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[Godchu]

Script's out. Turns out the cute girl is actually supposed to be a boy, and a nigger.

As for the story...

Haven't gone through the whole thing, but just take a look at this opening monologue

Elliot’s narration: I’m Elliot Gomez. I'm from Minnesota and now I’m moving to South Korea as an exchange student .

Elliot’s narration: I always thought of South Korea being a beautiful country and was much safer than North Korea. I was excited to see the family I would move in with as I hoped they would accept me and the guys at school would be as welcoming as them.

Elliot’s narration: However while I was welcome I knew one thing

Elliot’s narration: It wasn’t home. As I would later learn. You can never take hope for granted. As I willingly entered a hole of never ending despair…

Also noticed this

Elliot: I mean well from time to time I’m more of a writer. I'm thinking of writing a book but I don’t know what it should be about.

Was it worth being ousted as a retard for this?

 

[Ogre Magi]

I'm 200% sure he's going to 10 post and dear feeder's going to ban him. Can't null leave the dirty business to the jannies? Watching him explain himself is genuinely funny, I pray he stays.

God, I hope not. I want to hear more of what he has to say!

 

[Monostar Leatherknuckles]

Okay I tried to help you are just retarded. Enjoy your inevitable thread.
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I am the inevitable.

 

[Godchu]

I am the inevitable.

Dude, that's cringe. Kill yourself

 

[Ogre Magi]

I am the inevitable.

Did you look at @LURKER00's manga yet? I'm sure you guys could make something autistic together.

 

[WE'RE ALL GONNA]

Cat's out of the bag
Copied from DM with @Admiral Throbnelius and @Cedric_Eff

Notes so far:
-Main protag is a black guy who was bullied in the US but is now super cool in Korea because he's a foreigner (wtf?)
-The names so far are insanely retarded (Bai Mari? Bai ARA?)
-The host family daughter is literally all over the bbc like some bad porn story
-The father hates American niggers, based. He's more in line with Japanese or Chinese though, not many Koreans outright hate Americans

Elliot’s mind: So this is how it felt being popular? Elliot’s narration: I didn’t know what to say or do but simply just wave as I never considered myself to be popular back in Minnesota. Panel 165
Elliot’s narration: Back there I was just another typical person who did normal stuff anyone does, and the only time I would be surrounded by a crowd was from people who made fun of me for how I had no father but two mother
Panel 166 *A shot showed a younger Elliot being held by the back of his collar by a group of bullies*
Elliot’s narration: They called me a dude with vagina because of it but I didn’t care as I knew they loved me like a father who would love their child.

Honestly not that fun reading it. It's not written very well and there are little to no stakes. I have no reason to care for any of the characters..

Oh my god There's a scene of Korean students are hitting the bong, fuck me. Korea has some of the strictest drug laws and everyone thinks that weed is basically cocaine there. This nigger really thinks that this is California but with yellow bitches all up on his dick??

Iggy: The world is full of tragedy.
Iggy: It takes away the ones we love when you least suspect it.

Jesus.

Panel 412 *In the room he saw Lee Soon-Yi hanged by her wrists with her uniform being slightly cut exposing her stomach while being beaten by a shirtless student wearing black face pain
Panel 413 Paint: I’m so freakin’ hard right now. *A shot of her scars on her chest is shown*

Blackface LMAO

Ok yep I think I'm good.

 

[Cedric_Eff]

Did you look at @LURKER00's manga yet? I'm sure you guys could make something autistic together.

I actually took a look at that and I will say what LURKER00 was making was interesting to say the least.

 

[Mr.Miyagi]

Script's out. Turns out the cute girl is actually supposed to be a boy, and a nigger.

As for the story...

Haven't gone through the whole thing, but just take a look at this opening monologue





Also noticed this


Was it worth being ousted as a retard for this?

Fascinating insight into the Orient here.

-The host family daughter is literally all over the bbc like some bad porn story

As soon as the image in the first post mentioned specifically that the host family had two daughters, I knew what kind of self-insert story this was panning out to be.

 

[DEAD BIRD]

Script's out. Turns out the cute girl is actually supposed to be a boy, and a nigger.

Going through this PDF, immediately on Page 5 it has TRACED Piccrew avatar generator art pieces.

On page 13, this masterpiece of horror is written

This whole thing is chalk full of child-like writing, Piccrew images, stock photos, and random game screenshots it seems.

I sure hope him sperging out was worth it.

 

[Admiral Throbnelius]

As others have said, the cat's out of the bag. @Shlomo Shekelstein XL initially linked the PDF in his community happenings post which @Godchu downloaded and posted here. Thought I'd share the journey of how I obtained the coveted Red Mist Chapter 1 PDF for all you fine Kiwis to enjoy:

Monostar Leatherknuckles Discord Profile:

Spoiler: Admiral and Monostar's Discord Discussion

 

[Waifu Days]

I am the inevitable.

I hope you were playing I Am All Of Me by Crush 40 when you typed that. You're just a cute little edgy boy, aren't ya.

 

[Cedric_Eff]

Going through this PDF, immediately on Page 5 it has TRACED Piccrew avatar generator art pieces.
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On page 13, this masterpiece of horror is written
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This whole thing is chalk full of child-like writing, Piccrew images, stock photos, and random game screenshots it seems.

I sure hope him sperging out was worth it.

Considering the pdf, he has a long way from this project working out. He needs to learn how to write good literature first.

Massive rewrites required. I do dig the simple title of “Red Mist”. The story just rings hollow with the title.

The other thing too is take cues from your own mind. Transcendental Meditation can help.

 

[DEAD BIRD]

I hope you were playing I Am All Of Me by Crush 40 when you typed that. You're just a cute little edgy boy, aren't ya.

Since he quoted Thanos, I imagine he is instead blasting verbal Ase's beats at max volume.

 

[Godchu]

The fucking dad is called Bai Dong-Suk

Edit: >He/They

 

[Dive⚓Team]

I can't tell if Mok Suck-Chin Academy is meant to be a joke or is just unintentionally racist.

 

[Monostar Leatherknuckles]

Two can play

 

[Dive⚓Team]

Two can play

You don't actually think that his discord isn't a throwaway right?

 

[WE'RE ALL GONNA]

Two can play

@Admiral Throbnelius He doxxed you bro. It's jover.

 

[Admiral Throbnelius]

Two can play

Oh no! you exposed one of my many burner Discord accounts that I barely use. Whatever will I do! I WILL NEVER RECOVER FROM THIS!

Also two can play at this game:

 

[Mr.Miyagi]

On page 13, this masterpiece of horror is written

Move over, Junji Ito. A new king of horror manga has arrived!