I've been reading
Connor Thorn and the Film Reel of the Cosmos. I think everyone who's interested in doing literary criticism should read badfics and some self-published rubbish to get some sense of proportion.
And this is from the evil end of the literature. Hooboy.
Let's compare it a bit. Ulillillia's book? Well, it has totally unorthodox structure, and throws most literary conventions out of the window, but it's not actually a
bad book - it's got a coherent structure and I guess the oddball format is an art form in itself, so I'd say it's pretty passable if certainly not commercially viable. Tiberius Rising by ParkourDude91?
Firmly in the "so bad it's so good" category - Jace tried to make an awesome book, and it has so far ended up being awesome for totally unintentional reasons.
But this thing? Ugh.
We don't need to do the Mary Sue litmus tests, the result is always 100%, no more, no less. We're talking about an ExplicitSue here.
whaarglebaargle
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Yeah, let's ignore the logically, ideologically, biologically and aesthetically questionable hero who pukes his guts (and everything else) inside his helmet and isn't in any way inconvenienced or revolted. No! Everything begins with the letter F! This logically means that there is perfect harmony in this world, and this totally makes the whole sequence acceptable and perfect!