Dramacow Lantzblades - Beast Lair's Autistic Scourge

[Techpriest]

D-does he not use seafood analogies in his sex scene writing? How can he even call it Nasuverse fiction if he cannot compare something to a mollusk?

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“Onii-chan’s cum… it’s so hot and strong,” she mutters cleaning herself off swallowing every drop she can before engulfing my magic stick between her pillowy soft love mounds.

“I’ll get you good and hard again, just relax,” she says, caressing my thickness with her massive fun bags. Her attention is so much better then Sakura’s. I’ve been an idiot- consensual sex is awesome.

It's worse.

 

[Rin]

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It's worse.

Maybe my expectations that fanwriters will try to write in the style of the original is too strong, but the extremely English/American slang really bugs me. I can't even picture Shinji saying "fun bags." What's wrong with using normal words for things?

Also, dat last sentence. My inner feminazi/canon nazi wants to rant about how he's missing the actual motivation behind the rapes, both in general and in this specific instance, but its sheer stupidity has left me dumbfounded.

 

[Techpriest]

Maybe my expectations that fanwriters will try to write in the style of the original is too strong, but the extremely English/American slang really bugs me. I can't even picture Shinji saying "fun bags." What's wrong with using normal words for things?

Also, dat last sentence. My inner feminazi/canon nazi wants to rant about how he's missing the actual motivation behind the rapes, both in general and in this specific instance, but its sheer stupidity has left me dumbfounded.

It gets even stupider. The girl is a rule 63 version of Shinji himself. Who had her virginity restored by Satoshi. Yeah. Really.

 

[Rin]

It gets even stupider. The girl is a rule 63 version of Shinji himself. Who had her virginity restored by Satoshi. Yeah. Really.

I read it was fem!Shinji somewhere, but I didn't know Satoshi was involved. That just makes the whole thing even worse. And what was even the point of the whole virginity restoration thing? It's so creepy.

 

[SINIB]

I read it was fem!Shinji somewhere, but I didn't know Satoshi was involved. That just makes the whole thing even worse. And what was even the point of the whole virginity restoration thing? It's so creepy.

Because Lantz finds it hot. Shinjiko is in several lemons. There's one with "Sakurai"(dude sakura) where "Sakurai" watches Satoshi bang Shinjiko.

Didn't we read that one out in a skype call once?

We tried but we couldn't finish it. It was too scarring.