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These people have a weird fetish with impregnating sixteen year olds, and they aren't Hollywood celebrities or Steven Tyler. This is an ABO fic with all the works: feminization, well-endowed alpha males, and a regency/Medieval/it's-never-actually-explained plot that will make you want to enact the Russian Revolution. Lines for this fic include:
- I refuse to send my son like a lamb to the slaughter to be torn on some bastard alpha's knot, even if it were to guarantee us peace for a goddamned eternity.
- It’s his right. It’s in his bones, written into his very being. To mark, claim, and breed.
- He is, deep down, an animal like everybody else. He only wears the human’s face and the crown to be distinguished from one, but in the bedroom there are no human rules to abide by. There are no crowns. There’s only instinct, and there’s only lust left where a King once stood.
(For context, this is presumably a white woman writing that about a brown man. They are NEVER beating the allegations. Just call him a dirty wetback at this point; it'll be far less racist.)
- rewards him with a deep kiss on his drooling cunt
In short:
- Alpha male LARPing as Khal Drogo takes his own Daenerys Targaryen and marries YUR MAH KWEEN at the age of 16
- A war is fought that is never explained or used as a backdrop for the story, you are just supposed to accept one happened and Alpha Male Prime here came out on top and this marriage was the bargain because the losing city has to pay taxes or some shit.
- Turns out said bride is a mage, and those are rare, and he's taking a mage to wife in a city founded to escape mages (lmao)
- Alpha Male Prime has the Alpha Male dick and tears his 16-year-old bride's vagina
- Alpha Male Prime wants those pups - er, babies - real bad, and says it is his right to breed said 16-year-old
- Alpha Male Prime is directly described as an 'animal wearing a human face' to the wit and smirk of the white author
It's just this:
With this as the author:
> The little Zaunite prince holds his wobbly chin high
He's 16, but you'd never guess because these teen-fuckers love writing them looking younger.
> Only the youngest one has presented with the stipulated secondary gender and she is nine summers old
By the Gods! She's yet a maiden! If she bleeds, she breeds, right lads? Tally ho!
> It isn't common at that age, but not impossible
Now, what is our ME ALPHA, ME IN COMMAND, ME WARLORD has to say about that?
> All of the present company knew of the Defender's temper, how he was quick to anger
ME ALPHA. ME HAVE TERRIBLE ANGER. ME SWING BIG HAMMER. ME HUNT BOAR IN FOREST. ME GET GUTTED BY BOAR IN ME. ME WATCH WIFE PLOT AGAINST ME AND FUCK HER BROTHER. NED, AH NED
> The room stank with all manners of scents, the Council's moral hanging by a thread
Whenever I read about these people stinking to high heaven, I imagine a war between Axe bodyspray, Yankee candles, Febreeze air fresheners, pepper spray, and Indian BO. Just imagine a world of colourful, floral or honey-like Indian BO and that is Omegaverse for you.
> Was first and foremost a warrior, always preferring a hands-on solution if there only was one
Bitches are giving him Mordekaiser's arc when this is a guy who vomited at the sight of dead bodies.
> I refuse to send my son like a lamb to the slaughter to be torn on some bastard alpha's knot
> Does just that but the alpha is hot and speaks like Robert Baratheon instead of Reek
> Our boy of age six and ten has made his decision
Weird when it involves teenage girls, acceptable when the sex pest is hot and has big muscles. If you look like Epstein, with a mishappen penis and tit fetish, you're weird as fuck. If you have an eight-pack and swing a big hammer, you're good.
> Some say you plan to humiliate me, even
Yeah they're just giving you their disabled child so you can fuck and impregnate in the name of securing an heir even when it's of great cost to them. If it bleeds, it breeds, tally ho!
> His instinct is to reach for a weapon
Next thing you'll know is he'll be fighting Rhaegar Targaryen in the Trident for the right of ANOTHER 16-year-old to marry. Oh, wait.
> He is frail
He's frail and small uwu
> His lips felt dry, akin to days in a scorching sun
So they're cracked and bleeding?
> And as an alpha...I will treat your boy right, I can promise you this
ME ALPHA. ME CLAIM OMEGA AS PROPERTY. ME WARLORD. ME ENTITLED TO THIS.
> Their tongue will be cut off by my own hand
I love it when authors are trying to speak in a 'Medieval' voice and it just sounds like a bad D&D RP. This man is not Robert Baratheon, even though the entire arc between these characters is exactly the same.
> In all the talks about the omega's qualities and flaws, no one mentioned how devastatingly beautiful the boy was
He might be crippled, but that underage pussy works wonders. He's even wearing the tradwife dress!
> Fluid white satin that clung to Viktor's lithe frame
He's just uwu so smol. A perfect white wife.
> Burning golden eyes underlined with scarlet-red paint
Scarlet works as its own word, because we know it's red.
> The same ink used to draw a straight line down the center of the boy's lower lip, down his throat and all the way to his collarbones
Oy vey, there's cultural appropriation there somehow. He's a Mage, in a city founded to escape mages...make it make sense.
> Cashmere. Sweet milk. Volcanic ash
Volcanic ash doesn't really have a smell. Sulfur dioxide does, and it smells like setting off a firework.
> A fragrance so enticing he felt like a pup fighting his post-rut instincts
A literal firecracker set this Latino off, imagine that.
> Gods be good, he has not felt like that for a least a decade and half
I KNEW this was a rip-off of GOT. He literally is Robert Baratheon marrying Lyanna Stark. This guy is, what? Nearing his 40s, and he's marrying a 16-year-old? And it only happens to omegas? Imagine that.
> He's gorgeous. Small. So heartbreakingly young
So why did you agree to the wedding? You admit the kid is too young and doesn't want to do it, yet do it because MUH TRADITION and that 'it's just biology' that you fuck a teenager and get your precious pup.
> Jayce would rip their damned arms off with his teeth
Never beating the allegations that they see this man as an animal.
> Jayce's palms fully cover Viktor's slender fingers
He's got those yeti punchers!
> A bit lower than Jayce would expect from his young age. Beautiful beyond words
AKA 'you are so mature for your age.' Doesn't sound so pretty when put like that, does it?
> He's the gods' forgiveness offering for the years Jayce lost at the war
What war? A war between the cities? Doesn't matter who won or lost, omegas are still second-class citizens. Also, you can use 'forgiveness' or 'offering'. Both of them make your writing look clunky.
> He's one of the gods himself
Gods really do have a thing for teenagers, don't they?
> The gesture brings out even more sweetness in the boy's scent
Like cream and milk and sugar cookies and apples and -
> He has his regrets, and he is paying for their freedom with his own future and a choice made for him and yet...his situation is still so, so much better than Viktor's
...what freedom? Freedom for whom? Because no one's situation is any better, especially if you are an omega. You don't get to experience any freedom. Of COURSE your situation is better - YOU aren't sold as a sex slave! How fucking tone deaf do you have to be?
> Though, to Jayce's surprise, he also indulges in Zaunite dishes
White people season their food this time around.
> It makes him feel younger
You're almost 40. Your balls are starting to shrivel up, but you'll be erect for hours, pump out cartons of semen and will have a knot that's bigger than a paper weight. Oh, and I mustn't forget: his hands will be so big and Viktor's waist so small his thumbs will meet in the middle.
> His doe eyes
Oh, here we go. You know you are dealing with a pedo when they use that line.
> What a tragic thing it is, that the source of Viktor's distress and soured mood is no one else but him. What he has to do
You didn't have to marry him, but you did because muh biology. The only time these people care about biology is when it comes to their shitty omegaverse.
> The suffocating smell of a distressed omega almost makes Jayce retch
Must be that spoiled sweetmilk. Does it make his vagina juice sour, too?
> The sudden stink of fear and misery is so intense that Jayce's hear is almost swimming with nausea
We know, you wrote that already.
> Don't you dare treat me like a child when we're in the bedroom, my King
The classic 'we treat teenagers like adults and we infantilize adults' argument. The weird thing is, we don't even KNOW what kind of setting this is. Is it Medieval or not? What war was fought? Who instigated it and why? Who suffered the most losses? Who is capable of serving in the army, alphas only or can they bring their betas? What weapons are used? I don't think this author focused much on the worldbuilding; she just piggybacked off of GOT and thought no one would notice.
> During war, he approached terrified omegas and was forced in their close proximity
Israel-Palestine conflict but add
Omegaverse
> Like he was on the verge of frenzy himself, ready to tear to pieces whatever was making the omega in front of him sob and smell so heartbreakingly terrifed
YOU, BITCH, HE'S AFRAID OF YOU. HE DOESN'T WANT TO BE RAPED ON THE MARITAL BED. DOES IT NEED TO BE ANY MORE OBVIOUS?!
> He never thought that he would end up wondering if it was really worth the kid's tears
Really, bitch? You're the ALPHA MALE with BIG DICK ENERGY over here. You won a war no one knows who started and why, and now you're taking the spoilers. Don't act as if you don't fucking know why the kid is crying. Boy do I hate terrible characterization.
> After years of only giving orders and watching them fulfilled immediately
Is that due to your alpha male privilege or by merit? Did you have to fight other alphas for your position? What is the composition of the army? I don't think Anon here didn't think much about this.
> His smell is sweet again. Addictively so, making Jayce's gums ache
I hope you get a root canal.
> It takes all of Jayce's willpower not to pull the angelic omega into his lap to stop the smell of rejection from souring the air again
Remember: these people give off smells whenever they are stressed, happy, angry, upset, etc. It's one stinky world that no amount of perfume can fix. Indian BO with deer and wolf piss surrounding you, forever and ever.
> They will check the sheets
Bitch can't decide what setting she wants so she's going with the Medieval idea that there has to be blood on the sheets in order to show virginity has been claimed. I guess omegas don't gush like broken water mains in this AU.
> You're afraid of me
Yeah, you're a Latino Conan the Barbarian who won a war we still don't know the cause of.
> I do not fear you. it is just...a natural bodily reaction, as you're an alpha
You were scared and he could smell it. It's all about that biology, baby - and the fact you smell like some Elizabeth Taylor perfume.
> I will not take you crying and smelling of misery like you did before
He still smells of misery and it was enough to make you vomit. Did you try opening a window?
> Filled with so many different pheromones
God, I might retch with how these people smell.
> Help him avoid showing how dizzying it feels to have a young, hormonal omega next to him, practically begging to be fucked
"Your Honour, the teenager asked for it. She was so mature for her age and wise beyond her years. Her beauty made it so I couldn't help but fuck her. Can you blame me?" That's some Quentin Tarantino ahh shit.
> Even if his inner alpha takes a sick, selfish pleasure in watching the young thing's clumsy attempts at convincing him to do something
It seems to be working well because you couldn't help but think of fucking him.
> I wish to hold back for your sake because no matter what you say you are a pup, a lovely, innocent thing that I fear to break with my old, rough hands
That's some Stannis Baratheon shit right there. I wasn't joking when these lines of dialogue sound like they were ripped off a GOT episode.
> Would it be so bad to be broken by you?
Omega pussies really must be built different if you want to take a jackhammering from a Coke can. These people are really weird fantasizing about teenagers taking enormous penises; one would think they spent too long on the 'barely legal' section of XVideos.
> There's a part of me that has always been yours, Jayce
So why were you so deathly afraid, then, if your Arcane magic knew that you were supposed to be together? Why didn't your omega scent come off as excited and joyous? It smells like bullshit to me.
> He sounds wise beyond his years
Another excuse pedophiles make when they're fucking teens. I'm sure the FBI has heard it a few times from you-know-who.
> You're big and my mind sees it as a threat
You don't say. A large, muscular alpha male who won a war and can swing around a giant hammer is a threat? A child could tell you that - wait, wrong joke.
> The volcanic ash of his shy arousal
> It's heavy, the pheromones coating Jayce's tongue with each inhale
"You taste so good, dear omega."
"And what do I smell like?"
"Like rotten eggs."
> He is the most adorable thing he has ever seen in his long, lonely life
What was he doing before the war? What started the war? What kind of conditions necessitated it? Why was he picked? Do only alphas serve? C'mon, you gotta answer these questions!
> The thin, alabaster skin
It's never complete without your pale, white, alabastrine swan-necked waifu.
> Am I not your wife? Your queen?
We aren't even trying with the 'trans' thing. We are just making him a woman and giving him a pussy because we know that pooners won't bitch when that tag is applied even when they do. You just want Jayce fucking a woman but won't admit it.
> Some hidden by coarse hair
Literally this meme again:
> His jaw hurts from how hard he has to clench to stop himself from pushing the boy down and having his way with him
That's the third time you've said that.
> Jayce's cock is straining his breeches obscenely
Are you ready to see how big this ALPHA MALE COCK is?
> barely-there breasts
We are never escaping the allegations (read: proof) that Jayviks would rather see Jayce fucking teenagers than ever see him love his canonical black female love interest.
> My Queen cannot be left in doubt
- You are my queen
- Mah queen
- You will always be my queen
> That wriggle like those of a kicking fawn
We aren't beating the implications that baby deer = pedophilia in this fandom, are we?
> The sweet thing turns even more boneless
Well it makes sense since you're going to turn him into a fucking fruit smoothie with all that drilling and pounding like you're a Ninja blender.
> How soon will the boy learn that there's not a thing Jayce wouldn't do for him?
Would he get SPAYED and NEUTERED?
> I expect no more doubts about the perfection of your body
He's 16. This is how creepy men talk about teenagers. If you wanted to set this in GOT, fine, but even us GOT fans are going to have an issue because we KNOW the age gaps are wrong. You, on the other hand...
> His beard leaves the omega's body slightly red
So his beard is like sandpaper or the uwu omega's skin is so thin a papercut is like opening an artery. OK.
> The new position allows him to squeeze the omega's waist until his fingers meet
I FUCKING KNEW IT. It's THIS fucking line. They can never get a new fucking line to show how uwu tiny their self-insert is.
>It's unfair how beautiful he is
And it's a flat-chested 16-year-old. It's OK, though, because he's Alpha Prime with a colossal dick and they make the rules, mmmkay?
> It's his right. It's in his bones, written into his very being. To mark, claim, and breed
Biological essentialism is okay when WE do it, you fucking transphobe, you ignoramus, you little leech. We can write about how MANLY the ALPHA MALES are and how it's their BIOLOGICAL RIGHT to BREED vagina-owning omegas.
> Jayce is an animal like everybody else. He only wears the human's face
I FUCKING LOVE how these fujos just come right out and admit they don't even see him as a person, but an animal and a knuckle-dragging caveman that has no place in human society. He acts like a dog, fucks like a dog, and acts like he's entitled to the world like a dog. This is one person who I sincerely hope would get his ass stretched out in prison, just so he could be topped by other alpha males like the dog that he is.
> Viktor's breasts are so small in his palms, so soft.
He's just uwu so smol and tiny and white and pure and cute and all he can say is UWU ALPHA FUCK ME ALPHA~~~
> Notes of sweet milk in his scent
Did the rotten egg smell go away yet?
> It's dizzying, that it would intensify further should Viktor be with pup, his body preparing to nurture their child
There's that biological essentialism again.
> He tastes like what Jayce could describe as magic
That pussy juice really is magical, because the author later directly says he 'fills him to tearing'.
> The undergarments follow the brasserie's fate as he tears them in two with his teeth and hands
Get it? ME ALPHA. ME TEAR APART SILLY GARMENTS. ME USE TEETH AND TONGUE LIKE ANIMAL. ME TAKE YOU LIKE ANIMAL. ME GROWL LIKE ANIMAL. ME ALPHA MALE PRIME LIKE ANCESTORS.
> The sweet and salty taste of his cunt and the pheromones in the air are making him growl
I am telling you, the police force and military need to deploy omega pheromones so these alphas can furiously fuck and/or rape each other, preventing innocent omegas from being harmed. It's true equality in a canister.
> It's too much Alpha, please
UWU ALPHA PLEASE FUCK ME ALPHA I WANT TO BE FUCKED STUPID NYAAAAAAAH
God, I fucking hate this dialogue.
> If the boy were to take his cock and then his knot
*Your queen. She does, and she also tears.
> He thinks that he fought all those battles and spilled all that blood
For whom? No, really; WHAT did you fight a war for? Who fucking benefited from it?
> As if presenting for Jayce already became instinctual for him
Fucking 16-year-olds is natural bro, it says soin my Bible in my biology.
> Rewards him with a deep kiss on his drooling cunt
If I read 'drooling cunt' another time, I will seriously smack a bitch. VAGINAS ARE NOT ST. BERNARDS, STOP THAT SHIT
> His queen was a resilient, lovely creature that he intended to break
He's talking about a 16-year-old BTW. I guess the age of consent laws are different here- if they exist at all.
> The King's knot is deflated now, but his cock is still buried deep in his aching cunt. It's hard and impossibly hot
Alpha Male biology means they can stay erect for hours without visiting an ER, because their biology sounds like it codes for polygyny but is meant for monogamy instead. Also copious amounts of semen, can't forget that.
> The Defender of Tomorrow made Viktor's mind leave his body with the skill of his big, rough hands
Yeah those yaoi hands also made you forget you need surgery on that vagina.
> Kissed until the only word Viktor knew was 'Alpha'.
Keep saying that and the Whisperers will come with Walkers and I will 100% bait them to bite your dick off first. I want to trade Noah's death for Alpha Male Prime here.
> Filling his cunt to the point of tearing
> He took everything Jayce had
I wasn't joking. The bits about the 'blood on the sheets' is also a Medieval misnomer, but it's not like this retard ever does any reading outside of AO3, so we have to deal with the shitty worldbuilding. Just focus on Alpha Male Prime who STILL has an erection after a night of 'passionate' sex that led to vaginal tearing - and the blood on your sheets is NOT from your hymen, retard, because it isn't meant to bleed. It is a stretchy membrane. All that sex-ed and you still suck at it - well, aside from making the uwu omega suck dick.
> He's powerful, strikingly beautiful
He's also nearing 40 and probably looks like a cross between Mel Gibson and Guillermo del Toro.
> Viktor remains an Undercity cripple
You're about to be crippled from something else HEYO
> Held like he was something precious
He tore your vagina.
> He feels naive. His role as the omega is done, with the sheets stained with blood of both his maidenhood and bonding mark
'Maidenhood' in a pseudo-Medieval setting - I still don't know what setting this is even set IN - is a term used exclusively for females. We aren't even trying with the trans tag, are we? He's just a woman (read: teenager) getting fucked by Alpha Male Prime who still has an erection.
> The man's cock is angry red and hard
...still? Alpha males clearly have no refractory period and do not suffer any form of blood loss. This is an evolutionary flaw because that's the first thing a predator would go after: that hard, red, angry penis because men do get erections in battle. Go nick that sausage with your spears, boys!
> I hope I have not left you in pain
Says the man who tore a sixteen-year-old's vagina.
> He feels powerful, pulling such reactions from the strongest man in Piltover, from the Prime Alpha
Never have I wanted to overthrow a kingdom so bad. You think the Combine can do it on lunch break? I'll have to find myself a Xen crystal then. Maybe then we'll get true equality when these Alpha Males get SPAYED and NEUTERED like they should.
I was unaware that there was a 'fixed' Secret Santa event - fixed as in not neutered, but in fixed dynamics - and this was one of them. If you like your atticwives beaten down and made a sex slave because that is the rule in your 'fixed' dynamic, this is for you. If you can handle all the 'drooling cunts'...maybe not. The token lines for this fic are:
- His bare pussy, puffy and drooling in want, in hunger, came into view.
- Please fuck me with your massive cock til my greedy pussy squirts all over your desk.
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> Perhaps only broken by Sky Young's own affectionate well-wishes she passed along to Jayce
Poor girl. She doesn't realize blacks aren't allowed in Secret Santas.
>He wondered if Viktor asked for him
Probably not, but you keep telling yourself that as you think raping someone is showing them affection. I will never understand why these people always make this character a BPD rapist.
> all that made him his perfectly imperfect partner
Haha, it's a reference to the Valentine's Day cards!
Now, I am getting real tired of this formatting, so I'm just going to summarize what happens until the smut comes in. Jayce gets more and more deranged and prohibits Viktor from returning to the lab. He wears his oversized t-shirts and sleeps in his guest bedroom - the author makes a note on how all the clothes dwarf him, because he's uwu so smol - and you get the impression that Jayce is undergoing delusions of grandeur. He thinks Viktor is ungrateful for his existence and life, choosing a 'distorted perfection' that 'never existed' in the echoes of 'poisonous whispers' even though he was, you know, DYING. Jayce sincerely believes he should have just laid down and took it, because he was 'perfect as he was', uwu.
Viktor spends most of his time sleeping, but when he does wake, he 'eats them out of the house' due to the new metabolic demands of his body. Jayce says he is thankful for the oversized clothes so he doesn't have to look at his new limbs, and he just can't understand Viktor's motives in changing his body completely. To him, he's fine the way he is and they were working on a cure TOGETHER so why did he have to do it, dammit! None of the complaints come off as genuine, but the ramblings of a possessed and obsessed man angry that someone he allegedly cares about was taking their autonomy into their own hands. This anger continues as Viktor keeps his secrets to himself and continues to work in the lab because the man (well, self-identified one) wants to live and he wants him to accept his imperfections, dammit! He wonders 'what happened between them' as if his overarching demands did not lead to Viktor going distant and refusing to talk to him. Jayce views the outburst at the bridge as no big deal and was 'surprised' he had to choke out an apology at his classism; to many Jayvik fans, Jayce is incapable of doing no wrong or has all the blame placed on him. In this specific case, he just refuses to admit he is EVER in the wrong and blames his overbearing attitude and lack of respect of boundaries on being overworked and overstressed. He also states that Viktor does not 'being forced' to take care of his own health, and asks the big question: 'Who else is there to do it?'
The next big scene is Viktor getting fucked by the Hexcore, a scene that has plenty of fanart (well, unrelated to this fic, but it exists).
> A gentle defilement
> Describes the ways that it is not, in fact, gentle and violent
BTW, his anger at the Hexcore engaging in tentacle porn is not at the fact his friend is being tentacle raped (I don't know if it would count as such, as he literally asked for it), but the fact that he isn't the one doing the raping. Control is being taken away from HIS penis and he will not stand for that, dammit!
> The way his cunt stretched, fluttered against the thing desecrating him
But is it fluttering shyly and drooling like a dog?
> Who never once allowed himself to be vulnerable to Jayce
"He's allowing the Hexcore to fuck him but not ME?!"
Viktor wakes up after his impromptu tentacle session and waits for Jayce to condemn him. For once, he says nothing, but the reader is aware that he will do something to 'rectify' this situation. We go back to dealing with Viktor's new appetite and how it is voracious, and we also get a flashback on how Viktor used to eat slowly because food in the Undercity is scarce and he liked to savour food when living Topside. Jayce once again slows his classism. He insists they are two cogs that fit perfectly together, but that doesn't mesh with how he interrupted Viktor's ritual. Jayce wonders what could be fighting to survive in Viktor's body given his immense caloric intake, and rather than assume that it's the Hexcore requiring said calories to adapt machine to flesh, he pretends he doesn't know.
On top of the voracious appetite for food, Viktor becomes a bit of a sex fiend, masturbating in Jayce's guest room. The first thought that comes to Jayce's mind? Conquer him just like his Conquistadore ancestors, ay.
>It was interesting to note he could still overpower him like this
I told you: he was angrier at the fact the Hexcore fucked his 'compatible gear' first and not him. A switch is turned on and our MS13 Daddy dom comes out.
> It was a wonder how hunger so ravenous couldn't push out silly notions like propriety, like shame
What is more shameful: the fact your partner wants to get fucked, or the fact you believe you are entitled to that pussy because you knew him for years and are angry it got colonized first? I think I know who the shameful one is.
> The control to halt himself and draft and read the the fine print before burying himself in his partner's warm, soft, tight cunt
"I couldn't resist raping you, that white pussy was just too tight."
> An unsatisfactory means to take care of the matter himself
She means he doesn't have a dick to do it, and only a dick owner can do it. That sounds...very bioessentialist, WorkingGengar.
> Or naked, two fingers deep into the velvety heat of his pussy
I'm glad the Hexcore gave him a designer brand, otherwise I'd think it'd have fallen apart already.
> Curling his fingers and watching with cruel fascination
This character isn't cruel, but they love the idea of a mean Daddy Dom with dark skin who can dominate their uwu white boi with the tightest pussy in the world. If you dare write this character taking it up the ass, they will threaten suicide - literally.
> To make you squirt all over my bed?
Like a Capri Sun.
> Make a filthy show of making sure Viktor's juices didn't go to waste
It's just like drinking coconut water.
> Nudged the tip of his cock against Viktor's engorged clit
Oh? We're not calling it a cock now? OK.
> Glad he kept a nice, tight grip over his wrists
They're just uwu so smol. I bet they could slip into a Coke bottle.
> A glutton that would happily take the burning, aching, excruciating stretch of Jayce's bare cock
Hey if his pussy is as voracious as his stomach...can you even say he can feel it at all? I bet you can shove a Patriot missile up there and he'd still say there's room (Zelenskyy is wondering where all the missiles went).
> Pinned and brutalized
I wonder if there's a theme here.
> The fog of wet, hot tight, that ran through his thoughts
Oh, so your basic penisnigger mentality. OK, cholo.
> Deep grinds to Viktor's well-loved (abused) G-spot
I'm surprised that it hasn't been ripped out yet given how these authors love writing our MS13 inches here. Talk about a bunker buster.
> Balls emptying straight into Viktor's twitching, sensitive pussy
Does that count as caloric intake? Does his pussy eat cum? I must know.
Jayce is having a bad day: the city is going to and there's talk of Revolution. We can't have that, or at the very least, we can't deal with it, so our MS13 inches goes back home to have his atticwife take care of him. Anything to remind himself that he won't be paraded through the crowds with their own spikes up his ass (and we can't have that, can we? Our Dom has to stay on top; it's the benefit of privilege). We then get another smut scene.
> Clear roles. Clear expecations
Sounds awfully heteronormative if you ask me.
> His cunt was already wet, clit hard and the puffy lips of his well-loved folds flushed in anticipation
If your folds aren't well-loved and aren't flushing in anticipation, are you even loved?
> The expanse of his hand almost entirely swallowing the lithe limb
He's just uwu so smol. So itsy bitsy.
> There wasn't an inch that hadn't been licked, hadn't been fucked and rutted against on his cock and marked with his cum
Consider it sloppy seconds because the Hexcore got to it first, lmao.
> Jayce approached sex with the same obsessive vigor and unrelenting fervor as their sciences
Jayviks need to learn that obsessive =/= possessive, and that the way they write him keeps coming off as a violent man who gets angry that he is cucked by a tentacle creature. We are talking a manchild with muscles, but that's OK because he's hot and we operate by fixed dynamics so anything a top does is instantly forgivable.
> He'd wash Viktor's feet if he'd let him
Does that mean you didn't get a footjob? When you say an inch hasn't been fucked, that means the feet. That also means fucking what remains of those tits. 'All' means all, bud.
> Give a name to the obsessive need to know his partner, learn every inch, break him open and hoard what spilled out
Oh, that's totally healthy and indicative of someone who respects boundaries. This is the same person who doesn't know where his partner goes half the time and acknowledges he can be gone for days. If he was as obsessive as people write him, he'd have journal entries on what he was doing all the way down to what time of the day he shits.
> Jayce found that this was the swiftest way to drag him back out from under the tides
AKA 'If I fuck you hard enough I can fuck thewoman man right back into you.
> I like you, all of you
He likes you so much he wants to make you an atticwife. Just Latino things.
Ah, so we DO have a footjob. That's a first. Nothing like those dainty female feet caressing that man meat, eh?
> Control was something he had always sought to maintain
There's a difference between wanting to harness something to save lives vs being someone who wants to break and conquer his partner because he doesn't value or respect his autonomy. It is once again proof that these authors don't respect the autonomy of trans men despite glazing them every chance they get.
> Jayce wouldn't have thought Viktor would prefer to defer to him
He doesn't. He's the one getting into trouble and breaking rules; Jayce, if anything, relies on HIM. These people don't even like the characters they masturbate to.
> Those sunburst eyes
Take a drink based on how many times this has been said. I counted three.
> Where he thrusted his cock between the pads of his toes
Oof. Call the ER, because those toes are getting broke by the size of that dick.
> His neglected cunt drooled over the bedsheets
What did I say about retiring this line? The vagina is not a St. Bernard. Stop it.
> He leaned over his small frame
He's just uwu so smol.
> God, look at you
They don't believe in God. They're a polytheistic society.
> The foreign limbs - an attempted transmutation towards a perfection that didn't exist
You wrote that already. This is also an attempt to wave away the fact that Viktor was wrong for trying to avoid his own death and he should have accepted it 'because he was already perfect'.
> Perfection had already been right in front of Jayce this entire time
> He just couldn't believe Viktor didn't see it
I'm going to hold your hand (after I break it with hammers) when I say this: A TERMINAL ILLNESS IS NOT AN IMPERFECTION. IT. IS. A. DISEASE. Telling something they need to accept Turbo Cancer AIDS because they're 'perfect' is retarded and you WILL get punched in the face. I'll one-up it and give you a 'Why so serious?' cut.
> Craning his head and twisting around
Is he an owl? Why does he need to crane his neck when he's on his back giving him a footjob?
> Insistent mouth laved at his armpit
Oh, nice. Nothing like steel alloy in the morning.
> Tracing the helix at where his mortification brushed shades of red all over
This does not make a lick of sense. Are we talking about him blushing? What 'mortification'? Do you know what that word even means?
> But none of it felt unnatural
Of course not. Penis-in-vagina sex is the default; it's as natural as it's ever gonna get.
> Needed to be stern
According to whom? This is the same guy who vomited at corpses. Do you expect him to be the obsessive Daddy dom? He'd cry at the sight of a maggot.
> He vaguely wondered what bruises would look like on the lavender and violet flesh and if they would bloom just as prettily
They'd blend in because they're the same shade, retard.
> Making a mess of his dainty feet and his pretty, fluttering cunt
Ah, these pretty, shyly fluttering, drooling cunts. Might be time to call Ben Shapiro's wife to get a look at it.
After their footjob session, Viktor wonders which thoughts are really his, and confesses that some of them feel 'older', meaning the Arcane is speaking through him. Jayce is worried (or he says he is) until Viktor says that all of his waking thoughts are about him and that he feels human when that happens. Jayce is overjoyed, predictably, because that means he can be Alpha Prime Daddy Dom and have his atticwife surrender to him at last. He surrenders himself and takes great pleasure that a male - who has enjoyed privilege and prestige - can take care of him, the shy, coy trans man that the world wants to break, with nothing but sex.
'New office'? Huh, I was under the impression they were hunting Jinx as a terrorist and that the Undercity was in an uprising. What happened to that? Were we too focused on Viktor's drooling pussy to forget about logical inconsistencies? I really am the worst person to be reviewing these because I hone in on details like that. Remember, they were on a cusp of revolution - so what has Jayce been doing as Councilor since then? Oh, right - leaving behind his duties to fuck his lab partner because he craves control of everything BUT his own subjects.
> Then there was the dream. Their lab. Their Hextech.
Yeah, about that: he wasn't supposed to make weapons, yet he's still using the Mercury Hammer. Viktor asked Jayce to destroy it, but he stopped once he found it fucking and cucking his partner before he did (he doesn't like competition). Then he wants to bury it deeper than the Hexheart - which, btw, is poisoning Ekko's tree and all of the Undercity - to infect things further, forgetting that it alters all form of biological matter.
> Perhaps an early retirement, or a short leave
Yeah what happened to that revolution and that loose terrorist, babe? You're lazier than Kash Patel. Next thing you'll be telling me is that you rented private jets for your partner's singing gig.
> Puffy and drooling in want, in hunger
Again with the drooling pussies bit. What, is female genitalia Pac-Man now, and goes 'wadda wadda wadda' every time it sees a penis?
> Fondling his twitching folds with faux disinterest
If your labia isn't twitching and dancing like Betty Boop, you ain't having good sex, ho.
> So very different from the polite, proper speech he had adopted
What the fuck is this supposed to mean? Are you assuming that because he's lower-class he has to talk with shit in his mouth? Wow. The people screaming about ableism and identity are happy being classist, go figure.
> Please fuck me with your massive cock til my greedy pussy squirts all over your desk
Put that on a t-shirt. It's the exact shit Booktok girlies make fun of.
> A gorgeous display. If Viktor would allow it, he'd have the sight captured on photo
> As if said positions weren't in his journals
Uh, did he consent to that or did you just draw it? Never beating the allegations that you see this guy as a sex pest.
> His pink drooling cunt
THIS IS THE FOURTH TIME, FUCK
> His birdbone ankles
Nothing like bones so thin you can snap like a wishbone. Make a wish and snap some pooner bones today!
> His juices staining his pants
The other Councilors should see it so they can determine he has done fuck all in the wake of a terror attack and has decided to engage in hedonism instead. They should vote to remove him and strip him of his duties and privileges because it seems for all this haiku-style prose (which has driven me right up the fucking wall) we forgot that they're in a CIVIL WAR and people are RIOTING IN THE STREETS. You talking about drooling pussies is going to lead them shoving some pikes up your ass and it'll be more than your prostate that gets tickled. Given how this fandom moves, that would be a marked improvement. 'Rich Latino gets RAILED, PLUGGED and STUFFED, No Holes Left Behind' sounds like a nice title, eh?
Here's another Christmas present (by the time I am posting this, it is Boxing Day, so these are all belated Christmas presents) courtesy of stupidsarah: painal. She loves her heterosexual sex (even when she will never admit it) and the feminine wiles associated with a character people are beginning to notice is only made trans for easy pussy. Also has a line stolen from Bad Santa: 'I'm going to shove my dick so far up your ass you won't sit for a week' (though, in Bad Santa, it's 'shit for a week'). Lines for this fic are:
- (In French) I am going to take you to my room and fuck you until you bleed.
- You eat mommy's pussy so good, don't you?
-His whole world slimming down to nothing more than the way (the John) drills into his ass
> Giving himself that just-fucked messiness
Oh, so your regular look, then? I've seen your selfies, albeit 'Freshly fucked Hapa' is your look.
> He would probably flash his ass to whoever was standing behind him
Your ass is flatter than a pancake served at a 24/7 diner and the cook was just told there'd be no overpay. When I say there is NOTHING there to entice someone, I mean it.
> Dainty black heels onto his feet
Mm yes those dainty feminine feet unlike those size 45 man feet of that CEO.
> He sprays himself with his favourite cologne
Nice, but that cologne isn't going to work with your dainty, feminine skin because male skin is thicker and they stink more. While you take painal from that 45-year-old CEO, remember that cologne 'needs to be discovered, not introduced.' He'll be choking on it before he chokes you with his dick.
> Grabs his small pocket knife
> Just a precaution
That is not going to do anything for your safety when Paris has migrant gangs with machetes and fucking AK-47s. They will rape you with the bottle of hard liquor they drank that day. That will do nothing to ward off a horny Chechen, I assure you.
Can you tell it's very French? Tres economique? Hon hon I bet you did. It's so French the waiter doesn't even open that bottle of wine for them, he just leaves it there.
> His date tucks a strand of hair behind his ear
> Demurely tucking his hands into his lap
When I read about trans men being real men, I think of 'demure' things like making themselves as small as possible vs commanding more attention and making sure they take up more space. This author has never once attempted to actually lean into the 'identify as a man' thing; she just writes this character as a full-blown woman and expects people not to notice or call her out. Shocker: no one does because they love her writing and you don't go against a creative like that.
> Aware of just how appetizing he looks in his little black ensemble
Walmart chicken thighs are not appetizing, and it's clear you need more hormones to plump yourself up. Fuck the FDA; give this man - er, feminine escort some chub!
> He would skip the food and make Viktor his meal, right here on the marble tabletop for everyone to witness
The French would act disgusted, not at the sexual display mind you, but the fact you're fucking someone with less meat on them than a rotisserie chicken.
> What brings you to the City of Love?
"Piss, crime, and a bunch of Africans asking me for money. Oh and I got robbed by some Gypsies. It was totally fun."
> Software development
The fuck are you heading to PARIS for software development? With all the regulations the EU has? You'd be going to Hong Kong or Singapore.
> Jayce has a finer palate, as is obvious
"White people do not season their palates, the peons."
> He requested that he be matched with someone confident, feminine, and easygoing
Oh so we KNOW what feminine means when we want it to, eh? 'Feminine' means: demure, sweet, wearing 'sexy' black dresses that ride up a pancake ass and - most importantly - being female. He never asks for a MTF troon, even when they could count as 'feminine'. He is literally asking for a woman and this shithead author wants to treat this character as a man. What a joke.
We're lucky these narratives never include the fact that so many FTMs suffer from BV and that that display of the underwear would smell worse than a nickel smelter. That single pair of panties would manage to drive out THE FRENCH with how bad it would smell.
> I do not dom. I do not top
"I perform my feminine duties and take it lying down, because that is my biological role. I only allow the male to top because that's what males do and I will never question the masculinity of a real male."
> Slender wrist
He's just uwu so smol.
> He can do whatever he may damn well please with him
Well he paid a huge lump sum of cash AND took him out to dinner, so shoving a dick up the ass is the least of his worries.
> Are you okay with name-calling? Playing certain...roles?
"You okay with me treating you like the woman you are and calling you as such, and me getting away with it because I'm a conventionally attractive male and this is actually what all the AFABs writing this desire?"
> You're going to let me shove my cock so far up your ass that you can't sit for a week
I told you that was a Bad Santa reference.
> Usually, Viktor would find a man's pride about his dick size to be egregious and annoying, but with Jayce, it makes him squeeze his thighs together
Let me guess. Our manly man alpha male CEO is over 9 inches long, 4 inches thick, and can put the French police force to shame. Keep him away from those African migrants or else they'll want to cut it off for some juju.
> Wraps both hands around the shaft
Do his hands meet in the middle or is it like palming a Pillsbury oven roll tin?
> Jayce is musky, salty, and hot in his mouth
Better than a crème brulee, eh?
> Continuing to stroke the remainder of Jayce's cock that he cannot reach with his hands
Are his hands that small, or is that dick that big?
> Smiles around the cock in his mouth
He physically cannot if it's so big it's stretching it to its limits and making him gag. But, since he's a professional, that throatfucking comes with no vomiting, and that mascara stays put.
> Paints the pink muscle in Viktor's mouth white
I bet you won't see that in the Louvre.
> The sound bubbling in his come-coated throat at the debauched mess
So a Listerine gargle.
> Jayce effortlessly picks Viktor up by his ass and throws a few feet backwards onto the large mattress
LMAO. He literally picks him up and throws him like a football and he wants that Super Bowl. Just chucking that shit like a New Year's favor.
> Just barely witnessing the carnal shadow
We all love feral top daddy doms with tons of money and nice suits and Rolexes who take you to nice dinners in Paris. It's not hetslop, I swear! It's gender-breaking, heavy-handed social commentary on trans sex workers! Who are still called feminine and the CEO never asks for gock but AFAB pussy instead!
> Easy there, mommy
Remember, misgendering is NOT genocide when WE do it, sweaty~
> But is quite literally telling his cunt how cut it is, how pink it is, how wet it is
Notice how when he called the escort service he wanted white cunt, not synthetic cunt. He didn't ask for a gock or a stinkditch. He never asked for a transwoman even though they are supposed to be women. He wanted someone 'feminine' and the escort service IMMEDIATELY knew what he was referring to. TRA in the streets, TERF in the fanfic sheets.
> Seemingly enjoying the way that it flutters beneath his gentle touch
Take a drink every time this author uses the word 'flutter'.
> Till I'm living in the streets with nothing but the taste of you on my tongue
You are getting robbed and that asshole gaped by a bunch of Africans and I cannot be arsed to care because these daddy doms need some equality. Get Lumumbo and Obungo on the job and he'll drop that act real quick.
> Jayce eats pussy like he's starved of it. Eats it like it's his last meat, eats it like he was born to do
I want to know what his opinion is of a stinkditch. Does he do down on one of those with as much fervour? What kind of salty flavour does an inverted penis have? You ain't gay unless you tongue a stinkditch.
> like a dog that gets its first taste of human flesh
We put down dogs that eat humans, btw. Never beating the dog allegories.
> At each lick over his cock
You are using feminine terms for everything else, including wanting the person to be 'feminine'. Why are we using MALE terms for genitalia that is not male? You're comparing it with that CEO cockmeat and you expect it to be masculine? Miss me with that bullshit.
> Sliding down to the fluttering rim of his asshole
This author loves fluttering orifices: shy, fluttering vaginal openings and now fluttering anuses.
What did I say about using male genitalia for someone you use female terms for? It is just inconsistent and looks stupid.
> Mixture of pain and pleasure wrenching a scream from his throat
I assume that he produces a lot of vaginal fluid because he is going in there all raw and no rubber. Hope you got your seropositive test ready, bud.
> Mommy likes it rough, huh
> Continues to call the clit a cock as if people won't notice
> His neck cranes back so far that his forehead digs into the wooden headboard
Wouldn't it be funny if he snapped his neck? Those bird bones can't even handle a good stretching, imagine that.
> Flood Jayce's face with each thrust, liquid spurting into his mouth and splashing against his grey-peppered beard
Ah, there's the GTA firetruck squirt. Never complete without it.
> His tongue licks along his cunt, his thighs, his ass
Someone tell stupidsarah what kind of STDs you can get from ATM and no amount of French food is going to erase the fact that you're getting gonorrhea on your lips.
> His wide chest is covered with a gracious coat of hair
Just so you know: masculine means you are coated with body hair like a bear, while being feminine means you are hairless, smooth, and bird-boned. Transwomen stay the fuck out: this man likes authentic pussies ONLY.
> His cock hangs between his thick thighs
You can guess how large it is based on how much wrapping paper is needed and whether it would get stuck in the tube.
> His cunt flutters between his spread legs
This is the fifth time it has 'fluttered'. This author loves writing it flutter like it's a letter in the wind. It flutters shyly, it flutters femininely, it flutters bravely, etc. Expect it to pen, 'Ain't I A Flutterer?' anytime soon.
> Knowing very well that he isn't the client to be scared of
This escort company is supposed to protect its clients, yet it knows full well that some of them - MEN, notably - will murder their girls (because if this was a transwoman, Jayce would be the one threatened). That's not an adequate business model to have. While I can understand it because they're in France and France has a migrant problem, if Johns are murdering your fancy prostitutes, it might be time to hire private security or go online.
> For once, he feels safe around a stranger
Yeah that's definitely the feeling in Paris these days, eh?
> Once again lying with his back to the bed
But was he football-throwed against it? No, sorry, I'm not getting over the fact that this nigga THREW HIM on the bed like he's trying to get a touchdown.
> Doing so good for mommy
"Mommy just got chucked across the field so the team could score a touchdown and the referees blew a foul, now everyone in the crowd is fighting"
> A palm slamming down onto the center of his sternum
Yeah! Break those birdbone ribs! I want to see it snap like the turkey in National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation!
> Crimson and iron coats his tastebuds
You are just tasting the iron. You're lucky he didn't loosen a few teeth.
> The look on his face is feral
Of course. The Latino is an animalistic sex beast; what else is new?
> Replaced by a scream as Jayce forces his cock deep into his asshole
> His girth stretches him far more than his fingers had earlier
There's also no lube, so he's going in dry, ensuring that there will be tearing.
> The head of his cock presses against a spot inside of him so deep that Viktor sees flashes of colour
Just for the record, sarah: women don't have prostates up their ass. Men do. The only thing making him see 'flashes of colour' is the anesthesia he's getting as they sew up that Soviet missile silo so he can keep his shit in.
> All he can do is lie there and take it
That's literally every trans Viktor fic. Want to know how many of them involves him topping, as so many trans men want to see? 403. The rest are him lying down and taking it like a woman.
> His cock strokes the muscles inside of his ass so perfectly
If by 'stroke', you mean 'batter it so hard it looks like tenderized meat' you'd be correct. With no lube, this is just a trip to the ER. It's not hard to write him taking out a bottle of it, even an expensive one. It's just a few sentences.
> His whole world slimming down to nothing more than the way Jayce drills into his ass
This is a real line.
> You're such a pretty hole, aren't you?
He's going to be a manhole at this point.
> Is mommy coming on my cock again?
Mommy's gonna need a new ass after this because he's gonna need a diaper.
> Feels his ass gape
I bet you you could shove an air fryer up there.
> Slowly coming back inch by gradual inch
Your ass isn't.
They shower together and Viktor knows he is going to be sore for a week because he can't walk with an ass gaped open like that. Jayce has a First Aid kit (but no lube) to make sure the love tap he gave him doesn't lead to stitches. The shower scene is the first time it's gentle and domestic (something Viktor notes, how very tradwifey). They dry off and head to the bed for aftercare talk, and Viktor remarks it's the first time he's ever felt that good (his bowels, notably, disagree). After our CEO cockmeat says he's going to fuck our feminine prostitute so hard until he bleeds, with a gaping ass, he asks if he will ever see him again.
All I can say to that is: find a good cosmetic surgeon, because your ass is what's going to lead to an early retirement.
- I refuse to send my son like a lamb to the slaughter to be torn on some bastard alpha's knot, even if it were to guarantee us peace for a goddamned eternity.
- It’s his right. It’s in his bones, written into his very being. To mark, claim, and breed.
- He is, deep down, an animal like everybody else. He only wears the human’s face and the crown to be distinguished from one, but in the bedroom there are no human rules to abide by. There are no crowns. There’s only instinct, and there’s only lust left where a King once stood.
(For context, this is presumably a white woman writing that about a brown man. They are NEVER beating the allegations. Just call him a dirty wetback at this point; it'll be far less racist.)
- rewards him with a deep kiss on his drooling cunt
In short:
- Alpha male LARPing as Khal Drogo takes his own Daenerys Targaryen and marries YUR MAH KWEEN at the age of 16
- A war is fought that is never explained or used as a backdrop for the story, you are just supposed to accept one happened and Alpha Male Prime here came out on top and this marriage was the bargain because the losing city has to pay taxes or some shit.
- Turns out said bride is a mage, and those are rare, and he's taking a mage to wife in a city founded to escape mages (lmao)
- Alpha Male Prime has the Alpha Male dick and tears his 16-year-old bride's vagina
- Alpha Male Prime wants those pups - er, babies - real bad, and says it is his right to breed said 16-year-old
- Alpha Male Prime is directly described as an 'animal wearing a human face' to the wit and smirk of the white author
It's just this:
With this as the author:
> The little Zaunite prince holds his wobbly chin high
He's 16, but you'd never guess because these teen-fuckers love writing them looking younger.
> Only the youngest one has presented with the stipulated secondary gender and she is nine summers old
By the Gods! She's yet a maiden! If she bleeds, she breeds, right lads? Tally ho!
> It isn't common at that age, but not impossible
Now, what is our ME ALPHA, ME IN COMMAND, ME WARLORD has to say about that?
> All of the present company knew of the Defender's temper, how he was quick to anger
ME ALPHA. ME HAVE TERRIBLE ANGER. ME SWING BIG HAMMER. ME HUNT BOAR IN FOREST. ME GET GUTTED BY BOAR IN ME. ME WATCH WIFE PLOT AGAINST ME AND FUCK HER BROTHER. NED, AH NED
> The room stank with all manners of scents, the Council's moral hanging by a thread
Whenever I read about these people stinking to high heaven, I imagine a war between Axe bodyspray, Yankee candles, Febreeze air fresheners, pepper spray, and Indian BO. Just imagine a world of colourful, floral or honey-like Indian BO and that is Omegaverse for you.
> Was first and foremost a warrior, always preferring a hands-on solution if there only was one
Bitches are giving him Mordekaiser's arc when this is a guy who vomited at the sight of dead bodies.
> I refuse to send my son like a lamb to the slaughter to be torn on some bastard alpha's knot
> Does just that but the alpha is hot and speaks like Robert Baratheon instead of Reek
> Our boy of age six and ten has made his decision
Weird when it involves teenage girls, acceptable when the sex pest is hot and has big muscles. If you look like Epstein, with a mishappen penis and tit fetish, you're weird as fuck. If you have an eight-pack and swing a big hammer, you're good.
> Some say you plan to humiliate me, even
Yeah they're just giving you their disabled child so you can fuck and impregnate in the name of securing an heir even when it's of great cost to them. If it bleeds, it breeds, tally ho!
> His instinct is to reach for a weapon
Next thing you'll know is he'll be fighting Rhaegar Targaryen in the Trident for the right of ANOTHER 16-year-old to marry. Oh, wait.
> He is frail
He's frail and small uwu
> His lips felt dry, akin to days in a scorching sun
So they're cracked and bleeding?
> And as an alpha...I will treat your boy right, I can promise you this
ME ALPHA. ME CLAIM OMEGA AS PROPERTY. ME WARLORD. ME ENTITLED TO THIS.
> Their tongue will be cut off by my own hand
I love it when authors are trying to speak in a 'Medieval' voice and it just sounds like a bad D&D RP. This man is not Robert Baratheon, even though the entire arc between these characters is exactly the same.
> In all the talks about the omega's qualities and flaws, no one mentioned how devastatingly beautiful the boy was
He might be crippled, but that underage pussy works wonders. He's even wearing the tradwife dress!
> Fluid white satin that clung to Viktor's lithe frame
He's just uwu so smol. A perfect white wife.
> Burning golden eyes underlined with scarlet-red paint
Scarlet works as its own word, because we know it's red.
> The same ink used to draw a straight line down the center of the boy's lower lip, down his throat and all the way to his collarbones
Oy vey, there's cultural appropriation there somehow. He's a Mage, in a city founded to escape mages...make it make sense.
> Cashmere. Sweet milk. Volcanic ash
Volcanic ash doesn't really have a smell. Sulfur dioxide does, and it smells like setting off a firework.
> A fragrance so enticing he felt like a pup fighting his post-rut instincts
A literal firecracker set this Latino off, imagine that.
> Gods be good, he has not felt like that for a least a decade and half
I KNEW this was a rip-off of GOT. He literally is Robert Baratheon marrying Lyanna Stark. This guy is, what? Nearing his 40s, and he's marrying a 16-year-old? And it only happens to omegas? Imagine that.
> He's gorgeous. Small. So heartbreakingly young
So why did you agree to the wedding? You admit the kid is too young and doesn't want to do it, yet do it because MUH TRADITION and that 'it's just biology' that you fuck a teenager and get your precious pup.
> Jayce would rip their damned arms off with his teeth
Never beating the allegations that they see this man as an animal.
> Jayce's palms fully cover Viktor's slender fingers
He's got those yeti punchers!
> A bit lower than Jayce would expect from his young age. Beautiful beyond words
AKA 'you are so mature for your age.' Doesn't sound so pretty when put like that, does it?
> He's the gods' forgiveness offering for the years Jayce lost at the war
What war? A war between the cities? Doesn't matter who won or lost, omegas are still second-class citizens. Also, you can use 'forgiveness' or 'offering'. Both of them make your writing look clunky.
> He's one of the gods himself
Gods really do have a thing for teenagers, don't they?
> The gesture brings out even more sweetness in the boy's scent
Like cream and milk and sugar cookies and apples and -
> He has his regrets, and he is paying for their freedom with his own future and a choice made for him and yet...his situation is still so, so much better than Viktor's
...what freedom? Freedom for whom? Because no one's situation is any better, especially if you are an omega. You don't get to experience any freedom. Of COURSE your situation is better - YOU aren't sold as a sex slave! How fucking tone deaf do you have to be?
> Though, to Jayce's surprise, he also indulges in Zaunite dishes
White people season their food this time around.
> It makes him feel younger
You're almost 40. Your balls are starting to shrivel up, but you'll be erect for hours, pump out cartons of semen and will have a knot that's bigger than a paper weight. Oh, and I mustn't forget: his hands will be so big and Viktor's waist so small his thumbs will meet in the middle.
> His doe eyes
Oh, here we go. You know you are dealing with a pedo when they use that line.
> What a tragic thing it is, that the source of Viktor's distress and soured mood is no one else but him. What he has to do
You didn't have to marry him, but you did because muh biology. The only time these people care about biology is when it comes to their shitty omegaverse.
> The suffocating smell of a distressed omega almost makes Jayce retch
Must be that spoiled sweetmilk. Does it make his vagina juice sour, too?
> The sudden stink of fear and misery is so intense that Jayce's hear is almost swimming with nausea
We know, you wrote that already.
> Don't you dare treat me like a child when we're in the bedroom, my King
The classic 'we treat teenagers like adults and we infantilize adults' argument. The weird thing is, we don't even KNOW what kind of setting this is. Is it Medieval or not? What war was fought? Who instigated it and why? Who suffered the most losses? Who is capable of serving in the army, alphas only or can they bring their betas? What weapons are used? I don't think this author focused much on the worldbuilding; she just piggybacked off of GOT and thought no one would notice.
> During war, he approached terrified omegas and was forced in their close proximity
Israel-Palestine conflict but add
Omegaverse> Like he was on the verge of frenzy himself, ready to tear to pieces whatever was making the omega in front of him sob and smell so heartbreakingly terrifed
YOU, BITCH, HE'S AFRAID OF YOU. HE DOESN'T WANT TO BE RAPED ON THE MARITAL BED. DOES IT NEED TO BE ANY MORE OBVIOUS?!
> He never thought that he would end up wondering if it was really worth the kid's tears
Really, bitch? You're the ALPHA MALE with BIG DICK ENERGY over here. You won a war no one knows who started and why, and now you're taking the spoilers. Don't act as if you don't fucking know why the kid is crying. Boy do I hate terrible characterization.
> After years of only giving orders and watching them fulfilled immediately
Is that due to your alpha male privilege or by merit? Did you have to fight other alphas for your position? What is the composition of the army? I don't think Anon here didn't think much about this.
> His smell is sweet again. Addictively so, making Jayce's gums ache
I hope you get a root canal.
> It takes all of Jayce's willpower not to pull the angelic omega into his lap to stop the smell of rejection from souring the air again
Remember: these people give off smells whenever they are stressed, happy, angry, upset, etc. It's one stinky world that no amount of perfume can fix. Indian BO with deer and wolf piss surrounding you, forever and ever.
> They will check the sheets
Bitch can't decide what setting she wants so she's going with the Medieval idea that there has to be blood on the sheets in order to show virginity has been claimed. I guess omegas don't gush like broken water mains in this AU.
> You're afraid of me
Yeah, you're a Latino Conan the Barbarian who won a war we still don't know the cause of.
> I do not fear you. it is just...a natural bodily reaction, as you're an alpha
You were scared and he could smell it. It's all about that biology, baby - and the fact you smell like some Elizabeth Taylor perfume.
> I will not take you crying and smelling of misery like you did before
He still smells of misery and it was enough to make you vomit. Did you try opening a window?
> Filled with so many different pheromones
God, I might retch with how these people smell.
> Help him avoid showing how dizzying it feels to have a young, hormonal omega next to him, practically begging to be fucked
"Your Honour, the teenager asked for it. She was so mature for her age and wise beyond her years. Her beauty made it so I couldn't help but fuck her. Can you blame me?" That's some Quentin Tarantino ahh shit.
> Even if his inner alpha takes a sick, selfish pleasure in watching the young thing's clumsy attempts at convincing him to do something
It seems to be working well because you couldn't help but think of fucking him.
> I wish to hold back for your sake because no matter what you say you are a pup, a lovely, innocent thing that I fear to break with my old, rough hands
That's some Stannis Baratheon shit right there. I wasn't joking when these lines of dialogue sound like they were ripped off a GOT episode.
> Would it be so bad to be broken by you?
Omega pussies really must be built different if you want to take a jackhammering from a Coke can. These people are really weird fantasizing about teenagers taking enormous penises; one would think they spent too long on the 'barely legal' section of XVideos.
> There's a part of me that has always been yours, Jayce
So why were you so deathly afraid, then, if your Arcane magic knew that you were supposed to be together? Why didn't your omega scent come off as excited and joyous? It smells like bullshit to me.
> He sounds wise beyond his years
Another excuse pedophiles make when they're fucking teens. I'm sure the FBI has heard it a few times from you-know-who.
> You're big and my mind sees it as a threat
You don't say. A large, muscular alpha male who won a war and can swing around a giant hammer is a threat? A child could tell you that - wait, wrong joke.
> The volcanic ash of his shy arousal
> It's heavy, the pheromones coating Jayce's tongue with each inhale
"You taste so good, dear omega."
"And what do I smell like?"
"Like rotten eggs."
> He is the most adorable thing he has ever seen in his long, lonely life
What was he doing before the war? What started the war? What kind of conditions necessitated it? Why was he picked? Do only alphas serve? C'mon, you gotta answer these questions!
> The thin, alabaster skin
It's never complete without your pale, white, alabastrine swan-necked waifu.
> Am I not your wife? Your queen?
We aren't even trying with the 'trans' thing. We are just making him a woman and giving him a pussy because we know that pooners won't bitch when that tag is applied even when they do. You just want Jayce fucking a woman but won't admit it.
> Some hidden by coarse hair
Literally this meme again:
> His jaw hurts from how hard he has to clench to stop himself from pushing the boy down and having his way with him
That's the third time you've said that.
> Jayce's cock is straining his breeches obscenely
Are you ready to see how big this ALPHA MALE COCK is?
> barely-there breasts
We are never escaping the allegations (read: proof) that Jayviks would rather see Jayce fucking teenagers than ever see him love his canonical black female love interest.
> My Queen cannot be left in doubt
- You are my queen
- Mah queen
- You will always be my queen
> That wriggle like those of a kicking fawn
We aren't beating the implications that baby deer = pedophilia in this fandom, are we?
> The sweet thing turns even more boneless
Well it makes sense since you're going to turn him into a fucking fruit smoothie with all that drilling and pounding like you're a Ninja blender.
> How soon will the boy learn that there's not a thing Jayce wouldn't do for him?
Would he get SPAYED and NEUTERED?
> I expect no more doubts about the perfection of your body
He's 16. This is how creepy men talk about teenagers. If you wanted to set this in GOT, fine, but even us GOT fans are going to have an issue because we KNOW the age gaps are wrong. You, on the other hand...
> His beard leaves the omega's body slightly red
So his beard is like sandpaper or the uwu omega's skin is so thin a papercut is like opening an artery. OK.
> The new position allows him to squeeze the omega's waist until his fingers meet
I FUCKING KNEW IT. It's THIS fucking line. They can never get a new fucking line to show how uwu tiny their self-insert is.
>It's unfair how beautiful he is
And it's a flat-chested 16-year-old. It's OK, though, because he's Alpha Prime with a colossal dick and they make the rules, mmmkay?
> It's his right. It's in his bones, written into his very being. To mark, claim, and breed
Biological essentialism is okay when WE do it, you fucking transphobe, you ignoramus, you little leech. We can write about how MANLY the ALPHA MALES are and how it's their BIOLOGICAL RIGHT to BREED vagina-owning omegas.
> Jayce is an animal like everybody else. He only wears the human's face
I FUCKING LOVE how these fujos just come right out and admit they don't even see him as a person, but an animal and a knuckle-dragging caveman that has no place in human society. He acts like a dog, fucks like a dog, and acts like he's entitled to the world like a dog. This is one person who I sincerely hope would get his ass stretched out in prison, just so he could be topped by other alpha males like the dog that he is.
> Viktor's breasts are so small in his palms, so soft.
He's just uwu so smol and tiny and white and pure and cute and all he can say is UWU ALPHA FUCK ME ALPHA~~~
> Notes of sweet milk in his scent
Did the rotten egg smell go away yet?
> It's dizzying, that it would intensify further should Viktor be with pup, his body preparing to nurture their child
There's that biological essentialism again.
> He tastes like what Jayce could describe as magic
That pussy juice really is magical, because the author later directly says he 'fills him to tearing'.
> The undergarments follow the brasserie's fate as he tears them in two with his teeth and hands
Get it? ME ALPHA. ME TEAR APART SILLY GARMENTS. ME USE TEETH AND TONGUE LIKE ANIMAL. ME TAKE YOU LIKE ANIMAL. ME GROWL LIKE ANIMAL. ME ALPHA MALE PRIME LIKE ANCESTORS.
> The sweet and salty taste of his cunt and the pheromones in the air are making him growl
I am telling you, the police force and military need to deploy omega pheromones so these alphas can furiously fuck and/or rape each other, preventing innocent omegas from being harmed. It's true equality in a canister.
> It's too much Alpha, please
UWU ALPHA PLEASE FUCK ME ALPHA I WANT TO BE FUCKED STUPID NYAAAAAAAH
God, I fucking hate this dialogue.
> If the boy were to take his cock and then his knot
*Your queen. She does, and she also tears.
> He thinks that he fought all those battles and spilled all that blood
For whom? No, really; WHAT did you fight a war for? Who fucking benefited from it?
> As if presenting for Jayce already became instinctual for him
Fucking 16-year-olds is natural bro, it says so
> Rewards him with a deep kiss on his drooling cunt
If I read 'drooling cunt' another time, I will seriously smack a bitch. VAGINAS ARE NOT ST. BERNARDS, STOP THAT SHIT
> His queen was a resilient, lovely creature that he intended to break
He's talking about a 16-year-old BTW. I guess the age of consent laws are different here- if they exist at all.
> The King's knot is deflated now, but his cock is still buried deep in his aching cunt. It's hard and impossibly hot
Alpha Male biology means they can stay erect for hours without visiting an ER, because their biology sounds like it codes for polygyny but is meant for monogamy instead. Also copious amounts of semen, can't forget that.
> The Defender of Tomorrow made Viktor's mind leave his body with the skill of his big, rough hands
Yeah those yaoi hands also made you forget you need surgery on that vagina.
> Kissed until the only word Viktor knew was 'Alpha'.
Keep saying that and the Whisperers will come with Walkers and I will 100% bait them to bite your dick off first. I want to trade Noah's death for Alpha Male Prime here.
> Filling his cunt to the point of tearing
> He took everything Jayce had
I wasn't joking. The bits about the 'blood on the sheets' is also a Medieval misnomer, but it's not like this retard ever does any reading outside of AO3, so we have to deal with the shitty worldbuilding. Just focus on Alpha Male Prime who STILL has an erection after a night of 'passionate' sex that led to vaginal tearing - and the blood on your sheets is NOT from your hymen, retard, because it isn't meant to bleed. It is a stretchy membrane. All that sex-ed and you still suck at it - well, aside from making the uwu omega suck dick.
> He's powerful, strikingly beautiful
He's also nearing 40 and probably looks like a cross between Mel Gibson and Guillermo del Toro.
> Viktor remains an Undercity cripple
You're about to be crippled from something else HEYO
> Held like he was something precious
He tore your vagina.
> He feels naive. His role as the omega is done, with the sheets stained with blood of both his maidenhood and bonding mark
'Maidenhood' in a pseudo-Medieval setting - I still don't know what setting this is even set IN - is a term used exclusively for females. We aren't even trying with the trans tag, are we? He's just a woman (read: teenager) getting fucked by Alpha Male Prime who still has an erection.
> The man's cock is angry red and hard
...still? Alpha males clearly have no refractory period and do not suffer any form of blood loss. This is an evolutionary flaw because that's the first thing a predator would go after: that hard, red, angry penis because men do get erections in battle. Go nick that sausage with your spears, boys!
> I hope I have not left you in pain
Says the man who tore a sixteen-year-old's vagina.
> He feels powerful, pulling such reactions from the strongest man in Piltover, from the Prime Alpha
Never have I wanted to overthrow a kingdom so bad. You think the Combine can do it on lunch break? I'll have to find myself a Xen crystal then. Maybe then we'll get true equality when these Alpha Males get SPAYED and NEUTERED like they should.
I was unaware that there was a 'fixed' Secret Santa event - fixed as in not neutered, but in fixed dynamics - and this was one of them. If you like your atticwives beaten down and made a sex slave because that is the rule in your 'fixed' dynamic, this is for you. If you can handle all the 'drooling cunts'...maybe not. The token lines for this fic are:
- His bare pussy, puffy and drooling in want, in hunger, came into view.
- Please fuck me with your massive cock til my greedy pussy squirts all over your desk.
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> Perhaps only broken by Sky Young's own affectionate well-wishes she passed along to Jayce
Poor girl. She doesn't realize blacks aren't allowed in Secret Santas.
>He wondered if Viktor asked for him
Probably not, but you keep telling yourself that as you think raping someone is showing them affection. I will never understand why these people always make this character a BPD rapist.
> all that made him his perfectly imperfect partner
Haha, it's a reference to the Valentine's Day cards!
Now, I am getting real tired of this formatting, so I'm just going to summarize what happens until the smut comes in. Jayce gets more and more deranged and prohibits Viktor from returning to the lab. He wears his oversized t-shirts and sleeps in his guest bedroom - the author makes a note on how all the clothes dwarf him, because he's uwu so smol - and you get the impression that Jayce is undergoing delusions of grandeur. He thinks Viktor is ungrateful for his existence and life, choosing a 'distorted perfection' that 'never existed' in the echoes of 'poisonous whispers' even though he was, you know, DYING. Jayce sincerely believes he should have just laid down and took it, because he was 'perfect as he was', uwu.
Viktor spends most of his time sleeping, but when he does wake, he 'eats them out of the house' due to the new metabolic demands of his body. Jayce says he is thankful for the oversized clothes so he doesn't have to look at his new limbs, and he just can't understand Viktor's motives in changing his body completely. To him, he's fine the way he is and they were working on a cure TOGETHER so why did he have to do it, dammit! None of the complaints come off as genuine, but the ramblings of a possessed and obsessed man angry that someone he allegedly cares about was taking their autonomy into their own hands. This anger continues as Viktor keeps his secrets to himself and continues to work in the lab because the man (well, self-identified one) wants to live and he wants him to accept his imperfections, dammit! He wonders 'what happened between them' as if his overarching demands did not lead to Viktor going distant and refusing to talk to him. Jayce views the outburst at the bridge as no big deal and was 'surprised' he had to choke out an apology at his classism; to many Jayvik fans, Jayce is incapable of doing no wrong or has all the blame placed on him. In this specific case, he just refuses to admit he is EVER in the wrong and blames his overbearing attitude and lack of respect of boundaries on being overworked and overstressed. He also states that Viktor does not 'being forced' to take care of his own health, and asks the big question: 'Who else is there to do it?'
The next big scene is Viktor getting fucked by the Hexcore, a scene that has plenty of fanart (well, unrelated to this fic, but it exists).
> A gentle defilement
> Describes the ways that it is not, in fact, gentle and violent
BTW, his anger at the Hexcore engaging in tentacle porn is not at the fact his friend is being tentacle raped (I don't know if it would count as such, as he literally asked for it), but the fact that he isn't the one doing the raping. Control is being taken away from HIS penis and he will not stand for that, dammit!
> The way his cunt stretched, fluttered against the thing desecrating him
But is it fluttering shyly and drooling like a dog?
> Who never once allowed himself to be vulnerable to Jayce
"He's allowing the Hexcore to fuck him but not ME?!"
Viktor wakes up after his impromptu tentacle session and waits for Jayce to condemn him. For once, he says nothing, but the reader is aware that he will do something to 'rectify' this situation. We go back to dealing with Viktor's new appetite and how it is voracious, and we also get a flashback on how Viktor used to eat slowly because food in the Undercity is scarce and he liked to savour food when living Topside. Jayce once again slows his classism. He insists they are two cogs that fit perfectly together, but that doesn't mesh with how he interrupted Viktor's ritual. Jayce wonders what could be fighting to survive in Viktor's body given his immense caloric intake, and rather than assume that it's the Hexcore requiring said calories to adapt machine to flesh, he pretends he doesn't know.
On top of the voracious appetite for food, Viktor becomes a bit of a sex fiend, masturbating in Jayce's guest room. The first thought that comes to Jayce's mind? Conquer him just like his Conquistadore ancestors, ay.
>It was interesting to note he could still overpower him like this
I told you: he was angrier at the fact the Hexcore fucked his 'compatible gear' first and not him. A switch is turned on and our MS13 Daddy dom comes out.
> It was a wonder how hunger so ravenous couldn't push out silly notions like propriety, like shame
What is more shameful: the fact your partner wants to get fucked, or the fact you believe you are entitled to that pussy because you knew him for years and are angry it got colonized first? I think I know who the shameful one is.
> The control to halt himself and draft and read the the fine print before burying himself in his partner's warm, soft, tight cunt
"I couldn't resist raping you, that white pussy was just too tight."
> An unsatisfactory means to take care of the matter himself
She means he doesn't have a dick to do it, and only a dick owner can do it. That sounds...very bioessentialist, WorkingGengar.
> Or naked, two fingers deep into the velvety heat of his pussy
I'm glad the Hexcore gave him a designer brand, otherwise I'd think it'd have fallen apart already.
> Curling his fingers and watching with cruel fascination
This character isn't cruel, but they love the idea of a mean Daddy Dom with dark skin who can dominate their uwu white boi with the tightest pussy in the world. If you dare write this character taking it up the ass, they will threaten suicide - literally.
> To make you squirt all over my bed?
Like a Capri Sun.
> Make a filthy show of making sure Viktor's juices didn't go to waste
It's just like drinking coconut water.
> Nudged the tip of his cock against Viktor's engorged clit
Oh? We're not calling it a cock now? OK.
> Glad he kept a nice, tight grip over his wrists
They're just uwu so smol. I bet they could slip into a Coke bottle.
> A glutton that would happily take the burning, aching, excruciating stretch of Jayce's bare cock
Hey if his pussy is as voracious as his stomach...can you even say he can feel it at all? I bet you can shove a Patriot missile up there and he'd still say there's room (Zelenskyy is wondering where all the missiles went).
> Pinned and brutalized
I wonder if there's a theme here.
> The fog of wet, hot tight, that ran through his thoughts
Oh, so your basic penisnigger mentality. OK, cholo.
> Deep grinds to Viktor's well-loved (abused) G-spot
I'm surprised that it hasn't been ripped out yet given how these authors love writing our MS13 inches here. Talk about a bunker buster.
> Balls emptying straight into Viktor's twitching, sensitive pussy
Does that count as caloric intake? Does his pussy eat cum? I must know.
Jayce is having a bad day: the city is going to and there's talk of Revolution. We can't have that, or at the very least, we can't deal with it, so our MS13 inches goes back home to have his atticwife take care of him. Anything to remind himself that he won't be paraded through the crowds with their own spikes up his ass (and we can't have that, can we? Our Dom has to stay on top; it's the benefit of privilege). We then get another smut scene.
> Clear roles. Clear expecations
Sounds awfully heteronormative if you ask me.
> His cunt was already wet, clit hard and the puffy lips of his well-loved folds flushed in anticipation
If your folds aren't well-loved and aren't flushing in anticipation, are you even loved?
> The expanse of his hand almost entirely swallowing the lithe limb
He's just uwu so smol. So itsy bitsy.
> There wasn't an inch that hadn't been licked, hadn't been fucked and rutted against on his cock and marked with his cum
Consider it sloppy seconds because the Hexcore got to it first, lmao.
> Jayce approached sex with the same obsessive vigor and unrelenting fervor as their sciences
Jayviks need to learn that obsessive =/= possessive, and that the way they write him keeps coming off as a violent man who gets angry that he is cucked by a tentacle creature. We are talking a manchild with muscles, but that's OK because he's hot and we operate by fixed dynamics so anything a top does is instantly forgivable.
> He'd wash Viktor's feet if he'd let him
Does that mean you didn't get a footjob? When you say an inch hasn't been fucked, that means the feet. That also means fucking what remains of those tits. 'All' means all, bud.
> Give a name to the obsessive need to know his partner, learn every inch, break him open and hoard what spilled out
Oh, that's totally healthy and indicative of someone who respects boundaries. This is the same person who doesn't know where his partner goes half the time and acknowledges he can be gone for days. If he was as obsessive as people write him, he'd have journal entries on what he was doing all the way down to what time of the day he shits.
> Jayce found that this was the swiftest way to drag him back out from under the tides
AKA 'If I fuck you hard enough I can fuck the
> I like you, all of you
He likes you so much he wants to make you an atticwife. Just Latino things.
Ah, so we DO have a footjob. That's a first. Nothing like those dainty female feet caressing that man meat, eh?
> Control was something he had always sought to maintain
There's a difference between wanting to harness something to save lives vs being someone who wants to break and conquer his partner because he doesn't value or respect his autonomy. It is once again proof that these authors don't respect the autonomy of trans men despite glazing them every chance they get.
> Jayce wouldn't have thought Viktor would prefer to defer to him
He doesn't. He's the one getting into trouble and breaking rules; Jayce, if anything, relies on HIM. These people don't even like the characters they masturbate to.
> Those sunburst eyes
Take a drink based on how many times this has been said. I counted three.
> Where he thrusted his cock between the pads of his toes
Oof. Call the ER, because those toes are getting broke by the size of that dick.
> His neglected cunt drooled over the bedsheets
What did I say about retiring this line? The vagina is not a St. Bernard. Stop it.
> He leaned over his small frame
He's just uwu so smol.
> God, look at you
They don't believe in God. They're a polytheistic society.
> The foreign limbs - an attempted transmutation towards a perfection that didn't exist
You wrote that already. This is also an attempt to wave away the fact that Viktor was wrong for trying to avoid his own death and he should have accepted it 'because he was already perfect'.
> Perfection had already been right in front of Jayce this entire time
> He just couldn't believe Viktor didn't see it
I'm going to hold your hand (after I break it with hammers) when I say this: A TERMINAL ILLNESS IS NOT AN IMPERFECTION. IT. IS. A. DISEASE. Telling something they need to accept Turbo Cancer AIDS because they're 'perfect' is retarded and you WILL get punched in the face. I'll one-up it and give you a 'Why so serious?' cut.
> Craning his head and twisting around
Is he an owl? Why does he need to crane his neck when he's on his back giving him a footjob?
> Insistent mouth laved at his armpit
Oh, nice. Nothing like steel alloy in the morning.
> Tracing the helix at where his mortification brushed shades of red all over
This does not make a lick of sense. Are we talking about him blushing? What 'mortification'? Do you know what that word even means?
> But none of it felt unnatural
Of course not. Penis-in-vagina sex is the default; it's as natural as it's ever gonna get.
> Needed to be stern
According to whom? This is the same guy who vomited at corpses. Do you expect him to be the obsessive Daddy dom? He'd cry at the sight of a maggot.
> He vaguely wondered what bruises would look like on the lavender and violet flesh and if they would bloom just as prettily
They'd blend in because they're the same shade, retard.
> Making a mess of his dainty feet and his pretty, fluttering cunt
Ah, these pretty, shyly fluttering, drooling cunts. Might be time to call Ben Shapiro's wife to get a look at it.
After their footjob session, Viktor wonders which thoughts are really his, and confesses that some of them feel 'older', meaning the Arcane is speaking through him. Jayce is worried (or he says he is) until Viktor says that all of his waking thoughts are about him and that he feels human when that happens. Jayce is overjoyed, predictably, because that means he can be Alpha Prime Daddy Dom and have his atticwife surrender to him at last. He surrenders himself and takes great pleasure that a male - who has enjoyed privilege and prestige - can take care of him, the shy, coy trans man that the world wants to break, with nothing but sex.
'New office'? Huh, I was under the impression they were hunting Jinx as a terrorist and that the Undercity was in an uprising. What happened to that? Were we too focused on Viktor's drooling pussy to forget about logical inconsistencies? I really am the worst person to be reviewing these because I hone in on details like that. Remember, they were on a cusp of revolution - so what has Jayce been doing as Councilor since then? Oh, right - leaving behind his duties to fuck his lab partner because he craves control of everything BUT his own subjects.
> Then there was the dream. Their lab. Their Hextech.
Yeah, about that: he wasn't supposed to make weapons, yet he's still using the Mercury Hammer. Viktor asked Jayce to destroy it, but he stopped once he found it fucking and cucking his partner before he did (he doesn't like competition). Then he wants to bury it deeper than the Hexheart - which, btw, is poisoning Ekko's tree and all of the Undercity - to infect things further, forgetting that it alters all form of biological matter.
> Perhaps an early retirement, or a short leave
Yeah what happened to that revolution and that loose terrorist, babe? You're lazier than Kash Patel. Next thing you'll be telling me is that you rented private jets for your partner's singing gig.
> Puffy and drooling in want, in hunger
Again with the drooling pussies bit. What, is female genitalia Pac-Man now, and goes 'wadda wadda wadda' every time it sees a penis?
> Fondling his twitching folds with faux disinterest
If your labia isn't twitching and dancing like Betty Boop, you ain't having good sex, ho.
> So very different from the polite, proper speech he had adopted
What the fuck is this supposed to mean? Are you assuming that because he's lower-class he has to talk with shit in his mouth? Wow. The people screaming about ableism and identity are happy being classist, go figure.
> Please fuck me with your massive cock til my greedy pussy squirts all over your desk
Put that on a t-shirt. It's the exact shit Booktok girlies make fun of.
> A gorgeous display. If Viktor would allow it, he'd have the sight captured on photo
> As if said positions weren't in his journals
Uh, did he consent to that or did you just draw it? Never beating the allegations that you see this guy as a sex pest.
> His pink drooling cunt
THIS IS THE FOURTH TIME, FUCK
> His birdbone ankles
Nothing like bones so thin you can snap like a wishbone. Make a wish and snap some pooner bones today!
> His juices staining his pants
The other Councilors should see it so they can determine he has done fuck all in the wake of a terror attack and has decided to engage in hedonism instead. They should vote to remove him and strip him of his duties and privileges because it seems for all this haiku-style prose (which has driven me right up the fucking wall) we forgot that they're in a CIVIL WAR and people are RIOTING IN THE STREETS. You talking about drooling pussies is going to lead them shoving some pikes up your ass and it'll be more than your prostate that gets tickled. Given how this fandom moves, that would be a marked improvement. 'Rich Latino gets RAILED, PLUGGED and STUFFED, No Holes Left Behind' sounds like a nice title, eh?
Here's another Christmas present (by the time I am posting this, it is Boxing Day, so these are all belated Christmas presents) courtesy of stupidsarah: painal. She loves her heterosexual sex (even when she will never admit it) and the feminine wiles associated with a character people are beginning to notice is only made trans for easy pussy. Also has a line stolen from Bad Santa: 'I'm going to shove my dick so far up your ass you won't sit for a week' (though, in Bad Santa, it's 'shit for a week'). Lines for this fic are:
- (In French) I am going to take you to my room and fuck you until you bleed.
- You eat mommy's pussy so good, don't you?
-His whole world slimming down to nothing more than the way (the John) drills into his ass
> Giving himself that just-fucked messiness
Oh, so your regular look, then? I've seen your selfies, albeit 'Freshly fucked Hapa' is your look.
> He would probably flash his ass to whoever was standing behind him
Your ass is flatter than a pancake served at a 24/7 diner and the cook was just told there'd be no overpay. When I say there is NOTHING there to entice someone, I mean it.
> Dainty black heels onto his feet
Mm yes those dainty feminine feet unlike those size 45 man feet of that CEO.
> He sprays himself with his favourite cologne
Nice, but that cologne isn't going to work with your dainty, feminine skin because male skin is thicker and they stink more. While you take painal from that 45-year-old CEO, remember that cologne 'needs to be discovered, not introduced.' He'll be choking on it before he chokes you with his dick.
> Grabs his small pocket knife
> Just a precaution
That is not going to do anything for your safety when Paris has migrant gangs with machetes and fucking AK-47s. They will rape you with the bottle of hard liquor they drank that day. That will do nothing to ward off a horny Chechen, I assure you.
Can you tell it's very French? Tres economique? Hon hon I bet you did. It's so French the waiter doesn't even open that bottle of wine for them, he just leaves it there.
> His date tucks a strand of hair behind his ear
> Demurely tucking his hands into his lap
When I read about trans men being real men, I think of 'demure' things like making themselves as small as possible vs commanding more attention and making sure they take up more space. This author has never once attempted to actually lean into the 'identify as a man' thing; she just writes this character as a full-blown woman and expects people not to notice or call her out. Shocker: no one does because they love her writing and you don't go against a creative like that.
> Aware of just how appetizing he looks in his little black ensemble
Walmart chicken thighs are not appetizing, and it's clear you need more hormones to plump yourself up. Fuck the FDA; give this man - er, feminine escort some chub!
> He would skip the food and make Viktor his meal, right here on the marble tabletop for everyone to witness
The French would act disgusted, not at the sexual display mind you, but the fact you're fucking someone with less meat on them than a rotisserie chicken.
> What brings you to the City of Love?
"Piss, crime, and a bunch of Africans asking me for money. Oh and I got robbed by some Gypsies. It was totally fun."
> Software development
The fuck are you heading to PARIS for software development? With all the regulations the EU has? You'd be going to Hong Kong or Singapore.
> Jayce has a finer palate, as is obvious
"White people do not season their palates, the peons."
> He requested that he be matched with someone confident, feminine, and easygoing
Oh so we KNOW what feminine means when we want it to, eh? 'Feminine' means: demure, sweet, wearing 'sexy' black dresses that ride up a pancake ass and - most importantly - being female. He never asks for a MTF troon, even when they could count as 'feminine'. He is literally asking for a woman and this shithead author wants to treat this character as a man. What a joke.
We're lucky these narratives never include the fact that so many FTMs suffer from BV and that that display of the underwear would smell worse than a nickel smelter. That single pair of panties would manage to drive out THE FRENCH with how bad it would smell.
> I do not dom. I do not top
"I perform my feminine duties and take it lying down, because that is my biological role. I only allow the male to top because that's what males do and I will never question the masculinity of a real male."
> Slender wrist
He's just uwu so smol.
> He can do whatever he may damn well please with him
Well he paid a huge lump sum of cash AND took him out to dinner, so shoving a dick up the ass is the least of his worries.
> Are you okay with name-calling? Playing certain...roles?
"You okay with me treating you like the woman you are and calling you as such, and me getting away with it because I'm a conventionally attractive male and this is actually what all the AFABs writing this desire?"
> You're going to let me shove my cock so far up your ass that you can't sit for a week
I told you that was a Bad Santa reference.
> Usually, Viktor would find a man's pride about his dick size to be egregious and annoying, but with Jayce, it makes him squeeze his thighs together
Let me guess. Our manly man alpha male CEO is over 9 inches long, 4 inches thick, and can put the French police force to shame. Keep him away from those African migrants or else they'll want to cut it off for some juju.
> Wraps both hands around the shaft
Do his hands meet in the middle or is it like palming a Pillsbury oven roll tin?
> Jayce is musky, salty, and hot in his mouth
Better than a crème brulee, eh?
> Continuing to stroke the remainder of Jayce's cock that he cannot reach with his hands
Are his hands that small, or is that dick that big?
> Smiles around the cock in his mouth
He physically cannot if it's so big it's stretching it to its limits and making him gag. But, since he's a professional, that throatfucking comes with no vomiting, and that mascara stays put.
> Paints the pink muscle in Viktor's mouth white
I bet you won't see that in the Louvre.
> The sound bubbling in his come-coated throat at the debauched mess
So a Listerine gargle.
> Jayce effortlessly picks Viktor up by his ass and throws a few feet backwards onto the large mattress
LMAO. He literally picks him up and throws him like a football and he wants that Super Bowl. Just chucking that shit like a New Year's favor.
> Just barely witnessing the carnal shadow
We all love feral top daddy doms with tons of money and nice suits and Rolexes who take you to nice dinners in Paris. It's not hetslop, I swear! It's gender-breaking, heavy-handed social commentary on trans sex workers! Who are still called feminine and the CEO never asks for gock but AFAB pussy instead!
> Easy there, mommy
Remember, misgendering is NOT genocide when WE do it, sweaty~
> But is quite literally telling his cunt how cut it is, how pink it is, how wet it is
Notice how when he called the escort service he wanted white cunt, not synthetic cunt. He didn't ask for a gock or a stinkditch. He never asked for a transwoman even though they are supposed to be women. He wanted someone 'feminine' and the escort service IMMEDIATELY knew what he was referring to. TRA in the streets, TERF in the fanfic sheets.
> Seemingly enjoying the way that it flutters beneath his gentle touch
Take a drink every time this author uses the word 'flutter'.
> Till I'm living in the streets with nothing but the taste of you on my tongue
You are getting robbed and that asshole gaped by a bunch of Africans and I cannot be arsed to care because these daddy doms need some equality. Get Lumumbo and Obungo on the job and he'll drop that act real quick.
> Jayce eats pussy like he's starved of it. Eats it like it's his last meat, eats it like he was born to do
I want to know what his opinion is of a stinkditch. Does he do down on one of those with as much fervour? What kind of salty flavour does an inverted penis have? You ain't gay unless you tongue a stinkditch.
> like a dog that gets its first taste of human flesh
We put down dogs that eat humans, btw. Never beating the dog allegories.
> At each lick over his cock
You are using feminine terms for everything else, including wanting the person to be 'feminine'. Why are we using MALE terms for genitalia that is not male? You're comparing it with that CEO cockmeat and you expect it to be masculine? Miss me with that bullshit.
> Sliding down to the fluttering rim of his asshole
This author loves fluttering orifices: shy, fluttering vaginal openings and now fluttering anuses.
What did I say about using male genitalia for someone you use female terms for? It is just inconsistent and looks stupid.
> Mixture of pain and pleasure wrenching a scream from his throat
I assume that he produces a lot of vaginal fluid because he is going in there all raw and no rubber. Hope you got your seropositive test ready, bud.
> Mommy likes it rough, huh
> Continues to call the clit a cock as if people won't notice
> His neck cranes back so far that his forehead digs into the wooden headboard
Wouldn't it be funny if he snapped his neck? Those bird bones can't even handle a good stretching, imagine that.
> Flood Jayce's face with each thrust, liquid spurting into his mouth and splashing against his grey-peppered beard
Ah, there's the GTA firetruck squirt. Never complete without it.
> His tongue licks along his cunt, his thighs, his ass
Someone tell stupidsarah what kind of STDs you can get from ATM and no amount of French food is going to erase the fact that you're getting gonorrhea on your lips.
> His wide chest is covered with a gracious coat of hair
Just so you know: masculine means you are coated with body hair like a bear, while being feminine means you are hairless, smooth, and bird-boned. Transwomen stay the fuck out: this man likes authentic pussies ONLY.
> His cock hangs between his thick thighs
You can guess how large it is based on how much wrapping paper is needed and whether it would get stuck in the tube.
> His cunt flutters between his spread legs
This is the fifth time it has 'fluttered'. This author loves writing it flutter like it's a letter in the wind. It flutters shyly, it flutters femininely, it flutters bravely, etc. Expect it to pen, 'Ain't I A Flutterer?' anytime soon.
> Knowing very well that he isn't the client to be scared of
This escort company is supposed to protect its clients, yet it knows full well that some of them - MEN, notably - will murder their girls (because if this was a transwoman, Jayce would be the one threatened). That's not an adequate business model to have. While I can understand it because they're in France and France has a migrant problem, if Johns are murdering your fancy prostitutes, it might be time to hire private security or go online.
> For once, he feels safe around a stranger
Yeah that's definitely the feeling in Paris these days, eh?
> Once again lying with his back to the bed
But was he football-throwed against it? No, sorry, I'm not getting over the fact that this nigga THREW HIM on the bed like he's trying to get a touchdown.
> Doing so good for mommy
"Mommy just got chucked across the field so the team could score a touchdown and the referees blew a foul, now everyone in the crowd is fighting"
> A palm slamming down onto the center of his sternum
Yeah! Break those birdbone ribs! I want to see it snap like the turkey in National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation!
> Crimson and iron coats his tastebuds
You are just tasting the iron. You're lucky he didn't loosen a few teeth.
> The look on his face is feral
Of course. The Latino is an animalistic sex beast; what else is new?
> Replaced by a scream as Jayce forces his cock deep into his asshole
> His girth stretches him far more than his fingers had earlier
There's also no lube, so he's going in dry, ensuring that there will be tearing.
> The head of his cock presses against a spot inside of him so deep that Viktor sees flashes of colour
Just for the record, sarah: women don't have prostates up their ass. Men do. The only thing making him see 'flashes of colour' is the anesthesia he's getting as they sew up that Soviet missile silo so he can keep his shit in.
> All he can do is lie there and take it
That's literally every trans Viktor fic. Want to know how many of them involves him topping, as so many trans men want to see? 403. The rest are him lying down and taking it like a woman.
> His cock strokes the muscles inside of his ass so perfectly
If by 'stroke', you mean 'batter it so hard it looks like tenderized meat' you'd be correct. With no lube, this is just a trip to the ER. It's not hard to write him taking out a bottle of it, even an expensive one. It's just a few sentences.
> His whole world slimming down to nothing more than the way Jayce drills into his ass
This is a real line.
> You're such a pretty hole, aren't you?
He's going to be a manhole at this point.
> Is mommy coming on my cock again?
Mommy's gonna need a new ass after this because he's gonna need a diaper.
> Feels his ass gape
I bet you you could shove an air fryer up there.
> Slowly coming back inch by gradual inch
Your ass isn't.
They shower together and Viktor knows he is going to be sore for a week because he can't walk with an ass gaped open like that. Jayce has a First Aid kit (but no lube) to make sure the love tap he gave him doesn't lead to stitches. The shower scene is the first time it's gentle and domestic (something Viktor notes, how very tradwifey). They dry off and head to the bed for aftercare talk, and Viktor remarks it's the first time he's ever felt that good (his bowels, notably, disagree). After our CEO cockmeat says he's going to fuck our feminine prostitute so hard until he bleeds, with a gaping ass, he asks if he will ever see him again.
All I can say to that is: find a good cosmetic surgeon, because your ass is what's going to lead to an early retirement.
At this point? Pure fucking spite. When you are so disgusted you start hating these people, it acts like a bit of a buffer.
I don't fault anyone for skipping my posts because it takes a lot to read them, let alone how many come from a particular fandom. It does take a lot for someone to sit down and write the things they do, particularly the pedophilic ones such as prettybadmagic. She has got to be the worst I've seen so far. Legit up there with Eldritch Cleaver and Philip Roth in how predatory they are in their prose.
He's a real man, now!
FORGE-FLAME
MUSK
AND
OFFENSE
HE 
GONNA
BREED
YOU
GUARDING
MALE
PHEROMONES than you are the fucking. We know he has a monstrous dick, but did we need to know he smells like a 'Forged in Fire' episode?
So sad.
PENILE
Excuse me while I enter my J. Jonah Jameson era.
' But yeah, keep wondering about the tightness of white pussy while you installed spyware on your partner's phone.
BY
It's like a Billie Eilish song frfr
Guess they can't identify into having a living wage.
