bothered I am at the prospect of being mistaken by your wife
> It is a little exciting as a concept
Either you went through all those hoops to get 'gay married' and be seen as a man, or you actually got married as a tenderqueer or some shit and now feel delight that your 'natural role' is being highlighted. Pick a struggle.
Also, who says you need Council permission to use mice for test subjects? They're vermin. No one cares if they get wiped out.
> Copped a feel at his lithe body
Every time I read this, I read 'little body' instead. A nice Freudian slip. He's just so smol.
> Swallowed hard at the thought of his husband's perfect pussy
Was the labia nice and red? Perfectly shaven? Better than anything hailing from the Dark Continent?
> The way he could lick a line from his pretty entrance to his chubby little clit, and suckle the small head
Get used to the word 'chubby' because the author uses this A LOT when describing erectile tissue.
> Chubbing a bit
See?
> shadowing Viktor with his larger form
He's just uwo so smol.
> Tucked himself away in every molar
That's the second time you've written that.
> Puffy nipples
> Puffy pink areola
I'd be a little concerned at puffy areolas. They must be dry as shit.
> How needy yet shy his beloved was
Viktor has never been 'shy'; he was the one who kickstarted this entire thing. You praise him as a genius who breaks boundaries yet reverses to a blushing maiden in bed? Fuck right off.
> Viktor was his, belonged to him - Viktor worshipped him, but he did the same to Viktor. Gods in each other's eyes
I don't think Gods would get so excited referring to one of them as his 'wife' when he got the papers signed saying he was a male and that was a 'gay marriage'. I think God(s) would be confused at that.
> The other's petite frame
Aha, called it. Petit(e) is anything under 5'4. Viktor is 5'8, putting him above the average male height. He'd be above average in female height. He is not petite. They write this to make Jayce bigger and for you to forget what sexual dimorphism is.
> With a trembling, slender hand
He even has tiny hands, look at that! He's so smol and weak he can't even hold his pussy open that requires no effort at all!
> With the glistening wet beads of Viktor's slick rolling down his backside
Ladies, does your pussy juice resemble shampoo? Does it drool and slick up like a rabid dog? No? You might want to consult Ben Shapiro's wife.
> Why should he abstain from pleasure when they were meant to be celebrating?
I can't help but notice that it is about HIS pleasure and HIS wants, almost as if the penis owner is the one who sets the rules and is in control here. Funny, that.
> Between those milky thighs
Because we need to know our lil waifu here is white, in true Tim Burton style.
> He moaned Viktor's name like a prayer, eating his husband's pussy like it was religious
He would not be able to make the 'V' sound if his tongue is inside his vagina. Try sounding out those consonants with your tongue out - all you'll get is a 'Eh eh' sound.
> Spearing his lover on his strong tongue and tasting every inch of him he could
His tongue is longer than Viktor's 'chub', btw. It's like the tongue of a Highland cow.
> There was no time to waste in burying his dripping, thick cock into Viktor's waiting, drooling pussy
Yep, we have a 'his pussy drooled like a dog' moment. Every time an author uses this I will put it at the top for others to see it and laugh at it. Comparing the vulva/vagina's excretions to a dog's mouth is not as sexy as you think it is.
> He fed his length inch by inch into his partner
Me when I need to give my printer new paper
Here's your regular drinking game: take a drink every time you see 'pleasure'.
> The squelching, hot sounds of their pleasure filling the room
> Do you hear it? Of the love I make to you?
Nah, I think I'm in a Chinese noodle place and they're stirring those big pots of theirs.
> He knew his husband loved it when he manhandled him and used him any way he wanted
Oh? The genderfluid individual who gets excited at being referred to as 'wife' and is treated as a woman in all ways but identity-wise wants to be manhandled by the penis owner? You don't fucking say!
> Where the outline of his cock sliding in and out could be felt
You don't get a measure of his penis but you do get the belly bulge. I can't take it seriously with the 'drooling pussy' line.
> His pale jaw
We know he's white, thank you.
> His hand gripping with all its strength at the wrist over his womb
That is to say: none. He's so wet he can't even bend a straw in half.
> Mould his husband's cunt to the shape of his cock just like he always did
Cliché. I was waiting for this or the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle'.
> Not a third orgasm from his husband, just piss
What, no sexy poops? You know PBM didn't write this because she has more of a shit fetish. Where's all the lube dribbling down his thighs like diarrhea?
> It was very hot, literally and conceptually
Until one of you gets hepatitis on top of your Victorian tuberculosis. How's that for fashion?
> They had all the technology
Literally the 'Six Million Dollar Man'.
> They hadn't had kids yet
Interesting how Viktor never brings this up due to his health, but Jayce does because he is more concerned about his bloodline. That is a very MALE thing to do; hell, we don't even get any confirmation that Viktor wants kids anyways! Guess we're going with the 'pregnancy is the only thing his broken body can do'.
> If they could save the life of a plant
*Dead plant. That plant isn't alive because they never experimented on living things. Need I mention that PLANTS ARE NOT MAMMALS?! They have a completely different biology to us. Radiation from the Arcane will affect them differently than mammals in general. Just use vermin, you fucking retarded 'genius'!
> He would create a new runic crystal, a new matrix to run the equation
Their accomplishments are reversed: in this AU, Jayce invents the Hexcore, and Viktor invented Hextech, but one thing remains the same: our petite dood is at the whim of the penis owner. He never makes a choice.
> Even if it were his fate, Viktor always deserved gifts
This apparently means keeping him in a collar because we respect boundaries.
Right, you experimented on dead animals - what about living ones? You can't confirm your hypothesis by just working on corpses because Viktor isn't dead yet. That's like applying the Daylight vaccine to an already transformed zombie (RE reference). They're already changed, that cure won't do shit.
> he did not want anyone poking and prodding at his beloved like some sort of science experiment
Holy projection, Batman!
Now this man is a living corpse and cannot feed himself or properly consent to sex. I can't help but notice that as Jayce is the narrator, he makes himself the victim and the author wants the audience to think him fucking what amounts to a vegetable is a sign of love and devotion. It isn't. It does, however, highlight a uniquely male trend of fucking corpses, so well done to the author there.
> It was so deeply erotic when Viktor's orgasm had him pissing on Jayce's cock
In this case, I doubt it was done intentionally. He has no more control over his bowels or bladder as he is a walking corpse, so it just lets out on a whim. If PBM was writing this, she'd be talking about him shitting on his dick. Diarrhea dick has a nice rhyme do it, don't you think?
> The animal prototypes had withered and crumpled when the collar was removed
So he was experimenting on animals now rather than plants? Huh.
> I cured him of his sickness, and I saved his life
You objectively did not, but that's part of his delusions of grandeur.
> We live in a large cabin not too far from a small town
There's that 'cottage in the woods' thing. Nothing like dropping your location like that.
> He's always loved belonging to me
You couldn't even decide whether he was your husband or wife. I guess we can settle on 'corpse' for this one.
> I do not want him to get too restless or stir crazy
Is he even capable of that?
> They want to find us, they want to take Viktor away from me
He brags about not wanting people to find his research while casually telling everyone he lives in a cottage by the stream. That's all they have to look for to find him.
> Who are they to tell me what's right and what's wrong, to tell me what's best for my husband
I think the worst part of this is that you're going down on zombie vagina. Does it still drool like a dog, or is it coagulated like jelly?
> He lets me make him feel good
Emphasis on 'lets'.
> It has a lot of similarities to necromancy
Frankenstein if we added more Ed Gein and an author who is an open pedophile. I think I might put the Monster into Witness Protection after this.
> We had just gotten married and had our whole lives ahead of us
Reminder that he was the one who wanted kids and Viktor never mentioned it. He got more excited at Viktor being called a 'wife' so he didn't have to contend with being an open gay man. These trans fujos really do end up sounding homophobic.
> Viktor is very shy these days
I doubt he is even aware of what, who, or where he is. Joe Biden probably has better mental acuity than he does.
> What is the worth of someone's blood
If they're a white petite waifu, it's worth the world. You'll do anything for that white pussy and it shows.
> If you have the power to change the current, to change the frequency a human soul is tuned do, do you do it?
We're talking about biology and cell death, not entrapping one's soul. If this is about souls, it's safe to say Viktor doesn't have his anymore. He's a zombie that is dragged around like a puppet. The lights are on but nobody is home.
> I do not believe my soul, if there is such a thing
You were just talking about harnessing souls with the Arcane.
> He will be preserved, in all his glory, and live alongside me, where he belongs
"Like my pretty white petite doll"
> Intrinsically bound, we have always been tangled amongst each other in the cosmos
That sounds like a you thing more than something cosmically ordained. An obsessive husband who wants to fuck a corpse is not a sign of everlasting love, it's an Evangelion plot.
> This collar has kept his body in stasis in more ways than one
So he's functionally dead, just kept in shambles because of a magic collar. And you wonder why the Kirammans are hunting you.
> I have sullied my soul
You were just bragging about what you did a few minutes ago.
> We will become stardust, woven into the very fabric of history
You just said you wanted to be forgotten. You brag about your research being locked up tight and yet were discovered by the Kirammans 'immediately'. You're being hunted and tracked down and are taking your zombie waifu with you. It's a shame it won't be like Frankenstein where the Monster becomes sentient and decides to kill you instead. We can't have that happening to our cosmically ordained love.
There was a distinct lack of sexy poops, lube flowing down thighs like diarrhea and unblooded girlchildren. Looks like the people who write for PBM Polanski are decidedly less degenerate than she is.
It is very common for queer fujos to write about Catholic guilt and the effect religion has had repressing their true selves. A twist on this is making both the priest and the prisoner trans, because nothing says Catholicism like a Sister-turned-Brother-in-Christ. Also features penetration by a t-dick because that's fun.
So, what we can gather from this is:
- the man has been in prison for 15 year
- Said 'man' has had access to prison-grade T for said fifteen years and has acquired T-growth
- There is Christianity in Runeterra because Jesus jumped universes and converted everyone
- Priests pray like Muslims with their ass up in the air
Sounds fun, eh? I can't wait to read how he penetrates this sexy priests with tat *checks notes* 2-3 inches of growth.
> Were his parents religious? Has he ever rebelled against the Church or its rules?
He's already doing that by being a trans man and acting like a 'Brother' in Christ. Let's look up Deuteronomy 22:5:
> He had been curious about this young, beautiful priest
And you can't even say you tamed him with your - ahem - magnificent staff, because it's barely larger than your palm.
> He had advancements to make, lives to improve
Nigga you are in JAIL. Whose lives are you improving when you admit to sleeping all day?
> Only to bend over with his ass in the air
That's what Muslims do, not Christians. Christians usually kneel to pray. Any excuse to have that ass, eh?
> His cock is fat in his briefs, the mental image of Viktor's cheeks, black fabric straining over them
1. That cock is barely larger than his palm. 2. I wasn't aware priests of the Church are allowed to wear Kim Kardashian frocks, now.
> Mouthy just had to fuck it up for him
This is not a sex-segregated prison and trans Jayce here has had to fend off men that wanted to gain access to that Latino booty. Unlike Viktor, fujos aren't ready to have their Latino dom daddy topped and getting his prostate turned into a smashed walnut (or in this case, their pussy turned inside out) and so won't write him getting raped. That has mad our Latino dood into a real tough guy, who just can't wait to use those -13 inches on our sexy priest here.
> Made Jayce forget his strength when deescalating
That prison T must be pretty good because those men would throw you around like a wet sock. That, too, will never happen because they will tolerate their pet Victorian being raped and abused, but not the designated seme. Equal rights =/= equal rapists.
> Hello, beautiful
This could have been hot if they were both male. Priest!Viktor is quite the look. Leave it to pooners to fuck it up.
I'm glad this prison manages to serve Waffle House pancakes on top of the industrial-grade T. Where would our chubster be without them?
> This means that Viktor is single
Usually priests take a vow of celibacy. I wonder if he's going to pray for forgiveness for this homosexual act he cannot decide is lesbian or gay.
> Shining light in this dark hallway section
You can just say dark hallway.
> I never knew those poor undercity kids would break in
He's taking Vi's spot because we need to rub it in that lesbians don't matter - lesbians who identify as gay men do.
> The two spend more time discussing physics and engineering than they did God
So Viktor had to become a priest to fulfill the wishes of his mother...as an open trans man...in a faith that does not allow transgenderism. If we accept that his family is Slavic, then she is Orthodox and they don't tolerate a woman identifying as a man and saying they are 'Father', either. There are less contradictions with physics and God than that decision. For fics (and people) dealing with Catholic guilt, they sure do love twisting the religion to make it fit their progressive views.
Nothing says spicy like being locked inside a chapel with no way to get out of it except from the outside! Nothing says convenient like the prison wardens not wanting to look for a civvie during an attempted prison break!
> He is not some brute and he won't treat Viktor like his prisoner
That's a first. Must be the lack of testosterone a la testicles and mate guarding that is 'gelding' you, so to speak.
> Kisses him firmly on the mouth
Hey, prison breaks and/or terror attacks make people horny, what can I say?
> His cock is already hard in his briefs, slick making them stick to his cunt
This makes me think his 'dick' is sticking to his briefs, not his vulva. Makes me think of a crayon superglued to wood.
> He had suspected Viktor was like him, but the confirmation is more arousing than he had expected
Oh? How did he 'suspect'? Did he clock him from his gate? Smaller feet? Smaller wrists? Less pronounced orbital brow ridge? They say you 'can never tell' and yet here we are.
> He feels him up, gradually causing the man to soak through both layers of fabric
Ladies, don't you wish you could get so wet you soak through your pants AND frock? Tell that to the Lord!
> Not even God himself
That's a blasphemy. We are still not addressing the fact how a trans man can even become a priest. I didn't see no sign this guy was a Protestant or part of those churches where they host Drag Queen Story Time.
> He argues for his right to practice his religion
Did he argue for his right to 'gender-affirming care'? Was he placed in a male ward, in accordance with his new sex, or did we avoid that because it's only one vagina haver that's allowed to be brutalized?
> He cannot fight the system and he's unwilling to try something so foolish
You can't fight the system despite identifying into a sex you thought would give you an easier time in the system. Sucks, doesn't it?
> Getting stains of random bodily fluids out of grown men's underwear
Get used to it. You're a man now. Skid marks and piss stains are the least of your worries.
> Viktor had been the closest to feeling free that he had felt in over two decades
White pussy is a true miracle, Inshallah
It is OK, Okay or O.K. I guess this prison does not have any cameras or dogs because they snuck out of there like Solid Snake.
> Viktor leads him to a small service exit, some place where they must get delivers
> Rush through the gates crouching
Viktor can't crouch. He can't even bend half the time, if at all. I guess he rolled for dexterity and holy magic to pull an MGS3 mission.
> My plan at the moment is to get you in my bed and let you fuck me until I scream
It would make sense if he had an actual dick. T-dicks are barely larger than a school eraser; maybe if you're lucky it'll be as big as a lipstick tube. Not something worth bragging about or breaking lamps for.
> God has forgiven him. Maybe Piltover hasn't and maybe the family of those poor kids haven't
Literally 'fuck dem kids'. Yeah you might have killed them with your research and might've felt guilt over it but look at that pussy, dawg! You gotta fuck that pussy with your 2 inch long taco meat!
> He is proof that Jayce can still get into Heaven
Not while being a tranny. You have to repent for that. You're still going to Hell.
> He sucks messily at his cunt
Is it drooling like a dog?
> His bottom growth and absence of tits have been maintained over his incarceration with the help of his mediocre diet and adequate physical health
So...it's barely bigger than your palm and malnutrition makes it stick out. That's not healthy. Someone hasn't told you this but you should've used that Latino heritage to cook good food. Prisoners don't attack those who make good food. This is also the first time that Jayce is written as being thinner than average vs packing on the muscle and becoming an MS13 bad boy.
> Yeah. And I'm going to fuck you with it
> Still calls it a clit when it comes to penetration
This isn't giving me the Big Dick Energy vibe you think it does.
> He thrusts himself inside. Viktor is warm and inviting, tightening lightly as if to welcome him in
If he's 'tightening lightly' it means there isn't enough material for him to clench around.
> Pulling back just to slam inside once more
Slam inside with what?
> As he's slotted within his soft walls
Slotted inside with what?
> He was booking two one way tickets to the furthest city available
All that for a literal fucking micropenis? All that for something that isn't even larger than your pointer finger to 'slam inside'? Fuck, he's better off with masturbating with a paper towel roll.
> Everything happens for a reason and I was brought to that prison to free you. You never belonged there
?? He killed several children. By his own admission he belongs there, but I guess we have to deal with Retard Logic and accept that an openly trans priest who has not been excommunicated and does not abide by the scripture he quotes - see Deuteronomy 22:5 - enjoys getting fucked by something smaller than a Twix bar. Pathetic!
Medieval marriage AU got an update! Learn how 36 other consorts, including actual women, were tossed aside for our Pick Me Insert.
> he's to ride to the border of Demacia to escort their delegation for a vision
For the record, this is Demacia on a map:
It is not going to take them a week to get there.
> Why didn't they choose the Demacian princess?
Because the plot, silly! We don't those blonde Valkyries - we want the disabled Pick Me Pooner (who is still chosen based on reproductive value, btw, no actual men were offered as consorts to Jayce)!
> 36 potential consorts
> He was the second one chosen
> Picked because he was the smartest and the other girls were too busy talking about nails, fashion and makeup and not things like engineering or the Bell Curve
Oh yeah, that's a Pick Me.
> In the few months of their marriage, there's been no shortage of carnal activity
Of course not, not when said carnal activity is done solely for reproductive purposes and he picked the one with complementary genitalia. How many of those consorts were men, again? Oh, right - none. All were AFAB.
> Pleasure followed by an attempt to procreate. Or rather, pleasure including an attempt to procreate
...that's what heterosexual sex is, yes.
> Dives in with the enthusiasm of a starved man
Cliché.
> Swallows him down. He's too large for Viktor to fit
And then you have Jayce gobble down that 'small cock' like he's sucking on a chicklet. The jokes write themselves: men choke others with their genitalia, trans men are cute and playful with theirs.
> Delicate flesh
He's just so dainty and soft and tiny and pale and white and -
> The pert breasts dragging against him with each movement
What breasts?
> Warm, tight, as inviting as any cunt
Note he said 'cunt', not 'hole', because our 'gay' man here isn't actually gay. You aren't gay if you haven't sucked a dick for 20 bucks.
> Viktor is choking on him, and it's entirely of his own volition
He gets choked, but Jayce can just suck along and giggle. He isn't choked by anything.
> Swallows his load down like he was made for it
He was.
> He'll be gone for only a week or so
Consult the map. That distance, without the aid of airships, is going to take you MONTHS.
Oh, that's nice! Surely nothing bad will happen to it, yeah?
> For the first time, Jayce thinks Viktor truly looks small. Of course he's objectively aware that they have a size difference
He's just uwu so smol while our Latino Heat here is 6'7 with a tiny head and huge shoulders. You know, the yaoi look. In any case, the time skip must've really taken months, and not a single week, as our blushing maiden goes from proudly declaring he is with child to having a miscarriage. Looks like the yolk got scrambled too soon.
> It was yesterday, out of nowhere
It is never 'out of nowhere', there are symptoms, but we don't hear about that because the most important character is the dick owner and whether he gets to maintain his bloodline. He's ashamed of his love and he thinks having two kids (that he will not raise) will make it go away? What?
> His own self-centered thoughts fade away
Name a time when he has NOT been self-centered.
> All Jayce wanted from his homecoming was a smile, maybe a kiss goodnight
You should tell him the roast should be on the table and that he should smile more.
> Lest a child that scarcely had a chance
He was in the first trimester. I assume this was before any quickening; or, if it was after quickening (second trimester) then his Demacia trip was decidedly longer than a week or two. He's been gone for months if we're going off the gestation period here.
> He reeks of sweat and horse and a week without a wash
Oh, thank God there are no scenes of him swallowing clumpy dick cheese. I might just vomit (and don't give PBM any ideas).
> Wearing a velvet jacket, tight in the waist and embroidered with golden stars dotted with freshwater pearls
He's gotta show off that feminine waist. Makes the testosterone and sperm quality spike.
> Th chain circlet around his head has a simple pearl adornment resting in the center of his forehead
Very masc. Did he get it from Temu? If the pearl hangs any lower he'll become cross-eyed like the Maya.
> He's tired of being pleasant to people who matter so little, for people who talk about dull things and don't have the perfect waist to rest his hand on
You are going to be a King at 30. You are going to have to be pleasant to these people for the rest of your life - or you can be a classic boyar and simply arrange for them to be killed in 'bizarre accidents' to seize their wealth. You're the king, after all. You can do whatever you want.
> He's defending himself in the face of a rather upfront insult
That's not an insult but a statement of fact. Jayce married him as a love match because he was the second one chosen out of 36 candidates. He insists he loves him because of his mind and not his body (despite every body being AFAB and this being a Medieval AU). They're getting upset over a nothingburger.
> She implied we were a love match
BECAUSE YOU ARE, AND BECAUSE YOU ADMITTED IT YOU FUCKING IDIOT. Why are we talking about 'getting over him' WHEN YOU ARE MARRIED FOR LIFE, YOU CHOSE HIM FOR HIS REPRODUCTIVE CAPABILITIES, WHAT ARE WE TALKING ABOUT HERE
> My husband is a clever one, not to be underestimated
This is the only time we ever see him actually be intelligent. Give me more of that Bloodborne AU that had him make an RPG out of his cane. That was badass!
> Your hands are large
Who needs armour for a big hunt when he can wrestle any animal he wants? Bears should watch the fuck out.
> We have ample time, take as much time as you need for yourself
Wow, he sure did get over that miscarriage real quick. I guess yeti hands and huge Mexican man meat will do that.
> His decision to marry Viktor had little to do with having children
> Admits it would be an eventuality
> Picked him from a pool of AFAB-only people
It's a Medieval AU. He married him for his reproductive capability. Otherwise they'd override his wishes and give him a fertile blonde because Viktor would be too disabled to reproduce.
> Entourage for a grand tour that spans half a year
> Still asks when his hubby would return
200 IQ right here.
> Something akin to urgency.
> There is no real urgency
So which is it?
> You're going to be so tight around me
Oh yeah, in the first iteration he's one of those 'he was huge' descriptions complete with the 'it's never gonna fit'. The usual. Again, they're awfully buddy buddy in the *checks notes* few weeks after losing a pregnancy that was pretty far along.
> Spitting on this hand before he strokes
That is wholly unnecessary because he was already wet.
> His right hand warps around that slender neck, thumb grazing mole on that pale column
There's that white swan-neck everyone loves!
> Gentle skin
He's just uwu so dainty.
> Two men
And one of them was chosen for his female reproductive organs.
> No reason to waste an opportunity for the seed to take
Weak. Real Medieval women would plot their sex sessions to occur right before ovulation. They could tell due to their cervical fluid. You'd think such a genius would have such a science down pat, but talking about female biology like that is deeply triggering. We have to stick with the heterosexual sex and childbirth instead.
Cool, he's still going to be gone for half a year and will you shit out a baby already? We need to see if that broken body can handle a pregnancy or not.
In celebration of this ship gaining 20k fics - and the ensuing bragging rights therein - Rekki, the same author who wrote a character not knowing what crabs were and figured out that ocean water was indeed salty, has a few things to say on mischaracterization of her favourite characters. In short: it's OK when they do it, but if you make a single mistake, you are an ableist homophobe.
"This shit is not that serious" say the people who think Ao3 metrics makes their ship better. Rekki co-wrote that one fic where a fairy got outed as one because he couldn't use his magic to hide or change the shape of his ears (same fairy could change their sex at will, but Rekki preferred the penis-in-vagina sex because actual gay men turn her off). Same one wrote a very long fic where a character did not know what a crab was (see above) and beta read for such legendary lines such as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' and 'an affront to biology that merits consideration'.
"Provided the characters are treated with respect"
> Writes their Top as a ravenous, raging male rapist who can't control his animalistic rage
Ho hum.
NemoEntropy, who loves bragging about how Jayvik outnumbers Meljay 200:1, says that mischaracterization is part of the point of an AU. What her black mould wheezing ass doesn't realize is that mischaracterization is NOT part of any AU - you are just making a completely separate character. Reducing women to their male relationships is bad; reducing your token white troon fave (who is actually male) to a tradwife who 'can't wait to fuck my sexy husband' is 100% permissible.
On a lighter note, here is a username that I chuckled at. It's not 'Cockclencher3000' or 'Ijerkofftolittleboys', but it's funny.
You know that's an autistic female trying to capture teenage boy humour.
> Check beneath his pillow for the knife
What, does this city not allow guns? You are dealing with a violent, rapist 6'2 ex. A knife is not going to stop him, but six rounds into a well oil slicked chamber will. Six shots. Enough to kill any man.
> Watch the apartment for me
What's the cat gonna go? Scratch and hiss? Rent a pit bull so it can chew on his 'more well-hung than hung' dick of his. You can't rape when a dog is eating your penis on the floor.
> He can do this
He cannot, in fact, do this. Nice League reference with TFGraves there, btw.
Shame about Dmitri; he seems like a nice guy here. He just can't add that seasoning the way his rapist ex can.
Haha yeah, get that goddamn nigger out of my slash! No darkies allowed!
> Cottages by the stream
I see what you did there.
> The one who had chained him up and held him in the basement
But the real horrific question is: did he take away your T medication?
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> Two pink ones a day. A yellow pill occasionally, for when he cannot sleep
"The first I take against depression
The second is pure energy
The green one for my self-aggression
Then the red one, ecstasy"
> The atmosphere became too overstimulating for him
Autism or PTSD? Both? You decide. I can't believe I'm saying this, but the MTF troon there, Lest, is the best character so far. They're actually interesting compared to whatever rape fest the author has in mind.
He still can't help but think of his Latino baddie, kidnapping and all. Poor thing.
> It's different with Dmitri
> feels none of the scorching hot emotions and passion he had experienced before
White people don't season they romances.
> had he really improved
You never got a gun, so no. Cats, bats, and knives are not going to stop a rapist. An SUV or vat of acid will.
> Unlike most people, she had the good sense to understand that Viktor didn't like to talk about the past
She's his only female friend, that's why he's talking to her about it. Everyone else is male. It's an AFAB to AFAB conversation and he trusts her with that knowledge because of it.
> Love Whirlpool
I wonder if that's a reference to 'Love Island'.
> The cats are curled around him like they've known him their whole lives
I legit thought he would've killed the cats. Cats are supposed to detect evil, yet they never picked up on this gigantic rapist sitting on the bed. Figures.
> The man still looks like he can tear him limb from limb
Sexual dimorphism is a bitch, ain't it?
> The baseball bat was at the front
The only thing that is going to do is serve as a de-facto sex toy. You are not hurting him with it.
> He towers over Viktor's form as if dwarfing his entire existence as he always had
Pooners can't even tower over their own rapists
Why does Nature have to be such a TERF?> Need to be punished for pushing me away because of your insecurities
And that punishment? Violent anal sex with buttplugs. He needs to plug up the gaps in that border somehow.
> Shoved thick fingers deep inside of him until he sobbed for the man to stop
These are the same people bragging about how their ship outnumbers Meljay 20:1 btw.
> He would spend hours collars with Jayce's cum in his ass, plugged up by a toy. Or how he was forced to take his thick cock everyday
You think he's going to be epically saved this time around, or raped until he likes it? Guess we'll find out in Chapter 2.
In honour of Jayvik hitting 20k fics - the first milestone was 10k back in January, so things have slowed down a bit - here's a pregnancy/kid fic! We all love these cottagecore fics, don't we? How about one where they fuck while their own child is in the bed? The lines for this one are:
- The first senses of arousal began to arise as lips of his cunt began to sob with slick from the need he didn't have before.
> Subtle snores of his daughter
How does he know that that is a female child? The author stresses this character has not had any type of transition-related work down. This is a woman doing womanly things; so, I ask again: how do you know your child OC is female?
> I missed you, V. It's been too long, please
You didn't carry a child for nine months and didn't deal with afterbirth discharge. It's always MUH DICK MUH DICK MUH DICK NEEDS TO GET WET with these characters.
> The nest of dark curls
Hello Tarzan pubes, my old friend...
> Their little angel by Viktor's side sighed into his sprawled hand
Yes, they are about to have sex - read: instigated by the impatient penis-owner here - in front of their child. No fucking self respect to be found here.
> His husband's pale thighs
> Sparse thighs
The pristine white beauty that has captured a fandom, everyone.
> His cunt began to sob with slick
That's up there with 'his pussy drooled like a dog' and 'his cunt fluttered shyly'. I wasn't aware vaginas could sob. Do you need some tissues and Mariah Carey playing in the background?
> There was not much choice
Sounds like the penis-owner is the one making all of the sexual choices in this relationships. There's a word for that, in fact - one I juuuuuuuuuuust can't put my finger on.
> Attention to his cock
> Took hold of the engorged clit
Pick one. He's not on T, so it would be the latter.
> Saliva pooled in his open mouth, coating Jayce's gagging palm
This suggests that his palm is the one physically gagging, rather than Viktor himself.
> I want you. I need your pussy
What kind of 80s porn dialogue is this?
> The gooey fluid overflowed between the delicate fingers
He's just so delicate and smol and pale and sweet and such a waifu.
> Their daughter was still fast asleep, nestled in the blankets
Nothing says sexual trauma like being subjected to your parents having sex while you sleep in the same bed. If that girl doesn't become Aileen Wuornos, she'll be the female Edmund Kemper.
Nothing says celebrating 20k fics of a white-led yaoi ship like talking about child trauma because your pet Latino wanted to have sex! Nothing says respecting boundaries like gagging your partner so they are forced to agree to your acts! It's not marital rape when a child is involved, sweaty - it's just fun sex!
Nothing says fandom forgiveness and privilege like being a shotacon and still being gifted fics in time for Christmas. This is a Frankenstein-themed fic, with a little bit of gender fluidity and whether someone gets more excited over being called a husband or wife. Lines for this fic include:
- swallowed hard at the thought of his husband’s perfect pussy,
- (...)the way he could lick a line from his pretty entrance to his chubby little clit, and suckle on the small head.
- There was no time to waste in burying his dripping, thick cock into his waiting, drooling pussy.
> I will take my research to the grave
> Proceeds to explain his research, his name, and what he did in the name of scientific research
200 IQ right there.
> Viktor and him were officially a unit now, bound by law, till death do them part
There are no disability rights or votes for women, but at least there's gay marriage, right? But now we have to ask: does this gay marriage include actual unions between men, or did they allowed it because he was a woman pretending to be one?
> They hadn't announced their marriage publicly
They have gay marriage but they haven't synthesized testosterone yet. I suppose necromancy and wishful thinking will do.
Jayviks have this habit of diminishing Jayce's intelligence despite claiming he is one of their faves and the reason why they love the ship so much. The concept of harnessing magic for public use is Jayce's idea; Viktor just helped refine it and added his own genius to it. Maybe in another time and place he could have done it himself, but the work is in Jayce's name. All he's good for is being a mean daddy dom, it seems.
> It you still wish to bring our predecessor into the world
*Successor. Predecessor is someone who came BEFORE you; if this is a reference to pregnancy, your successor is who comes AFTER you.
> The blood rushing to his chubbing cock
Now is he 8 inches in this or is he a real monster? Guess we'll find out when Jayce puts his genderfluid waifu in a collar.
I hate to break it to you: but plants and mammals have vastly different biology because they are two separate kingdoms. Testing a herbicide on plants will have a different effect on mammals, despite it being toxic across the board. You can just use mice as scientists have always done before moving on to monkeys. Plants don't have the same proteins we do. If you really want to get creative, use a pig. We share a lot more biology with them. You also need a control plant to see what would happen if the magitech was never used on it. A sickly plant may give you one result; you need a multitude of plants.
> He retched into an old tin bucket
Uh oh. Is our Frankenwaifu pregnant?
That's a GOT reference right there. 'My Sun and Stars'. It's a reverse Khal Drogo situation here.
> Jayce was utterly obsessed
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> There are a lot of people out there who think I am your wife
Oh? You mean you don't even make an attempt to appear male, despite getting legally married with your sex being listed on the papers as male? Funny, that.
> Felt a little warm under the collar at the prospect of Viktor being his wife
Translation: "I don't have to commit to the gay, I can still have heterosexual sex while telling myself it's gay sex"
> Not because he wanted a wife
You factually have one and just admitted you got 'hot under the collar' at the prospect.
> There was something a little exhilarating about the misconception, a sort of secret
Is it a secret when people clock Viktor as female? Really, bitch? You find it exhilarating because, again, you don't have to commit to the gay bit. You don't have to prep for anal sex because you will use an orifice that is designed for such penile penetration. It's almost as if you're engaging in reproductive sex with the opposite sex and are subconsciously associated that role with that act.
> I don't know how bothered I am at the prospect of being mistaken by your wife
> It is a little exciting as a concept
Either you went through all those hoops to get 'gay married' and be seen as a man, or you actually got married as a tenderqueer or some shit and now feel delight that your 'natural role' is being highlighted. Pick a struggle.
Also, who says you need Council permission to use mice for test subjects? They're vermin. No one cares if they get wiped out.
> Copped a feel at his lithe body
Every time I read this, I read 'little body' instead. A nice Freudian slip. He's just so smol.
> Swallowed hard at the thought of his husband's perfect pussy
Was the labia nice and red? Perfectly shaven? Better than anything hailing from the Dark Continent?
> The way he could lick a line from his pretty entrance to his chubby little clit, and suckle the small head
Get used to the word 'chubby' because the author uses this A LOT when describing erectile tissue.
> Chubbing a bit
See?
> shadowing Viktor with his larger form
He's just uwo so smol.
> Tucked himself away in every molar
That's the second time you've written that.
> Puffy nipples
> Puffy pink areola
I'd be a little concerned at puffy areolas. They must be dry as shit.
> How needy yet shy his beloved was
Viktor has never been 'shy'; he was the one who kickstarted this entire thing. You praise him as a genius who breaks boundaries yet reverses to a blushing maiden in bed? Fuck right off.
> Viktor was his, belonged to him - Viktor worshipped him, but he did the same to Viktor. Gods in each other's eyes
I don't think Gods would get so excited referring to one of them as his 'wife' when he got the papers signed saying he was a male and that was a 'gay marriage'. I think God(s) would be confused at that.
> The other's petite frame
Aha, called it. Petit(e) is anything under 5'4. Viktor is 5'8, putting him above the average male height. He'd be above average in female height. He is not petite. They write this to make Jayce bigger and for you to forget what sexual dimorphism is.
> With a trembling, slender hand
He even has tiny hands, look at that! He's so smol and weak he can't even hold his pussy open that requires no effort at all!
> With the glistening wet beads of Viktor's slick rolling down his backside
Ladies, does your pussy juice resemble shampoo? Does it drool and slick up like a rabid dog? No? You might want to consult Ben Shapiro's wife.
> Why should he abstain from pleasure when they were meant to be celebrating?
I can't help but notice that it is about HIS pleasure and HIS wants, almost as if the penis owner is the one who sets the rules and is in control here. Funny, that.
> Between those milky thighs
Because we need to know our lil waifu here is white, in true Tim Burton style.
> He moaned Viktor's name like a prayer, eating his husband's pussy like it was religious
He would not be able to make the 'V' sound if his tongue is inside his vagina. Try sounding out those consonants with your tongue out - all you'll get is a 'Eh eh' sound.
> Spearing his lover on his strong tongue and tasting every inch of him he could
His tongue is longer than Viktor's 'chub', btw. It's like the tongue of a Highland cow.
> There was no time to waste in burying his dripping, thick cock into Viktor's waiting, drooling pussy
Yep, we have a 'his pussy drooled like a dog' moment. Every time an author uses this I will put it at the top for others to see it and laugh at it. Comparing the vulva/vagina's excretions to a dog's mouth is not as sexy as you think it is.
> He fed his length inch by inch into his partner
Me when I need to give my printer new paper
Here's your regular drinking game: take a drink every time you see 'pleasure'.
> The squelching, hot sounds of their pleasure filling the room
> Do you hear it? Of the love I make to you?
Nah, I think I'm in a Chinese noodle place and they're stirring those big pots of theirs.
> He knew his husband loved it when he manhandled him and used him any way he wanted
Oh? The genderfluid individual who gets excited at being referred to as 'wife' and is treated as a woman in all ways but identity-wise wants to be manhandled by the penis owner? You don't fucking say!
> Where the outline of his cock sliding in and out could be felt
You don't get a measure of his penis but you do get the belly bulge. I can't take it seriously with the 'drooling pussy' line.
> His pale jaw
We know he's white, thank you.
> His hand gripping with all its strength at the wrist over his womb
That is to say: none. He's so wet he can't even bend a straw in half.
> Mould his husband's cunt to the shape of his cock just like he always did
Cliché. I was waiting for this or the 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle'.
> Not a third orgasm from his husband, just piss
What, no sexy poops? You know PBM didn't write this because she has more of a shit fetish. Where's all the lube dribbling down his thighs like diarrhea?
> It was very hot, literally and conceptually
Until one of you gets hepatitis on top of your Victorian tuberculosis. How's that for fashion?
> They had all the technology
Literally the 'Six Million Dollar Man'.
> They hadn't had kids yet
Interesting how Viktor never brings this up due to his health, but Jayce does because he is more concerned about his bloodline. That is a very MALE thing to do; hell, we don't even get any confirmation that Viktor wants kids anyways! Guess we're going with the 'pregnancy is the only thing his broken body can do'.
> If they could save the life of a plant
*Dead plant. That plant isn't alive because they never experimented on living things. Need I mention that PLANTS ARE NOT MAMMALS?! They have a completely different biology to us. Radiation from the Arcane will affect them differently than mammals in general. Just use vermin, you fucking retarded 'genius'!
> He would create a new runic crystal, a new matrix to run the equation
Their accomplishments are reversed: in this AU, Jayce invents the Hexcore, and Viktor invented Hextech, but one thing remains the same: our petite dood is at the whim of the penis owner. He never makes a choice.
> Even if it were his fate, Viktor always deserved gifts
This apparently means keeping him in a collar because we respect boundaries.
Right, you experimented on dead animals - what about living ones? You can't confirm your hypothesis by just working on corpses because Viktor isn't dead yet. That's like applying the Daylight vaccine to an already transformed zombie (RE reference). They're already changed, that cure won't do shit.
> he did not want anyone poking and prodding at his beloved like some sort of science experiment
Holy projection, Batman!
Now this man is a living corpse and cannot feed himself or properly consent to sex. I can't help but notice that as Jayce is the narrator, he makes himself the victim and the author wants the audience to think him fucking what amounts to a vegetable is a sign of love and devotion. It isn't. It does, however, highlight a uniquely male trend of fucking corpses, so well done to the author there.
> It was so deeply erotic when Viktor's orgasm had him pissing on Jayce's cock
In this case, I doubt it was done intentionally. He has no more control over his bowels or bladder as he is a walking corpse, so it just lets out on a whim. If PBM was writing this, she'd be talking about him shitting on his dick. Diarrhea dick has a nice rhyme do it, don't you think?
> The animal prototypes had withered and crumpled when the collar was removed
So he was experimenting on animals now rather than plants? Huh.
> I cured him of his sickness, and I saved his life
You objectively did not, but that's part of his delusions of grandeur.
> We live in a large cabin not too far from a small town
There's that 'cottage in the woods' thing. Nothing like dropping your location like that.
> He's always loved belonging to me
You couldn't even decide whether he was your husband or wife. I guess we can settle on 'corpse' for this one.
> I do not want him to get too restless or stir crazy
Is he even capable of that?
> They want to find us, they want to take Viktor away from me
He brags about not wanting people to find his research while casually telling everyone he lives in a cottage by the stream. That's all they have to look for to find him.
> Who are they to tell me what's right and what's wrong, to tell me what's best for my husband
I think the worst part of this is that you're going down on zombie vagina. Does it still drool like a dog, or is it coagulated like jelly?
> He lets me make him feel good
Emphasis on 'lets'.
> It has a lot of similarities to necromancy
Frankenstein if we added more Ed Gein and an author who is an open pedophile. I think I might put the Monster into Witness Protection after this.
> We had just gotten married and had our whole lives ahead of us
Reminder that he was the one who wanted kids and Viktor never mentioned it. He got more excited at Viktor being called a 'wife' so he didn't have to contend with being an open gay man. These trans fujos really do end up sounding homophobic.
> Viktor is very shy these days
I doubt he is even aware of what, who, or where he is. Joe Biden probably has better mental acuity than he does.
> What is the worth of someone's blood
If they're a white petite waifu, it's worth the world. You'll do anything for that white pussy and it shows.
> If you have the power to change the current, to change the frequency a human soul is tuned do, do you do it?
We're talking about biology and cell death, not entrapping one's soul. If this is about souls, it's safe to say Viktor doesn't have his anymore. He's a zombie that is dragged around like a puppet. The lights are on but nobody is home.
> I do not believe my soul, if there is such a thing
You were just talking about harnessing souls with the Arcane.
> He will be preserved, in all his glory, and live alongside me, where he belongs
"Like my pretty white petite doll"
> Intrinsically bound, we have always been tangled amongst each other in the cosmos
That sounds like a you thing more than something cosmically ordained. An obsessive husband who wants to fuck a corpse is not a sign of everlasting love, it's an Evangelion plot.
> This collar has kept his body in stasis in more ways than one
So he's functionally dead, just kept in shambles because of a magic collar. And you wonder why the Kirammans are hunting you.
> I have sullied my soul
You were just bragging about what you did a few minutes ago.
> We will become stardust, woven into the very fabric of history
You just said you wanted to be forgotten. You brag about your research being locked up tight and yet were discovered by the Kirammans 'immediately'. You're being hunted and tracked down and are taking your zombie waifu with you. It's a shame it won't be like Frankenstein where the Monster becomes sentient and decides to kill you instead. We can't have that happening to our cosmically ordained love.
There was a distinct lack of sexy poops, lube flowing down thighs like diarrhea and unblooded girlchildren. Looks like the people who write for PBM Polanski are decidedly less degenerate than she is.
It is very common for queer fujos to write about Catholic guilt and the effect religion has had repressing their true selves. A twist on this is making both the priest and the prisoner trans, because nothing says Catholicism like a Sister-turned-Brother-in-Christ. Also features penetration by a t-dick because that's fun.
So, what we can gather from this is:
- the man has been in prison for 15 year
- Said 'man' has had access to prison-grade T for said fifteen years and has acquired T-growth
- There is Christianity in Runeterra because Jesus jumped universes and converted everyone
- Priests pray like Muslims with their ass up in the air
Sounds fun, eh? I can't wait to read how he penetrates this sexy priests with tat *checks notes* 2-3 inches of growth.
> Were his parents religious? Has he ever rebelled against the Church or its rules?
He's already doing that by being a trans man and acting like a 'Brother' in Christ. Let's look up Deuteronomy 22:5:
Since we're being religious and all.
> He had been curious about this young, beautiful priest
And you can't even say you tamed him with your - ahem - magnificent staff, because it's barely larger than your palm.
> He had advancements to make, lives to improve
Nigga you are in JAIL. Whose lives are you improving when you admit to sleeping all day?
> Only to bend over with his ass in the air
That's what Muslims do, not Christians. Christians usually kneel to pray. Any excuse to have that ass, eh?
> His cock is fat in his briefs, the mental image of Viktor's cheeks, black fabric straining over them
1. That cock is barely larger than his palm. 2. I wasn't aware priests of the Church are allowed to wear Kim Kardashian frocks, now.
> Mouthy just had to fuck it up for him
This is not a sex-segregated prison and trans Jayce here has had to fend off men that wanted to gain access to that Latino booty. Unlike Viktor, fujos aren't ready to have their Latino dom daddy topped and getting his prostate turned into a smashed walnut (or in this case, their pussy turned inside out) and so won't write him getting raped. That has mad our Latino dood into a real tough guy, who just can't wait to use those -13 inches on our sexy priest here.
> Made Jayce forget his strength when deescalating
That prison T must be pretty good because those men would throw you around like a wet sock. That, too, will never happen because they will tolerate their pet Victorian being raped and abused, but not the designated seme. Equal rights =/= equal rapists.
> Hello, beautiful
This could have been hot if they were both male. Priest!Viktor is quite the look. Leave it to pooners to fuck it up.
I'm glad this prison manages to serve Waffle House pancakes on top of the industrial-grade T. Where would our chubster be without them?
> This means that Viktor is single
Usually priests take a vow of celibacy. I wonder if he's going to pray for forgiveness for this homosexual act he cannot decide is lesbian or gay.
> Shining light in this dark hallway section
You can just say dark hallway.
> I never knew those poor undercity kids would break in
He's taking Vi's spot because we need to rub it in that lesbians don't matter - lesbians who identify as gay men do.
> The two spend more time discussing physics and engineering than they did God
So Viktor had to become a priest to fulfill the wishes of his mother...as an open trans man...in a faith that does not allow transgenderism. If we accept that his family is Slavic, then she is Orthodox and they don't tolerate a woman identifying as a man and saying they are 'Father', either. There are less contradictions with physics and God than that decision. For fics (and people) dealing with Catholic guilt, they sure do love twisting the religion to make it fit their progressive views.
Nothing says spicy like being locked inside a chapel with no way to get out of it except from the outside! Nothing says convenient like the prison wardens not wanting to look for a civvie during an attempted prison break!
> He is not some brute and he won't treat Viktor like his prisoner
That's a first. Must be the lack of testosterone a la testicles and mate guarding that is 'gelding' you, so to speak.
> Kisses him firmly on the mouth
Hey, prison breaks and/or terror attacks make people horny, what can I say?
> His cock is already hard in his briefs, slick making them stick to his cunt
This makes me think his 'dick' is sticking to his briefs, not his vulva. Makes me think of a crayon superglued to wood.
> He had suspected Viktor was like him, but the confirmation is more arousing than he had expected
Oh? How did he 'suspect'? Did he clock him from his gate? Smaller feet? Smaller wrists? Less pronounced orbital brow ridge? They say you 'can never tell' and yet here we are.
> He feels him up, gradually causing the man to soak through both layers of fabric
Ladies, don't you wish you could get so wet you soak through your pants AND frock? Tell that to the Lord!
> Not even God himself
That's a blasphemy. We are still not addressing the fact how a trans man can even become a priest. I didn't see no sign this guy was a Protestant or part of those churches where they host Drag Queen Story Time.
> He argues for his right to practice his religion
Did he argue for his right to 'gender-affirming care'? Was he placed in a male ward, in accordance with his new sex, or did we avoid that because it's only one vagina haver that's allowed to be brutalized?
> He cannot fight the system and he's unwilling to try something so foolish
You can't fight the system despite identifying into a sex you thought would give you an easier time in the system. Sucks, doesn't it?
> Getting stains of random bodily fluids out of grown men's underwear
Get used to it. You're a man now. Skid marks and piss stains are the least of your worries.
> Viktor had been the closest to feeling free that he had felt in over two decades
White pussy is a true miracle, Inshallah
It is OK, Okay or O.K. I guess this prison does not have any cameras or dogs because they snuck out of there like Solid Snake.
> Viktor leads him to a small service exit, some place where they must get delivers
> Rush through the gates crouching
Viktor can't crouch. He can't even bend half the time, if at all. I guess he rolled for dexterity and holy magic to pull an MGS3 mission.
> My plan at the moment is to get you in my bed and let you fuck me until I scream
It would make sense if he had an actual dick. T-dicks are barely larger than a school eraser; maybe if you're lucky it'll be as big as a lipstick tube. Not something worth bragging about or breaking lamps for.
> God has forgiven him. Maybe Piltover hasn't and maybe the family of those poor kids haven't
Literally 'fuck dem kids'. Yeah you might have killed them with your research and might've felt guilt over it but look at that pussy, dawg! You gotta fuck that pussy with your 2 inch long taco meat!
> He is proof that Jayce can still get into Heaven
Not while being a tranny. You have to repent for that. You're still going to Hell.
> He sucks messily at his cunt
Is it drooling like a dog?
> His bottom growth and absence of tits have been maintained over his incarceration with the help of his mediocre diet and adequate physical health
So...it's barely bigger than your palm and malnutrition makes it stick out. That's not healthy. Someone hasn't told you this but you should've used that Latino heritage to cook good food. Prisoners don't attack those who make good food. This is also the first time that Jayce is written as being thinner than average vs packing on the muscle and becoming an MS13 bad boy.
> Yeah. And I'm going to fuck you with it
> Still calls it a clit when it comes to penetration
This isn't giving me the Big Dick Energy vibe you think it does.
> He thrusts himself inside. Viktor is warm and inviting, tightening lightly as if to welcome him in
If he's 'tightening lightly' it means there isn't enough material for him to clench around.
> Pulling back just to slam inside once more
Slam inside with what?
> As he's slotted within his soft walls
Slotted inside with what?
> He was booking two one way tickets to the furthest city available
All that for a literal fucking micropenis? All that for something that isn't even larger than your pointer finger to 'slam inside'? Fuck, he's better off with masturbating with a paper towel roll.
> Everything happens for a reason and I was brought to that prison to free you. You never belonged there
?? He killed several children. By his own admission he belongs there, but I guess we have to deal with Retard Logic and accept that an openly trans priest who has not been excommunicated and does not abide by the scripture he quotes - see Deuteronomy 22:5 - enjoys getting fucked by something smaller than a Twix bar. Pathetic!
Medieval marriage AU got an update! Learn how 36 other consorts, including actual women, were tossed aside for our Pick Me Insert.
> he's to ride to the border of Demacia to escort their delegation for a vision
For the record, this is Demacia on a map:
It is not going to take them a week to get there.
> Why didn't they choose the Demacian princess?
Because the plot, silly! We don't those blonde Valkyries - we want the disabled Pick Me Pooner (who is still chosen based on reproductive value, btw, no actual men were offered as consorts to Jayce)!
> 36 potential consorts
> He was the second one chosen
> Picked because he was the smartest and the other girls were too busy talking about nails, fashion and makeup and not things like engineering or the Bell Curve
Oh yeah, that's a Pick Me.
> In the few months of their marriage, there's been no shortage of carnal activity
Of course not, not when said carnal activity is done solely for reproductive purposes and he picked the one with complementary genitalia. How many of those consorts were men, again? Oh, right - none. All were AFAB.
> Pleasure followed by an attempt to procreate. Or rather, pleasure including an attempt to procreate
...that's what heterosexual sex is, yes.
> Dives in with the enthusiasm of a starved man
Cliché.
> Swallows him down. He's too large for Viktor to fit
And then you have Jayce gobble down that 'small cock' like he's sucking on a chicklet. The jokes write themselves: men choke others with their genitalia, trans men are cute and playful with theirs.
> Delicate flesh
He's just so dainty and soft and tiny and pale and white and -
> The pert breasts dragging against him with each movement
What breasts?
> Warm, tight, as inviting as any cunt
Note he said 'cunt', not 'hole', because our 'gay' man here isn't actually gay. You aren't gay if you haven't sucked a dick for 20 bucks.
> Viktor is choking on him, and it's entirely of his own volition
He gets choked, but Jayce can just suck along and giggle. He isn't choked by anything.
> Swallows his load down like he was made for it
He was.
> He'll be gone for only a week or so
Consult the map. That distance, without the aid of airships, is going to take you MONTHS.
Oh, that's nice! Surely nothing bad will happen to it, yeah?
> For the first time, Jayce thinks Viktor truly looks small. Of course he's objectively aware that they have a size difference
He's just uwu so smol while our Latino Heat here is 6'7 with a tiny head and huge shoulders. You know, the yaoi look. In any case, the time skip must've really taken months, and not a single week, as our blushing maiden goes from proudly declaring he is with child to having a miscarriage. Looks like the yolk got scrambled too soon.
> It was yesterday, out of nowhere
It is never 'out of nowhere', there are symptoms, but we don't hear about that because the most important character is the dick owner and whether he gets to maintain his bloodline. He's ashamed of his love and he thinks having two kids (that he will not raise) will make it go away? What?
> His own self-centered thoughts fade away
Name a time when he has NOT been self-centered.
> All Jayce wanted from his homecoming was a smile, maybe a kiss goodnight
You should tell him the roast should be on the table and that he should smile more.
> Lest a child that scarcely had a chance
He was in the first trimester. I assume this was before any quickening; or, if it was after quickening (second trimester) then his Demacia trip was decidedly longer than a week or two. He's been gone for months if we're going off the gestation period here.
> He reeks of sweat and horse and a week without a wash
Oh, thank God there are no scenes of him swallowing clumpy dick cheese. I might just vomit (and don't give PBM any ideas).
> Wearing a velvet jacket, tight in the waist and embroidered with golden stars dotted with freshwater pearls
He's gotta show off that feminine waist. Makes the testosterone and sperm quality spike.
> Th chain circlet around his head has a simple pearl adornment resting in the center of his forehead
Very masc. Did he get it from Temu? If the pearl hangs any lower he'll become cross-eyed like the Maya.
> He's tired of being pleasant to people who matter so little, for people who talk about dull things and don't have the perfect waist to rest his hand on
You are going to be a King at 30. You are going to have to be pleasant to these people for the rest of your life - or you can be a classic boyar and simply arrange for them to be killed in 'bizarre accidents' to seize their wealth. You're the king, after all. You can do whatever you want.
> He's defending himself in the face of a rather upfront insult
That's not an insult but a statement of fact. Jayce married him as a love match because he was the second one chosen out of 36 candidates. He insists he loves him because of his mind and not his body (despite every body being AFAB and this being a Medieval AU). They're getting upset over a nothingburger.
> She implied we were a love match
BECAUSE YOU ARE, AND BECAUSE YOU ADMITTED IT YOU FUCKING IDIOT. Why are we talking about 'getting over him' WHEN YOU ARE MARRIED FOR LIFE, YOU CHOSE HIM FOR HIS REPRODUCTIVE CAPABILITIES, WHAT ARE WE TALKING ABOUT HERE
> My husband is a clever one, not to be underestimated
This is the only time we ever see him actually be intelligent. Give me more of that Bloodborne AU that had him make an RPG out of his cane. That was badass!
> Your hands are large
Who needs armour for a big hunt when he can wrestle any animal he wants? Bears should watch the fuck out.
> We have ample time, take as much time as you need for yourself
Wow, he sure did get over that miscarriage real quick. I guess yeti hands and huge Mexican man meat will do that.
> His decision to marry Viktor had little to do with having children
> Admits it would be an eventuality
> Picked him from a pool of AFAB-only people
It's a Medieval AU. He married him for his reproductive capability. Otherwise they'd override his wishes and give him a fertile blonde because Viktor would be too disabled to reproduce.
> Entourage for a grand tour that spans half a year
> Still asks when his hubby would return
200 IQ right here.
> Something akin to urgency.
> There is no real urgency
So which is it?
> You're going to be so tight around me
Oh yeah, in the first iteration he's one of those 'he was huge' descriptions complete with the 'it's never gonna fit'. The usual. Again, they're awfully buddy buddy in the *checks notes* few weeks after losing a pregnancy that was pretty far along.
> Spitting on this hand before he strokes
That is wholly unnecessary because he was already wet.
> His right hand warps around that slender neck, thumb grazing mole on that pale column
There's that white swan-neck everyone loves!
> Gentle skin
He's just uwu so dainty.
> Two men
And one of them was chosen for his female reproductive organs.
> No reason to waste an opportunity for the seed to take
Weak. Real Medieval women would plot their sex sessions to occur right before ovulation. They could tell due to their cervical fluid. You'd think such a genius would have such a science down pat, but talking about female biology like that is deeply triggering. We have to stick with the heterosexual sex and childbirth instead.
Cool, he's still going to be gone for half a year and will you shit out a baby already? We need to see if that broken body can handle a pregnancy or not.
In celebration of this ship gaining 20k fics - and the ensuing bragging rights therein - Rekki, the same author who wrote a character not knowing what crabs were and figured out that ocean water was indeed salty, has a few things to say on mischaracterization of her favourite characters. In short: it's OK when they do it, but if you make a single mistake, you are an ableist homophobe.
"This shit is not that serious" say the people who think Ao3 metrics makes their ship better. Rekki co-wrote that one fic where a fairy got outed as one because he couldn't use his magic to hide or change the shape of his ears (same fairy could change their sex at will, but Rekki preferred the penis-in-vagina sex because actual gay men turn her off). Same one wrote a very long fic where a character did not know what a crab was (see above) and beta read for such legendary lines such as 'his pussy drooled like a dog' and 'an affront to biology that merits consideration'.
"Provided the characters are treated with respect"
> Writes their Top as a ravenous, raging male rapist who can't control his animalistic rage
Ho hum.
NemoEntropy, who loves bragging about how Jayvik outnumbers Meljay 200:1, says that mischaracterization is part of the point of an AU. What her black mould wheezing ass doesn't realize is that mischaracterization is NOT part of any AU - you are just making a completely separate character. Reducing women to their male relationships is bad; reducing your token white troon fave (who is actually male) to a tradwife who 'can't wait to fuck my sexy husband' is 100% permissible.
On a lighter note, here is a username that I chuckled at. It's not 'Cockclencher3000' or 'Ijerkofftolittleboys', but it's funny.
You know that's an autistic female trying to capture teenage boy humour.
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Cordeliacordate, co-author of that pedophilic cowboy fic with the sexy poops (she provided the autistic horsegirl knowledge) has been gifted a fic from yet another pedophile, benjasaurus. Surprisingly, this one features adults and a true and honest penis owner (I was shocked when it was actually a real one). Cordeliacordate has been accused of plagiarizing other people's works and is a huge fan of yaoi anatomy.
> Filling he space in a similar way to the man himself
> All sign pointed in favour of his authority, calling to his presence and demanding attention
Weird way to write the same thing twice.
> Tilting his head like the shark he was
All I can think of is cartilage snapping as it tilts at a 45 degree angle.
> This was his least favourite part of being a scientist
> Admits he's grateful and enjoys it anyways
OK.
> The King of Zaun didn't take the hand of just any street urchin
So we've got Jilco, too. Nice.
> I'm not sure what might have given you the impression that I will be more benevolent
The 'bottom Viktor' tag is right there. Albeit in this case, he's topping from the bottom. I'm just as surprised as you, truly.
Bunny Jayce is often used to denote Bottom Jayce, because rabbits are cute and unassuming. But making a brown man a sex PET, instead of a sex PEST, is demarcated by a thin line of separation. If he ain't a rapist, he's bred for sex.
Sounds like he has the teeth of an omnivore rather than an herbivore. He's a Bunny In Name Only. BINO.
> Tasting every part of Viktor's cock
I was waiting for the twist on this and for it to be revealed it's a roid clit, but nope, it's a good ole fashioned cock with balls and a true foreskin. It's a real surprise coming from an author who almost exclusively writes this character with a vagina.
> An eagerness to please and hunger for cock
Put that on a t-shirt.
OWO what's this? He has a BIG slice of man meat, too? The Slavic Slammer has finally arrived!
> Not all vastaya could speak, but those that could were oftentimes dangerous
How nice for a species to be used as sex slaves - that is a cordeliacordate reference - rather than be seen as a functional, intelligent species. Making the brown man a sex retard to please a white man is a nice touch on the race play.
> You're going to fuck little bunnies into me
Wrong set of anatomy. He's too old, too; benjasaurus would rather a child get impregnated, Epstein-style.
Well. Least it involves two adult males for once, even if one is wearing bunny years.
For the record, this is the same author:
I read this one. The 32-year-old is a rapist priest who rapes our lil dood back into being a tradwife. It's OK because atrans pedophile proud person of gender wrote it.
The author who wrote a pedophilic fic about a priest 'having sex' with a child vampire has written a gift fic for another pedophile (this seems to be a recurring trend this month). This one features a babysitter who has had 'connections' for the kid since they were five years old. It's OK because they only end up fucking when said kid is 13-years-old. Put him on a flight log, already!
BTW, said babysitter also wants a homophobic hate crime to happen so he can fuck the 13-year-old instead. I am not joking.
> Growing up
> 13 years old
> Eyed at physically and sexually since he was five years old
> Is viewed as a 'son' by said groomer babysitter
We also need to wonder why he needs to change a five-year-old when they are old enough to change themselves. It's just creepy for an older male to do this to a young female child. The irony of this is that the author talks about men being creepy as if it doesn't apply to groomer babysitter here. The added bonus of him 'affirming' his gender and how he helped him move from dresses and pink bowties in his hair to boy's clothes is supposed to make him look morally superior. It does not.
> But that isn't how puberty works
Correct. This flat-chested 'boy' is going through female puberty. You are more concerned about taking a 13-year-old's virginity than, say, talking to them about menstruation or HPV.
A binder, nice. Nothing says sex appeal like a 13-year-old destroying her breasts because she wants to be a boy so bad. Note that having vaginal sex at that tender age doesn't give them dysphoria, but their breasts do.
> Physical changes to the body means sex hormones aren't that far behind
> It won't be long before he's hanging out with people who go to clubs
Why are you fantasizing about a 13-year-old going to clubs? Why are you thinking about how you, at that age, had sex and woke up in cum-stained bedsheets? That's weird, bro.
> Simply cannot let this poor kid explore the world this unprepared
"Other men are rapist creeps but I, someone who had sexual feelings for you at the age of five, am not a creepy pedophilic rapist!"
> This is now about his well-being and safety they're talking about. Jayce needs to prepare him for the real world
Again, why are you, as an 'upstanding man' who calls other men dogs who don't care about consent, thinking about a teenager going to clubs to fuck strangers?
> Viktor is like a son to him
And he's ready to 'work him in' like a Latina does by her uncle before her Quinceañera.
The best part about this whole thing is this fucker wanting a HOMOPHOBIC HATE CRIME TO HAPPEN so he can get in there and break them up. Jayviks are never beating the allegations that they are a fundamentally fucked up people.
And how old is Jayce, again? Clearly not college-aged, even though the author has made him a full-grown adult fucking a literal child. It's also ironic he's saying a senior shouldn't be messing with a 13-year-old as if he isn't a senior himself.
> His oversized shirt swallows his small frame
He's just uwu so smol.
> That only Jayce can teach Viktor all the nuances regarding sex while still being safe and careful
Yeah, you're just 'teaching him' all the ways to please a male because you instinctively know that pooner will only ever want dick. Better to break him in early and only crave yours, eh?
> Smooth and hairless, not yet affected by puberty
Girls do start growing hair by then. This is just to add to the 'lolita' factor as hairless, smooth genitalia is indicative of sexual immaturity.
> Along his folds and up his cock
He might be a rapist groomer, but at least he ain't a transphobe!
See point above. He can lust after the lack of pubic hair, but he can call a clitoris a cock so as not to 'invalidate' the minor he's grooming.
Ah, figures there's a date rape plot. Nothing like a babysitter who wanted to a homophobic hate crime to happen to show his object of affection how men are really dogs! Nothing screams male feminism like date rape!
> There's a cock battering his cunt
He's raping him because he doesn't want to leave him, see. Isn't their love beautiful? It's cosmically ordained pedophilia!
> gets date raped and is currently being raped
> Thinks about how he was undressing on purpose to give his babysitter a clue he was attracted to him
> Is 13-years-old and shouldn't be thinking like this
> Gets raped so severely his vagina bleeds but still insists his babysitter isn't a bad person
Holy delusion, Batman!
You can tell that a pooner/AFAB wrote this because even while enduring gender-affirming rape, all they can think of is watching rom-coms and cuddling under a blankie.
> Like you're made just for me
I'd make a 'because you have complementary genitalia' comment but this is a 13-year-old, so...
> props him up like he's a lifeless doll
I get the GHB is talking but he's treated like that even without it.
I legit thought he was going to get sodomized, but it seems the anal fisting is saved for 15-year-olds.
> Pushes his cock into Viktor's mouth
> Shoves his cock deeper into his throat
> Imagine it feels like a very big, rock-hard potato
Mhm. I bet you feel so safe and secure that those nasty, mean men were outdone by this stalwart gentleman who date raped you and will continue to do so because he needs a job. Aren't male feminists the greatest thing?
He got his asshole fingered and his vagina ripped apart, but at least he can curl up under a blankie and watch some rom-coms. There's nothing more masc than that!
MGCraig has returned after a hiatus, and this new work has been beta-read by none other than prettybadmagic, Arcane's Jeffrey Epstein/Roman Polansky/Ghislaine Maxwell/Colleen Hoover. MGCraig, to this day, wonders why she gets pulled into proship drama; being friends and cavorting with a pedophile will do that. As she is aware of her pieces here, and brings things fact up on her Twitter from time to time: I can say I am not friends with a shotacon who writes 'tight like an unblooded girlchild'. This was also a gift for an artist named Gigi Valentine, a flat-assed Latvian who just draws M/F sex while slapping the M/M tag on it. The lines for this fic are:
- even if it might be unrealistic for a person who sucks dick at a glory hole on the regular to have trouble deep throating.
- He’s flattered, even, that he’s got a dick worth more than one round in the glory hole.
- There’s no sound of his piss hitting water or porcelain or even skin, just the sound of the guy softly swallowing and swallowing. The motion undulates his mouth and throat around Jayce over and over, like his dick is getting massaged.
- pussy is unsafe for a separate reason
Enjoy the Bear Grylls challenge: Glory Hole edition. This piece also has fanart.
> Piltover's best lager
It better not be Coors Lite. This is the same author who thought serving Coors Lite at a rich wedding was a good idea.
> A cute guy with a small waist
You sure that's a guy?
> Jayce can't say he's not jealous
Nothing like having a pussy-owning friend who identifies as a man be a sex fiend. Everyone wants their ready-to-go pooner lined up. There is no easier pussy than that of an FTM.
> Pisses for an inordinate amount of time thanks to the three beers
Hope that lager is good and not cheap, because Jayce does indeed use Viktor as a portable urinal - which, btw, is PBM talking, because she has a piss fetish.
> He wonders if Viktor's alluded-to-casual sex life includes visiting glory holes
It also includes STD testing because you know that pussy is going to smell from all the dirty dicks he takes. He's lucky Jayce washes his penis.
> So Jayce doesn't have to see how unclean it is
Glory hole fics from these people are seldom the ones seen in real life. There are no caked on drug stains or cracked toilets or vomit or shit stains, just graffiti and some droplets of piss. We can't have it be too filthy or else it'll offend our AFAB sensibilities.
> This is insane. This is disgusting. This is pathetic more than anything
> He shouldn't resort to a glory hole
Hey, he didn't drink Coors Lite this time. That's the real terror.
> People don't want to get splinters on their dicks, after all
Yeah, we can't be scraping those huge dick veins and have a medical emergency, now can we?
> He just admitted out loud that he's new to this
I assume the Internet doesn't exist because Google would be a tap away.
> Jayce is a lot less likely to contract something from them than they are him
They can still contract an STD from your dirty dick, especially since they do engage in PIV sex later. You're lucky he doesn't have cold sore herpes.
> Spreads his legs to get his dick level with the hole
> Lines his cockhead up with the hole
When your beta read is too busy fapping to underage sex she doesn't realize you said the same thing twice.
> So, are you a guy
Because the worst thing imaginable would be finding out the wrong sex, race or species is giving him head. Then again, women don't do glory holes so this is very gender affirming!
> He's not sure why they conjured slopping, anonymous oral in his mind
...that's what glory holes are for: anonymous, sloppy, rough sex. Also, in the business we call this foreshadowing.
> It feels strong, but delicate
Him and his uwu hands that are just so fine and dainty.
> He can't tell if it's taking the guy zero effort to swallow him, or if his mouth and throat are getting stuffed full
If he's not choking or making any noises indicating he's having an issue, yeah, he's a deepthroating pro.
> Even if it might be unrealistic for a person who sucks dick at a glory hole on the regular to have trouble deepthroating
You just answered your own question.
> That slender neck
Ah yes, that slender white swan-neck that you can wait to see with a dick bulge inside it! That's one way to skewer a bird, eh?
> Viktor would look overwhelmed sucking Jayce's dick
Proud words for a proudly identified trans slut.
> He's coming in Viktor's fucked-open throat
Now, this might not be the classic tale of a pooner using a urinal cake to wipe her pussy, but let's just say our boy here decides to use a portable urinal with the cake included. After he softens up, he tries to pull away from our pooner slut here, only to find that he wants to be used as said portable urinal.
> Enough post-nut clarity from his decision to fuck a glory hole that a stab of fear hits his beer-soaked gut
Be careful drinking all that beer. They're xenoestrogens and will give you a beer gut you can't get rid of. MGCraig would know given that she goes bar-diving every weekend in Wisconsin.
> If not for the fact that the anti-diuretics from the now-four beers have him needing to take another piss
Four? That's it? At your size and weight? Weak. Your tequila-drinking ancestors are looking down upon you in shame.
> He's flattered, even, that he's got a dick worth more than one round in the glory hole
Or that the beer is even cheaper than Coors Lite and it comes out like water. Bear Grylls is paying attention.
Yes, we do get a Bear Grylls challenge here, and that is solely due to PBM as she has a piss fetish AND a scat fetish (though having a man shit in another's mouth is something pooners don't want to go into yet). His bladder is 'full', despite drinking only ONE beer, and I have to assume that our boy Viktor here is chugging back literal beer-piss-water and can do it without gagging because that's how cheap it is.
> His piss doesn't taste the best
Drink better beer and then you can proudly say your piss tastes like Stella Artois.
> No one's ever swallowed Jayce's piss before
Go to a lemon party and you'll have everyone pissing in your face and drinking yours. You should try it sometime.
> He's fucking pussy. The guy has a pussy. Which is fine, and by some standards, great
The fuck you mean 'by some standards'? You never have your proud bisexual here fuck ass, or take things up his ass, even when you SAY he does. He is always fucking pussy. I also assume the 'emergency chemical shower' is a reference to a wildly popular trans Viktor fic published last year that got over 1k bookmarks, but if it isn't, consider it a 'happy accident'.
> He can fuck unbidden into an anonymous cunt
Because that's the number one fantasy of any heterosexual male, as evidenced by 'The Band Played On'.
> A pretty, slender plane of back and spine bent over in front of him
Just that pretty white skin and that pretty smooth back and that alabstrine skin and - you get it.
> Blue-pale skin
OK who invited the Blue Man Group? Or an Asari? Get my girl Aria the fuck outta there.
> Sometimes he bottoms out hard against the wall of the guy's cervix
So did OhNovi's horse cock Jayce. Does that mean he has a horse cock, or said horse cock was just an above-average penis?
> But pussy is unsafe for a separate reason
This is a real fucking line. It's so unsafe you'll fuck into one anonymously without fear of catching an STD from a dirty pooner - OHHH you meant pregnancy! Oh, well, I'm using that line now. Thanks, Craig!
> It's tighter this time, so tight Jayce curls his toes and clenches his jaw
> He's switched to his ass
I assume the 'sticky sound' was him using that unsafe pussy juice as lube. Better than the Coors Lite piss, I guess.
> He's giving access to all three of his holes in one encounter
Aren't you a lucky man? And you got a free, portable toilet too! It's not the same as faeviktor's fic where our dood shoved a toilet brush up his ass to scrub it because Jayce was using said ass as a toilet, but it's close enough.
> He preferred the feel of his pussy, but there's an additional layer of debauchery here that's elevating it
Well, yeah, you're a 'bisexual' male, yes? Ass and pussy should be your faves. Because, yeah, liking both is part of your identity.
> Maybe it's his dick
It's not that alpha dick that is an affront to biology that merits consideration. It just happens to smell like cheap beer.
> If this is what the guy is into, he would fit perfectly with Jayce's life
AKA he wants an easy pussy and no boundaries and a trans man is perfect for that because there is no gatekeeping involved. They want to be gay men, so they want to assume the voraciousness of gay male sexuality, yet they forget they are not male, and that they are seen only as portable urinals for men to fuck. This is no different. It's about HIS need to fuck and HIS needs being met because his beloved partner is (allegedly) too stingy.
Oh, sorry, did I apply too much critical thinking to your het porn disguised as gay gloryhole sex? Sorry. Try not being friends with a pedophile next time.
Of course the epic twist is that it was Viktor doing the Bear Grylls challenge all along and offered up all his holes to our spicy Latino who chugged back cheap watery beer - which is, again, a PBM thing as she has a piss fetish. There might not be any 'lube flowed down his thighs like diarrhea' line, but this is close enough.
That serial killer romance has been completed. Time to core out some white meat!
'Tis the season for joy and giving, and what better way to celebrate that than by sucking Santa's nut sac? It ain't your Billy Bob Thornton's 'Bad Santa', but it has Hallmark dreams of wanting to settle down and having a family...while gargling back ball sweat. When he comes down that chimney, you're gonna need a mop. The lines for this fic are:
- Are you ready? Are you ready to be mamãe Noel? I'm going to cum inside you, gonna get you all nice and round, gonna fill you up—”
- “I-I'm going to fill you completely, mommy, you're so naughty, wanting my balls, damn it, I love you, gonna breed you, fuck, gonna to cum, I'm gonna—”
> Managed to find a tiara that fit well
Very masc. You know, the only thing that was masculine to begin with with this character was him getting AIDS from all that receptive anal sex. Other than that, it's very much a woman LARPing as a man who wants to settle down and have kids with sexy Santa over here.
> Suffocating in the thirty degrees Celsius outside the building
The author is Brazilian, so she's using Brazilian weather here. The only other places in the US - since so many of them set it in a US-themed setting - would be Florida or Arizona. Considering they are eating Brazilian dishes, it's safe to say they're in Brazil - just not the favela part. Santa would be sucking a semi-automatic.
> There was something sexy about the costume
> Gets more aroused at said male being nice around kids
Oh my, it's almost as if your biological urges that you tried to suppress are rearing their ugly heads. You want to be a man so bad, but also want to be a mother and are referred to by feminine pronouns. You aren't even trying.
> It was always burnt
Burnt Brazilian coffee must be a new level of blasphemy yet to be unlocked.
> You must be nearing 40, right?
Ooof, imagine being told that by a white woman, while also being a white woman. Aging like rotten bananas in the heat, yo.
> Doesn't look his age
> Has a sensitive stomach because white people don't season they food
> The only thing he could replace that was his own bed, with his own boyfriend, in big boots
What size is he? Can he crush Viktor's rib cage with them? Can he plug up a chimney with them? Dropkick Blitzer to Jupiter? I must know.
> But there aren't any children in the family yet
I love the casual admission here that Jayce knows exactly what sex Viktor is and is going to use that female anatomy to its full extent.
> His abdomen formed a comfortable belly, no longer as hard as before
He is supposed to be gargling on cock and yet that belly fat that acts like a second tongue is going to physically prevent him from doing so. I bet his man tits are bigger than Viktor's due to all the xenoestrogens he's consuming.
> Binders, buttons
Wearing binders in 30 C heat? That's gotta smell as bad as the New Jersey harbour you've got in the pants.
> Sometimes, with his hairy arms crossed, body in front of the television, he looked like a father
Ah yes, the man who sits in front of the TV all day watching sports, growing a larger and larger belly from consuming all that shitty bear, while the trans man runs around doing the child care, feeding, cooking and cleaning. Trust those biological instincts, dood, and you'll see what kind of 'male privilege' you actually have.
> He can't help but feel a certain kind of lust in all of that
He's always ready to shit out kids as if he doesn't have congenital defects that will be passed on to his children. I'm pretty sure Brazil doesn't have embryonic screening programs (just checked, there is none).
> Husband, father of his children
Note he doesn't consider HIMSELF a father, just the sperm donor. Sounds very TERFy, Miss AIDS.
> They liked to perform rituals
Hopefully not the Giselle Bundchen kind.
> Nor did the water bill allow them to do much in the shower
They really must live in a nice area because they got a porcelain tub over there?
> There was a whole journey to be mad, more difficult than just taking their clothes off and fucking
And that's why we have some salty ball sucking: it isn't about the sex, it's about the nutrients, because white people don't season they genitalia.
> Asks him to wear the clothes that are made of shitty material
> Admits that seeing him with kids invokes maternal feelings
I hope those clothes are at least laundered. That 30 C heat - with HUMIDITIY - is going to make that cheap polyester smell. I do not want to read someone smelling like a chip truck.
> Your little butt looks so cute in lycra
It'd also be covered in pimples and rashes because that white boy can't handle the heat. He is going to smell absolutely terrible.
> Ready to grab Santa's sack?
He's ready to take those presents down his ho-ho-hooha.
> His ribs showing against his pale skin sprinkled with freckles and scars
But can you play the xylophone on them? Is he thin naturally or is that due to AIDS? Sorry, gotta ask.
Oh, thank God his balls don't stink. They smell like a Terry's Chocolate Orange!
> Beautiful on its girth and color
If you're wondering, yeah, he has a Coke can dick.
> Or rather, Santa's - as Papai Noel's sack
He's going to give that white boi his protein intake.
> Buried against the thick hair on his groin
I don't know what position he's in - dick facing the face vs the navel - but either way, if he is sitting on top of him, his balls and thigh are going to cover Viktor's face. He won't be able to see him, not with that Coke can dick. Consider it a fleshy camouflage.
> He watched those beautiful lips suck around the base of his cock
So he's hovering above him enough for his balls to get sucked, and can also see his lips...OK, then. Let's just say Santa's nut sack here is casting a bit too big of a shadow.
I really have to wonder what the point of this tag is if all they want is a male/female pregnancy. On the one hand, you want this character to be seen as a 'male with a vagina', but we also have to call them a mommy. We have to refer to their clitoris as a 'cock', but we also use female-centric terms with them...pick a struggle. You cannot have it both ways.
> Do you want to be Santa's wife?
It's not transphobia, it's just a fetish, chud. We can be called women if we want to, sweaty~
> Knew him well, and, well, in the trance he was entering, he knew himself well enough
Well thank you for making that clear and well, I'm still wondering about that ballsac shadow because, well, the physics is kinda throwing me off.
> Was as wide as a can
Yeah I figured. There's only one kind of penile physique they've got here, and they give it to the Latino man that they never want to write as the one getting pregnant.
> Tearing up with the urge to vomit
> Has tears and snot coming out
Sexy. Nothing like snot bubbles acting like green lube against your red dick - hey, it's Christmas themed!
> He imagined himself undoing himself
I can't imagine anyone other than yourself undoing yourself. Know thyself before someone else.
> Doing what he always did - fucking him without any protection and coming inside
> He would be an incredible mommy
He's been fucking him raw for years - and I assume he is not on T, only binding his breasts - and he STILL refers to him as 'mother'. He doesn't even see him as a man during the throes of sex, lmao.
> Probably infertile
Well he was seropositive in one universe, so he was definitely breeding something!
> One finger from him was already quite a lot
I bet he could stop a bullet with those yaoi hands. Get him on the Brazilian special forces, stat.
> In response, Jayce thrust himself in all the way and kissed his neck
I guess during that time he was choking Santa's mommy (Mrs. Santa's sister was not available for comment) he moved back down to position.
> I'm going to make you a mommy just like you want it
This is a real line.
> He felt the pain turn to pleasure
Cliché.
>His beanie slippped
OH GOD NO NOT THE TIM POOL BEANIE
> Should have asked to lick them before that
You don't know what he was stepping on in those Brazilian streets.
> Get some condensed milk on his face
You'll be getting Montezuma's Revenge from licking those boots, fam.
> Are you ready to be mamae?
Me when I stuff the turkey and put it in the oven
> G-give me your cum, make me a mommy
> I'm going to fill you completely, mommy, you're so naughty
These are all real lines. Now imagine Billy Bob Thornton as Bad Santa reading them.
> Sweetness flowed down to his womb, filling it as promised
Can't bake those cookies if the oven is broke, papai!
Yeah, it's almost as if those biological urges are a bitch! Nothing says masculinity like being called a mommy and told how many biscuits are going to be baked in your oven!
Yeah you can't tell me that Miss AIDS doesn't write this to write heterosexual sex without it sounding boring. You don't even try to use gender-neutral terms here. You can't even call your mamacita a 'seahorse dad'? Just a mom? Sounds awfully heteronormative, mamai!
Having read that, I am thinking of a hilarious crossover: Bad Santa meeting Herm (Waterboy) from Dispatch and thinking he's a grown-up Thurman Merman while being drunk as fuck. Ends up discovering his superpower is that, whenever he's shitfaced, he's bulletproof. Fund it!
> Filling he space in a similar way to the man himself
> All sign pointed in favour of his authority, calling to his presence and demanding attention
Weird way to write the same thing twice.
> Tilting his head like the shark he was
All I can think of is cartilage snapping as it tilts at a 45 degree angle.
> This was his least favourite part of being a scientist
> Admits he's grateful and enjoys it anyways
OK.
> The King of Zaun didn't take the hand of just any street urchin
So we've got Jilco, too. Nice.
> I'm not sure what might have given you the impression that I will be more benevolent
The 'bottom Viktor' tag is right there. Albeit in this case, he's topping from the bottom. I'm just as surprised as you, truly.
Bunny Jayce is often used to denote Bottom Jayce, because rabbits are cute and unassuming. But making a brown man a sex PET, instead of a sex PEST, is demarcated by a thin line of separation. If he ain't a rapist, he's bred for sex.
Sounds like he has the teeth of an omnivore rather than an herbivore. He's a Bunny In Name Only. BINO.
> Tasting every part of Viktor's cock
I was waiting for the twist on this and for it to be revealed it's a roid clit, but nope, it's a good ole fashioned cock with balls and a true foreskin. It's a real surprise coming from an author who almost exclusively writes this character with a vagina.
> An eagerness to please and hunger for cock
Put that on a t-shirt.
OWO what's this? He has a BIG slice of man meat, too? The Slavic Slammer has finally arrived!
> Not all vastaya could speak, but those that could were oftentimes dangerous
How nice for a species to be used as sex slaves - that is a cordeliacordate reference - rather than be seen as a functional, intelligent species. Making the brown man a sex retard to please a white man is a nice touch on the race play.
> You're going to fuck little bunnies into me
Wrong set of anatomy. He's too old, too; benjasaurus would rather a child get impregnated, Epstein-style.
Well. Least it involves two adult males for once, even if one is wearing bunny years.
For the record, this is the same author:
I read this one. The 32-year-old is a rapist priest who rapes our lil dood back into being a tradwife. It's OK because a
The author who wrote a pedophilic fic about a priest 'having sex' with a child vampire has written a gift fic for another pedophile (this seems to be a recurring trend this month). This one features a babysitter who has had 'connections' for the kid since they were five years old. It's OK because they only end up fucking when said kid is 13-years-old. Put him on a flight log, already!
BTW, said babysitter also wants a homophobic hate crime to happen so he can fuck the 13-year-old instead. I am not joking.
> Growing up
> 13 years old
> Eyed at physically and sexually since he was five years old
> Is viewed as a 'son' by said groomer babysitter
We also need to wonder why he needs to change a five-year-old when they are old enough to change themselves. It's just creepy for an older male to do this to a young female child. The irony of this is that the author talks about men being creepy as if it doesn't apply to groomer babysitter here. The added bonus of him 'affirming' his gender and how he helped him move from dresses and pink bowties in his hair to boy's clothes is supposed to make him look morally superior. It does not.
> But that isn't how puberty works
Correct. This flat-chested 'boy' is going through female puberty. You are more concerned about taking a 13-year-old's virginity than, say, talking to them about menstruation or HPV.
A binder, nice. Nothing says sex appeal like a 13-year-old destroying her breasts because she wants to be a boy so bad. Note that having vaginal sex at that tender age doesn't give them dysphoria, but their breasts do.
> Physical changes to the body means sex hormones aren't that far behind
> It won't be long before he's hanging out with people who go to clubs
Why are you fantasizing about a 13-year-old going to clubs? Why are you thinking about how you, at that age, had sex and woke up in cum-stained bedsheets? That's weird, bro.
> Simply cannot let this poor kid explore the world this unprepared
"Other men are rapist creeps but I, someone who had sexual feelings for you at the age of five, am not a creepy pedophilic rapist!"
> This is now about his well-being and safety they're talking about. Jayce needs to prepare him for the real world
Again, why are you, as an 'upstanding man' who calls other men dogs who don't care about consent, thinking about a teenager going to clubs to fuck strangers?
> Viktor is like a son to him
And he's ready to 'work him in' like a Latina does by her uncle before her Quinceañera.
The best part about this whole thing is this fucker wanting a HOMOPHOBIC HATE CRIME TO HAPPEN so he can get in there and break them up. Jayviks are never beating the allegations that they are a fundamentally fucked up people.
And how old is Jayce, again? Clearly not college-aged, even though the author has made him a full-grown adult fucking a literal child. It's also ironic he's saying a senior shouldn't be messing with a 13-year-old as if he isn't a senior himself.
> His oversized shirt swallows his small frame
He's just uwu so smol.
> That only Jayce can teach Viktor all the nuances regarding sex while still being safe and careful
Yeah, you're just 'teaching him' all the ways to please a male because you instinctively know that pooner will only ever want dick. Better to break him in early and only crave yours, eh?
> Smooth and hairless, not yet affected by puberty
Girls do start growing hair by then. This is just to add to the 'lolita' factor as hairless, smooth genitalia is indicative of sexual immaturity.
> Along his folds and up his cock
He might be a rapist groomer, but at least he ain't a transphobe!
See point above. He can lust after the lack of pubic hair, but he can call a clitoris a cock so as not to 'invalidate' the minor he's grooming.
Ah, figures there's a date rape plot. Nothing like a babysitter who wanted to a homophobic hate crime to happen to show his object of affection how men are really dogs! Nothing screams male feminism like date rape!
> There's a cock battering his cunt
He's raping him because he doesn't want to leave him, see. Isn't their love beautiful? It's cosmically ordained pedophilia!
> gets date raped and is currently being raped
> Thinks about how he was undressing on purpose to give his babysitter a clue he was attracted to him
> Is 13-years-old and shouldn't be thinking like this
> Gets raped so severely his vagina bleeds but still insists his babysitter isn't a bad person
Holy delusion, Batman!
You can tell that a pooner/AFAB wrote this because even while enduring gender-affirming rape, all they can think of is watching rom-coms and cuddling under a blankie.
> Like you're made just for me
I'd make a 'because you have complementary genitalia' comment but this is a 13-year-old, so...
> props him up like he's a lifeless doll
I get the GHB is talking but he's treated like that even without it.
I legit thought he was going to get sodomized, but it seems the anal fisting is saved for 15-year-olds.
> Pushes his cock into Viktor's mouth
> Shoves his cock deeper into his throat
> Imagine it feels like a very big, rock-hard potato
Mhm. I bet you feel so safe and secure that those nasty, mean men were outdone by this stalwart gentleman who date raped you and will continue to do so because he needs a job. Aren't male feminists the greatest thing?
He got his asshole fingered and his vagina ripped apart, but at least he can curl up under a blankie and watch some rom-coms. There's nothing more masc than that!
MGCraig has returned after a hiatus, and this new work has been beta-read by none other than prettybadmagic, Arcane's Jeffrey Epstein/Roman Polansky/Ghislaine Maxwell/Colleen Hoover. MGCraig, to this day, wonders why she gets pulled into proship drama; being friends and cavorting with a pedophile will do that. As she is aware of her pieces here, and brings things fact up on her Twitter from time to time: I can say I am not friends with a shotacon who writes 'tight like an unblooded girlchild'. This was also a gift for an artist named Gigi Valentine, a flat-assed Latvian who just draws M/F sex while slapping the M/M tag on it. The lines for this fic are:
- even if it might be unrealistic for a person who sucks dick at a glory hole on the regular to have trouble deep throating.
- He’s flattered, even, that he’s got a dick worth more than one round in the glory hole.
- There’s no sound of his piss hitting water or porcelain or even skin, just the sound of the guy softly swallowing and swallowing. The motion undulates his mouth and throat around Jayce over and over, like his dick is getting massaged.
- pussy is unsafe for a separate reason
Enjoy the Bear Grylls challenge: Glory Hole edition. This piece also has fanart.
> Piltover's best lager
It better not be Coors Lite. This is the same author who thought serving Coors Lite at a rich wedding was a good idea.
> A cute guy with a small waist
You sure that's a guy?
> Jayce can't say he's not jealous
Nothing like having a pussy-owning friend who identifies as a man be a sex fiend. Everyone wants their ready-to-go pooner lined up. There is no easier pussy than that of an FTM.
> Pisses for an inordinate amount of time thanks to the three beers
Hope that lager is good and not cheap, because Jayce does indeed use Viktor as a portable urinal - which, btw, is PBM talking, because she has a piss fetish.
> He wonders if Viktor's alluded-to-casual sex life includes visiting glory holes
It also includes STD testing because you know that pussy is going to smell from all the dirty dicks he takes. He's lucky Jayce washes his penis.
> So Jayce doesn't have to see how unclean it is
Glory hole fics from these people are seldom the ones seen in real life. There are no caked on drug stains or cracked toilets or vomit or shit stains, just graffiti and some droplets of piss. We can't have it be too filthy or else it'll offend our AFAB sensibilities.
> This is insane. This is disgusting. This is pathetic more than anything
> He shouldn't resort to a glory hole
Hey, he didn't drink Coors Lite this time. That's the real terror.
> People don't want to get splinters on their dicks, after all
Yeah, we can't be scraping those huge dick veins and have a medical emergency, now can we?
> He just admitted out loud that he's new to this
I assume the Internet doesn't exist because Google would be a tap away.
> Jayce is a lot less likely to contract something from them than they are him
They can still contract an STD from your dirty dick, especially since they do engage in PIV sex later. You're lucky he doesn't have cold sore herpes.
> Spreads his legs to get his dick level with the hole
> Lines his cockhead up with the hole
When your beta read is too busy fapping to underage sex she doesn't realize you said the same thing twice.
> So, are you a guy
Because the worst thing imaginable would be finding out the wrong sex, race or species is giving him head. Then again, women don't do glory holes so this is very gender affirming!
> He's not sure why they conjured slopping, anonymous oral in his mind
...that's what glory holes are for: anonymous, sloppy, rough sex. Also, in the business we call this foreshadowing.
> It feels strong, but delicate
Him and his uwu hands that are just so fine and dainty.
> He can't tell if it's taking the guy zero effort to swallow him, or if his mouth and throat are getting stuffed full
If he's not choking or making any noises indicating he's having an issue, yeah, he's a deepthroating pro.
> Even if it might be unrealistic for a person who sucks dick at a glory hole on the regular to have trouble deepthroating
You just answered your own question.
> That slender neck
Ah yes, that slender white swan-neck that you can wait to see with a dick bulge inside it! That's one way to skewer a bird, eh?
> Viktor would look overwhelmed sucking Jayce's dick
Proud words for a proudly identified trans slut.
> He's coming in Viktor's fucked-open throat
Now, this might not be the classic tale of a pooner using a urinal cake to wipe her pussy, but let's just say our boy here decides to use a portable urinal with the cake included. After he softens up, he tries to pull away from our pooner slut here, only to find that he wants to be used as said portable urinal.
> Enough post-nut clarity from his decision to fuck a glory hole that a stab of fear hits his beer-soaked gut
Be careful drinking all that beer. They're xenoestrogens and will give you a beer gut you can't get rid of. MGCraig would know given that she goes bar-diving every weekend in Wisconsin.
> If not for the fact that the anti-diuretics from the now-four beers have him needing to take another piss
Four? That's it? At your size and weight? Weak. Your tequila-drinking ancestors are looking down upon you in shame.
> He's flattered, even, that he's got a dick worth more than one round in the glory hole
Or that the beer is even cheaper than Coors Lite and it comes out like water. Bear Grylls is paying attention.
Yes, we do get a Bear Grylls challenge here, and that is solely due to PBM as she has a piss fetish AND a scat fetish (though having a man shit in another's mouth is something pooners don't want to go into yet). His bladder is 'full', despite drinking only ONE beer, and I have to assume that our boy Viktor here is chugging back literal beer-piss-water and can do it without gagging because that's how cheap it is.
> His piss doesn't taste the best
Drink better beer and then you can proudly say your piss tastes like Stella Artois.
> No one's ever swallowed Jayce's piss before
Go to a lemon party and you'll have everyone pissing in your face and drinking yours. You should try it sometime.
> He's fucking pussy. The guy has a pussy. Which is fine, and by some standards, great
The fuck you mean 'by some standards'? You never have your proud bisexual here fuck ass, or take things up his ass, even when you SAY he does. He is always fucking pussy. I also assume the 'emergency chemical shower' is a reference to a wildly popular trans Viktor fic published last year that got over 1k bookmarks, but if it isn't, consider it a 'happy accident'.
> He can fuck unbidden into an anonymous cunt
Because that's the number one fantasy of any heterosexual male, as evidenced by 'The Band Played On'.
> A pretty, slender plane of back and spine bent over in front of him
Just that pretty white skin and that pretty smooth back and that alabstrine skin and - you get it.
> Blue-pale skin
OK who invited the Blue Man Group? Or an Asari? Get my girl Aria the fuck outta there.
> Sometimes he bottoms out hard against the wall of the guy's cervix
So did OhNovi's horse cock Jayce. Does that mean he has a horse cock, or said horse cock was just an above-average penis?
> But pussy is unsafe for a separate reason
This is a real fucking line. It's so unsafe you'll fuck into one anonymously without fear of catching an STD from a dirty pooner - OHHH you meant pregnancy! Oh, well, I'm using that line now. Thanks, Craig!
> It's tighter this time, so tight Jayce curls his toes and clenches his jaw
> He's switched to his ass
I assume the 'sticky sound' was him using that unsafe pussy juice as lube. Better than the Coors Lite piss, I guess.
> He's giving access to all three of his holes in one encounter
Aren't you a lucky man? And you got a free, portable toilet too! It's not the same as faeviktor's fic where our dood shoved a toilet brush up his ass to scrub it because Jayce was using said ass as a toilet, but it's close enough.
> He preferred the feel of his pussy, but there's an additional layer of debauchery here that's elevating it
Well, yeah, you're a 'bisexual' male, yes? Ass and pussy should be your faves. Because, yeah, liking both is part of your identity.
> Maybe it's his dick
It's not that alpha dick that is an affront to biology that merits consideration. It just happens to smell like cheap beer.
> If this is what the guy is into, he would fit perfectly with Jayce's life
AKA he wants an easy pussy and no boundaries and a trans man is perfect for that because there is no gatekeeping involved. They want to be gay men, so they want to assume the voraciousness of gay male sexuality, yet they forget they are not male, and that they are seen only as portable urinals for men to fuck. This is no different. It's about HIS need to fuck and HIS needs being met because his beloved partner is (allegedly) too stingy.
Oh, sorry, did I apply too much critical thinking to your het porn disguised as gay gloryhole sex? Sorry. Try not being friends with a pedophile next time.
Of course the epic twist is that it was Viktor doing the Bear Grylls challenge all along and offered up all his holes to our spicy Latino who chugged back cheap watery beer - which is, again, a PBM thing as she has a piss fetish. There might not be any 'lube flowed down his thighs like diarrhea' line, but this is close enough.
That serial killer romance has been completed. Time to core out some white meat!
We ended Chapter 2 without Final Girl getting a dicking down from the artisan serial killer who saved him from his own death trap. Chapter 3 starts off with them exchanging emails, with Jayce asking Viktor what happens if a structure is designed to withstand immense pressure is then met with a force it was not made for: does it break, or does it become stronger as it withstood the force? A classic twist on 'unstoppable force meets immovable object', but I'd rather use the 'it's whatever happened to Building 7.' Viktor, happy with a big cock fucking him raw, responds that the theoretical question involves a 'flawed design' that should be condemned - but a force that 'chooses' to reshape and not break is a 'more dangerous and intriguing variable'. It's meant to be intellectual, but just comes off as someone who read Dan Brown for the first time.
For a Final Girl who is meant to be seething, he is doing none of it; he can't help but think this artisan slasher who has murdered several dozen women is in awe of him because he didn't want to play his game. He is falling in love with said murderer who now 'says his name like a prayer'. I'd say he's just happy he just got Picked, vs, you know, being murdered. He ignores the emails from Heimerdinger and the forensics forum he's on in favour of the ones he gets from his serial killer lover, who has updated the Lover's Lever with a non-lethal failsafe. He says that 'binary choices are a bore' despite, you know, them being in a binary relationship are they are of the opposite sex.
This dialogue really gives off an 'Ow, the Edge' and Redditor-style smarminess I haven't seen in a while.
> No one had seen his own jagged edges and asked him to help them build something
Probably because you're a shut-in and the trans version of Taylor Lorenz? You're a shitty journalist who writes shitty articles for a shitty magazine. The only 'scores' you get in your life is when you kill serial killers after they get high off your pussy.
> Some Final Girl I turned out to be. The Final Girl and the Slasher Fall in love?
Hey, it's a trope. And a very heterosexual one. You fell in love with the first man who showed you his heart and you felt 'seen and heard'. If that isn't the most female thing in existence, what is?
> It is not a linear path, but a hall of mirrors
So progress is an illusion, a refracted image of the original thing that can be smashed with something as simple as a hammer. Huh. Rather poignant.
> The mannequins have been made up to look like his former victims
Glad we're only bringing that up as a minor detail. All of Jayce's victims were white brunettes; the only reason Viktor is alive is because he is the penultimate Pick Me.
> You are in control
Uh huh. That pussy power can't help you now - or at least not yet.
> Soaked in blood and grief
Grief involving what? Who has been grieving? The only thing remotely involving grief is that shitty journo job.
> He is defying the cycle, the trope
You're fitting right into it because the killer is just so entranced and in love with you that he leaves behind his world of killing in order to settle down and have a few kids in a nice house. That, or the trope where he invites you to join him in a couple's murder spree like Karla Homolka did. You ARE the trope - the Pick Me trope.
> It was vindication, it was awe
We know. He just can't believe this Final Girl is acting so different! Must have something to do with a more 'manly' brain.
> This is how I see you. This is how I see us.
He sees them as puzzle pieces that complement each other (intended) or that the only way they got there was through mass murder (actual). He really is Karla Homolka!
>A terrifying, beautiful, intellectual dance where every step was a revelation
So it's a bad Dan Brown novel. OK.
> Burned away by the sheer warmth of being seen
"OMG this sexy serial killer with a large penis who I had sex with understands me! I feel so loved and seen!"
> A dog on a walk is like a person in love - you can't tell them it's the same old world
And a dog on a walk is at the whims of its owner. You are simply being dragged to the location someone else desires.
> Her little three-legged toddle
Huh, didn't know the cat was disabled, too.
> He's oddly touched that Jayce kept the vial of his blood
He's just like Angelina Jolie frfr
> It is the most romantic gesture he has ever experienced
Well the others have involved you putting murderers to sleep with your pussy, so...
I did lol at Jayce teleporting out of that stairwell like a Skyrim NPC. He's 6'2 and several hundred pounds - you are going to hear him.
> They are at the places where his previous victims were found
They are considered 'failures' because they didn't boymode hard enough, apparently.
> Jayce has not abducted anyone in months
Spoiler alert: they end up becoming Barbie and Ken killers. What a great way to subvert expectations!
> Am I walking neck-first into a trap? But he wouldn't do that to me
Of course not. You're the Pick Me. He won't let you die because that pussy game too good.
I'm just giggling at him hobbling out of the car and sprinting to the observatory.
This guy spends his spare time designing elaborate traps like he's a Dark Souls level designer, and the final level is a bridge contraption that is synched to this guy's crippled walk. You have to appreciate the grind. Jigsaw and Ornstein would be proud.
> This labyrinth is a heart, complete with four chambers
My man took time out his day to complete said Dark Souls level in an abandoned observatory with his own supplies, manpower and dreams. Get him into MIT and he'll be designing for the Illuminati in no time.
> Killing Jayce would be a failure
Getting a taste of that serial killer dick sure does change people, eh?
> To defy the binary choice
While becoming Barbie and Ken killers, lmao. Sounds pretty binary and tropey.
> He looks at Jayce. He doesn't see a monster
This entire thing was trying to buck the serial killer/Final Girl trope and ended up turning into the 'I can fix him' trope and the 'Final Girl gets converted because of a good dicking' trope.
He arrived there at around 10 am. This means they were tongue-fucking each other for over twelve hours. That's some dedication right there.
He's a Latino man raised by a Latina single mother. He's going to know how to cook the moment the flipflop came out. What's funny is that Viktor immediately clocks him as being from San Antonio as Texas is a state with a large percentage of Hispanics
San Antonio is 64% Hispanic. The fact our serial killer Ken here never said it but acknowledged it as his hometown means Viktor here has been dwelling among Channers. Next thing you know he'll be talking about haplogroups.
> The key to the puzzle wasn't the participants own life...but the life of someone they love?
Plot twist: they plan on kidnapping more women - and even children - and will put them in these death traps so they can test their love for each other just like our murderer did for our Pick Me. The noble Final Girl who used to use their pussy to slay serial killers is now the waifu-in-crime of one. What a twist!
What a subversion of expectations and tropes! The Final Girl who swore to give justice to victims became Karla Homolka (x3)! Mind you, this epic twist came from the same mind that had this guy murder a black girl with almond milk and then had the white best friend not give a damn because he got fucked in the kitchen afterwards. It's something Crazy Days and Nights would note with irony. What a way to end it. A bunch of women died, but the Pick Me lived. We're defeating the simulation, I guess?
Cleo hopes she did her love of slashers justice. What say you? Were tropes defeated and decisions non-binary, or is it just the ramblings of a retard who got 'sexually abused' by being a sex pest on Discord?
For a Final Girl who is meant to be seething, he is doing none of it; he can't help but think this artisan slasher who has murdered several dozen women is in awe of him because he didn't want to play his game. He is falling in love with said murderer who now 'says his name like a prayer'. I'd say he's just happy he just got Picked, vs, you know, being murdered. He ignores the emails from Heimerdinger and the forensics forum he's on in favour of the ones he gets from his serial killer lover, who has updated the Lover's Lever with a non-lethal failsafe. He says that 'binary choices are a bore' despite, you know, them being in a binary relationship are they are of the opposite sex.
This dialogue really gives off an 'Ow, the Edge' and Redditor-style smarminess I haven't seen in a while.
> No one had seen his own jagged edges and asked him to help them build something
Probably because you're a shut-in and the trans version of Taylor Lorenz? You're a shitty journalist who writes shitty articles for a shitty magazine. The only 'scores' you get in your life is when you kill serial killers after they get high off your pussy.
> Some Final Girl I turned out to be. The Final Girl and the Slasher Fall in love?
Hey, it's a trope. And a very heterosexual one. You fell in love with the first man who showed you his heart and you felt 'seen and heard'. If that isn't the most female thing in existence, what is?
> It is not a linear path, but a hall of mirrors
So progress is an illusion, a refracted image of the original thing that can be smashed with something as simple as a hammer. Huh. Rather poignant.
> The mannequins have been made up to look like his former victims
Glad we're only bringing that up as a minor detail. All of Jayce's victims were white brunettes; the only reason Viktor is alive is because he is the penultimate Pick Me.
> You are in control
Uh huh. That pussy power can't help you now - or at least not yet.
> Soaked in blood and grief
Grief involving what? Who has been grieving? The only thing remotely involving grief is that shitty journo job.
> He is defying the cycle, the trope
You're fitting right into it because the killer is just so entranced and in love with you that he leaves behind his world of killing in order to settle down and have a few kids in a nice house. That, or the trope where he invites you to join him in a couple's murder spree like Karla Homolka did. You ARE the trope - the Pick Me trope.
> It was vindication, it was awe
We know. He just can't believe this Final Girl is acting so different! Must have something to do with a more 'manly' brain.
> This is how I see you. This is how I see us.
He sees them as puzzle pieces that complement each other (intended) or that the only way they got there was through mass murder (actual). He really is Karla Homolka!
>A terrifying, beautiful, intellectual dance where every step was a revelation
So it's a bad Dan Brown novel. OK.
> Burned away by the sheer warmth of being seen
"OMG this sexy serial killer with a large penis who I had sex with understands me! I feel so loved and seen!"
> A dog on a walk is like a person in love - you can't tell them it's the same old world
And a dog on a walk is at the whims of its owner. You are simply being dragged to the location someone else desires.
> Her little three-legged toddle
Huh, didn't know the cat was disabled, too.
> He's oddly touched that Jayce kept the vial of his blood
He's just like Angelina Jolie frfr
> It is the most romantic gesture he has ever experienced
Well the others have involved you putting murderers to sleep with your pussy, so...
I did lol at Jayce teleporting out of that stairwell like a Skyrim NPC. He's 6'2 and several hundred pounds - you are going to hear him.
> They are at the places where his previous victims were found
They are considered 'failures' because they didn't boymode hard enough, apparently.
> Jayce has not abducted anyone in months
Spoiler alert: they end up becoming Barbie and Ken killers. What a great way to subvert expectations!
> Am I walking neck-first into a trap? But he wouldn't do that to me
Of course not. You're the Pick Me. He won't let you die because that pussy game too good.
I'm just giggling at him hobbling out of the car and sprinting to the observatory.
This guy spends his spare time designing elaborate traps like he's a Dark Souls level designer, and the final level is a bridge contraption that is synched to this guy's crippled walk. You have to appreciate the grind. Jigsaw and Ornstein would be proud.
> This labyrinth is a heart, complete with four chambers
My man took time out his day to complete said Dark Souls level in an abandoned observatory with his own supplies, manpower and dreams. Get him into MIT and he'll be designing for the Illuminati in no time.
> Killing Jayce would be a failure
Getting a taste of that serial killer dick sure does change people, eh?
> To defy the binary choice
While becoming Barbie and Ken killers, lmao. Sounds pretty binary and tropey.
> He looks at Jayce. He doesn't see a monster
This entire thing was trying to buck the serial killer/Final Girl trope and ended up turning into the 'I can fix him' trope and the 'Final Girl gets converted because of a good dicking' trope.
He arrived there at around 10 am. This means they were tongue-fucking each other for over twelve hours. That's some dedication right there.
He's a Latino man raised by a Latina single mother. He's going to know how to cook the moment the flipflop came out. What's funny is that Viktor immediately clocks him as being from San Antonio as Texas is a state with a large percentage of Hispanics
San Antonio is 64% Hispanic. The fact our serial killer Ken here never said it but acknowledged it as his hometown means Viktor here has been dwelling among Channers. Next thing you know he'll be talking about haplogroups.
> The key to the puzzle wasn't the participants own life...but the life of someone they love?
Plot twist: they plan on kidnapping more women - and even children - and will put them in these death traps so they can test their love for each other just like our murderer did for our Pick Me. The noble Final Girl who used to use their pussy to slay serial killers is now the waifu-in-crime of one. What a twist!
What a subversion of expectations and tropes! The Final Girl who swore to give justice to victims became Karla Homolka (x3)! Mind you, this epic twist came from the same mind that had this guy murder a black girl with almond milk and then had the white best friend not give a damn because he got fucked in the kitchen afterwards. It's something Crazy Days and Nights would note with irony. What a way to end it. A bunch of women died, but the Pick Me lived. We're defeating the simulation, I guess?
Cleo hopes she did her love of slashers justice. What say you? Were tropes defeated and decisions non-binary, or is it just the ramblings of a retard who got 'sexually abused' by being a sex pest on Discord?
'Tis the season for joy and giving, and what better way to celebrate that than by sucking Santa's nut sac? It ain't your Billy Bob Thornton's 'Bad Santa', but it has Hallmark dreams of wanting to settle down and having a family...while gargling back ball sweat. When he comes down that chimney, you're gonna need a mop. The lines for this fic are:
- Are you ready? Are you ready to be mamãe Noel? I'm going to cum inside you, gonna get you all nice and round, gonna fill you up—”
- “I-I'm going to fill you completely, mommy, you're so naughty, wanting my balls, damn it, I love you, gonna breed you, fuck, gonna to cum, I'm gonna—”
> Managed to find a tiara that fit well
Very masc. You know, the only thing that was masculine to begin with with this character was him getting AIDS from all that receptive anal sex. Other than that, it's very much a woman LARPing as a man who wants to settle down and have kids with sexy Santa over here.
> Suffocating in the thirty degrees Celsius outside the building
The author is Brazilian, so she's using Brazilian weather here. The only other places in the US - since so many of them set it in a US-themed setting - would be Florida or Arizona. Considering they are eating Brazilian dishes, it's safe to say they're in Brazil - just not the favela part. Santa would be sucking a semi-automatic.
> There was something sexy about the costume
> Gets more aroused at said male being nice around kids
Oh my, it's almost as if your biological urges that you tried to suppress are rearing their ugly heads. You want to be a man so bad, but also want to be a mother and are referred to by feminine pronouns. You aren't even trying.
> It was always burnt
Burnt Brazilian coffee must be a new level of blasphemy yet to be unlocked.
> You must be nearing 40, right?
Ooof, imagine being told that by a white woman, while also being a white woman. Aging like rotten bananas in the heat, yo.
> Doesn't look his age
> Has a sensitive stomach because white people don't season they food
> The only thing he could replace that was his own bed, with his own boyfriend, in big boots
What size is he? Can he crush Viktor's rib cage with them? Can he plug up a chimney with them? Dropkick Blitzer to Jupiter? I must know.
> But there aren't any children in the family yet
I love the casual admission here that Jayce knows exactly what sex Viktor is and is going to use that female anatomy to its full extent.
> His abdomen formed a comfortable belly, no longer as hard as before
He is supposed to be gargling on cock and yet that belly fat that acts like a second tongue is going to physically prevent him from doing so. I bet his man tits are bigger than Viktor's due to all the xenoestrogens he's consuming.
> Binders, buttons
Wearing binders in 30 C heat? That's gotta smell as bad as the New Jersey harbour you've got in the pants.
> Sometimes, with his hairy arms crossed, body in front of the television, he looked like a father
Ah yes, the man who sits in front of the TV all day watching sports, growing a larger and larger belly from consuming all that shitty bear, while the trans man runs around doing the child care, feeding, cooking and cleaning. Trust those biological instincts, dood, and you'll see what kind of 'male privilege' you actually have.
> He can't help but feel a certain kind of lust in all of that
He's always ready to shit out kids as if he doesn't have congenital defects that will be passed on to his children. I'm pretty sure Brazil doesn't have embryonic screening programs (just checked, there is none).
> Husband, father of his children
Note he doesn't consider HIMSELF a father, just the sperm donor. Sounds very TERFy, Miss AIDS.
> They liked to perform rituals
Hopefully not the Giselle Bundchen kind.
> Nor did the water bill allow them to do much in the shower
They really must live in a nice area because they got a porcelain tub over there?
> There was a whole journey to be mad, more difficult than just taking their clothes off and fucking
And that's why we have some salty ball sucking: it isn't about the sex, it's about the nutrients, because white people don't season they genitalia.
> Asks him to wear the clothes that are made of shitty material
> Admits that seeing him with kids invokes maternal feelings
I hope those clothes are at least laundered. That 30 C heat - with HUMIDITIY - is going to make that cheap polyester smell. I do not want to read someone smelling like a chip truck.
> Your little butt looks so cute in lycra
It'd also be covered in pimples and rashes because that white boy can't handle the heat. He is going to smell absolutely terrible.
> Ready to grab Santa's sack?
He's ready to take those presents down his ho-ho-hooha.
> His ribs showing against his pale skin sprinkled with freckles and scars
But can you play the xylophone on them? Is he thin naturally or is that due to AIDS? Sorry, gotta ask.
Oh, thank God his balls don't stink. They smell like a Terry's Chocolate Orange!
> Beautiful on its girth and color
If you're wondering, yeah, he has a Coke can dick.
> Or rather, Santa's - as Papai Noel's sack
He's going to give that white boi his protein intake.
> Buried against the thick hair on his groin
I don't know what position he's in - dick facing the face vs the navel - but either way, if he is sitting on top of him, his balls and thigh are going to cover Viktor's face. He won't be able to see him, not with that Coke can dick. Consider it a fleshy camouflage.
> He watched those beautiful lips suck around the base of his cock
So he's hovering above him enough for his balls to get sucked, and can also see his lips...OK, then. Let's just say Santa's nut sack here is casting a bit too big of a shadow.
I really have to wonder what the point of this tag is if all they want is a male/female pregnancy. On the one hand, you want this character to be seen as a 'male with a vagina', but we also have to call them a mommy. We have to refer to their clitoris as a 'cock', but we also use female-centric terms with them...pick a struggle. You cannot have it both ways.
> Do you want to be Santa's wife?
It's not transphobia, it's just a fetish, chud. We can be called women if we want to, sweaty~
> Knew him well, and, well, in the trance he was entering, he knew himself well enough
Well thank you for making that clear and well, I'm still wondering about that ballsac shadow because, well, the physics is kinda throwing me off.
> Was as wide as a can
Yeah I figured. There's only one kind of penile physique they've got here, and they give it to the Latino man that they never want to write as the one getting pregnant.
> Tearing up with the urge to vomit
> Has tears and snot coming out
Sexy. Nothing like snot bubbles acting like green lube against your red dick - hey, it's Christmas themed!
> He imagined himself undoing himself
I can't imagine anyone other than yourself undoing yourself. Know thyself before someone else.
> Doing what he always did - fucking him without any protection and coming inside
> He would be an incredible mommy
He's been fucking him raw for years - and I assume he is not on T, only binding his breasts - and he STILL refers to him as 'mother'. He doesn't even see him as a man during the throes of sex, lmao.
> Probably infertile
Well he was seropositive in one universe, so he was definitely breeding something!
> One finger from him was already quite a lot
I bet he could stop a bullet with those yaoi hands. Get him on the Brazilian special forces, stat.
> In response, Jayce thrust himself in all the way and kissed his neck
I guess during that time he was choking Santa's mommy (Mrs. Santa's sister was not available for comment) he moved back down to position.
> I'm going to make you a mommy just like you want it
This is a real line.
> He felt the pain turn to pleasure
Cliché.
>His beanie slippped
OH GOD NO NOT THE TIM POOL BEANIE
> Should have asked to lick them before that
You don't know what he was stepping on in those Brazilian streets.
> Get some condensed milk on his face
You'll be getting Montezuma's Revenge from licking those boots, fam.
> Are you ready to be mamae?
Me when I stuff the turkey and put it in the oven
> G-give me your cum, make me a mommy
> I'm going to fill you completely, mommy, you're so naughty
These are all real lines. Now imagine Billy Bob Thornton as Bad Santa reading them.
> Sweetness flowed down to his womb, filling it as promised
Can't bake those cookies if the oven is broke, papai!
Yeah, it's almost as if those biological urges are a bitch! Nothing says masculinity like being called a mommy and told how many biscuits are going to be baked in your oven!
Yeah you can't tell me that Miss AIDS doesn't write this to write heterosexual sex without it sounding boring. You don't even try to use gender-neutral terms here. You can't even call your mamacita a 'seahorse dad'? Just a mom? Sounds awfully heteronormative, mamai!
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Prettybadmagic, our resident Epstein, has uploaded something for the holidays. On top of piss fetishes and lube flowing down thighs like diarrhea, she has a breast milk fetish. Is there anything this pedophile can't wank to? The lines for this fic are:
- He can't pour love through his nipples, nor through wooden imitations of them.
- But there are fates worth than death, fates like getting fucked by force.
- He must be gushing from your loose cunt right now. That’s what you smell like—a bitch in heat. Is his pup growing inside you? Are you trying to replace me?
- Yet nothing fizzles in the cuff on his wrist with a sturdy helping of cockmeat thrust down his gullet
- He drinks down what he can—many girthy inches of flesh lambasted with fevered blood
- He sucked his son’s cock—did that prove nothing of his ardor?
- He wonders how very painful it will be to be raped by his child
- He is a god-boy chiseled of copious sunshine, a testament to male beauty and its capacity to devastate.
- His cunt gapes and drips, entirely exposed, agitated by each lapse of open air, by the presence of his strapping young son
- He cannot deny the racing pulse elicited by sight of his erect penis, a marvelous feat of biology. He knew his son would be large, but he could not conceive how large until imagination meets matter, from pubis to ribcage.
- No insertion devastates so wholly as the bulk of his son’s meat, held snug by soft walls of muscle. His mother's embrace translated to their wedded genitals.
This was beta-read by MGCraig, so it is known without a doubt that she facilitates a pedophile. If you don't want to read the whole thing (and it is long), here's a summary:
- Pedophile who wants to own the chuds writes a fic where a boy has his genitalia ogled at the age of 11 and 13.
- Said boy is written like a sexual Adonis by the age of 13, whereas fics with trans boys are written with them getting raped.
- Boy develops behavioural problems such as biting, punching, and kicking schoolmates
- Has an Oedipal complex so bad he believes it is his duty to rape his adoptive mother
- Owning the chuds means writing the Latino as a dog and a rapist in no short order
- It also means writing the white (wo)man as a groomer and pedophile, written by a white woman who is a pedophile
- Boy, as a teenager, punches adoptive mother so hard they go temporarily blind and punches them in the stomach until they vomit blood, before choking said adoptive mother with his eight inch penis that smells like game
- Said adoptive mother is transmasc, but you'd never know, as they are referred to with female pronouns and are called a mother throughout
- Boy, as an adult, threatens to rape said adoptive mother, and is miraculously not disabled after mother uses magic to dislocate his knee and smash his head against the table
- Adult male then uses a device to make mother submit; said mother admits to being raped and that it is a 'part of human life'
- Mother realizes that they were destined to be together and ends up getting pregnant at the age of 39-years-old.
- Author sounds like a weird crypto-TERF who knows what male bodies and what masculinity while lusting after the penis of an 11-year-old and talking about said 11-year-old's erections
- Be beta-read by someone who wonders why they are at the center of so much drama when they are friends with a pedophile
Yeah, yeah that's it.
We can add breast milk and the act of breastfeeding to PBM's list of fetishes. In the author's note, she writes that he is 'transmasc', and uses female centric terms for him, which makes one wonder why they even bothered with the tag rather than make it a full gender swap, but whatever. This individual has the power to end entire universes, to a sex swap wouldn't be too far out of the picture - but they don't want that.
> He wails at the crow of cocks
She isn't talking about dicks here, but 'cocks' as in the animal. In another fic she will have that done by the male appendage instead.
> The unliving material
?? It came from the teats of a female mammal, same as it does when a human female does it.
> Motherhood is an undertaking that challenges Viktor's perception of himself
Sounds very TERFy. I thought pregnancy for trans men was very natural as men could get pregnant? That's some heckin' transphobia there, PBM.
> He does not know if he can rise to the expectations of a biology he has molded elsewise
If you can alter several universes with the snap of a finger, you can change your biology. You might as well lean into the concept.
> Perhaps this builds their bond: mother and child
What was that about motherhood challenging the perception of yourself? All those magic potions and all you wanted was to be a mommy? Funny, that.
> He is made for this creature
Biology really is a TERF.
> The local wisewomen
Notice how they are all women and not a flavour of trans. Just solid, old terven set in their ways. Where are all the old trans men handing out wisdom, PBM? Do they not exist?
> Until curdled milk, like snot, spurts through holes much too small to endure them
A different kind of diarrhea flowing like lube, eh? Sexy poops and curdled breast milk - what else is there?
Eating rib meat like that before you are 1 year old is pretty damn impressive, but the insistence for breast milk speaks of arrested development. Tit men are childish men. I don't make the rules.
> Three years old
> Is already playing the 'boys have a penis, girls have a vagina' card
Damn, maybe PBM really is a closeted TERF - but we don't claim her because she's a dirty pedophile who needs to face the wall.
> The parts that grow when properly stimulated
You talking about that magic t-dick? The very thing that will never get used because you're the token bottom in this?
To no one's surprise, while Jayce may be precocious in terms of intelligence, he is emotionally stunted. He cries and sobs at every little thing, from too-tight collars to the feel of clothes (which honestly sounds like autism) to screaming at the top of his lungs when a burr gets stuck to his foot (burrs suck, but they aren't thorns, so he should be grateful). Every time he does this, Viktor takes his breast out and lets him suck it, creating a cycle of dependence that will not lead to any emotional development at all. Viktor is growing tired of doing this and instead thinks he will enjoy it when he will become an adult - pseudo incest is in this, after all - and when he tells Jayce no, no more breastfeeding, Jayce thrashes and screams in petulance to the point of self-harm. Jayce turns to thumb sucking instead.
Viktor feels more autonomy and freedom after he ends said breastfeeding, but there's a problem: he starts getting saggy tits like an old crone, and can't seem to use his reality-bending magic to give himself a mommy makeover. Jayce's mammary obsession (a term PBM uses) is so bad that he sucks his thumb to pruning, and Viktor has to construct a wooden nipple for him to use at school. Jayce doesn't want to go because all he knows is his surrogate mother, and even tries climbing on him like an orangutan as if he isn't nearing 50 pounds. Our dear transmasc mage can't manage the weight and sends our fat momma's boy to the ground. At school, he gets bullied (and rightfully so) for sucking a fake teat in class and ends up pissing himself. The schoolmaster has to give him a new set of pants and tells Viktor that he had an accident. When Jayce asks Viktor if he is a baby, Viktor thinks 'why, yes you are, you're my little cherubim' before wanting him to emotionally and physically mature.
At his workshop, Viktor realizes that he can no longer 'pour love through his nipples' and crafts him his bracelet with a rune enchanted with a mother's love. This satisfies him and he does better in school and comes back more vivacious sans bullying. He does brag to strangers that 'mama's femur is the crooked one' as if Viktor's magic could not be used to at least make the pain easier. He can manipulate entire timelines, but he cannot construct a magical brace or new bones to help himself. Logic. BTW, he still suffers from the same lung problems even though he's lived in a clean environment most of his life. Ain't that nice?
Jayce eventually learns about the multiverse at age eight and asks if Viktor is his mama in all of them. He replies that he will 'always find him' and that even if his birth mother raised him, he'd go to the Academy and they'd still meet. At 11, he has his first sexual encounter with his stepmother.
> His chubby, embryonic self
Pretty weird to feel sexual over an embryo.
> They still share a bed, as is customary for all families in the village
Prepubescent males were kept separate from females at a certain age for a reason. This is one of them.
> made apparent by the prodding of his erect penis into Viktor's right haunch
I just want to make it clear that PBM is talking about an 11-year-old's erection. Juuuuuuuuust in case you didn't think she was a pedophile.
So they know what gametes are thanks to microscopes, but Viktor doesn't use his reality-bending magic and ability to see into alternate timelines to at least improve his disability. Let's just focus on an 11-year-old's erection, OK?
> Can I perpetuate the species with you?
I am really beginning to think that PBM really might be one of those 'shotacon TERFs' I've heard about, where she tries to be progressive and tolerant yet ends up becoming bioessentialist on top of being a pedophile. Why is an 11-year-old asking this, and why are we calling human offspring 'pups' like it's an omegaverse?
> It is wrong, so wrong, to envision husbanddom with his child
Why are you calling yourself a husband when you were fine calling yourself a mother? You very clearly see yourself as a tradwife to get bred.
> Wishes that their biology would prevent such a question from ever being asked, but their sexual organs are compatible
Very TERFy. You know you could've just made him a man? He has the power to do it, so why not do it?
> He has thought of what Jayce's puberty would look like
That's weird, bro.
> Skin that guzzles those rays, turning his wiry muscles bronze
A weird way to say he's tan, but this is the same author who wrote him as 'white-passing' to own the 4chan chuds.
> Like a puppy whose brain matures more slowly than his own body
Here we go with the dog allegories. Never change, PBM.
> At age 13 he becomes the picture of consideration
> Starts stinking terribly because the author had a body odor fetish, as well
Oh, yeah - his 'stepmother' is thinking about a 13-year-old's growing penis. That's not sexually predatory at all. Totally normal. Totally objective and scientific.
> Unintentionally ushers in the era of chronic masturbation
I told you: he has arrested development because he is a tit man only, and is on his way to becoming a sex pest. He'll be on a sex offender registry before he is 16.
> Childrearing neutered him; a parent cannot demand privacy from a creature that dangles from his teat
There's something that rubs me the wrong way about using the term 'neuter' for motherhood. It implies women are sexless creatures and are unwanted after giving birth and that sounds extremely misogynistic.
> Who necessitates ass-wiping and is in constant, imminent danger
I have never seen someone who is so adamant on being proud of her pedophilia also make childcare out to be disgusting. yes, BABIES are not potty-trained, what the fuck do you expect, Miss Epstein-with-a-vagina?
> Alongside his masculinity, which he carries casually
Oh, so we know what masculinity is after all. It's muscles and superior height and being stinky and possessing a penis. Sounds awfully bioessentialist.
> He is not attracted to his son
Oh, it gets worse, dear reader. Not only does he have the hot for a 13-year-old, his pussy starts working again and he can't wait to be pleasured by a man again.
> Did not invoke heat in his cock and cunt
Do you actually possess both or are we talking about a magic roid clit here?
> If only it were a timeline where they were actual flesh and blood, and biological revulsion could set in
They would still fuck because the author is a pedophile and she thinks it is normal to write shit like 'tight as an unblooded girlchild'.
> He couldn't possibly say no to his own parent
What was that about biological revulsion?
> He is mostly good natured
> A sentence later describes how he attacked, kicked, and even bit other classmates
I was fucking right again. This child isn't just mentally stunted, he's got a clusterfuck of BPD and other symptoms from having an overbearing mother. It is not normal to BITE other students out of the blue, especially when he's old enough to know better. This is a boy that belongs on 'Adolescence', not in normal society.
> He may whack a hay bale with a stick or pitch his pocketknife at a tree
Next thing you'll know he'll be abusing animals and burying them in the backyard. Just totally normal, 'masculine' behaviour.
> He sobbed after his first no hitting mama lesson
Oh so he hit him too? That's great to know! The masculine 13-year-old you are lusting after was abusive to you the moment he could walk! Why is he still alive and not buried under the outhouse?
> It's the nightly erection pressed to his spinal column
> Jayce has the insanely erotic body of a young man, with strapping muscle tone and effusive body odor
He's 13 years old. BTW, notice a tonal difference when these people write about 13-year-old Jayce and 13-year-old trans Viktor: the former is in total control of his sexuality, a privilege afforded to males, and is an agent of desire. He is in charge of his wants and instigates sex. Trans Viktor, on the other hand, is a victim: he is preyed on by older adults who want those 'protuberant pussy lips' and to claim his virginity. The tonal shift and change even among these pedophile authors makes it clear they see 13-year-old boys as sexual agents, and 13-year-old 'trans boys' as eternal victims.
> he wants to have sex with his son, and his son knows it. His son wants the same thing
He's 13.
> He failed to discover that mothering Jayce would not diminish their sexual chemistry
Some real Oedipal shit going on here. Your mothering also turned your son into an abusive BPD nightmare, but let's talk about erections on male minors and them getting molested by other kids at school instead.
> Rutted to orgasm using the corner of the kitchen table
That's the least freaky thing in this fic. Talking about an 11-year-old's erection is far worse.
> He puts aside the potatoes
I hope you washed them. I don't need hag pussy juice in my mashed potatoes.
> The other boy is alive and in worse shape
It's almost as if being a single mother to a volatile, emotionally stunted boy who doesn't respect boundaries is going to lead to long-lasting problems. This is the epitome of the boy mom, the same kind that will excuse her own son being a rapist.
> Salo says you're a whore and a witch
> You fuck yourself open. What's stopping you from fucking something other than a vegetable?
This should be proof that no matter how much love you give to a male, he will find an excuse to be a disgusting misogynist. Well done cracking that 4chan bro code, PBM, you are totally owning them with that.
> he is frightened by the size of Jayce. He is a deadly boy
Sexual dimorphism combined with tism rage, mommy issues and whatnot will give you an Edmund Kemper Latino son. Imagine claiming to own those 4chan chuds while writing shit like this.
> Licks his lips like a slobbery dog
Again with the dog allegories. The Latino man is like a puppy, a Rottweiler, a pit bull and St. Bernard's, now can you spay and neuter him properly? He's going to rape his local schoolteacher soon.
> Where his skull clangs against a mounted iron pan
Keep doing that and his mood swings will get worse.
> I don't want to hurt you
He says, after making threats and accusing his mother of being a whore. Even Joffrey Baratheon had more tact.
More years pass and Jayce manages to make it to 17, where he will finally go to the Academy. Before that, Viktor measures every touch and kiss - familial, of course - and wonders how far either will take it. They still share a same bed despite the young man being too old and too big for it, which is weird as hell. When Latino Edmund Kemper goes to school, Viktor feels lonely because that precocious dog of a child gave him energy and life, and now he's a sagging hag who looks more like Charlie from Smiling Friends' grandmother than an object of desire.
Speaking of: Vander tries to put on the moves, pulling the classic, 'What's a pretty girl like you doing in a place like this?' line, albeit he says 'what's a pretty thing like you doing without a man?' suggesting that our proud hag Mage who wanted to be a man can't live alone for the life of him. Viktor considers the match - and erroneously says that they are 'two adult men' despite willingly calling himself a mother - a good one, as Vander s built like a bull and is considered 'ruined' like him. We learn that Viktor 'engaged in sex not by choice' when young, which of course made me roll my eyes. He was used and abused at 13, but Jayce at 13 is a sex stud? Pick a struggle. Vander, for all his attempts at being a good man, is shat upon by the narrative as Viktor promised his Edmund Kemper sex pest son he wouldn't fuck anyone else.
When Vander complains of a toothache and comes over, he states that he wishes he could have Viktor and that he would be 'so good to him'. Before anything bad can happen (because Viktor belongs to JAYCE, dammit!) Jayce returns home, and he is NOT happy.
Correct, Viktor did nothing wrong, but he is being punished for the very female crime of being labelled a whore and being shamed by society for it. Being a whore as a man carries a significantly different connotation, and he would be praised for it. Being called a whore and even being assaulted for it by the boy he raised? Oh yeah, we are owning the 4chan chuds with this one.
The piss fetish thing is a leftover from Machine 4 Man, where our filthy white boy was known to do this ON TOP of having a hairy ass. In this case, it's because a woman is being threatened by her volatile rapist son.
> He must be gushing from your loose cunt right now. That's what you smell like - a bitch in heat
"I am showing those 4chan chuds about the terrors of toxic masculinity by making the token Latino a rapist." Keep at it, white girl.
So, Jayce slaps Viktor so hard he temporarily goes blind, and then punches him so hard he vomits up blood, and if you think that isn't enough, he whips out his smelly eight inch cock and chokes his mommy with it. We really are in Edmund Kemper territory, as he used to orally rape his mother's decapitated head.
> It frees a patch of wooden floor onto which Viktor retches blood bile
He punched him so hard the floor came apart, amazing.
> It's an endowment of 8 inches
That seems to be the ideal length for PBM, here.
> The girth stretches Viktor's lips to the point of tearing at the corners
This is the same dick he ogled at when Jayce was 13-years-old, and now he's getting raped by an Arizona iced tea can.
> Which has accumulated a distinct gaminess
So his dick smells like rotten deer meat. What is it with this woman and her obsession with stinking genitalia? Were you raped by a man with a stinky dick, and that's why you have such an obsession with adolescent sexuality?
> Yet nothing fizzles in the cuff on Jayce's wrist with a sturdy helping of cockmeat thrust down Viktor's gullet
You fed your son with your flabby tits, now he's feeding you with that cockmeat. He's splitting you open like an unblooded girlchild.
> Assists his son by relinquishing his throat to the enormity of his desire
Haha, get the pun?
> He drinks down what he can - many girthy inches of flesh lambasted with fevered blood
Nothing says love and desire like raising a rapist who was known to bite and attack other children. Did you account for that in your All Timelines fantasy? Apparently not. Genocide AND rape is acceptable to him; he really is spiritually Israeli.
> Rocketing Viktor's face along his slobbery length
Just like a dog, eh?
> I should have done this ages ago
Yeah, I'm sure writing a 13-year-old raping his adoptive mother would go over very well; well, at least with your fanbase. They already accepted your pedophilia. Why not add juvenile rape into the mix?
> Viktor accepts his impalation with stale air squeezed senselessly within lungs, convulsions in his belly a roiling threat
*Impalement. If there is anything gender affirming about this, it's how the actual male uses his genitalia as punishment and forces the vagina owner to be a victim. He doesn't want a 'whore for a mother', but he'll rape said mother as punishment for the crime of other MEN finding said parent desirable. That is the epitome of toxic masculinity.
> Doesn't know if he can survive if Jayce leaves
Fucking hell, you really are a boymom aren't you?
> He sucked his son's cock - did that prove nothing or his ardor
This is a real fucking line.
> With a resounding crack, his knee twists...he topples head-first into the corner of the kitchen table
Your first mistake: double tap. Your second: always confirm the kill. If we are making GoT references such as the Sun-and-Stars thing, it makes sense that Jayce would be Khal Drogo. Both are violent rapists who only go after women as they view them as the 'weaker sex' and were killed by a witch who had no more fucks left to give. In this case, Viktor is too much of a boymom and can't let his rapist son leave.
If you thought it was over, it isn't. Predictably, Jayce comes back even more volatile - his disability mysteriously gone - and promises to rape him further.
> I'm going to fuck you, Mama. If anyone is going to breed you, it will be me
So will he rape their male children, or female children?
> Wonders how very painful it will be to be raped by his child
This is a real fucking line. What in the absolute fuck.
> He wonders if Jayce is teaching himself the art of amputation, so that he can replicate the process himself
On top of rape, he wants to cut off Viktor's limbs so he can rape an amputee. Oh you are REALLY owning the chuds, babe.
> He long since accepted that life begets death and oft times rape. He has already experienced rape
Who is doing the raping? Anyone want to take a guess? I guarantee you it wasn't done by a woman, but by a penis. In every universe where he gets raped, it was done by a penis. A male. You tried to change your gender because of it and STILL GET RAPED. Add on to the fact that your 'eternal love' IS STILL VIOLENT IN THE TIMELINES YOU SAVE HIM IN. YOU ENDED THE UNIVERSE FOR LATINO EDMUND KEMPER, GIVE YOUSELF A PAT ON THE BACK.
> He commands maybe six or seven inches more than Viktor
So 6'2 or 6'3.
> Be the adopted child of a single mother
> They teach you all the ways to be a good person and do not raise their voice or hand against you
> You still grow up a violent misogynist with all the worst forms of toxic masculinity
> Punch your adoptive mother so hard they go temporarily blind and vomit blood
> Choke them with your dick and later threaten to rape them
> Fulfills the promise by giving them a device that breaks their body and mind so you can rape them with 'the love of a child'
Remember that her most popular fic was her trying to show how bad the manosphere was.
> I filled the rune with my love
> You'll do whatever I ask of you
A child's love apparently includes no consent because they feel the world is owed to them. Guess it makes sense when you think about it - if you ignore the fact that the first thing they wanted to do was rape their own mother.
> You love him. Let him love you, in every sense of the word
It ain't rape, it's a struggle snuggle!
> I never wanted a wife or husband
If you married that poor man or woman, you'd be like Ramsay Snow and chew their nipples off. He believes he's owed sex and that his adoptive mother's vagina was owed to him like their breastmilk.
> I want you to love me as a man would love me
Oh, do women not love the same as men? Sounds awfully homophobic.
> How a lamb raised a wolf is a funny twist of fate
Making the Latino a wolf and the white one a lamb isn't the progressive act you think it is. You keep making the brown man an animal and a rapist, and I might think you are a card-carrying member of the Proud Boys.
>How many years could his son have overpowered him
Since he was a toddler, actually. He used to bite your nipples, remember?
> Breasts and cock and all
He is not a hermaphrodite, btw. He has chosen to remain female. That's just a limp-wristed roid clit.
> He is a god-boy chiseled of copious sunshine, a testament to male beauty
Oh so we KNOW what males are and what they fucking mean, but every time a 'trans man' comes on they are never considered the 'pinnacles of male beauty', they are just seen as MOTHERS and gaping cunts. I know what the fuck you are: a bizarro progressive TERF who does in fact believe in biology but has the absolute fucking shame of being a pedophile.
> A young buck on a withered crone
'Crone' is used for old women. I know what you're doing.
> You are the beautiful one, the one blessed by genetics
Whoa, there. On top of being a crypto TERF, you're also a eugenicist. What's next, you gonna talk about haplogroups?
> Even though you look different from me
Sounds awfully TERFy.
> His cunt gapes and drips, entirely exposed
But does it drool like a dog?
> By the presence of his strapping young son
Tall Latinos with big dicks are clearly the preference of this pedophilic woman.
> He has raised his own stud, his ideal mate
This 'ideal mate' is raping you like a buck rapes a doe. Fitting.
> His back bows so intensely it thrusts his chest inches from Jayce's face
So much for his disability.
> He takes the miniscule, saggy mound of Viktor's breast entirely into his mouth
I just think he's sucking off Charlie from 'Smiling Friends' grandmother.
> When we have our own baby together
You know he's raping the female infant.
> Transforming each nipple into a bloated, red peak
I just think of witch finger cookies. He's literally fucking Melisandre after she takes the necklace off.
> That their bond is strong, sacred, charged by Jayce's adoration
He made a rune that allows him to rape his own adoptive mother.
> Did you watch me quite often
Violent child with stunted development watched his mother masturbate when young, grows up to be a violent rapist. Owning the chuds, brah
> He cannot deny the racing pulse elicited by the sight of Jayce's erect penis, a marvelous feat of biology
Oh, so we actually DO know that penis = male, unquestionably and universally, and that vagina = AFAB, the organ that belongs to someone that gets raped.
> He does not know what type of whore saves themself for their own son
They don't. You are getting raped by your manchild adoptive son.
> So perhaps it is natural, rational, biology
The only time biology matters is when we are writing about Latino Edmund Kemper raping his own adoptive mother.
> The size of him, crammed in an orifice slick yet small
Me when my USB drive doesn't want to plug in:
> Like a pup in his first rut
You are never beating the allegations that you see Latino men as rapist dogs, PBM. Just admit you're a weird progressive white feminist crypto TERF who happens to be a pedophile.
> Witnessing the forth at his base where he pumps against his swollen gash
Nothing like your pussy juice turning into Dawn dish liquid!
> No insertion devastates so badly as the bulk of his son's meat, held snug by soft walls of muscle
Another real line.
> His mother's embrace translated to their wedded genitals
Sounds like something V.C. Andrews would write.
> But as a dog to a wound that needs soothing
Again with the dog allegories. It just keeps happening. At this point, you could call Jayce a dirty wetback who is only good for construction work and selling good tacos and it would be a better racial stereotype than whatever the fuck this is.
> "I love you more than trees,", speaking between pounds to Viktor's cervix
He can't use magic to change his sex, but he can use it to reinforce his cervix like it's Minas Morgul.
> You are my entire universe, my mother and my greatest love
"In all timelines, in all possibilities, only you can violently rape me"
> Joy for his son and lover, who will know no other body but this one
He's thinking this because of that rune, btw. It makes the struggle snuggle go a little bit softer like a towel washed with Downy.
> Because the roles are reversed when Viktor is prostate, fed by Jayce's bounteous flesh
No, you just accepted the role always meant for women:
All day, every day, therapist, mother, maid
Nymph, then a virgin, nurse, then a servant
Just an appendage, live to attend him
So that he never lifts a finger
24/7 baby machine
So he can live out his picket-fence dreams
It's not an act of love if you make her
You make me do too much labour
And then our adoptive mother gets pregnant. Nothing like lusting after an 11-year-old's genitalia and then getting violently raped by said child once they turn into an adult because it was your 'role' to be treated that way. Jayviks are never beating the allegations that they fucking hate Jayce. Even GOT fans are not as nice to in-canon rapists like these people are.
How about something more positive: seahorse dads! This author's sex education was so poor she had to do research on pregnancy in general, so surely we are in for a Christmas Eve treat!
- He can't pour love through his nipples, nor through wooden imitations of them.
- But there are fates worth than death, fates like getting fucked by force.
- He must be gushing from your loose cunt right now. That’s what you smell like—a bitch in heat. Is his pup growing inside you? Are you trying to replace me?
- Yet nothing fizzles in the cuff on his wrist with a sturdy helping of cockmeat thrust down his gullet
- He drinks down what he can—many girthy inches of flesh lambasted with fevered blood
- He sucked his son’s cock—did that prove nothing of his ardor?
- He wonders how very painful it will be to be raped by his child
- He is a god-boy chiseled of copious sunshine, a testament to male beauty and its capacity to devastate.
- His cunt gapes and drips, entirely exposed, agitated by each lapse of open air, by the presence of his strapping young son
- He cannot deny the racing pulse elicited by sight of his erect penis, a marvelous feat of biology. He knew his son would be large, but he could not conceive how large until imagination meets matter, from pubis to ribcage.
- No insertion devastates so wholly as the bulk of his son’s meat, held snug by soft walls of muscle. His mother's embrace translated to their wedded genitals.
This was beta-read by MGCraig, so it is known without a doubt that she facilitates a pedophile. If you don't want to read the whole thing (and it is long), here's a summary:
- Pedophile who wants to own the chuds writes a fic where a boy has his genitalia ogled at the age of 11 and 13.
- Said boy is written like a sexual Adonis by the age of 13, whereas fics with trans boys are written with them getting raped.
- Boy develops behavioural problems such as biting, punching, and kicking schoolmates
- Has an Oedipal complex so bad he believes it is his duty to rape his adoptive mother
- Owning the chuds means writing the Latino as a dog and a rapist in no short order
- It also means writing the white (wo)man as a groomer and pedophile, written by a white woman who is a pedophile
- Boy, as a teenager, punches adoptive mother so hard they go temporarily blind and punches them in the stomach until they vomit blood, before choking said adoptive mother with his eight inch penis that smells like game
- Said adoptive mother is transmasc, but you'd never know, as they are referred to with female pronouns and are called a mother throughout
- Boy, as an adult, threatens to rape said adoptive mother, and is miraculously not disabled after mother uses magic to dislocate his knee and smash his head against the table
- Adult male then uses a device to make mother submit; said mother admits to being raped and that it is a 'part of human life'
- Mother realizes that they were destined to be together and ends up getting pregnant at the age of 39-years-old.
- Author sounds like a weird crypto-TERF who knows what male bodies and what masculinity while lusting after the penis of an 11-year-old and talking about said 11-year-old's erections
- Be beta-read by someone who wonders why they are at the center of so much drama when they are friends with a pedophile
Yeah, yeah that's it.
We can add breast milk and the act of breastfeeding to PBM's list of fetishes. In the author's note, she writes that he is 'transmasc', and uses female centric terms for him, which makes one wonder why they even bothered with the tag rather than make it a full gender swap, but whatever. This individual has the power to end entire universes, to a sex swap wouldn't be too far out of the picture - but they don't want that.
> He wails at the crow of cocks
She isn't talking about dicks here, but 'cocks' as in the animal. In another fic she will have that done by the male appendage instead.
> The unliving material
?? It came from the teats of a female mammal, same as it does when a human female does it.
> Motherhood is an undertaking that challenges Viktor's perception of himself
Sounds very TERFy. I thought pregnancy for trans men was very natural as men could get pregnant? That's some heckin' transphobia there, PBM.
> He does not know if he can rise to the expectations of a biology he has molded elsewise
If you can alter several universes with the snap of a finger, you can change your biology. You might as well lean into the concept.
> Perhaps this builds their bond: mother and child
What was that about motherhood challenging the perception of yourself? All those magic potions and all you wanted was to be a mommy? Funny, that.
> He is made for this creature
Biology really is a TERF.
> The local wisewomen
Notice how they are all women and not a flavour of trans. Just solid, old terven set in their ways. Where are all the old trans men handing out wisdom, PBM? Do they not exist?
> Until curdled milk, like snot, spurts through holes much too small to endure them
A different kind of diarrhea flowing like lube, eh? Sexy poops and curdled breast milk - what else is there?
Eating rib meat like that before you are 1 year old is pretty damn impressive, but the insistence for breast milk speaks of arrested development. Tit men are childish men. I don't make the rules.
> Three years old
> Is already playing the 'boys have a penis, girls have a vagina' card
Damn, maybe PBM really is a closeted TERF - but we don't claim her because she's a dirty pedophile who needs to face the wall.
> The parts that grow when properly stimulated
You talking about that magic t-dick? The very thing that will never get used because you're the token bottom in this?
To no one's surprise, while Jayce may be precocious in terms of intelligence, he is emotionally stunted. He cries and sobs at every little thing, from too-tight collars to the feel of clothes (which honestly sounds like autism) to screaming at the top of his lungs when a burr gets stuck to his foot (burrs suck, but they aren't thorns, so he should be grateful). Every time he does this, Viktor takes his breast out and lets him suck it, creating a cycle of dependence that will not lead to any emotional development at all. Viktor is growing tired of doing this and instead thinks he will enjoy it when he will become an adult - pseudo incest is in this, after all - and when he tells Jayce no, no more breastfeeding, Jayce thrashes and screams in petulance to the point of self-harm. Jayce turns to thumb sucking instead.
Viktor feels more autonomy and freedom after he ends said breastfeeding, but there's a problem: he starts getting saggy tits like an old crone, and can't seem to use his reality-bending magic to give himself a mommy makeover. Jayce's mammary obsession (a term PBM uses) is so bad that he sucks his thumb to pruning, and Viktor has to construct a wooden nipple for him to use at school. Jayce doesn't want to go because all he knows is his surrogate mother, and even tries climbing on him like an orangutan as if he isn't nearing 50 pounds. Our dear transmasc mage can't manage the weight and sends our fat momma's boy to the ground. At school, he gets bullied (and rightfully so) for sucking a fake teat in class and ends up pissing himself. The schoolmaster has to give him a new set of pants and tells Viktor that he had an accident. When Jayce asks Viktor if he is a baby, Viktor thinks 'why, yes you are, you're my little cherubim' before wanting him to emotionally and physically mature.
At his workshop, Viktor realizes that he can no longer 'pour love through his nipples' and crafts him his bracelet with a rune enchanted with a mother's love. This satisfies him and he does better in school and comes back more vivacious sans bullying. He does brag to strangers that 'mama's femur is the crooked one' as if Viktor's magic could not be used to at least make the pain easier. He can manipulate entire timelines, but he cannot construct a magical brace or new bones to help himself. Logic. BTW, he still suffers from the same lung problems even though he's lived in a clean environment most of his life. Ain't that nice?
Jayce eventually learns about the multiverse at age eight and asks if Viktor is his mama in all of them. He replies that he will 'always find him' and that even if his birth mother raised him, he'd go to the Academy and they'd still meet. At 11, he has his first sexual encounter with his stepmother.
> His chubby, embryonic self
Pretty weird to feel sexual over an embryo.
> They still share a bed, as is customary for all families in the village
Prepubescent males were kept separate from females at a certain age for a reason. This is one of them.
> made apparent by the prodding of his erect penis into Viktor's right haunch
I just want to make it clear that PBM is talking about an 11-year-old's erection. Juuuuuuuuust in case you didn't think she was a pedophile.
So they know what gametes are thanks to microscopes, but Viktor doesn't use his reality-bending magic and ability to see into alternate timelines to at least improve his disability. Let's just focus on an 11-year-old's erection, OK?
> Can I perpetuate the species with you?
I am really beginning to think that PBM really might be one of those 'shotacon TERFs' I've heard about, where she tries to be progressive and tolerant yet ends up becoming bioessentialist on top of being a pedophile. Why is an 11-year-old asking this, and why are we calling human offspring 'pups' like it's an omegaverse?
> It is wrong, so wrong, to envision husbanddom with his child
Why are you calling yourself a husband when you were fine calling yourself a mother? You very clearly see yourself as a tradwife to get bred.
> Wishes that their biology would prevent such a question from ever being asked, but their sexual organs are compatible
Very TERFy. You know you could've just made him a man? He has the power to do it, so why not do it?
> He has thought of what Jayce's puberty would look like
That's weird, bro.
> Skin that guzzles those rays, turning his wiry muscles bronze
A weird way to say he's tan, but this is the same author who wrote him as 'white-passing' to own the 4chan chuds.
> Like a puppy whose brain matures more slowly than his own body
Here we go with the dog allegories. Never change, PBM.
> At age 13 he becomes the picture of consideration
> Starts stinking terribly because the author had a body odor fetish, as well
Oh, yeah - his 'stepmother' is thinking about a 13-year-old's growing penis. That's not sexually predatory at all. Totally normal. Totally objective and scientific.
> Unintentionally ushers in the era of chronic masturbation
I told you: he has arrested development because he is a tit man only, and is on his way to becoming a sex pest. He'll be on a sex offender registry before he is 16.
> Childrearing neutered him; a parent cannot demand privacy from a creature that dangles from his teat
There's something that rubs me the wrong way about using the term 'neuter' for motherhood. It implies women are sexless creatures and are unwanted after giving birth and that sounds extremely misogynistic.
> Who necessitates ass-wiping and is in constant, imminent danger
I have never seen someone who is so adamant on being proud of her pedophilia also make childcare out to be disgusting. yes, BABIES are not potty-trained, what the fuck do you expect, Miss Epstein-with-a-vagina?
> Alongside his masculinity, which he carries casually
Oh, so we know what masculinity is after all. It's muscles and superior height and being stinky and possessing a penis. Sounds awfully bioessentialist.
> He is not attracted to his son
Oh, it gets worse, dear reader. Not only does he have the hot for a 13-year-old, his pussy starts working again and he can't wait to be pleasured by a man again.
> Did not invoke heat in his cock and cunt
Do you actually possess both or are we talking about a magic roid clit here?
> If only it were a timeline where they were actual flesh and blood, and biological revulsion could set in
They would still fuck because the author is a pedophile and she thinks it is normal to write shit like 'tight as an unblooded girlchild'.
> He couldn't possibly say no to his own parent
What was that about biological revulsion?
> He is mostly good natured
> A sentence later describes how he attacked, kicked, and even bit other classmates
I was fucking right again. This child isn't just mentally stunted, he's got a clusterfuck of BPD and other symptoms from having an overbearing mother. It is not normal to BITE other students out of the blue, especially when he's old enough to know better. This is a boy that belongs on 'Adolescence', not in normal society.
> He may whack a hay bale with a stick or pitch his pocketknife at a tree
Next thing you'll know he'll be abusing animals and burying them in the backyard. Just totally normal, 'masculine' behaviour.
> He sobbed after his first no hitting mama lesson
Oh so he hit him too? That's great to know! The masculine 13-year-old you are lusting after was abusive to you the moment he could walk! Why is he still alive and not buried under the outhouse?
> It's the nightly erection pressed to his spinal column
> Jayce has the insanely erotic body of a young man, with strapping muscle tone and effusive body odor
He's 13 years old. BTW, notice a tonal difference when these people write about 13-year-old Jayce and 13-year-old trans Viktor: the former is in total control of his sexuality, a privilege afforded to males, and is an agent of desire. He is in charge of his wants and instigates sex. Trans Viktor, on the other hand, is a victim: he is preyed on by older adults who want those 'protuberant pussy lips' and to claim his virginity. The tonal shift and change even among these pedophile authors makes it clear they see 13-year-old boys as sexual agents, and 13-year-old 'trans boys' as eternal victims.
> he wants to have sex with his son, and his son knows it. His son wants the same thing
He's 13.
> He failed to discover that mothering Jayce would not diminish their sexual chemistry
Some real Oedipal shit going on here. Your mothering also turned your son into an abusive BPD nightmare, but let's talk about erections on male minors and them getting molested by other kids at school instead.
> Rutted to orgasm using the corner of the kitchen table
That's the least freaky thing in this fic. Talking about an 11-year-old's erection is far worse.
> He puts aside the potatoes
I hope you washed them. I don't need hag pussy juice in my mashed potatoes.
> The other boy is alive and in worse shape
It's almost as if being a single mother to a volatile, emotionally stunted boy who doesn't respect boundaries is going to lead to long-lasting problems. This is the epitome of the boy mom, the same kind that will excuse her own son being a rapist.
> Salo says you're a whore and a witch
> You fuck yourself open. What's stopping you from fucking something other than a vegetable?
This should be proof that no matter how much love you give to a male, he will find an excuse to be a disgusting misogynist. Well done cracking that 4chan bro code, PBM, you are totally owning them with that.
> he is frightened by the size of Jayce. He is a deadly boy
Sexual dimorphism combined with tism rage, mommy issues and whatnot will give you an Edmund Kemper Latino son. Imagine claiming to own those 4chan chuds while writing shit like this.
> Licks his lips like a slobbery dog
Again with the dog allegories. The Latino man is like a puppy, a Rottweiler, a pit bull and St. Bernard's, now can you spay and neuter him properly? He's going to rape his local schoolteacher soon.
> Where his skull clangs against a mounted iron pan
Keep doing that and his mood swings will get worse.
> I don't want to hurt you
He says, after making threats and accusing his mother of being a whore. Even Joffrey Baratheon had more tact.
More years pass and Jayce manages to make it to 17, where he will finally go to the Academy. Before that, Viktor measures every touch and kiss - familial, of course - and wonders how far either will take it. They still share a same bed despite the young man being too old and too big for it, which is weird as hell. When Latino Edmund Kemper goes to school, Viktor feels lonely because that precocious dog of a child gave him energy and life, and now he's a sagging hag who looks more like Charlie from Smiling Friends' grandmother than an object of desire.
Speaking of: Vander tries to put on the moves, pulling the classic, 'What's a pretty girl like you doing in a place like this?' line, albeit he says 'what's a pretty thing like you doing without a man?' suggesting that our proud hag Mage who wanted to be a man can't live alone for the life of him. Viktor considers the match - and erroneously says that they are 'two adult men' despite willingly calling himself a mother - a good one, as Vander s built like a bull and is considered 'ruined' like him. We learn that Viktor 'engaged in sex not by choice' when young, which of course made me roll my eyes. He was used and abused at 13, but Jayce at 13 is a sex stud? Pick a struggle. Vander, for all his attempts at being a good man, is shat upon by the narrative as Viktor promised his Edmund Kemper sex pest son he wouldn't fuck anyone else.
When Vander complains of a toothache and comes over, he states that he wishes he could have Viktor and that he would be 'so good to him'. Before anything bad can happen (because Viktor belongs to JAYCE, dammit!) Jayce returns home, and he is NOT happy.
Correct, Viktor did nothing wrong, but he is being punished for the very female crime of being labelled a whore and being shamed by society for it. Being a whore as a man carries a significantly different connotation, and he would be praised for it. Being called a whore and even being assaulted for it by the boy he raised? Oh yeah, we are owning the 4chan chuds with this one.
The piss fetish thing is a leftover from Machine 4 Man, where our filthy white boy was known to do this ON TOP of having a hairy ass. In this case, it's because a woman is being threatened by her volatile rapist son.
> He must be gushing from your loose cunt right now. That's what you smell like - a bitch in heat
"I am showing those 4chan chuds about the terrors of toxic masculinity by making the token Latino a rapist." Keep at it, white girl.
So, Jayce slaps Viktor so hard he temporarily goes blind, and then punches him so hard he vomits up blood, and if you think that isn't enough, he whips out his smelly eight inch cock and chokes his mommy with it. We really are in Edmund Kemper territory, as he used to orally rape his mother's decapitated head.
> It frees a patch of wooden floor onto which Viktor retches blood bile
He punched him so hard the floor came apart, amazing.
> It's an endowment of 8 inches
That seems to be the ideal length for PBM, here.
> The girth stretches Viktor's lips to the point of tearing at the corners
This is the same dick he ogled at when Jayce was 13-years-old, and now he's getting raped by an Arizona iced tea can.
> Which has accumulated a distinct gaminess
So his dick smells like rotten deer meat. What is it with this woman and her obsession with stinking genitalia? Were you raped by a man with a stinky dick, and that's why you have such an obsession with adolescent sexuality?
> Yet nothing fizzles in the cuff on Jayce's wrist with a sturdy helping of cockmeat thrust down Viktor's gullet
You fed your son with your flabby tits, now he's feeding you with that cockmeat. He's splitting you open like an unblooded girlchild.
> Assists his son by relinquishing his throat to the enormity of his desire
Haha, get the pun?
> He drinks down what he can - many girthy inches of flesh lambasted with fevered blood
Nothing says love and desire like raising a rapist who was known to bite and attack other children. Did you account for that in your All Timelines fantasy? Apparently not. Genocide AND rape is acceptable to him; he really is spiritually Israeli.
> Rocketing Viktor's face along his slobbery length
Just like a dog, eh?
> I should have done this ages ago
Yeah, I'm sure writing a 13-year-old raping his adoptive mother would go over very well; well, at least with your fanbase. They already accepted your pedophilia. Why not add juvenile rape into the mix?
> Viktor accepts his impalation with stale air squeezed senselessly within lungs, convulsions in his belly a roiling threat
*Impalement. If there is anything gender affirming about this, it's how the actual male uses his genitalia as punishment and forces the vagina owner to be a victim. He doesn't want a 'whore for a mother', but he'll rape said mother as punishment for the crime of other MEN finding said parent desirable. That is the epitome of toxic masculinity.
> Doesn't know if he can survive if Jayce leaves
Fucking hell, you really are a boymom aren't you?
> He sucked his son's cock - did that prove nothing or his ardor
This is a real fucking line.
> With a resounding crack, his knee twists...he topples head-first into the corner of the kitchen table
Your first mistake: double tap. Your second: always confirm the kill. If we are making GoT references such as the Sun-and-Stars thing, it makes sense that Jayce would be Khal Drogo. Both are violent rapists who only go after women as they view them as the 'weaker sex' and were killed by a witch who had no more fucks left to give. In this case, Viktor is too much of a boymom and can't let his rapist son leave.
If you thought it was over, it isn't. Predictably, Jayce comes back even more volatile - his disability mysteriously gone - and promises to rape him further.
> I'm going to fuck you, Mama. If anyone is going to breed you, it will be me
So will he rape their male children, or female children?
> Wonders how very painful it will be to be raped by his child
This is a real fucking line. What in the absolute fuck.
> He wonders if Jayce is teaching himself the art of amputation, so that he can replicate the process himself
On top of rape, he wants to cut off Viktor's limbs so he can rape an amputee. Oh you are REALLY owning the chuds, babe.
> He long since accepted that life begets death and oft times rape. He has already experienced rape
Who is doing the raping? Anyone want to take a guess? I guarantee you it wasn't done by a woman, but by a penis. In every universe where he gets raped, it was done by a penis. A male. You tried to change your gender because of it and STILL GET RAPED. Add on to the fact that your 'eternal love' IS STILL VIOLENT IN THE TIMELINES YOU SAVE HIM IN. YOU ENDED THE UNIVERSE FOR LATINO EDMUND KEMPER, GIVE YOUSELF A PAT ON THE BACK.
> He commands maybe six or seven inches more than Viktor
So 6'2 or 6'3.
> Be the adopted child of a single mother
> They teach you all the ways to be a good person and do not raise their voice or hand against you
> You still grow up a violent misogynist with all the worst forms of toxic masculinity
> Punch your adoptive mother so hard they go temporarily blind and vomit blood
> Choke them with your dick and later threaten to rape them
> Fulfills the promise by giving them a device that breaks their body and mind so you can rape them with 'the love of a child'
Remember that her most popular fic was her trying to show how bad the manosphere was.
> I filled the rune with my love
> You'll do whatever I ask of you
A child's love apparently includes no consent because they feel the world is owed to them. Guess it makes sense when you think about it - if you ignore the fact that the first thing they wanted to do was rape their own mother.
> You love him. Let him love you, in every sense of the word
It ain't rape, it's a struggle snuggle!
> I never wanted a wife or husband
If you married that poor man or woman, you'd be like Ramsay Snow and chew their nipples off. He believes he's owed sex and that his adoptive mother's vagina was owed to him like their breastmilk.
> I want you to love me as a man would love me
Oh, do women not love the same as men? Sounds awfully homophobic.
> How a lamb raised a wolf is a funny twist of fate
Making the Latino a wolf and the white one a lamb isn't the progressive act you think it is. You keep making the brown man an animal and a rapist, and I might think you are a card-carrying member of the Proud Boys.
>How many years could his son have overpowered him
Since he was a toddler, actually. He used to bite your nipples, remember?
> Breasts and cock and all
He is not a hermaphrodite, btw. He has chosen to remain female. That's just a limp-wristed roid clit.
> He is a god-boy chiseled of copious sunshine, a testament to male beauty
Oh so we KNOW what males are and what they fucking mean, but every time a 'trans man' comes on they are never considered the 'pinnacles of male beauty', they are just seen as MOTHERS and gaping cunts. I know what the fuck you are: a bizarro progressive TERF who does in fact believe in biology but has the absolute fucking shame of being a pedophile.
> A young buck on a withered crone
'Crone' is used for old women. I know what you're doing.
> You are the beautiful one, the one blessed by genetics
Whoa, there. On top of being a crypto TERF, you're also a eugenicist. What's next, you gonna talk about haplogroups?
> Even though you look different from me
Sounds awfully TERFy.
> His cunt gapes and drips, entirely exposed
But does it drool like a dog?
> By the presence of his strapping young son
Tall Latinos with big dicks are clearly the preference of this pedophilic woman.
> He has raised his own stud, his ideal mate
This 'ideal mate' is raping you like a buck rapes a doe. Fitting.
> His back bows so intensely it thrusts his chest inches from Jayce's face
So much for his disability.
> He takes the miniscule, saggy mound of Viktor's breast entirely into his mouth
I just think he's sucking off Charlie from 'Smiling Friends' grandmother.
> When we have our own baby together
You know he's raping the female infant.
> Transforming each nipple into a bloated, red peak
I just think of witch finger cookies. He's literally fucking Melisandre after she takes the necklace off.
> That their bond is strong, sacred, charged by Jayce's adoration
He made a rune that allows him to rape his own adoptive mother.
> Did you watch me quite often
Violent child with stunted development watched his mother masturbate when young, grows up to be a violent rapist. Owning the chuds, brah
> He cannot deny the racing pulse elicited by the sight of Jayce's erect penis, a marvelous feat of biology
Oh, so we actually DO know that penis = male, unquestionably and universally, and that vagina = AFAB, the organ that belongs to someone that gets raped.
> He does not know what type of whore saves themself for their own son
They don't. You are getting raped by your manchild adoptive son.
> So perhaps it is natural, rational, biology
The only time biology matters is when we are writing about Latino Edmund Kemper raping his own adoptive mother.
> The size of him, crammed in an orifice slick yet small
Me when my USB drive doesn't want to plug in:
> Like a pup in his first rut
You are never beating the allegations that you see Latino men as rapist dogs, PBM. Just admit you're a weird progressive white feminist crypto TERF who happens to be a pedophile.
> Witnessing the forth at his base where he pumps against his swollen gash
Nothing like your pussy juice turning into Dawn dish liquid!
> No insertion devastates so badly as the bulk of his son's meat, held snug by soft walls of muscle
Another real line.
> His mother's embrace translated to their wedded genitals
Sounds like something V.C. Andrews would write.
> But as a dog to a wound that needs soothing
Again with the dog allegories. It just keeps happening. At this point, you could call Jayce a dirty wetback who is only good for construction work and selling good tacos and it would be a better racial stereotype than whatever the fuck this is.
> "I love you more than trees,", speaking between pounds to Viktor's cervix
He can't use magic to change his sex, but he can use it to reinforce his cervix like it's Minas Morgul.
> You are my entire universe, my mother and my greatest love
"In all timelines, in all possibilities, only you can violently rape me"
> Joy for his son and lover, who will know no other body but this one
He's thinking this because of that rune, btw. It makes the struggle snuggle go a little bit softer like a towel washed with Downy.
> Because the roles are reversed when Viktor is prostate, fed by Jayce's bounteous flesh
No, you just accepted the role always meant for women:
All day, every day, therapist, mother, maid
Nymph, then a virgin, nurse, then a servant
Just an appendage, live to attend him
So that he never lifts a finger
24/7 baby machine
So he can live out his picket-fence dreams
It's not an act of love if you make her
You make me do too much labour
And then our adoptive mother gets pregnant. Nothing like lusting after an 11-year-old's genitalia and then getting violently raped by said child once they turn into an adult because it was your 'role' to be treated that way. Jayviks are never beating the allegations that they fucking hate Jayce. Even GOT fans are not as nice to in-canon rapists like these people are.
How about something more positive: seahorse dads! This author's sex education was so poor she had to do research on pregnancy in general, so surely we are in for a Christmas Eve treat!
The fic opens with a smut scene. No build-up, no tension, just Jayce opening the bedroom door as a surprise and showing our future seahorse dad a room that is clean (because in true pooner fashion, he never cleaned it ) with fairylights (not from Temu). It's all very sugary sweet, no punches to the gut or temporary blindness, to the point of making one sick.
> Unexpected and real
did you expect the tightening of the vaginal muscles to be faked?
> Gulps at the sight of his fully hard cock, and Jayce can't help but feel proud about it
Any mention of his size? No? Guess there will be no choking on that gamey mancock this time around.
> We don't want my precious boyfriend getting pregnant, do we?
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> The room fills with the sound of skin slapping
Or a dog's ears flapping as it shakes its head, you decide.
> He comes, messy and loud, squirting around Jayce with no more warning than a groan
What, no SPLASH! ? No expect stream that can spray the ceiling or wet the carpet? It's just a minute thing that gets his dick wet? Huh. Interesting.
> He's been feeling nauseous the whole day
Uh oh. This is where we find out the condom broke, or something.
Jayce comes over to find out that Viktor is not feeling well, and the dialogue does not sound like two adults talking at all; it's very childish and immature. Viktor blames the nausea on the bad tuna fish sandwich he ate - which is fair, bad tuna sucks - but you know as well as I do that he is going to pull the 'I am trans, how can I possibly get pregnant through penis-in-vagina sex?' card. The symptoms continue and he only thinks to go get a pregnancy test when he notices some bloating that does not go away. When he goes to the pharmacy to get a pregnancy test, of course she's totally understanding and not at all judgmental that a 'man' is seeking a pregnancy test, though from her perspective he must pass rather well and assume he's getting it for a girlfriend. In any case, he finds out that he is 4 weeks pregnant, and decides not to tell Jayce just yet while he's on the phone with him (he blames his shortness of breath and scared voice on seeing a spider). He makes a mental note that 'no one' knows he's trans and that he's entirely alone with no support structure. He decides to hide the pregnancy until the time is right and he can get all the gender-affirming baby showers he wants.
The next day, when Jayce arrives, he is aware that something is wrong but Viktor is being evasive. He blames his tears on him missing his parents (as it turns out, they are college students and are taking Calculus II when both of them should at least be in physical chemistry at this point). Jayce, ever the gentleman, tells him 'I got you' and will be there for him no matter what.
Several weeks later, when he is six weeks along, he develops cravings and has to go grocery shopping every two weeks (I cringe at the grocery bill). He gets the usual symptoms along with a sensitive nose, and he gets the very gender-affirming maternal instincts he took hormones to suppress: when a toddler trips and falls, he goes over to console the kid, and Jayce remarks that he 'didn't know he was so good with children'. He reassures the audience that he 'never once thought about aborting' and is growing to like his little one and the family he's going to build. But there is a caveat: despite being overjoyed that he is going to have some little engineers running around, he is avoiding Jayce's touch. Jayce remarks that he is looking more handsome and has that (maternal) glow to him, and then that BPD attitude comes right out and he gets enraged and accuses Viktor of cheating on him because he has been avoidant. He is aware that Viktor is hiding something from him, and just lets that accusation slip on top of accusing him of not loving him anymore. It's just that Latino love, baby - who cares if he turns red in the face and makes you physically unsafe and grabs your wrist to the point of breaking? He just loves you, bro!
When Jayce lets go of Viktor's hand, it careens right back into Viktor's stomach hard enough to cause a miscarriage (yes, Jayce held him that tightly). He has to call and ambulance and tell them he's pregnant because he can already feel the blood in his underwear and does not want to lose his precious little one who will now be a spitting image of the man who just abused him. Luckily, the fetus is still alive and in good health, despite the blood loss from Jayce's 'punch'. He is told that he is at a high risk for miscarriage and to take it easy, and is then asked if he has any family nearby, to which he says no, they aren't even in the same country (I also hope Piltover/Zaun has some kind of healthcare because he is going to die from those medical bills faster than those student loans).
Luckily, Ximena is his lifeline. She calls him on his cellphone and tells him she's aware of the fight he and Jayce had (of course Jayce made it seem as if it wasn't so bad) and it's then that Viktor breaks down and tells her that he is pregnant and nearly had a miscarriage. Ximena arrives by cab and they talk over the ultrasound photos. Viktor tells her Jayce accused him of cheating and she responds as any Latin mother would by rolling her eyes and saying her son is a retard who doesn't understand how sex works (to be fair, none of them do; if you are trans and don't want to be pregnant, go on birth control or get an IUD. Your uni should cover it via your student health plan). She helps him clean his apartment for a bit, before she is summoned back by Jayce. Viktor is then left alone to stew in his dysphoria. He doesn't like how his breasts are getting bigger and his hips wider, and remarks that he cannot see 'the man he is supposed to be'. Could've fooled me. He has no facial hair aside from the typical pooner facial pube hair, and only 'passes' due to his skinny frame and poor health. Predictably, he starts breaking down because biology is a TERF and cannot recognize his True and Honest manhood.
At seven weeks, he is able to wear a jacket to cover the baby bump, and heads to the library to study. It's more crowded than usual, and when he thinks he can settle down in peace, Caitlyn spots him. He tries to run (or waddle) in the rain and nearly slips and falls, but is caught by his Latino Lover. Jayce once again accuses him of pushing him away and acts like a self-entitled asshole, rather than be worried about why Viktor wasn't talking to him (which is what he would actually do). Viktor tells him that he was recovering in the hospital and this shocks our dear Latino to factory settings, and they head back to the dorm for the big pregnancy confession. He finds that Viktor has been reading the pregnancy book and that he was part of the 1% of condom users that failed (probably should've used a bigger size, wink wink). Jayce also blabbers out that Viktor miscarried and that was why he was in the hospital, before Viktor corrects him and informs him the embryo is fine. Jayce asks to hug him and Viktor forgives him, even though he was the one accused of cheating and was even physically assaulted and threatened by the baby daddy. Not to worry, though, he is going to keep the child because he wants to be a proud seahorse dad.
All that and he's more worried about being seen as a real man vs a high risk pregnancy and the fact his boyfriend physically threatened him. If you didn't want to get pregnant, have anal like the rest of the 'gay' guys do, or better yet - GO GET FIXED. You being pregnant does not make you male and you know it. Note how he suffers dysphoria over his breasts, but not his vagina, the organ that allowed for PIV sex and pregnancy to begin with. Priorities.
They reconcile a week later, and stay at Ximena's house for the weekend. Jayce tries to seduce him with a strawberry sexily but Ximena won't have it. As it turns out, she has been converting one of the spare rooms into a nursery, and plans to invite Viktor to stay at her home for the duration of the pregnancy because university dorms suck and wouldn't it suck harder for a bunch of male dorm members to hear you giving birth during the day/night? Viktor agrees to move in, but his biggest problem isn't the fact he's got free housing: it's the fact his pants no longer fit. He's angrier at that and the fact he can't use his binder anymore, and Jayce consoles him with the fact he's just like those seahorses bro:
Male seahorses don't really give 'birth', they release the eggs from his pouch. We know male seahorses are male because they produce sperm to fertilize the eggs deposited in his pouch from the female. We know she is female because she produces said eggs. The pouch guarantees his paternity and protects them from predators. His pouch is not a replacement for female reproductive organs. The analogy doesn't work as humans are placental mammals, and males do not have such a protective pouch to fertilize anything. The male uses his penis to fertilize the female via her vagina, which is exactly what happened here. Jayce is trying to convince him he's a special unique seahorse when all he is is a woman undergoing the thing half of humanity is capable of doing. Pregnancy doesn't give them dysphoria, but their breasts do...care to square that circle for me?
Jayce goes with Viktor to the OBGYN and they get to see their little munchkin. The nurse tells Viktor he is underweight and that he needs to eat more because the last thing we need is a miscarriage due to malnutrition or a low birth weight. It goes well and he is sent home with a diet plan, and he indulges in his cravings when he can. At 18 weeks, Viktor is in fact not gaining weight and losing it, and we learn that he is doing it because he has an ED of sorts that affects his perception of himself. He is worried that Jayce will no longer be attracted to him if he gets too fat - what he should be worried about are those flashes of violence he experienced when Jayce grabbed him by the wrist. No matter, Jayce tells him he will love him 'as the man he is' no matter what, and encourages Viktor to eat again.
When we get to the baby naming for the gender reveal, we once again meet the quandary pooners and trans people insist doesn't exist: they want to be see as seahorse dads and argue that sex isn't biological or tied to their gender identity, but they know what sex a fetus is and that there are only two options. They don't go for gender neutral names; they pick masculine and feminine ones like Edmund and Sophie respectively. Jayce likes the name Sophie because it's quite feminine for a fetus they aren't raising as gender neutral. Rules for thee but not for me. Anyways, they start sweet-talking the baby bump and even get their first sign of movement! Viktor rejoices that the baby can hear his daddy, and said daddy is overjoyed to be called daddy. Viktor is worried that people will think he's getting a beer gut and Jayce subtly admits he might have a bit of a feeder fetish because he likes seeing Viktor bigger. Prepare for the Chantal arc.
Cool, you'll have to wait 4-6 weeks before having sex again due to vaginal tears and the ever present smell of afterbirth. Have fun!
At their 21-week checkup, Viktor admits that he has begun lactating. The nurse tells him to keep the milking machine nearby so he can have an ample supply when the baby comes out. She asks them if they have decided on any names, and they reply Edmund if it's a boy, and Sophie if it's a girl (very binary). As it happens, it is a baby boy, because we know what sex is in fetuses, and they rush off to go get some 'boy' clothes because we know what a gender binary is when we decide when the rules apply. Oh, but wait: they want some GENDER NEUTRAL COLOURS like green and yellow because they really do want to smash the binary! Imagine that!
> Even though they know the gender, they want to be neutral with the colours
*Sex. You know the sex of the fetus. They didn't just assign a sex to the fetus, now did they?
> Dude
Whoa dude, did you spot that pregnant person, dude? That vagina owner who is pregnant, dude? They're a seahorse dad, dude, we gotta respect that, dude!
> They thought I was a woman
Because you ARE one. No matter how much you stomp your feet, people are going to know that you are female, because only females get pregnant. You being a 'seahorse dad' doesn't change that, and seahorse males produce the sperm that fertilizes the female's eggs to begin with.
> It doesn't matter what they think, what matters is what you feel
Trans ideology in a nutshell.
> I'm an aberration
Correct.
> Even less a man
Also correct.
> No matter the gender that was assigned to you
He wasn't 'assigned' a gender. His sex was observed at birth. Did they just assign a gender to the fetus you're gestating? No. You KNOW he's a male and you KNOW what 'boy' means in society.
> Would be just as excited if it was a girl
What happens when it identifies as a girl? What then? You gonna be proud that your son trooned out?
> Losing the very first person that he actually fell in love with...you as the man you are
That 'man' has a vagina and managed to get pregnant because of a convenient condom breakage. This wasn't what I expected when we were 'taking down the 1%'.
> You will not become a mother, but the most stubborn dad
He cannot be a dad as he did not sire the child. He is gestating the child; he is a mother by default. He won't be complaining about misgendering when he goes to the MATERNITY ward, will he?
At 26 weeks Viktor is suffering from cramps and he's getting the late-stage pregnancy mood swings. The nursey is painted mint green and white, a real Listerine colour. Things are going well until he goes on public transit and some random Mexicans decide to misgender him in Spanish:
> no one offers him a seat
You're a man now, remember? You aren't owed a seat, or time, or empathy, etc. Suck it up and be a man. Being misgendered by a group of Mexicans and wanting to punch one of them? Ayo, gringo, better watch your tongue, or someone is getting a visit late at night and is going to be found somewhere on WatchPeopleDie.
> Mel always Mel
This girl is always catching strays. She's just here feeding Jayce from a box of food (which is weird, tbh) and our poor white pregnant person is driven to such a rage you can HEAR the 'Niggers could be here' monologue playing in his head.
> What is she doing here?
Yeah, doesn't she know it's an ANNA rule around here - Ain't No Niggas Allowed?
> To afford her food and to see her?
He wants some black sugar on the side. The seafood is a little...undercooked, shall we say.
> Viktor sends her a deadly glare before she turns to her motorbike
I KNOW a couple of racial slurs were repeated in his head. Just because this is a Seahorse dad fic, doesn't mean we can't call a nigger a nigger a few times. This is a WHITE(ish) family and we will NOT sully our blood with those darkies!
As it turns out, Jayce was working extra to build a crib for lil Edmund there so he doesn't escape to Narnia. Mel was just there delivering food, and Jayce reassures Viktor that he only has eyes for him and only him. Viktor utters that she is 'prettier', but we don't tolerate that kind of African nonsense around here. We only like WHITE people getting pregnant, because we need to bump up those numbers! Then, to top it off, Jayce gives Viktor a promise ring shaped like a gear ( a reference to the show) and Viktor gets all teary-eyed because he 'doesn't deserve it' and his hormones are doing all the talking for him while Jayce does all the eating for him, because he's gaining weight and will start resembling a fat Mexican who reclines in the backyard drinking Mexican soda all day.
As the weeks pass and he is getting closer to his due date, our little seahorse - the nickname Jayce gives him - doesn't like the excess weight on him. He has no support and Jayce has to physically lift up the baby bump just for him to get relief. It's never asked or addressed why someone with his disability would want to get pregnant, but they want their baby fics, so....As it happens, his stomach has dropped because his uterus has, and there are some major medical complications including hemorrhaging. What's the biggest issue in all this? Getting misgendered:
> He uses he/him pronouns
Cute, 'he' still has two X chromosomes and has a female liver and bladder, what the fuck else do you want to correct?
> O positive
Neat, the universal blood type. He doesn't need to worry about an Rh- baby.
> The pregnancy has already done a toll on his already weak body
Wow, it's almost as if you should have engaged in family planning before having penis-in-vagina sex. It's amazing how pooners will go through life expecting that testosterone or their identity will protect them from pregnancy, engage in heterosexual sex (while calling it gay), get pregnant, and then wonder what the fuck happened.
> He had a major haemorrage the first trimester
Oh, I wonder what the cause of that could be...the accidental punch that Jayce delivered to Viktor when he held his arm so tight that when Viktor pried it back he hit himself in the stomach? The author just admitted that Jayce threatened their pregnancy and miracle baby and wants the readers to forget about it? Not me, bitch, I have a photographic memory.
> Disabled people can have abled children, yet in some cases, the disability may pass genetically
Then he should have been smarter and engaged in embryonic screening, but that is eugenics and we can't have that, now can we?
> The baby has underdeveloped lungs
The author did research and yet she doesn't know that this condition, AKA pulmonary hypoplasia, is usually accompanied by other congenital defects such as heart issues and is not compatible with life 10-15% of the time. If Viktor knew this was a dangerous pregnancy, he should have kept up with a genetic counselor as well as an OBGYN, but that never happened. He's supposed to be a genius, remember. It can be treated by fetal or postnatal surgery, but there are complications such as a 55% mortality rate. Your Latin Lover put your pregnancy at risk thanks to the Love Fist. Edmund here never stood a chance.
> A loud cry echoes in the room
The doctor said the baby had underdeveloped lungs, yet it's crying like a fully developed neonate. Did you just forget what you wrote?
Just a reminder that the hemorrhage never would have happened had just not physically threatened him. Author wanted to write a sweet pregnancy fic and happened to forget this tidbit. Edmund ain't making it to Narnia, but he might just make it to Blasphemous as some kind of fetal boss. That would be far more interesting than this piece of shit.
> Unexpected and real
did you expect the tightening of the vaginal muscles to be faked?
> Gulps at the sight of his fully hard cock, and Jayce can't help but feel proud about it
Any mention of his size? No? Guess there will be no choking on that gamey mancock this time around.
> We don't want my precious boyfriend getting pregnant, do we?
In the business we call this foreshadowing.
> The room fills with the sound of skin slapping
Or a dog's ears flapping as it shakes its head, you decide.
> He comes, messy and loud, squirting around Jayce with no more warning than a groan
What, no SPLASH! ? No expect stream that can spray the ceiling or wet the carpet? It's just a minute thing that gets his dick wet? Huh. Interesting.
> He's been feeling nauseous the whole day
Uh oh. This is where we find out the condom broke, or something.
Jayce comes over to find out that Viktor is not feeling well, and the dialogue does not sound like two adults talking at all; it's very childish and immature. Viktor blames the nausea on the bad tuna fish sandwich he ate - which is fair, bad tuna sucks - but you know as well as I do that he is going to pull the 'I am trans, how can I possibly get pregnant through penis-in-vagina sex?' card. The symptoms continue and he only thinks to go get a pregnancy test when he notices some bloating that does not go away. When he goes to the pharmacy to get a pregnancy test, of course she's totally understanding and not at all judgmental that a 'man' is seeking a pregnancy test, though from her perspective he must pass rather well and assume he's getting it for a girlfriend. In any case, he finds out that he is 4 weeks pregnant, and decides not to tell Jayce just yet while he's on the phone with him (he blames his shortness of breath and scared voice on seeing a spider). He makes a mental note that 'no one' knows he's trans and that he's entirely alone with no support structure. He decides to hide the pregnancy until the time is right and he can get all the gender-affirming baby showers he wants.
The next day, when Jayce arrives, he is aware that something is wrong but Viktor is being evasive. He blames his tears on him missing his parents (as it turns out, they are college students and are taking Calculus II when both of them should at least be in physical chemistry at this point). Jayce, ever the gentleman, tells him 'I got you' and will be there for him no matter what.
Several weeks later, when he is six weeks along, he develops cravings and has to go grocery shopping every two weeks (I cringe at the grocery bill). He gets the usual symptoms along with a sensitive nose, and he gets the very gender-affirming maternal instincts he took hormones to suppress: when a toddler trips and falls, he goes over to console the kid, and Jayce remarks that he 'didn't know he was so good with children'. He reassures the audience that he 'never once thought about aborting' and is growing to like his little one and the family he's going to build. But there is a caveat: despite being overjoyed that he is going to have some little engineers running around, he is avoiding Jayce's touch. Jayce remarks that he is looking more handsome and has that (maternal) glow to him, and then that BPD attitude comes right out and he gets enraged and accuses Viktor of cheating on him because he has been avoidant. He is aware that Viktor is hiding something from him, and just lets that accusation slip on top of accusing him of not loving him anymore. It's just that Latino love, baby - who cares if he turns red in the face and makes you physically unsafe and grabs your wrist to the point of breaking? He just loves you, bro!
When Jayce lets go of Viktor's hand, it careens right back into Viktor's stomach hard enough to cause a miscarriage (yes, Jayce held him that tightly). He has to call and ambulance and tell them he's pregnant because he can already feel the blood in his underwear and does not want to lose his precious little one who will now be a spitting image of the man who just abused him. Luckily, the fetus is still alive and in good health, despite the blood loss from Jayce's 'punch'. He is told that he is at a high risk for miscarriage and to take it easy, and is then asked if he has any family nearby, to which he says no, they aren't even in the same country (I also hope Piltover/Zaun has some kind of healthcare because he is going to die from those medical bills faster than those student loans).
Luckily, Ximena is his lifeline. She calls him on his cellphone and tells him she's aware of the fight he and Jayce had (of course Jayce made it seem as if it wasn't so bad) and it's then that Viktor breaks down and tells her that he is pregnant and nearly had a miscarriage. Ximena arrives by cab and they talk over the ultrasound photos. Viktor tells her Jayce accused him of cheating and she responds as any Latin mother would by rolling her eyes and saying her son is a retard who doesn't understand how sex works (to be fair, none of them do; if you are trans and don't want to be pregnant, go on birth control or get an IUD. Your uni should cover it via your student health plan). She helps him clean his apartment for a bit, before she is summoned back by Jayce. Viktor is then left alone to stew in his dysphoria. He doesn't like how his breasts are getting bigger and his hips wider, and remarks that he cannot see 'the man he is supposed to be'. Could've fooled me. He has no facial hair aside from the typical pooner facial pube hair, and only 'passes' due to his skinny frame and poor health. Predictably, he starts breaking down because biology is a TERF and cannot recognize his True and Honest manhood.
At seven weeks, he is able to wear a jacket to cover the baby bump, and heads to the library to study. It's more crowded than usual, and when he thinks he can settle down in peace, Caitlyn spots him. He tries to run (or waddle) in the rain and nearly slips and falls, but is caught by his Latino Lover. Jayce once again accuses him of pushing him away and acts like a self-entitled asshole, rather than be worried about why Viktor wasn't talking to him (which is what he would actually do). Viktor tells him that he was recovering in the hospital and this shocks our dear Latino to factory settings, and they head back to the dorm for the big pregnancy confession. He finds that Viktor has been reading the pregnancy book and that he was part of the 1% of condom users that failed (probably should've used a bigger size, wink wink). Jayce also blabbers out that Viktor miscarried and that was why he was in the hospital, before Viktor corrects him and informs him the embryo is fine. Jayce asks to hug him and Viktor forgives him, even though he was the one accused of cheating and was even physically assaulted and threatened by the baby daddy. Not to worry, though, he is going to keep the child because he wants to be a proud seahorse dad.
All that and he's more worried about being seen as a real man vs a high risk pregnancy and the fact his boyfriend physically threatened him. If you didn't want to get pregnant, have anal like the rest of the 'gay' guys do, or better yet - GO GET FIXED. You being pregnant does not make you male and you know it. Note how he suffers dysphoria over his breasts, but not his vagina, the organ that allowed for PIV sex and pregnancy to begin with. Priorities.
They reconcile a week later, and stay at Ximena's house for the weekend. Jayce tries to seduce him with a strawberry sexily but Ximena won't have it. As it turns out, she has been converting one of the spare rooms into a nursery, and plans to invite Viktor to stay at her home for the duration of the pregnancy because university dorms suck and wouldn't it suck harder for a bunch of male dorm members to hear you giving birth during the day/night? Viktor agrees to move in, but his biggest problem isn't the fact he's got free housing: it's the fact his pants no longer fit. He's angrier at that and the fact he can't use his binder anymore, and Jayce consoles him with the fact he's just like those seahorses bro:
Male seahorses don't really give 'birth', they release the eggs from his pouch. We know male seahorses are male because they produce sperm to fertilize the eggs deposited in his pouch from the female. We know she is female because she produces said eggs. The pouch guarantees his paternity and protects them from predators. His pouch is not a replacement for female reproductive organs. The analogy doesn't work as humans are placental mammals, and males do not have such a protective pouch to fertilize anything. The male uses his penis to fertilize the female via her vagina, which is exactly what happened here. Jayce is trying to convince him he's a special unique seahorse when all he is is a woman undergoing the thing half of humanity is capable of doing. Pregnancy doesn't give them dysphoria, but their breasts do...care to square that circle for me?
Jayce goes with Viktor to the OBGYN and they get to see their little munchkin. The nurse tells Viktor he is underweight and that he needs to eat more because the last thing we need is a miscarriage due to malnutrition or a low birth weight. It goes well and he is sent home with a diet plan, and he indulges in his cravings when he can. At 18 weeks, Viktor is in fact not gaining weight and losing it, and we learn that he is doing it because he has an ED of sorts that affects his perception of himself. He is worried that Jayce will no longer be attracted to him if he gets too fat - what he should be worried about are those flashes of violence he experienced when Jayce grabbed him by the wrist. No matter, Jayce tells him he will love him 'as the man he is' no matter what, and encourages Viktor to eat again.
When we get to the baby naming for the gender reveal, we once again meet the quandary pooners and trans people insist doesn't exist: they want to be see as seahorse dads and argue that sex isn't biological or tied to their gender identity, but they know what sex a fetus is and that there are only two options. They don't go for gender neutral names; they pick masculine and feminine ones like Edmund and Sophie respectively. Jayce likes the name Sophie because it's quite feminine for a fetus they aren't raising as gender neutral. Rules for thee but not for me. Anyways, they start sweet-talking the baby bump and even get their first sign of movement! Viktor rejoices that the baby can hear his daddy, and said daddy is overjoyed to be called daddy. Viktor is worried that people will think he's getting a beer gut and Jayce subtly admits he might have a bit of a feeder fetish because he likes seeing Viktor bigger. Prepare for the Chantal arc.
Cool, you'll have to wait 4-6 weeks before having sex again due to vaginal tears and the ever present smell of afterbirth. Have fun!
At their 21-week checkup, Viktor admits that he has begun lactating. The nurse tells him to keep the milking machine nearby so he can have an ample supply when the baby comes out. She asks them if they have decided on any names, and they reply Edmund if it's a boy, and Sophie if it's a girl (very binary). As it happens, it is a baby boy, because we know what sex is in fetuses, and they rush off to go get some 'boy' clothes because we know what a gender binary is when we decide when the rules apply. Oh, but wait: they want some GENDER NEUTRAL COLOURS like green and yellow because they really do want to smash the binary! Imagine that!
> Even though they know the gender, they want to be neutral with the colours
*Sex. You know the sex of the fetus. They didn't just assign a sex to the fetus, now did they?
> Dude
Whoa dude, did you spot that pregnant person, dude? That vagina owner who is pregnant, dude? They're a seahorse dad, dude, we gotta respect that, dude!
> They thought I was a woman
Because you ARE one. No matter how much you stomp your feet, people are going to know that you are female, because only females get pregnant. You being a 'seahorse dad' doesn't change that, and seahorse males produce the sperm that fertilizes the female's eggs to begin with.
> It doesn't matter what they think, what matters is what you feel
Trans ideology in a nutshell.
> I'm an aberration
Correct.
> Even less a man
Also correct.
> No matter the gender that was assigned to you
He wasn't 'assigned' a gender. His sex was observed at birth. Did they just assign a gender to the fetus you're gestating? No. You KNOW he's a male and you KNOW what 'boy' means in society.
> Would be just as excited if it was a girl
What happens when it identifies as a girl? What then? You gonna be proud that your son trooned out?
> Losing the very first person that he actually fell in love with...you as the man you are
That 'man' has a vagina and managed to get pregnant because of a convenient condom breakage. This wasn't what I expected when we were 'taking down the 1%'.
> You will not become a mother, but the most stubborn dad
He cannot be a dad as he did not sire the child. He is gestating the child; he is a mother by default. He won't be complaining about misgendering when he goes to the MATERNITY ward, will he?
At 26 weeks Viktor is suffering from cramps and he's getting the late-stage pregnancy mood swings. The nursey is painted mint green and white, a real Listerine colour. Things are going well until he goes on public transit and some random Mexicans decide to misgender him in Spanish:
> no one offers him a seat
You're a man now, remember? You aren't owed a seat, or time, or empathy, etc. Suck it up and be a man. Being misgendered by a group of Mexicans and wanting to punch one of them? Ayo, gringo, better watch your tongue, or someone is getting a visit late at night and is going to be found somewhere on WatchPeopleDie.
> Mel always Mel
This girl is always catching strays. She's just here feeding Jayce from a box of food (which is weird, tbh) and our poor white pregnant person is driven to such a rage you can HEAR the 'Niggers could be here' monologue playing in his head.
> What is she doing here?
Yeah, doesn't she know it's an ANNA rule around here - Ain't No Niggas Allowed?
> To afford her food and to see her?
He wants some black sugar on the side. The seafood is a little...undercooked, shall we say.
> Viktor sends her a deadly glare before she turns to her motorbike
I KNOW a couple of racial slurs were repeated in his head. Just because this is a Seahorse dad fic, doesn't mean we can't call a nigger a nigger a few times. This is a WHITE(ish) family and we will NOT sully our blood with those darkies!
As it turns out, Jayce was working extra to build a crib for lil Edmund there so he doesn't escape to Narnia. Mel was just there delivering food, and Jayce reassures Viktor that he only has eyes for him and only him. Viktor utters that she is 'prettier', but we don't tolerate that kind of African nonsense around here. We only like WHITE people getting pregnant, because we need to bump up those numbers! Then, to top it off, Jayce gives Viktor a promise ring shaped like a gear ( a reference to the show) and Viktor gets all teary-eyed because he 'doesn't deserve it' and his hormones are doing all the talking for him while Jayce does all the eating for him, because he's gaining weight and will start resembling a fat Mexican who reclines in the backyard drinking Mexican soda all day.
As the weeks pass and he is getting closer to his due date, our little seahorse - the nickname Jayce gives him - doesn't like the excess weight on him. He has no support and Jayce has to physically lift up the baby bump just for him to get relief. It's never asked or addressed why someone with his disability would want to get pregnant, but they want their baby fics, so....As it happens, his stomach has dropped because his uterus has, and there are some major medical complications including hemorrhaging. What's the biggest issue in all this? Getting misgendered:
> He uses he/him pronouns
Cute, 'he' still has two X chromosomes and has a female liver and bladder, what the fuck else do you want to correct?
> O positive
Neat, the universal blood type. He doesn't need to worry about an Rh- baby.
> The pregnancy has already done a toll on his already weak body
Wow, it's almost as if you should have engaged in family planning before having penis-in-vagina sex. It's amazing how pooners will go through life expecting that testosterone or their identity will protect them from pregnancy, engage in heterosexual sex (while calling it gay), get pregnant, and then wonder what the fuck happened.
> He had a major haemorrage the first trimester
Oh, I wonder what the cause of that could be...the accidental punch that Jayce delivered to Viktor when he held his arm so tight that when Viktor pried it back he hit himself in the stomach? The author just admitted that Jayce threatened their pregnancy and miracle baby and wants the readers to forget about it? Not me, bitch, I have a photographic memory.
> Disabled people can have abled children, yet in some cases, the disability may pass genetically
Then he should have been smarter and engaged in embryonic screening, but that is eugenics and we can't have that, now can we?
> The baby has underdeveloped lungs
The author did research and yet she doesn't know that this condition, AKA pulmonary hypoplasia, is usually accompanied by other congenital defects such as heart issues and is not compatible with life 10-15% of the time. If Viktor knew this was a dangerous pregnancy, he should have kept up with a genetic counselor as well as an OBGYN, but that never happened. He's supposed to be a genius, remember. It can be treated by fetal or postnatal surgery, but there are complications such as a 55% mortality rate. Your Latin Lover put your pregnancy at risk thanks to the Love Fist. Edmund here never stood a chance.
> A loud cry echoes in the room
The doctor said the baby had underdeveloped lungs, yet it's crying like a fully developed neonate. Did you just forget what you wrote?
Just a reminder that the hemorrhage never would have happened had just not physically threatened him. Author wanted to write a sweet pregnancy fic and happened to forget this tidbit. Edmund ain't making it to Narnia, but he might just make it to Blasphemous as some kind of fetal boss. That would be far more interesting than this piece of shit.
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No disrespect but how do you guys read this shit without vomiting
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Very few things in the SRS thread have made me flinch, but a lot of the shit @Chandelier finds is a hard pass after reading the descriptions. I can't imagine how rotted someone has to be to actually write this shit.