Jerry Peet / Lily Orchard / Lily Peet / Valkyrstudios / Bhaalspawn / Tara Callie / "Mod Ebara" - Sociopath writer of pedophile fanfiction and cartoon reviews, faked getting raped to force a divorce, then mobbed and gaslit their ex off Tumblr, satanist neoliberal of the MovieSlob variety, also wants to fuck dogs and/or pokemon

[SubarashiiRage]

I would like to know what Lily considers to be a "real story" if world building is not:
a premise?
the characters interacting?
a goal?
a message?
a series of interconnected events?

all of this is easy to do on your own, but to have everything in a cohesive narrative and still make it interesting and engaging (since it has several generic stories that are passable but not memorable) you need a strong base to support and guide your ideas or everything inevitably becomes incomprehensible and difficult to follow as instead of taking questions, you run away from them as they have no answers, because you didn't bother to think before putting anything "brilliant" in your story

Lily only likes episodic because it is EASY, in her mind she can put whatever she wants as it is fair game, no responsibility, no thought or obligation to develop anything, explain anything just "write the story"

but she never did anything episodic, everything has consequences but not the ones that make sense and she blames anyone who wants to feel like "you are part of the problem"

Lily's standards are nothing more than her projecting her incompetence in the genre of adventure and a focus on worldbuilding and lore since every time she does something she always makes pages of lore that she only throws in the trash when it conflicts with the idiotic idea of the moment

 

[starborn427614]

ATLA had years of worldbuilding before production and it shows. The reason why it has such great pacing, such a tight cohesive narrative and one of the best character arcs ever written (Zuko. Duh.) is because they built a solid foundation first. Because they figured out how this world works, what the rules are, and kept it consistent throughout. They had the freedom to develop a well thought out setting before they set the full story in it and created a piece of animation that single-handedly raised that bar on television animation and made many of the shows today possible.

Compare that to Legend of Korra where Nickelodeon kept waffling and changing their minds on how many episodes or seasons they wanted to order, leaving the writers to come up with a second season, and then two more seasons, to what they initially wrote as a one-shot miniseries. And then once they actually started getting their shit together in the final two seasons writing wise Nick decided to pull their budget out from under them and dump the remaining season 4 episodes on their app instead of airing them. It's almost like making shit up as you go along very rarely ever works out well.

I'm a resident SUfag and I'm well aware the show can be a bit of a mess plot and worldbuilding wise, but it also kind of runs on dream-like musical logic and is more about the emotions than the hard worldbuilding. You can ask why gem ships and their homeworld have breathable air and Earth-like gravity despite canonically gems requiring neither of those things but the show does not care and won't even address it because that's not the point.

Huh. Once again Jerry's most hated show does exactly what he keeps saying he wants to see in media.

Yeah the worldbuilding could be much better. Is it bad? No. Could it be improved? Sure. It's a flawed show made by someone who never made a show before and was more interested in telling stories about characters than events or locations. Just how it is.

 

[Chris_Stuckmann]

Yeah the worldbuilding could be much better. Is it bad? No. Could it be improved? Sure. It's a flawed show made by someone who never made a show before and was more interested in telling stories about characters than events or locations. Just how it is.

Ehh, the problem with Steven Universe is that eventually everything the writers didn't focus on, like the worldbuilding and the combat, eventually came back to bite them in the ass when they had to rely on those aspects of the story for dramatic tension (see the finale of every season). Hard to care about a conflict when you don't know the rules.

Kind of like how everything Jerry doesn't focus on, like any Pokemon that isn't a fucking Gardevoir, eventually comes back to bite him in the ass when he wants to pretend like he's a good writer who can create a story with meaningful stakes.

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

I would like to know what Lily considers to be a "real story" if world building is not:
a premise?
the characters interacting?
a goal?
a message?
a series of interconnected events?

all of this is easy to do on your own, but to have everything in a cohesive narrative and still make it interesting and engaging (since it has several generic stories that are passable but not memorable) you need a strong base to support and guide your ideas or everything inevitably becomes incomprehensible and difficult to follow as instead of taking questions, you run away from them as they have no answers, because you didn't bother to think before putting anything "brilliant" in your story

Lily only likes episodic because it is EASY, in her mind she can put whatever she wants as it is fair game, no responsibility, no thought or obligation to develop anything, explain anything just "write the story"

but she never did anything episodic, everything has consequences but not the ones that make sense and she blames anyone who wants to feel like "you are part of the problem"

Lily's standards are nothing more than her projecting her incompetence in the genre of adventure and a focus on worldbuilding and lore since every time she does something she always makes pages of lore that she only throws in the trash when it conflicts with the idiotic idea of the moment

This!!

Also I feel like (at least from what ive read) that a lot of you are missing the point. Lily doesnt even do world building. All of her current projects already have set up and well thought out worlds that she didnt come up with. Her current stories are fanfics of pokemon, starwars, and WoW. All three of those stories all have well set up and well explored worlds with deep lore and interesting characters, the only thing lily 'adds' to these worlds is confusing and contradictory shit.

If you try to say she wrote stories with her own made up worlds, no she didnt. She cant help but pull directly from every piece of media shes ever remotely liked and put them into her stories whether they make sense or not.

 

[Lurk Jurk]

This!!

Also I feel like (at least from what ive read) that a lot of you are missing the point. Lily doesnt even do world building. All of her current projects already have set up and well thought out worlds that she didnt come up with. Her current stories are fanfics of pokemon, starwars, and WoW. All three of those stories all have well set up and well explored worlds with deep lore and interesting characters, the only thing lily 'adds' to these worlds is confusing and contradictory shit.

If you try to say she wrote stories with her own made up worlds, no she didnt. She cant help but pull directly from every piece of media shes ever remotely liked and put them into her stories whether they make sense or not.

Even fanfic authors can do worldbuilding, either using the existing worldbuilding, extrapolating/expanding on it or both.

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

Even fanfic authors can do worldbuilding, either using the existing worldbuilding, extrapolating/expanding on it or both.

I still feel like my point stands. I agree that fanfic writers can do that and some do it extremely well, but lily doesn't. Like i said anything that lily tries to add to these worlds or expand upon them is shit and she handles them horribly (EX: the mating bond). She doesnt do world building and whenever she attempts it she never actually puts enough thought into it for it to be a believable, functioning part of that world.

 

[ShiftyBoi]

Real sad boy hours at Fort Lizzy

 

[Exceptionally Exceptional]

This!!

Also I feel like (at least from what ive read) that a lot of you are missing the point. Lily doesnt even do world building. All of her current projects already have set up and well thought out worlds that she didnt come up with. Her current stories are fanfics of pokemon, starwars, and WoW. All three of those stories all have well set up and well explored worlds with deep lore and interesting characters, the only thing lily 'adds' to these worlds is confusing and contradictory shit.

If you try to say she wrote stories with her own made up worlds, no she didnt. She cant help but pull directly from every piece of media shes ever remotely liked and put them into her stories whether they make sense or not.

See, problem is that even then with the world already built for him Jerry manages to fuck it up and make the world LESS rich and full and fleshed out. Like, have they even shown anything outside of Comic!Lily's fucking house? I mean, other people would probably have fleshed it out with characters and locations and little facts about the town. Who are Lily's closest neighbors? What does the town look like? What region is it in? What are the more common wild Pokemon? Not even kidding when I say that the area between Pallet Town and Viridian City contained a more detailed and fleshed out world.

And then there's the fact that Jerry obviously knows jack fucking shit about the franchise outside of the games which is made insanely obvious by the fact that he actually restricts his Pokemon characters to 4 moves. Guess what, Jerry, in "real life" Pokemon can learn as many moves as they want. The entire mechanic of forgetting old moves to learn new ones was partly due to data constraints on game boy cartridges, and partly to force players to choose a small but immensely useful skillset to promote tactical use of your Pokemon and their abilities.

Oh, and the faggot isn't even creative enough to make an in-universe version of Twitter and instead everyone just uses Twitter because Jerry is so unimiginitive that my 10 year old self could come up with more interesting ideas.

 

[Armored Hero Fanfic]

Real sad boy hours at Fort Lizzy
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Honestly, isn't there something that Lizzy could legally do?

 

[GayDemiBoy]

Real sad boy hours at Fort Lizzy
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You know, with everything Lizzy did while with Lily for Lily, I feel sad about how they are just trying to move on and forget about the horrid experience that was dating Lily only to have Lily basically encourage and incite her fans to go out and slander/harass Lizzy.

Lizzy was a 20 yo college student during the rough patch of hers and Lily's engagement. Working to get an actual degree in something while Lily just watched shitty cartoons at her apartment sitting on her tailbone in her late twenties. Had to deal with hearing and probably believing that Lily was raped and stabbed nearly in the same month only to hear that she was raped again. While it's unlikely that Lily was raped, imagine being the partner of this woman who presumably went on her tumblr blog and said it there first instead of going to the cops and telling you in private.

It's honestly sad and disgusting. Most adults don't mention their exes. They don't go out of their way to try and make a conversation from them. Hell none of them go on some dying shitty brony channel talking about mental health and mention it. Lizzy is someone so beaten down I doubt she'd even try to bring and show proof that Lily is this disgusting person. She just clearly wants to move the fuck on and forget Lily existed because it's clear the relationship for either was not healthy and hurt both if not Lizzy more.

Lizzy could try and sue Lily for slander/defamation given how Lily has posted and said she's this awful abuser and has clearly gotten her audience to attack Lizzy by deleting her tumblr and taking her blog name, sending her shit on twitter, and even the mention in the KP vid. You could make a case for the very least to have a cease and desist. However, Lily isn't gonna listen to anything like a piece of paper and just vague about her. Best thing for Lizzy to do would be to delete all her current forms of social media and make new accounts under different names and a different sona.

 

[starborn427614]

You know, with everything Lizzy did while with Lily for Lily, I feel sad about how they are just trying to move on and forget about the horrid experience that was dating Lily only to have Lily basically encourage and incite her fans to go out and slander/harass Lizzy.

Lizzy was a 20 yo college student during the rough patch of hers and Lily's engagement. Working to get an actual degree in something while Lily just watched shitty cartoons at her apartment sitting on her tailbone in her late twenties. Had to deal with hearing and probably believing that Lily was raped and stabbed nearly in the same month only to hear that she was raped again. While it's unlikely that Lily was raped, imagine being the partner of this woman who presumably went on her tumblr blog and said it there first instead of going to the cops and telling you in private.

It's honestly sad and disgusting. Most adults don't mention their exes. They don't go out of their way to try and make a conversation from them. Hell none of them go on some dying shitty brony channel talking about mental health and mention it. Lizzy is someone so beaten down I doubt she'd even try to bring and show proof that Lily is this disgusting person. She just clearly wants to move the fuck on and forget Lily existed because it's clear the relationship for either was not healthy and hurt both if not Lizzy more.

Lizzy could try and sue Lily for slander/defamation given how Lily has posted and said she's this awful abuser and has clearly gotten her audience to attack Lizzy by deleting her tumblr and taking her blog name, sending her shit on twitter, and even the mention in the KP vid. You could make a case for the very least to have a cease and desist. However, Lily isn't gonna listen to anything like a piece of paper and just vague about her. Best thing for Lizzy to do would be to delete all her current forms of social media and make new accounts under different names and a different sona.

I don't think litigation would work out well for anyone involved honestly. Best for Lizzy to just try their best to move on and forget the shit Lily did, that's the best kind of revenge.

 

[ShiftyBoi]

I don't think litigation would work out well for anyone involved honestly. Best for Lizzy to just try their best to move on and forget the shit Lily did, that's the best kind of revenge.

Yeah ironically despite Lily's insistence that killing an abuser is the best kind of revenge, she's being put through the best kind of revenge right now.

I mean think about it, Lizzy has just moved on and is well liked on Twitter. While Lily can't go a day without complaining about how everyone hates her, and she's still bitter about Lizzy to this day. Lizzy has casually thrown out all of Lily's gifts meanwhile Lily still clings to Lizzy's artwork because her current girlfriend isn't nearly as talented.

 

[GayDemiBoy]

I mean think about it, Lizzy has just moved on and is well liked on Twitter. While Lily can't go a day without complaining about how everyone hates her, and she's still bitter about Lizzy to this day. Lizzy has casually thrown out all of Lily's gifts meanwhile Lily still clings to Lizzy's artwork because her current girlfriend isn't nearly as talented.

Honestly given how much Lily brings up and clings to Lizzy's stuff, it makes me think that Lizzy broke up with Lily instead of Lily being the one to break it off. Lily said Mikalia was working on sprites for her based on the one EQG base art someone did and posted a picture of one that even comparing it with the black blob Lizzy did looks awful. She still even uses the talksprites even when she says she hates them. She still has the shipart framed and hanging on her wall that Lizzy drew.

Lily is the clingy ex trying to get back at Lizzy for walking away. She suddenly came out with this story of how she was abused when her public stuff read pretty normal and nothing was out of character. None of her friends seemed to notice at the time either until after Lily said something. It's an abuse tactic. Lily is controlling the narrative and gaslighting Lizzy into thinking she was the controlling abuser who swatted her.

 

[Typical Anime Trap]

Honestly given how much Lily brings up and clings to Lizzy's stuff, it makes me think that Lizzy broke up with Lily instead of Lily being the one to break it off. Lily said Mikalia was working on sprites for her based on the one EQG base art someone did and posted a picture of one that even comparing it with the black blob Lizzy did looks awful. She still even uses the talksprites even when she says she hates them. She still has the shipart framed and hanging on her wall that Lizzy drew.

Lily is the clingy ex trying to get back at Lizzy for walking away. She suddenly came out with this story of how she was abused when her public stuff read pretty normal and nothing was out of character. None of her friends seemed to notice at the time either until after Lily said something. It's an abuse tactic. Lily is controlling the narrative and gaslighting Lizzy into thinking she was the controlling abuser who swatted her.

Lizzy was the one who broke up with Lily. If you want to go back and see the direct aftermath of their break up go back and read through threads 280-310. Lily was heart broken and extremely distressed and just couldn't fathom why Lizzy would break up with her. Without directly quoting the previous threads lily went to meet with lizzy or something and lizzy broke it off with her.

I feel bad for lizzy for the amount that this has ruined her reputation and image, truly i dont think she was ever the one in the wrong but if you go back and look you'll see that she actually said any backlash she receives from the breakup she deserves. Of course i dont think she thought it would go on for this long but it did. I feel bad but in a way she also made it bad for herself by never ever trying to defend herself against lilys allegations.

 

[Exceptionally Exceptional]

Lizzy was the one who broke up with Lily. If you want to go back and see the direct aftermath of their break up go back and read through threads 280-310. Lily was heart broken and extremely distressed and just couldn't fathom why Lizzy would break up with her. Without directly quoting the previous threads lily went to meet with lizzy or something and lizzy broke it off with her.

I feel bad for lizzy for the amount that this has ruined her reputation and image, truly i dont think she was ever the one in the wrong but if you go back and look you'll see that she actually said any backlash she receives from the breakup she deserves. Of course i dont think she thought it would go on for this long but it did. I feel bad but in a way she also made it bad for herself by never ever trying to defend herself against lilys allegations.

That's probably the worst fucking thing about Jerry. He's the sort of fucker to try and make an ex's life a living hell out of pure spite. The moment you break up with this narcissistic sociopath everything you ever did becomes abuse, and he'll think what should be a completely private matter should be broadcast to his fanbase to rile them up and send them on the warpath. And it's pretty clear that he spent the entire relationship mentally abusing and manipulating Lizzy. Fucker is DARVO personified.

Jerry is basically troon Onision.

 

[SubarashiiRage]

still talking about Kim Shego fanfiction (I still don’t know why she’s so into it)

now any lesbian ship that Lily doesn't like is the fault of the heteros? how?
how to be dominant is something exclusive for men?

people like to write about different and conflicting personalities developing a relationship, but now this idea is toxic, abusive and heteronormative, even if it is with lesbians, the "purest" of loves

I think Lily only likes it when the two people (women) have the same opinions and personalities, preferably the same as Lily (selfcest)

 

[Icarus B. Nezzer]

20. Delilah and Julius
19. Cardcaptors (Nelvana dub)
18. Monster by Mistake
17. Teen Titans
16. Recess
15. Mummies Alive
14. Pokémon
13. Fairly OddParents
12. ChalkZone
11. Star Wars: The Clone Wars
10. Hamtaro
9. 6teen
8. Lilo and Stitch: The Series
7. Medabots
6. Dave the Barbarian
5. Avatar: The Last Airbender
4. Rugrats
3. Fillmore
2. The Weekenders
1. Kim Possible

 

[ShiftyBoi]

20. Delilah and Julius
19. Cardcaptors (Nelvana dub)
18. Monster by Mistake
17. Teen Titans
16. Recess
15. Mummies Alive
14. Pokémon
13. Fairly OddParents
12. ChalkZone
11. Star Wars: The Clone Wars
10. Hamtaro
9. 6teen
8. Lilo and Stitch: The Series
7. Medabots
6. Dave the Barbarian
5. Avatar: The Last Airbender
4. Rugrats
3. Fillmore
2. The Weekenders
1. Kim Possible

medabots tho

no complaints here

 

[X-Shaped Weeaboo]

20. Delilah and Julius
19. Cardcaptors (Nelvana dub)
18. Monster by Mistake
17. Teen Titans
16. Recess
15. Mummies Alive
14. Pokémon
13. Fairly OddParents
12. ChalkZone
11. Star Wars: The Clone Wars
10. Hamtaro
9. 6teen
8. Lilo and Stitch: The Series
7. Medabots
6. Dave the Barbarian
5. Avatar: The Last Airbender
4. Rugrats
3. Fillmore
2. The Weekenders
1. Kim Possible

"My tastes were different from most people my age growing up."

>literally posts a list of some of the most iconic and talked about cartoons from that era

Kek

 

[TheAmbiguousLurker]

"My tastes were different from most people my age growing up."

>literally posts a list of some of the most iconic and talked about cartoons from that era

Kek

Hey, Teen Titans was completely underappreciated show that most people just didn't get!