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If your main villain makes Count Graduon look interesting, you are doing it wrong.

I'm not being facetious, here. The good count has a style, a believable motivation and a backstory. Granted, they're fucking stupid, but at least they're there. What does Genome want? What entices a person towards Genomism? What exactly is he hoping to achieve by bringing about universal oblivion? God the Father is explicitly a character in the Nava-verse, so one has to wonder why he even created himself an enemy to begin with. Why did it happen? What does it mean? Who fucking knows?
 
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Enig said:
Also of note is that Genome looks like DNA. And Nava-Verse is supposed to have a "Christian worldview". So, basically, his spergdom is some complex way of denying science because science told him he is too autistic to live.
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Almost reminds me somewhat of the final form of one boss from Contra Shattered Soldier.

Arctic said:
He looks like one of those Aztec wall paintings, if it were made by a 5-year old.
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Almost looks like some of those pictures that native Africans or the original inhabitants of Australia would have made.
 
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NAVA-VERSE MONSTERS OF THE DAY - FLUFEWOGS
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Flufewog
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No prizes for guessing who they remind you of in the Sonichu comics.

* Small, fluffy and fuzzy fellows with a surprisingly violent history.
* Vary wildly in color and in number of eyes, which range from one to seven.
* Trivia: The Flufewogs are based on the Uglydolls. Not only is their leader, Peaco, based on one, but so are his fictional friends from Peaco and Pals.

So basically another ripoff from other franchises along with Twilight and The Hunger Games.
 
Flufe: A nicer word for a fart
Wog: A racial slur usually applied to Middle Eastern and South Asian peoples

Oh Molay. I realise this sort of thing is almost certainly unintentional, but seriously, what's up with the names? Naming things is difficult, I can appreciate that, but Flufewog? Genomists? Ohgroid? Seriously? (Also: "This makes them among the very few unoriginal Nava–Verse characters." Right.)
 
Alan Pardew said:
So basically another ripoff from other franchises along with Twilight and The Hunger Games.
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See, you can actually respect Twilight and The Hunger Games a little bit because the authors at least made effort (however slight) to put some interesting new stuff in.

Gabe? "Allow me to explicitly state that my work is, indeed, a carbon copy of an existing work. And I'm not making any improvements either."

This is the difference between published hack writers and unpublished crud. I always get amused when people bash terrible books, because as a writer, I at least have some perspective on the stuff that the publishers tend to reject.
I've heard horror stories of works that failed editorial gatekeeping. Nava-Verse is one of those tales.
 
Lovecraft + Acid(Author's Repressed Fetishes * Self-Insert) + Sonichu = Nava-Verse?

Seriously, there are few descriptors available for this level of FUBAR in fiction. wow
 
I don't think there's even a theme to the character names. Gabe just mashes random syllables together.
 
NAVA-VERSE MONSTER OF THE DAY - The Custodian of the Nava–Verse
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/The_Custodian_of_the_Nava–Verse
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Now moving on to the special creations of the Nava-verse. (http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Special_creation) Special creations are basically unique in Moleman's universe for a specific purpose. The Custodian above is one of them.

* Responsible for writing Lore about the Nava–Verse (So basically another Moleman self-insert)
* Most knowledgeable being in the Nava–Verse.
* A small blob inside a small humanoid mech who lives in a space station floating above Sol. (Wonder who's the small humanoid then? Forget it. This custodian is far more important because it's Moleman's sel- I mean, a SPECIAL CREATION GUIZE)
* Comes down from his home to observe the Nava–Verse firsthand for one year out of every one hundred.
* Has a unique spell cast on him that nullifies all potential aggression towards the Custodian, so that he will never be attacked by even the most evil creatures.
* There is an electrical chip inside his brain that shocks him whenever he tries to put lies, such as false praise about himself, into his lore. (No prizes for guessing where did Molay ripped off it from)
 
Alan Pardew said:
NAVA-VERSE MONSTER OF THE DAY - The Custodian of the Nava–Verse
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/The_Custodian_of_the_Nava–Verse
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Now moving on to the special creations of the Nava-verse. (http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Special_creation) Special creations are basically unique in Moleman's universe for a specific purpose. The Custodian above is one of them.

* Responsible for writing Lore about the Nava–Verse (So basically another Moleman self-insert)
* Most knowledgeable being in the Nava–Verse.
* A small blob inside a small humanoid mech who lives in a space station floating above Sol. (Wonder who's the small humanoid then? Forget it. This custodian is far more important because it's Moleman's sel- I mean, a SPECIAL CREATION GUIZE)
* Comes down from his home to observe the Nava–Verse firsthand for one year out of every one hundred.
* Has a unique spell cast on him that nullifies all potential aggression towards the Custodian, so that he will never be attacked by even the most evil creatures.
* There is an electrical chip inside his brain that shocks him whenever he tries to put lies, such as false praise about himself, into his lore. (No prizes for guessing where did Molay ripped off it from)
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Kinda like an autistic version of the angel Metatron from Judaism. [/religionsperg]
 
Alan Pardew said:
NAVA-VERSE MONSTER OF THE DAY - The Custodian of the Nava–Verse
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/The_Custodian_of_the_Nava–Verse
300px-Custodian.png
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Now moving on to the special creations of the Nava-verse. (http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Special_creation) Special creations are basically unique in Moleman's universe for a specific purpose. The Custodian above is one of them.

* Responsible for writing Lore about the Nava–Verse (So basically another Moleman self-insert)
* Most knowledgeable being in the Nava–Verse.
* A small blob inside a small humanoid mech who lives in a space station floating above Sol. (Wonder who's the small humanoid then? Forget it. This custodian is far more important because it's Moleman's sel- I mean, a SPECIAL CREATION GUIZE)
* Comes down from his home to observe the Nava–Verse firsthand for one year out of every one hundred.
* Has a unique spell cast on him that nullifies all potential aggression towards the Custodian, so that he will never be attacked by even the most evil creatures.
* There is an electrical chip inside his brain that shocks him whenever he tries to put lies, such as false praise about himself, into his lore. (No prizes for guessing where did Molay ripped off it from)
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Wait I think I can see the small blob. Its that ugly ass owl looking thing in the center.

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Its like an autistic owl driving a refrigerator with tubes for hands.
 
Alan Pardew said:
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* There is an electrical chip inside his brain that shocks him whenever he tries to put lies, such as false praise about himself, into his lore. (No prizes for guessing where did Molay ripped off it from)
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So yeah, okay, The Custodian is a being that was created by God the Father. And he's a spushul, brilliant boy who records everything. So far so good. But the question is: WHY?

It even says: "Like in the original universe, God does not actively intervene in the goings on that take place in the Nava–Verse, but unlike in the original universe, He does employ Angels that do intervene to a limited extent. "

But God in the bible DOES employ angels! He employs them all the time, including Lucifer himself who was the most perfect and beautiful of angels. Angels under God's orders destroyed Sodom and Gamorrah, they brought down a flaming sword for man, they acted in the Lord's name to kill a hundred thousand assyrians. Angels interact with man often, as many of those cast out from heaven for following Lucifer are now bound to earth, and those that aren't record events, fight evil, and spread proclimations.

But this all leads to one more question: What's the point of an Angel of Record if God himself has no need? He's omnipotent. Man wrote the bible, not the angels. What purpose is The Custodian other than... jesus, an intersteller Wikipedia editor who answers to no-one but God.

Metatron even worked with Enoch, a man ascended, to record the history of the angels and nephilm as history for mankind - the same metatron, like all other angels, who was given free will by God himself! The Custodian by comparison is just a tubby goof in a mechanical suit who's forced by Big Brother God to never "lie" and spread His propaganda throughout the galaxy. Why would God implant a fucking chip in his head anyway? He's God, the Father! Just use your magical autism powers! What the hell!

that was way more than I intended to write about angels. Goddamn.
 
Smutley said:
So yeah, okay, The Custodian is a being that was created by God the Father. And he's a spushul, brilliant boy who records everything. So far so good. But the question is: WHY?

It even says: "Like in the original universe, God does not actively intervene in the goings on that take place in the Nava–Verse, but unlike in the original universe, He does employ Angels that do intervene to a limited extent. "

But God in the bible DOES employ angels! He employs them all the time, including Lucifer himself who was the most perfect and beautiful of angels. Angels under God's orders destroyed Sodom and Gamorrah, they brought down a flaming sword for man, they acted in the Lord's name to kill a hundred thousand assyrians. Angels interact with man often, as many of those cast out from heaven for following Lucifer are now bound to earth, and those that aren't record events, fight evil, and spread proclimations.

But this all leads to one more question: What's the point of an Angel of Record if God himself has no need? He's omnipotent. Man wrote the bible, not the angels. What purpose is The Custodian other than... jesus, an intersteller Wikipedia editor who answers to no-one but God.

Metatron even worked with Enoch, a man ascended, to record the history of the angels and nephilm as history for mankind - the same metatron, like all other angels, who was given free will by God himself! The Custodian by comparison is just a tubby goof in a mechanical suit who's forced by Big Brother God to never "lie" and spread His propaganda throughout the galaxy. Why would God implant a fucking chip in his head anyway? He's God, the Father! Just use your magical autism powers! What the hell!

that was way more than I intended to write about angels. Goddamn.
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>an interstellar Wikipedia editor

Moleman's ultimate fantasy lol. I'm guessing in Moleman's opinion, angels do not intervene in his many troubles in real life and thus that's why they are more active in the Nava-Verse. In the Nava-Verse we would all be divinely punished by God along with his math teacher and art teacher.
 
NAVA-VERSE MONSTER OF THE DAY - WATER-EGG
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Water–Egg
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Time for another Molay self-insert, this time it's one hero from the edgy Eggmen.

* Born mentally disabled, he was cruelly abandoned by his own parents and given up for adoption.
* Adopted by poor and eldery couple that lived in the slums along with his foster sister.
* Joined the Eggmen to gain a greater understanding of his water powers. (wat)
* While not necessarily intelligent, due to his mental handicap, he is fairly good-natured and has proven to be incredibly competent at times.
* Powers primarily consist of shooting streams of water and melting his body parts into water so that he may regenerate himself.
 
Not going to post about monsters this time, let's post about something else related to the Nava-verse.

I bring to you, The Hollies: Molay's idea of the Oscars. :roll:

http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Hollies

The Hollies is an annually–held event dedicated to awarding the best current holo–screen programs. It is endorsed primarily by the Joiemgaw Media Corporation. The name comes from the term "holo–screen" and refers to the awards themselves. The first Hollies occurred in Age 580.


Award Categories

  • Best Overall Program
  • Best Animation
  • Best Male Actor
  • Best Actress
  • Best Scriptwriting
  • Best Visionary Producer
  • Best Original Character
  • Most Creative Program
  • Most Emotionally Affecting Program
  • Funniest Program
 
His artwork reminds me of an old win95 game called Gazillionaire.
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Another similarity is that everyone and everything has a purposely nonsensical name in the game. IDK maybe it's just that they both use inept color combos and look like a twelve year old drew them.
 
geodestro said:
His artwork reminds me of an old win95 game called Gazillionaire

Another similarity is that everyone and everything has a purposely nonsensical name in the game. IDK maybe it's just that they both use inept color combos and look like a twelve year old drew them.
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Oh my god. I've never heard of this abomination. It's terrifying because it's proof that maybe, just maybe, if the stars align and the Old Ones wake, Gaben may get/make his own game. I mean one he does, not one done by the Judges.
 
Smutley said:
Oh my god. I've never heard of this abomination. It's terrifying because it's proof that maybe, just maybe, if the stars align and the Old Ones wake, Gaben may get/make his own game. I mean one he does, not one done by the Judges.
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The game looks funny though. Gaben can't into comedy. I imagine a gaben game would be like borderlands meets Cowaduty black ops but with his eye raping visuals.
 
NAVA-VERSE MONSTER OF THE DAY - WEVERACTUS
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Wevaractus

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This monster kinda looks familiar...
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* Stout, portly, greedy, vain and eccentric, yet sophisticated, creatures similar to the Joiemgaws in both appearance and behavior.
* They believe that they are superior to all other races, but do not actively abuse others for being different. (Sounds familiar?)
* As punishment for their arrogance, the Heavens have put a curse on all Wevaracti that causes them to constantly be surrounded by dust clouds.
* This has not changed their behavior at all; they actually believe this curse to be a mistake. (Totally not familiar to you-know-who)
* Davorite pastime is creating jewelry and other decoration from the pseudo–precious stones that are overly abundant on Ithpinbo.
 
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